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ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly 246s4d

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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25

Hinsvar & Xinely stop flashing everyone with ur couple maps xD Oh you~

[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:13:179 (1) - finish on start? The instrument isn't that loud here, but added a whistle.
00:32:204 (1,2,3) - rhythm like this follows the music better imo:
SPOILER
Done.
00:53:789 (2) - this is quite awkward to play since the rhythm here is red/blue line heavy, maybe something like this:
SPOILER
Emphasizing the vocal here, and I think it's better this way.
00:55:984 (1) - move to 00:56:167 plays better imo Done.
01:17:936 (4) - take off the clap, clap actually plays at 01:18:301 (5) so you can add it there ^
Thanks for modding :D

abc 
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Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
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Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Updated ><
okamiratsu
714 posts
ed August 2011
[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:30:558(2) move to 00:30:740 then end the slider at 00:31:655 so it can match 00:29:277
00:30:558 add note
01:14:094 add note
Great Work

[Xinley's Hard]
00:26:167 remove note and start the spinner here
Great Work

[Mochi]
The issues im seeing are the same so I don't know if this was on purpose or on a different Beat Snap Division
the following slider ends need to be moved back one tick.
00:15:192(2)
00:26:167(4)
00:36:594(1)
00:42:082(4)
00:46:838(1)
00:47:936(4)
01:01:472(3)
01:07:692(9)
01:13:179(3)
01:30:740(1)
I often find my self missing these parts(that just my personal opinion). other than that placements good, and there are no other problems.
Good job and good luck in the rankings
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
No change in my diff..
Thanks for mod anyway :D
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011
Kind of followed the first, did the second, but not the third because I think it's unnecessary.

Thanks for modding! :D

what is this 
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Gloria Guard
2,277 posts
ed May 2011
Hi your map in my queue :3


[General]

Fine


[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:20:131 (3) You are using the wrong rhythm...I felt confused with the this rhythm
i think this note move 00:20:131 is better rhythm imo
01:14:094 (4) I hear this part more lyrics rhythm. you remove note and 1/2 slider repeat?
01:30:375 Hmm.. I suggest that you put a note in this section, i hear this part drum sound.
01:30:558 This green line remove please it's unnecessary line
01:30:740 ^
01:37:509 This green line unnecessary. remove please
01:38:240 (1) This is spin why 01:38:240 ? the spinner is not appropriate.
i think this spinner start point 01:38:149 is better imo.


[Xinely's Hard]

00:28:911 (2) I didn't hear this part clap hitsound. slider end remove clap.
00:29:643 (1) This is too, didn't hear this part clap sound. remove clap.
00:33:484 (4) Hmm.. this slider you intention?, i'm understand. but this slider flow is awkward
because this slider is difficult to handle the next note. i think Ctrl+G is better flow imo.
00:40:619 (5) Uh.. why this note small jump? it's you intention..? i think it's bad.
you move this note x:164 y:168 is better shape and flow.
00:45:923 (3,4,5,6,1) I suggest this flow.
SPOILER
01:17:753 (1,2) Umm.. a little this pattern shape awkward..i think blanket is better imo
01:18:576 (3,4) Why this two note small distance. this is 1/3 rhythm. it's playing really confuse.
you fix this part two note increase distance.
01:27:356 (4) This note intention is understand. but it's really not fine.


[Mochi]


00:17:021 (6,8) Why this pattern overlap. (8) note 1~2 gird up please.
00:31:655 (7) This slider jump flow is not better. i think Ctrl+G is (6) note and before (1) note
is better flow imo
00:54:155 (1) This slider move center? and more improve slider shape.

01:10:070 (1,2,3,4,5,1) This is really confuse.. because stream after (1) slider hit and really many
miss, (1) slider widen the distance




Good luck :3
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

Gloria Guard wrote: 6q3s1q

Hi your map in my queue :3

[Mochi]


00:17:021 (6,8) Why this pattern overlap. (8) note 1~2 gird up please. stacked from before. moved XD
00:31:655 (7) This slider jump flow is not better. i think Ctrl+G is (6) note and before (1) note
is better flow imo change on my way
00:54:155 (1) This slider move center? and more improve slider shape.
fixed
01:10:070 (1,2,3,4,5,1) This is really confuse.. because stream after (1) slider hit and really many
miss, (1) slider widen the distance i'll keep this



Good luck :3
Thx for mod ~

Edit: Updated :D
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
fix hitsound in GG's mod, i just like my rhythm so still keep, about spacing too

Hard 
osu file format v12

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Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:pening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

Gloria Guard wrote: 6q3s1q

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:20:131 (3) You are using the wrong rhythm...I felt confused with the this rhythm
i think this note move 00:20:131 is better rhythm imo Done.
01:14:094 (4) I hear this part more lyrics rhythm. you remove note and 1/2 slider repeat? Nope. I prefer to follow the music than the lyrics here.
01:30:375 Hmm.. I suggest that you put a note in this section, i hear this part drum sound. Done.
01:30:558 This green line remove please it's unnecessary line ^
01:30:740 ^ ^
01:37:509 This green line unnecessary. remove please What? They are clearly still used thete...
01:38:240 (1) This is spin why 01:38:240 ? the spinner is not appropriate.
i think this spinner start point 01:38:149 is better imo. Sounds of an instrument can be heard at 01:38:240, and I want to give some preparation time for the players here.
Thanks for modding! :D

lol 
osu file format v12

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Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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HelloSCV
3,490 posts
ed April 2011
here's your ticket

Hinsvar's Normal

nothing

Xinely's Hard

  1. you forgot Opening in tags
00:25:619 (3) - i think this slider touching end of HP bar little bit?
00:33:850 (1,2,3) - how about keeping DS on these notes? rhythms are same i guess?
00:43:911 (1) - add finish instead whsitle?
01:17:936 (2) - making 1/2 slider and 01:18:302 (3) - add a note with clap here?
01:30:192 (5,6) - hmmmmmmmm i think add jump pattern on 01:30:009 (4,5) - these notes are better
01:32:570 (2) - whistle on repeat instead end
01:38:149 (1) - delete whistle? don't need it i think

Mochi

00:19:948 (3) - need normal sampleset imo
00:26:167 (4) - reduce slider's length to 1/2? since i can't hear any rhythm 00:26:442 - here
00:31:106 (5,6) - hmm if you want to add a jump here, try to change these to 1/2 slider? much better
01:01:289 (2) - add finish here instead 01:01:472 (3) - on start?
01:20:862 (1) - delete NC and 01:21:777 (4) - add it here?
01:37:326 (3) - clap on end (delete clap on start)


Good luck~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
ed August 2008
~General~
  1. BG Size is really weird, I suggest you to resize it properly.
  2. Tags between the difficulties are inconsistent, make sure to fix that.
~Xinely's Hard~
  1. 00:20:131 (4,5,6) - This triplet doesn't seem to follow anything, remove (5) from there.
  2. 00:26:167 (4) - Add a finish on this circle.
  3. 00:33:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the spacing of this pattern is so inconsistent? Make it the same, please.
  4. 01:17:936 (2,3,4) - This is really confusing, the note on blue tick is too sudden and hard to read at first sight.
  5. 01:24:521 (4) - Remove one repeat from this slider.
~Mochi~
  1. 01:10:253 (1) - This anti-jump is really confusing and makes players easily miss while playing.
Nice job!
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

HelloSCV wrote: 4a196u

here's your ticket

Mochi

00:19:948 (3) - need normal sampleset imo Why ?
00:26:167 (4) - reduce slider's length to 1/2? since i can't hear any rhythm 00:26:442 - here It's fine though.. i love it :3
00:31:106 (5,6) - hmm if you want to add a jump here, try to change these to 1/2 slider? much better No jump.. although Insane, it needs some resting
01:01:289 (2) - add finish here instead 01:01:472 (3) - on start? I followed on andrea-san map :v
01:20:862 (1) - delete NC and 01:21:777 (4) - add it here? Seems no..
01:37:326 (3) - clap on end (delete clap on start) Fixed.


Good luck~ :)

Andrea wrote: 1r6d5e

~General~
  1. BG Size is really weird, I suggest you to resize it properly.i forgot change it to the jonathanlfj's ver :v
  2. Tags between the difficulties are inconsistent, make sure to fix that. K
~Mochi~
  1. 01:10:253 (1) - This anti-jump is really confusing and makes players easily miss while playing.
    Okay.. since many modder want me to change it. Fixed
Nice job! Thx~
Thx for mod~ :oops:
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
ed December 2010
Yo.

[General]
  1. Resize your BG, it's better if your BG will have recommended size. (1024x768 or 1366x768). So, t will look better on our displays :)
  2. Song is short, so go ahead and make an [Easy] diff! It will be a good idea, so even beginners will be able to enjoy your mapset!
  3. Your tags are inconsistent, remove Game from tags because it will be used as genre after rank.
[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. Set AR to 5 and OD/HP to 4. Ask mapper to map an [Easy]. Your diff is too hard to be easist diff in this mapset, your rhythm and patterns are too hard for beginners!
    Note: don't be afraid of using AR5 here, it will fit with your SV and patterns much better!
  2. 00:15:923 (2,1) - nazi - this overlap is visible even during gameplay. Consider fixing it because it looks messy here. Oh, and if you follow my suggestion about AR5 it will solve this problem :)
    Note: 01:02:936 (3,1) - one more overlap.
  3. 00:16:838 - as I've said above this diff is too hard for the easiest, but that's ok for a [Normal]. You can even add more beats here :0 Try to add a circle here, to emphasize vocals and music, it will perfectly fit here!
  4. 00:36:411 - almost the same as above, adding circle here will be an awesome idea!]

    Rest is fine. Fine means rankable, but I know you can make it better. Ask mapper to maeke/find an [Easy] and try to make more 1/2 beats and less long sliders. So, you'l be able to use more 1/2s and to make awesome diff! I'm not forcing you to do it, but I will be happy if you follow my advice!
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. Video is missing. Please, please, please, fix it as soon as possible, that's really big problem!
  2. Since this is not the hardest diff, I'd recommend you to replace patterns like 01:09:521 (3,4,5,6) - this one with sliders. THey may stress players too much!
    Note: triplets are fine, tho. Well, you can replace them with sliders too, but it's not really needed!
  3. Consider using AR8, your diff has pretty fast SV and some streams. I'm sure that using AR8 will make flow smoother and more readable!
  4. 00:57:814 (3,4,1,3) - such pattererns are a little bit overlappy, if you use AR8 they will look much neater! :3

    Good diff, but I strongly recommend you to incrase AR and get rid of some 1/4s!
[Mochi]
  1. 00:23:058 (7) - nazi - it's pretty obvious that blanket here could be much better
  2. 00:23:058 (7) - you could place an 1/8 slider here, so it'd fit with piano sound. It's not like you HAVE TO do it, but it'd work really good here.
  3. 00:59:826 (4,5) - nazi - try to disable naking sliders in your osu settings and test it. Pattern will look like this, so consider manually unstacking it a bit to make it more reeadable.

    Since it's one of your first maps I won't complain about shapes and flow lot. Diff is nicely done, anyway!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

Yo.

[General]
  1. Resize your BG, it's better if your BG will have recommended size. (1024x768 or 1366x768). So, t will look better on our displays :) I have.. but i forgot to update it XD
  2. Song is short, so go ahead and make an [Easy] diff! It will be a good idea, so even beginners will be able to enjoy your mapset! i'm too lazy for that lol~
  3. Your tags are inconsistent, remove Game from tags because it will be used as genre after rank.ok
[Mochi]
  1. 00:23:058 (7) - nazi - it's pretty obvious that blanket here could be much better fix
  2. 00:23:058 (7) - you could place an 1/8 slider here, so it'd fit with piano sound. It's not like you HAVE TO do it, but it'd work really good here. i don;t understand.. but i like what it be
  3. 00:59:826 (4,5) - nazi - try to disable naking sliders in your osu settings and test it. Pattern will look like this, so consider manually unstacking it a bit to make it more reeadable. okay. manually stacking it

    Since it's one of your first maps I won't complain about shapes and flow lot. Diff is nicely done, anyway! whatever lol..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck! >
Thx a lot for mod :)


Edit : Updated ~
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
fix all except AR due Normal use AR 4 and Insane use AR8, if i use AR 8, it will be not balance imo

ty 4 mod ~
Update, gue udh benerin opening sama remove game d tags 
osu file format v12

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Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. Set AR to 5 and OD/HP to 4. Ask mapper to map an [Easy]. Your diff is too hard to be easist diff in this mapset, your rhythm and patterns are too hard for beginners!
    Note: don't be afraid of using AR5 here, it will fit with your SV and patterns much better! Only set the AR to 5. I fear that increasing the other can make a bigger problem. Also, since Mochi doesn't want an Easy diff here...
  2. 00:15:923 (2,1) - nazi - this overlap is visible even during gameplay. Consider fixing it because it looks messy here. Oh, and if you follow my suggestion about AR5 it will solve this problem :) AR5 didn't fix it actually, but I fixed it by myself.
    Note: 01:02:936 (3,1) - one more overlap. Fixed.
  3. 00:16:838 - as I've said above this diff is too hard for the easiest, but that's ok for a [Normal]. You can even add more beats here :0 Try to add a circle here, to emphasize vocals and music, it will perfectly fit here! I actually think nothing fits here. Would be good if the middle of a slider is placed here.
  4. 00:36:411 - almost the same as above, adding circle here will be an awesome idea! Unfortunately, I have to refrain from making too much objects that may result in a 1/2-beats of gap between objects, so...

    Rest is fine. Fine means rankable, but I know you can make it better. Ask mapper to maeke/find an [Easy] and try to make more 1/2 beats and less long sliders. So, you'l be able to use more 1/2s and to make awesome diff! I'm not forcing you to do it, but I will be happy if you follow my advice! Mochi doesn't seem to have any interest in adding an Easy diff, so I'm stuck here with this Normal diff... I would do it if he wants an Easy diff, still.
Thanks for modding! :D

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Title:Graceful Anomaly
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Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
ed July 2010
Hey Mod from my Queues :3



General 6285k

  • • You really need an Easy Diff if you're lazy then ask a mapper. may someone want to make it?

[Hinsvar's Normal] 4q5t1k

  • • nothing to day here for a Normal is it okay but for the easiest Diff in this mapset it's a little bit too Hard

[Xinely's Hard] 1k1cu

  • • 00:36:503 (5) - this Circle feels kinda wrong and it doesnt fit with the music (for me) may remove it?
    • 00:39:155 (3,1) - the distance is lil bit wrong may fix it? (1 grid right and down)
    • 00:40:619 (5) - move it to x 168 y 168 to make a better pattern and if you do it fixe the curve from 00:40:984 (1)
    • 00:52:692 (1) - may make a bettr blanket with 00:51:960 (1)?
    • 01:17:936 (2) - may move it to x 484 y 264 to make a better blanket/pattern?

[Mochi] 655b4y

  • • 00:40:070 (4) - may add NC here?
    • 00:54:155 (1) - try to make this slider like this? it would look better
    • 00:59:826 (4) - try to stack this better

it is a really nice map c:
good luck with rank~ sorry for my noob mod ><
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

Dark_Ai wrote: 2v3di

Hey Mod from my Queues :3



General 6285k

  • • You really need an Easy Diff if you're lazy then ask a mapper. may someone want to make it?not this again.. =__=

[Mochi] 655b4y

  • • 00:40:070 (4) - may add NC here? i think it's fine..
    • 00:54:155 (1) - try to make this slider like this? it would look better gived some shape
    • 00:59:826 (4) - try to stack this betteri stacked this manually due to confusion if the snaking slider is not active

it is a really nice map c:
good luck with rank~ sorry for my noob mod ><[/color]
Thx for mod~
Hanabi
Hanabi

Hi~ from my queue

please tell me what did you fix and did not fix


Xinely's Hard
  1. 00:40:436 (4,5,6) - check those distance

  2. 00:52:692 (1,2) - How about place at here ->
  3. 01:04:399 (1,2,3) - Change like this ->
  4. 01:09:795 - add circle here

  5. 01:17:387 (1,2) - correct shape
  6. 01:21:228 (8,9) - make a reverse arrow ->

Mochi
  1. 00:20:131 (5,6) - remove whistle

  2. 00:35:679 (2) - change like ->
  3. 00:38:972 (5) - NC

  4. 00:39:338 (1) - remove NC

  5. 00:43:911 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you use this rythm (as you did at 00:40:984 (1,2,3) ) ->
  6. 00:55:801 (1,2) -
  7. 00:59:826 (4,5) - overlap exactly

  8. 01:08:972 (5) - NC

  9. 01:25:436 (2) - ctrl + g

  10. 01:30:100 (7) - remove whistle


GL ;)
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

[ Sana ] wrote: 2w656m


Hi~ from my queue

[b]Mochi
  1. 00:20:131 (5,6) - remove whistle removed from body only.

  2. 00:35:679 (2) - change like ->
    followed this.
  3. 00:38:972 (5) - NC Seems no..

  4. 00:39:338 (1) - remove NC ^

  5. 00:43:911 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you use this rythm (as you did at 00:40:984 (1,2,3) ) ->
    because in the next vocal it has changed rhytm~
  6. 00:55:801 (1,2) -
    i like my style~
  7. 00:59:826 (4,5) - overlap exactly no it's not :o

  8. 01:08:972 (5) - NC why ?

  9. 01:25:436 (2) - ctrl + g i want to make it a jump though

  10. 01:30:100 (7) - remove whistle rejected~


GL ;)
Still.. thanks for mod ~ :)
MineC24
1,072 posts
ed May 2010
Modding queue~ :D

maybe BG size Not 4:3 or 16:9 (Change BG or re-size BG)

Maybe missing SB 'BG MC'

Hinsvar's Normal
imo, AR - 1

00:23:423 (1) - x:316 y:292 (little Suggest)

Xinely's Hard
00:28:454 - add note or 00:28:362 (1) - change -> 1/4 slider (this part -> sound like 1/4 drum beat)
01:00:558 (2) - more improve blanket pattern

Mochi
00:40:070 (4,5,6) - imo, re-make a 1/4 slider(1 reverse)
00:40:436 (7,8,9) - ^
00:56:167 (2) - move left (blanket by 00:55:801 (1))
If you accept ^, 00:57:082 (3) - stack by 00:56:167 (2)
00:59:826 (4) - stack by 01:00:009 (5) (fix this pattern plz, little unstack)
01:16:106 (1) - (little error) distance check (x1.00 -> x0.75 part)

GL :)
Alarido
1,744 posts
ed September 2012
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote: 4h4f1h

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[General Things]
BG size feels incorrect. Should be 1366x768 as Ranking Criteria tell us.

Ranking_Criteria.Rules.Skinning wrote: 5gt5k

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
Well, I resized it, then take it ^^ → http://puu.sh/3IhLM.jpg

[The Diffs]
* All Diffs are nice, and difficulty spread feels good (:

Well, this is a Perfect map ! Hope it Ranked as soon as possible (:

Get a Star!

Att.

P.S.: I modded another song on Lump of Sugar a few days ago (:
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

MineC24 wrote: 1bj19

Hinsvar's Normal
imo, AR - 1 ...I'll stick with AR5 for now.

00:23:423 (1) - x:316 y:292 (little Suggest) Done.
Thanks before :P
winber1
4,519 posts
ed February 2010

Mochi 4yu4v

  1. 00:14:094 (4) - Change into two hitcircles and a slider? Would feel more natural imo and follow the music a bit more. http://puu.sh/3K3c9
  2. 00:17:570 (1,4) - YOu could potentially make these symmetrical with combo 2.. unless you purposely wanted it like this.
  3. 00:25:161 - adding a note feels more natural and flowing to me. (you might need to move combo 4 and 5 closer together in order to do this)
  4. 00:34:033 (5,6,7) - Would make more of an impact if you used all hitcircles in a special pattern. Also add a new combo while you are at it. http://puu.sh/3K3mL.jpg .. well what I did wasn't all that speial, but it's just an idea.
  5. 01:26:717 (5,6) - You might want to consider moving combo 7 before these sliders to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/3K3x6.jpg
  6. 01:31:655 (4,5) - I feel that if you turn these two notes into a slider, it would fit the music more than the stack you have. http://puu.sh/3K3AW.jpg
  7. 01:36:869 - imo adding a note here will add flow. idk about you but I like the sound of it here. You will need to move some sliders to accomodate for it tho.

Xinely's Hard 6j163e

  1. 00:42:448 (1,2,3) - Really awkward spacing. To be honest, I misread it, or I could be tired idk. But either way I would either move combo 3 further away, use a more uniform spacing, or add a note at 00:43:179 -
  2. 01:02:936 (1,2) - Why not change into a slider?
  3. 01:17:936 (2,3) - the spacing is a little backwards here... Alternatively you could just do something like this http://puu.sh/3K3YO.jpg
  4. 01:29:826 (3) - Consider adding a new combo here, maybe even using a different pattern. Also for the record, the jump between combo 5 and 6 doesn't really make sense to me at all. http://puu.sh/3K4ga.jpg
  5. 01:35:862 (4,5) - Not four hitcircles? :<

Hinsvar's Normal 5e13

  1. 00:33:850 (3) - new combo?
  2. 00:36:045 (2) - http://puu.sh/3K4no.jpg otherwise the spacing is unintuitive.
  3. 00:52:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3K4pZ.jpg
  4. 01:00:009 (2) - You probably shouldn't go off the grid.
  5. 01:09:521 (4) - I would put a new combo. I know some people don't like having single note combos, but I feel that as long as it fits then there's no problem doing it.
  6. 01:13:179 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3K4wK.jpg it's more intuitive and easier to read this way.
  7. 01:22:143 (1) - http://puu.sh/3K4.jpg sounds better imo... It's awkward the way it is now.
The beginning has so many different slider lengths and rest lengths... might be a little confusing. I would try to keep to more constant if possible, similar to the rest of the map.
Sorry for late mod. Hope this helps.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

winber1 wrote: 4i6h5j

Hinsvar's Normal 5e13

  1. 00:33:850 (3) - new combo? Why?
  2. 00:36:045 (2) - http://puu.sh/3K4no.jpg otherwise the spacing is unintuitive. The middle of that slider will cross 00:36:228. It's just unfitting for the middle of a slider to cross that...
  3. 00:52:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3K4pZ.jpg I'm trying to avoid as many red ticks as I can here; can't be helped.
  4. 01:00:009 (2) - You probably shouldn't go off the grid. Moved.
  5. 01:09:521 (4) - I would put a new combo. I know some people don't like having single note combos, but I feel that as long as it fits then there's no problem doing it. Hmm, yeah, you're right. Added.
  6. 01:13:179 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3K4wK.jpg it's more intuitive and easier to read this way. Same as 00:52:692 (1,2).
  7. 01:22:143 (1) - http://puu.sh/3K4.jpg sounds better imo... It's awkward the way it is now. Done.
The beginning has so many different slider lengths and rest lengths... might be a little confusing. I would try to keep to more constant if possible, similar to the rest of the map. This one can't be helped I guess... I'm mapping this part according to my feeling and I have made sure that the current rhythm is already good enough. Not sure; maybe I'll change this later, maybe not.
Thanks for modding! :D
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

winber1 wrote: 4i6h5j

Mochi 4yu4v

  1. 00:14:094 (4) - Change into two hitcircles and a slider? Would feel more natural imo and follow the music a bit more. http://puu.sh/3K3c9 Okay
  2. 00:17:570 (1,4) - YOu could potentially make these symmetrical with combo 2.. unless you purposely wanted it like this.Yes it is
  3. 00:25:161 - adding a note feels more natural and flowing to me. (you might need to move combo 4 and 5 closer together in order to do this)
  4. 00:34:033 (5,6,7) - Would make more of an impact if you used all hitcircles in a special pattern. Also add a new combo while you are at it. http://puu.sh/3K3mL.jpg .. well what I did wasn't all that speial, but it's just an idea. Okay
  5. 01:26:717 (5,6) - You might want to consider moving combo 7 before these sliders to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/3K3x6.jpg
  6. 01:31:655 (4,5) - I feel that if you turn these two notes into a slider, it would fit the music more than the stack you have. http://puu.sh/3K3AW.jpg
  7. 01:36:869 - imo adding a note here will add flow. idk about you but I like the sound of it here. You will need to move some sliders to accomodate for it tho.Hm.. still keep for this time

Sorry for late mod. Hope this helps.
Thx for mod..
and Updated xD
winber1
4,519 posts
ed February 2010

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

  1. 00:36:045 (2) - http://puu.sh/3K4no.jpg otherwise the spacing is unintuitive. The middle of that slider will cross 00:36:228. It's just unfitting for the middle of a slider to cross that...Then you could use a 1/2 tick slider if you must. What I'm saying is that, in accordance with the previous rhythm, you making the player think and feel that the next note is also going to be 1/1 tick away from the previous note, which it is not. That is my concern. This is also what I was talking about in the beginning of the map, when there is no clear beat going on, which may cause confusion, especially for beginners.
  2. 00:52:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3K4pZ.jpg I'm trying to avoid as many red ticks as I can here; can't be helped. I just don't like this argument because you use so many other red ticks elsewhere that could also be removed. Furthermore, it is a normal difficulty, so you shouldn't even be afraid to use red ticks. It's not like this is going overboard. THe problem I have with the current rhythm is that combo 2 doesn't match anything... and it's quite awkward sounding imo
Just my take on it. Doesn't really matter what you choose to do since it's your map. But I'm just saying, this is how it looks to me, and how I thought about it.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011
...I love how many people decided to counter my arguments for rejecting stuff.

Maybe I'm just really bad at choosing the correct words lol

Will see what I can do about them later, anyway...
winber1
4,519 posts
ed February 2010

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

...I love how many people decided to counter my arguments for rejecting stuff.

Maybe I'm just really bad at choosing the correct words lol

Will see what I can do about them later, anyway...
It's more so that some of what you said is not fully convincing to me. I mean at least I'm looking at what you said. I am willing to bet that many modders don't bother enough to actually go back into edit and look at what you said. In these cases, all you have to do is say "Okay, updated." When I find things that strike me as important to respond to, I do so. Sometimes, I don't see a problem with what you said, or with what you did, so I just don't say anything. Other times, as a modder, I feel it is part of my duty to actually discuss a few things.

You said a few things, so I decided to respond to it. Momochikun mostly just said "Okay," so I can't really respond to that lol.

Is that not in the spirit of modding? I have nothing against you, or what you have done. I'm just trying to discuss something a little more. If I sounded harsh, I'm sorry, because I was not trying to be, nor am I trying to be harsh right now either.

As I said, if you believe, even solely out of feeling, that my suggestion doesn't make sense, then please ignore it. I have nothing against you. Most of what I say is based off of my own mapping style anyway.
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
ed November 2009
the mod :-)

[General]
  1. 1000kbps for 640x320 video is too much. try this ( to check the video offset): http://puu.sh/3NKOo.flv
  2. end the first KIAI part at 01:16:106? and for the re-KIAI part, I think pause at 01:09:338 can be a better choice.
[Mochi]
  1. 00:41:716 (3,4) - if you leave a blank here, then you'd better keep using blank at 00:44:094
  2. 01:03:027 (7,8) - vocal is more like a clear end, and 01:04:033 (5) - it's more like a triple here.
  3. 01:18:484 (5) - obvious 3/4 here, suggest a remove and some spacing adjust on the following notes.
  4. C2 whistles are the best choice for the triple/stream drums imo.
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:45:923 (3,4,5) - looks weird as a straight spacing change (can hardly call this a jump)
  2. 01:09:521 (3,4,5,1) - not only a triple here, add note at 01:09:795 plz.
  3. 01:16:106 (1,2,1,2) - keep the normal spacing as usual is ok.
  4. 01:20:679 (5,6,7) - 2-notes here is better, cannot see what this triple is based on
  5. 01:24:521 (4) - 1 more repeat
the end
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
fixed all, thanks Colin Hou :3
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oh yeah in winber1's mod , sorry i rejected all xD
Hinsvar
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3,826 posts
ed December 2011

winber1 wrote: 4i6h5j

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

...I love how many people decided to counter my arguments for rejecting stuff.

Maybe I'm just really bad at choosing the correct words lol

Will see what I can do about them later, anyway...
It's more so that some of what you said is not fully convincing to me. I mean at least I'm looking at what you said. I am willing to bet that many modders don't bother enough to actually go back into edit and look at what you said. In these cases, all you have to do is say "Okay, updated." When I find things that strike me as important to respond to, I do so. Sometimes, I don't see a problem with what you said, or with what you did, so I just don't say anything. Other times, as a modder, I feel it is part of my duty to actually discuss a few things.

You said a few things, so I decided to respond to it. Momochikun mostly just said "Okay," so I can't really respond to that lol.

Is that not in the spirit of modding? I have nothing against you, or what you have done. I'm just trying to discuss something a little more. If I sounded harsh, I'm sorry, because I was not trying to be, nor am I trying to be harsh right now either.

As I said, if you believe, even solely out of feeling, that my suggestion doesn't make sense, then please ignore it. I have nothing against you. Most of what I say is based off of my own mapping style anyway.
...Now that I think of it again, yep, those reasons are kinda illogical lol

Nah, you didn't sound harsh, but I just realized how much times I have used strange reasons to answer to mods when I reject them :P

Well, okay, I don't have anyhing against you too. Followed the suggestions that I rejected back then anyway after rethinking about them again.

Also Xinely did a short mod to my diff and I changed a few things (thanks~) :D

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Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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BeatmapSetID:102084

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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thx a lot for mod.. all fixed~
Updated :)
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
ed June 2009
minor changes
Increased AR 1 on Mochi
Fixed Background dimensions



Good luck.

Good mapset.

~
10nya
2,746 posts
ed February 2011
\^3^\
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thx <3 ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
ed May 2010
wooo ayo rank~
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
ed May 2011
go go \:3/
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012
yeah I love this song
Nyquill come rank this
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
ed February 2011
excellent
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thanks so much moe Nyquill ~ <3
Dai
1,632 posts
ed April 2010
weleh baru sadar kalo udah dirank
metzya
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
ed June 2009
Congrats :3
Oyatsu
1,908 posts
ed December 2012
Wow God, So amazing for me @@. Congratz for first ranked! ^^
Konei
2,959 posts
ed March 2012
Ahh, this song again xD

Gratz ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
ed May 2010
selamet \o3o/
Gero
4,456 posts
ed March 2012
Gratz /Me late* :3
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,317 posts
ed December 2011
yay for this song! again!

gz ~~
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thanks guys oWo
Mythiax
637 posts
ed August 2012
Gratz! I love this song *w*
Kyouren
5,693 posts
ed October 2012
Gratz! Mochi Mochi! For First Map Ranked!!!



It's HAPPINESS!!!???
Rey-volution
1,342 posts
ed June 2011
oh finally :D
senang bisa sedikit berkontribusi n akhirnya d ranked :)

grats ^_^
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