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heya, from ur queue?
[Insane]
00:59:399 (2,3) - doesnt flow well or look good imo
01:01:557 (5) - looks better vertical imo, cuz shape looks similar to 01:00:910 (3) -
01:03:932 (5,1) - being hidden under the slider is kinda difficult so maybe this http://puu.sh/bTgkb/40460ef310.jpg
also (5) is touching the progress bar thing a tiny bit so move it up to be safe if u dont do ^ http://puu.sh/bTgxw/a83b72c1ee.jpg
01:12:133 (3,1) - can blanket?
01:17:744 (5,6,7) - cuz u never stacked earlier i think u should space these too
01:26:593 (5,6,7) - should have more of a circle shape? if u know what i mean lol o3o sth like http://puu.sh/bTh3r/0c7da995c9.jpg
01:33:716 (3) - nc here? o-o
01:36:090 (3) - sliderbody whistle intentional?
01:40:190 (5,1) - overlaps look better when there's more to me o:
01:49:903 (4) - ctrl+g would be kinda nice
01:54:219 (6,1) - idk why this isnt 1 slider when 01:55:946 (1) - is
02:01:342 (1,2,3) - uh, spacing
02:38:032 (3,4) - i think is a bit close too, move 4 to maybe like idk, (164, 284)?
02:39:111 (1,2) - this flow tho . slightly better? http://puu.sh/bThzp/d4799cc75e.jpg
02:48:608 (5,6,7,8) - keep these 2 consistent with the stacking ?
03:06:306 (1,2) - just a suggestion, maybe make these 2 have low spacing and give 03:06:953 (3) - a larger spacing
03:06:953 (3) - nc? i really suggest you emphasize this note more since its the beginning of the kiai and it has that finish hitsound as well if its ur style then i'll stop with the nc's lol , but same goes for 03:20:766 (3) - etc
03:14:291 (4) - this looks bit better to me? http://puu.sh/bThO7/4b76191a97.jpg
03:27:457 (6,1) - same as the 1st kiai
03:43:212 (1) - better flow http://puu.sh/bTi4I/571383957f.jpg
03:46:234 (4) - this one's just personal preference http://puu.sh/bTi6I/1cb3b12735.jpg
04:08:680 (5,1) - curve the 5 more and make 1 straight, creates a nice effect imo http://puu.sh/bTifX/4d0bbff121.jpg
04:19:255 (1,2,3) - can these be somewhat touching at least xD it's really hard compared to the other streams s:
04:33:932 (4,1) - curve 4 more to point at 1? http://puu.sh/bTiul/67678705a5.jpg
05:06:521 (3,4) - personally i think 2 similar looking shapes together look bad
05:13:428 (2,3) - overlap it more? http://puu.sh/bTiHW/def43ff801.jpg
05:19:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - difficulty spike found, make it atleast touching?
05:30:262 (1) - overlap doesnt look good to me
nice, though the only thing i'd disagree with is the ncing but that isnt that big of a problem
yay u's c:
good luck and have fun!~
[Insane]
00:59:399 (2,3) - doesnt flow well or look good imo
01:01:557 (5) - looks better vertical imo, cuz shape looks similar to 01:00:910 (3) -
01:03:932 (5,1) - being hidden under the slider is kinda difficult so maybe this http://puu.sh/bTgkb/40460ef310.jpg
also (5) is touching the progress bar thing a tiny bit so move it up to be safe if u dont do ^ http://puu.sh/bTgxw/a83b72c1ee.jpg
01:12:133 (3,1) - can blanket?
01:17:744 (5,6,7) - cuz u never stacked earlier i think u should space these too
01:26:593 (5,6,7) - should have more of a circle shape? if u know what i mean lol o3o sth like http://puu.sh/bTh3r/0c7da995c9.jpg
01:33:716 (3) - nc here? o-o
01:36:090 (3) - sliderbody whistle intentional?
01:40:190 (5,1) - overlaps look better when there's more to me o:
01:49:903 (4) - ctrl+g would be kinda nice
01:54:219 (6,1) - idk why this isnt 1 slider when 01:55:946 (1) - is
02:01:342 (1,2,3) - uh, spacing
02:38:032 (3,4) - i think is a bit close too, move 4 to maybe like idk, (164, 284)?
02:39:111 (1,2) - this flow tho . slightly better? http://puu.sh/bThzp/d4799cc75e.jpg
02:48:608 (5,6,7,8) - keep these 2 consistent with the stacking ?
03:06:306 (1,2) - just a suggestion, maybe make these 2 have low spacing and give 03:06:953 (3) - a larger spacing
03:06:953 (3) - nc? i really suggest you emphasize this note more since its the beginning of the kiai and it has that finish hitsound as well if its ur style then i'll stop with the nc's lol , but same goes for 03:20:766 (3) - etc
03:14:291 (4) - this looks bit better to me? http://puu.sh/bThO7/4b76191a97.jpg
03:27:457 (6,1) - same as the 1st kiai
03:43:212 (1) - better flow http://puu.sh/bTi4I/571383957f.jpg
03:46:234 (4) - this one's just personal preference http://puu.sh/bTi6I/1cb3b12735.jpg
04:08:680 (5,1) - curve the 5 more and make 1 straight, creates a nice effect imo http://puu.sh/bTifX/4d0bbff121.jpg
04:19:255 (1,2,3) - can these be somewhat touching at least xD it's really hard compared to the other streams s:
04:33:932 (4,1) - curve 4 more to point at 1? http://puu.sh/bTiul/67678705a5.jpg
05:06:521 (3,4) - personally i think 2 similar looking shapes together look bad
05:13:428 (2,3) - overlap it more? http://puu.sh/bTiHW/def43ff801.jpg
05:19:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - difficulty spike found, make it atleast touching?
05:30:262 (1) - overlap doesnt look good to me
nice, though the only thing i'd disagree with is the ncing but that isnt that big of a problem
yay u's c:
good luck and have fun!~
hi m4m 
that's all, good music good map, hope it gets ranked
[insane]
change source to: Love Live! School idol project
00:47:744 (3,4) - these play weird because of ive sliders. the percussion is on sliderend, and vocals don't even fit lol >< here's what i came up with! http://i.imgur.com/uiN6nsA.png
00:48:824 - the drum here wasn't mapped, to, but since it played well i think its fine.
00:59:831 (3,4) - i suggest keeping the 1/4 spacing consistent on sliderends, this way its neater and easier to read. there are more occurrences if you are willing to change it. if you change, you can PM ingame to recheck those parts :3
01:05:874 (1,3) - this is messy blanket.
01:16:665 (2,4) - blanket
01:25:730 (3,4) - ^
01:26:809 (7) - rotate by 15-20 degree to have a better shape with the triplet.
01:33:716 (3) - NC here instead of next? start of kiai
01:44:075 (1,2) - blanket
01:49:471 (2,4) - ^
02:25:298 (1,3) - ^
02:42:133 (5,1) - ^
03:00:694 (5,6) - ^
03:03:500 (9,1,2) - spacing is killer here
i'd drop the spacing between 9 and 1 to help show the incoming 3/4s.
03:06:953 (3) - like the previous NC.
03:11:917 (3,4) - blanket
03:23:140 (4,5) - ^
03:25:514 (7,1,2,3) - rhythm issue again! no vocals but sliders end in drum~ you could remap the rhythm as long as a circle and slider is on the white tick! http://i.imgur.com/VGIudlO.png
03:44:939 - here too with the sliderend on drum+synth: http://i.imgur.com/Xds1zze.png
03:49:795 - 03:50:011 - both have sounds you might wanna do a short stream in the middle of the jumps ^^
04:01:234 (5,6,7) - keep the spacing here neater and more consistent.
04:05:874 (1) - blanket the sliderend with the stream~
04:07:169 (1,2) - bad rhythm, the 3/4 is uncalled for here. this feels much better to play: http://i.imgur.com/mgtFzPP.png
04:18:500 (6,1) - don't get me wrong, i absolutely loved this pattern, but the abrupt direction change + stream spacing change made this jump a little hard to land down. consider reducing distance, slightly of course.
04:19:039 (5) - don't curve this, it looks really cramped as it is!
04:35:011 (3) - same thing about NC and kiai
04:36:953 (2) - bad rhythm slider, didn't follow vocals nor instruments, just replace with 2 circles will do http://i.imgur.com/yT3zYzg.png
04:38:464 (1,2) - blanket
04:39:543 (4,7) - copypaste+rotate these two to maintain consistency since they should look alike but aren't the same!
04:40:190 (7,2) - blanket too
04:41:917 (1,2) - i thought this would be fitting in order to keep with the vocal and instruments ^^ current 3/4 sliders feels slightly out of place: http://i.imgur.com/oTJs4sD.png
04:44:507 (3,4,5,6) - why not follow 04:42:780 (4,5,6,7) vocal beat placement? i felt that 4-5 was low because no vocals, but 5-6-7 had higher DS cuz vocal. if you the spacing pattern it should work nicely for the player \:D/
04:46:449 (5,6) - swap on timeline to follow music better (Specifically vocal and instruments :p)
04:47:960 (6,2) - very nazi but blanket
04:48:824 (3) - nc and kiai thingy
04:50:550 (6) - nc here instead of after?
04:50:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, i suggest this to follow vocals better http://i.imgur.com/NBLEexv.png
05:16:018 (1,3) - blanket
05:27:673 (3,4) - ^
05:33:284 (3) - make this a kick slider that ends at 05:33:716, cuz that's where music ends :p
change source to: Love Live! School idol project
00:47:744 (3,4) - these play weird because of ive sliders. the percussion is on sliderend, and vocals don't even fit lol >< here's what i came up with! http://i.imgur.com/uiN6nsA.png
00:48:824 - the drum here wasn't mapped, to, but since it played well i think its fine.
00:59:831 (3,4) - i suggest keeping the 1/4 spacing consistent on sliderends, this way its neater and easier to read. there are more occurrences if you are willing to change it. if you change, you can PM ingame to recheck those parts :3
01:05:874 (1,3) - this is messy blanket.
01:16:665 (2,4) - blanket
01:25:730 (3,4) - ^
01:26:809 (7) - rotate by 15-20 degree to have a better shape with the triplet.
01:33:716 (3) - NC here instead of next? start of kiai
01:44:075 (1,2) - blanket
01:49:471 (2,4) - ^
02:25:298 (1,3) - ^
02:42:133 (5,1) - ^
03:00:694 (5,6) - ^
03:03:500 (9,1,2) - spacing is killer here
i'd drop the spacing between 9 and 1 to help show the incoming 3/4s.03:06:953 (3) - like the previous NC.
03:11:917 (3,4) - blanket
03:23:140 (4,5) - ^
03:25:514 (7,1,2,3) - rhythm issue again! no vocals but sliders end in drum~ you could remap the rhythm as long as a circle and slider is on the white tick! http://i.imgur.com/VGIudlO.png
03:44:939 - here too with the sliderend on drum+synth: http://i.imgur.com/Xds1zze.png
03:49:795 - 03:50:011 - both have sounds you might wanna do a short stream in the middle of the jumps ^^
04:01:234 (5,6,7) - keep the spacing here neater and more consistent.
04:05:874 (1) - blanket the sliderend with the stream~
04:07:169 (1,2) - bad rhythm, the 3/4 is uncalled for here. this feels much better to play: http://i.imgur.com/mgtFzPP.png
04:18:500 (6,1) - don't get me wrong, i absolutely loved this pattern, but the abrupt direction change + stream spacing change made this jump a little hard to land down. consider reducing distance, slightly of course.
04:19:039 (5) - don't curve this, it looks really cramped as it is!
04:35:011 (3) - same thing about NC and kiai
04:36:953 (2) - bad rhythm slider, didn't follow vocals nor instruments, just replace with 2 circles will do
http://i.imgur.com/yT3zYzg.png
04:38:464 (1,2) - blanket
04:39:543 (4,7) - copypaste+rotate these two to maintain consistency since they should look alike but aren't the same!
04:40:190 (7,2) - blanket too
04:41:917 (1,2) - i thought this would be fitting in order to keep with the vocal and instruments ^^ current 3/4 sliders feels slightly out of place: http://i.imgur.com/oTJs4sD.png
04:44:507 (3,4,5,6) - why not follow 04:42:780 (4,5,6,7) vocal beat placement? i felt that 4-5 was low because no vocals, but 5-6-7 had higher DS cuz vocal. if you the spacing pattern it should work nicely for the player \:D/
04:46:449 (5,6) - swap on timeline to follow music better (Specifically vocal and instruments :p)
04:47:960 (6,2) - very nazi but blanket
04:48:824 (3) - nc and kiai thingy
04:50:550 (6) - nc here instead of after?
04:50:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, i suggest this to follow vocals better
http://i.imgur.com/NBLEexv.png
05:16:018 (1,3) - blanket
05:27:673 (3,4) - ^
05:33:284 (3) - make this a kick slider that ends at 05:33:716, cuz that's where music ends :p
that's all, good music good map, hope it gets ranked
Hi , M4M here
[General]
Why CS4.1? I think cs4 should be better
you can add the character's name and the singers'name into tags
[Insane]
00:06:737 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm will be better
00:10:406 (2,2) - fix blanket
00:17:744 (1,3) - ^
00:47:744 (3,1) - ^
01:16:665 (2,4) - ^
01:37:816 (3,4) - ^
01:38:680 (5,4) - ^
01:41:701 (4,1) - ^
01:49:471 (2,4) - ^
01:54:003 (5,3) - ^
02:11:701 (1,4,5) - ^
02:42:133 (5,1) - ^
03:08:680 (1,4) - ^
04:38:464 (1,2) -
00:26:809 (3,1) - ctrl+shift+R -15°flow will be better
00:31:989 (3) - slow down the sv to about 0.7x will fit the music better imo
00:32:637 (4) - just put it a bit left？
00:35:442 (3) - ctrl+g will fit better imo
00:37:169 (3,4) - ctrl+g to follow the drum rhythm will better imo or you can
put 00:37:385 (4) - farther to 00:37:169 (3) - to fit the music better
00:40:190 (1) - just put this up and right to (167,288) will look better in
editor
00:43:428 (1,4) - can make a blanket
00:46:665 (5) - change to 1/2 slider
01:05:226 (4) - fix stack (110,347)
01:16:018 (7,8,1) - I think it should be filled with five 1/4 circles stream
01:25:730 (3,4) - blanket
01:32:745 (4) - can change to a 1/2 slider cuz there's a long sound in music
03:05:982 (4) - ^
01:33:716 (3) - this fin change to solf sampleset will better
01:33:716 (3,1) - should be a jump here can put it to(344,304)
01:34:363 (3,2) - fix stack
01:45:155 (3) - change to 2 circles will better
01:45:155 (3,1) - it's too near now
01:58:967 (5) - ctrl+g and put 01:59:399 (6) - up and right
02:05:226 (2) - ctrl+g?
02:35:226 (5) - ^
02:40:190 (3,4) - ctrl+g
03:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - can use ctrl+shift+d to make a better pattern
03:17:529 (2,3) - ctrl+g will be more funny imo
03:46:234 (4) - put this a bit up will look better (205,206)
03:53:032 (5) - delete
04:00:047 (7) - change to 1/4 slider?cuz there's a voice at the blue line
04:07:169 (1) - this 3/4 is not suitable here, change to 1/2 and add a note at
04:07:493
04:33:932 (4) - this slider's sv should higher than 04:34:363 (1) -
04:41:054 (2,1) - blanket
04:46:665 (6) - change it to to circles at 04:46:665 and 04:46:881 rhythm will
be better
05:27:673 (3,4) - blanket
GOOD SONG GOOD MAP~GL
[General]
Why CS4.1? I think cs4 should be better
you can add the character's name and the singers'name into tags
[Insane]
00:06:737 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm will be better
00:10:406 (2,2) - fix blanket
00:17:744 (1,3) - ^
00:47:744 (3,1) - ^
01:16:665 (2,4) - ^
01:37:816 (3,4) - ^
01:38:680 (5,4) - ^
01:41:701 (4,1) - ^
01:49:471 (2,4) - ^
01:54:003 (5,3) - ^
02:11:701 (1,4,5) - ^
02:42:133 (5,1) - ^
03:08:680 (1,4) - ^
04:38:464 (1,2) -
00:26:809 (3,1) - ctrl+shift+R -15°flow will be better
00:31:989 (3) - slow down the sv to about 0.7x will fit the music better imo
00:32:637 (4) - just put it a bit left？
00:35:442 (3) - ctrl+g will fit better imo
00:37:169 (3,4) - ctrl+g to follow the drum rhythm will better imo or you can
put 00:37:385 (4) - farther to 00:37:169 (3) - to fit the music better
00:40:190 (1) - just put this up and right to (167,288) will look better in
editor
00:43:428 (1,4) - can make a blanket
00:46:665 (5) - change to 1/2 slider
01:05:226 (4) - fix stack (110,347)
01:16:018 (7,8,1) - I think it should be filled with five 1/4 circles stream
01:25:730 (3,4) - blanket
01:32:745 (4) - can change to a 1/2 slider cuz there's a long sound in music
03:05:982 (4) - ^
01:33:716 (3) - this fin change to solf sampleset will better
01:33:716 (3,1) - should be a jump here can put it to(344,304)
01:34:363 (3,2) - fix stack
01:45:155 (3) - change to 2 circles will better
01:45:155 (3,1) - it's too near now
01:58:967 (5) - ctrl+g and put 01:59:399 (6) - up and right
02:05:226 (2) - ctrl+g?
02:35:226 (5) - ^
02:40:190 (3,4) - ctrl+g
03:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - can use ctrl+shift+d to make a better pattern
03:17:529 (2,3) - ctrl+g will be more funny imo
03:46:234 (4) - put this a bit up will look better (205,206)
03:53:032 (5) - delete
04:00:047 (7) - change to 1/4 slider?cuz there's a voice at the blue line
04:07:169 (1) - this 3/4 is not suitable here, change to 1/2 and add a note at
04:07:493
04:33:932 (4) - this slider's sv should higher than 04:34:363 (1) -
04:41:054 (2,1) - blanket
04:46:665 (6) - change it to to circles at 04:46:665 and 04:46:881 rhythm will
be better
05:27:673 (3,4) - blanket
GOOD SONG GOOD MAP~GL
Hi! m4m
[General]
[General]
- More tags? owo i don't know about this anime so i guess characters and other titles like Love live etc
- cs 4.1 lol
- 00:16:665 (2,3,4) - this sounds overmapped >< (3) doesn't have to do anything with the music.. in that case why 00:16:342 - isn't mapped?
- 00:19:039 (4,5,6) - does it follow vocals right? so, why did you leave 00:21:414 - unmapped? that triple would make more sense if it were mapped i think
- 00:30:694 (3,4,5,6) - these would look much more neater if they were gradually rotated instead of make a big change from 3 to 4
- 00:31:557 (1,2) - I think as a slider may work much better. makes the transition between 00:31:342 (6,1) - less forced and more enjoyable imo
- 00:35:874 (4,5) - try that sound as circles, as you did after. Sliders are not sensitives to that kind of rhythm imo
- 01:16:126 (8,1) - here you can try something different to make a better transition (and others similars parts), maybe following some vocals:
- 01:17:744 (5,6,7) - make it straight to fit the following combo
- 01:26:809 (7) - maybe rotate it like 15° for better flow? owo
- 01:33:932 (1,2) - improve blanket?
- 01:44:075 (1) - the second part of this slider can be more curved for better looking
- 01:45:694 (2) - you don't need it at all. otherwise feel like you missed a note at 01:45:478 - 01:33:608 - 01:42:241 - 01:43:967 - etc but dunno i guess it's fine as you overmapped some others similar places as well
- 01:33:068 (1,2) - you'd usually make this slider 3/4 (?
- 03:23:140 (4,5) - improve blanket?
- 03:44:723 - shouldn't you map this? so 03:43:644 (2,3) - have more sense
- 05:06:521 (3) - try curving to the other way? this flow broke my hand..xd
- 05:33:284 (3) - try extending this slider until 05:33:716 - as the music and vocals stop there(?
- 00:19:471 (6,1) - swap NC? as you NC'd this 00:22:924 (1) - ..
- 00:30:694 (3) - NC ? to continue the thing you did from 00:24:651 -
- 00:53:572 (1,2) - swap NC, (taking 00:41:701 (6,1) - as reference)
- 01:26:593 (5,1) - swap NC. as you've been ncing those triples..
- 01:33:500 (2,1) - these NCs should be swapped as the vocals starts on 2 (and which i guess you're prioritizing here)
- 02:03:500 (1,2) - maybe swap? as you didn't want to keep constancy with 02:02:852 (6) - so why dont you follow the vocals instead(? (unless you want (6) to be nc owo)
- 02:18:607 (7) - NC? to keep that constancy from 02:15:155 (1) -
- 01:29:831 (11,1) - maybe swap NC? and taking it as reference. 03:03:068 (7) - this should be NC, shouldnt it?
- 03:11:485 (1,3) - Swap NC (otherwise other places wouldn't make much sense..)
- 04:39:975 (5,1) - swap nc
- 05:05:011 (3) - this should be NC as you did on other places (03:36:953 (1) - and 02:03:500 (1) - which should be 02:03:716 (2) - )
- 05:16:018 (1,3,1) - owo?
- i also disagree with some others, but they should be just my personal opinion i guess