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Taking into the full reading of the OP, AND the first page of the manga, would you read the OT! manga? (Your vote matters) 1g6n1a
Total votes: 31
Since no one said that the screentones are bad, I think I'll keep the style.
And yes, just like on the first page, they are all anime girls.
People should not be afraid to say what they think...
I think I will stop using honorifics, unless it is a "-sama" or something that makes a difference.
Putting it in BBcode is too obvious for me not to have tested it, it causes moire. but I can also do it as a complement, if anyone wants.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think you should post these pages as .pngs
also did you turn people here into girls?
And yes, just like on the first page, they are all anime girls.
Thank you, you are helping me a lot!Ymir wrote: 2z2l6t
I actually think the Manga looks pretty good, I dont know what people are on about.
Maybe their expectations are too high?
On a separate note, I think you should drop the overuse of honorifics, or change the names to actually match those honorifics.
For example, hearing "Serraionga-chan" is quite awkward and jarring, it just doesnt work.
Maybe a nickname like "Serri-chan"? Personally think it works a lot better (obviously you choose the names, I'm not the greatest at this stuff either, evidently).
People should not be afraid to say what they think...
I think I will stop using honorifics, unless it is a "-sama" or something that makes a difference.
The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.Patatitta wrote: 5t25
honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them ed like the third chapter
Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.
community/forums/topics/1843133?n=1Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.Patatitta wrote: 5t25
honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them ed like the third chapter
Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.
Those are about osu! in general, not OT specificPatatitta wrote: 5t25
community/forums/topics/1843133?n=1Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
The process of making it is cool, so unless college is really hard (I'm going to start it next year) and I have very little time, I'll continue the manga as long as I can.Patatitta wrote: 5t25
honestly, what I said in a previous thread, don't sweat the details too much, just do it, this is liek the third or fourth time we get a osu manga announced and none of them ed like the third chapter
Also, can you find these mangas? It would be interesting for me if I could see them, and the posts in these threads.
4 people will read it because they really think it will be good, 4 will read it but think it will be bad, 3 people don't like this style of manga, but they will read it, and two people will at least try to read it, totaling more than 80% of the votes (at least now), and only one person won't even try to read it.
These are good enough results to motivate me to do it, so it's confirmed!
In about a month (It could be more or less, but more likely less) the first chapter, expected to have 8 pages, will be released (it may seem like few pages for a long time, but it REALLY isn't).
Also, today I dreamed that Sametdze (one of the main characters) changed his osu! name, it was a nightmare really lol.
These are good enough results to motivate me to do it, so it's confirmed!
In about a month (It could be more or less, but more likely less) the first chapter, expected to have 8 pages, will be released (it may seem like few pages for a long time, but it REALLY isn't).
Also, today I dreamed that Sametdze (one of the main characters) changed his osu! name, it was a nightmare really lol.
me brainstorming my own novel for lore of my entire characters (basically the size of like, 30 bibles) and expecting to write at minimum a chapter a day except not really because im still brainstormingPatatitta wrote: 5t25
yeah 8 pages per month is actually a pretty good thing, consider that most mangas do release a chapter a month, yes those chapters are usually a bit longer but they're professionals
Noted, thanks for your contribution!sametdze wrote: 1l1a4s
it would be funny if you include a person who has changed their osu name many times, and then have another character call them by one of their former names without realising lol
"hello canadian-baka!"
"who?"
"you!"
"i'm ashton now.."
05/12/2024: Attention, the first chapter of the OT! Manga Adaptation will be slightly delayed, but it is almost finished. Don't worry, I’m doing my best to work quickly while maintaining quality.
The first chapter of the OT! Manga Adaptation is finally out. Let me know your thoughts!
Link <===============
The focus of chapter 1 was just showing in a funny way that Samet likes trains. I think in the next chapter I'll probably focus on Marco or Serraionga, but I haven’t decided yet. With this manga, I realized that thinking about what 8 pages of a manga will be is actually very hard.
Did you like it? Do you have any suggestions for improvement?
Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.
Link <===============
The focus of chapter 1 was just showing in a funny way that Samet likes trains. I think in the next chapter I'll probably focus on Marco or Serraionga, but I haven’t decided yet. With this manga, I realized that thinking about what 8 pages of a manga will be is actually very hard.
Did you like it? Do you have any suggestions for improvement?
Thanks!Reyalp51 wrote: 3o2r5d
now this is the advanced autism i wanted to see
Hmm, I don't think I'll do that, but if more people say they want it to change, maybe I could consider it.Reyalp51 wrote: 3o2r5d
my only suggestion would be to try making really intense scenarios instead of slice of life but thats a personal taste of mine.
Actually it wasn't 100% on time...Reyalp51 wrote: 3o2r5d
Making what you promised in time is really impressing so congrats dude
;-; Fixed.Reyalp51 wrote: 3o2r5d
also disapierd
i see... i think i like it, the punchline of them finding out they've worried for nothing landed well enough while still generally characterizing everyone (to different extents) and remaining light-hearted! the ling is good, the use of screen tones has been good, scenes are given whatever visual aids they need in order to convey whatever emotions they need to, everything seems to connect reasonably well :>
if i could make sense of the "vibe" i've gathered from it, i'd describe it through a flavor... something like tomato and lettuce with a hint of fragrant orange zest-- mild and wet and leafy, with glimpses of a warm and sharp citric taste, i guess...? or a chilled ham sandwich, or something like that
idk, i dont have that much to add, and the things i'm interested in aren't really present in this (i haven't seen anything notable related to characterization or narrative substance that i'd pay attention to), but it still does what it came to do in classic cgdct fashion
if i could make sense of the "vibe" i've gathered from it, i'd describe it through a flavor... something like tomato and lettuce with a hint of fragrant orange zest-- mild and wet and leafy, with glimpses of a warm and sharp citric taste, i guess...? or a chilled ham sandwich, or something like that
idk, i dont have that much to add, and the things i'm interested in aren't really present in this (i haven't seen anything notable related to characterization or narrative substance that i'd pay attention to), but it still does what it came to do in classic cgdct fashion
Very nice concept. A CGDCT with topics revolving around "off-topic" stuff. (Banger first )
Decent artstyle
Just some nitpicks...
Decent artstyle
Just some nitpicks...
- It would be cool if there was an extra page (right after the cover page) on who those characters are/based on because I had no idea it was actually portraying real people. It would give context to new readers.
- I'm hoping the comedy later on will have a little more "oompf" to it. The punchline at the end felt a bit awkward to end the chapter there.
The second chapter of the OT! Manga Adaptation is out. Let me know your thoughts!
Link <===============
If you found chapter 2 very schizophrenic, I'm not sorry. That was the intention.
Did you like it? What did you think of chapter 2 in relation to chapter 1? I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your on what is better.
Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.
Link <===============
If you found chapter 2 very schizophrenic, I'm not sorry. That was the intention.
Did you like it? What did you think of chapter 2 in relation to chapter 1? I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your on what is better.
ONLY CLICK HERE IF YOU HAVE ALREADY READ CHAPTER 2:
If you didn't understand what happened, basically EVERYTHING was Serraionga's dream. Except the last three drawings, obviously.
Why is Marco the person with Abraker in the final illustration, and not Samet? Because Marco is cuter and is wearing Miku's clothes.
Why is Abraker bald? Because it's funny and easier to draw.
Besides, did you pay attention to the license plate?
Why is Marco the person with Abraker in the final illustration, and not Samet? Because Marco is cuter and is wearing Miku's clothes.
Why is Abraker bald? Because it's funny and easier to draw.
Besides, did you pay attention to the license plate?
I expected to see the plate give an explanation as to why abraker is bald. And he totally should've been a teacher instead.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
Besides, did you pay attention to the license plate?
Also repeating myself from the other thread in case you haven't seen it.
You should switch to 4koma sometimes to regain motivation. It's easy to make, which results in more posts in between normal chapter releases. You also immediately see the results of your work without serious time commitment. Win-win.
i... actually really liked this chapter, it felt a little more interesting, although i don't know how to articulate why yet
it was easy enough to understand, or rather it seemed easy enough for me to believe i understood the course of events, it actually seems kind of linear to me with the exception of it revealing that those sequences are nested within one another, with maybe one point that seemed ambiguous until i read the note at the end (after i initially posted this)
ah the art, i forgot, i don't have many personally notable thoughts on it but i'd be a bit surprised if it happened to be fully and originally 2d. it seems like they were somehow made by arranging 3d models or 3d backgrounds, then drawn over with line tools in some way, and the ability to remain on-model with those designs is sort of impressive to me if that wasn't the case
either way, i find it vaguely charming even if not a style i would typically prefer :>
it was easy enough to understand, or rather it seemed easy enough for me to believe i understood the course of events, it actually seems kind of linear to me with the exception of it revealing that those sequences are nested within one another, with maybe one point that seemed ambiguous until i read the note at the end (after i initially posted this)
ah the art, i forgot, i don't have many personally notable thoughts on it but i'd be a bit surprised if it happened to be fully and originally 2d. it seems like they were somehow made by arranging 3d models or 3d backgrounds, then drawn over with line tools in some way, and the ability to remain on-model with those designs is sort of impressive to me if that wasn't the case
either way, i find it vaguely charming even if not a style i would typically prefer :>
BRO HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS READING LYRICS WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND ALSO READ THIS MANGA, ARE YOU A STALKER ?????!!!Patatitta wrote: 5t25
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote: o4w2f
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
what? no? I think you misunderstood itreffty_gag wrote: o4w2f
BRO HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS READING LYRICS WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND ALSO READ THIS MANGA, ARE YOU A STALKER ?????!!!Patatitta wrote: 5t25
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote: o4w2f
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
you say you listened to that album while reading
That album has lyrics
I was like "damn impressive you can listen to music with lyrics while reading"
I did not realize you were actively seraching the lyrics on google in the middle of reading the manga chapter
I'm glad you guys liked it!
I'm going to share the creation process, since you all seem curious, and I think it's interesting:
The first step is the draft:
After that... it's quite intuitive:
I reproduce the draft scenes in Koikatsu, take a screenshot, and the rest is even more intuitive. Once everything is done, I just review everything and copy it into Canva.
Making eight pages of this a month is actually... much, much more tiring and time-consuming than it seems, but the effort is definitely worth it!
I'm going to start college in March, and I have no idea how difficult college is, so my biggest fear is having to stop making the manga for a long time.
I'm going to share the creation process, since you all seem curious, and I think it's interesting:
Basically, the tools that make the OT! Manga possible are four:
1. [AN ANIME 3D PROGRAM] (with many plugins): To make the characters with very high customization and place them on the map I want, in the pose I want, with the expression I want. As I don't have some plugins that I was too lazy to install, I still have to draw some of the expressions manually.
2. Clip Studio Paint: Basically, I use Clip Studio Paint to create the manga the way you all are familiar with. Previously, I had tried with Photoshop, but it simply wasn't suitable for that, and I quickly gave up on the idea.
3. Canva: To post the manga. Canva is the only place I've found that is consistent across different screens. If everyone reads the manga on a computer at 100% zoom (which is not the default), the moire effect can be avoided. Posting the manga directly on the osu! forum would be quite problematic.
4. The tablet I used to play osu!: Self-explanatory.
I also use other tools like grammar checkers, but I can't say that they "make the manga possible".
1. [AN ANIME 3D PROGRAM] (with many plugins): To make the characters with very high customization and place them on the map I want, in the pose I want, with the expression I want. As I don't have some plugins that I was too lazy to install, I still have to draw some of the expressions manually.
2. Clip Studio Paint: Basically, I use Clip Studio Paint to create the manga the way you all are familiar with. Previously, I had tried with Photoshop, but it simply wasn't suitable for that, and I quickly gave up on the idea.
3. Canva: To post the manga. Canva is the only place I've found that is consistent across different screens. If everyone reads the manga on a computer at 100% zoom (which is not the default), the moire effect can be avoided. Posting the manga directly on the osu! forum would be quite problematic.
4. The tablet I used to play osu!: Self-explanatory.
I also use other tools like grammar checkers, but I can't say that they "make the manga possible".
After that... it's quite intuitive:
I reproduce the draft scenes in Koikatsu, take a screenshot, and the rest is even more intuitive. Once everything is done, I just review everything and copy it into Canva.
Making eight pages of this a month is actually... much, much more tiring and time-consuming than it seems, but the effort is definitely worth it!
I'm going to start college in March, and I have no idea how difficult college is, so my biggest fear is having to stop making the manga for a long time.
I thought about doing this after the third chapter. It's quite likely.Kobold84 wrote: 4c5ma
You should switch to 4koma sometimes to regain motivation. It's easy to make, which results in more posts in between normal chapter releases. You also immediately see the results of your work without serious time commitment. Win-win.
oh sorryPatatitta wrote: 5t25
what? no? I think you misunderstood itreffty_gag wrote: o4w2f
BRO HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS READING LYRICS WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND ALSO READ THIS MANGA, ARE YOU A STALKER ?????!!!Patatitta wrote: 5t25
i'm surprised you can listen to music with lyrics while reading, that's not a skill I havereffty_gag wrote: o4w2f
read this manga while listening to "the low end theory" album kinda fire
you say you listened to that album while reading
That album has lyrics
I was like "damn impressive you can listen to music with lyrics while reading"
I did not realize you were actively seraching the lyrics on google in the middle of reading the manga chapter
Chapter 2: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=54
Creation process: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=70
Creation process: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=70
I read thread instead of threat, lol.Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
The threat is gone alreadysametdze wrote: 1l1a4s
you have nobody to blame but me if this ends up going south
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
Let's try not to derail the thread, please.
It's art.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your on what is better.
time:
The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?
And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more "right". This way conversations flow more naturally.
Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.
Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of how to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.Kobold84 wrote: 4c5ma
It's art.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your on what is better.
time:
The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?
And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more "right". This way conversations flow more naturally.
Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.
I will try to implement this.
Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?
Hire me as an editor to find out more tips and tricks.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of how to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.
I will try to implement this.
Yep.Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?
How would I do that? It's 8 pages per chapter (plus an extra)... I don't do this 24 hours a day (at most, 12 when time is running out, lol).Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Wasn't it 1 chapter per week at the beginning?Kobold84 wrote: 4c5ma
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
bump
I'll release the third chapter in a few minutes.
The third chapter of the OT! Manga Adaptation is out. Let me know your thoughts!
Link <===============
Did you like it? I’m thinking of creating an anonymous Google poll so people can give without any hesitation.
Behrauder wrote: 3k4k5m
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.
Link <===============
Did you like it? I’m thinking of creating an anonymous Google poll so people can give without any hesitation.
ONLY CLICK HERE IF YOU HAVE ALREADY READ CHAPTER 3:
My main challenge in this chapter was trying to make Scyla unfunny, but in a funny way.
There's a skull on Scyla's head to represent death/bad things (locked threads, shitposts, etc.).
Scyla is wearing pajamas and a magical girl bow because this is something I could definitely imagine Scyla wearing in real life, lol.
My main challenge in this chapter was trying to make Scyla unfunny, but in a funny way.
There's a skull on Scyla's head to represent death/bad things (locked threads, shitposts, etc.).