I think she actually hasn't that many MAT-BAT friends ...UnderminE wrote: 1z4r1y
Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol
She simply learned from mods u,u (good job, lally :3)
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yap.. no bat or mat posted here <.< so u.u nya :foreveralone:HakuNoKaemi wrote: 5x4e5i
I think she actually hasn't that many MAT-BAT friends ...UnderminE wrote: 1z4r1y
Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol
She simply learned from mods u,u (good job, lally :3)
ty haku <3
[Normal]
00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no
00:23:177 (4) - Rendi più aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) -
00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di più.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetrica
01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma più aderente con 01:07:857 (2) -
01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #2
01:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacing
01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #3
01:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?
02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #4
02:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5
[Revy's Hard]
00:17:823 (4,1) - Jump eccessivo per una hard!
00:19:485 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same ^ o-o
00:23:916 (1) - Rendilo simmetrico
00:25:023 (2) - ^
00:25:947 (4,5,6,7) - Altro jump eccessivo per una hard...
00:29:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:732 (3,4) - Rendili simmetrici
00:40:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jump troppo troppo
00:47:548 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici
00:48:286 (3) - Centralo
Da qui non tengo più conto dei jumps, sono davvero troppo difficili per una hard ç-ç Questa diff è paragonabile alle insane di Andrea (insane, appunto!)
01:15:611 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacka
01:18:381 (1,2,3) - Troppo difficile per un'hard
01:21:519 (1,2) - Centra questi sliders
01:30:381 (3) - Rendilo simmetrico
01:31:674 (4) - 1 square to left nella griglia
01:37:766 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici
01:40:536 (7) - Stacka
01:48:844 (4) - Simmetrizza
01:50:321 (7) - Same
02:18:754 (1,2) - Spostali di un quadrato verso destra nella griglia
02:30:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Troppo difficile per un'hard
02:38:509 (7,8,9) - Distanziali di più da 02:37:585 (6) - , basterebbe anche un reflect horizontally
02:42:755 (3) - Simmetrizza
02:50:140 (2,1) - Simmetrizza
02:52:171 (3,4) - ^
02:57:895 (2,3,4,5,1) - Simmetrizza il tutto
03:01:218 (3) - Simmetria
03:02:695 (6) - ^
03:04:172 (8) - ^
Troppi jump troppo difficili per una hard diff... a questo punto ti consiglierei di rinominarla in Revy's Insane, ma hard proprio non mi sembra...
Trovo comunque una pessima idea utilizzare una grid level 1 in una hard, soprattutto quando la mappa è simmetrica
[Insane]
00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) -
00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) -
00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) -
00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka meglio
00:24:470 (4) - stacka
00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no
00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le forme
00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzerei
00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) -
00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) -
01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto meglio
01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tutto
01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perchè io lo sposterei proprio da li
01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) -
01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non è simmetrico
01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto
02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da li
02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei più aderenti gli sliders qui
02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing
02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangolo
Sono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perchè non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappa
Il ritmo è fantastico, è davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa è davvero divertente
Mi piace, buona fortuna col rank
00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no
00:23:177 (4) - Rendi più aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) -
00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di più.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetrica
01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma più aderente con 01:07:857 (2) -
01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #2
01:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacing
01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #3
01:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?
02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #4
02:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5
[Revy's Hard]
00:17:823 (4,1) - Jump eccessivo per una hard!
00:19:485 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same ^ o-o
00:23:916 (1) - Rendilo simmetrico
00:25:023 (2) - ^
00:25:947 (4,5,6,7) - Altro jump eccessivo per una hard...
00:29:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:732 (3,4) - Rendili simmetrici
00:40:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jump troppo troppo
00:47:548 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici
00:48:286 (3) - Centralo
Da qui non tengo più conto dei jumps, sono davvero troppo difficili per una hard ç-ç Questa diff è paragonabile alle insane di Andrea (insane, appunto!)
01:15:611 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacka
01:18:381 (1,2,3) - Troppo difficile per un'hard
01:21:519 (1,2) - Centra questi sliders
01:30:381 (3) - Rendilo simmetrico
01:31:674 (4) - 1 square to left nella griglia
01:37:766 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici
01:40:536 (7) - Stacka
01:48:844 (4) - Simmetrizza
01:50:321 (7) - Same
02:18:754 (1,2) - Spostali di un quadrato verso destra nella griglia
02:30:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Troppo difficile per un'hard
02:38:509 (7,8,9) - Distanziali di più da 02:37:585 (6) - , basterebbe anche un reflect horizontally
02:42:755 (3) - Simmetrizza
02:50:140 (2,1) - Simmetrizza
02:52:171 (3,4) - ^
02:57:895 (2,3,4,5,1) - Simmetrizza il tutto
03:01:218 (3) - Simmetria
03:02:695 (6) - ^
03:04:172 (8) - ^
Troppi jump troppo difficili per una hard diff... a questo punto ti consiglierei di rinominarla in Revy's Insane, ma hard proprio non mi sembra...
Trovo comunque una pessima idea utilizzare una grid level 1 in una hard, soprattutto quando la mappa è simmetrica
[Insane]
00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) -
00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) -
00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) -
00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka meglio
00:24:470 (4) - stacka
00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no
00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le forme
00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzerei
00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) -
00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) -
01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto meglio
01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tutto
01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perchè io lo sposterei proprio da li
01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) -
01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non è simmetrico
01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto
02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da li
02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei più aderenti gli sliders qui
02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing
02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangolo
Sono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perchè non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappa
Il ritmo è fantastico, è davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa è davvero divertente
Mi piace, buona fortuna col rank
grazie mille nemis per la mod *-* <3Nemis wrote: 4aj27
[Normal]
00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no lo lascio mi piace :3
00:23:177 (4) - Rendi più aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) - ok
00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di più.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetricaok
01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma più aderente con 01:07:857 (2) - ok
01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #2 lo lascio mi piace :3 #2
01:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacingok
01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #3 lo lascio mi piace :3 #3
01:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?messi slider
02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #4 lo lascio mi piace :3 #4
02:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacingok
02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5 lo lascio mi piace :3 #5
[Insane] sperro di aver stalkato meglio le cose QWQ
00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) -ok
00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) - ok
00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) - ok
00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka megliook
00:24:470 (4) - stackaok
00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o nolo lascio mi piace :3
00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le formeok
00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzereiok
00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) - ok
00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) - ok
01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto megliook
01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tuttook
01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perchè io lo sposterei proprio da li a me piace molto invece :3 quindi non lo tolgo :V
01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) - ok
01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non è simmetricook
01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto
02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da liok
02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei più aderenti gli sliders quiok
02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacingok
02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangolook
Sono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perchè non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappa
Il ritmo è fantastico, è davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa è davvero divertente
update
waiting for Revy :V
Sorpresa! Lo farò pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano! 
[General]
Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread
[Normal]
00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465917
01:55:860 (1) - add a repeat? The 1/2 slider alone feels awkward but the repeated slider should feel "right" for beginners
02:22:077 (1,2) - (2) is 1/2 late for a vocal follow and this seems to be the main concept of this map. To achieve a much better vocal follow you can replace (1,2) with a 1x repeat slider that turns on the vocals @02:22:631 - : http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465906 (ignore the note placement - you'll have to adjust the spacing yourself)
02:55:310 (1,2,3) - try to place thise while holding shift (with gridsnap) to get them in one line, or hold ctrl if you don't use grid snapping.
Hitsounding:
A few places to add whistles:
00:17:269 (3) - add a whistle on the beginning of the slider (only select the starting circle twice, until it appears red)
00:18:746 (1) - whistle
00:20:223 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:21:700 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:23:177 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:24:654 (1) - whistle on beginning
See the pattern? For this part of the song and the later parts were this is simply repeated you can add those whistles on the middle white tick of every bar if you think it fits.
00:28:347 (1) - add a finish to the beginning of the slider, remove it from the slider body.
Personally I don't mind the finish spamming in the KIAI but it might get you in trouble later (most ppl don't like it). You could use soft finishes instead or look for a less impactful custom finish to use.
01:42:936 (1) - add whistle to ending point
01:46:628 (3) - add whistle
01:54:383 (2) - and 02:00:291 (1) - don't use whistles on red ticks >< they will always appear off-beat except for very rare cases of 1/2 repeated ones. You can use a whistle on the ending point (middle white tick in the bar)
01:55:491 (4) - maybe remove this whistle...seems too spammy
01:57:337 (3) - use whistle only on ending point and remove it from the body
01:58:445 (5) - again maybe remove this whistle
01:58:814 (1) - whistle on ending?
[Revy's Hard]
00:25:023 (2,3) - 2 notes at the same time...how can this go unnoticed?
02:13:215 (6,1,2) - spacing between those 3 notes makes no sense at all. If you go for a jump here at least keep it consistent for before and after 02:13:584 (1) -
02:57:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - take the whole combo and move it to the center, then fix the allignment of 02:58:448 (4), remove (5) and replace it with a copy of (3) which you ctrl+h and ctrl+g :http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/466003
At first I thought "what the hell is with this spacing???" but after some time I got the concept. The spacing is not messed up if you take this map as a whole. It is a pretty unique approach to mapping. Much copy paste with minor changes but it still feels like a thought-out concept. It might not please everyone but whatever. I don't have to "like" this map but I DO like when mappers try something unique. And that you did. Overall not bad for a unique concept!
[Insane]
AR-1, AR9 is so weird for this kind of mapping style
Overall note placement can be improved. Many notes that seem like they should be in a straight line are a bit off. If you hold shift while moving them you can snap them in a perfect line. Just go through the whole map and look what you can fix (also keep in mind to NOT mess up the spacing)
01:07:488 (5) - remove NC here
01:39:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels unintuitive. Maybe go for something more flowing without stacking following notes, like this:
Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!
This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~
[General]
Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread
[Normal]
00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465917
01:55:860 (1) - add a repeat? The 1/2 slider alone feels awkward but the repeated slider should feel "right" for beginners
02:22:077 (1,2) - (2) is 1/2 late for a vocal follow and this seems to be the main concept of this map. To achieve a much better vocal follow you can replace (1,2) with a 1x repeat slider that turns on the vocals @02:22:631 - : http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465906 (ignore the note placement - you'll have to adjust the spacing yourself)
02:55:310 (1,2,3) - try to place thise while holding shift (with gridsnap) to get them in one line, or hold ctrl if you don't use grid snapping.
Hitsounding:
A few places to add whistles:
00:17:269 (3) - add a whistle on the beginning of the slider (only select the starting circle twice, until it appears red)
00:18:746 (1) - whistle
00:20:223 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:21:700 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:23:177 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:24:654 (1) - whistle on beginning
See the pattern? For this part of the song and the later parts were this is simply repeated you can add those whistles on the middle white tick of every bar if you think it fits.
00:28:347 (1) - add a finish to the beginning of the slider, remove it from the slider body.
Personally I don't mind the finish spamming in the KIAI but it might get you in trouble later (most ppl don't like it). You could use soft finishes instead or look for a less impactful custom finish to use.
01:42:936 (1) - add whistle to ending point
01:46:628 (3) - add whistle
01:54:383 (2) - and 02:00:291 (1) - don't use whistles on red ticks >< they will always appear off-beat except for very rare cases of 1/2 repeated ones. You can use a whistle on the ending point (middle white tick in the bar)
01:55:491 (4) - maybe remove this whistle...seems too spammy
01:57:337 (3) - use whistle only on ending point and remove it from the body
01:58:445 (5) - again maybe remove this whistle
01:58:814 (1) - whistle on ending?
[Revy's Hard]
00:25:023 (2,3) - 2 notes at the same time...how can this go unnoticed?
02:13:215 (6,1,2) - spacing between those 3 notes makes no sense at all. If you go for a jump here at least keep it consistent for before and after 02:13:584 (1) -
02:57:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - take the whole combo and move it to the center, then fix the allignment of 02:58:448 (4), remove (5) and replace it with a copy of (3) which you ctrl+h and ctrl+g :http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/466003
At first I thought "what the hell is with this spacing???" but after some time I got the concept. The spacing is not messed up if you take this map as a whole. It is a pretty unique approach to mapping. Much copy paste with minor changes but it still feels like a thought-out concept. It might not please everyone but whatever. I don't have to "like" this map but I DO like when mappers try something unique. And that you did. Overall not bad for a unique concept!
[Insane]
AR-1, AR9 is so weird for this kind of mapping style
Overall note placement can be improved. Many notes that seem like they should be in a straight line are a bit off. If you hold shift while moving them you can snap them in a perfect line. Just go through the whole map and look what you can fix (also keep in mind to NOT mess up the spacing)
01:07:488 (5) - remove NC here
01:39:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels unintuitive. Maybe go for something more flowing without stacking following notes, like this:
256,144,99797,5,0,0:0:002:04:353 (1,1,1,1) - just pair them in (1,2) combos: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465996
316,212,99982,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100167,1,0,0:0:0
196,212,100351,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100536,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,100720,1,2,0:0:0
256,144,101090,1,4,0:0:0
Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!
This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~
ty for your mod :3 i'll fix all later :3p3n wrote: pi68
Sorpresa! Lo farò pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano!
LOOOL X)
Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!
glad to hear it :3
This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~
edit:
p3n mod
p3n wrote: pi68
Sorpresa! Lo farò pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano!
es wehre besser gewesen eine german mod zu haben hatte ich besser verstanden Q_Q
[General]
Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread
*coff* *coff* stuf like this then? http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/22201 i don't think i need a easy :S
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00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465917added the sliders
01:55:860 (1) - add a repeat? The 1/2 slider alone feels awkward but the repeated slider should feel "right" for beginnersfixed in the other update :3
02:22:077 (1,2) - (2) is 1/2 late for a vocal follow and this seems to be the main concept of this map. To achieve a much better vocal follow you can replace (1,2) with a 1x repeat slider that turns on the vocals @02:22:631 - : http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465906 (ignore the note placement - you'll have to adjust the spacing yourself)done
02:55:310 (1,2,3) - try to place thise while holding shift (with gridsnap) to get them in one line, or hold ctrl if you don't use grid snapping.
yap done
Hitsounding:i have much to work on hitsounds T_T i'll work tomorrow on it better
A few places to add whistles:
00:17:269 (3) - add a whistle on the beginning of the slider (only select the starting circle twice, until it appears red)
00:18:746 (1) - whistle
00:20:223 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:21:700 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:23:177 (4) - whistle on beginning
00:24:654 (1) - whistle on beginningbis hier alles gemacht
See the pattern? For this part of the song and the later parts were this is simply repeated you can add those whistles on the middle white tick of every bar if you think it fits.
00:28:347 (1) - add a finish to the beginning of the slider, remove it from the slider body.
Personally I don't mind the finish spamming in the KIAI but it might get you in trouble later (most ppl don't like it). You could use soft finishes instead or look for a less impactful custom finish to use.
01:42:936 (1) - add whistle to ending point
01:46:628 (3) - add whistle
01:54:383 (2) - and 02:00:291 (1) - don't use whistles on red ticks >< they will always appear off-beat except for very rare cases of 1/2 repeated ones. You can use a whistle on the ending point (middle white tick in the bar)
01:55:491 (4) - maybe remove this whistle...seems too spammy
01:57:337 (3) - use whistle only on ending point and remove it from the body
01:58:445 (5) - again maybe remove this whistle
01:58:814 (1) - whistle on ending?
[Insane]
AR-1, AR9 is so weird for this kind of mapping style
hmm i dunno i think is actually good :X
Overall note placement can be improved. Many notes that seem like they should be in a straight line are a bit off. If you hold shift while moving them you can snap them in a perfect line. Just go through the whole map and look what you can fix (also keep in mind to NOT mess up the spacing)
01:07:488 (5) - remove NC hereyap
01:39:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels unintuitive. Maybe go for something more flowing without stacking following notes, like this: ok
256,144,99797,5,0,0:0:002:04:353 (1,1,1,1) - just pair them in (1,2) combos: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/465996ok
316,212,99982,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100167,1,0,0:0:0
196,212,100351,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,100536,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,100720,1,2,0:0:0
256,144,101090,1,4,0:0:0
Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges ("unique" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!
\( ^ u ^ )/ pro and ty :3
This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).
OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~
08:44 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4,5,6) - rendile piu occhiabili
08:45 GoOoM: sembrano note messe random
08:45 GoOoM: (è l'insane)
08:46 Lally: ah aspetta
08:46 GoOoM: quelle 3 note
08:46 GoOoM: sembrano messe random
08:47 Lally: sulla 03:04:910 (6) - non ci sono problemi perche fa da blanket allo slider
08:47 Lally: ma su 03:04:356 (4,5) - si ci faccio un pensierino
08:48 Lally: faccio un quadrato
08:48 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1g9VX
08:48 GoOoM: cosi sembra carino
08:49 GoOoM: poi scegli tu ^^
08:49 Lally: si e vero è carino
08:50 Lally: faro http://puu.sh/1g9Yd
08:50 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4) - 318 270
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:541 (5) - 192 256
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:726 (6) - 212 132
08:53 Lally: la 6 non la sposto
08:53 GoOoM: 00:22:808 (3) - spostalo un pochetino verso destra in modo che sia centrale tra i 2 slidder 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:53 GoOoM: 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:54 Lally: gia fixato poco fa con la mod di nemis
08:54 GoOoM: ook ^^
08:54 GoOoM: nn le ho lette le mod ^^
08:55 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:56 GoOoM: probblema nello spacing
08:56 Lally: ok ora fixo
08:56 GoOoM: avicina queste 2
08:56 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:57 Lally: si si fixato
08:57 GoOoM: 01:55:860 (1) - qui puoi far ripetere lo slidder
08:57 GoOoM: cioe... nn so bene come si dice...
08:57 GoOoM: quando torna "indietro" sorry per la mia ignoranza
08:58 Lally: quello no non li è uno slider a 1/4 che segue la musica se noti
08:59 GoOoM: mmm.. se noti...
08:59 GoOoM: c'e una nota
08:59 GoOoM: deversa dalle altre 2
08:59 GoOoM: ma comunque c'e
08:59 Lally: cioè?
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gaaU
09:00 GoOoM: io mi ritrovo questo
09:00 GoOoM: e a me suona male
09:00 Lally: hmm ora guardo se ci sta meglio uno slider a recversearrow
09:00 Lally: slider a 1/4 si chiama ò3ò
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gabI
09:01 GoOoM: suona melto meglio se lo fai così
09:01 GoOoM: sisisisi
09:01 GoOoM: ecco
09:01 GoOoM: lo slidder reversaiefhghrujhnbdjssdf
09:01 GoOoM: devi fare quello
09:01 Lally: si suona meglio lo slider a reverse arrow hai ragione o3o
09:01 GoOoM: come ho fatto nel push
09:03 GoOoM: 02:42:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
09:03 GoOoM: senza fantasia?? XD
09:03 GoOoM: sono un po monotoni
09:04 GoOoM: in alcune song stanno bene... ma da player nn mi aspetterei questo stile in una canzone del genere
09:04 Lally: veramente a me piace la simmetria
09:04 GoOoM: mmm.. nn fa nulla sono gusti ^^
09:04 Lally: infatti
09:05 GoOoM: comunque... in generale è fatta molto bene...
09:05 Lally: ty
08:45 GoOoM: sembrano note messe random
08:45 GoOoM: (è l'insane)
08:46 Lally: ah aspetta
08:46 GoOoM: quelle 3 note
08:46 GoOoM: sembrano messe random
08:47 Lally: sulla 03:04:910 (6) - non ci sono problemi perche fa da blanket allo slider
08:47 Lally: ma su 03:04:356 (4,5) - si ci faccio un pensierino
08:48 Lally: faccio un quadrato
08:48 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1g9VX
08:48 GoOoM: cosi sembra carino
08:49 GoOoM: poi scegli tu ^^
08:49 Lally: si e vero è carino
08:50 Lally: faro http://puu.sh/1g9Yd
08:50 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4) - 318 270
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:541 (5) - 192 256
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:726 (6) - 212 132
08:53 Lally: la 6 non la sposto
08:53 GoOoM: 00:22:808 (3) - spostalo un pochetino verso destra in modo che sia centrale tra i 2 slidder 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:53 GoOoM: 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:54 Lally: gia fixato poco fa con la mod di nemis
08:54 GoOoM: ook ^^
08:54 GoOoM: nn le ho lette le mod ^^
08:55 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:56 GoOoM: probblema nello spacing
08:56 Lally: ok ora fixo
08:56 GoOoM: avicina queste 2
08:56 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:57 Lally: si si fixato
08:57 GoOoM: 01:55:860 (1) - qui puoi far ripetere lo slidder
08:57 GoOoM: cioe... nn so bene come si dice...
08:57 GoOoM: quando torna "indietro" sorry per la mia ignoranza
08:58 Lally: quello no non li è uno slider a 1/4 che segue la musica se noti
08:59 GoOoM: mmm.. se noti...
08:59 GoOoM: c'e una nota
08:59 GoOoM: deversa dalle altre 2
08:59 GoOoM: ma comunque c'e
08:59 Lally: cioè?
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gaaU
09:00 GoOoM: io mi ritrovo questo
09:00 GoOoM: e a me suona male
09:00 Lally: hmm ora guardo se ci sta meglio uno slider a recversearrow
09:00 Lally: slider a 1/4 si chiama ò3ò
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gabI
09:01 GoOoM: suona melto meglio se lo fai così
09:01 GoOoM: sisisisi
09:01 GoOoM: ecco
09:01 GoOoM: lo slidder reversaiefhghrujhnbdjssdf
09:01 GoOoM: devi fare quello
09:01 Lally: si suona meglio lo slider a reverse arrow hai ragione o3o
09:01 GoOoM: come ho fatto nel push
09:03 GoOoM: 02:42:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
09:03 GoOoM: senza fantasia?? XD
09:03 GoOoM: sono un po monotoni
09:04 GoOoM: in alcune song stanno bene... ma da player nn mi aspetterei questo stile in una canzone del genere
09:04 Lally: veramente a me piace la simmetria
09:04 GoOoM: mmm.. nn fa nulla sono gusti ^^
09:04 Lally: infatti
09:05 GoOoM: comunque... in generale è fatta molto bene...
09:05 Lally: ty
Hmm i dunnoOnosakiHito wrote: 1h4bn
Hey Lally,
do you would like to have a Taiko diff. as well?
The taiko is allready tuto completo. lol
darf ich die erst sehen? > u <)//
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GoOoM
GoOoM wrote: 6v4x3
08:44 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4,5,6) - rendile piu occhiabili
08:45 GoOoM: sembrano note messe random
08:45 GoOoM: (è l'insane)
08:46 Lally: ah aspetta
08:46 GoOoM: quelle 3 note
08:46 GoOoM: sembrano messe random
08:47 Lally: sulla 03:04:910 (6) - non ci sono problemi perche fa da blanket allo slider
08:47 Lally: ma su 03:04:356 (4,5) - si ci faccio un pensierino
08:48 Lally: faccio un quadrato
08:48 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1g9VX
08:48 GoOoM: cosi sembra carino
08:49 GoOoM: poi scegli tu ^^
08:49 Lally: si e vero è carino
08:50 Lally: faro http://puu.sh/1g9Yd
08:50 GoOoM: 03:04:356 (4) - 318 270
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:541 (5) - 192 256
08:51 GoOoM: 03:04:726 (6) - 212 132
08:53 Lally: la 6 non la sposto
08:53 GoOoM: 00:22:808 (3) - spostalo un pochetino verso destra in modo che sia centrale tra i 2 slidder 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:53 GoOoM: 00:21:700 (1,4) -
08:54 Lally: gia fixato poco fa con la mod di nemis
08:54 GoOoM: ook ^^
08:54 GoOoM: nn le ho lette le mod ^^
08:55 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:56 GoOoM: probblema nello spacing
08:56 Lally: ok ora fixo
08:56 GoOoM: avicina queste 2
08:56 GoOoM: 01:48:844 (1,2,3) -
08:57 Lally: si si fixato
08:57 GoOoM: 01:55:860 (1) - qui puoi far ripetere lo slidder
08:57 GoOoM: cioe... nn so bene come si dice...
08:57 GoOoM: quando torna "indietro" sorry per la mia ignoranza
08:58 Lally: quello no non li è uno slider a 1/4 che segue la musica se noti
08:59 GoOoM: mmm.. se noti...
08:59 GoOoM: c'e una nota
08:59 GoOoM: deversa dalle altre 2
08:59 GoOoM: ma comunque c'e
08:59 Lally: cioè?
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gaaU
09:00 GoOoM: io mi ritrovo questo
09:00 GoOoM: e a me suona male
09:00 Lally: hmm ora guardo se ci sta meglio uno slider a recversearrow
09:00 Lally: slider a 1/4 si chiama ò3ò
09:00 GoOoM: http://puu.sh/1gabI
09:01 GoOoM: suona melto meglio se lo fai così
09:01 GoOoM: sisisisi
09:01 GoOoM: ecco
09:01 GoOoM: lo slidder reversaiefhghrujhnbdjssdf
09:01 GoOoM: devi fare quello
09:01 Lally: si suona meglio lo slider a reverse arrow hai ragione o3o
09:01 GoOoM: come ho fatto nel push
09:03 GoOoM: 02:42:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
09:03 GoOoM: senza fantasia?? XD
09:03 GoOoM: sono un po monotoni
09:04 GoOoM: in alcune song stanno bene... ma da player nn mi aspetterei questo stile in una canzone del genere
09:04 Lally: veramente a me piace la simmetria
09:04 GoOoM: mmm.. nn fa nulla sono gusti ^^
09:04 Lally: infatti
09:05 GoOoM: comunque... in generale è fatta molto bene...
09:05 Lally: ty
grazie per la mod (btw baka o3o la nostra grammatica è la migliore) ^-^)/
Update
waiting for revy..
Sorry if i am in late , i was busy in those days
00:25:762 , Sorry for this but my editor bugged and i don't know why a circle is there...
btw , i fixed something... http://puu.sh/1gv2N thanks to everyone but im not good with the symmetry things , so, sorry if i mistake something..
00:25:762 , Sorry for this but my editor bugged and i don't know why a circle is there...
btw , i fixed something... http://puu.sh/1gv2N thanks to everyone but im not good with the symmetry things , so, sorry if i mistake something..
andRevy wrote: f6i11
Sorry if i am in late , i was busy in those days
00:25:762 , Sorry for this but my editor bugged and i don't know why a circle is there...
btw , i fixed something... http://puu.sh/1gv2N thanks to everyone but im not good with the symmetry things , so, sorry if i mistake something..
update \:D/
Si ma certe modifiche non mi piacciono , e non vedo problemi di spacing D:Nemis wrote: 4aj27
Revy certo però che se modifichi tipo 1/597548739483 delle cose moddate la mappa non migliora più di tanto.. ci sono davvero troppe imperfezioni
Scusate il doppiopost ma sono abituato a scrivere su altre piattaforme °>° Di solito il doppiopost viene unito se ha una distanza breve
small irc mod =w=//
20:37 Lally: can you mod this? çWç
20:37 *Lally is listening to [http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix)]
20:37 Sekai-nyan: irc mod maybe
20:37 Lally: ok :3
20:37 Sekai-nyan: dling :3
20:37 Lally: \:D/
20:38 *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
20:38 Sekai-nyan: o3o
20:38 Lally: uguu
20:38 Lally: btw i need to fix hitsound good = 3 =
20:39 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:008 (4) - this can you make it lined with other slider
20:39 Sekai-nyan: it'll better
20:39 Sekai-nyan: and dont forget spacing
20:39 Lally: yap sure
20:40 Lally: ok fixed
20:41 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:746 (1) - remove whistle?
20:41 Lally: yap
20:41 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:44 Sekai-nyan: your hitsounds are good
20:44 Sekai-nyan: not that bad to me
20:44 Sekai-nyan: o.o
20:45 Lally: insane are not so good çWç
20:45 Sekai-nyan: 00:46:071 (2) - maybe change it like this http://puu.sh/1gP1Q ?
20:47 Lally: yap fixed
20:47 Sekai-nyan: then copy it and past it here 00:48:286 (4) -
20:47 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:47 Sekai-nyan: pest it*
20:47 Sekai-nyan: orz w/e to the typos lol
20:48 Lally: good idea :3
20:50 Sekai-nyan: maybe change this 01:11:180 (2) - like this http://puu.sh/1gP8i
20:51 Sekai-nyan: double sliders?
20:52 Lally: yap sounds better
20:53 Sekai-nyan: 01:17:088 (4) - why this whistles D:
20:54 Lally: sounds weird @@ i remove it
20:56 Sekai-nyan: 01:21:519 (1) - since you added a nc on this better stick it on the slider
20:56 Sekai-nyan: o.o maybe
20:56 Lally: uh yap
20:57 Sekai-nyan: 01:30:381 - this kiai maybe use some curved sliders stright once might get boring
20:59 Lally: ok i try to fix
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:34:631 (1) - remove nc
21:01 Lally: yap
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:46:448 (3) - change this slider to curver one?
21:02 Sekai-nyan: and that's for normal :3
21:03 Lally: yap i'll cange it later must fing a good form o3o:3
21:03 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:03 Sekai-nyan: sure
21:04 Lally: revy's hard emh maybe post the mod in the forum for this ^^
21:04 Lally: diff*
21:04 Sekai-nyan: lol i can't hear anything on insane's hitsounds
21:05 Lally: lol :S
21:06 Sekai-nyan: 00:16:623 - change this green timing point to N:C1
21:06 Sekai-nyan: change volume to 69% too
21:07 Lally: yap i had some problems yesterday with it
21:07 Sekai-nyan: orz
21:08 Lally: oh got... why why why
21:09 Lally: fixed all for 2dn time @@
21:09 Sekai-nyan: :3
21:10 Sekai-nyan: maybe submit so i can check
21:10 Lally: ok brb submit
21:10 Sekai-nyan: sure :3
21:11 Lally: ok done :3 update
21:12 Lally: fuu wtf normal again 3.1 stars =_= uffiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih
21:12 Sekai-nyan: btw
21:12 Sekai-nyan: if you want easy diff
21:12 Sekai-nyan: ask Bakari since he likes nightcore
21:12 Sekai-nyan: xD
21:13 Lally: i asked some weeks ago but he was busy o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: he's baka yeah
21:15 Lally: uguu o3o
21:16 Sekai-nyan: your insane is good
21:16 Sekai-nyan: o.o
21:16 Lally: :D ty \( > u < )/
21:17 Sekai-nyan: nothing much to say yeah ><
ci sono troppi jump come ti ho detto prima :XRevy wrote: f6i11
Si ma certe modifiche non mi piacciono , e non vedo problemi di spacing D:Nemis wrote: 4aj27
Revy certo però che se modifichi tipo 1/597548739483 delle cose moddate la mappa non migliora più di tanto.. ci sono davvero troppe imperfezioni
Scusate il doppiopost ma sono abituato a scrivere su altre piattaforme °>° Di solito il doppiopost viene unito se ha una distanza breve
ty moe moe <3Sekai-nyan wrote: 2x5j4k
small irc mod =w=//20:37 Lally: can you mod this? çWç
20:37 *Lally is listening to [http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix)]
20:37 Sekai-nyan: irc mod maybe
20:37 Lally: ok :3
20:37 Sekai-nyan: dling :3
20:37 Lally: \:D/
20:38 *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/b/179690 Eiffel 65 - Move Your Body (Nightcore Mix) [Normal]]
20:38 Sekai-nyan: o3o
20:38 Lally: uguu
20:38 Lally: btw i need to fix hitsound good = 3 =
20:39 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:008 (4) - this can you make it lined with other slider
20:39 Sekai-nyan: it'll better
20:39 Sekai-nyan: and dont forget spacing
20:39 Lally: yap sure
20:40 Lally: ok fixed
20:41 Sekai-nyan: 00:18:746 (1) - remove whistle?
20:41 Lally: yap
20:41 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:44 Sekai-nyan: your hitsounds are good
20:44 Sekai-nyan: not that bad to me
20:44 Sekai-nyan: o.o
20:45 Lally: insane are not so good çWç
20:45 Sekai-nyan: 00:46:071 (2) - maybe change it like this http://puu.sh/1gP1Q ?
20:47 Lally: yap fixed
20:47 Sekai-nyan: then copy it and past it here 00:48:286 (4) -
20:47 Sekai-nyan: :3
20:47 Sekai-nyan: pest it*
20:47 Sekai-nyan: orz w/e to the typos lol
20:48 Lally: good idea :3
20:50 Sekai-nyan: maybe change this 01:11:180 (2) - like this http://puu.sh/1gP8i
20:51 Sekai-nyan: double sliders?
20:52 Lally: yap sounds better
20:53 Sekai-nyan: 01:17:088 (4) - why this whistles D:
20:54 Lally: sounds weird @@ i remove it
20:56 Sekai-nyan: 01:21:519 (1) - since you added a nc on this better stick it on the slider
20:56 Sekai-nyan: o.o maybe
20:56 Lally: uh yap
20:57 Sekai-nyan: 01:30:381 - this kiai maybe use some curved sliders stright once might get boring
20:59 Lally: ok i try to fix
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:34:631 (1) - remove nc
21:01 Lally: yap
21:01 Sekai-nyan: 02:46:448 (3) - change this slider to curver one?
21:02 Sekai-nyan: and that's for normal :3
21:03 Lally: yap i'll cange it later must fing a good form o3o:3
21:03 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:03 Sekai-nyan: sure
21:04 Lally: revy's hard emh maybe post the mod in the forum for this ^^
21:04 Lally: diff*
21:04 Sekai-nyan: lol i can't hear anything on insane's hitsounds
21:05 Lally: lol :S
21:06 Sekai-nyan: 00:16:623 - change this green timing point to N:C1
21:06 Sekai-nyan: change volume to 69% too
21:07 Lally: yap i had some problems yesterday with it
21:07 Sekai-nyan: orz
21:08 Lally: oh got... why why why
21:09 Lally: fixed all for 2dn time @@
21:09 Sekai-nyan: :3
21:10 Sekai-nyan: maybe submit so i can check
21:10 Lally: ok brb submit
21:10 Sekai-nyan: sure :3
21:11 Lally: ok done :3 update
21:12 Lally: fuu wtf normal again 3.1 stars =_= uffiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih
21:12 Sekai-nyan: btw
21:12 Sekai-nyan: if you want easy diff
21:12 Sekai-nyan: ask Bakari since he likes nightcore
21:12 Sekai-nyan: xD
21:13 Lally: i asked some weeks ago but he was busy o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: o3o
21:13 Sekai-nyan: he's baka yeah
21:15 Lally: uguu o3o
21:16 Sekai-nyan: your insane is good
21:16 Sekai-nyan: o.o
21:16 Lally:ty \( > u < )/
21:17 Sekai-nyan: nothing much to say yeah ><
Lilu_old
http://puu.sh/1gS0G update :3
Some fixes in [Insane]
I may did some changes u dont want to for example the space between some parts
i showed in my mod. if u dont want to change them just ignore them.
01:05:087 (1) - spacing is between 0.9x and 1.0x
01:06:934 (2,3,4) - spacing does not fit u can change it to:
01:06:934 (2) - at x280/y108
01:07:118 (3) - at x344/y44
01:07:303 (4,5) - at x412/y104
01:07:857 (1) - at x280/y28
01:08:226 (2) - at x232/y100
01:08:595 (3) - at x88/y172
01:08:780 (4) - at the same position as 01:08:965 (5) -
01:22:442 (4,1) - try to place a not between this space because it stop you a little when u are in the rythm
02:05:830 (1) - the green lines are 00:00:009 sec offbeat and dont snap
02:48:478 (3,4) - place one note between them two notes or use a longer slider
01:56:044 (1) - wrong space
02:23:369 (1) - place it at x260/y276 for the right spacing
02:25:585 (2) - wrong space to 02:25:031 (1) -
02:30:570 (6,7,8) - you can place 2 extra notes before the triple starts because its better to play then
02:35:185 (4) - space it on 1.0x
01:03:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also dont fit to the right spacing
02:59:556 (5,1) - at x348/y264 and 02:59:925 (2,3) - at x255/y296 and remove 03:00:295 (4) -
i hope i can help with those little fixes i enjoy your map so far
keep the good work on!
I may did some changes u dont want to for example the space between some parts
i showed in my mod. if u dont want to change them just ignore them.
01:05:087 (1) - spacing is between 0.9x and 1.0x
01:06:934 (2,3,4) - spacing does not fit u can change it to:
01:06:934 (2) - at x280/y108
01:07:118 (3) - at x344/y44
01:07:303 (4,5) - at x412/y104
01:07:857 (1) - at x280/y28
01:08:226 (2) - at x232/y100
01:08:595 (3) - at x88/y172
01:08:780 (4) - at the same position as 01:08:965 (5) -
01:22:442 (4,1) - try to place a not between this space because it stop you a little when u are in the rythm
02:05:830 (1) - the green lines are 00:00:009 sec offbeat and dont snap
02:48:478 (3,4) - place one note between them two notes or use a longer slider
01:56:044 (1) - wrong space
02:23:369 (1) - place it at x260/y276 for the right spacing
02:25:585 (2) - wrong space to 02:25:031 (1) -
02:30:570 (6,7,8) - you can place 2 extra notes before the triple starts because its better to play then
02:35:185 (4) - space it on 1.0x
01:03:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also dont fit to the right spacing
02:59:556 (5,1) - at x348/y264 and 02:59:925 (2,3) - at x255/y296 and remove 03:00:295 (4) -
i hope i can help with those little fixes i enjoy your map so far
keep the good work on!
they are just awsome ty moe >u< <3Gabe wrote: 1n5x2f
Here's the rehitsound for Insane.
http://puu.sh/1lOAj
Go moe-Lally!
PrivatHansi1
PrivatHansi1 wrote: 31385u
Some fixes in [Insane]
I may did some changes u dont want to for example the space between some parts
i showed in my mod. if u dont want to change them just ignore them.
01:05:087 (1) - spacing is between 0.9x and 1.0x fixed
01:06:934 (2,3,4) - spacing does not fit u can change it to:
01:06:934 (2) - at x280/y108 no because is stalked with 01:06:564 (3,4)
01:07:118 (3) - at x344/y44
01:07:303 (4,5) - at x412/y104
01:07:857 (1) - at x280/y28
01:08:226 (2) - at x232/y100
01:08:595 (3) - at x88/y172
01:08:780 (4) - at the same position as 01:08:965 (5) -
fixed this part
01:22:442 (4,1) - try to place a not between this space because it stop you a little when u are in the rythm i follow the vocal here so no
02:05:830 (1) - the green lines are 00:00:009 sec offbeat and dont snap ok
02:48:478 (3,4) - place one note between them two notes or use a longer slider nah
01:56:044 (1) - wrong space fixed
02:23:369 (1) - place it at x260/y276 for the right spacing changed a little bit
02:25:585 (2) - wrong space to 02:25:031 (1) - ok
02:30:570 (6,7,8) - you can place 2 extra notes before the triple starts because its better to play then i think about but atm no
02:35:185 (4) - space it on 1.0x ok
01:03:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also dont fit to the right spacing they are good no changes
02:59:556 (5,1) - at x348/y264 ok
and 02:59:925 (2,3) - at x255/y296 ok
and remove 03:00:295 (4) - no
i hope i can help with those little fixes i enjoy your map so far
keep the good work on!
ty for your help <3
UPDATE
Deni
General
Hi M4M ! (＾∇＾)
Normal
Some hitsound modding:
00:20:223 (4) - Remove whistle here.
00:19:485 (3) - Add whistle at the head of the slider, to keep the consistency with 00:17:269 (3) -
00:26:131 (3) - Add whistle at the head
01:39:243 (2) - Add whistle at the head
01:50:321 (1) - Remove this finish here since there's no finish in the song or just turn the volume of the finish down.
01:55:491 (4) - Remove whistle here
01:55:860 (1) - Add whistle at the repeat like you did here 01:54:383 (2) -
01:57:337 (3) - Remove whistle from the sliderbody and add whistle to the head of the slider.
02:02:506 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderbody and add it on the end.
General modding:
00:30:562 (3) - Add new combo here, like you did at 00:33:516 (1) -
01:12:657 (4) - Add new combo
02:36:847 (1) - Move this to x:448 , y:144 looks better.
02:52:356 (1) - I don't like this slider why dont you add a nice looking curve?
TeA's Hard
Please add some more hitsounds, I can only hear a few.
02:43:124 Add a circle here please it feels very blank
Nice difficulty!
Insane
No real problems in this diff, sorry.
That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!
To [Te][Amo]:Deni wrote: 6t4h6v
General
Hi M4M ! (＾∇＾) :3 nyuu
Normal
Some hitsound modding:
00:20:223 (4) - Remove whistle here. fixed
00:19:485 (3) - Add whistle at the head of the slider, to keep the consistency with 00:17:269 (3) - yap o3o
00:26:131 (3) - Add whistle at the head yap
01:39:243 (2) - Add whistle at the head yap
01:50:321 (1) - Remove this finish here since there's no finish in the song or just turn the volume of the finish down.yap it sound strange o3o removed
01:55:491 (4) - Remove whistle here yap it is better without
01:55:860 (1) - Add whistle at the repeat like you did here 01:54:383 (2) - yup yup good idea :3
01:57:337 (3) - Remove whistle from the sliderbody and add whistle to the head of the slider. yap some first fail with hitsounds XD
02:02:506 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderbody and add it on the end.^
General modding:
00:30:562 (3) - Add new combo here, like you did at 00:33:516 (1) - ok
01:12:657 (4) - Add new combo ok
02:36:847 (1) - Move this to x:448 , y:144 looks better. fixed
02:52:356 (1) - I don't like this slider why dont you add a nice looking curve? done
Insane
No real problems in this diff, sorry.
That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!
tu for your help was very helpfull :3
i dunno but bakari said that maybe ar +1 is better what do you think about? :U
update for atm my diffs :3
edit:
updated Tea's diff to ar +1 and fixed all :3
Hi Lally , really I Love your map
[Normal]
• 00:13:577 (1) Consider adding 3 or 4 inherited point that begins to reduce the volume of spinner slowly because the song like that down the volume
• 00:20:223 (4) The shape of this slider as this symmetrical and not going well with your patterns straight and circular sliders .
Use the sliders creation system with only three points
• 00:22:808 (3) Maybe this circle might be a bit hard to find for beginners because they do not have a diff. easy, try to move away to avoid being blocked by the previous hitburst
• 00:24:654 (5) Same , use the system of three points , looks better
• 00:32:039 (3) This way I feel like a little ugly and very random, so do not you like ?, in my opinion looks much better
• 01:06:749 - 01:28:904 Prefer you to reduce the volume to 60% because in this part the music sounds lower and not as strong as in the choir
• 01:09:703 (1) You could do it some other way? , I see a bit random, just a 3-point slider you could make the most beautiful
• 01:00:133 Unsnapped Break , Fix it , Move to 01:00:103
• 02:01:029 (2) Move this circle to x:140 y:152 because this slider end : 01:59:552 (2) This above this circle, and the slider hitsburst hides the circle
• 02:22:077 (1) This slider you had lost the rhythm , I prefer to follow the rhythm you were having
• 02:36:847 (1) Try to give this way a better pattern will continue and become more funny and cute
[Insane]
• 00:18:654 (2) Delete this note because no follow the music and also when the play does not sense the rhythm and made me very boring
• 00:27:608 (1) I'm not sure if you should remove the NC that I leave to your decision
• Change the position of the slider because the slider is touching above and also this is ugly when you play, considers move this slider to x:144 y:224
• 01:28:904 (3) Because the volume came down to 10% ? Increase the volume to 40% and adds a soft finish to the start of the slider as it follows the music
• 01:30:381 (1) Add NC to be consistent with what you mentioned before or just do not do and follow what I told you before 00:27:608 (1)
• 02:07:491 Unsnapped Break , Please Fix this
• 02:27:985 (1) Place an NC, because your patterns are not long combos, but short
Sorry for my poor mod
Good Luck <3
[Normal]
• 00:13:577 (1) Consider adding 3 or 4 inherited point that begins to reduce the volume of spinner slowly because the song like that down the volume
• 00:20:223 (4) The shape of this slider as this symmetrical and not going well with your patterns straight and circular sliders .
Use the sliders creation system with only three points
• 00:22:808 (3) Maybe this circle might be a bit hard to find for beginners because they do not have a diff. easy, try to move away to avoid being blocked by the previous hitburst
• 00:24:654 (5) Same , use the system of three points , looks better
• 00:32:039 (3) This way I feel like a little ugly and very random, so do not you like ?, in my opinion looks much better
• 01:06:749 - 01:28:904 Prefer you to reduce the volume to 60% because in this part the music sounds lower and not as strong as in the choir
• 01:09:703 (1) You could do it some other way? , I see a bit random, just a 3-point slider you could make the most beautiful
• 01:00:133 Unsnapped Break , Fix it , Move to 01:00:103
• 02:01:029 (2) Move this circle to x:140 y:152 because this slider end : 01:59:552 (2) This above this circle, and the slider hitsburst hides the circle
• 02:22:077 (1) This slider you had lost the rhythm , I prefer to follow the rhythm you were having
• 02:36:847 (1) Try to give this way a better pattern will continue and become more funny and cute
[Insane]
• 00:18:654 (2) Delete this note because no follow the music and also when the play does not sense the rhythm and made me very boring
• 00:27:608 (1) I'm not sure if you should remove the NC that I leave to your decision
• Change the position of the slider because the slider is touching above and also this is ugly when you play, considers move this slider to x:144 y:224
• 01:28:904 (3) Because the volume came down to 10% ? Increase the volume to 40% and adds a soft finish to the start of the slider as it follows the music
• 01:30:381 (1) Add NC to be consistent with what you mentioned before or just do not do and follow what I told you before 00:27:608 (1)
• 02:07:491 Unsnapped Break , Please Fix this
• 02:27:985 (1) Place an NC, because your patterns are not long combos, but short
Sorry for my poor mod
Good Luck <3
Hi modding upon request
this song made me lol the whole time i was listening to it
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
all fine, slider multiplier looks kinda scary though
[Normal]
00:21:331 (5) - clap
00:48:286 (4) - 2 grid down
01:09:703 (1) - is that very loud green section necessary? i think using a finish or simply leave it at the same volume is more reasonable
01:18:565 (1) - add finish on head?
01:39:243 (2) - finish on end
02:01:029 (2) - this overlap with 01:59:552 (2) looks a bit ugly due to the low ar, consider moving this to somewhere else
02:29:462 (3,1) - placing two repeat sliders beside each other with different number of repeats is pretty tricky on normal, consider splitting the first one into repeat slider + note
02:50:879 (1,2) - try this, and add finish to the end of 02:52:356 (2)
[TeA's hard]
consider utilizing the custom normal-clap in this diff more~
00:47:917 (7) - stack this on 00:48:286 (8) is better flow wise imo
01:09:703 (1) - same as easy
01:45:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - star can look better, its kinda squished atm
02:19:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move the whole combo down 1 grid for symmetry on x-axis
03:06:387 (1) - remove the NC, kinda makes the circle flow look weird; or you can try this
[Insane]
when i was checking clap consistency i was actually moving my body
00:34:255 (3,4,5,6) - center these on the y-axis
01:12:288 (3) - clap on start
01:30:381 (2) - add NC here and take off NC at 01:31:120 (1) to follow the NC pattern u did before the first kiai
01:47:367 (1,2) - stacking these perfectly seems to have better aesthetics and playability imo (if you agree then bring 01:49:583 (3,4) closer for equal spacing)
01:59:552 (5) - clap on start
02:03:614 (1) - 1 grid right
02:05:091 (1,2) - ^
03:02:695 (1) - take off NC, or move this NC to 03:02:879 (2) instead, looks awkward on the last note of a triplet stacked under a slider
Thats it, great mapset and good luck on ranking ^_^
this song made me lol the whole time i was listening to it
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
all fine, slider multiplier looks kinda scary though
[Normal]
00:21:331 (5) - clap
00:48:286 (4) - 2 grid down
01:09:703 (1) - is that very loud green section necessary? i think using a finish or simply leave it at the same volume is more reasonable
01:18:565 (1) - add finish on head?
01:39:243 (2) - finish on end
02:01:029 (2) - this overlap with 01:59:552 (2) looks a bit ugly due to the low ar, consider moving this to somewhere else
02:29:462 (3,1) - placing two repeat sliders beside each other with different number of repeats is pretty tricky on normal, consider splitting the first one into repeat slider + note
02:50:879 (1,2) - try this, and add finish to the end of 02:52:356 (2)
[TeA's hard]
consider utilizing the custom normal-clap in this diff more~
00:47:917 (7) - stack this on 00:48:286 (8) is better flow wise imo
01:09:703 (1) - same as easy
01:45:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - star can look better, its kinda squished atm
02:19:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move the whole combo down 1 grid for symmetry on x-axis
03:06:387 (1) - remove the NC, kinda makes the circle flow look weird; or you can try this
[Insane]
when i was checking clap consistency i was actually moving my body
00:34:255 (3,4,5,6) - center these on the y-axis
01:12:288 (3) - clap on start
01:30:381 (2) - add NC here and take off NC at 01:31:120 (1) to follow the NC pattern u did before the first kiai
01:47:367 (1,2) - stacking these perfectly seems to have better aesthetics and playability imo (if you agree then bring 01:49:583 (3,4) closer for equal spacing)
01:59:552 (5) - clap on start
02:03:614 (1) - 1 grid right
02:05:091 (1,2) - ^
03:02:695 (1) - take off NC, or move this NC to 03:02:879 (2) instead, looks awkward on the last note of a triplet stacked under a slider
Thats it, great mapset and good luck on ranking ^_^
XinCrin wrote: 5t433o
Hi Lally , really I Love your map
[Normal]
• 00:13:577 (1) Consider adding 3 or 4 inherited point that begins to reduce the volume of spinner slowly because the song like that down the volume
done
• 00:20:223 (4) The shape of this slider as this symmetrical and not going well with your patterns straight and circular sliders .
Use the sliders creation system with only three points
done u.ù
• 00:22:808 (3) Maybe this circle might be a bit hard to find for beginners because they do not have a diff. easy, try to move away to avoid being blocked by the previous hitburst hmm i dunt really know but for the moment i keep it
• 00:24:654 (5) Same , use the system of three points , looks better yap XD when i mapped it the system existed not XD
• 00:32:039 (3) This way I feel like a little ugly and very random, so do not you like ?, in my opinion looks much better
did a better slider <3
• 01:06:749 - 01:28:904 Prefer you to reduce the volume to 60% because in this part the music sounds lower and not as strong as in the choir done
• 01:09:703 (1) You could do it some other way? , I see a bit random, just a 3-point slider you could make the most beautiful
• 01:00:133 Unsnapped Break , Fix it , Move to 01:00:103 done i hope
• 02:01:029 (2) Move this circle to x:140 y:152 because this slider end : 01:59:552 (2) This above this circle, and the slider hitsburst hides the circle fixed
• 02:22:077 (1) This slider you had lost the rhythm , I prefer to follow the rhythm you were having
hmm i dunno i think about but i like this part for now no changes
• 02:36:847 (1) Try to give this way a better pattern will continue and become more funny and cute
[Insane]
• 00:18:654 (2) Delete this note because no follow the music and also when the play does not sense the rhythm and made me very boring yap you're right removed
• 00:27:608 (1) I'm not sure if you should remove the NC that I leave to your decision
• Change the position of the slider because the slider is touching above and also this is ugly when you play, considers move this slider to x:144 y:224
i can't find this point >.<
• 01:28:904 (3) Because the volume came down to 10% ? Increase the volume to 40% and adds a soft finish to the start of the slider as it follows the musicok done
• 01:30:381 (1) Add NC to be consistent with what you mentioned before or just do not do and follow what I told you before 00:27:608 (1)
• 02:07:491 Unsnapped Break , Please Fix this i dunno if i fixed it or not i tryed o.o i ask you in game again if i did it right ò3ò
• 02:27:985 (1) Place an NC, because your patterns are not long combos, but short added :3
Sorry for my poor mod
Good Luck <3
ty for yout hel was very helpfull <3
jonathanlfj's mod
jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25
Hi modding upon request
this song made me lol the whole time i was listening to it
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
all fine, slider multiplier looks kinda scary though o3o why?
[Normal]
00:21:331 (5) - clap done
00:48:286 (4) - 2 grid down done
01:09:703 (1) - is that very loud green section necessary? i think using a finish or simply leave it at the same volume is more reasonable fixed with lover volume
01:18:565 (1) - add finish on head? done
01:39:243 (2) - finish on end done
02:01:029 (2) - this overlap with 01:59:552 (2) looks a bit ugly due to the low ar, consider moving this to somewhere else fixed
02:29:462 (3,1) - placing two repeat sliders beside each other with different number of repeats is pretty tricky on normal, consider splitting the first one into repeat slider + note changed u.u
02:50:879 (1,2) - try this, and add finish to the end of 02:52:356 (2) yap done
[Insane]
when i was checking clap consistency i was actually moving my body XD i really lol'd Gabe did a good work with hitsounding i have really much to thatnk him :3
00:34:255 (3,4,5,6) - center these on the y-axis ok
01:12:288 (3) - clap on start ok
01:30:381 (2) - add NC here and take off NC at 01:31:120 (1) to follow the NC pattern u did before the first kiai done
01:47:367 (1,2) - stacking these perfectly seems to have better aesthetics and playability imo (if you agree then bring 01:49:583 (3,4) closer for equal spacing) i like it atm no changes but i think about
01:59:552 (5) - clap on start ok
02:03:614 (1) - 1 grid right ok
02:05:091 (1,2) - ^ ok
03:02:695 (1) - take off NC, or move this NC to 03:02:879 (2) instead, looks awkward on the last note of a triplet stacked under a slider yap all fixed >.<
Thats it, great mapset and good luck on ranking ^_^
ty very much >u<
updated normal and Insane :3 ty all
XinCrin your mod don't wanted to be in a box o3o
[Normal]
00:34:255 (3) - Brutto, fallo curvo
00:35:363 (2) - ^
00:37:947 (3) - Lol bruttissimo da vedere, cerca di cambiarlo in qualche modo. Anche così se ti va bene: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519065
01:06:749 (1) - Rifallo con il nuovo algoritmo che c'è ora che ti esce mooolto meglio
01:24:473 (1) - Allora, è difficile da spiegare lol. Insomma, fallo in modo che la sliderball non "faccia il giro", se non mi hai capito dimmelo in game lol
01:26:320 (3) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519072
01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Anche questi da rifare che ora ti escono meglio.
01:46:259 (2,1) - ^
01:58:814 (1,2) - ^
02:32:416 (7) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519081
02:39:062 (4) - Dritto?
03:01:956 (5) - Rifallo.
03:02:695 (1) - Fallo finire in 03:04:910
[Insane]
00:16:531 (1) - Da rifare
00:18:746 (2) - ^
00:22:439 (3) - ^
00:23:177 (5,7) - ^
00:25:393 (3) - ^
00:26:500 (5,6) - ^
00:27:239 (7) - Difficile da leggere, mettici due beat al posto dello slider
00:29:824 (5) - Da rifare
00:31:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lol pattern storto, fallo bene
01:08:965 (5) - Togli un reverse e metti un beat stackato alla fine dello slider
01:12:288 (3) - Da rifare
01:23:735 (7) - ^
01:25:212 (2,3,4) - Pattern fatto male, miglioralo
01:43:674 (7) - Da rifare
01:55:306 (4) - Fallo meglio
01:55:675 (5) - Dritto
02:00:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - Da rifare
02:45:709 (4) - ^
02:57:525 (6) - ^
02:59:002 (4) - ^
03:01:956 (2) - ^
03:03:433 (3) - ^
Scusa se ho moddato quasi solo gli slider ma il resto va bene così secondo me.
00:34:255 (3) - Brutto, fallo curvo
00:35:363 (2) - ^
00:37:947 (3) - Lol bruttissimo da vedere, cerca di cambiarlo in qualche modo. Anche così se ti va bene: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519065
01:06:749 (1) - Rifallo con il nuovo algoritmo che c'è ora che ti esce mooolto meglio
01:24:473 (1) - Allora, è difficile da spiegare lol. Insomma, fallo in modo che la sliderball non "faccia il giro", se non mi hai capito dimmelo in game lol
01:26:320 (3) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519072
01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Anche questi da rifare che ora ti escono meglio.
01:46:259 (2,1) - ^
01:58:814 (1,2) - ^
02:32:416 (7) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519081
02:39:062 (4) - Dritto?
03:01:956 (5) - Rifallo.
03:02:695 (1) - Fallo finire in 03:04:910
[Insane]
00:16:531 (1) - Da rifare
00:18:746 (2) - ^
00:22:439 (3) - ^
00:23:177 (5,7) - ^
00:25:393 (3) - ^
00:26:500 (5,6) - ^
00:27:239 (7) - Difficile da leggere, mettici due beat al posto dello slider
00:29:824 (5) - Da rifare
00:31:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lol pattern storto, fallo bene
01:08:965 (5) - Togli un reverse e metti un beat stackato alla fine dello slider
01:12:288 (3) - Da rifare
01:23:735 (7) - ^
01:25:212 (2,3,4) - Pattern fatto male, miglioralo
01:43:674 (7) - Da rifare
01:55:306 (4) - Fallo meglio
01:55:675 (5) - Dritto
02:00:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - Da rifare
02:45:709 (4) - ^
02:57:525 (6) - ^
02:59:002 (4) - ^
03:01:956 (2) - ^
03:03:433 (3) - ^
grazie della mod sistemo piu tardi <3
how you said in irc you didn't mod Tea's diff because you didn't find anything ty :3
edit:
update ^_^)/ need to update Tea's diff, i'm going to do that later :3
how you said in irc you didn't mod Tea's diff because you didn't find anything ty :3
edit:
Kiyro mod
Kiyro wrote: 2l467
[Normal]Scusa se ho moddato quasi solo gli slider ma il resto va bene così secondo me.
00:34:255 (3) - Brutto, fallo curvo fixato
00:35:363 (2) - ^ idem
00:37:947 (3) - Lol bruttissimo da vedere, cerca di cambiarlo in qualche modo. Anche così se ti va bene: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519065 no perche se no toccherebbe il drain life o3o almeno credo ed è una cosa unrankabile da quanto ne so o3o
01:06:749 (1) - Rifallo con il nuovo algoritmo che c'è ora che ti esce mooolto meglio done
01:24:473 (1) - Allora, è difficile da spiegare lol. Insomma, fallo in modo che la sliderball non "faccia il giro", se non mi hai capito dimmelo in game lol l'ho fatto in un solo slider curvo non mi piaceva quello slider o3o
01:26:320 (3) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519072 fixato in un altro modo
01:38:505 (1,2,3) - Anche questi da rifare che ora ti escono meglio. done
01:46:259 (2,1) - ^ questi no
01:58:814 (1,2) - ^ non ne vedo necessità
02:32:416 (7) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/519081 fixato in un altro modo
02:39:062 (4) - Dritto? ja
03:01:956 (5) - Rifallo. megusta quindi no
03:02:695 (1) - Fallo finire in 03:04:910 no perche finisce come nella insane voglio che le diff finiscano nello stesso punto.
[Insane]
00:16:531 (1) - Da rifare kay
00:18:746 (2) - ^ fatto
00:22:439 (3) - ^ non ne vedo il motivo anche se sono fatti con 4 white point sono degli slider fatti bene
00:23:177 (5,7) - ^ same^
00:25:393 (3) - ^ no changes
00:26:500 (5,6) - ^ nope
00:27:239 (7) - Difficile da leggere, mettici due beat al posto dello slider non ne vedo necessità
00:29:824 (5) - Da rifare fixato
00:31:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lol pattern storto, fallo bene è fatto apposta per essere stackkato con il prossimo slider se noti
01:08:965 (5) - Togli un reverse e metti un beat stackato alla fine dello slider no o3o non trovo un motivo valido ma non mi piace semplicemente :V
01:12:288 (3) - Da rifare ok
01:23:735 (7) - ^ fixed
01:25:212 (2,3,4) - Pattern fatto male, miglioralo fixato un po
01:43:674 (7) - Da rifare ok
01:55:306 (4) - Fallo meglio fixato
01:55:675 (5) - Dritto no perche ho fixato in un modo differente lo slider di prima e quindi questo rimane cosi
02:00:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - Da rifare no perche gli ho fixato di recente e non vedo nulla di male
02:45:709 (4) - ^ non ne vedo necessità
02:57:525 (6) - ^ fixato
02:59:002 (4) - ^ kay
03:01:956 (2) - ^ no
03:03:433 (3) - ^e no o3o
mi è stato molto utile grazie della mod :3
update ^_^)/ need to update Tea's diff, i'm going to do that later :3
hi~
quick re-check. I can write an ultra-picky mod but I won't. it's your map and i'll check only for BIG mistaes.
[General]
doesn't worth kd because it wasn't even a complete mod. >.</
quick re-check. I can write an ultra-picky mod but I won't. it's your map and i'll check only for BIG mistaes.
[General]
- only two tags? add ? Jeffrey Jey Maurizio Lobina Gabry Ponte it will help us to find your map
- AR is a bit too slow. I'd try AR 4 instead. (OD/HD + 1, too)
- 00:16:531 (1,2,3) - overlapped with spinners hitburst! May become a problem for EASIEST diff in mapset.
- 00:27:239 - this break feels awkward. At least add reverse to 00:26:131 (3) - try to avoid big empty space
- 01:54:383 - le wid 1/2s apper here. Why there wasn't any in previous parts? :V Try to be more consistent!
- 02:46:448 (3) - not during kiai! You can be creative here, don't kill your creativity with dull sliders! :3
- 02:20:784 (4,5,6,7,8) - try to make star-shaped-patterns jumpy? Just to make diff funnier.
me gusta el diff.
- 01:03:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they're not even close to screen center during testplay! fix it
- 02:25:031 (1) - totally unexpected and feels weird. I'd replace it with stream. usuually you don't use this kind of sliders with SO MANY repeats.
just work a bit more on your patterns. It's pretty rankable.
doesn't worth kd because it wasn't even a complete mod. >.</
-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l
hi~
hi C:
quick re-check. I can write an ultra-picky mod but I won't. it's your map and i'll check only for BIG mistaes.
[General]
but but i dunno what to add D: really
- only two tags? add ? Jeffrey Jey Maurizio Lobina Gabry Ponte it will help us to find your map
[Normal]
changed
- AR is a bit too slow. I'd try AR 4 instead.no ar changes (OD/HD + 1, too) ok
- 00:16:531 (1,2,3) - overlapped with spinners hitburst! May become a problem for EASIEST diff in mapset. hope fixed
- 00:27:239 - this break feels awkward. At least add reverse to 00:26:131 (3) - try to avoid big empty space
- 01:54:383 - le wid 1/2s apper here. Why there wasn't any in previous parts? :V Try to be more consistent! this part is different because after the 1st kiai time i put a break and here after the 2nd kiai (where music is the same as this break) i decided to do it a little bit different like the other parts
- 02:46:448 (3) - not during kiai! You can be creative here, don't kill your creativity with dull sliders! :3
[TeA's Hard]
[Insane]
- 02:20:784 (4,5,6,7,8) - try to make star-shaped-patterns jumpy? Just to make diff funnier. ai ai u.u
me gusta el diff.
~~~~~~
- 01:03:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they're not even close to screen center during testplay! fix it
- 02:25:031 (1) - totally unexpected and feels weird. I'd replace it with stream. usuually you don't use this kind of sliders with SO MANY repeats. streaaaaaam o3ob
just work a bit more on your patterns. It's pretty rankable.
doesn't worth kd because it wasn't even a complete mod. >.</
ty >u< one more time <3
jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25
TeA asked me to check his mod so i do it for he
[TeA's hard]
consider utilizing the custom normal-clap in this diff more~
00:47:917 (7) - stack this on 00:48:286 (8) is better flow wise imo i think is ok like now
01:09:703 (1) - same as easy fixed
01:45:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - star can look better, its kinda squished atm fixed
02:19:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move the whole combo down 1 grid for symmetry on x-axis ok
03:06:387 (1) - remove the NC, kinda makes the circle flow look weird; or you can try this i like it how it is
and update <3
e moddiamo:
[Easy]
OD calalo a 2
00:17:269 (3) - fixa il blanket cosi' >
00:31:301 (2) - il finish mettilo all-inizio dello slider
00:32:039 (3) - il quadratino centrale (rosso) 2 grid in giu'
00:34:255 (3) - stessa cosa
00:35:363 (2,3) - qui invece mettilo alla fine dello slider anziche' sul 3
00:37:947 (3) - fixato pure questo >
il resto e' okay
[TeA's Hard]
nulla da dire
[Insane]
allora:
pls od 6 ç_ç
00:45:886 (2) - questo nn stackarlo con lo slider successivo, mettilo un pò prima, tipo qui: http://puu.sh/1zL5c
01:30:381 (1) - fixed
il resto è ok
[Commento]
tirando le somme, la mappa e' pronta, ho fixato qualche cosina qui e la in fatto di estetica degli sliders. a mio parere potrebbe esser rankata tranquillamente.
がんばって！！！
[Easy]
OD calalo a 2
00:17:269 (3) - fixa il blanket cosi' >
68,136,17269,2,0,B|40:180|56:228,1,90.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:000:23:177 (4) - stessa cosa qui >
366,185,23177,2,0,B|350:129|282:133,3,90.000000596046,2|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:000:28:347 (1) - inverti gli hitsound
00:31:301 (2) - il finish mettilo all-inizio dello slider
00:32:039 (3) - il quadratino centrale (rosso) 2 grid in giu'
00:34:255 (3) - stessa cosa
00:35:363 (2,3) - qui invece mettilo alla fine dello slider anziche' sul 3
00:37:947 (3) - fixato pure questo >
44,60,37947,2,0,P|4:124|72:180|72:180|4:232|44:300,1,270.000001788138
il resto e' okay
[TeA's Hard]
nulla da dire
[Insane]
allora:
pls od 6 ç_ç
00:45:886 (2) - questo nn stackarlo con lo slider successivo, mettilo un pò prima, tipo qui: http://puu.sh/1zL5c
01:30:381 (1) - fixed
342,252,90381,6,0,B|256:289|135:236,1,180.000000596046,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
il resto è ok
[Commento]
tirando le somme, la mappa e' pronta, ho fixato qualche cosina qui e la in fatto di estetica degli sliders. a mio parere potrebbe esser rankata tranquillamente.
がんばって！！！
uuuh 100 post o3o
fixo tutto più tardi grazie <3
edit:
update :3
fixo tutto più tardi grazie <3
edit:
Genshin
Genshin wrote: 50213
e moddiamo:
[Easy]
OD calalo a 2
00:17:269 (3) - fixa il blanket cosi' >68,136,17269,2,0,B|40:180|56:228,1,90.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0k
00:23:177 (4) - stessa cosa qui >366,185,23177,2,0,B|350:129|282:133,3,90.000000596046,2|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0k
00:28:347 (1) - inverti gli hitsoundk
00:31:301 (2) - il finish mettilo all-inizio dello sliderk
00:32:039 (3) - il quadratino centrale (rosso) 2 grid in giu'k
00:34:255 (3) - stessa cosak
00:35:363 (2,3) - qui invece mettilo alla fine dello slider anziche' sul 3k
00:37:947 (3) - fixato pure questo >44,60,37947,2,0,P|4:124|72:180|72:180|4:232|44:300,1,270.000001788138k
il resto e' okay
[TeA's Hard]
nulla da dire \o3o/
[Insane]
allora:
pls od 6 ç_ç how i expained you i think is to low for a insane it's good atm :3
00:45:886 (2) - questo nn stackarlo con lo slider successivo, mettilo un pò prima, tipo qui: http://puu.sh/1zL5c i don't like it i keep it how it's atm :3
01:30:381 (1) - fixed342,252,90381,6,0,B|256:289|135:236,1,180.000000596046,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0k
il resto è ok
[Commento]
tirando le somme, la mappa e' pronta, ho fixato qualche cosina qui e la in fatto di estetica degli sliders. a mio parere potrebbe esser rankata tranquillamente.
がんばって！！！
grazie mille \:3/
update :3
Hey MOVE YOUR BODY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mod Request from Nightcore Modding Queue :3
Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.
[General]
Normal]
TeA's Hard]
Insane]
Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.
[General]
- Clear o3o/
- Well I agree with bakari D: AR+1 fits the SV/song/diff best imo
- 00:21:700 (1) - (end) missing clap :3
- 00:31:301 (2) - (end) ^
Well, I'm not sure you're missing claps on purpose or not, so I won't write anymore missing clap or something balabala check by yourself -w- - 00:29:085 (2) - Remove the clap at the sliderbody, it's annoying
- 00:48:286 (1) - (end) finish makes me feel annoying and unfit >:
- 01:14:134 (1) - what, wrong spacing makes the beginner confuse >: please change it
- 01:46:259 (2,1) - These sliders is pretty ugly than other sliders. Remake them by using stupid new slider system ~
Check the hitsounds :v!
- This diff needs AudioLead In for 500mms (even you can set 750).
- 00:51:056 (2,3,4) - Try to make a circle like this by doing copying (2) and rotate 120°
- 02:43:124 (1,2) - why not use 1.0 DS to prove this is 1/1 rhythm? It makes me confuse or even the players since I don't see you reduce the spacing at the same part before :v
The placement is great and clear, but no claps or something? Really empty \--/
- 00:23:177 (5,7) - Remake these sliders by using new slider system is nicer to me o-o
- 00:26:500 (5,6,7) - ^
- 00:26:500 (5,7) - please do not overlap these sliders ;; you can NC here or move (7) down/up few girds
- 01:12:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use 1.0 DS to them. It's like 1/2 now o3o
- 03:04:172 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a polygon placements? I like them, and your placement now is a bit ugly p3p
ty for your moe mod :3 i'll fix all later <3
edit:
update
edit:
flask
Flask wrote: 5q4g3f
Hey MOVE YOUR BODY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mod Request from Nightcore Modding Queue :3
Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.
[General]
[
- Clear o3o/
[
- Well I agree with bakari D: AR+1 fits the SV/song/diff best imok u.u
- 00:21:700 (1) - (end) missing clap :3k
- 00:31:301 (2) - (end) ^k
Well, I'm not sure you're missing claps on purpose or not, so I won't write anymore missing clap or something balabala check by yourself -w- will recheck >.<- 00:29:085 (2) - Remove the clap at the sliderbody, it's annoying ups D:
- 00:48:286 (1) - (end) finish makes me feel annoying and unfit >:k
- 01:14:134 (1) - what, wrong spacing makes the beginner confuse >: please change it >.< fixed
- 01:46:259 (2,1) - These sliders is pretty ugly than other sliders. Remake them by using stupid new slider system ~done o3o
Check the hitsounds :v!
[
- This diff needs AudioLead In for 500mms (even you can set 750). will fix it later
- 00:51:056 (2,3,4) - Try to make a circle like this by doing copying (2) and rotate 120° k
- 02:43:124 (1,2) - why not use 1.0 DS to prove this is 1/1 rhythm? It makes me confuse or even the players since I don't see you reduce the spacing at the same part before :vit was my mistake from prev mod ò3ò fixed
The placement is great and clear, but no claps or something? Really empty \--/
Sorry I can't only find these few things, star~~~~
- 00:23:177 (5,7) - Remake these sliders by using new slider system is nicer to me o-o o3o k
- 00:26:500 (5,6,7) - ^ k
- 00:26:500 (5,7) - please do not overlap these sliders ;; you can NC here or move (7) down/up few girdschanged a little bit the pattern
- 01:12:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use 1.0 DS to them. It's like 1/2 now o3o fixed
- 03:04:172 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a polygon placements? I like them, and your placement now is a bit ugly p3pchanged this pattern it looks more cuter now o3o
ty for your help *-* and star <3
update
Mod Request :3
Okay Movew your body ~o3o~
[Normal]
01:14:134 (1) - This part can put it elsewhere as new players will be very confusing
01:13:396 (3) - this circle being covered by 01:11:919 (3) - this slider
01:21:150 (4) - You can move this circle to X: 260 Y: 279 gives consistency to your patterns :3 since they form a straight line on these notes 01:21:519 (1,2) -
01:38:505 (1,2) - these sliders you could make them more circular :< look better so
02:39:801 (5) - note no snap distance, please review it
I hope to serve you my little mod , is all I found I :3! I want to see it ranked: < TWT
Buona fortuna Lally O3O
Okay Movew your body ~o3o~
[Normal]
01:14:134 (1) - This part can put it elsewhere as new players will be very confusing
01:13:396 (3) - this circle being covered by 01:11:919 (3) - this slider
01:21:150 (4) - You can move this circle to X: 260 Y: 279 gives consistency to your patterns :3 since they form a straight line on these notes 01:21:519 (1,2) -
01:38:505 (1,2) - these sliders you could make them more circular :< look better so
02:39:801 (5) - note no snap distance, please review it
I hope to serve you my little mod , is all I found I :3! I want to see it ranked: < TWT
Buona fortuna Lally O3O
Hi ~ Lally ~
Mod time for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
Mod time for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[Insane] 1o141
- 00:31:301 (3) - If you make jump to here is better,follow with lyrics.
- 00:33:516 (1,2) - Why not make a symmetry to here?
- 00:48:286 (1,3) - ^
- 01:50:690 (2,4) - ^
- 01:54:014 (1,3) - ^
- 03:04:172 (3,4,5,6) - ^
- 00:39:978 (2,3,4) - Move 1 grid down,symmetry with 00:39:055 (7).
- 00:50:502 (4) - The slider isn't symmetry.
- 01:06:195 (2) - Increase volume at least 30% pls.
- 01:14:873 (6) - Slider repeat point hidden by 01:13:765 (3)'s hitburst,so pls don't stack these,it's unrankable.
- 01:18:104 (2) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
[TeA's Hard] 60911
- Oh,I love this diff,Good job :3
- OD+1 is better.
- Add a AudioLeadIn to 500 in this diff pls.
- 00:51:979 - Increase volume and change to fisish.
- 02:37:401 (2) - I guess you missing this,move 1 grid down pls.
[Normal] 606311
- 01:09:703 - This finish sound really noisy.
- 01:39:982 (3) - The slider isn't symmetry.
- 01:54:014 - Add finish,sound much better.
- 03:00:110 - Missing Add clap to here.
- 03:00:848 - ^
- 03:01:587 - ^
- 03:02:325 - ^
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
- Thanks for those who have modded >.< ~ Fixed all thanks Kawayi (Also added claps)
SPOILER
osu file format v11
[General]
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168,124,147431,2,0,P|220:76,1,70.000000298023
256,136,147800,1,0,0:0:0
292,76,147985,6,0,P|344:124|344:124|412:136,1,140.000000596046
456,192,148539,1,0,0:0:0
412,248,148723,2,0,P|344:260|344:260|292:307,1,140.000000596046
256,248,149277,1,0,0:0:0
188,260,149462,6,0,P|152:248|128:224,1,70.000000298023
68,192,149831,1,0,0:0:0
129,157,150016,2,0,P|152:136|188:124,1,70.000000298023
312,192,150570,1,0,0:0:0
396,80,150939,6,0,P|440:136,1,70.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,192,151308,1,8,0:0:0
439,248,151493,2,0,P|396:304,1,70.000000298023
256,288,152047,1,8,0:0:0
116,304,152416,1,0,0:0:0
168,256,152601,1,0,0:0:0
196,192,152785,1,8,0:0:0
168,128,152970,1,0,0:0:0
116,80,153154,6,0,P|84:56|56:48,2,70.000000298023,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,80,153893,2,0,P|276:120|276:120|304:152|364:132,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,192,154447,1,0,0:0:0
364,252,154631,2,0,P|304:232|276:264|276:264|256:304,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,372,155185,6,0,P|200:348|188:324,1,70.000000298023
136,280,155555,2,0,P|184:228,1,70.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,156,155924,2,0,P|136:104,1,70.000000298023
256,32,156478,1,8,0:0:0
375,104,156847,6,0,P|448:88|480:140,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,192,157401,1,0,0:0:0
479,248,157585,2,0,P|448:296|375:279,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,208,158324,2,0,P|224:192|188:192,1,70.000000298023
124,172,158693,2,0,P|124:212|136:240,1,70.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,308,159062,2,0,P|184:292|204:264,2,70.000000298023,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,308,159801,6,0,P|320:280|320:280|384:264|384:264|408:240,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,192,160355,1,0,0:0:0
408,144,160540,2,0,P|384:120|384:120|320:104|320:104|292:76,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,161278,12,4,162755,0:0:0
204,256,163124,21,8,0:0:0
140,96,163494,2,0,P|116:124|108:156,1,70.000000298023
108,228,163863,2,0,P|116:260|140:288,1,70.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,256,164232,2,0,P|228:192|204:128,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,60,164971,2,0,P|364:120|364:120|392:132|432:120,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,264,165709,2,0,P|392:252|364:264|364:264|328:324,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,324,166263,5,0,0:0:0
184,324,166448,1,0,0:0:0
204,256,166632,1,0,0:0:0
132,256,166817,1,8,0:0:0
160,192,167001,1,0,0:0:0
232,192,167186,6,0,P|300:164|328:108,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
363,46,167740,1,0,0:0:0
398,107,167925,2,0,P|426:163|494:191,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,328,168663,6,0,P|412:296|412:296|384:324|336:316,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,176,169402,1,0,0:0:0
184,176,169771,1,8,0:0:0
176,316,170140,2,0,P|128:324|100:296|100:296|52:328,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
24,192,170879,6,0,P|72:144|80:72,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,40,171617,2,0,P|260:96|328:108,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,64,172171,1,0,0:0:0
448,88,172356,2,0,P|440:124|448:160,1,70.000000298023
446,227,172725,2,0,P|440:260|448:296,1,70.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,320,173094,5,0,0:0:0
256,260,173463,1,8,0:0:0
132,320,173833,2,0,P|136:244|104:192,2,140.000000596046,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,260,174940,1,8,0:0:0
324,136,175310,2,0,P|292:72,1,70.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
219,73,175679,2,0,P|188:136,1,70.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,212,176048,6,0,P|256:184|256:184|320:212,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,352,176787,2,0,P|376:308|392:244,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,112,177525,2,0,P|332:156|320:216,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,278,178079,1,0,0:0:0
220,278,178264,1,0,0:0:0
192,213,178448,1,0,0:0:0
132,252,178633,6,0,P|96:268|72:288,1,70.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
28,232,179002,2,0,P|72:176|76:108,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,40,179556,1,0,0:0:0
148,72,179741,2,0,P|198:116|268:124,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,192,180479,1,0,0:0:0
268,259,180848,1,8,0:0:0
144,320,181218,6,0,P|72:316|72:316|32:260,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,181956,2,0,P|72:68|72:68|144:64,1,140.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,192,182695,1,0,0:0:0
256,320,183064,1,8,0:0:0
316,192,183433,1,0,0:0:0
256,64,183802,1,8,0:0:0
324,76,183987,6,0,P|360:80|388:104,1,70.000000298023
428,156,184356,2,0,P|428:228,1,70.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
385,283,184726,2,0,P|360:304|324:308,1,70.000000298023,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,256,185279,5,8,0:0:0
124,272,185464,1,0,0:0:0
68,232,185649,1,2,0:0:0
68,164,185833,1,0,0:0:0
120,116,186018,1,2,0:0:0
188,124,186203,1,0,0:0:0
216,188,186387,5,4,0:0:0
I've finally have some time to manage my mod requests. I'm sorry for the huge delay. I've had to deal with finals.
Normal
There seems to be multiple imperfect blankets in this map. Example of a blanket http://puu.sh/1EP1I If it ends up uneven then it doesn't look good. You should make it so that blankets are the same distance are an equal distance apart at every point of the slider from the object in the center.
Hitsounds are missing in areas. I tried to suggest ways to make it better, but it was difficult to determine exactly what kind of hitsound style you were using when this song could be hitsounded in so many different ways. I think there are too many finishes in spots, but I will leave that mod for the recheck.
Off blankets
00:16:900 (2,3) - Move 3 to x 69 y 131 to fix it. This will offset the transition into the next slider/pattern. you can fix this by moving the start of this combo to compensate for the change in position. (Move 00:16:531 (1,2,3) - until spacing is the way it was before).
00:21:700 (1,2,3,4) - (The center circle is not perfect on both sliders). Try to get the blanket perfect. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/540311
00:28:347 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off here. Moving 2 to x 417 y 243 seems to fix it. (The gap after can be resolved in different ways.)
00:30:562 (1) - I think i prefer a curved slider here. http://puu.sh/1EPmr
00:36:470 (1,2,3) - Grid snap off, make this spacing exactly 1.0 or 1.01. Equal spacing will make things more uniform even if it is barely noticeable. The blanket at 2,3 is also slightly off, but i dislike the shape of 3. Personally I think it's too long, but if you must remain consistent, it's shape is not exactly like 00:32:039 (3) - . You should replace it with a copy of this slider rotated 90 degrees clockwise, although that creates further note conflicts. Do you realize how much nicer this looks and plays if you reduced this to the long white tick and add a note on the dee sound? It would even make a nice square pattern.
00:46:809 (3,1) - Blanket is off. (May want to consider breaking distance snap just slightly to fix this one. Although it's not terribly important that this one be fixed if you don't want to fix it.
01:08:226 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Low on hitsounds. I suggest using claps to create a beat here.
01:08:226 (3,4) - Ends could be claps, because start started with a clap on 2.
01:11:180 (2,3) - ^
01:12:657 (1,3) - Claps here too, because it sounds better on 1,3 at this point and you follow 1,3 later. I highly suggest having some form of hitsounds here.
01:14:134 (1) - I would have claps on both ends of these. This is nightcore, the hitsound rhythm shouldn't have odd holes in it.
01:19:673 (2) - You should place this exactly where 5 ends.
01:20:042 (3) - I suggest moving the middle slider point more to the left, so that the curve doesn't start so far to the right. I advise you to do this, because your pattern is intended to be a right-corner transition from the top, so there shouldn't be as wide of a curve here. Something like this http://puu.sh/1EQaQ Adjust spacings as necessary.
01:21:150 (4) - Clap? I rather like the double claps. Another alternative is adapting more 2,4 here 01:21:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I believe this hitsound gap needs to be filled, because nightcore.
01:25:950 (2,3) - Blanket is imperfect
01:38:505 (1,2) - Softer curves look better IMO. http://puu.sh/1EQk7 So much nicer.
01:39:982 (3) - Just need a clap on the end of this
01:57:337 (3) - New combo.
02:19:123 (1) - I think this should start with a hitsound either finish or clap.
02:36:108 (5,1) - Blanket could be better but it's not that big of a deal.
02:37:955 (2) - Clap on start
02:39:801 (5) - New verse > new combo. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
tea's Hard
Soft hitsound start was less engaging than the custom hitsounds that were in Easy. That isn't such a big deal, but when you change to Normal hitsounds, you don't use claps. Everything is the same unhitsounded rhythm.You need more rhythm than this.
00:09:330 (2) - This is a weird shape. It just should be changed to something that better reflects the shapes you are using. Perhaps just not have a slider here. Notes are more flexible.
00:17:269 (4,5,6) - Spacing difference bothers me.
00:19:485 (3,4) - Uneven blanket doesn't look good. Same for the mirror. 1.04 should be the distance on all edges of the blanket.
00:25:762 (4,5,6,7) - Why is the spacing increasing with every note here? 00:26:685 (7,1) - And you lower the snap afterwards? Don't lower the snap just to start a pattern in a certain area of the screen. 1.0 is better.
00:27:239 (1,2,3,4) - This is too loud. I think you should lower the volume here to complement the change in volume in the song. Doesn't need to be that drastic (10-20% would do)
00:28:347 (1) - Why do you not have a clap on the end of this? (and subsequent hitsound pattern?)
00:44:040 (5,6,7) - Spacing.
01:00:841 - You should start mapping here. It's weird when you start in the middle of a measure. It would also make this pattern 01:01:580 (1,2,3) - look less random (not the kind of pattern you should start a sequence with)
01:08:411 (2,3) - Two sliders is a bit boring IMO. It's also not rhythmically perfect. I came up with this http://puu.sh/1FCL2 2 is a repeat slider. If you don't like feel free to ignore.
01:15:980 (2) - This seems to play more naturally if it were moved to the right more. It doesn't look good in it's current position. It should be moved around x 391 y 254 IMO.
01:20:411 (5,6) - Ugly blanket, please make it better.
01:24:473 (1,2) - Personally I dislike when you use these types of sliders for symmetry. I just don't like the style. There's nothing technically wrong, but meh.
01:33:705 (4,5) - Should be exactly 1.0.
02:19:123 (1) - This seems to play better broken up into a slider note pattern. Just an opinion.
02:23:369 (4,5,6,7,8) - Just bland monotoned hits. A nightcore song shouldn't sound this repetitive. 5,6,7 could make a single slider to break up the beat. I suggest doing so. (Hitsounds would also be an improvement).
02:24:292 (1,2) - I expected more of a mirror here. At least make the slider look similar if you're not going to have a mirror.
02:38:324 (4,5,6) - Please fix these blankets
02:43:124 (1) - again i don't know why there isn't a clap here and a clap rhythm for that matter.
02:46:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think increasing the spacing is necessary and the spacing isn't consistent.
Insane
00:16:631 Unsnapped line
01:03:066 ^
01:03:804 ^
01:06:175 ^
00:35:547 (4,5) - I expected a larger gap here, because it follows those stack jumps.
00:35:732 (5,1) - This spacing would be better increased too.
01:06:195 - Volume lowers for no reason
01:06:934 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't like the clustering effect and the close flow here. Consider unstacking that slider, and then having some form of jump section here 01:07:488 (5,1,2) - so that the notes aren't so close together.
01:11:919 (1,2,3) - Isn't straight :/
01:16:719 - It plays more naturally when there's a note here.
01:22:627 - Why did you skip this note?
01:41:459 (1,2,3) - transition isn't straight.
02:36:478 (4) - Stack is really displacing this. You might want to move the whole stack lower so that it appears at about the same level as the other notes. Testplay to see the difference.
02:37:401 (1,2) - Gap between these sliders is wider than the other sliders.
03:00:295 (4,5) - Why is the spacing different here?
Conclusion
I will shoot a star, but Tea's difficulty just needs a more involved hitsound pattern.
Normal
There seems to be multiple imperfect blankets in this map. Example of a blanket http://puu.sh/1EP1I If it ends up uneven then it doesn't look good. You should make it so that blankets are the same distance are an equal distance apart at every point of the slider from the object in the center.
Hitsounds are missing in areas. I tried to suggest ways to make it better, but it was difficult to determine exactly what kind of hitsound style you were using when this song could be hitsounded in so many different ways. I think there are too many finishes in spots, but I will leave that mod for the recheck.
Off blankets
00:16:900 (2,3) - Move 3 to x 69 y 131 to fix it. This will offset the transition into the next slider/pattern. you can fix this by moving the start of this combo to compensate for the change in position. (Move 00:16:531 (1,2,3) - until spacing is the way it was before).
00:21:700 (1,2,3,4) - (The center circle is not perfect on both sliders). Try to get the blanket perfect. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/540311
00:28:347 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off here. Moving 2 to x 417 y 243 seems to fix it. (The gap after can be resolved in different ways.)
00:30:562 (1) - I think i prefer a curved slider here. http://puu.sh/1EPmr
00:36:470 (1,2,3) - Grid snap off, make this spacing exactly 1.0 or 1.01. Equal spacing will make things more uniform even if it is barely noticeable. The blanket at 2,3 is also slightly off, but i dislike the shape of 3. Personally I think it's too long, but if you must remain consistent, it's shape is not exactly like 00:32:039 (3) - . You should replace it with a copy of this slider rotated 90 degrees clockwise, although that creates further note conflicts. Do you realize how much nicer this looks and plays if you reduced this to the long white tick and add a note on the dee sound? It would even make a nice square pattern.
00:46:809 (3,1) - Blanket is off. (May want to consider breaking distance snap just slightly to fix this one. Although it's not terribly important that this one be fixed if you don't want to fix it.
01:08:226 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Low on hitsounds. I suggest using claps to create a beat here.
01:08:226 (3,4) - Ends could be claps, because start started with a clap on 2.
01:11:180 (2,3) - ^
01:12:657 (1,3) - Claps here too, because it sounds better on 1,3 at this point and you follow 1,3 later. I highly suggest having some form of hitsounds here.
01:14:134 (1) - I would have claps on both ends of these. This is nightcore, the hitsound rhythm shouldn't have odd holes in it.
01:19:673 (2) - You should place this exactly where 5 ends.
01:20:042 (3) - I suggest moving the middle slider point more to the left, so that the curve doesn't start so far to the right. I advise you to do this, because your pattern is intended to be a right-corner transition from the top, so there shouldn't be as wide of a curve here. Something like this http://puu.sh/1EQaQ Adjust spacings as necessary.
01:21:150 (4) - Clap? I rather like the double claps. Another alternative is adapting more 2,4 here 01:21:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I believe this hitsound gap needs to be filled, because nightcore.
01:25:950 (2,3) - Blanket is imperfect
01:38:505 (1,2) - Softer curves look better IMO. http://puu.sh/1EQk7 So much nicer.
01:39:982 (3) - Just need a clap on the end of this
01:57:337 (3) - New combo.
02:19:123 (1) - I think this should start with a hitsound either finish or clap.
02:36:108 (5,1) - Blanket could be better but it's not that big of a deal.
02:37:955 (2) - Clap on start
02:39:801 (5) - New verse > new combo. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
tea's Hard
Soft hitsound start was less engaging than the custom hitsounds that were in Easy. That isn't such a big deal, but when you change to Normal hitsounds, you don't use claps. Everything is the same unhitsounded rhythm.You need more rhythm than this.
00:09:330 (2) - This is a weird shape. It just should be changed to something that better reflects the shapes you are using. Perhaps just not have a slider here. Notes are more flexible.
00:17:269 (4,5,6) - Spacing difference bothers me.
00:19:485 (3,4) - Uneven blanket doesn't look good. Same for the mirror. 1.04 should be the distance on all edges of the blanket.
00:25:762 (4,5,6,7) - Why is the spacing increasing with every note here? 00:26:685 (7,1) - And you lower the snap afterwards? Don't lower the snap just to start a pattern in a certain area of the screen. 1.0 is better.
00:27:239 (1,2,3,4) - This is too loud. I think you should lower the volume here to complement the change in volume in the song. Doesn't need to be that drastic (10-20% would do)
00:28:347 (1) - Why do you not have a clap on the end of this? (and subsequent hitsound pattern?)
00:44:040 (5,6,7) - Spacing.
01:00:841 - You should start mapping here. It's weird when you start in the middle of a measure. It would also make this pattern 01:01:580 (1,2,3) - look less random (not the kind of pattern you should start a sequence with)
01:08:411 (2,3) - Two sliders is a bit boring IMO. It's also not rhythmically perfect. I came up with this http://puu.sh/1FCL2 2 is a repeat slider. If you don't like feel free to ignore.
01:15:980 (2) - This seems to play more naturally if it were moved to the right more. It doesn't look good in it's current position. It should be moved around x 391 y 254 IMO.
01:20:411 (5,6) - Ugly blanket, please make it better.
01:24:473 (1,2) - Personally I dislike when you use these types of sliders for symmetry. I just don't like the style. There's nothing technically wrong, but meh.
01:33:705 (4,5) - Should be exactly 1.0.
02:19:123 (1) - This seems to play better broken up into a slider note pattern. Just an opinion.
02:23:369 (4,5,6,7,8) - Just bland monotoned hits. A nightcore song shouldn't sound this repetitive. 5,6,7 could make a single slider to break up the beat. I suggest doing so. (Hitsounds would also be an improvement).
02:24:292 (1,2) - I expected more of a mirror here. At least make the slider look similar if you're not going to have a mirror.
02:38:324 (4,5,6) - Please fix these blankets
02:43:124 (1) - again i don't know why there isn't a clap here and a clap rhythm for that matter.
02:46:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think increasing the spacing is necessary and the spacing isn't consistent.
Insane
00:16:631 Unsnapped line
01:03:066 ^
01:03:804 ^
01:06:175 ^
00:35:547 (4,5) - I expected a larger gap here, because it follows those stack jumps.
00:35:732 (5,1) - This spacing would be better increased too.
01:06:195 - Volume lowers for no reason
01:06:934 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't like the clustering effect and the close flow here. Consider unstacking that slider, and then having some form of jump section here 01:07:488 (5,1,2) - so that the notes aren't so close together.
01:11:919 (1,2,3) - Isn't straight :/
01:16:719 - It plays more naturally when there's a note here.
01:22:627 - Why did you skip this note?
01:41:459 (1,2,3) - transition isn't straight.
02:36:478 (4) - Stack is really displacing this. You might want to move the whole stack lower so that it appears at about the same level as the other notes. Testplay to see the difference.
02:37:401 (1,2) - Gap between these sliders is wider than the other sliders.
03:00:295 (4,5) - Why is the spacing different here?
Conclusion
I will shoot a star, but Tea's difficulty just needs a more involved hitsound pattern.
i'll fix all in this days ty for your help :3
don't mod this map atm :3
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[Normal]
@Rika: fixed all
@TheVileOne: fixed all only this not:
02:39:801 (5) - New verse > new combo fixed. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
[Hard]
@Rika: tea fixed all i think
@TheVileOne:
00:09:330 (2) - This is a weird shape. It just should be changed to something that better reflects the shapes you are using. Perhaps just not have a slider here. Notes are more flexible.not fixed because i think it's ok atm
00:17:269 (4,5,6) - Spacing difference bothers me.spacing is ok here
[Insane]
@Rika:
01:18:104 (2) - Remove this circle,sound much better. it will be difficult to read it
@TheVileOne:
00:35:547 (4,5) - I expected a larger gap here, because it follows those stack jumps. what should i do here?
01:06:934 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't like the clustering effect and the close flow here. Consider unstacking that slider, and then having some form of jump section here 01:07:488 (5,1,2) - so that the notes aren't so close together.dunno about this like it somehow
01:22:627 - Why did you skip this note?i follow the vocal here
update <3
don't mod this map atm :3
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[Normal]
@Rika: fixed all
@TheVileOne: fixed all only this not:
02:39:801 (5) - New verse > new combo fixed. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
[Hard]
@Rika: tea fixed all i think
@TheVileOne:
00:09:330 (2) - This is a weird shape. It just should be changed to something that better reflects the shapes you are using. Perhaps just not have a slider here. Notes are more flexible.not fixed because i think it's ok atm
00:17:269 (4,5,6) - Spacing difference bothers me.spacing is ok here
[Insane]
@Rika:
01:18:104 (2) - Remove this circle,sound much better. it will be difficult to read it
@TheVileOne:
00:35:547 (4,5) - I expected a larger gap here, because it follows those stack jumps. what should i do here?
01:06:934 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't like the clustering effect and the close flow here. Consider unstacking that slider, and then having some form of jump section here 01:07:488 (5,1,2) - so that the notes aren't so close together.dunno about this like it somehow
01:22:627 - Why did you skip this note?i follow the vocal here
update <3
IRC modding for Normal, TeA's Hard, and Insane. Here's the chatlog below.
Normal and TeA's Hard plays pretty good. Your Insane is quite alright too. And with that, your map is all set.
Bubbled!
Chatlog
02:47 Roddie: hey
02:47 Lally: ya? :3 hai
02:47 Roddie: I wanted to let you know that gabe wanted me to mod your map
02:48 Roddie: so, i'll start later today when I'm ready
02:48 Lally: uh >.< thats nice but i have 2 mod to fix before ;3; i was very busy in last week
02:48 Lally: if you give me 1 hour i fix they :3
02:49 Roddie: alright, let know 'till then
02:49 Lally: ok ty >.< very nice from you and from gabe :3
02:50 Roddie: no problem
04:23 Lally: pokes o3o
04:51 Roddie: hi
04:52 Lally: :3 hi i finished to fix the last mods u.u
04:53 Roddie: ah okay
04:53 Lally: ^_^ it's really nice from you çwç <3
05:23 Roddie: do you have time for irc modding
05:23 Roddie: ?
05:23 Lally: sure :3
05:25 Roddie: we'll start off on normal
05:27 Roddie: 00:17:269 (3)-I'm pretty sure you forgot to add a clap on the end
05:28 Lally: added, hitsounding on normal is not so nice :/ it's my first map even if i worked much on it still have problems here :/
05:28 Lally: :/
05:29 Roddie: its cool, i'll take a listen to them as we progress
05:29 Roddie: anyway
05:30 Lally: uhu
05:30 Roddie: 00:35:363 (2)-forgot to add a clap on the beginning here, huh?
05:31 Lally: added
05:31 Roddie: 00:36:101 (3)-A clap is missing here
05:32 Lally: added
05:33 Roddie: 00:36:470 (1)-A clap is missing on the repeat
05:33 Lally: added
05:34 Roddie: 00:37:578 (2)-A finish doesn't sound fitting honestly. I suggest replacing that with a clap
05:34 Lally: added clap
05:34 Roddie: 00:37:947 (3, 4)-Both slider ends are missing claps, deary ):
05:34 Lally: added >.<
05:35 Roddie: 00:40:163 (3)-A finish on the beginning sounds a lot better than one the end. switch them
05:36 Lally: ok
05:41 Roddie: hm. actually, the slider I pointed out from 00:40:163, you can leave it back the way it was
05:41 Lally: oh ok i change it back then
05:42 Roddie: there are sliders that have finishes on the end points like that which sounds good really haha
05:42 Lally: ^_^ better so then
05:43 Roddie: in the 2nd kiai time, there are notes that do need claps ):
05:43 Roddie: there are a bunch
05:44 Lally: hmm try to use more now
05:47 Lally: i added 01:31:489 (3)- 01:32:966 (2)- 01:34:443 (2)- 01:35:920 (2)- for now
05:47 Lally: 01:39:243 (2)- removed on the beginn
05:48 Roddie: 01:48:844 (6)-A new combo would be fitting
05:48 Lally: yup added
05:49 Roddie: 02:30:939 (1)-How about a finish on the beginning? :D
05:50 Lally: ya :3
05:56 Roddie: 02:39:801 (1)-Try adding a finish on the end and tell me what you think
05:57 Lally: yup it should be a finish there
05:57 Lally: ah btw one thing:
05:57 Lally: 02:39:801 (5)- New verse > new combo fixed. also spiral could be better. However I can't help you figure out how to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
05:57 Lally: to fix it. If you agree, try asking a MAT for help.
05:57 Lally: froma a other mod
05:57 Lally: what do you think about
05:59 Roddie: oh that slider
05:59 Roddie: do you want it to go around like a circle?
06:00 Lally: not relly i wanted to do it like a you do a spinner not like rotate a circle o.ò
06:01 Lally: but i was a little bit scary to place it more in the centre because it may touch 02:37:955 (2)-
06:01 Roddie: ah, the swirl, right?
06:02 Lally: yap
06:15 Roddie: okay, I think this should do the trick
06:15 Lally: hmm
06:15 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1J8Pw
06:16 Lally: oi oi can you gimme the code? ç_ç
06:17 Roddie: sure hold on
06:17 Lally: oh ty C:
06:20 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1J8XH
06:22 Lally: ty <3
06:22 Roddie: yup
06:23 Lally: hmm have some problem with this code
06:23 Roddie: yeah something is going on here ):
06:24 Lally: http://puu.sh/1J94a ._.
06:25 Roddie: the vertical bar is missing
06:25 Roddie: many of them
06:25 Roddie: in the code lol
06:25 Roddie: its okay, i'll get that fixed
06:25 Lally: i can fix it alone i think
06:26 Lally: not XD
06:26 Roddie: try it now
06:26 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1J97t
06:29 Lally: ok have it now :3
06:29 Lally: and added finish at the end
06:36 Roddie: we're done with normal
06:36 Roddie: moving on to Insane
06:36 Lally: ok :3
06:36 Lally: oh you can do hard too because tea is much afk
06:36 Lally: i'll mod for him since log time >.<
06:36 Lally: he is very busy ;3;
06:36 Roddie: ah okay
06:36 Roddie: I understand
06:37 Roddie: we'll start on hard then
06:37 Lally: ok :3
06:43 Roddie: 01:34:812 (1)-I don't think a new combo here is needed imo.
06:44 Lally: on the next slider right?
06:45 Lally: i added nc here 01:35:551-
06:45 Roddie: yes, that too
06:45 Roddie: i was just about to say lol
06:45 Lally: u.u
06:48 Roddie: okay, moving on to insane now
06:48 Lally: ok :3
06:56 Roddie: 02:01:768 (5)-I think you forgot to add a clap on the beginning
06:56 Lally: added
06:58 Roddie: 00:38:963 (x)-Add a note here. that well, it'll form up to be a note triple. trust me, its going to sound good
06:59 Lally: added :3
07:00 Roddie: one last thought I'd like to share
07:00 Roddie: a letterbox during the breaks just looks bad no offense
07:00 Roddie: its probably a good idea to remove it
07:00 Lally: ok i remove it now from all diff
07:00 Roddie: okay good
07:01 Lally: ok removed from all diff
07:02 Roddie: and that's it
07:02 Lally: ^_^
07:02 Lally: good i update now
07:02 Roddie: okay
Normal and TeA's Hard plays pretty good. Your Insane is quite alright too. And with that, your map is all set.
Bubbled!
~General~
- This song is extracted from the debut album "Europop", add it to the tags
- 00:17:269 (3,3) - I'd remove these 2 whistles because you didn't use it on the next parts, and honestly I think they sound too loud at the moment..
- 00:26:131 (3) - It'd look more logical to remove a repeat from this slider adding finish on the downbeat and adding a circle on 00:27:239 as well, maybe stacking it with the previous 00:25:762 (2). To be short:
- 00:29:085 (2) - Wrong hitsounding here: add finish on the downbeat 00:29:824 removing it from the tail, but adding a clap instead
- 00:43:117 (2) - You know.. finishes should be on downbeats not on random white ticks ç.ç According to this you need to add finish on slider head removing it from tail but adding clap on 00:43:486
- 00:43:855 (3) - Remove finish, it sounds bad since there aren't cymbals in the music
- 00:46:071 (2) - Ew, same of 00:29:085 (2), change hitsounds pls, same thing for 00:46:809 (3)
- 00:49:025 (1) - Soft finish for this spinner end would fit much better with those cymbals in the music
- 01:09:703 (1) - I don't undestand why you used this sudden 100% volume here for this slider head considering that you are doing it just now. I'd remove this volume change
- 01:30:381 (1) - Orz.. still hitsounding. Add finish on slider head to open that kiai time and add clap on the tail but removing that finish on it. Ti prego, fai la stessa cosa per i successivi ç_ç'
- 01:39:243 (2) - Missing whistle I guess
- 01:47:367 (4) - There should be new combo here to keep consistency
- 01:54:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - I really hate those loud whistles you used on this part, especially because they are totally inconsistent. It'd be better to remove them all
- 02:19:123 (1) - (green line) set 70% volume to keep consistency with previous part, especially because I feel the slider slide is too loud with 80%..
- 02:44:232 (3) - You know, about hitsounds.. same for next sliders as well
- 02:46:448 (3) - This slider is ugly in play mode.. try to make it more symmetrical so that flows better
- OD-1
- 00:07:669 (3) - There should be new combo here
- 00:13:577 (2) - OMG that N finish sounds too loud. Setting soft sampleset it'd sound better
- 00:33:516 (7,1) - Switch new combo for consistency
- 01:43:674 (1) - For consistency: remove new combo adding it on 01:44:413 (3)
- 01:46:628 (1) - Remove new combo and add on 01:47:367 (3)
- 02:05:276 (7) - I don't see a reason to set this useless new combo since it follows nothing
- AR-1 fits better for this map, 9 is too fast
- 00:33:886 (2) - CTRL + G flows better
- 01:26:320 (5,1) - Switch new combo
updated all done \o3o/Chewin wrote: 665v4m
~General~
added
- This song is extracted from the debut album "Europop", add it to the tags
~Normal~
00:46:071 (2) - Ew, same of 00:29:085 (2), change hitsounds pls, same thing for 00:46:809 (3)
mi sento tanto persa i hope i fixed it good
~TeA's Hard~
fixed all
~Insane~
fixed all
cute
Oh, Gabe, you're so cute!
Congratz Nyally!
Oh, Gabe, you're so cute!