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Chapter 47: The Bond of Evil and Weird (OT! tries to write a book) 3j1n4n
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to the people saying /queue (and anyone about to post it) ^yoony1 wrote: 222118
Our first business to take care of is deciding a premise or a starting point. If you have any ideas please post them in this thread. In two days, whichever idea gains the most traction will be the winning idea, and the person that came up with it will write the first entry. You can start queuing after that.
Also if you have a character, post their name and brief description in this thread
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post apocalypse setting sounds cool. maybe instead of it being either desert type (yk sand or snow) it could be more spotty, like some areas are sandy and blazing hot, while others are colder. ig you'd probably have some "in between" areas, but those areas could be rare to come byigorsprite wrote: 6x186x
a radioactive apocalypse, like stalkerdPeace wrote: 2t93a
idea: ot accidentally caused an apocalypse and now everyone but fews are still alive (including all ot somehow?) and we'll have to survive in this dying world
(dun know what the actual apocalypse should be tho)
i feel like there could be "death zones" in some of the sandy areas where the atmosphere is thinner and therefore much more dangerous to traverse (though they'd have to be big enough to be a significant obstacle). feel like something could be done with that
the whole planet's climate is completely thrown out of whack, basically. you could pull some weird, fucked up animals out of that, with the radiation stuff as well
sorry i tend to get way too into this sort of stuff uvu
Thanks for doing my job for me lmaooctowave wrote: 602s2i
to the people saying /queue (and anyone about to post it) ^yoony1 wrote: 222118
Our first business to take care of is deciding a premise or a starting point. If you have any ideas please post them in this thread. In two days, whichever idea gains the most traction will be the winning idea, and the person that came up with it will write the first entry. You can start queuing after that.
Also if you have a character, post their name and brief description in this thread
I like this idea. When I think "apocalypse" I was thinking more along the lines of a ruined, decaying city shrouded in mystery, but I like octowave's idea too. I also have an idea for a character if we go with the whole apocalypse thing.dPeace wrote: 2t93a
idea: ot accidentally caused an apocalypse and now everyone but fews are still alive (including all ot somehow?) and we'll have to survive in this dying world
(dun know what the actual apocalypse should be tho)
No, just post them at some point. If you post them earlier then people will have a chance to write about your character or shape the story to fit your character. You can also post it after your first entry if you want to keep them a surprise.igorsprite wrote: 6x186x
do we need to post our characters before the story starts?
(Gonna change the original post now)
Also, if we decide to post characters, it would be good to make an archive of those characters and their statuses, i.e "currently active", "temporarily inactive", "removed" or "gone".
Since anyone writing can use any of the characters as they like, I think lebelling them as "currently active" or "temporarily active" wouldn't make a lot of sense, as they'd always technically be active. If we wanted to give them statuses, I think it'd be better to say what they were currently doing in the plot.keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
Also, if we decide to post characters, it would be good to make an archive of those characters and their statuses, i.e "currently active", "temporarily inactive", "removed" or "gone".
This also raises an interesting question. What if you can't write from the perspective of a character, such as if they die or they pull a Rem from Re:Zero? I guess I'd make it so in this case you'd create another character and write from their perspective, but if for whatever reason your previous character comes back, you'd need to choose between the two and leave the other one in limbo, hopefully for someone else to pick up.
As a summary, here are the proposals for premise we will be using initially (that we've gotten so far):
This is my personal favourite. I think it'll be interesting to explore as it's very open-ended with how we can take the story. octowave also added to this idea so check out their post.dPeace wrote: 2t93a
idea: ot accidentally caused an apocalypse and now everyone but fews are still alive (including all ot somehow?) and we'll have to survive in this dying world
(dun know what the actual apocalypse should be tho)
I like this idea too, but not as much as the apocalypse idea. I think we'll be a bit more limited in what we can do, and it might be a bit tougher to pull off than the apocalypse idea. This is because if we go the SoL route, the quality will probably rely a lot on how good we can write the characters, while with the apocalypse idea it'll be easier to get by with just an interesting plot and good worldbuilding. I still think this idea is very interesting though, and wouldn't mind doing it if you guys like it better.keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
Personally, I'll vote for a school scenario, largely because I had a dream where I was back in school last night. It can take place in a college, where there are various classes that we can discuss later on. It doesn't have to be entirely slice-of-life like Nichijou, but it could expand from there into a greater scenario, like Toradora!.
I think it'd be cool to make this school some sort of special school, like a school for studying magic or something. This would actually alleviate the reservations that I have with this idea.
Honestly not too sure what 179bpm meant with this one.179bpm wrote: 4r3o3f
what if we did something where everybody writes in first person and we do one big story revolving around ot
(this might have come off wrong so i might fix it later)
ALSO STOP QUEUING WE HAVEN'T STARTED YET
You don't need to have a character now. I think it's hard to make one now because we don't even have a story. TBH I have no idea what character I'll do if we do the school scenario. I think I'm gonna see how the story goes for a bit, to give me inspiration. As long as you're not stuck because you don't know what to write for your entry because you don't have a character, it's fine.Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Who already made a character? Maybe it would help me.
no idearoufou wrote: 5k65h
I'm a little curious. Could the fact that the story shifts perspective every time author changes, cause it to become somewhat jarring to read?
Here are the list of people in favour of each scenario:
Apocalypse
- yoony1
- igorsprite?
- octowave?
- flareling22?
School
- [ Sebastian ]?
- z0z
- Patatitta
Edit: just noticed that [ Sebastian ] was confirmed either. With z0z school is still winning though.
Edit 2: This post is invalid, not only is it incorrect but I used a different system to decide which scenario wins.
/in
Neh lets discriminate between denzin and non-denzin. Lets make non-denzin sit on the floor and we sit on the benches. : )[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
If we're doing the school idea, I suggest we have the older denizens be the teachers, the newer denizens be upperclassmen, and the dwellers to be lowerclassmen.
If we go school, what do you guys think of making it some special sort of school like a magic school or a ninja school for example? That way, people who want to do SoL/character stuff can do that, while people that want to do worldbuilding/plot stuff will have more to work with. The lore and/or power system is probably going to be convoluted because of the lack of coordination though.
If school does win, it'll ultimately be up to keremaru to decide what we do though, because they're going first.
If school does win, it'll ultimately be up to keremaru to decide what we do though, because they're going first.
we can figure it out as we goyoony1 wrote: 222118
If we go school, what do you guys think of making it some special sort of school like a magic school or a ninja school for example? That way, people who want to do SoL/character stuff can do that, while people that want to do worldbuilding/plot stuff will have more to work with. The lore and/or power system is probably going to be convoluted because of the lack of coordination though.
If school does win, it'll ultimately be up to keremaru to decide what we do though, because they're going first.
wait... what if we do sth like school live where we are in a school building in an apocalypse? and some character cope with the situation by doing things as if the apocalypse never happened?
or do the opposite where it's a normal school but some characters are so paranoid of sth that the live as if they are in a post-apocalypse world?
or do the opposite where it's a normal school but some characters are so paranoid of sth that the live as if they are in a post-apocalypse world?
I think we all have these different ideas from all this discussion so I don't think we'll be able to decide on one idea. Because of this, I think it might be better to see if anyone who has a really good idea wants to write the first entry instead.
Any volunteers?
(I'll do it if no-one wants to)
Any volunteers?
(I'll do it if no-one wants to)
I have an idea but I'm not sure if it's good
Basically, there's this lazy guy on the magic or ninja school who isn't doing so good, so he's under threat of getting kicked. He only has 6 months to improve his abilities and win tournaments to prove him being worthy. At first he tried to improve by himself but fails miserably, then he meets someone who helps him on his feet. Over time he combined the techniques of all the new friends he meets and enemies he faces until he becomes the best student in school. Thoughts?
Basically, there's this lazy guy on the magic or ninja school who isn't doing so good, so he's under threat of getting kicked. He only has 6 months to improve his abilities and win tournaments to prove him being worthy. At first he tried to improve by himself but fails miserably, then he meets someone who helps him on his feet. Over time he combined the techniques of all the new friends he meets and enemies he faces until he becomes the best student in school. Thoughts?
Because everyone has all these different ideas and they're all so good, I don't think we'll be able to come to an agreement anytime soon, especially with how slow discourse is on these threads. Because of this, I'm gonna put my foot down.
Going back to the first post I made (excluding the original post), I said the scenario that gained the most "traction" would be the chosen scenario, and the first entry would be written by whoever came up with the winning scenario. This kinda lead to "apocalypse" by dPeace vs "school" by keremaru.
I'm going to say that the scenario that gained the most "traction" was the one with more posts made about it. Excluding posts that mentioned both, "apocalypse" had 7 posts, while "school" had 8 posts (by my brief counting). It was very close, but by this completely arbitrary way of deciding I'm gonna say that "school" gained the most traction.
Because of this, keremaru will be taking the floor with writing our first entry. He will have 3 days, until 13th Feb at 11UTC. If he can't do it/doesn't want to, dPeace will write the first entry.
Also you can start queuing now.
Going back to the first post I made (excluding the original post), I said the scenario that gained the most "traction" would be the chosen scenario, and the first entry would be written by whoever came up with the winning scenario. This kinda lead to "apocalypse" by dPeace vs "school" by keremaru.
I'm going to say that the scenario that gained the most "traction" was the one with more posts made about it. Excluding posts that mentioned both, "apocalypse" had 7 posts, while "school" had 8 posts (by my brief counting). It was very close, but by this completely arbitrary way of deciding I'm gonna say that "school" gained the most traction.
Because of this, keremaru will be taking the floor with writing our first entry. He will have 3 days, until 13th Feb at 11UTC. If he can't do it/doesn't want to, dPeace will write the first entry.
Also you can start queuing now.
UhhhhhhhPatatitta wrote: 5t25
wait what I didn't say I was going to write or ed the school scenario, I just said that the actual genre of writing needs to be SoL in order to work in a forum context, why was I included
Sorry about that, but it's too late we're doing school lmao
Besides school might allow SoL to flourish a bit more, while with apocalypse people might be more focussed on other things, but idk.
Also I guess I can't read, I thought for some reason Seb wasn't preferring school which he was, while I assumed you were fully prefering school. I'm very qualified to be an editor 😬
I'm planning on integrating both the school and apocalypse theme in with each other, but not like a "Slice-of-Life with a darker subtone if you look into it more" like dPeace suggested. Instead, I plan on making it more like a slice-of-life that gets serious when it needs to be, like "Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt". I'll lead with the magic school, since it's more open for everybody to make their own characters. A ninja school, though it would be more thematically appropriate with my history in OT, would be more close-minded and limited, and wouldn't lead into the apocalypse theme as cleanly as the magic school. Plus, I know there's a lot of people here that aren't trying to study shinobi and ninja history to write a book. I'll try to write the beginning like Dean Wonderland, where it's a normal few days, week or month at school before everything goes to hell, and that's where the apocalypse plot takes over and the slice-of-life takes a backseat. It'll still be there when it's appropriate, but it'll be few and far in between. I wanna give enough time for every character to establish themselves, but not too much time that it feels like it drags on. Not sure about how the apocalypse will initiate, but I might have monsters invade OT as a whole. Or aliens, maybe. Either one can work, as long as there's a foreign entity. Feel free to post thoughts.
As soon as yoony gives access to the doc, and I finish working on another project, I'll start writing.
I'm not going to give out access to the doc to anyone except maybe to some editors, because I don't want people randomly messing with it or changing stuff around (which I feel will inevitably happen at some point).keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
As soon as yoony gives access to the doc,
To everyone:
To dm your entry to me, you can send it on something like a text sharing site (eg. Pastebin) or send me a google-doc of your own, and I'll copy-paste it from there.
Also jesus christ how did you manage to fuse literally every idea we had together
Dude's a man
yoony1 wrote: 222118
I'm not going to give out access to the doc to anyone except maybe to some editors, because I don't want people randomly messing with it or changing stuff around (which I feel will inevitably happen at some point).keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
As soon as yoony gives access to the doc,
To everyone:
To dm your entry to me, you can send it on something like a text sharing site (eg. Pastebin) or send me a google-doc of your own, and I'll copy-paste it from there.
Also jesus christ how did you manage to fuse literally every idea we had together
Dude's a man
Scyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Can I make my own character?
Here's a character template that I have on hand, definitely not because I've participated in similar activities like this before.
You don't have to use it by any means, but it does help to flesh out and define a character you have in mind.
Send me the part of the story you wrote when it's your turn to write.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Do you want us to send a part of the story? Or just details about our characters?yoony1 wrote: 222118
To dm your entry to me
With your character, you can post it here if you want other people to know and work them it the story, so they can be more naturally included in the story and the world. If you want to keep it secret/handle the introduction a specific way then you can keep it to yourself until your first entry.
This is actually a really good idea, but I don't really like that specific one as it feels a bit specific especially with stuff like "species" and "fighting style" which isn't really important nor relevant to what we're doing. I think I'll rework that template as a way for people to submit their character though, it would be a good organised way to keep track of everyone's characters.keremaru wrote: 3r6e2u
Here's a character template that I have on hand, definitely not because I've participated in similar activities like this before.
We just decided on a scenario and keremaru is the first person to write an entry. Everyone's in the dark with what's going to happen except keremaru, so we just gotta sit tight. He did give a brief plan in his previous post so you can read that.Scyla wrote: 1d6q5d
Can someone send me a tldr so far? I need to know what scenario we are in
Also I'm gonna /queue myself, I want to write something too.
Hi everyone, I've made a list of attributes you should consider when making your character. It'll be good if you could come up with something for each attribute. Not only do I hope this helps with creating a character, but this will also be how the characters will be recorded in the "list of characters" section in the main post.
Name: The character's name.
Pronoun: So we don't have to go "they they their they" all the time.
Status: Don't worry about this one, this is to keep track of what your character is currently doing in the story.
Appearance: How your character looks. It would be good if you could provide an image, but it's not necessary.
Backstory/About the character: The character's history and/or the character's circumstances.
Role: What does your character do?
Personality: The character's personality.
Abilities/strengths: Any abilities your character might have. For example, fast runner, smarter than average, magic powers etc.
Additional information: Anything else we need to know.
You don't need to go into lots of detail for these attributes, a brief description or just a few words is fine.
You can also leave stuff empty if you want, if you are unsure or if you want to be mysterious.
Also, everything here is changeable, nothing is set in stone. If your character goes through some change, whether it's through the story or because you simply want them to, I'll change their description to match that.
Reminder that you post your character here when you've made one, at the latest just after your first entry, but you can do it beforehand like Sebastian.
Name: The character's name.
Pronoun: So we don't have to go "they they their they" all the time.
Status: Don't worry about this one, this is to keep track of what your character is currently doing in the story.
Appearance: How your character looks. It would be good if you could provide an image, but it's not necessary.
Backstory/About the character: The character's history and/or the character's circumstances.
Role: What does your character do?
Personality: The character's personality.
Abilities/strengths: Any abilities your character might have. For example, fast runner, smarter than average, magic powers etc.
Additional information: Anything else we need to know.
Example with Sebastian's character:
Name: Sebastian
Pronouns: He/him
Status: ---
Appearance: Lucario
Backstory/About the character: Sebastian is 16 years old, and is a smart kid who does good in his classes. But he struggles to make friends and has a hard time controlling his Pokemon powers.
Role: ---
Personality: Struggles to make friends
Abilities/strengths: Pokemon powers
Additional information: Is a Lucario.
Pronouns: He/him
Status: ---
Appearance: Lucario
Backstory/About the character: Sebastian is 16 years old, and is a smart kid who does good in his classes. But he struggles to make friends and has a hard time controlling his Pokemon powers.
Role: ---
Personality: Struggles to make friends
Abilities/strengths: Pokemon powers
Additional information: Is a Lucario.
You don't need to go into lots of detail for these attributes, a brief description or just a few words is fine.
You can also leave stuff empty if you want, if you are unsure or if you want to be mysterious.
Also, everything here is changeable, nothing is set in stone. If your character goes through some change, whether it's through the story or because you simply want them to, I'll change their description to match that.
Reminder that you post your character here when you've made one, at the latest just after your first entry, but you can do it beforehand like Sebastian.
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
Well if there's magic and there's technology in the story then sure why notoctowave wrote: 602s2i
also, we're allowed to use magic tech stuff, right? because my current character idea kinda entirely hinges off of that
Name: Waqiduoqymedyg Karmiel. More commonly referred to as Momo, due to its hue.
Pronoun: It, its, it's.
Status: Currently in class.
Appearance: A pink slime humanoid with an opaque set of diamonds on its forehead, lacking any form of a mouth.
Backstory/About the character: A magic experiment gone awry due to interfering elements, Waqiduoqymedyg was born from slime and human DNA being forcibly merged together. It possesses magical functionality due to being a slime, yet retains sentience and awareness due to its human conscience. It was allowed entrance to the (insert school name) on the basis of being a sentient magic .
Role: Opening perspective character. May be part of main cast if written so.
Personality: Momo is more reserved to itself, until someone interacts with it. Though it doesn't have any views on its colleagues, it does value life over anything else and will stop at nothing to preserve it, regardless of alignment.
Abilities/Strengths: Momo's greatest trait is being a slime, allowing it to adapt to multiple situations on the fly without having to worry about much. Though it does rely on magic for some scenarios, the magic it does use is more close-range than long-range.
Additional Information: Attempts to harm or dislocate Momo have largely resulted in little to no reaction, save for immediate exposure to higher temperatures.
Pronoun: It, its, it's.
Status: Currently in class.
Appearance: A pink slime humanoid with an opaque set of diamonds on its forehead, lacking any form of a mouth.
Backstory/About the character: A magic experiment gone awry due to interfering elements, Waqiduoqymedyg was born from slime and human DNA being forcibly merged together. It possesses magical functionality due to being a slime, yet retains sentience and awareness due to its human conscience. It was allowed entrance to the (insert school name) on the basis of being a sentient magic .
Role: Opening perspective character. May be part of main cast if written so.
Personality: Momo is more reserved to itself, until someone interacts with it. Though it doesn't have any views on its colleagues, it does value life over anything else and will stop at nothing to preserve it, regardless of alignment.
Abilities/Strengths: Momo's greatest trait is being a slime, allowing it to adapt to multiple situations on the fly without having to worry about much. Though it does rely on magic for some scenarios, the magic it does use is more close-range than long-range.
Additional Information: Attempts to harm or dislocate Momo have largely resulted in little to no reaction, save for immediate exposure to higher temperatures.
about character
pronouns:she/her
backstory:
after becoming a magical girl Alissa gained great intelligence and therefore being able to enter [school name] with relative ease.
abilities:
is able to use magic uses this ability to summon weapons.
is able to fight with ease.
personality:
Alissa doesn't talk to others unless its needed and has little value over human life though may save a human if she has good sentiments about them
Role:fan service
Name: Manishh
Pronoun: He/him
Status:
Appearance: Has 3 form.
Backstory/About the character: A depressed guy who decided to leave society, went to a jungle and found a monkey which gave the guy a power to let him inherit the power of whoever he eats. The power gave him a muscular body and the monkey also gave him his form by letting the guy eat him. He eats another guy who had the ability to turn into titan and gain his form as well as regeneration power.
Role: I dont know
Personality: Chill
Abilities/strengths: Changing forms, Inherit the power of who he eats, Regeneration.
Pronoun: He/him
Status:
Appearance: Has 3 form.
Backstory/About the character: A depressed guy who decided to leave society, went to a jungle and found a monkey which gave the guy a power to let him inherit the power of whoever he eats. The power gave him a muscular body and the monkey also gave him his form by letting the guy eat him. He eats another guy who had the ability to turn into titan and gain his form as well as regeneration power.
Role: I dont know
Personality: Chill
Abilities/strengths: Changing forms, Inherit the power of who he eats, Regeneration.
By keremaru
Why am I here?
I look around at my surroundings after I took a small nap, and I’m still in my classroom. The teacher’s still conducting a curriculum on mana redirection, some girls a few seats away from me are giggling about something on their handhelds. I don’t have anything else to do, so I guess I’ll just pay attention to the teacher for now.
“So, can anyone tell me how they think mana redirection works?”
Oh, don’t call on me. I just woke up.
“Maybe Momo?”
Fuck.
After the teacher called me up to explain something I had little to no background knowledge on, I nonchalantly stood up to answer his question as briskly as I possibly could. I didn’t want much attention to myself, let alone any in the first place.
“Well, I dunno. Redirection of mana?” I respond nonchalantly. How much more complex could it be past that? It’s just mana redirection.
”That’s the general gist of it, but not all of it. I’ll give you points for getting most of it, though,” the teacher disappointedly responded to my answer.
Someone is definitely mocking me in their head right now.
I sat back down after the teacher heard my brief explanation, and immediately went back to bothering myself with intrusive thoughts.
I still don’t know how I’m alive right now. That’s a very abstract thought that very few people have, I know, but I’m different from other people. And not in a way like “I’m special for my personality and how I feel”, but rather in that I shouldn’t be alive. Everyone has a heart, bodily organs, and the extra parts nobody wants to talk about. But I don’t have any of those, not even a heart. Largely because I’m a slime. Everybody acts like it’s fine, but I still get that sneaking suspicion that everyone actually dislikes me. Then again, I don’t care much.
Once I finished speaking, the teacher went into excessive discussion and explanation of how the process of mana redirection works, including its functionalities. I really couldn’t be bothered to pay attention, so I just redirected my attention to the window right next to me, since I sit on the left side of the class. Though everything I see is pink, I can still discern what’s what based on what I’ve already discerned. There are people on the street outside, some families at a park, and the unlicensed ice cream truck driver outside. I don’t know why he’s still working the streets after what happened a couple months ago.
The teacher transitioned into defining how to redirect mana, comparing it to a battery system throughout the body. Nobody seemed to get it.
After class ended, quite awkwardly, I’m pretty tuckered out again. I’ll just go back home to sleep, since there isn’t much for me to do in class since it just ended.
Hopefully, I won’t have any weird dreams, like the one where I had a therapeutic conversation with a tiger shark. Unfortunately, someone walked up to my desk before I could dart my way out of the school and into my super cozy blanket.
“Hey, do you have a minute?” a random dude asked just as I was getting up from my desk.
“Depends on what I’m giving my minute for.”
“Not much, just a few things I wanna ask.”
“Before you say anything, I don’t swing for dudes,” I precluded him before I stood up from my school desk.
“That… Isn't what I wanted to talk about, but okay then,” the guy quickly responded, shutting me down.
“What I wanted you to answer for me was… How are you alive?” the guy questioned, less suspicion behind his tone than what I’d suspect from someone who would ask that kind of question, and instead, rather worryingly, more curious.
How ironic.
I had to take a brief moment to really think about my answer to that question, ironically as the guy asked of me. Though, my voice would just form words as I answered his bizarre question.
“What do you mean by... Alive?
“Do you mean how am I sentient without any organs? I have no idea. That is a question that I would not ask without any kind of scientific background.
As for being able to think, being able to talk, being able to feel...
...I still don’t know.
In any case, I’m gonna go home. If you’ve got any more questions, I’ll see you tomorrow,” I hastily closed the conversation.
I just wanna fall on my bed.
On the walk home, I took a look at the sky. The sky is pink, the clouds are light pink, and the sun is an even brighter tint of pink. Everything is some color of pink, from the sidewalk cracks, to the road, to even people I on the street. Though I can tell depth and dimensions, it gets really boring seeing only pink.
I can’t wait to get back to sleeping.
My opinion:[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
Perspective should be yours but the story you create should show something to represent that we are in the same story. Like sebastian sitting in the same class room as mono
Not necessarily. You can write whatever you want, but you have to that everything that people wrote before you canonically happened/is happening/will happen.Manishh wrote: 2k5q58
Oh damn
Anyway, does our story need to be related?
So in this case there's a school, there's a pink slime guy studying there, and there's something called "mana redirection" that they're studying. There's a street and a park outside the window, and an unlicensed ice-cream truck driver, as well as some incident that happened a couple months ago.
You could pick and choose what here is important and what is not, but everything is canonically true.
Maybe I should make these summaries for every entry so people can keep track of stuff more easily.
You write it in the perspective of your own character, Sebastian. You can include Momo as a character in your entry if you want to though, along with any of the other characters people submitted.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
Also can we get some worldbuilding, what is the school even called lmao
So could I make the entry go back to the class that Mono was in and give extra detail of what happened?yoony1 wrote: 222118
You write it in the perspective of your own character, Sebastian. You can include Momo as a character in your entry if you want to though, along with any of the other characters people submitted.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
If you want to[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
So could I make the entry go back to the class that Mono was in and give extra detail of what happened?yoony1 wrote: 222118
You write it in the perspective of your own character, Sebastian. You can include Momo as a character in your entry if you want to though, along with any of the other characters people submitted.[ Sebastian ] wrote: 143do
Will chapter 2 be from the perspective of Mono? Or do I write it in the perspective of Sebastian?
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
Added the details of my character above: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cgynYSZhSULuPYbzTxuFUJoSdfEoFjcezL54vTQmYjo/edit
His name is Fourrure–de-Loup (you can short that if needed) and can NOT talk btw. Yes I literally made a MONSTER
I also remade the character template made by keremaru, and updated it with the suggestions by yoony1. It is the one I'm using for my character. You can get it empty: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MzkWnHq-fqyzOGO2rKM5GNiRLcGS7HZ_Gq9un0sXY3U/edit#.
Edit: If you have any idea to make this character looking more to a wild monster than a furry I'm welcome ^^
His name is Fourrure–de-Loup (you can short that if needed) and can NOT talk btw. Yes I literally made a MONSTER
I also remade the character template made by keremaru, and updated it with the suggestions by yoony1. It is the one I'm using for my character. You can get it empty: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MzkWnHq-fqyzOGO2rKM5GNiRLcGS7HZ_Gq9un0sXY3U/edit#.
Edit: If you have any idea to make this character looking more to a wild monster than a furry I'm welcome ^^
and you keep denying you're a furry smhCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
He's more like a wild animal than a furryPolyspora wrote: 4i695
and you keep denying you're a furry smhCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
Decreasing the length of his hand and widening his chest may workCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Well... So I'll look like this hahahaha... I didn't wrote the description or the name of my character for now, but he looks like that everytime (i.e. no human form lel)yoony1 wrote: 222118
A monster sounds cool, but idk do what you wantCorne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
Would you prefer to me being something regular or A MONSTER, as I don't plan being a goat with a gun.
(The art took me almost 7 hours)
Edit: If you have any idea to make him more original for the design tell me
By [ Sebastian ]
“I’m done for”, I thought as I was waiting in the principal's office. The hands on the clock felt like they were taking an eternity to turn, the principal and the assistant principal were talking privately, and I was thinking of all the punishments I would have to face for what I've done.
I’m not a bad kid. I get straight A’s, I never skip school, and I treat staff with respect. But let’s just say I couldn’t control myself.
We were in Mrs Vulcribitch’s classroom. She was showing us a presentation on advanced calculus and was asking us a question. Since I knew the answer and I wanted to be a good student, I raised my hand. But just then a destructive aura bubble formed out of my hand and destroyed the entire classroom.
And that’s where we get to here. Finally, principal Brakerson entered and started by looking me in the eye very angrily.
“Mr Larse, this is the 6th time you had to come here this school year. And we’re only in week 3”. Oh, I forgot to mention. This isn’t the only time I’ve been in the principal's office.
“I’m sorry sir, it won’t happen again!”. “I know it won’t. Because I’m going to expel you”. “NO! That’ll go on my resume forever! Please Mr Brakerson. Give me one more chance!”. “Sorry Sebastian. I can’t risk the safety of the students at Tomfoolery College. I’m starting to suspect you were involved in that thing a couple months ago”. “Welp, better start getting my stuff out of my dorm then”.
I begin to walk out of the room very sad. Nobody wants to hear that they’ve been expelled from a school! But then, Mr Abrakerson told me something.
“Wait! There is a chance that I might give you another chance, heh heh heh”. “What is it? I’ll do anything!”. “You work at Kilo Burgers, right?”. “Yes? And?”. “Give me a friend discount there and I’ll let you have your precious second chance”. “Yes! I get to stay! YES!”.
I guess I was a little too happy, because Mr Abraker grabbed me by my snout and told me this.
“But if you ever get called here for that again, you’re done for”. I was finally able to get out of his office.
I need to get my Pokemon powers in check because I would hate to be expelled. After all, how hard could it be?
Important points:
- Confirmed to be the same school Momo goes to
- Names of some teachers; Mrs Vulbritch, Principal Brakerson
- Why does Mr Brakerson's name slowly change to Abraker?
- A classroom has been blown up (this is not the incident)
- The school has dorms
- There's a place called Kilo Burgers which Sebastian works at
- Mr Brakerson now has a friend discount at Kilo Burgers
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?
Should we maybe name the chapters then, so they're more distinguished, or just keep it without names?Corne2Plum3 wrote: 3y1z1p
imo going chapter 1, 2, 3... a common counter for everyone because we may miss some chapter as we don't know the orderyoony1 wrote: 222118
I think we should wait a bit longer before deciding.z0z wrote: 2h2d46
i think the wait time might be a bit too long
Also, do you think we should go [character name] chapter 1, increasing the chapter when we have another entry from the character, or should we just go chapter 1, 2, 3 etc?