last check
[General // All Diffs]
did you use snare soft? just askin
[Beginner]
00:17:577 (17577|3) - add kick hard
00:20:077 - you can add 1 more note for kick hard
00:54:608 (54608|0) - remove , then add something at 00:54:452 - 00:54:764 - instead.. better flow
01:04:764 (64764|3) - 02:02:108 (122108|3) - different spacing..?
01:30:077 (90077|3) - reduce this cymbol volume.. ==a i thought all cymbol is 60%
01:52:108 (112108|2) - same like above, remove, then add something at 01:51:952 - and 01:52:264 - instead
01:55:077 (115077|1) - cymbol? refer to 00:57:577 (57577|1) -
[Normal]
00:12:577 (12577|3) - missing cymbol?
00:24:452 (24452|0,24764|0) - replace this with whistle hitsound instead, just suggestion though xP
00:26:952 (26952|2,27264|2) - 00:29:452 (29452|1,29764|1) - 00:34:452 (34452|0,34764|0) - 00:36:952 (36952|3,37264|3) -
00:45:389 (45389|0,46014|1,46639|1,47264|2,47889|3,48514|2,49139|2,49764|2,50389|0,51014|1,51639|1,52264|2,52889|3,53514|2,54139|2) - replace with snare soft instead? these 2/1 beat would be catchier with it
00:55:077 (55077|1) - replace with kick
00:57:577 (57577|3) - ^
01:00:389 (60389|2,61014|1,61639|2,62264|1,62889|2,63514|1,64139|2,64764|3) - replace with snare soft instead, these 2/1 beat would be catchier with it
01:05:077 (65077|2,65702|0,66327|3,66952|1,67577|2,68202|1) - these double notes surprises my ear.. x___x
01:05:077 (65077|1) - replace with cymbol
01:17:577 (77577|2,78045|3,78514|0,78983|1,80077|0) - replace with cymbol will be neat
01:42:889 (102889|0,103514|1,104139|1,104764|2,105389|3,106014|2,106639|2,107264|2,107889|0,108514|1,109139|1,109764|2,110389|3,111014|2,111639|2) - replace with snare soft instead? these 2/1 beat would be catchier with it
01:53:202 (113202|0) - change to snare
01:57:889 (117889|2,118514|1,119139|2,119764|1,120389|2,121014|1,121639|2,122264|0) - change to soft snare
02:03:202 (123202|0,123827|3,124452|1,125077|2,125702|1) - double hitsound asdf
02:06:795 (126795|3) - add cymbol
02:08:202 (128202|0,128827|3,129452|1,130077|2,130702|1) - asdfg pls double hitsound
02:12:264 (132264|0) - add cymbol
02:14:764 (134764|0) - & 02:13:514 (133514|1) - 02:16:014 (136014|3) - different cymbol? i guess need to add
02:16:795 (136795|2) - add cymbol
[Hyper]
00:09:608 (9608|1,9686|0) -
http://puu.sh/hvQbQ.jpg // suggestion
00:12:577 (12577|3) - missing cymbol
00:18:514 (18514|2) - ^
00:21:014 (21014|2) - ^
00:30:077 (30077|3) - missing snare
00:31:327 (31327|0) - missing cymbol, 00:32:264 (32264|1) - remove cymbol?
00:45:389 (45389|2,46014|0,46639|0,47264|1,47889|2,48514|1,49139|0,49764|2,50389|3,51014|1,51639|0,52264|2,52889|3,53514|3,54139|2) - like on normal, replace those kicks with soft snare.. do this to all part that i've mentioned previously
00:54:608 (54608|1,54686|0,54764|1,54842|2,54920|3,54998|2) - in term of diff hardness, this is harder than Muu's Another.. for me it's not appropriate in of difficulty curve.. you can switch the pattern from muu's diff and hyper diff..
why? you put 1/2 jack between 1/4 stream in hyper.. while in another, there's none of 1/2 jack between 1/4 stream.. cmiiw.. :3
01:20:077 (80077|3) - missing cymbol on this downbeat
02:12:577 (132577|1) - until 02:21:014 (141014|0) - .. please redefine the cymbol placement.. it supposed to be per 3/2 beat
where is 3/2 beat? 02:12:577 (132577|0,133045|1,133514|2,133827|0,134295|1,134764|0,135077|1,135545|2,136014|2) - for example.. and so on~
you know how to self mod..
[Muu's Another]
i just noticed something, in Hyper, v-chan put SV, while in this diff, there's none of SV... it's also inappropriate in term of difficulty curve.. my suggestion is :
> add SV on another, with same (or harder) SV like Hyper..
> OR remove SV on Hyper.. so it will be balanced more
00:10:389 (10389|0,10389|2) - beware with double hitsounds.. recheck again
00:12:577 (12577|1) - missing cymbol in downbeat.. (again..)
00:45:389 (45389|2,46014|1,46639|2,47264|1,47889|2,48514|1,49139|2,49764|1,50389|1,51014|2,51639|2,52264|3,52889|3,53514|3,54139|2) - like on normal diff, replace these kicks with soft snare.. also fix the similar part that i've mentioned above
00:55:077 (55077|3) - missing cymbol in downbeat.. again.. hahah.. xD
01:21:014 (81014|1) - ^ (now in 3/2 beat)
01:38:983 (98983|3) - ^
01:40:077 (100077|0) - ^
01:52:577 (112577|3) - ^
02:12:577 (132577|0,132577|1,132577|3) - like i mentioned on Hyper diff, revise the cymbol placement, it should be at 3/2 beat.. you know how to self mod..
i love the LNs arrangement <3
[Overall // Advice]
next time, please rename your sample into
normal-hitwhistle.wav,
normal-hitclap.wav,
normal-hitfinish.wav, (or maybe
drum set, or
soft set) since utilizing the hitsound using hitsound pane on your editor is a lot more easier (and not wasting your time) better than using sample import windows..
call me again after you fix these.. good luck