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UhhhhhhhPatatitta wrote: 5t25
wait what I didn't say I was going to write or ed the school scenario, I just said that the actual genre of writing needs to be SoL in order to work in a forum context, why was I included
Sorry about that, but it's too late we're doing school lmao
Besides school might allow SoL to flourish a bit more, while with apocalypse people might be more focussed on other things, but idk.
Also I guess I can't read, I thought for some reason Seb wasn't preferring school which he was, while I assumed you were fully prefering school. I'm very qualified to be an editor 😬
I'm planning on integrating both the school and apocalypse theme in with each other, but not like a "Slice-of-Life with a darker subtone if you look into it more" like dPeace suggested. Instead, I plan on making it more like a slice-of-life that gets serious when it needs to be, like "Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt". I'll lead with the magic school, since it's more open for everybody to make their own characters. A ninja school, though it would be more thematically appropriate with my history in OT, would be more close-minded and limited, and wouldn't lead into the apocalypse theme as cleanly as the magic school. Plus, I know there's a lot of people here that aren't trying to study shinobi and ninja history to write a book. I'll try to write the beginning like Dean Wonderland, where it's a normal few days, week or month at school before everything goes to hell, and that's where the apocalypse plot takes over and the slice-of-life takes a backseat. It'll still be there when it's appropriate, but it'll be few and far in between. I wanna give enough time for every character to establish themselves, but not too much time that it feels like it drags on. Not sure about how the apocalypse will initiate, but I might have monsters invade OT as a whole. Or aliens, maybe. Either one can work, as long as there's a foreign entity. Feel free to post thoughts.
As soon as yoony gives access to the doc, and I finish working on another project, I'll start writing.
I'm not going to give out access to the doc to anyone except maybe to some editors, because I don't want people randomly messing with it or changing stuff around (which I feel will inevitably happen at some point).keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
As soon as yoony gives access to the doc,
To everyone:
To dm your entry to me, you can send it on something like a text sharing site (eg. Pastebin) or send me a google-doc of your own, and I'll copy-paste it from there.
Also jesus christ how did you manage to fuse literally every idea we had together
Dude's a man
yoony1 wrote: 222118
I'm not going to give out access to the doc to anyone except maybe to some editors, because I don't want people randomly messing with it or changing stuff around (which I feel will inevitably happen at some point).keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
As soon as yoony gives access to the doc,
To everyone:
To dm your entry to me, you can send it on something like a text sharing site (eg. Pastebin) or send me a google-doc of your own, and I'll copy-paste it from there.
Also jesus christ how did you manage to fuse literally every idea we had together
Dude's a man
Scyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Can I make my own character?
Here's a character template that I have on hand, definitely not because I've participated in similar activities like this before.
You don't have to use it by any means, but it does help to flesh out and define a character you have in mind.
Send me the part of the story you wrote when it's your turn to write.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Do you want us to send a part of the story? Or just details about our characters?yoony1 wrote: 222118
To dm your entry to me
With your character, you can post it here if you want other people to know and work them it the story, so they can be more naturally included in the story and the world. If you want to keep it secret/handle the introduction a specific way then you can keep it to yourself until your first entry.
This is actually a really good idea, but I don't really like that specific one as it feels a bit specific especially with stuff like "species" and "fighting style" which isn't really important nor relevant to what we're doing. I think I'll rework that template as a way for people to submit their character though, it would be a good organised way to keep track of everyone's characters.keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
Here's a character template that I have on hand, definitely not because I've participated in similar activities like this before.
We just decided on a scenario and keremaru is the first person to write an entry. Everyone's in the dark with what's going to happen except keremaru, so we just gotta sit tight. He did give a brief plan in his previous post so you can read that.Scyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Can someone send me a tldr so far? I need to know what scenario we are in
Also I'm gonna /queue myself, I want to write something too.
Hi everyone, I've made a list of attributes you should consider when making your character. It'll be good if you could come up with something for each attribute. Not only do I hope this helps with creating a character, but this will also be how the characters will be recorded in the "list of characters" section in the main post.
Name: The character's name.
Pronoun: So we don't have to go "they they their they" all the time.
Status: Don't worry about this one, this is to keep track of what your character is currently doing in the story.
Appearance: How your character looks. It would be good if you could provide an image, but it's not necessary.
Backstory/About the character: The character's history and/or the character's circumstances.
Role: What does your character do?
Personality: The character's personality.
Abilities/strengths: Any abilities your character might have. For example, fast runner, smarter than average, magic powers etc.
Additional information: Anything else we need to know.
You don't need to go into lots of detail for these attributes, a brief description or just a few words is fine.
You can also leave stuff empty if you want, if you are unsure or if you want to be mysterious.
Also, everything here is changeable, nothing is set in stone. If your character goes through some change, whether it's through the story or because you simply want them to, I'll change their description to match that.
Reminder that you post your character here when you've made one, at the latest just after your first entry, but you can do it beforehand like Sebastian.
Name: The character's name.
Pronoun: So we don't have to go "they they their they" all the time.
Status: Don't worry about this one, this is to keep track of what your character is currently doing in the story.
Appearance: How your character looks. It would be good if you could provide an image, but it's not necessary.
Backstory/About the character: The character's history and/or the character's circumstances.
Role: What does your character do?
Personality: The character's personality.
Abilities/strengths: Any abilities your character might have. For example, fast runner, smarter than average, magic powers etc.
Additional information: Anything else we need to know.
Example with Sebastian's character:
Name: Sebastian
Pronouns: He/him
Status: ---
Appearance: Lucario
Backstory/About the character: Sebastian is 16 years old, and is a smart kid who does good in his classes. But he struggles to make friends and has a hard time controlling his Pokemon powers.
Role: ---
Personality: Struggles to make friends
Abilities/strengths: Pokemon powers
Additional information: Is a Lucario.
Pronouns: He/him
Status: ---
Appearance: Lucario
Backstory/About the character: Sebastian is 16 years old, and is a smart kid who does good in his classes. But he struggles to make friends and has a hard time controlling his Pokemon powers.
Role: ---
Personality: Struggles to make friends
Abilities/strengths: Pokemon powers
Additional information: Is a Lucario.
You don't need to go into lots of detail for these attributes, a brief description or just a few words is fine.
You can also leave stuff empty if you want, if you are unsure or if you want to be mysterious.
Also, everything here is changeable, nothing is set in stone. If your character goes through some change, whether it's through the story or because you simply want them to, I'll change their description to match that.
Reminder that you post your character here when you've made one, at the latest just after your first entry, but you can do it beforehand like Sebastian.
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
Well if there's magic and there's technology in the story then sure why notoctowave wrote: 602s2i
also, we're allowed to use magic tech stuff, right? because my current character idea kinda entirely hinges off of that
Name: Waqiduoqymedyg Karmiel. More commonly referred to as Momo, due to its hue.
Pronoun: It, its, it's.
Status: Currently in class.
Appearance: A pink slime humanoid with an opaque set of diamonds on its forehead, lacking any form of a mouth.
Backstory/About the character: A magic experiment gone awry due to interfering elements, Waqiduoqymedyg was born from slime and human DNA being forcibly merged together. It possesses magical functionality due to being a slime, yet retains sentience and awareness due to its human conscience. It was allowed entrance to the (insert school name) on the basis of being a sentient magic .
Role: Opening perspective character. May be part of main cast if written so.
Personality: Momo is more reserved to itself, until someone interacts with it. Though it doesn't have any views on its colleagues, it does value life over anything else and will stop at nothing to preserve it, regardless of alignment.
Abilities/Strengths: Momo's greatest trait is being a slime, allowing it to adapt to multiple situations on the fly without having to worry about much. Though it does rely on magic for some scenarios, the magic it does use is more close-range than long-range.
Additional Information: Attempts to harm or dislocate Momo have largely resulted in little to no reaction, save for immediate exposure to higher temperatures.
Pronoun: It, its, it's.
Status: Currently in class.
Appearance: A pink slime humanoid with an opaque set of diamonds on its forehead, lacking any form of a mouth.
Backstory/About the character: A magic experiment gone awry due to interfering elements, Waqiduoqymedyg was born from slime and human DNA being forcibly merged together. It possesses magical functionality due to being a slime, yet retains sentience and awareness due to its human conscience. It was allowed entrance to the (insert school name) on the basis of being a sentient magic .
Role: Opening perspective character. May be part of main cast if written so.
Personality: Momo is more reserved to itself, until someone interacts with it. Though it doesn't have any views on its colleagues, it does value life over anything else and will stop at nothing to preserve it, regardless of alignment.
Abilities/Strengths: Momo's greatest trait is being a slime, allowing it to adapt to multiple situations on the fly without having to worry about much. Though it does rely on magic for some scenarios, the magic it does use is more close-range than long-range.
Additional Information: Attempts to harm or dislocate Momo have largely resulted in little to no reaction, save for immediate exposure to higher temperatures.
about character
pronouns:she/her
backstory:
after becoming a magical girl Alissa gained great intelligence and therefore being able to enter [school name] with relative ease.
abilities:
is able to use magic uses this ability to summon weapons.
is able to fight with ease.
personality:
Alissa doesn't talk to others unless its needed and has little value over human life though may save a human if she has good sentiments about them
Role:fan service
Name: Manishh
Pronoun: He/him
Status:
Appearance: Has 3 form.
Backstory/About the character: A depressed guy who decided to leave society, went to a jungle and found a monkey which gave the guy a power to let him inherit the power of whoever he eats. The power gave him a muscular body and the monkey also gave him his form by letting the guy eat him. He eats another guy who had the ability to turn into titan and gain his form as well as regeneration power.
Role: I dont know
Personality: Chill
Abilities/strengths: Changing forms, Inherit the power of who he eats, Regeneration.
Pronoun: He/him
Status:
Appearance: Has 3 form.
Backstory/About the character: A depressed guy who decided to leave society, went to a jungle and found a monkey which gave the guy a power to let him inherit the power of whoever he eats. The power gave him a muscular body and the monkey also gave him his form by letting the guy eat him. He eats another guy who had the ability to turn into titan and gain his form as well as regeneration power.
Role: I dont know
Personality: Chill
Abilities/strengths: Changing forms, Inherit the power of who he eats, Regeneration.
By keremaru
Why am I here?
I look around at my surroundings after I took a small nap, and I’m still in my classroom. The teacher’s still conducting a curriculum on mana redirection, some girls a few seats away from me are giggling about something on their handhelds. I don’t have anything else to do, so I guess I’ll just pay attention to the teacher for now.
“So, can anyone tell me how they think mana redirection works?”
Oh, don’t call on me. I just woke up.
“Maybe Momo?”
Fuck.
After the teacher called me up to explain something I had little to no background knowledge on, I nonchalantly stood up to answer his question as briskly as I possibly could. I didn’t want much attention to myself, let alone any in the first place.
“Well, I dunno. Redirection of mana?” I respond nonchalantly. How much more complex could it be past that? It’s just mana redirection.
”That’s the general gist of it, but not all of it. I’ll give you points for getting most of it, though,” the teacher disappointedly responded to my answer.
Someone is definitely mocking me in their head right now.
I sat back down after the teacher heard my brief explanation, and immediately went back to bothering myself with intrusive thoughts.
I still don’t know how I’m alive right now. That’s a very abstract thought that very few people have, I know, but I’m different from other people. And not in a way like “I’m special for my personality and how I feel”, but rather in that I shouldn’t be alive. Everyone has a heart, bodily organs, and the extra parts nobody wants to talk about. But I don’t have any of those, not even a heart. Largely because I’m a slime. Everybody acts like it’s fine, but I still get that sneaking suspicion that everyone actually dislikes me. Then again, I don’t care much.
Once I finished speaking, the teacher went into excessive discussion and explanation of how the process of mana redirection works, including its functionalities. I really couldn’t be bothered to pay attention, so I just redirected my attention to the window right next to me, since I sit on the left side of the class. Though everything I see is pink, I can still discern what’s what based on what I’ve already discerned. There are people on the street outside, some families at a park, and the unlicensed ice cream truck driver outside. I don’t know why he’s still working the streets after what happened a couple months ago.
The teacher transitioned into defining how to redirect mana, comparing it to a battery system throughout the body. Nobody seemed to get it.
After class ended, quite awkwardly, I’m pretty tuckered out again. I’ll just go back home to sleep, since there isn’t much for me to do in class since it just ended.
Hopefully, I won’t have any weird dreams, like the one where I had a therapeutic conversation with a tiger shark. Unfortunately, someone walked up to my desk before I could dart my way out of the school and into my super cozy blanket.
“Hey, do you have a minute?” a random dude asked just as I was getting up from my desk.
“Depends on what I’m giving my minute for.”
“Not much, just a few things I wanna ask.”
“Before you say anything, I don’t swing for dudes,” I precluded him before I stood up from my school desk.
“That… Isn't what I wanted to talk about, but okay then,” the guy quickly responded, shutting me down.
“What I wanted you to answer for me was… How are you alive?” the guy questioned, less suspicion behind his tone than what I’d suspect from someone who would ask that kind of question, and instead, rather worryingly, more curious.
How ironic.
I had to take a brief moment to really think about my answer to that question, ironically as the guy asked of me. Though, my voice would just form words as I answered his bizarre question.
“What do you mean by... Alive?
“Do you mean how am I sentient without any organs? I have no idea. That is a question that I would not ask without any kind of scientific background.
As for being able to think, being able to talk, being able to feel...
...I still don’t know.
In any case, I’m gonna go home. If you’ve got any more questions, I’ll see you tomorrow,” I hastily closed the conversation.
I just wanna fall on my bed.
On the walk home, I took a look at the sky. The sky is pink, the clouds are light pink, and the sun is an even brighter tint of pink. Everything is some color of pink, from the sidewalk cracks, to the road, to even people I on the street. Though I can tell depth and dimensions, it gets really boring seeing only pink.
I can’t wait to get back to sleeping.
My opinion:[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
Perspective should be yours but the story you create should show something to represent that we are in the same story. Like sebastian sitting in the same class room as mono
Not necessarily. You can write whatever you want, but you have to that everything that people wrote before you canonically happened/is happening/will happen.Manishh wrote: 2k5q58
Oh damn
Anyway, does our story need to be related?
So in this case there's a school, there's a pink slime guy studying there, and there's something called "mana redirection" that they're studying. There's a street and a park outside the window, and an unlicensed ice-cream truck driver, as well as some incident that happened a couple months ago.
You could pick and choose what here is important and what is not, but everything is canonically true.
Maybe I should make these summaries for every entry so people can keep track of stuff more easily.
You write it in the perspective of your own character, Sebastian. You can include Momo as a character in your entry if you want to though, along with any of the other characters people submitted.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
Also can we get some worldbuilding, what is the school even called lmao
So could I make the entry go back to the class that Mono was in and give extra detail of what happened?yoony1 wrote: 222118
You write it in the perspective of your own character, Sebastian. You can include Momo as a character in your entry if you want to though, along with any of the other characters people submitted.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
If you want to[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
So could I make the entry go back to the class that Mono was in and give extra detail of what happened?yoony1 wrote: 222118
You write it in the perspective of your own character, Sebastian. You can include Momo as a character in your entry if you want to though, along with any of the other characters people submitted.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
Added the details of my character above: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cgynYSZhSULuPYbzTxuFUJoSdfEoFjcezL54vTQmYjo/edit
His name is Fourrure–de-Loup (you can short that if needed) and can NOT talk btw. Yes I literally made a MONSTER
I also remade the character template made by keremaru, and updated it with the suggestions by yoony1. It is the one I'm using for my character. You can get it empty: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MzkWnHq-fqyzOGO2rKM5GNiRLcGS7HZ_Gq9un0sXY3U/edit#.
Edit: If you have any idea to make this character looking more to a wild monster than a furry I'm welcome ^^
His name is Fourrure–de-Loup (you can short that if needed) and can NOT talk btw. Yes I literally made a MONSTER
I also remade the character template made by keremaru, and updated it with the suggestions by yoony1. It is the one I'm using for my character. You can get it empty: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MzkWnHq-fqyzOGO2rKM5GNiRLcGS7HZ_Gq9un0sXY3U/edit#.
Edit: If you have any idea to make this character looking more to a wild monster than a furry I'm welcome ^^
and you keep denying you're a furry smhCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
He's more like a wild animal than a furryPolyspora wrote: 4i695
and you keep denying you're a furry smhCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
Decreasing the length of his hand and widening his chest may workCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
By [ Sebastian ]
“I’m done for”, I thought as I was waiting in the principal's office. The hands on the clock felt like they were taking an eternity to turn, the principal and the assistant principal were talking privately, and I was thinking of all the punishments I would have to face for what I've done.
I’m not a bad kid. I get straight A’s, I never skip school, and I treat staff with respect. But let’s just say I couldn’t control myself.
We were in Mrs Vulcribitch’s classroom. She was showing us a presentation on advanced calculus and was asking us a question. Since I knew the answer and I wanted to be a good student, I raised my hand. But just then a destructive aura bubble formed out of my hand and destroyed the entire classroom.
And that’s where we get to here. Finally, principal Brakerson entered and started by looking me in the eye very angrily.
“Mr Larse, this is the 6th time you had to come here this school year. And we’re only in week 3”. Oh, I forgot to mention. This isn’t the only time I’ve been in the principal's office.
“I’m sorry sir, it won’t happen again!”. “I know it won’t. Because I’m going to expel you”. “NO! That’ll go on my resume forever! Please Mr Brakerson. Give me one more chance!”. “Sorry Sebastian. I can’t risk the safety of the students at Tomfoolery College. I’m starting to suspect you were involved in that thing a couple months ago”. “Welp, better start getting my stuff out of my dorm then”.
I begin to walk out of the room very sad. Nobody wants to hear that they’ve been expelled from a school! But then, Mr Abrakerson told me something.
“Wait! There is a chance that I might give you another chance, heh heh heh”. “What is it? I’ll do anything!”. “You work at Kilo Burgers, right?”. “Yes? And?”. “Give me a friend discount there and I’ll let you have your precious second chance”. “Yes! I get to stay! YES!”.
I guess I was a little too happy, because Mr Abraker grabbed me by my snout and told me this.
“But if you ever get called here for that again, you’re done for”. I was finally able to get out of his office.
I need to get my Pokemon powers in check because I would hate to be expelled. After all, how hard could it be?
Important points:
- Confirmed to be the same school Momo goes to
- Names of some teachers; Mrs Vulbritch, Principal Brakerson
- Why does Mr Brakerson's name slowly change to Abraker?
- A classroom has been blown up (this is not the incident)
- The school has dorms
- There's a place called Kilo Burgers which Sebastian works at
- Mr Brakerson now has a friend discount at Kilo Burgers
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
Should we maybe name the chapters then, so they're more distinguished, or just keep it without names?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
Naming the chapters would be good tooyoony1 wrote: 222118
Should we maybe name the chapters then, so they're more distinguished, or just keep it without names?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
maybe rename "chapters" to "entries"?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Naming the chapters would be good tooyoony1 wrote: 222118
Should we maybe name the chapters then, so they're more distinguished, or just keep it without names?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
By Manishh
You are a murderer. You kill others to steal their power, you don't deserve to be alive. You must die die die!!!!!
NOOOOO, ohh, it was just a dream. Uh, I’m late for school. I need to hurry. these clothes are too small for me, and this muscular form is annoying, but I don't wanna change into the monkey form since I don't have the right size of clothes.
I have no idea why I’m even in this school. People call it the safest school for those who have "super abilities". There’s no way it is safe. A few days ago, there was an explosion which blew up a classroom, at least my room is different.
Finally reached the place, it's not too far away. The facilities they provide are on another level and the buildings are so tall my neck is gonna break. This one is my classroom, and my seat is near a pink jelly. Man, does he poop? If he does, then from where? I wanna ask him, but he is sleeping right now or is he dead? Who knows, none of my business. The teacher is talking about mana redirection and it’s a great thing to know but I can’t even use mana!! Why am I in this class?
“So, can anyone tell me how they think mana redirection works?”
How am I supposed to know? I don't have mana powers. I am one of the tallest guys so there is a high chance she’s gonna pick me. I need to do something. *repeatedly point finger at pink jelly*
“Maybe Momo?”
I am safe *sigh*
“Well, I dunno. Redirection of mana?”
“That’s the general gist of it, but not all of it. I’ll give you points for getting most of it, though,”
That's what you get when you sleep during class and don't focus. Can he even focus? How is he even alive? Maybe he is using mana to stay alive? If this is the truth then he might teach me something about it, and who knows, I might have the power to do mana thing.
///Class ends///
Before he leaves, I should ask him about this.
“Hey, do you have a minute?” I don’t think a pink jelly will have something to do
“Depends on what I’m giving my minute for.”
“Not much, just a few things I wanna ask.”
“Before you say anything, I don’t swing for dudes,”
“That… Isn't what I wanted to talk about, but okay then,” What?!? Most likely a joke, I hope.
“What I wanted you to answer for me was… How are you alive?” Did I make it sound weird? He is’nt answering.
“What do you mean by... Alive?
“Do you mean how am I sentient without any organs? I have no idea. That is a question that I would not ask without any kind of scientific background.
As for being able to think, being able to talk, being able to feel...
...I still don’t know.
In any case, I’m gonna go home. If you’ve got any more questions, I’ll see you tomorrow,”
“Sure” Hmm.. There is definitely something which he is hiding but if he has the mana power to stay alive then I might...
Important points:
- A mysterious dream, where Manishh is a murderer?
- Manishh and Momo are in the same class
- Manishh is unfamiliar with magic, and wonders if he has mana
I think I like the sound of "chapters" better tbhz0z wrote: 2h2d46
maybe rename "chapters" to "entries"?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Naming the chapters would be good tooyoony1 wrote: 222118
Should we maybe name the chapters then, so they're more distinguished, or just keep it without names?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
Also, I made a google doc to keep track of all the characters because it's easier to do it there than on the main post of this thread. Not only that, but it makes sure that the main post won't go over the character limit.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T0jGunogog9hGNb01qQfuIP-vnzvioSPQwLIOMVMGJ4/edit?usp=sharing
Name: ??? (because of a lack of known name, people call him whatever name they think fits him)
Pronouns: He/his/him
Status: (will be written as the story comes along)
Age: 18
Species: Minotaur
Appearance: (i'll draw a pic if and when i feel like it, it will compliment the description here)
87 in, 332 lbs
rather muscular
note: i am particular on certain features, including features i haven't mentioned, discuss with me for details
Backstory: Has recently been accepted to Estilude Institute and is taking classes there
Other information of this guy's past is unknown
Role: Student at Estilude Institute
Abilities: (abilities will be figured out as the story goes along)
Personality: ???
Pronouns: He/his/him
Status: (will be written as the story comes along)
Age: 18
Species: Minotaur
Appearance: (i'll draw a pic if and when i feel like it, it will compliment the description here)
87 in, 332 lbs
rather muscular
note: i am particular on certain features, including features i haven't mentioned, discuss with me for details
Backstory: Has recently been accepted to Estilude Institute and is taking classes there
Other information of this guy's past is unknown
Role: Student at Estilude Institute
Abilities: (abilities will be figured out as the story goes along)
Personality: ???
I modified the design of my character (for example made his chest wider, and added a quadrupedal pose), so he looks like more a wild wolf(?) than a furry. And he can both be bipedal or quadrupedal, depending of needs.
I'm going to rewrite his informations, probably leaving more things blank, so he could be easily added to the story.
(I'm now at 14 hours on this art, this belongs to OT museum at this point)
Edit: updated sheet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZLM_nS6AU528cdq85TvrO7oVBI_QK-nUaVQlPajBYRA/edit?usp=sharing
@yoony1 update my character sheet please (Fourrure-De-Loup)
Edit 2: Most of the informations are from the old version, as YyottaCat already used the old sheet for reference, but I added some stuff.
(I'm now at 14 hours on this art, this belongs to OT museum at this point)
Edit: updated sheet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZLM_nS6AU528cdq85TvrO7oVBI_QK-nUaVQlPajBYRA/edit?usp=sharing
@yoony1 update my character sheet please (Fourrure-De-Loup)
Edit 2: Most of the informations are from the old version, as YyottaCat already used the old sheet for reference, but I added some stuff.
By YyottaCat
Sunset may be one of the most beautiful times of day. A of decaying gold slowly descends beneath the horizon, gently exiting, for Luna to take its place. Sol spreads its final warmth, leaving trance and tranquillity on the landscapes. Clouds were, clouds of course, but more vibrant than ever, as if putting on a grand performance for the holy and welcoming the cold but lit up skies of the night.
It is, undoubtedly, a full moon. A full, majestic complete circle, hanging over the zenith, calmly gazing down upon the earth.
Tomfoolery College. Simple name. However, the commoners do not have the privilege to learn the truth. This place is more than just a college. A classroom got completely and utterly destroyed a couple of days ago, so students are banned from raising their hands in class ever again. Instead, a system of buzzers, cybernated by the teachers, are used.
It was quite shocking, but at last it cooled down, although with permanent impact. The dormitory is quiet, even the drop of a needle would be easily heard, especially with the “weirdo” students, as some would say. A totally unsuspecting monkey is carefully traversing the hallways, making sure that not even his breath would be heard.
“Room 304…” He murmurs in his mind. “That’s Momo’s room. Hopefully he has fallen asleep by now.”
The monkey steps cautiously over to Room 304, and tries the doorknob.
Of course, it’s locked.
He then went all the way around to the outside of the building, and successfully broke in through the window.
He stood on the sill with caution, with a dagger in one hand, and approached the dreaming Momo. His heart is beating fast, thumping loudly, in the company of heavy breathing. He did not know if this would work or not. A sentient being without any organs of life ? Truly terrifying, but he has to face it, for he cannot feel mana. Momo already sensed the intruder, but it still just wants a good night’s sleep.
Strike!
The monkey hits the sleeping student in the throat, via his dagger. It sliced through Momo’s skin, as if it were jelly, or was it? It all seemed too easy. To no one’s surprise, there was no trace of blood. Momo is still maintaining a soft breath. The monkey almost popped out of his skin. This is way too frightening.
Momo wakes up. It puts the severed head back on and sits up straight.
“Hey Manish, what the f**k are you doing in my room?! I told you I don’t like dudes so get the f**k out!”
Manish, as if time reversed, fell out of the now open window, and lay on the cement ground unconsciously. Momo returns to sleep after closing the window, double checking that it was fully locked. Flights of fancy are doomed to fail.
Outside the campus, a small segment of the large food chain known as Kilo Burgers stood. It was previously “Ton Burgers”, but then it was flooded with reports on false ment, so it had to be promptly renamed.
A teenage boy and a grown alpha male stood face-to-face in Kilo Burgers, though at opposite sides of the counter.
“May I have a burger with a graphics processing unit in place of the steak?”
Hearing his teacher Mr. Abraker’s familiar voice, Sebastian shivered.
“B…But sir, we don’t have that here.”
“Oh? Then I’ll have that instead.” Abraker points to something on the menu. “…And don’t forget the discount~”
Sebastian went on preparing the burger. “Sir, here’s your uhh… fried cherry tomato burger with gravy sauce and avocado peels plus an apple seed on top. It will be $12, add the discount and it will be $8.”
Abraker paid the bills and sat down on a nearby table. Sebastian took a sigh of relief when Abraker was not looking.
He noticed a familiar figure from the corner of his eyes. It is a young girl with vividly dyed hair. She is taking small bites out of her burger, and emitting a cold aura which keeps the commoners away.
He recognizes the girl. She is one of his many classmates. She apparently entered this college with a high performance rating, but she has never introduced herself to anyone else, and refrained from participating in any conversations.
Not much is known about her, so he just went on working as the girl finished her burger and left.
It is late in the night, and the full moon has reached its peak. Kilo Burgers is closed, and the entire city calmly falls asleep, though with some glimmering neon here and there. Just in the outskirts of the city, in the dark but relaxing woods, a wolf, well more an “anthropomorphic wolf” is practicing magic.
More and more clumps of cells are getting into this stuff, he thought to himself. If I have the chance, I need to get myself a more advanced magic book.
But how?
The wolf, Fourrure-de-Loup is currently unable to come up with a viable solution. So he decides to wait for a chance. He must have keen eyes at all times, to look out for any opportunities.
He wouldn’t be the only one to be up so late at night though. Returning to the campus, a rather small catgirl laid flat on her desk, at the top floor of the dormitory.
Suddenly, one of her many alarms went off. The sound of Ascension to Heaven is enough to wake up the sleeping cat. She shot up and sighed, continuing her work on more than dozens of projects. She is surely yearning for the holy action of life, known as sleep.
As the moon slowly sets into the distance, Manishh slowly returns from his coma. It is already almost morning, and the essence of dawn is already seeping into the late night.
The catgirl, or Hoshima Fuki, finally decides to step out to the balcony and gaze pointlessly, at the blank, unholy night sky, which is slowly devouring everything. There is no escape.
More time ed, and dawn came along again. Is it the same sun as yesterday, or is it an impostor?
Some important points:
- YyottaCat's character is Hoshima Fuki
- Students use buzzers instead of raising their hands
- Momo lives in the dorms
- Abraker is an "alpha male" I guess, and eats technology?
- Fuki spends extreme amounts of time studying
- Manishh is unsuccessful in his attempts to eat Momo, and wakes up outside the dorms
- Magic books are things that exist
- Fourre-de-Loup is looking for a new magic book. For what reason?
Also, in case you were confused, Tomfoolery College is more analogous to a secondary school/high school than a university. Maybe we should change the name so it's less confusing.
name: Magica
pronouns: she/her
age: 17
species: human
appearance: Whatever your regular 17 year old girl looks like. You can describe this character's appearance in your chapter if you want, but make it quite normal.
backstory: Magica has decent enough intelligence to get accepted into Tomfoolery College, and possesses no magical powers despite the name. Everyone thinks she has powers though, but she has none.
role: just a student at Tomfoolery, a minor-ish character (has an important role but not as important as, for example, Momo or Sebastian)
personality: Magica is pretty nice and avoids arguments. She makes friends easily, and is moderately talkative. (think about your average human)
abilities/strengths: nothing special
pronouns: she/her
age: 17
species: human
appearance: Whatever your regular 17 year old girl looks like. You can describe this character's appearance in your chapter if you want, but make it quite normal.
backstory: Magica has decent enough intelligence to get accepted into Tomfoolery College, and possesses no magical powers despite the name. Everyone thinks she has powers though, but she has none.
role: just a student at Tomfoolery, a minor-ish character (has an important role but not as important as, for example, Momo or Sebastian)
personality: Magica is pretty nice and avoids arguments. She makes friends easily, and is moderately talkative. (think about your average human)
abilities/strengths: nothing special
also, /requeue
im making a furry character hehe
(btw it's gonna sounds like im writing von lycaon in the story (im not btw blame corne cuz my original concept of him is too similar to his wolf boi))
Name: Bachelet Nhan
Bachelet: idk i picked a random lastname from this 1 random name website
Nhan: it's a vietnamese first name that means "human" (will be kidda important in the future) it also means "filling (like pie filling)" too but lol
(btw it's gonna sounds like im writing von lycaon in the story (im not btw blame corne cuz my original concept of him is too similar to his wolf boi))
Name: Bachelet Nhan
Bachelet: idk i picked a random lastname from this 1 random name website
Nhan: it's a vietnamese first name that means "human" (will be kidda important in the future) it also means "filling (like pie filling)" too but lol
Hoshima Fuki (星島蕗) 11o3q
Note on the name: Technically speaking it should be Hoshishima but that does not sound good at all. Fuki is just a random name, because for some reason people love to name their children with plants.
Pronouns: She/Her
Age: Undefined
Species: Undefined
Height: 159cm
Appearance: Average girl, with lovely waist-long purple hair, and a pair of crimson eyes which penetrate all betrayers. Usually seen with her iconic clothing, and a witch hat with some ornaments on top. She also has a preference towards clothes that are a bit oversized.
Backstory: Found as a pile of sentient tentacles by a wandering witch, Hoshima Shizuku (星島雫), who later took the pile of tentacles home. After she found out that the tentacles could understand her speech, she put much effort into alchemy, and was finally able to craft the body that is Fuki. Shizuku took Fuki on her travels, and taught her quite a lot about magic, life, and everything. Fuki was also able to obtain humanlike emotions, by mimicking others around her. About a year later, some incident happened, and Shizuku was forced to halt her travels and work as a teacher in Tomfoolery College. Fuki also applied for it and was accepted with a very high rating. She gained a lot of popularity among the students and the faculty, and was able to take the spot of the chair of the Students’ Council. On the outside, she seems like an outgoing and energetic girl, but the monster still lies inside. She has a secret basement where she tortures victims. She gets sick quite often, but she is very gifted in everything magic.
Role: Chair of Students’ Council at Tomfoolery College
Personality: Usually friendly and hospitable, but extremely deadly towards those who offended or wish to offend her. She can pick up most talking topics but really despises sports. She also has a bad attitude towards those who smell bad.
Abilities: ???
/q
If you're going to follow the example of Von Lycaon, you will get a character way different than mine. For example:dPeace wrote: 2t93a
im making a furry character hehe
(btw it's gonna sounds like im writing von lycaon in the story (im not btw blame corne cuz my original concept of him is too similar to his wolf boi))
Name: Bachelet Nhan
Bachelet: idk i picked a random lastname from this 1 random name website
Nhan: it's a vietnamese first name that means "human" (will be kidda important in the future) it also means "filling (like pie filling)" too but lol
- You character will be completly civilisated (not wild and living in the wood like mine) and will most likely be more sociable.
- If your character is really a furry it will be fully bipedal, where my character is half-bipedal and half-quadrupedal;
- If your character lives with human, it shouldn't be as big as my character.
Magic is definitly a thing let's gooooYyottaCat wrote: d3g2y
Hoshima Fuki (星島蕗) 11o3q
Note on the name: Technically speaking it should be Hoshishima but that does not sound good at all. Fuki is just a random name, because for some reason people love to name their children with plants.
Pronouns: She/Her
Age: Undefined
Species: Undefined
Height: 159cm
Appearance: Average girl, with lovely waist-long purple hair, and a pair of crimson eyes which penetrate all betrayers. Usually seen with her iconic clothing, and a witch hat with some ornaments on top. She also has a preference towards clothes that are a bit oversized.
Backstory: Found as a pile of sentient tentacles by a wandering witch, Hoshima Shizuku (星島雫), who later took the pile of tentacles home. After she found out that the tentacles could understand her speech, she put much effort into alchemy, and was finally able to craft the body that is Fuki. Shizuku took Fuki on her travels, and taught her quite a lot about magic, life, and everything. Fuki was also able to obtain humanlike emotions, by mimicking others around her. About a year later, some incident happened, and Shizuku was forced to halt her travels and work as a teacher in Tomfoolery College. Fuki also applied for it and was accepted with a very high rating. She gained a lot of popularity among the students and the faculty, and was able to take the spot of the chair of the Students’ Council. On the outside, she seems like an outgoing and energetic girl, but the monster still lies inside. She has a secret basement where she tortures victims. She gets sick quite often, but she is very gifted in everything magic.
Role: Chair of Students’ Council at Tomfoolery College
Personality: Usually friendly and hospitable, but extremely deadly towards those who offended or wish to offend her. She can pick up most talking topics but really despises sports. She also has a bad attitude towards those who smell bad.
Abilities: ???
/q
lol my character already fits all of the things in your listCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
If you're going to follow the example of Von Lycaon, you will get a character way different than mine. For example:dPeace wrote: 2t93a
im making a furry character hehe
(btw it's gonna sounds like im writing von lycaon in the story (im not btw blame corne cuz my original concept of him is too similar to his wolf boi))
Name: Bachelet Nhan
Bachelet: idk i picked a random lastname from this 1 random name website
Nhan: it's a vietnamese first name that means "human" (will be kidda important in the future) it also means "filling (like pie filling)" too but lol
- You character will be completly civilisated (not wild and living in the wood like mine) and will most likely be more sociable.
- If your character is really a furry it will be fully bipedal, where my character is half-bipedal and half-quadrupedal;
- If your character lives with human, it shouldn't be as big as my character.
I'm not a furry bro...dPeace wrote: 2t93a
lol my character already fits all of the things in your listCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
If you're going to follow the example of Von Lycaon, you will get a character way different than mine. For example:dPeace wrote: 2t93a
im making a furry character hehe
(btw it's gonna sounds like im writing von lycaon in the story (im not btw blame corne cuz my original concept of him is too similar to his wolf boi))
Name: Bachelet Nhan
Bachelet: idk i picked a random lastname from this 1 random name website
Nhan: it's a vietnamese first name that means "human" (will be kidda important in the future) it also means "filling (like pie filling)" too but lol
- You character will be completly civilisated (not wild and living in the wood like mine) and will most likely be more sociable.
- If your character is really a furry it will be fully bipedal, where my character is half-bipedal and half-quadrupedal;
- If your character lives with human, it shouldn't be as big as my character.
btw ur def a furry
By z0z
The sunrise glows a really nice yellow in my room but also feels strong. The bed's comfy. And I feel very groggy.
It's been 6 days since I've been sent on an expedition to the edge of the world. I happened to be one of the people picked to go out to report the status of the edge of the world. It was mandatory, I wasn't allowed to skip it. I have no idea about other groups of people but any non-exempted college-level student can get picked, across any higher-level education institution. I've heard that plenty of students get picked multiple times and that all eligible students go at least once.
The last time I read this vehicle's tracker counter, it read 31,754 miles travelled. That's very far from my uni and dorm and it would be a while until I'm back home.
I'm living in a house-car for the expedition, where it's basically a house but it can be driven. Every expedition team seems to get one. I'm with a few other people since this expedition is supposed to be done in teams.
I feel a bit of magic powering the car part of the house-car, one of the classes I was in in high school taught people basic magic. The more advanced magic requires completion of the physical sciences which means the prerequisites require that people take some biology classes, some chemistry classes, and some physics classes. Most people drop out before even reaching any of the lower-level magic classes. I barely ed my intro to chemistry class. Luckily, I'm allowed to take the remainder of the semester off and stay on campus after this expedition per university policy.
The legends say that it started out as a small sinkhole, then it just kept growing. People would start quickly packing their stuff when they saw the edge of the world because the cliff edge would crumble out, then the edge after that. Then the buildings fell. Those left would fall in the void and they were said to have never found again. With the cliff continuously falling, it eventually revealed a sky-coloured void. It's been happening for many millennia. Reports say that falling objects are visible until they slowly blend into the sky's colours and that the wind is very unpredictable near the edge.
I look out the window. We're travelling across a desert. It's filled with vegetation.
I get up from my bed and turn on my computer. I look up the stats on my computer. A graph tells me that last month had the highest land collapse rate of all time at 8 metres a day with a worsening trend following. I read a headline that says "A first! The major city Arheino falls out of world!" And multiple similar headlines. They were all posted very recently.
The next location we will stop at is at Baxero, according to my expedition instructor. I heard that it's a town built around a high school.
I get up and leave my room ducking under the doorway. It's quiet in the living room, just a faint sound of very high-speed travel on the highway. I lay on the couch and let the sound run in my ears.
...
It's relaxing. I get up from the couch to get a large glass of water, then back to my room.
The light in my room still feels nice, just a little less yellow. I turn off the computer, then close the blinds.
I drink the whole glass, it is very cool and refreshing.
I then place the glass on the table, then go back to bed. It's very comfortable with the cool air.
...
...
Some important points:
- Holy shit there's a lot to unpack
- The world is slowly falling apart, with this "crumbling" thing
- the void is a sky-blue infinite whatever it is
- Magic is actually extremely difficult at higher levels, what they learn in high-school is just basic magic
- The town of Arheino fell out of the world, the expedition is going to Baxero where there is a high school
- Expedition is consisted of university students, all students go at least once
- From the previous entries, it seems that most people don't care about this world crumbling, kinda like climate change
- Wind is unpredictable near the edge
Now we have something to really work with, I think it's a good idea to really dig into and plan out the setting/world of the story.
This way, we can all be pretty much on the same page when it comes to this stuff, and things don't get giga convoluted.
Assuming that z0z's entry is happening in the same world at the same time as the previous entries, here's some important points:
- The crumbling thing, it's been happening for many millenia
- Many different intelligent species of creatures inhabit this world, and at least the ones we've seen get along with each other and live together even though they are different species.
- Magic seems to be a fundamental aspect of this world, but extremely complicated and so inaccessible for most people.
- There's something called mana. Is it related to magic, and do some people have it and some people don't?
- Also, what is the shape of this world? I'm guessing it would be flat, but then loop around?
- Manishh seemed pretty confused about this mana stuff, and this stuff about a "school for those who have super abilities". What's up with this? Like if mana was a fundamental part of magic and magic was well known, why would Manishh be so confused about everything? Is magic possibly not actually very integrated into society somehow, so not many people are familiar with it? Is this our first plothole?
Also, I had this whole proposal of what the greater setting would be like, but with z0z's entry it doesn't make sense anymore
(I like z0z's one better though)
Or do you think it's better to not discuss this stuff, and see how everything plays out?
This way, we can all be pretty much on the same page when it comes to this stuff, and things don't get giga convoluted.
Assuming that z0z's entry is happening in the same world at the same time as the previous entries, here's some important points:
- The crumbling thing, it's been happening for many millenia
- Many different intelligent species of creatures inhabit this world, and at least the ones we've seen get along with each other and live together even though they are different species.
- Magic seems to be a fundamental aspect of this world, but extremely complicated and so inaccessible for most people.
- There's something called mana. Is it related to magic, and do some people have it and some people don't?
- Also, what is the shape of this world? I'm guessing it would be flat, but then loop around?
- Manishh seemed pretty confused about this mana stuff, and this stuff about a "school for those who have super abilities". What's up with this? Like if mana was a fundamental part of magic and magic was well known, why would Manishh be so confused about everything? Is magic possibly not actually very integrated into society somehow, so not many people are familiar with it? Is this our first plothole?
Also, I had this whole proposal of what the greater setting would be like, but with z0z's entry it doesn't make sense anymore
(I like z0z's one better though)Or do you think it's better to not discuss this stuff, and see how everything plays out?
Vampire Siblings (in development, depends on other's story's progress)
Dabi
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Fara
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Plan
World Traveler - can travel through worlds
World Destroyer - reason why the world on z0z story is crumbling
World Core - A stone in which the siblings took somewhere in that world. Reason why the said world is crumbling
Demon Lord - Dabi and Fara's master
Worlds - there are 12 in total, total of 12 World Cores
then manishh came from a different world where there isn't magic plothole solvedScyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Worlds - there are 12 in total, total of 12 World Cores
we could also have it where z0z and tomfoolery college are in different worlds as well if we wanted to
Also with the worldbuilding, it might be better to not have a solid plan and have everything not set in stone, but to leave it up in the air so we get more creative stuff. But I still think it would be good to have discussion about it in this thread and keep a close eye on everything. I'm going to make a new document which keeps track of everything worldbuilding related, like the character document.
we can but isn't it manishh, momo, and sebastian from the same school?yoony1 wrote: 222118
then manishh came from a different world where there isn't magic plothole solvedScyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Worlds - there are 12 in total, total of 12 World Cores
we could also have it where z0z and tomfoolery college are in different worlds as well if we wanted to
and if i were to progress their story, it would be the siblings attacking the academy, took a stone hidden beneath the academy. momo and co. trains hard to reclaim the stone and save their world
i have my own opinions on how the story should go
anyway
/queue
anyway
/queue
that kinda seems boring to me just because it becomes a hero vs. villain storyScyla wrote: 1d6q5d
we can but isn't it manishh, momo, and sebastian from the same school?
and if i were to progress their story, it would be the siblings attacking the academy, took a stone hidden beneath the academy. momo and co. trains hard to reclaim the stone and save their world
Reading Manishh's chapter, you get the sense that he's somehow out of place. First, he has "no idea why he's at the school" and explains the school as "for those who have "super abilities"" which seems hella vague, like he doesn't really know what's going on. Not only that, but he seems confused about this "mana thing", which seems like it would be a pretty fundamental part of the world, and something I'd assume you'd learn and be familiar with before learning "mana redirection".Scyla wrote: 1d6q5d
we can but isn't it manishh, momo, and sebastian from the same school?yoony1 wrote: 222118
then manishh came from a different world where there isn't magic plothole solvedScyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Worlds - there are 12 in total, total of 12 World Cores
we could also have it where z0z and tomfoolery college are in different worlds as well if we wanted to
I think it's pretty clear that he transferred in the middle of the year for a reason he doesn't know, but with how confused and out of loop he seemingly is I'm guessing there's something else going on. Maybe if he's not from another world, it'd be amnesia or something I think.
Maybe I'm just overreacting and making these crazy theories when it actually makes sense to everyone else.
Now that I think about it, this "manishh is from another world" idea came from the idea of the setting I had in mind before (that I scrapped after z0z's entry), where manishh would've technically came from somewhere different.
I am confused right now because the story I wrote about me and the story yotta wrote is not same. In my story I was sitting next to pink jelly for the whole class but in yotta I was not, in his story I tried to assisnate him and then fall on the ground? That's mean I didn't attend the class??yoony1 wrote: 222118
what do you think about manishh (the character)Manishh wrote: 2k5q58
This is good. Good story force people to make theories. We are going on a great route guys
You'll be ing the overflow queue because there's already 5 people in the regular queue.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
anyway
/queue
I think it might be a good idea to extend the regular queue though, I made the limit 5 because I assumed most people would take the entire 3 days to make their submission, so to get to the bottom of the queue it'd take about 2 weeks, but that hasn't been the case so far. It also looks like there's a lot more people invested in this than I thought there would be.
I'll probably also change it that you can only the regular queue once at a time instead of multiple times, so that more people can write. I think I'll also change it so that you can't the regular queue if you are in the priority queue (to get even more variety of people), so rip me and flareling
edit: I changed it to 7 people