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Sorry i have to do this but im gonna start enforcing difficulties having the Correct name
Your hard has 1/4 streams everywhere, jump patterns and also insane spacing at points. its not a hard its a light insane. name it a insane, this is a MUST
This mapsets spread is terrible and you map almost none in it. this is really not acceptable. make another diff to create a better spead. also the jump between your diffs is too much, the extra diff "must" be a diff between the two difficulty wise
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01:04:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - im not sure about this, having a long 1/2 stream in the normal seems out of place and didnt really suit the difficulty level of the map, think of changing this
02:11:835 (1,2,3,4,5) - again not sure over this stream on the "easiest" map of the whole set
sorry but the combos in this map are not good, they need some "major" work, ive posted the most important ones for the moment
01:19:335 (6,7,1) - incorrect comboing. move the newcombo at 01:20:741 (1) - to the 6 on the pattern before it
01:54:960 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your own pattern
02:04:335 (4,5,1,2,3) - new combo that 4 then remove it on the (1) creates a proper combo pattern what follows your map and not destroying your overall pattern
02:26:835 (6,7,1) - same thing with combos again, remove from the 1 and put on the 6
02:58:710 (1) - remove new combo
03:00:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - yea your combos have no consistancy at all, i think you know how this needs to be fixed ^^
03:15:116 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - again breaking your own consistant pattern, easy to fix for you
03:45:585 (1) - start and end point overlap abit tooo much, enlarge and widen abit so the slider direction is fully readable
i need you in irc to mod the combos on the Insane difficulty because by what i see the combos between the different mappers completely destroy each other, which really kills the consistancy in the map, and i need to understand and suggest better ways to re combo this difficulty
Your hard has 1/4 streams everywhere, jump patterns and also insane spacing at points. its not a hard its a light insane. name it a insane, this is a MUST
This mapsets spread is terrible and you map almost none in it. this is really not acceptable. make another diff to create a better spead. also the jump between your diffs is too much, the extra diff "must" be a diff between the two difficulty wise
Normal
01:04:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - im not sure about this, having a long 1/2 stream in the normal seems out of place and didnt really suit the difficulty level of the map, think of changing this
02:11:835 (1,2,3,4,5) - again not sure over this stream on the "easiest" map of the whole set
sorry but the combos in this map are not good, they need some "major" work, ive posted the most important ones for the moment
01:19:335 (6,7,1) - incorrect comboing. move the newcombo at 01:20:741 (1) - to the 6 on the pattern before it
01:54:960 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your own pattern
02:04:335 (4,5,1,2,3) - new combo that 4 then remove it on the (1) creates a proper combo pattern what follows your map and not destroying your overall pattern
02:26:835 (6,7,1) - same thing with combos again, remove from the 1 and put on the 6
02:58:710 (1) - remove new combo
03:00:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - yea your combos have no consistancy at all, i think you know how this needs to be fixed ^^
03:15:116 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - again breaking your own consistant pattern, easy to fix for you
03:45:585 (1) - start and end point overlap abit tooo much, enlarge and widen abit so the slider direction is fully readable
i need you in irc to mod the combos on the Insane difficulty because by what i see the combos between the different mappers completely destroy each other, which really kills the consistancy in the map, and i need to understand and suggest better ways to re combo this difficulty
I would love to see this as official Ranking Criteria. Even I think 3 pages can be sometimes a bit too much, this concept would be wonderful. And not because of Andrea. I am impartial about the current situation.Lolicore Flandre wrote: 1w6p5q
From now on your maps must be minimum a week old and atleast 3 pages of mods before bubbling or I won't hesitate to pop.
Mercurial
This is coming from a Staff member.Lolicore Flandre wrote: 1w6p5q
Stop this lazy mapping/speedranking. From now on your maps must be minimum a week old and atleast 3 pages of mods before bubbling or I won't hesitate to pop.
/rage
C'mon dude, what a shame! I lol'd at everything you said.
Anyway, weird to see you not mapping an anime song, Andrea. Keep going
Hi!! 
Insane Collab
[Normal]
Good map, I hope To serve: 3
Insane Collab[Normal]
00:49:335 (3,4) More Spacing
01:38:085 (1) Whitsle finish slider
03:15:116 (1,2,3,4,5)
03:36:210 (3) Ugly Slinder :C
[Hard]01:38:085 (1) Whitsle finish slider
03:15:116 (1,2,3,4,5)
03:36:210 (3)
Ugly Slinder :C
00:10:897 (3) 
01:08:085 (1) 
01:08:905 Add Circle (Only if you do what I suggested ^)
01:09:725 (5) (01:08:085) <
01:10:311 Add Circle (Only if you do what I suggested ^)
[Insane] 01:08:085 (1)
01:08:905 Add Circle (Only if you do what I suggested ^)
01:09:725 (5) (01:08:085) <
01:10:311 Add Circle (Only if you do what I suggested ^)
Mmm ... I can not Modearla, they made the best mappers in the world, that I can find wrong with it? : 3
Good map, I hope To serve: 3
come richiesto <.< se si puo chia mare mod :V
[Hard]
[Hard]
- 00:19:803 (3) - tocca (almeno nella mia skin) il drain quindi cerca di spostarlo poco poco piu in giu affinche non lo tocchi http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/572073
- 01:06:210 (5,6) - rimuovi e metti uno spinner ci sta meglio
- 01:23:085 (6) - finish (?)
- 02:07:850 (5,6) - roba da
nazi- falla un poco meglio http://puu.sh/1OGZU - 02:13:710 (4,5) - come li odio sti cosi ci stanno male spinner plz ;_;
- 02:30:585 - inb4 mi dirai che è fatto apposta che è unsnapped il break
- 03:21:210 (5,6) - rimuovi questi 2 e metti uno spinner è-é
Mercurial
Moe Andrea <3
Let me mod this ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ That's all ~ awesome song and collab set ~
Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
Let me mod this ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[Insane] 1o141
- 02:03:865 (2,3,4) - Make a symmetry to here? like this.
- 02:44:061 (4,5) - Sound a bit weird to me,try like this.
- 02:47:225 (9) - Symmetry with 02:46:288 (5) - end point.
[Hard] 1u1958
- 01:00:116 (4) - Pls don't overlapping,looks ugly to me,try like this.
- 02:07:616 (4) - Same as above.
- 03:25:897 (2) - Try move to 03:26:600,sound much better.
- 03:39:256 (3,4) - These note isn't symmetry.
- 03:53:085 - Remove finish,sound better to me.
[Normal] 606311
- 02:02:460 (2) - Flip this slider,looks much better,like this.
- 03:26:835 (1,2) - These slider isn't symmetry.
- 03:53:085 - Remove whistle,sound better to me.
OK ~ That's all ~ awesome song and collab set ~
Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
Thank you for your mod :3Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631
Moe Andrea <3
Let me mod this ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[Insane] 1o141
Fixed.
- 02:03:865 (2,3,4) - Make a symmetry to here? like this. Aleks made it that way in purpose.
- 02:44:061 (4,5) - Sound a bit weird to me,try like this. Sounds fine to me actually.
- 02:47:225 (9) - Symmetry with 02:46:288 (5) - end point.
[Hard] 1u1958
Fixed.
- 01:00:116 (4) - Pls don't overlapping,looks ugly to me,try like this. Fixed.
- 02:07:616 (4) - Same as above. Fixed.
- 03:25:897 (2) - Try move to 03:26:600,sound much better. I think it's fine like this.
- 03:39:256 (3,4) - These note isn't symmetry. Fixed.
- 03:53:085 - Remove finish,sound better to me.
[Normal] 606311
Fixed.
- 02:02:460 (2) - Flip this slider,looks much better,like this. Fixed.
- 03:26:835 (1,2) - These slider isn't symmetry. Fixed.
- 03:53:085 - Remove whistle,sound better to me.
OK ~ That's all ~ awesome song and collab set ~
Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
[General]
- Storyboard: In your .osb you have a line which makes the map end a lot later than it should. The line is:
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
As you can see the 242460 timestamp is what causes this, because the mp3 is only 236800ms long. I suggest you change it to 234022 because that's where the last SB element (apart from this one) ends.
F,0,233085,242460,1
- Drain-1? Drain 7 is a little tricky outside the chorus. Sure it's an easy map and all but apply HR and watch yourself die haha.
- 01:22:616 (5) - Finish at the end? (check 02:30:116 (5))
- 01:37:147 (6) - Missing a whistle? Not sure.
- 02:44:061 (4) - The lack of the clap here makes it sound like you are missing it, however it's impossible to map it cause of this slider. I suggest to place a whistle at the start of this slider to mask that because not only it sounds good, you used it at 02:48:749 (5) which I think it's damn awesome.
- 00:30:116 - The flow gets broken here cause there is no beat mapped. I suggest you map a circle with normal hitsound set and then swap 00:30:350 (1) - to soft (maybe even apply a whistle?). Such a thing doesn't occur anywhere in the map but here so it makes it inconsistent a bit as well. :p Up to you how you handle this though.
- 01:23:085 (6) - (soft) Finish at the end?
- 01:23:085 (6) - (soft) Finish at the end?
- 01:41:835 (4,1) - The new combo should be on this 4.
Made some hitsounds/placement changements via IRC:
Now have this bubble /o/
If someone wants the translation of what has been done there,I will be more than happy to post them
SPOILER
19:15 -kevincela-: ready?
19:15 Andrea: YES
19:15 Andrea: I'M LADY
19:15 -kevincela-: k
19:17 -kevincela-: nella normal
19:18 Andrea: gogo o3o
19:18 -kevincela-: 00:28:710 (3) - visto che sono stati aggiunti I whistle alla fine degli slider 3/2 ripetuti,non sarebbe meglio metterne uno alla fine per tenere questa consistenza?
19:18 -kevincela-: 00:28:710 (3) - visto che sono stati aggiunti I whistle alla fine degli slider 3/2 ripetuti,non sarebbe meglio metterne uno alla fine per tenere questa consistenza?
19:18 Andrea: fixed
19:20 -kevincela-: 00:43:710 (3) - all'inizio di questo slider non c'è nessun suono "risemblabile" a un clap,visto che vi è un clap 1/1 dopo rispetto a quando lo slider comincia. dovresti eliminarlo :\
19:20 -kevincela-: 00:43:710 (3) - all'inizio di questo slider non c'è nessun suono "risemblabile" a un clap,visto che vi è un clap 1/1 dopo rispetto a quando lo slider comincia. dovresti eliminarlo :\
19:20 -kevincela-: e metterne uno su 00:44:647 (4) -
19:20 Andrea: fixed
19:20 -kevincela-: 00:45:116 (1) - rimuovi il clap se hai fatto
19:22 Andrea: fixed owo
19:24 -kevincela-: 01:12:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh,perchè hai switchato lo DS a 0,8x quando non c'è davvero nessun motivo per questa riduzione 1.0x ---> 0.8x? Potresti allargare per tenere lo spacing consistente....
19:24 -kevincela-: 01:12:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh,perchè hai switchato lo DS a 0,8x quando non c'è davvero nessun motivo per questa riduzione 1.0x ---> 0.8x? Potresti allargare per tenere lo spacing consistente....
19:24 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/1QGyi <--- pattern con spacing fixato
19:25 -kevincela-: 01:30:585 (1) - che ci fa il finish alla fine qui? E' un errore mentre fixavi? ò_ò
19:25 -kevincela-: non c'è nella parte precedente,e non segue davvero niente,sul quel red tick poi xD
19:27 -kevincela-: 02:19:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ancora,è meglio alzare il DS a 1.0x >_<
19:32 Andrea: FIXED
19:32 -kevincela-: dat caps
19:34 -kevincela-: ok,iamo alla Hawrd
19:36 -kevincela-: 00:28:475 (5,6) - inanzitutto,lo spacing là è inconsistente,anche se di poco,inoltre perchè avete usato un linear flow qui,quando con 00:26:366 (1,2,3) - avete fatto un pattern ad arco? E' una piccola cosa,ma penso che utilizzare un pattern ad arco lì sia la scelta più azzeccata,visto che ci flowwa piuttosto bene
19:36 -kevincela-: 00:28:475 (5,6) - inanzitutto,lo spacing là è inconsistente,anche se di poco,inoltre perchè avete usato un linear flow qui,quando con 00:26:366 (1,2,3) - avete fatto un pattern ad arco? E' una piccola cosa,ma penso che utilizzare un pattern ad arco lì sia la scelta più azzeccata,visto che ci flowwa piuttosto bene
19:36 -kevincela-: 00:28:475 (5,6) - inanzitutto,lo spacing là è inconsistente,anche se di poco,inoltre perchè avete usato un linear flow qui,quando con 00:26:366 (1,2,3) - avete fatto un pattern ad arco? E' una piccola cosa,ma penso che utilizzare un pattern ad arco lì sia la scelta più azzeccata,visto che ci flowwa piuttosto bene
19:36 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/1QGUN
19:36 -kevincela-: wait,posto il code
19:37 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/1QGWc
19:40 -kevincela-: 00:32:460 (4,5,6) - Considerando le circostanze,sfruttare il blanket per quello stack lì non viene giocato scorrevolmente,probabilmente perchè l'oval flow 00:32:460 (4) - viene totalmente spezzato,e con quello stack lì avrei preferito piuttosto un andamento ad onda usando i 2 slider opposti,viene giocato piuttosto scorrevolmente imho
19:40 -kevincela-: 00:32:460 (4,5,6) - Considerando le circostanze,sfruttare il blanket per quello stack lì non viene giocato scorrevolmente,probabilmente perchè l'oval flow 00:32:460 (4) - viene totalmente spezzato,e con quello stack lì avrei preferito piuttosto un andamento ad onda usando i 2 slider opposti,viene giocato piuttosto scorrevolmente imho
19:40 -kevincela-: 00:32:460 (4,5,6) - Considerando le circostanze,sfruttare il blanket per quello stack lì non viene giocato scorrevolmente,probabilmente perchè l'oval flow 00:32:460 (4) - viene totalmente spezzato,e con quello stack lì avrei preferito piuttosto un andamento ad onda usando i 2 slider opposti,viene giocato piuttosto scorrevolmente imho
19:40 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/1QH1r http://puu.sh/1QH2e
19:41 Andrea: quanto sei nazi <.<
19:41 -kevincela-: orz
19:41 -kevincela-: lascia se vuoi :P
19:41 Andrea: questo si xD
19:42 -kevincela-: oh,è un buon segno
19:42 -kevincela-: se vado nazi vuol dire che la diff è pro
19:42 Andrea: :D
19:46 -kevincela-: 00:46:522 (4,5,1) - un altra picolisssimissimissima cosa: considerando l'oval flow di 00:46:522 (4) - ,potresti continuarlo meglio andando dall'alto verso il basso,con 00:47:460 (1) - che va verso il basso viene giocato decisamente fluidamente! http://puu.sh/1QH66 http://puu.sh/1QHc0 http://puu.sh/1QHd7
19:46 -kevincela-: 00:46:522 (4,5,1) - un altra picolisssimissimissima cosa: considerando l'oval flow di 00:46:522 (4) - ,potresti continuarlo meglio andando dall'alto verso il basso,con 00:47:460 (1) - che va verso il basso viene giocato decisamente fluidamente! http://puu.sh/1QH66 http://puu.sh/1QHc0 http://puu.sh/1QHd7
19:46 -kevincela-: 00:46:522 (4,5,1) - un altra picolisssimissimissima cosa: considerando l'oval flow di 00:46:522 (4) - ,potresti continuarlo meglio andando dall'alto verso il basso,con 00:47:460 (1) - che va verso il basso viene giocato decisamente fluidamente! http://puu.sh/1QH66 http://puu.sh/1QHc0 http://puu.sh/1QHd7
19:46 -kevincela-: inb4nazi
19:55 -kevincela-: 03:10:897 (1) - oh beh,va bene costruirsi il ritmo qui,ma su 03:11:131 - non c'è nessuno strumento da seguire,proprio nessuno... ti consiglierei piuttosto di trasformare il tutto in uno slider 3/2 ripetuto,visto che segue sia le vocali che il sintetizzatore: http://puu.sh/1QHvy
19:55 -kevincela-: 03:10:897 (1) - oh beh,va bene costruirsi il ritmo qui,ma su 03:11:131 - non c'è nessuno strumento da seguire,proprio nessuno... ti consiglierei piuttosto di trasformare il tutto in uno slider 3/2 ripetuto,visto che segue sia le vocali che il sintetizzatore: http://puu.sh/1QHvy
19:58 -kevincela-: 03:41:835 (3) - piccolissima cosa qui: che ne dici di spostare questo slider a x:196 y:352? è opzionale,ma comunque crea un pattern lineare con 03:40:428 (1,2) - che secondo me è ottimo da gicoare :P
19:58 -kevincela-: 03:41:835 (3) - piccolissima cosa qui: che ne dici di spostare questo slider a x:196 y:352? è opzionale,ma comunque crea un pattern lineare con 03:40:428 (1,2) - che secondo me è ottimo da gicoare :P
19:59 -kevincela-: nella insane
19:59 -kevincela-: 00:53:085 (1) - Immagino sia un errore,ma rimuovi "Normal" dalle additions e metti "Auto"
19:59 -kevincela-: non ci sta per niente qui :\
20:00 -kevincela-: vado afk un attimo
20:05 Andrea: all fixed
20:06 Andrea: brb pure io, lascio il resto qua o.o
20:06 Andrea: lascia*
20:06 -kevincela-: k
20:06 -kevincela-: /back
20:08 -kevincela-: 02:00:585 (1) - ancora,cambia additions a "Auto"
20:11 -kevincela-: 03:45:467 - che ne diresti di aggiungere na nota qui? è una piccola cosa,ma crea una tripletta piuttosto divertente da giocare e che funziona davvero bene nella song
20:11 -kevincela-: 03:45:467 - che ne diresti di aggiungere na nota qui? è una piccola cosa,ma crea una tripletta piuttosto divertente da giocare e che funziona davvero bene nella song
20:14 -kevincela-: è tutto
20:14 -kevincela-: fixa e rechecko :3
20:20 Andrea: FATTO :3
20:20 Andrea: ps non ho fixato tutto u.u
20:20 -kevincela-: np
20:20 -kevincela-: tanto erano piccole cose xD
20:20 -kevincela-: uppato?
20:20 Andrea: ye
20:20 Andrea: xD
20:20 -kevincela-: k
Now have this bubble /o/
If someone wants the translation of what has been done there,I will be more than happy to post them
Sorry Andrea, but.. I have to agree. Most, if not all of your maps are not single-handedly made by yourself. In fact, the majority of certain mapsets, say there's 5 or 4 difficulties, you only do one. If there are any maps made solely by you, then there's only about two difficulties in them. Now, you're even making two difficulty maps in which you have someone else do one difficulty and you do only one. Only one difficulty per mapset. That's ridiculous, Andrea..MMzz wrote: 2i3zq
Yeah seriously Andrea.Lolicore Flandre wrote: 1w6p5q
Stop this lazy mapping.
You are setting a terrible example for the mapping community.
On top of that, your maps are indeed good, but they are literally the same thing every single time. There is absolutely little to zero variation between your maps at all.
I'm sorry, but you need to face the facts that you need to stop being lazy (and perhaps spice your maps up a bit).