Kitsuneko wrote: 6k1f27

Hi Hi! (´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ
from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General 6285k

• 
  
  

1. needs one more Taiko Diff.
2. kiaitime do not use? maybe add later >_<
3. Combo Colors 2 and 4 are too similar. yeah thats why i separated them with light blue and dark blue combo xD (and they match with bg oo!)
   
   Please tell me source of BG so cute >w<

because KARORYYYYYYYY >3333<

Easy 4m5wp

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. Okay~

Mapping

1. 02:46:729 (1,2) - I prefer a slider by here~

i think 2 notes fits better >_<

Normal d293k

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. 01:55:354 (2) - Whistle?

Mapping

1. Okay :3

Hard 204o1w

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. 03:53:104 - Useless Green line.

Hitsounding

1. good job

Mapping

1. 00:57:229 (1,1,1) - this NC patterns makes confuse to me. but just suggestion.
   also other same pattern is same as above.

dont have any idea how to make them look better, even if i remove NC from second note it will be the same (2 different color aproach cirles in 1 spot) so it doesnt matter 2 or 3 xD

Insane 1o711v

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. 01:23:760 - Volume 55%? or made 60%

Mapping

1. omg nothing to say from me. Beautiful map.

Hi-Quality... sorry short modding ;_;
＼cRyo moe mapper／ pro mapper!


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

Wolf wrote: 3n437

Hi. Hi hi oo/
From my Modding Queue.
Sorry to have keep you waiting, but I'm here.
Let's go!

General
Looks fine!

Easy
00:47:854 (3,4,5) - Feels kinda hard the sudden change of instruments to vocals here. Try to avoid this. there is no change, pattern following both vocal/instrument, about shifting from white to red ticks i dont think its hard when it following same 1/1 rhytm
01:45:979 (3) - Move a grid down to improve flow. i think current one is better
01:49:354 (4) - Remove NC
01:50:104 (6) - NC
01:51:979 (1) - Remove NC ^ this 3 NC following vocal
02:15:604 (3,1) - Blanket? its not supposed to be blanket

Normal
01:40:541 (5) - NC? Feels nice because it will match with vocals: "One-Two!"
01:45:041 (3) - ^
02:44:104 - Add break.

Hard
02:49:354 (1) - Remoce NC, it will be perfect to match with "Two!" imo. its like 3 words 3 NC notes, if i remove this one previous 1note NC will be weird o_o
02:53:104 (1) - NC? dont like last note NC

Insane
00:24:041 (5) - NC fits good here. short 2notes NC is unnecessary
00:24:041 (5) - ^
Nothing much to add here, nice diff.

Kind of a nazi mod, but well, this map is bubble-ready imo.
Here's a star: Thanks >3</
Good luck!

Verlaren wrote: 1v375o

Hai ~cRyo~ Hi hi o.o/

From Aincrad's Modding queue~

General 6285k

1. KARORYYYYY ♥
2. bg is moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ moe~ Want pick up himself >3<

Easy 4m5wp

1. 00:21:604(1) - remove finish. Does not sound very nice. Even a slightly cut ear. IMO but its perfectly following music, i even think finish in music is even louder >_<
2. 00:43:729 - maybe remove whistle? Does not sound very nice. i think its funny, used it in every diff
3. 00:55:354(2) - remove whistle. i think its fine o:
4. 02:00:229 - this whistle... does not sound very nice. same as before

Normal d293k

1. 00:21:604(1) - remove finish. Does not sound very nice. Even a slightly cut ear. IMO same as easy
2. 00:44:479 - maybe add whistle on slider's end? there is whistle already o.o
3. 02:51:604(3) - this whistle sound is strange. Maybe remove him? sounds fine for me
4. 03:08:104(3) - remove whistle. this one also >.<

Hard 204o1w

1. 00:21:604(1) - remove finish. Does not sound very nice. Even a slightly cut ear. IMO if you remove it you will hear same finish in bgm >_<
2. 00:43:729 - maybe remove whistle? Does not sound very nice. i think it fits

Insane 1o711v

1. AR -1 i like AR9 more o:
2. DR -1? That is much better. i dont think HP7 is high, its not that crazy stream map o:

Good job!

Good luck!

Cirno wrote: 6r353v

49 favs whatthe.. Hi. I chose Normal and Hard since your map is too long and you didn't specify.

[Hard]

1. 00:27:416 (1) - Can't hear whatever you're following, provided that you havn't added any hitsounds to 00:27:510 either, suggest reverting to a simple 1/2 (00:27:416, 00:27:604) added whistle, but didnt change kickslider, triplet sound fits better for me
2. 00:47:479 (4) - To better follow the kicks you may try reduce 1 repeat, move to 00:47:854 and place a circle at 00:47:666 no.....repeat fits better
3. 02:01:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really strange flow here, following the track of 02:00:604 (4) - player would expect to go up. Try the sequence (1,3,2,5,4) idk didnt feel anything strange here
4. 02:03:979 (4) - Same suggestions as 00:47:479 (4) repeat better >_<

[Normal]

1. 00:06:604 (1) - Start at 00:06:229 as in other diffs? (remove 00:06:229 (4) - ) dont want to break current pattern, pre-spinner note wont hurt anyone
2. 00:26:666 (5) - Maybe it's easier for beginners if you end at 00:27:041 its not hard ._.
3. 01:40:541 (5) - Maybe NC for the "one two" as you did in other diffs?
4. 02:23:666 (3,5) - Without these circles the rhythm get better punctuated imo they fits with vocal o:
5. 03:19:166 (3,5) - ^
6. 03:48:416 (6) - Remove clap? i think it sounds finre

That's all, pretty nice map, didn't come up with anything of real significance orz. Good luck~

Hatori-kun wrote: 2s6f5b

This song *o* yes it is *o*


General

1. Easy and Normal have a kiai in 00:32:666-00:33:041, why Hard and Insane don't have a kiai here too?

Easy

1. 01:23:104 (3,4): Maybe put a NC here? ok
2. 02:38:104 (1): Move to x:188 y:256.
3. 02:39:604 (3,4): Same as 01:23:104.
4. 03:35:104 (3,4): ^ i think this 3 NC ^ unnesessary o.o

Normal

1. 01:42:604 (3,4): Imo i think this is better i like current *clicking* :3
   But actual works too.
   
   Normal is great!

Hard

1. 00:57:229 (1,1,1): Seems a bit confuse when stacked, maybe unstack them? i think stacked better o:
2. 01:09:229 (1,1,1): ^
3. 02:13:729 (1,1,1): ^
4. 02:25:729 (1,1,1): ^
5. 02:29:104 (5): NC
6. 02:29:479 (1): Remove NC
7. 02:30:229 (5): NC
8. 02:53:104 (3):^ looks more interesting imo.
9. 03:09:229 (1,1,1): Same as 00:57:229.
10. 03:21:229 (1,1,1): ^
11. 03:42:229 (1,1,1): ^
12. 03:48:229 (1,1,1): ^ changed only 1,1,1 spam, other no change due to self preference

Insane

[list][*]01:26:104 (4): A jump here could be good, NC too. unnesesarry here >_<

This map looks so great! Good Luck for you thanks >3</

-iCo- wrote: 6q186w

Yo! From my modding Queue Yooo!

[General]

why is there no kiai time in the beatmap? Please add it. And preview point is 00:57:604

Overall, very nice song and mapset. Good Luck!

[Easy]

00:23:104 (3) - second dot two grid right for better blanket ok

00:30:604 (1,1) - not perfectly stacked umm they not supposed to be stacked o.o

00:54:979 (1,2,3,4) - looks better if it's symmetrical dont understand, current one fine too

01:00:229 (1) - remove NC

01:00:604 (2) - NC

01:06:229 (1) - Remove NC

01:06:604 (2) - NC changed last 2, first 2 wanted to follow vocal instead downbeat NC

[Normal]

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor...

Nice Diff

[Hard]

Use 1/4 beat snape divisor

00:29:479 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow and jump imo i think current angle better

01:05:104 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle suits better dont understand o.o

01:05:479 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better flow ok

01:10:729 (1,2,3,4,1) - the overlap ruins the perfection of the shape. Consider fixing this dont understand what shape was ruined by overlap o:

02:29:479 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetrical they shouldnt be >_<

[Insane]

Nice Diff

Quiz-chan wrote: f5w4z

Hi~ from my queue Hi hi oo/

[General]
Some unrankabilites in Insane, but they can be fixed quickly.
Besides, Y U NO add KIAI?

[Easy]
00:53:104 (3) - I would really like to see a perfect wave here: ok
00:56:104 (4) - Please don't make this slider soo narrow. its funny >_<!
01:50:104 (3) - I personally don't like the shape, but meh. changed
02:27:604 (3) - Make this a better blanket for the next (1). ok

[Normal]
Nothing to mention here. Really.

[Hard]
02:22:354 (4) - I don't think this wiggled one here doesn't fit at all. Maybe make one or two tight curves, but no more. I, for example, use wiggles when there's a fast and audible sound in the background. i think also fits ._.
02:47:854 (1,1,1) - I think that one NC would be completely enough, since there are fast sliders following which restore the health after that.... "drain section".
03:30:604 (1,2) - These shapes are really not suitable for sliders in general. End of sliders should never overlap the track itself. Or at least not in such a... conspicuous way. changed

[Insane]
HPDR -1? 7/7 is fine, i dont think it needs HP 6, its not so crazy stream map to use HP6 o:
AR -1, because on AR9, even if there are some jumps, the rest just appears too fast for the "speed" in this song and map. ar9 gives better feeling
AIMod says something about unsnapped objects in this diff. Didn't take an in-depth look at it, definitely check that out.

00:02:666 (4) - On slider start and on first repeat, you should set the sampleset to Soft, because the slider represents that rapid snare in the background. But that isn't audible on.... yeah again, slider start and first repeat. dont understand this head/arrow soft stuff, but i tried and didnt like, current one sounds better for me ._.
03:52:166 (1,1,1,2,1) - Remove new combos where possible. Oh yeah, and the last two sliders make a horrible pattern together. Re-arrange this. keep ugly sliders yey

Duh... good luck! thanks!