idk why and how i can be here, but hi xD
from myself.
General:
oooh a good one
why i'm commenting at these again xD
good luck 8Sonic ^^/
edit: here's a star too for you o__o/
found this on AIBAT
AIBat v3.1 wrote: 3b1j10
[General]
Background
bg.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
don't really mind though, but imo you should make its resolution higher since i felt that the bg quality is a bit blurred here (yeah i'm playing fullscreen on 19' LCD lol)
[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:
- [Andrea's Hard] :
Combo1 : 234,186,254
Combo2 : 255,165,121
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,128
- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 234,186,254
Combo2 : 255,165,121
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,128
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 234,186,254
Combo2 : 255,165,121
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,128
- [ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 255,165,121
- [ReySHeL's Taiko Oni] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 255,165,121
- [Verdi's Normal] :
Combo1 : 234,186,254
Combo2 : 255,165,121
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,255,128
dont mind about this since it was the taiko that different xD
General and Metadata
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Andrea's Hard] : 2000
- [Easy] : 0
- [Insane] : 0
- [ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii] : 1985
- [ReySHeL's Taiko Oni] : 1985
- [Verdi's Normal] : 2000
fix the leading pls, just make it same for each diff
Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Andrea's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:820, ends on 00:58:312
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:668, ends on 01:10:515
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:820, ends on 00:58:312
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:668, ends on 01:10:515
- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:820, ends on 00:58:312
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:668, ends on 01:10:515
- [ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:820, ends on 01:21:363
- [ReySHeL's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:820, ends on 01:21:363
- [Verdi's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:820, ends on 00:58:312
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:668, ends on 01:10:515
since the difference lies on the taiko, i guess it will be ok, but imo you should make the kiai time same for all diff, including the other's game mode
Tags
- Consider adding "Verdi" to all of your tags
up to you
[Andrea's Hard]
Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:30:515.
[Easy]
Audio Lead-In
There is only 1363 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:31:363.
[Insane]
Audio Lead-In
There is only 1362 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:31:362.
Snapping
00:52:718 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:53:057 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:53:566 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:54:244 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:55:600 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:108 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:447 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:56:447 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:56:956 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:464 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:803 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:57:803 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:30:515.
[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:30:515.
[Verdi's Normal]
Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:30:515.
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:293 - snap to 01:01:278
from myself.
General:
- raise the volume a bit? yeah the additional hitsound is still hearable though but i feel like the hitnormal sound on this mapset is a bit too blended with the song itself, makes me confused which soound comes from the song and which one from the hitsound itself lol, rasie it a bout 10-15% will be ok i guess
- i see not every diff have video included, since there's a video on this set, imo you should make it available on all diff (the easy and normal one)
- HP/OD/AR - 1? i think use level 3 on easy diff is a bit too high there, but still allowed lol
- 00:13:566 (3) - why no make the beatpattern like this instead? yeah although this one is work well too, but since you seems not make the endslider emphasized enough with the song voice (yeah no hitsound like drum or finish to emphasize that guitar's voice here), so i guess changed to be like this is not a bad thing
this one is following the drum voice instead guitar :3 - 00:17:634 (2,3) - make this straight? dont forget to keep make 00:19:668 (4) - symmetrycal too with previous slider if you agree with me
- 00:28:820 (1,2) - on this part, why not you make the beatpattern into something like this instead? it following the vocal's rhythm pretty well imo
it seems you wanna adding some blank spot here and there to make it easier since this is easy diff, so its up to ya xD - 00:31:193 (1,2) - make them symmetrical each other instead? something like this or 01:05:091 (1,2) -
i think the flow in this one is quite good too - 00:48:481 (2,1) - doesnt seems perfectly blanked imo, why not make that blue slider less curved to make the blanked smoother?
- 00:51:871 (1) - move this right a bit, the flow is kinda cutted from 00:51:532 (3,1) - imo
- 00:56:956 (1,2) - why i feel the spacing here is a bit higher than the next one? although it still using 1,0x xD
- 01:15:939 (1) - make the middlepoint goes to down instead up? better flow imo. Make the slider direction the same as 01:17:295 (2) - or swap them would be nice too
oooh a good one
- all - 1? (except CS, just leave it be)
- 00:16:108 (2,3) - i think this kind of pattern is still hard for a normal player to play, how about just using 1/2 repeat slider here? i think it was better for the pattern on this level
or you can try switch that pattern too, make it start from slider and then note, imo the player will have more preparation to clicking since there's a 1 beat gap between the slider and notes - 00:18:820 (2,3) and 00:21:532 (2,3) - - same as above
- 00:23:396 (3) - remove this note instead? i think that will play better on this part because you're not adding it on the previous pattern (well, still following that drum though so just consider this). Or if you don't mind please lower the volume here a bit since i feel that hitsound on this note is a bit too loud here
- lower the volume on kiai? i'm a bit distracted with the tick voice on this diff before, or maybe you can just make the tick on lower sound because that what makes the soundpattern seems messy here imo (make it to almost silent is better imo since most of the tick seems quite silent than this kiai part)
- HP/OD -1?
- 00:11:532 (2,3) - make this slider less curved? i feel this slider is a bit too curved on this part, making it like this is quite better imo (well im not really a fan with so curving slider, so yeah xD)
maybe this can applied with some of your other 1/2 curved slider too, like 00:12:888 (6,4,1) - , etc, just make it more smooth like what you did on the 1/1 slider like 00:13:905 (2) - - 00:41:363 (9) - move this down-left a bit? or make the direction goes from up to down instead? i think the flow is kinda cutted here from 00:41:193 (8,9) - if you put that slider on this position
- 00:44:583 (7,8) - move this and make the direction to up right instead? this can form a good symmetry pattern from 00:44:244 (5,6,7,8) -
fix the latter pattern if you agree :3 - 00:56:108 (2,3,4,5) - why not make the spacing here same each other? or is this intentional?
- 00:57:973 (7,8,1) - same as above
why i'm commenting at these again xD
- 00:05:430 (1,2) - make this two more curve a bit? feel smoother imo if you do that
- 00:09:498 (1,2,3) - the opposite from what i said a bove, i prefer to make this 3 less curved since you make it into waving pattern here
- 00:19:159 (6) - why not stacked this with 00:18:312 (3) - endslider instead? i think make this into trianglejump pattern is better here since you did it on 00:16:108 (4,5,6) -
- 00:24:413 (1,1) - make these less curved please, to make the blanked between 00:24:413 (1,1,1) - smoother, something like this
- 00:29:668 (4) - move this down-left a bit, doesnt seems symmetrical enough between 00:28:990 (2,3,4) - , around 440,244 would be fine i guess
- 00:40:685 (1,2) - maybe you did this just for cosmetical stuff, but i still prefer to just using 1/2 slider here instead adding that note XD
- 01:01:362 (4,5) - less curved on this two? just make it smoother like what you did on 00:59:668 (1,3,4) - , it feels so good if you did it like that imo
- 01:14:244 (5), 01:17:973 (3) and 01:22:040 (3) - less curved too here, same as above, like 01:22:549 (1,5,6) - XD
good luck 8Sonic ^^/
edit: here's a star too for you o__o/