Chapter 1
(1)

I wish there was something more to tell in this story, but it's decent I Guss.

Not a bad start.

Chapter 2
(2,1)

Interesting storytelling about the slime thing…

I like the story of this pink slime thing wondering why he’s still alive.

Chapter 3
(3,2,1)

I like the chapter nodding a reference to Chapter 1 and I like how it connects the Chapter 2 storyline aswell and I really like Manish’s interaction with Momo.

Chapter 4
(3,2,1,4)

I find Chapter 4 to feel really disconnected from Chapter 1-3.


The pacing felt like a mish-mash and that plotline in the 3rd section of the chapter was too hard to understand, because it just existed out of nowhere.

I find the second story the best with the first one landing second, but it still felt all sooo out of line.

The story felt like it didn’t fit with the whole high school story thing in my mind when I was trying to read the 3rd section of the 4th chapter.

It’s pretty much a significant downgrade and not great.

Chapter 5
(3,2,1,5,4)

I like of how much it focuses around the storytelling of the edge collapsing, but it still feels so disconnected and seperated and I’m kinda worried about the future plotpoints breaking the plotlines.
Also who actually is discovering about this?
The story was also hard to follow and I don’t like trying to understand the story by using more than a braincell.

But it’s still better than Chapter 4, no doubt.

Chapter 6
(6,3,2,1,5,4)
[* „are“ not „a“]
plz fix grammar mistake now *_*

Anyways.

Very cool chapter that makes up for connecting the storyline of Chapter 4 and 5’s important parts within the previous chapters.

It’s slightly better than Chapter 3, but it’s still really close.

Still really good nonetheless.





Chapter 7
(6,3,2,1,5,7,4)

Gregg Williams really acts like a boomer, but I can’t blame him when humanity irl is now dead.
I like his roasting skills, but let’s hope that there’s some solution to finally stop the black hole.

Although it feels so different and weird and a bit cringe when he said something about Kiktok…

I don’t want the OT thing to turn into some kind of „humanity = reality = bad => MUST DIE!“ thing, I have seen this trend going for way too many times. -_-

Really cringe about the Kiktok thing, but funny roasts, it’s honestly pretty hard to rate this chapter, so I’ll be putting it a bit below the middle.

Chapter 8
(6,3,2,8,1,5,7,4)

Hmmmm… shoot…
Honestly pretty hard to rate this…
Hmmm…
I understood the story, but..
I don’t know how to decribe it..
But I do like Nhan’s character though.

He seems to have experienced some real highs and lows on his life.

And I like the text at the end actually looking like some kind of social media app.

But I’d still put it in the middle.

Chapter 9
(6,3,9,2,8,1,5,7,4)

I like that talk show podcast thing.

I do have a bit a problematic speculation that the chapters are all turning into some kind of mess with random plotpoints.

But it has a pretty cool plot and the characters felt a lot like real characters I think.

Also why does Alicia remind me of X in BFB?
(Battle For BFDI)

I can’t stop imagining Alicia getting the same voice as X for some reason. I’m too obsessed with BFDI heeeeeeeeeeelp!!! ;_;

Chapter 10
(10,6,3,9,2,8,1,5,7,4)

Mizuyo gang rise up! O_O

Anyways very goat tier description of Mizuyo!

Best chapter I read so far omg.

Chapter 11
(10,11,6,3,9,2,8,1,5,7,4)

Omg really cute story, but I actually kinda was hoping for the wolf to eat the whole group alive.

Still super owo cute, but not as great as 10.

Chapter 12
(10,11,6,3,9,12,2,8,1,5,7,4)

This chapter is very %$&%&$(##&$%((%(%$&(%$&$%%($&$(%&$(%&($&%($&(((#&&(@&#(#&%(#&(#......

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out of
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But why did Kilo Burgers explode?
That felt really chaotic. .___.

Chapter 13
(10,11,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,5,7,4)

Nice continuation with the Kilo Burger incident, but I do want a more interesting character introduction about Cyclade…

Chapter 14
(10,11,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,14,5,7,4)

Hmmm…Idk, but to me it now felt like as if the Kilo Burger incident looked like nothing…
Or maybe that’s just me being weird. .-.

Shortest Chapter though, so that’s a bonus lol.

Nah nvm it was a bit boring…

Chapter 15
(10,15,11,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,14,5,7,4)

Oh no Fara got stuck in Tomfoolery High School!

But seriously very cool story that connects the storyline between the black hole thing and tomfoolery high school very well, but I’m a bit worried about the story becoming a mess…

Chapter 16
(10,15,11,16,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,14,5,7,4)

Oh shoot. Fara sucked Sarah’s blood up. O_O

Short story, but effective.

Chapter 17
(10,15,11,17,16,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,14,5,7,4)

Very cool story about the robotics thing. I like Arika’s interests about building robots a lot.

Chapter 18
(10,15,11,17,16,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,14,5,7,18,4)

Was honestly getting a bit tired from reading all of the lore. -.-

(Also Manish please don’t joke about killing ur friend I don’t want to get Chapter 4 vibes… ;_;)






Chapter 19
(10,15,11,17,16,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,19,14,5,7,18,4)

Man these stories are actually getting so long it’s actually really hard to keep track of all the stories happening in OT! Book.

I don‘t like of how long and dragged out it felt when I was reading this part and I honestly got bored reading the second half of that chapter, because it all was like a huge wall of text that felt unnecessary in the first place.

I honestly wish that were where something more going on about Riel and Momo.

But the conflict between Riel and Momo & Alicia about the presentation was really really interesting.

However the second half being nothing more than a huge text of wall thing really didn’t help.

I’ll place it slightly higher than 14 for the benefit of doubt, because of Riel’s rude character.




Chapter 20
(10,15,11,17,16,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,20,19,14,5,7,18,4)

Interesting bonding thing, but who are these people? .-.

It feels a bit like a waste of time to explain all of that, but hopefully it’ll get some sort of clear connection between this and the high school thing.

Also we’re now going a few days back?
Very weird… ._.

I’ll place it slightly higher than 19 though..

Chapter 21
(10,15,11,17,16, 21,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,20,19,14,5,7,18,4)

No Momo why did you throw away Abraker’s Giga Chad Guide??? >=/

Although I think that’s the first time I ever chuckled on it, considering the fact that I actually hate reading books, because of how boring it is to read all of the text without seeing funny images or animations…

Also wait wait the fu-, why is Sebastian suddenly having sad memories of last year?

Did I really miss out the stuff that happened on the year 3726???

But OMG FINALLY SEBASTIAN STORYLINE POG MOMENT! O_O

That alone makes it better than half of the chapters that I have ever read so far...

Also plz don’t cry Sebastian noooo!!!! =,,,(

Chapter 22
(22,10,15,11,17,16, 21,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,20,19,14,5,7,18,4)

Hey, the chapter that I’m reviewing is actually really good, although idk why Manish got so tall all of a sudden.

Anyways very epic! I’ll put it at the top, because all of the cool characters are in this story!




Chapter 23

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 21,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,23,20,19,14,5,7,18,4)

I like the „Other Side“ Dimension, but man I feel a bit bored and I always feel like something completely differently should have happened…

I’m not really a fan of this whole exploring ultra dangerous thing. ._.

Also wait why does a piece of paper take you into a completely different dimension am I really missing something here? ~_~

At this point I’ll most likely get so lost track of what has all happened so far.

And idk about that funny bit too, where everyone laughs for some reason.

Why does it feel so off to me?

But that’s maybe because reading books is just so boring compared to reading comics and watching animations.

Chapter 24

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 21,6,3,9,12,2,13,8,1,23,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)

Honestly this chapter was just super long text for just about the werewolves.

It honestly could have been sooo mucchh shorter.

For that reason, it’ll only sit higher than 4.

Chapter 25

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,23,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)

Omg finally a SHORT chapter! O_O

And the story is kinda interesting too.

I wonder what will happen to Noah’s father and Noah, I MEAN Nhan’s father and Nhan…

Anyways, I think it’s definetly above average I would say.


Chapter 26

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,26,23,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)

I liked Gregg more when was rude to people, but I do like his character development and the picture is just so (\^3^)/***!!!

But just reading the text thing got actually kinda boring huh.

I feel like the dream thing got a bit too much and felt a bit like some sort of cliche where everyone freaks out and has shizophrenia for some goddang reason idk why… -_-

Which is sad, because right in between we got this masterpiece of the picture!

But thankfully I did somewhat enjoy reading it I guess.

It’s in the middle for sure, but lands higher, because 727/69 pic OwO!



Chapter 27

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,26,23,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)

What the..

I really don’t know why he purposefully blew up Kilo Burgers that felt like a total letdown, but I really really really love the action scenen and especially watching the crazy looking pictures.

But please fix the beginning… ._.

The beginning was like literally on par with Chapter 4’s quality and I didn’t like it that much…

Still higher than most of the entries, but PLEASE fix the beginning, the beginning was just so not great. >=/

Chapter 28

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)
Ehhhh it’s okay, at least I don’t have to read much.

Chapter 29

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)

Yey Arika is back!

I always liked Arika’s ionate personality!

Although this chapter seems nothing too special and I don’t like that super large dialogue that Tsubasa has said, that dragged it down a bit, but it’s still alright.

Chapter 30

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,18,24,4)

Okay now that’s way better than the first part, because I really like the golem boss fight, but I think it should have been expanded with them trying to defeat the golem.

Slightly better than 27 though woah!

Chapter 31

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,31,18,24,4)

Actually idk how to rate this…

Is this a chapter that’s going to be super important?

I really don’t know.

Chapter 32

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,31,18,32,24,4)

Omg more cute Sebastian, but why is the writer literally trying to make him suffer?

Sebastian does NOT deserve to get torchered like that. >=/

I think I got some rare amount of me not enjoying OT! Book, but I think I might have to squeeze it through this one just barely…

Chapter 33

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4)

Why did the fight end so abruptly?

And why does it make sense for literal arrows to teleport people into a completely random world???

I feel like it honestly should have ended with them defeating the golem and then finally realizing that this golem drops some kind of item that allows them to teleport into the eleventh world.

But I actually can’t wait to see what Fuki is going to do now, so there’s that I guess.









Chapter 34

(22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

Wait so the Other Side is the Black Hole thing this whole time???

Hold up, Hold up, Hold up, HOOOLD UP….

(researches OT! Book information to even have an idea of what’s going on…)

This one just really didn’t feel like it made any sense at all and the way these two got back into the world. I didn’t understand a single thing about it.

I feel like this chapter was just there just to skippity skip some stuff.

I’ll put it very low on my ranking, because that just didn’t feel like making sense at all in a not so good way too, because I thought that the void or black hole thing was like SUPER-dangerous, but not really???

Are you kidding me!? >:[

Chapter 35

(35,22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

OMG!

Now THAT was a craaaazy story!!! O_O

That actually was so exiting and intense, I quite literally freaked out while reading this chapter.

Easy top tier!!!

Chapter 36

(35,22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,36,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

Huh, wait why did Alicia stab that black cat thing?

Was it because cat thing bad or what, I lost tracked it oh nooo…

Anyways uhhhhhhhh I guess it’s a bit middish.

Chapter 37

(35,22,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,37,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,36,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…what?

I still get so confused, but I really do like the two piece of paper in one sentence thing reference!

And that justifies it from me putting it above average I guess.

Chapter 38

(35,22,38,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,37,1,29,26,23,28,20,19,36,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

TOP TIER TITLE and the chapter isn’t a real clickbait too, but honestly I wish that more gayness would appear in this chapter, but it’s super super cool nonetheless!!! owo



Chapter 39

(35,22,38,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,2,13,8,37,1,29,26,23,39,28,20,19,36,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

Okay time to review MY part! UwU

Unfortunately I really felt like mine just did not fit with the whole OT! Book story at ALL!

(It was because I barely read anything about the OT! Book thing when I was writing that chapter…)

I really think that it was probably a mistake to just add a character like that into the OT! Universe out of nowhere.. ;_;

But it’s at least quirky and kinda funny lol.

However I feel like it would probably sit a bit low on this ranking, mostly because it probably wouldn’t have changed anything if this chapter didn’t exist.

But it is significantly better than some of the lower entries in OT! Book.

Chapter 40

(35,22,38,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,40,2,13,8,37,1,29,26,23,39,28,20,19,36,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

I actually got super exited at reading Chapter 40 a couple months back, but then now when I read it, it’s now like a whole wall of text that I have to read and that unfortunately isn’t so great. ;_;

But I got very exited while reading Chapter 40 a few months ago, so that’s why I’ll put it up somewhat high, it’s because of the nostalgia factor.

Chapter 41

(35,22,38,10,15,11,17,16, 30,27,21,6,3,9,12,25,40,41,2,13,8,37,1,29,26,23,39,28,20,19,36,14,5,7,33,31,18,32,24,4,34)

Okay, I am ACTUALLY worried that the whole story about Mikey and Abaddon and the Devil thing and the Hand the God thing, that it would create so many plotholes.

But nonetheless, I still like Abaddon’s storyline.