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ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly 246s4d

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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 04, 2013 at 12:54:56 AM

Artist: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: Graceful Anomaly
Source: Magical Charming!
Tags: Opening Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
BPM: 164
Filesize: 16413kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hinsvar's Normal (3.15 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Mochi (5 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Xinely's Hard (4.91 stars, 242 notes)
: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly
: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2 まじかる　ちゃ～みんぐ！ Op ~
This song is so cute so i decided to map it ><
Mapset stuffs from alacat :3
Hard - Xinely
Normal - Hinsvar


Enjoy~
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 35 times in total.
pieguyn
2,020 posts
ed May 2009
first 0.0
moe song =w=//

isn't max size for BGs 1024x768? o.o
00:20:314 (10) - IMO it'd be nice to keep the spacing the same http://puu.sh/3t543.jpg (x: 92 y: 232)
00:29:826 (2) - add whistle on end?
00:32:753 (2) - maybe add whistle on end? :?
00:39:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make a star formation? http://puu.sh/3t5n3.jpg seems randomly placed currently
00:54:155 (3) - spacing too close
01:02:570 (6) - finish on end?
01:18:484 (1) - http://puu.sh/3t5tT.jpg ? feels better IMO to "hit" on a 1/1
01:20:862 (1,3) - switch NCs? new vocal phase starts at (3)
01:24:338 (3) - same as 01:18:484 (1) -
01:27:448 (1,3) - switch NCs? same idea as before
01:29:826 (8) - http://puu.sh/3t5AH.jpg ? the vocal and the sound in the BG are two separate things, maybe this would make more sense

nice map >w< star, good luck~
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

pieguy1372 wrote: 45704j

first 0.0
moe song =w=//

isn't max size for BGs 1024x768? o.o Fixed :3
00:20:314 (10) - IMO it'd be nice to keep the spacing the same http://puu.sh/3t543.jpg (x: 92 y: 232) Okay..
00:29:826 (2) - add whistle on end? It sounds weird for 1/1 whistle for me..
00:32:753 (2) - maybe add whistle on end? :? ^
00:39:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make a star formation? http://puu.sh/3t5n3.jpg seems randomly placed currently Just random stack.. no fix for now
00:54:155 (3) - spacing too close It'll be more close if i use distance spacing -w-
01:02:570 (6) - finish on end? Okay fix
01:18:484 (1) - http://puu.sh/3t5tT.jpg ? feels better IMO to "hit" on a 1/1 Okay
01:20:862 (1,3) - switch NCs? new vocal phase starts at (3) Not for now.. it;s fine for me at all
01:24:338 (3) - same as 01:18:484 (1) - Fixed
01:27:448 (1,3) - switch NCs? same idea as before Fixed
01:29:826 (8) - http://puu.sh/3t5AH.jpg ? the vocal and the sound in the BG are two separate things, maybe this would make more sense Okay..

nice map >w< star, good luck~
Thx for Mod~ :)
pieguyn
2,020 posts
ed May 2009

Momochikun wrote: 576e2n

00:54:155 (3) - spacing too close It'll be more close if i use distance spacing -w-
o sry, I meant it'd be better to space it the same as the other notes, even if it's 0.5x. like this http://puu.sh/3tbte.jpg (x: 192 y: 168)
of course you can still leave it as is if you prefer :3
(no kds on this post, obv)
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
my diff ~

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Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar
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Edit : iya masama ~
Last edited by Xinely , edited 1 time in total.
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
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Xinely wrote: 3a5v3q

my diff ~

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Makasih buat diffnya :v
Umi
2,478 posts
ed November 2012
hihi here from your queue :3 M4M

let'su go

Xinely's Hard 6j163e

Blanket maniac mod sorry about that xD
- 00:21:594 (3,1) - move to 80,y:72 and then 00:21:777 (1) - end point x:208,y:96
- 00:29:277 (1,2) - try to make the blanket better
- 00:33:484 (4,1) - align them
- 00:34:033 (2,4) - ^
- 00:35:131 (1) - 1 grid to the left
- 00:38:606 (2) - middle point x:456,y:228
- 00:40:619 (5,1) - make a blanket ?
- 00:43:911 (1) - middle point x:284,y:136, end point x:204y:152
- 00:51:228 (1) - middle point x:328,y:272
- 00:52:692 (1) - 1 grid down
- 00:55:801 (1,2,3,4) - could be better to make a jump patern here
- 00:59:094 (2) - 1 grid to the right
- 01:00:558 (2) - move to x:316,y:128 and then middle point x:304,y:116; end point x:252,y:176
- 01:09:521 (3,4,5,6) - maybe change into reverse slider ? a bit hard for an hard diff :3
- 01:10:801 (3) - middle point x:404,y:248; end point x:368,y:172
- 01:11:716 (1) - middle point x:416,y:72
- 01:17:387 (1,2) - eeeehh ? it's intentionnal ? if no remake the blanket xD
- 01:19:948 (4) - middle point x:420,y:64; end point x:372,y:136
- 01:22:875 (5,6) - align ?
- 01:27:814 (1,2) - try to make the blanket better
- 01:29:094 (1) - middle point x:184,y:160, end point x:224,y:228
- you hate blanket now ? xD
but nice diff as alaways xinely :3 !

Insane 1o711v

- 00:16:472 (5) - move to x:140,y:208 and then 00:16:655 (6) - x:212,y:280 for perfect blanket or remake 00:15:923 (4) - and 00:16:655 (6) - 'shapes
- 00:29:826 (2) - better like this imo
SPOILER
- 00:32:753 (2) - move to x:96,y:340
- 00:42:448 (5,6) - they're not parallel
- 00:46:106 (3,4) - same shape maybe ?
- 00:50:862 (3,4) - move to x:288,y:72 and don't forget to restack 00:51:777 (6) -
- 00:56:167 (2) - middle point x:280,y:272 end point x:368,y:228
- 00:59:094 (2) - better to align them imo
- 01:04:399 (1,2) - what about this
SPOILER
- 01:08:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a lozenge ?
SPOILER
- 01:10:253 (1) - the spacing are really confused better to move it somewhere else.

well that's all, pretty good mapset for the moment :3 i'll back maybe to mod the normal :3 Good luck ! >3<
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012

-Umi- wrote: 3x6g57

hihi here from your queue :3 M4M

let'su go

Xinely's Hard 6j163e

Blanket maniac mod sorry about that xD i need branket for make neat but i can't make branket with well, so i love your branket mod. it's helpful lol xD
- 00:21:594 (3,1) - move to 80,y:72 and then 00:21:777 (1) - end point x:208,y:96
- 00:29:277 (1,2) - try to make the blanket better
- 00:33:484 (4,1) - align them
- 00:34:033 (2,4) - ^ Fix all in above
- 00:35:131 (1) - 1 grid to the left nope, i think it's not branket
- 00:38:606 (2) - middle point x:456,y:228 yes
- 00:40:619 (5,1) - make a blanket ? try as i can
- 00:43:911 (1) - middle point x:284,y:136, end point x:204y:152
- 00:51:228 (1) - middle point x:328,y:272
- 00:52:692 (1) - 1 grid downi move to other
- 00:55:801 (1,2,3,4) - could be better to make a jump patern here i know but since normal under 3, i afraid hard diff too much hard
- 00:59:094 (2) - 1 grid to the right yes
- 01:00:558 (2) - move to x:316,y:128 and then middle point x:304,y:116; end point x:252,y:176 changed by my own
- 01:09:521 (3,4,5,6) - maybe change into reverse slider ? a bit hard for an hard diff :3 it's fit lol, well waiting another opinion
- 01:10:801 (3) - middle point x:404,y:248; end point x:368,y:172 y
- 01:11:716 (1) - middle point x:416,y:72 y
- 01:17:387 (1,2) - eeeehh ? it's intentionnal ? if no remake the blanket xD itentional xD
- 01:19:948 (4) - middle point x:420,y:64; end point x:372,y:136 k
- 01:22:875 (5,6) - align ? itentional
- 01:27:814 (1,2) - try to make the blanket better =w=, as i can
- 01:29:094 (1) - middle point x:184,y:160, end point x:224,y:228 y
- you hate blanket now ? xD love it :P
but nice diff as alaways xinely :3 !thanks /o/

well that's all, pretty good mapset for the moment :3 i'll back maybe to mod the normal :3 Good luck ! >3<
i'm sleepy =w=
maybe check this mod tomorrow

kajiyatta wrote: 2k2934

M4M

[Hard]
some forced blanket looks ugly I suppose. fixed in Umi's mod
Placement
00:35:679(2) nazi, x:232, y:144 better to avoid overlapped. yes
01:10:619(2) I don't expect this changing spacing, it is so suddunly for Hard.please keep proper distance.accident, fixed
Rhythm
00:58:911 unnecessary green line oppss, fixed
00:18:119(2,3) replace one slider instead two notes? it would follow the vocal more nicely i know but i want try variation
00:48:484(2,3,4,5) to follow the music and vocal properly, maybe like this> it's okay imo
SPOILER
00:56:107(3,4) the vocal lasting in this part, so I suppose to use a slider better than two notes. here is example. yes
SPOILER
01:05:131 blank looks not good since the music & vocal enough to add some notes. e.g.)
SPOILER
01:19:418(4) not suitable slider since you make a blanket .pick up the sound at 01:20:131 with note or slider better. i know but i try follow vocal
01:30:009(4,5,6,7...) you can follow the instrumental, current looks a bit weird. lemme see another opinion
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:52:692(1,2) why don't you soft finish at head? I don't know why used Drum-finish, it doesn't hear nicely. accident, fixed
00:54:155(1) add whistle?
01:01:106(3) add clap
01:23:058(6) add finish at end fix all hitsound
@mochi : jgn lupa add nama gue sama oyatsu d tags kk~
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304,16,25619,2,0,P|336:4|380:4,2,70,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,26167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26259,12,2,27814,0:0:0:0:
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188,156,29094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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404,136,31655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,220,31838,2,0,L|416:296,1,70
480,324,32204,6,0,P|412:308|352:360,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,360,32753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,248,33119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,33484,2,0,P|152:72|116:72,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,33850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,184,34033,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Last edited by Xinely , edited 7 times in total.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
ed April 2011
M4M
[General]
Uncheck Letterbox on Insane since there is no Break Time.
this BG image doesn't look clearly, the format of aspect is weird. try to use this image, it is 16:9 format and Rankable.
SPOILER
[Hard]
some forced blanket looks ugly I suppose.
Placement
00:35:679(2) nazi, x:232, y:144 better to avoid overlapped.
01:10:619(2) I don't expect this changing spacing, it is so suddunly for Hard.please keep proper distance.
Rhythm
00:58:911 unnecessary green line
00:18:119(2,3) replace one slider instead two notes? it would follow the vocal more nicely
00:48:484(2,3,4,5) to follow the music and vocal properly, maybe like this>
SPOILER
00:56:107(3,4) the vocal lasting in this part, so I suppose to use a slider better than two notes. here is example.
SPOILER
01:05:131 blank looks not good since the music & vocal enough to add some notes. e.g.)
SPOILER
01:19:418(4) not suitable slider since you make a blanket .pick up the sound at 01:20:131 with note or slider better.
01:30:009(4,5,6,7...) you can follow the instrumental, current looks a bit weird.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:52:692(1,2) why don't you soft finish at head? I don't know why used Drum-finish, it doesn't hear nicely.
00:54:155(1) add whistle?
01:01:106(3) add clap
01:23:058(6) add finish at end
[Insane]HP +1
Placement
00:17:204(7) not good to stack with slider's end since it would stop the flow. move to(8)'s head or if aim to make a jump, (5)'s head better.
and I find this kind of stacks many times, consider not to use such as spamming stack.
00:20:314(10) Ctrl+G and move a bit, for experienced player it will be more fun
SPOILER
00:21:777(4) just opinion, more spacing nice.
01:11:350(43,4,5) not good flow I suppose, like this?
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:58:911 unnecessary green line
00:42:814(6,7) to follow the vocal properly, it will be better.
SPOILER
00:50:314(2,3) swap the ryhthm
01:15:740(5) use a stream better for Insane, current slider looks easier.
Hit Sonud
01:22:692(5) finish at head

need more work, good luck and star.
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Very nicely mapped >.o /

Shot Kudosu star +1
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Brhubung gw ngantuk banget jadi cek modnya besok ya,,
Kudosu dulu :v
Oyatsu
1,908 posts
ed December 2012
Sorry for relay. Hope you enjoy! You started mod :( (if mapset is WIP Why move to pending map?)
My diff. 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hwakakaka.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 14094
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 69521,98149,100984
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Oyatsu's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mochi BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
*cough cough
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 1 time in total.
Oyatsu
1,908 posts
ed December 2012
OK, Said in-game. Let cancel my diff. Sorry Momochikun. Anyway, Good luck with map and also hope it is first ranked of you. haha ^^ :D
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
ed April 2013
Okay lets give this a friendly bump~

Mod~!


OYATSU'S NORMAL!
00:14:643 okay this is really annoying having kiai time that has a very short time no offence but lets change it until 00:20:131
00:40:984 lets add some offset here for more guides and 00:42:911 here.
Since this is fixed i think theres no more problem about here.
XINELY'S HARD
> I understand that this is hard but i think the approach rate is a bit fast cool it down for a bit.
01:36:594 add some teasers
Since this is fixed i think theres no more problem about here.
INSANE
> Okay some matters that your insane is unplayable in OSU mode the cause if two much speed plus double timing notes (double notes)
i dont really see much problem here since its insane and many has mod this i love your insane spectacular gonna play it if it ranks and i wished that to be ranked

The oppinion about speed is i care about some mouse s that has technical mouse sensivity problem..
Dont like my mod? its okay no offence though but it really matters though ..Lol
Your map will be ranked in no time!

Edit:
00:000:00 is Highly Suggested
Blue is an oppinion
Red is underrated
Last edited by YunoFanatic , edited 1 time in total.
litoluna
1,079 posts
ed April 2011
hi ~ from your queue
[General]
  1. fine
::idea::
[Hinsvar's Normal ]
  1. 00:34:033 (3) - Slider end at 00:34:582 -
  2. 01:27:265 (4,1) - next Slider(01:27:814 (1) - ) more follow!
    idea
[Xinely's Hard ]
  1. 01:17:936 (2,3,4) -I think this Rythem difficult...
    Maybe something like that?
    idea
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:082 (7,8,9) - still more follow Back sound
    try
    idea
  2. 00:34:033 (5) - i like two Circle(00:34:033 - and 00:34:216 - )
  3. 00:42:448 (5) - NC?
  4. 00:48:301 (5) - ^
Good Luck!! :)
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011
Not for the first; there's still something to follow at 00:34:765; followed the second suggestion though.

Thanks for modding! :D

what 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hwakakaka.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 14094
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 100984
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
BeatmapID:270849
BeatmapSetID:102084

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Overwrite
218 posts
ed December 2012
Hello, from modding queue!
Your map is very good! I didn't see any major mistakes (so that went REALLY quick), probably one or two, but it's on the way of getting ranked!

Hinsvar's Normal
00:28:545 Delete slider?
00:30:558 Better blanket with previous slider.

Xinely's Hard
00:38:606 Make that slider a little more curvy?
00:45:923 Change slider height so it matches with (1).

Insane
00:18:850 Add a finish?
00:19:765 NC.
00:37:509 Change slider end to x:380, y:256

As I said, I didn't see a lot of mistakes. Your beatmap is excellent! :)
Good luck on getting it ranked, and hope my mod was helpful!
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Fixed some.. ( le me too lazy to answer all mod)
Thx for mod :D
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

LilyWhite wrote: 352p6p

Hinsvar's Normal
00:28:545 Delete slider? Why?
00:30:558 Better blanket with previous slider. Huh? I'm sure enough the blanket here is great already o.o
Thanks for modding anyway :D
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
ed June 2009
[Insane]
  1. 00:39:338 (7) - This slider is making the stack really hard to read, and is not representing the music accurately. Delete 00:39:704 (1) - , and extend the slider to take its place. Like this: https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/849076 There should also be a new combo on 00:39:338 (7) - .
  2. 00:44:094 (2,3,4) - This pattern is really confusing too, and again, not representing the music accurately. If you move it down the timeline to where 2 ends, then put a note ontop of 2, you get something better while still keeping this pattern.
[Hard]
  1. 01:06:777 (3) - This stack is really weird, and hard to figure out when to hit. I suggest spreading it out more so it is more readable. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/849084 This works well, or anything similar is fine.
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
i change with different pattern
thanks 4mod MMzz :3
update 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hwakakaka.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 14094
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 69521,98149,100984
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Xinely Hinsvar
BeatmapID:270456
BeatmapSetID:102084

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
All Fixed..
Thanks a lot for mod :D
KinkiN
2,626 posts
ed March 2012
Hi From IJO's mod queue ~

[General]


[Hinsvar's Normal]

* Nice. idk what to mod D:

00:24:704 - remove NC

[Xinely's Hard]

* Uhh it's already great, idk what to mod D:

00:31:655 - NC
01:02:936 - Remove NC
01:03:301 - NC

[Insane]

* Great. idk what to mod D: from the first place y u ask for a mod from a newbie like me D: xD

01:37:600 (4,5) - Those two notes seems bit awkward. imo it's better if you add a note between 4 and 5, and it's perfect :D


That's all. Sorry for my bad mod since your map are too good for me to mod D: *have a star
Good Luck!
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

Otonashi Yuzuru wrote: 2i3u1b

[Hinsvar's Normal]

* Nice. idk what to mod D: Good to hear that~

00:24:704 - remove NC Nope. I know why are you telling this, but this one's a special case. The music "demands" for NC to be applied.
Thanks for modding anyway :P
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

Otonashi Yuzuru wrote: 2i3u1b

Hi From IJO's mod queue ~

[Insane]

* Great. idk what to mod D: from the first place y u ask for a mod from a newbie like me D: xD

01:37:600 (4,5) - Those two notes seems bit awkward. imo it's better if you add a note between 4 and 5, and it's perfect :D Waduh prasaan ada note disitu.. entah kok bs ilang mungkin salah pencet ._., thx for noticing bro~


That's all. Sorry for my bad mod since your map are too good for me to mod D: *have a star
Good Luck!
Thx for mod and star :D
Updated~
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
ed February 2010
From my modding queue
Hinsvar & Xinely stop flashing everyone with ur couple maps xD

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
in [Xinely's Hard] the last 2 tags are reversed, dunno if that would cause any problems though
bg has an awkward resolution, here is one that is 1280*720:
SPOILER

[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:13:179 (1) - finish on start?
00:32:204 (1,2,3) - rhythm like this follows the music better imo:
SPOILER
00:53:789 (2) - this is quite awkward to play since the rhythm here is red/blue line heavy, maybe something like this:
SPOILER
00:55:984 (1) - move to 00:56:167 plays better imo
01:17:936 (4) - take off the clap, clap actually plays at 01:18:301 (5) so you can add it there

[Xinely's Hard]
00:25:253 (2) - add clap?
00:35:131 (1) - use 1.10x spacing here with 00:34:582 (5)
00:49:033 (4) - maybe break up this slider so the clap at 00:49:216 can be covered, or you can use a different rhythm:
SPOILER
01:05:679 (1) - the extension on this slider doesnt sound really natural here, just shorten it to the red line sounds alot nicer
01:20:497 (1) - delete this note to emphasis the rhythm at 01:20:679 (2,3,4)

[Mochi]
00:15:923 (4) - use 00:16:655 (6) and do a 180 degree flip to replace this slider (so 00:16:472 (5) gets a proper blanket)
00:20:314 (6) - fix spacing here (so it doesnt overlap 00:20:497 (1))
00:38:058 (1) - its flow breaking if you initiate the jump as a stack under the previous slider, place this at where 00:38:240 (2) is and rearrange this jump, e.g. a square
00:47:936 (4) - you extended this and byed the vocals at 00:48:119, it would sound a lot nicer if you can bring it back to the red line
00:49:765 (1,2,3,4) - try rearrange it like this to follow the vocals:
SPOILER
00:54:155 (1) - use 3 point slider for a better shape
01:01:472 (3) - take off the finish and place it on 01:01:289 (2)
01:11:716 (4) - same as above, place the finish at the end of 01:11:350 (3) instead
01:19:033 (2,3,4,5) - arrange this so they dont overlap:
SPOILER

Nice mapset, lets see if this will be the 3rd one ranked ;)
Rey-volution
1,342 posts
ed June 2011
I will mod Mochi diff only for this time

[Mochi]
00:46:472 (4) - Can you Make it symmetric with 00:46:106 (3) - ? You can rotate -20 degrees. Like this:
SPOILER
00:48:667 (6) - You can place Slider number 6 like this (between 5-7) bentuknya kayak segitiga sama kaki
SPOILER
01:22:692 (5) - Actually I prefer make it symmetric with 01:22:326 (4) - but i'ts okay if you let it like that..

Thanks & Good Luck :)
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012

jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25

From my modding queue
Hinsvar & Xinely stop flashing everyone with ur couple maps xD xD

[General]
in [Xinely's Hard] the last 2 tags are reversed, dunno if that would cause any problems though omg, fixed

[Xinely's Hard]
00:25:253 (2) - add clap?
00:35:131 (1) - use 1.10x spacing here with 00:34:582 (5)
00:49:033 (4) - maybe break up this slider so the clap at 00:49:216 can be covered, or you can use a different rhythm:
SPOILER
01:05:679 (1) - the extension on this slider doesnt sound really natural here, just shorten it to the red line sounds alot nicer
01:20:497 (1) - delete this note to emphasis the rhythm at 01:20:679 (2,3,4)
Fixed all, nice suggestion ~

Nice mapset, lets see if this will be the 3rd one ranked ;) moar moe maps <3
Thanks 4 mod jonathan >w<

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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25

Hinsvar & Xinely stop flashing everyone with ur couple maps xD Oh you~

[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:13:179 (1) - finish on start? The instrument isn't that loud here, but added a whistle.
00:32:204 (1,2,3) - rhythm like this follows the music better imo:
SPOILER
Done.
00:53:789 (2) - this is quite awkward to play since the rhythm here is red/blue line heavy, maybe something like this:
SPOILER
Emphasizing the vocal here, and I think it's better this way.
00:55:984 (1) - move to 00:56:167 plays better imo Done.
01:17:936 (4) - take off the clap, clap actually plays at 01:18:301 (5) so you can add it there ^
Thanks for modding :D

abc 
osu file format v12

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Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Updated ><
okamiratsu
714 posts
ed August 2011
[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:30:558(2) move to 00:30:740 then end the slider at 00:31:655 so it can match 00:29:277
00:30:558 add note
01:14:094 add note
Great Work

[Xinley's Hard]
00:26:167 remove note and start the spinner here
Great Work

[Mochi]
The issues im seeing are the same so I don't know if this was on purpose or on a different Beat Snap Division
the following slider ends need to be moved back one tick.
00:15:192(2)
00:26:167(4)
00:36:594(1)
00:42:082(4)
00:46:838(1)
00:47:936(4)
01:01:472(3)
01:07:692(9)
01:13:179(3)
01:30:740(1)
I often find my self missing these parts(that just my personal opinion). other than that placements good, and there are no other problems.
Good job and good luck in the rankings
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
No change in my diff..
Thanks for mod anyway :D
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011
Kind of followed the first, did the second, but not the third because I think it's unnecessary.

Thanks for modding! :D

what is this 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hwakakaka.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 14094
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 100984
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
BeatmapID:270849
BeatmapSetID:102084

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Gloria Guard
2,277 posts
ed May 2011
Hi your map in my queue :3


[General]

Fine


[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:20:131 (3) You are using the wrong rhythm...I felt confused with the this rhythm
i think this note move 00:20:131 is better rhythm imo
01:14:094 (4) I hear this part more lyrics rhythm. you remove note and 1/2 slider repeat?
01:30:375 Hmm.. I suggest that you put a note in this section, i hear this part drum sound.
01:30:558 This green line remove please it's unnecessary line
01:30:740 ^
01:37:509 This green line unnecessary. remove please
01:38:240 (1) This is spin why 01:38:240 ? the spinner is not appropriate.
i think this spinner start point 01:38:149 is better imo.


[Xinely's Hard]

00:28:911 (2) I didn't hear this part clap hitsound. slider end remove clap.
00:29:643 (1) This is too, didn't hear this part clap sound. remove clap.
00:33:484 (4) Hmm.. this slider you intention?, i'm understand. but this slider flow is awkward
because this slider is difficult to handle the next note. i think Ctrl+G is better flow imo.
00:40:619 (5) Uh.. why this note small jump? it's you intention..? i think it's bad.
you move this note x:164 y:168 is better shape and flow.
00:45:923 (3,4,5,6,1) I suggest this flow.
SPOILER
01:17:753 (1,2) Umm.. a little this pattern shape awkward..i think blanket is better imo
01:18:576 (3,4) Why this two note small distance. this is 1/3 rhythm. it's playing really confuse.
you fix this part two note increase distance.
01:27:356 (4) This note intention is understand. but it's really not fine.


[Mochi]


00:17:021 (6,8) Why this pattern overlap. (8) note 1~2 gird up please.
00:31:655 (7) This slider jump flow is not better. i think Ctrl+G is (6) note and before (1) note
is better flow imo
00:54:155 (1) This slider move center? and more improve slider shape.

01:10:070 (1,2,3,4,5,1) This is really confuse.. because stream after (1) slider hit and really many
miss, (1) slider widen the distance




Good luck :3
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

Gloria Guard wrote: 6q3s1q

Hi your map in my queue :3

[Mochi]


00:17:021 (6,8) Why this pattern overlap. (8) note 1~2 gird up please. stacked from before. moved XD
00:31:655 (7) This slider jump flow is not better. i think Ctrl+G is (6) note and before (1) note
is better flow imo change on my way
00:54:155 (1) This slider move center? and more improve slider shape.
fixed
01:10:070 (1,2,3,4,5,1) This is really confuse.. because stream after (1) slider hit and really many
miss, (1) slider widen the distance i'll keep this



Good luck :3
Thx for mod ~

Edit: Updated :D
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
fix hitsound in GG's mod, i just like my rhythm so still keep, about spacing too

Hard 
osu file format v12

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Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:pening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

Gloria Guard wrote: 6q3s1q

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:20:131 (3) You are using the wrong rhythm...I felt confused with the this rhythm
i think this note move 00:20:131 is better rhythm imo Done.
01:14:094 (4) I hear this part more lyrics rhythm. you remove note and 1/2 slider repeat? Nope. I prefer to follow the music than the lyrics here.
01:30:375 Hmm.. I suggest that you put a note in this section, i hear this part drum sound. Done.
01:30:558 This green line remove please it's unnecessary line ^
01:30:740 ^ ^
01:37:509 This green line unnecessary. remove please What? They are clearly still used thete...
01:38:240 (1) This is spin why 01:38:240 ? the spinner is not appropriate.
i think this spinner start point 01:38:149 is better imo. Sounds of an instrument can be heard at 01:38:240, and I want to give some preparation time for the players here.
Thanks for modding! :D

lol 
osu file format v12

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Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Game Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
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HelloSCV
3,490 posts
ed April 2011
here's your ticket

Hinsvar's Normal

nothing

Xinely's Hard

  1. you forgot Opening in tags
00:25:619 (3) - i think this slider touching end of HP bar little bit?
00:33:850 (1,2,3) - how about keeping DS on these notes? rhythms are same i guess?
00:43:911 (1) - add finish instead whsitle?
01:17:936 (2) - making 1/2 slider and 01:18:302 (3) - add a note with clap here?
01:30:192 (5,6) - hmmmmmmmm i think add jump pattern on 01:30:009 (4,5) - these notes are better
01:32:570 (2) - whistle on repeat instead end
01:38:149 (1) - delete whistle? don't need it i think

Mochi

00:19:948 (3) - need normal sampleset imo
00:26:167 (4) - reduce slider's length to 1/2? since i can't hear any rhythm 00:26:442 - here
00:31:106 (5,6) - hmm if you want to add a jump here, try to change these to 1/2 slider? much better
01:01:289 (2) - add finish here instead 01:01:472 (3) - on start?
01:20:862 (1) - delete NC and 01:21:777 (4) - add it here?
01:37:326 (3) - clap on end (delete clap on start)


Good luck~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
ed August 2008
~General~
  1. BG Size is really weird, I suggest you to resize it properly.
  2. Tags between the difficulties are inconsistent, make sure to fix that.
~Xinely's Hard~
  1. 00:20:131 (4,5,6) - This triplet doesn't seem to follow anything, remove (5) from there.
  2. 00:26:167 (4) - Add a finish on this circle.
  3. 00:33:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the spacing of this pattern is so inconsistent? Make it the same, please.
  4. 01:17:936 (2,3,4) - This is really confusing, the note on blue tick is too sudden and hard to read at first sight.
  5. 01:24:521 (4) - Remove one repeat from this slider.
~Mochi~
  1. 01:10:253 (1) - This anti-jump is really confusing and makes players easily miss while playing.
Nice job!
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

HelloSCV wrote: 4a196u

here's your ticket

Mochi

00:19:948 (3) - need normal sampleset imo Why ?
00:26:167 (4) - reduce slider's length to 1/2? since i can't hear any rhythm 00:26:442 - here It's fine though.. i love it :3
00:31:106 (5,6) - hmm if you want to add a jump here, try to change these to 1/2 slider? much better No jump.. although Insane, it needs some resting
01:01:289 (2) - add finish here instead 01:01:472 (3) - on start? I followed on andrea-san map :v
01:20:862 (1) - delete NC and 01:21:777 (4) - add it here? Seems no..
01:37:326 (3) - clap on end (delete clap on start) Fixed.


Good luck~ :)

Andrea wrote: 1r6d5e

~General~
  1. BG Size is really weird, I suggest you to resize it properly.i forgot change it to the jonathanlfj's ver :v
  2. Tags between the difficulties are inconsistent, make sure to fix that. K
~Mochi~
  1. 01:10:253 (1) - This anti-jump is really confusing and makes players easily miss while playing.
    Okay.. since many modder want me to change it. Fixed
Nice job! Thx~
Thx for mod~ :oops:
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
ed December 2010
Yo.

[General]
  1. Resize your BG, it's better if your BG will have recommended size. (1024x768 or 1366x768). So, t will look better on our displays :)
  2. Song is short, so go ahead and make an [Easy] diff! It will be a good idea, so even beginners will be able to enjoy your mapset!
  3. Your tags are inconsistent, remove Game from tags because it will be used as genre after rank.
[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. Set AR to 5 and OD/HP to 4. Ask mapper to map an [Easy]. Your diff is too hard to be easist diff in this mapset, your rhythm and patterns are too hard for beginners!
    Note: don't be afraid of using AR5 here, it will fit with your SV and patterns much better!
  2. 00:15:923 (2,1) - nazi - this overlap is visible even during gameplay. Consider fixing it because it looks messy here. Oh, and if you follow my suggestion about AR5 it will solve this problem :)
    Note: 01:02:936 (3,1) - one more overlap.
  3. 00:16:838 - as I've said above this diff is too hard for the easiest, but that's ok for a [Normal]. You can even add more beats here :0 Try to add a circle here, to emphasize vocals and music, it will perfectly fit here!
  4. 00:36:411 - almost the same as above, adding circle here will be an awesome idea!]

    Rest is fine. Fine means rankable, but I know you can make it better. Ask mapper to maeke/find an [Easy] and try to make more 1/2 beats and less long sliders. So, you'l be able to use more 1/2s and to make awesome diff! I'm not forcing you to do it, but I will be happy if you follow my advice!
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. Video is missing. Please, please, please, fix it as soon as possible, that's really big problem!
  2. Since this is not the hardest diff, I'd recommend you to replace patterns like 01:09:521 (3,4,5,6) - this one with sliders. THey may stress players too much!
    Note: triplets are fine, tho. Well, you can replace them with sliders too, but it's not really needed!
  3. Consider using AR8, your diff has pretty fast SV and some streams. I'm sure that using AR8 will make flow smoother and more readable!
  4. 00:57:814 (3,4,1,3) - such pattererns are a little bit overlappy, if you use AR8 they will look much neater! :3

    Good diff, but I strongly recommend you to incrase AR and get rid of some 1/4s!
[Mochi]
  1. 00:23:058 (7) - nazi - it's pretty obvious that blanket here could be much better
  2. 00:23:058 (7) - you could place an 1/8 slider here, so it'd fit with piano sound. It's not like you HAVE TO do it, but it'd work really good here.
  3. 00:59:826 (4,5) - nazi - try to disable naking sliders in your osu settings and test it. Pattern will look like this, so consider manually unstacking it a bit to make it more reeadable.

    Since it's one of your first maps I won't complain about shapes and flow lot. Diff is nicely done, anyway!
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Good luck!
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

Yo.

[General]
  1. Resize your BG, it's better if your BG will have recommended size. (1024x768 or 1366x768). So, t will look better on our displays :) I have.. but i forgot to update it XD
  2. Song is short, so go ahead and make an [Easy] diff! It will be a good idea, so even beginners will be able to enjoy your mapset! i'm too lazy for that lol~
  3. Your tags are inconsistent, remove Game from tags because it will be used as genre after rank.ok
[Mochi]
  1. 00:23:058 (7) - nazi - it's pretty obvious that blanket here could be much better fix
  2. 00:23:058 (7) - you could place an 1/8 slider here, so it'd fit with piano sound. It's not like you HAVE TO do it, but it'd work really good here. i don;t understand.. but i like what it be
  3. 00:59:826 (4,5) - nazi - try to disable naking sliders in your osu settings and test it. Pattern will look like this, so consider manually unstacking it a bit to make it more reeadable. okay. manually stacking it

    Since it's one of your first maps I won't complain about shapes and flow lot. Diff is nicely done, anyway! whatever lol..
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Good luck! >
Thx a lot for mod :)


Edit : Updated ~
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
fix all except AR due Normal use AR 4 and Insane use AR8, if i use AR 8, it will be not balance imo

ty 4 mod ~
Update, gue udh benerin opening sama remove game d tags 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hwakakaka.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 14094
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 69521,98149,100984
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Graceful Anomaly
TitleUnicode:Graceful Anomaly
Artist:ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
ArtistUnicode:ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Magical Charming!
Tags:Opening Eroge Visual Novel Lump Of Sugar Hinsvar Xinely
BeatmapID:270456
BeatmapSetID:102084

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. Set AR to 5 and OD/HP to 4. Ask mapper to map an [Easy]. Your diff is too hard to be easist diff in this mapset, your rhythm and patterns are too hard for beginners!
    Note: don't be afraid of using AR5 here, it will fit with your SV and patterns much better! Only set the AR to 5. I fear that increasing the other can make a bigger problem. Also, since Mochi doesn't want an Easy diff here...
  2. 00:15:923 (2,1) - nazi - this overlap is visible even during gameplay. Consider fixing it because it looks messy here. Oh, and if you follow my suggestion about AR5 it will solve this problem :) AR5 didn't fix it actually, but I fixed it by myself.
    Note: 01:02:936 (3,1) - one more overlap. Fixed.
  3. 00:16:838 - as I've said above this diff is too hard for the easiest, but that's ok for a [Normal]. You can even add more beats here :0 Try to add a circle here, to emphasize vocals and music, it will perfectly fit here! I actually think nothing fits here. Would be good if the middle of a slider is placed here.
  4. 00:36:411 - almost the same as above, adding circle here will be an awesome idea! Unfortunately, I have to refrain from making too much objects that may result in a 1/2-beats of gap between objects, so...

    Rest is fine. Fine means rankable, but I know you can make it better. Ask mapper to maeke/find an [Easy] and try to make more 1/2 beats and less long sliders. So, you'l be able to use more 1/2s and to make awesome diff! I'm not forcing you to do it, but I will be happy if you follow my advice! Mochi doesn't seem to have any interest in adding an Easy diff, so I'm stuck here with this Normal diff... I would do it if he wants an Easy diff, still.
Thanks for modding! :D

`-` 
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Dark_Ai
1,831 posts
ed July 2010
Hey Mod from my Queues :3



General 6285k

  • • You really need an Easy Diff if you're lazy then ask a mapper. may someone want to make it?

[Hinsvar's Normal] 4q5t1k

  • • nothing to day here for a Normal is it okay but for the easiest Diff in this mapset it's a little bit too Hard

[Xinely's Hard] 1k1cu

  • • 00:36:503 (5) - this Circle feels kinda wrong and it doesnt fit with the music (for me) may remove it?
    • 00:39:155 (3,1) - the distance is lil bit wrong may fix it? (1 grid right and down)
    • 00:40:619 (5) - move it to x 168 y 168 to make a better pattern and if you do it fixe the curve from 00:40:984 (1)
    • 00:52:692 (1) - may make a bettr blanket with 00:51:960 (1)?
    • 01:17:936 (2) - may move it to x 484 y 264 to make a better blanket/pattern?

[Mochi] 655b4y

  • • 00:40:070 (4) - may add NC here?
    • 00:54:155 (1) - try to make this slider like this? it would look better
    • 00:59:826 (4) - try to stack this better

it is a really nice map c:
good luck with rank~ sorry for my noob mod ><
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

Dark_Ai wrote: 2v3di

Hey Mod from my Queues :3



General 6285k

  • • You really need an Easy Diff if you're lazy then ask a mapper. may someone want to make it?not this again.. =__=

[Mochi] 655b4y

  • • 00:40:070 (4) - may add NC here? i think it's fine..
    • 00:54:155 (1) - try to make this slider like this? it would look better gived some shape
    • 00:59:826 (4) - try to stack this betteri stacked this manually due to confusion if the snaking slider is not active

it is a really nice map c:
good luck with rank~ sorry for my noob mod ><[/color]
Thx for mod~
Hanabi
Hanabi

Hi~ from my queue

please tell me what did you fix and did not fix


Xinely's Hard
  1. 00:40:436 (4,5,6) - check those distance

  2. 00:52:692 (1,2) - How about place at here ->
  3. 01:04:399 (1,2,3) - Change like this ->
  4. 01:09:795 - add circle here

  5. 01:17:387 (1,2) - correct shape
  6. 01:21:228 (8,9) - make a reverse arrow ->

Mochi
  1. 00:20:131 (5,6) - remove whistle

  2. 00:35:679 (2) - change like ->
  3. 00:38:972 (5) - NC

  4. 00:39:338 (1) - remove NC

  5. 00:43:911 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you use this rythm (as you did at 00:40:984 (1,2,3) ) ->
  6. 00:55:801 (1,2) -
  7. 00:59:826 (4,5) - overlap exactly

  8. 01:08:972 (5) - NC

  9. 01:25:436 (2) - ctrl + g

  10. 01:30:100 (7) - remove whistle


GL ;)
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

[ Sana ] wrote: 2w656m


Hi~ from my queue

[b]Mochi
  1. 00:20:131 (5,6) - remove whistle removed from body only.

  2. 00:35:679 (2) - change like ->
    followed this.
  3. 00:38:972 (5) - NC Seems no..

  4. 00:39:338 (1) - remove NC ^

  5. 00:43:911 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you use this rythm (as you did at 00:40:984 (1,2,3) ) ->
    because in the next vocal it has changed rhytm~
  6. 00:55:801 (1,2) -
    i like my style~
  7. 00:59:826 (4,5) - overlap exactly no it's not :o

  8. 01:08:972 (5) - NC why ?

  9. 01:25:436 (2) - ctrl + g i want to make it a jump though

  10. 01:30:100 (7) - remove whistle rejected~


GL ;)
Still.. thanks for mod ~ :)
MineC24
1,072 posts
ed May 2010
Modding queue~ :D

maybe BG size Not 4:3 or 16:9 (Change BG or re-size BG)

Maybe missing SB 'BG MC'

Hinsvar's Normal
imo, AR - 1

00:23:423 (1) - x:316 y:292 (little Suggest)

Xinely's Hard
00:28:454 - add note or 00:28:362 (1) - change -> 1/4 slider (this part -> sound like 1/4 drum beat)
01:00:558 (2) - more improve blanket pattern

Mochi
00:40:070 (4,5,6) - imo, re-make a 1/4 slider(1 reverse)
00:40:436 (7,8,9) - ^
00:56:167 (2) - move left (blanket by 00:55:801 (1))
If you accept ^, 00:57:082 (3) - stack by 00:56:167 (2)
00:59:826 (4) - stack by 01:00:009 (5) (fix this pattern plz, little unstack)
01:16:106 (1) - (little error) distance check (x1.00 -> x0.75 part)

GL :)
Alarido
1,744 posts
ed September 2012
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote: 4h4f1h

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[General Things]
BG size feels incorrect. Should be 1366x768 as Ranking Criteria tell us.

Ranking_Criteria.Rules.Skinning wrote: 5gt5k

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
Well, I resized it, then take it ^^ → http://puu.sh/3IhLM.jpg

[The Diffs]
* All Diffs are nice, and difficulty spread feels good (:

Well, this is a Perfect map ! Hope it Ranked as soon as possible (:

Get a Star!

Att.

P.S.: I modded another song on Lump of Sugar a few days ago (:
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

MineC24 wrote: 1bj19

Hinsvar's Normal
imo, AR - 1 ...I'll stick with AR5 for now.

00:23:423 (1) - x:316 y:292 (little Suggest) Done.
Thanks before :P
winber1
4,519 posts
ed February 2010

Mochi 4yu4v

  1. 00:14:094 (4) - Change into two hitcircles and a slider? Would feel more natural imo and follow the music a bit more. http://puu.sh/3K3c9
  2. 00:17:570 (1,4) - YOu could potentially make these symmetrical with combo 2.. unless you purposely wanted it like this.
  3. 00:25:161 - adding a note feels more natural and flowing to me. (you might need to move combo 4 and 5 closer together in order to do this)
  4. 00:34:033 (5,6,7) - Would make more of an impact if you used all hitcircles in a special pattern. Also add a new combo while you are at it. http://puu.sh/3K3mL.jpg .. well what I did wasn't all that speial, but it's just an idea.
  5. 01:26:717 (5,6) - You might want to consider moving combo 7 before these sliders to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/3K3x6.jpg
  6. 01:31:655 (4,5) - I feel that if you turn these two notes into a slider, it would fit the music more than the stack you have. http://puu.sh/3K3AW.jpg
  7. 01:36:869 - imo adding a note here will add flow. idk about you but I like the sound of it here. You will need to move some sliders to accomodate for it tho.

Xinely's Hard 6j163e

  1. 00:42:448 (1,2,3) - Really awkward spacing. To be honest, I misread it, or I could be tired idk. But either way I would either move combo 3 further away, use a more uniform spacing, or add a note at 00:43:179 -
  2. 01:02:936 (1,2) - Why not change into a slider?
  3. 01:17:936 (2,3) - the spacing is a little backwards here... Alternatively you could just do something like this http://puu.sh/3K3YO.jpg
  4. 01:29:826 (3) - Consider adding a new combo here, maybe even using a different pattern. Also for the record, the jump between combo 5 and 6 doesn't really make sense to me at all. http://puu.sh/3K4ga.jpg
  5. 01:35:862 (4,5) - Not four hitcircles? :<

Hinsvar's Normal 5e13

  1. 00:33:850 (3) - new combo?
  2. 00:36:045 (2) - http://puu.sh/3K4no.jpg otherwise the spacing is unintuitive.
  3. 00:52:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3K4pZ.jpg
  4. 01:00:009 (2) - You probably shouldn't go off the grid.
  5. 01:09:521 (4) - I would put a new combo. I know some people don't like having single note combos, but I feel that as long as it fits then there's no problem doing it.
  6. 01:13:179 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3K4wK.jpg it's more intuitive and easier to read this way.
  7. 01:22:143 (1) - http://puu.sh/3K4.jpg sounds better imo... It's awkward the way it is now.
The beginning has so many different slider lengths and rest lengths... might be a little confusing. I would try to keep to more constant if possible, similar to the rest of the map.
Sorry for late mod. Hope this helps.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011

winber1 wrote: 4i6h5j

Hinsvar's Normal 5e13

  1. 00:33:850 (3) - new combo? Why?
  2. 00:36:045 (2) - http://puu.sh/3K4no.jpg otherwise the spacing is unintuitive. The middle of that slider will cross 00:36:228. It's just unfitting for the middle of a slider to cross that...
  3. 00:52:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3K4pZ.jpg I'm trying to avoid as many red ticks as I can here; can't be helped.
  4. 01:00:009 (2) - You probably shouldn't go off the grid. Moved.
  5. 01:09:521 (4) - I would put a new combo. I know some people don't like having single note combos, but I feel that as long as it fits then there's no problem doing it. Hmm, yeah, you're right. Added.
  6. 01:13:179 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3K4wK.jpg it's more intuitive and easier to read this way. Same as 00:52:692 (1,2).
  7. 01:22:143 (1) - http://puu.sh/3K4.jpg sounds better imo... It's awkward the way it is now. Done.
The beginning has so many different slider lengths and rest lengths... might be a little confusing. I would try to keep to more constant if possible, similar to the rest of the map. This one can't be helped I guess... I'm mapping this part according to my feeling and I have made sure that the current rhythm is already good enough. Not sure; maybe I'll change this later, maybe not.
Thanks for modding! :D
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter

winber1 wrote: 4i6h5j

Mochi 4yu4v

  1. 00:14:094 (4) - Change into two hitcircles and a slider? Would feel more natural imo and follow the music a bit more. http://puu.sh/3K3c9 Okay
  2. 00:17:570 (1,4) - YOu could potentially make these symmetrical with combo 2.. unless you purposely wanted it like this.Yes it is
  3. 00:25:161 - adding a note feels more natural and flowing to me. (you might need to move combo 4 and 5 closer together in order to do this)
  4. 00:34:033 (5,6,7) - Would make more of an impact if you used all hitcircles in a special pattern. Also add a new combo while you are at it. http://puu.sh/3K3mL.jpg .. well what I did wasn't all that speial, but it's just an idea. Okay
  5. 01:26:717 (5,6) - You might want to consider moving combo 7 before these sliders to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/3K3x6.jpg
  6. 01:31:655 (4,5) - I feel that if you turn these two notes into a slider, it would fit the music more than the stack you have. http://puu.sh/3K3AW.jpg
  7. 01:36:869 - imo adding a note here will add flow. idk about you but I like the sound of it here. You will need to move some sliders to accomodate for it tho.Hm.. still keep for this time

Sorry for late mod. Hope this helps.
Thx for mod..
and Updated xD
winber1
4,519 posts
ed February 2010

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

  1. 00:36:045 (2) - http://puu.sh/3K4no.jpg otherwise the spacing is unintuitive. The middle of that slider will cross 00:36:228. It's just unfitting for the middle of a slider to cross that...Then you could use a 1/2 tick slider if you must. What I'm saying is that, in accordance with the previous rhythm, you making the player think and feel that the next note is also going to be 1/1 tick away from the previous note, which it is not. That is my concern. This is also what I was talking about in the beginning of the map, when there is no clear beat going on, which may cause confusion, especially for beginners.
  2. 00:52:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3K4pZ.jpg I'm trying to avoid as many red ticks as I can here; can't be helped. I just don't like this argument because you use so many other red ticks elsewhere that could also be removed. Furthermore, it is a normal difficulty, so you shouldn't even be afraid to use red ticks. It's not like this is going overboard. THe problem I have with the current rhythm is that combo 2 doesn't match anything... and it's quite awkward sounding imo
Just my take on it. Doesn't really matter what you choose to do since it's your map. But I'm just saying, this is how it looks to me, and how I thought about it.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
ed December 2011
...I love how many people decided to counter my arguments for rejecting stuff.

Maybe I'm just really bad at choosing the correct words lol

Will see what I can do about them later, anyway...
winber1
4,519 posts
ed February 2010

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

...I love how many people decided to counter my arguments for rejecting stuff.

Maybe I'm just really bad at choosing the correct words lol

Will see what I can do about them later, anyway...
It's more so that some of what you said is not fully convincing to me. I mean at least I'm looking at what you said. I am willing to bet that many modders don't bother enough to actually go back into edit and look at what you said. In these cases, all you have to do is say "Okay, updated." When I find things that strike me as important to respond to, I do so. Sometimes, I don't see a problem with what you said, or with what you did, so I just don't say anything. Other times, as a modder, I feel it is part of my duty to actually discuss a few things.

You said a few things, so I decided to respond to it. Momochikun mostly just said "Okay," so I can't really respond to that lol.

Is that not in the spirit of modding? I have nothing against you, or what you have done. I'm just trying to discuss something a little more. If I sounded harsh, I'm sorry, because I was not trying to be, nor am I trying to be harsh right now either.

As I said, if you believe, even solely out of feeling, that my suggestion doesn't make sense, then please ignore it. I have nothing against you. Most of what I say is based off of my own mapping style anyway.
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
ed November 2009
the mod :-)

[General]
  1. 1000kbps for 640x320 video is too much. try this ( to check the video offset): http://puu.sh/3NKOo.flv
  2. end the first KIAI part at 01:16:106? and for the re-KIAI part, I think pause at 01:09:338 can be a better choice.
[Mochi]
  1. 00:41:716 (3,4) - if you leave a blank here, then you'd better keep using blank at 00:44:094
  2. 01:03:027 (7,8) - vocal is more like a clear end, and 01:04:033 (5) - it's more like a triple here.
  3. 01:18:484 (5) - obvious 3/4 here, suggest a remove and some spacing adjust on the following notes.
  4. C2 whistles are the best choice for the triple/stream drums imo.
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:45:923 (3,4,5) - looks weird as a straight spacing change (can hardly call this a jump)
  2. 01:09:521 (3,4,5,1) - not only a triple here, add note at 01:09:795 plz.
  3. 01:16:106 (1,2,1,2) - keep the normal spacing as usual is ok.
  4. 01:20:679 (5,6,7) - 2-notes here is better, cannot see what this triple is based on
  5. 01:24:521 (4) - 1 more repeat
the end
Xinely
5,014 posts
ed April 2012
fixed all, thanks Colin Hou :3
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oh yeah in winber1's mod , sorry i rejected all xD
Hinsvar
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ed December 2011

winber1 wrote: 4i6h5j

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

...I love how many people decided to counter my arguments for rejecting stuff.

Maybe I'm just really bad at choosing the correct words lol

Will see what I can do about them later, anyway...
It's more so that some of what you said is not fully convincing to me. I mean at least I'm looking at what you said. I am willing to bet that many modders don't bother enough to actually go back into edit and look at what you said. In these cases, all you have to do is say "Okay, updated." When I find things that strike me as important to respond to, I do so. Sometimes, I don't see a problem with what you said, or with what you did, so I just don't say anything. Other times, as a modder, I feel it is part of my duty to actually discuss a few things.

You said a few things, so I decided to respond to it. Momochikun mostly just said "Okay," so I can't really respond to that lol.

Is that not in the spirit of modding? I have nothing against you, or what you have done. I'm just trying to discuss something a little more. If I sounded harsh, I'm sorry, because I was not trying to be, nor am I trying to be harsh right now either.

As I said, if you believe, even solely out of feeling, that my suggestion doesn't make sense, then please ignore it. I have nothing against you. Most of what I say is based off of my own mapping style anyway.
...Now that I think of it again, yep, those reasons are kinda illogical lol

Nah, you didn't sound harsh, but I just realized how much times I have used strange reasons to answer to mods when I reject them :P

Well, okay, I don't have anyhing against you too. Followed the suggestions that I rejected back then anyway after rethinking about them again.

Also Xinely did a short mod to my diff and I changed a few things (thanks~) :D

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Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thx a lot for mod.. all fixed~
Updated :)
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
ed June 2009
minor changes
Increased AR 1 on Mochi
Fixed Background dimensions



Good luck.

Good mapset.

~
10nya
2,746 posts
ed February 2011
\^3^\
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thx <3 ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
ed May 2010
wooo ayo rank~
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
ed May 2011
go go \:3/
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012
yeah I love this song
Nyquill come rank this
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
ed February 2011
excellent
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thanks so much moe Nyquill ~ <3
Dai
1,632 posts
ed April 2010
weleh baru sadar kalo udah dirank
metzya
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
ed June 2009
Congrats :3
Oyatsu
1,908 posts
ed December 2012
Wow God, So amazing for me @@. Congratz for first ranked! ^^
Konei
2,959 posts
ed March 2012
Ahh, this song again xD

Gratz ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
ed May 2010
selamet \o3o/
Gero
4,456 posts
ed March 2012
Gratz /Me late* :3
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,317 posts
ed December 2011
yay for this song! again!

gz ~~
Momochikun
1,954 posts
ed October 2012
Topic Starter
Thanks guys oWo
Mythiax
637 posts
ed August 2012
Gratz! I love this song *w*
Kyouren
5,693 posts
ed October 2012
Gratz! Mochi Mochi! For First Map Ranked!!!



It's HAPPINESS!!!???
Rey-volution
1,342 posts
ed June 2011
oh finally :D
senang bisa sedikit berkontribusi n akhirnya d ranked :)

grats ^_^
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