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ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
http://puu.sh/JPM4 你要的转盘
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Hard
00:21:195 (4) - NC
00:32:595 - 突然变安静了
00:29:995 (6) - NC
00:38:995 (1) - 去NC
00:40:595 (5) - NC
01:00:995 (9) - NC
01:01:395 (1) - 去NC
01:05:995 (8) - NC
01:09:395 (6) - NC
01:35:795 (3) - 往下挪
Normal
00:44:995 (1) - 红点下移
[Mahua]
702 posts
ed November 2010
求collab
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
ed October 2010
here my collab part~ -->http://puu.sh/Kiys

also some simple mod :)

[Hard]
00:21:195 (4) - 这样 拆成一note+1/2slider比较好 现在这样感觉有点怪
00:21:795 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这段stream的spacing好好弄弄..而且建议间距小点 毕竟只是次高难度,,
00:24:995 (7) - 建议slider开头+clap
00:37:395 (4) - 尾部建议改成finish
00:47:395 (3) - +clap
01:24:395 (2) - spacing..
01:25:795 (7) - (nazi) 1 grid up
01:28:995 (2) - 开头+clap
01:32:195 (3) - +clap
01:35:795 (3) - +finish, 感觉clap也有点多余

:) ganbatte

edit: 简单看了下ez和nm. nm不错但是ez感觉有点难了, 建议remap一下
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ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
http://puu.sh/Klfq 提供一个前面的下拍梗=3=不太适合Easy……hard吧……应该……normal似乎也凑合
Easy用补完么？
话说这算mod么=w=b
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

ts8zs wrote: 4z3y

Hard
00:21:195 (4) - NC no
00:32:595 - 突然变安静了 因为没东西可以下 tick下音效不会
00:29:995 (6) - NC no
00:38:995 (1) - 去NC no
00:40:595 (5) - NC no kiai才开始的NC
01:00:995 (9) - NC no NC在后面
01:01:395 (1) - 去NC no ^
01:05:995 (8) - NC no
01:09:395 (6) - NC no
01:35:795 (3) - 往下挪 我觉得这样好:3
Normal
00:44:995 (1) - 红点下移why...
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
ed September 2011
来吧开始mod~

Insane
SPOILER
其实OD可以+1
00:02:995 (7) - 好看点？
00:07:995 (7) - 我觉得删掉比较好
00:14:195 (5) - 蹭到3了不好看哟
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - 这种组合不是很喜欢，全部都蹭到了。抱歉没找到什么好的解决方案，不过还是建议有时间的话改一改这里
00:22:995 (2,4) - 这两个完全可以平行的，然后4和5在对称一下
00:46:595 (14,1) - 为什么不弄成这样的？
00:48:995 (8,9) - 对称
00:58:295 (2) - 删掉会比较好玩

Hard
SPOILER
推荐设置
01:09:195 (4) - 我觉得放在01:08:395 (2) - 的位置上会不会好点？
01:10:795 (9) - 蹭到了不好看
01:16:195 (8) - spacing
01:32:795 (6) - 跳的有点突然
01:35:795 (3) - 我觉得应该放这里

Normal
SPOILER
00:14:595 (3,4) - 其实你完全可以复制旋转180的。。。
00:35:795 (1) - OJZ 这个一定必须强烈建议改掉，至少对称吧亲。。。
00:44:995 (1) - 好多了吧
00:51:795break拉到这里

easy
SPOILER
推荐设置
00:16:195 (1) -这个拉长啊
00:17:795 (3) - 然后这个和1的尾巴对齐
00:20:995 (2,2) - 后面的头和前面的尾对齐
00:27:395 (3,1) - 蹭到了不好看
00:30:995 (3) - EAST 可别跳哦！
00:32:595 (2,4) - 又蹭了。。。
00:51:795break拉到这里
01:00:995 (1) - 拉长
01:07:395 (1) - 拉长，这种小段拉条既不合拍又不好看
01:14:195 (1,3) - 3头1尾对齐
01:18:995 (3) - 又蹭了。。。
01:19:795 (4,1) - 又蹭了
然后打开AIMOD差spacing问题，你是按照0.9Xmap的所以spacing不能小于0.85不能大于0.95 【话说mapping的时候有开DS吗。。。

Good luck~
Fionana
252 posts
ed April 2011
no kd ~

Ts8zs's Easy
这配置都快赶上Normal了..HD 1~2 OD 1~2 AR 2~3 比较好。
00:16:195 (1) - 和00:22:595 - 同样节奏 后者有repeat 这里也加吧
00:30:995 (3,1) - 间距错了 在Easy都要保持一致的 开着DS做
00:44:995 (1,2) - 间距
00:50:995 (4) - 看其他diff在这都加了finish 这里也去clap加fin?
01:00:995 (1) - 和前面一样 加repeat
00:59:395 - 开始突然变的简单 前面那么多节奏而这里·开始用这么多长slider代替 好像偷懒w
01:18:195 (2,3) - 没看出用意..虽然能衔接4 但这里看起来是很随便的摆法
01:26:195 (4,1) - 间距
01:29:795 (1,2) - ^
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish


这diff不仅配置像N排列节奏对刚玩的新手也过于难了.. 星数显示两星半并不代表什么这本来就是一个坏掉的系统:3 强烈建议remap 间距一定要保持一致

Flask's Normal
00:25:395 (1,2) - NC替换?
00:26:995 (1) - RNC
01:11:795 (1) - RNC
01:13:795 (4) - NC
01:33:795 (3) - 往下点..?

gj! ovo

Hard
00:24:595 (6,7,8) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/377675 这样摆或许比较好看
00:26:195 (1,2) - 减速的地方加clap有种违和感.. 1的头加个音量50%的finish? 2的头加个whistle什么的..
00:29:395 (3) -头finish衔接clap比较好听 ~_~
01:10:795 (9) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/377686 9摆这?
01:10:995 - save as above 用其他音效替代clap
01:12:595 (3) - 嗯.. 怎样?
01:23:395 (5) - 再加个repeat? 顿了下怪怪的..
01:35:795 (3) - 真的不摆在2下面吗O.O http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/377695

都是nazi而已..做的不错 :3!

Collab
01:13:395 (6) - 帮我改下吧ww x:88 y:184

rank go go~
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011

Fionana wrote: 3v2a4k

no kd ~

Ts8zs's Easy
这配置都快赶上Normal了..HD 1~2 OD 1~2 AR 2~3 比较好。fixed
00:16:195 (1) - 和00:22:595 - 同样节奏 后者有repeat 这里也加吧你把后面那个去掉你会听到类似finish的东西=w=
00:30:995 (3,1) - 间距错了 在Easy都要保持一致的 开着DS做raririn帮我改得太粗糙了……所以以后我还是自己改自己上传好了
00:44:995 (1,2) - 间距fixed
00:50:995 (4) - 看其他diff在这都加了finish 这里也去clap加fin?C F都加上吧=w=
01:00:995 (1) - 和前面一样 加repeat虽然说背景是有那么一声
00:59:395 - 开始突然变的简单 前面那么多节奏而这里·开始用这么多长slider代替 好像偷懒w降低难度，偷懒
01:18:195 (2,3) - 没看出用意..虽然能衔接4 但这里看起来是很随便的摆法要全改的话很麻烦的QAQ
01:26:195 (4,1) - 间距fixed
01:29:795 (1,2) - ^fixed
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish全加上了


这diff不仅配置像N排列节奏对刚玩的新手也过于难了..我做的标准是1pc3modSS 星数显示两星半并不代表什么这本来就是一个坏掉的系统:3只要有这么个星数的diff就ok 强烈建议remap我巨懒 间距一定要保持一致间距是失误QAQ
rank go go~
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ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 5t425i

easy
SPOILER
推荐设置fixed
00:16:195 (1) -这个拉长啊no
00:17:795 (3) - 然后这个和1的尾巴对齐no
00:20:995 (2,2) - 后面的头和前面的尾对齐fixed
00:27:395 (3,1) - 蹭到了不好看fixed
00:30:995 (3) - EAST 可别跳哦！fixed
00:32:595 (2,4) - 又蹭了。。。fixed
00:51:795break拉到这里后面的也顺便提前了下=w=
01:00:995 (1) - 拉长no
01:07:395 (1) - 拉长，这种小段拉条既不合拍又不好看no
01:14:195 (1,3) - 3头1尾对齐fixed
01:18:995 (3) - 又蹭了。。。fixed
01:19:795 (4,1) - 又蹭了fixed
然后打开AIMOD差spacing问题，你是按照0.9Xmap的所以spacing不能小于0.85不能大于0.95 【话说mapping的时候有开DS吗。。。有开……后来改乱了 那个破aimod刷新一次变一次……有的不能再近的都提示far= =

Good luck~
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
http://puu.sh/KAhH 嗯上传
sand bag_old
4 posts
ed January 2012
Hi my mod here
@ts8zs quote和上传请全部放在一层里不要刷版

[Easy]
*整体的节奏太过紧密以致于像normal 不是星数3↓就可以 通常4★normal配的都1-2的Easy
*spacing=0.9*1.0 normal是1.0*1.0 差这么少自重 强烈建议SV0.8
* 00:16:195 (1) - 00:22:595 (1) - 01:00:995 (1) - 01:07:395 (1) - 01:10:595 (1) - 这些1/2的滑条不仅打着不舒服 最重要的是容易误读 而且难听
00:14:595 (2) - 为什么用长滑条盖过节奏
00:50:995 (4) - 去clap
00:56:595 (1) - 转盘太短 虽然rank的标准是1000分但是在我看来E的转盘至少8000才能合格
00:58:195 (1) - 离转盘太近
01:01:795 (2) - 意义不明 为什么盖过去
01:11:395 - 01:12:195 - 01:13:795 - 节奏空白 不填的意义不明
01:20:595 (1) - 巨丑的overlap
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish
总而言之 节奏有的地方太过紧密 有的地方太松 总体偏难 有不少偷懒的地方 音效差很多 我test的时候都没听到什么音效
我的建议是多看别的Easy 反正是和没屁股王长喜一样的风格很让我讨厌的1/1+1/2Easy

[Normal]
00:35:795 (1) - 哇这啥
00:50:195 (2) - 尾finish
00:58:195 (1) - 其实可以再对称点
01:20:595 (1) - 我建议clap换whistle clap的话会打乱13的节奏
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end
Fine.

[Strawberry]
00:26:195 (2) - 折返去clap

[Fionana]
01:34:795 (6,1) - 有点难读
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
[quote="sand bag"]Hi my mod here
@ts8zs quote和上传请全部放在一层里不要刷版两个mod的话放哪个帖子里呢=w=b

[Easy]
*整体的节奏太过紧密以致于像normal 不是星数3↓就可以 通常4★normal配的都1-2的Easy那全是长滑条好不
*spacing=0.9*1.0 normal是1.0*1.0 差这么少自重 强烈建议SV0.8你存心让我remap，根本没法摆开那样
* 00:16:195 (1) - 00:22:595 (1) - 01:00:995 (1) - 01:07:395 (1) - 01:10:595 (1) - 这些1/2的滑条不仅打着不舒服 最重要的是容易误读 而且难听很难听么QAQ
00:14:595 (2) - 为什么用长滑条盖过节奏为了和高潮有区别
00:50:995 (4) - 去clap让别人加吧
00:56:595 (1) - 转盘太短 虽然rank的标准是1000分但是在我看来E的转盘至少8000才能合格raririn让加的我不想要
00:58:195 (1) - 离转盘太近参见上面
01:01:795 (2) - 意义不明 为什么盖过去这个我觉得跳起来很爽=w=
01:11:395 - 01:12:195 - 01:13:795 - 节奏空白 不填的意义不明增加点3mod难度
01:20:595 (1) - 巨丑的overlapfixed
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end这个不归我管
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish
总而言之 节奏有的地方太过紧密 有的地方太松 总体偏难 有不少偷懒的地方很难么^3modSS1pc啊 音效差很多 我test的时候都没听到什么音效因为和背景完美融合了=w=?要不我把声音调高点=w=
我的建议是多看别的Easy3mod玩的多自然见得多 反正是和没屁股王长喜一样的风格很让我讨厌的1/1+1/2Easy嘛^太乱的话评分会低那几个1/2滑条我会想办法的= =b
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter
i asked some people for help,asking them about whether the SV should be changed,and here are their answers:
A:E和N的SV一样 应该改吗？
Q:

tutuhaha wrote: 254u5v

最好改掉

fanzhen0019 wrote: 1v4536

最好改掉

Midasmens wrote: 2y5k2a

不清楚

_lolipop wrote: 471u5f

会有人说

spboxer3 wrote: 3h2p43

通常不同会比较好

12BARRY21 wrote: 4l603r

改掉比较好

Regou wrote: 6q19l

当然

Athena Tennos wrote: 703o2v

在节奏上下点功夫也没什么

SapphireGhost wrote: 295i56

Easy should use a lower SV than the Normal
i think i needn't ask more people since SG said so,
so plz change the SV to 0.8 @ts8zs
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011

raririn wrote: 18635

i asked some people for help,asking them about whether the SV should be changed,and here are their answers:
A:E和N的SV一样 应该改吗？
Q:

tutuhaha wrote: 254u5v

最好改掉

fanzhen0019 wrote: 1v4536

最好改掉

Midasmens wrote: 2y5k2a

不清楚

_lolipop wrote: 471u5f

会有人说

spboxer3 wrote: 3h2p43

通常不同会比较好

12BARRY21 wrote: 4l603r

改掉比较好

Regou wrote: 6q19l

当然

Athena Tennos wrote: 703o2v

在节奏上下点功夫也没什么

SapphireGhost wrote: 295i56

Easy should use a lower SV than the Normal
i think i needn't ask more people since SG said so,
so plz change the SV to 0.8 @ts8zs
我怎么不能吐槽……Normal should use a higher SV than the Easy
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ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
http://puu.sh/KGau 0.8 懒死向 评星是1.03
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 5t425i

Normal
00:14:595 (3,4) - 其实你完全可以复制旋转180的。。。 犯老毛病- -改了
00:35:795 (1) - OJZ 这个一定必须强烈建议改掉，至少对称吧亲。。。 換成spinner~~
00:44:995 (1) - 好多了吧 條了一下
00:51:795break拉到这里raririn幫我我不會

Fionana wrote: 3v2a4k

Flask's Normal
00:25:395 (1,2) - NC替换? 修了~
00:26:995 (1) - RNC ^
01:11:795 (1) - RNC ^
01:13:795 (4) - NC ^
01:33:795 (3) - 往下点..? 沒注意到 QAQ

gj! ovo

sand bag wrote: 4x2q31

[Normal]
00:35:795 (1) - 哇这啥 大家都吐槽QAQ (被打
00:50:195 (2) - 尾finish 好w
00:58:195 (1) - 其实可以再对称点 修了一下
01:20:595 (1) - 我建议clap换whistle clap的话会打乱13的节奏 這邊是故意的XD
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end 好 :3
Fine.
http://puu.sh/KJMR


另外求raririn幫我修一下 break拉到00:51:795 - 謝謝>w<
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
來囉~~~~~

[General]
我不確定這樣翻譯是不是正確...
正確的話就在tags加上 "Denki Tenshi"

話說Creator's Words那裡 有提到"人"的能都profile下嗎
那連結還是很礙眼- - 明明就掛掉了

[包子的Easy]
00:19:795 (5) - nc
00:29:395 (3) - 縮成一個折返就好
00:32:595 (5) - nc
00:45:395 (5) - nc
00:51:795 - break到這邊
01:04:595 (5) - nc
01:14:195 (3) - 前面講過
01:17:395 (5) - nc
01:30:195 (5) - nc

沒啥好吐槽的 很有規距的Easy 雖然我不知道你之前做成怎麼樣

[Flask's Normal]

ertyukjh010 wrote: 4m4h3d

十年難得一見的神作
[Hard]
阿咧13節奏嗎 QAQ

00:21:395 (5,8) - clap
00:32:195 (9) - nc
00:33:395 (3) - clap
00:34:195 (4,5,6,7) - 是故意放這種clap節奏的嗎 QAQ
00:40:595 (5) - 感覺這裏可以nc因為有擺星型
00:42:195 (3) - clap
00:48:995 (3) - clap
01:03:795 (6) - ^
01:04:595 (1) - ^
01:05:195 (2) - what
01:09:395 (5) - clap
01:16:195 (8) - 尾部也該下clap
01:26:995 (2) - clap

好Insane的Hard

[Collab]
應該要有什麼到某個part就出來名子的設置啊!!

00:37:395 (1) - 連在這裡就給我停止!!!
00:39:395 (6) - 說不出的怪 兩個折返整個orz 建議把最後個折返換成note
00:44:995 (10) - nc
01:08:595 (3,4,5,6) - 這邊好亂 但說不出改法

後面不下clap或啥的嗎



就這樣了~
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
ed September 2011
嘿嘿今天又看了一眼，BG里miku笑的好甜哦~！

collab难度audio lead in 是必须的，大概这样好了

不给kd，继续加油~！
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011

Flask wrote: 5q4g3f

[包子的Easy]
00:19:795 (5) - nc
00:29:395 (3) - 縮成一個折返就好
00:32:595 (5) - nc
00:45:395 (5) - nc
00:51:795 - break到這邊
01:04:595 (5) - nc
01:14:195 (3) - 前面講過
01:17:395 (5) - nc
01:30:195 (5) - nc
现在这个diff raririn托管了 以后再也不和这家伙做了麻烦死了QAQ
沒啥好吐槽的 很有規距的Easy 雖然我不知道你之前做成怎麼樣之前? http://puu.sh/LezX
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in: 2000ms to collab
[Easy]
  1. 真心认为这SliderTickRate 2 有些太猎奇了……
  2. 00:19:795 (5) - NC please~对于E/N而言，combo的长度除非非常特殊的情况否则最好别超过6
  3. 00:32:595 (5) - ^
  4. 00:41:795 - 感觉上这里应该有个note
  5. 00:45:395 (5) - NC
  6. 00:51:795 - 把break做个延迟到这里开始？
  7. 01:04:595 (5) - NC
  8. 01:17:395 (5) - ^
  9. 01:26:595 - 同前面kiai，建议加note
  10. 01:30:195 (5) - NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:995 (1,2) - 感觉上这里做成一整个折返条会更舒服，因为两个红线音都分别和前面白线音更贴合，也就是2+2而不是1+3的结构
  2. 00:38:595 (1) - 考虑删掉？一方面是距离Spinner有点近，另一方面感觉这里留空拍能更好的带出Kiai的高潮
  3. 00:40:595 (1,2) - 和前面那里说的类似，Note+reverse Slider的结构感觉上不如用一整个slider或者2个1/2的Slider，相比之下00:43:795 (3,4) - 的处理就好很多了:>
  4. 00:45:395 - 这里的重音被你弄丢了……2/1长度的Slider其实并不是很合适，而且还导致了00:46:595 - 中间的那个Clap被弄没了……简单来说就是你下Note的时候并没有想到该怎么处理音效的问题，所以会感觉很尴尬，改一改吧:>
  5. 00:48:595 - 长白线的鼓点重音+Vocal重音却下在了Slider尾，很违和……强烈不建议这么做。其实 00:46:195 (2,3,1) - 这里的节奏的话我自己可能会做成这种：
  6. 01:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这种倾斜度很大的平行四边形/菱形造型是典型的……唔……新人经常会用但是经常用不好的典型……改改吧……把角度拉开做成正方形/五边形或者六边形都比这样要好
  7. 01:16:195 (4,5,6) - 这里下3个1/2节奏没问题，但是如果这么下的话我想不到01:15:995 - 留空拍的理由……但是全下的话难度又显高了，简而言之就是你自己把自己挤到了两难的境地上了……
  8. 01:16:995 (1) - 单一个slider的combo有什么特殊含义么……？
  9. 01:23:395 (1) - 同前面一段的建议——考虑删掉？
  10. 01:25:395 (4,5,6) - 建议做成slider-slider-note，因为这5个音的重点是在最后一个上，用note收尾比slider舒服的多得多
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:595 - 感觉上可以加note的地方=v=
  2. 00:40:395 (4,1,2,3) - 我只能说这个跳的方向——重点是2、3之间的方向不是很舒服……
  3. 00:46:795 (6) - 叠到00:47:795 (5) - 这里？
  4. 00:49:795 (4,5,6) - 强烈建议三连向前做到红线，很合适！然后00:49:995 - 保留个note
  5. 01:18:795 - 考虑加个note？
  6. 01:31:795 (1,2,3,4) - 跳的方向改成逆时针？
  7. 01:34:395 - 加note或者向后做成三连？
[Collab]
  1. 第一红线前不要放note！
  2. 00:29:995 - 考虑加note？
  3. 00:30:795 - ^，而且其实我觉得从00:30:195 (2) - 到这里更适合放2个1/2Slider..
  4. 00:33:995 - 继续建议加note
  5. 00:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看也打着不舒服的形状……
  6. 00:36:595 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不好听，不好看，不合适，不喜欢…………
  7. 00:44:795 - 前面都stream了这里没理由留空……
  8. 00:46:995 (1) - 继续建议加note
唔……差不多就这样了……加油的说……
Skystar
1,628 posts
ed May 2011
IRC modded...甚麼的QAQ
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
ed February 2012
Hi, mod time~ :3

Nice song, good job on mapping this, I hope this will get in ranked beatmaps.

[Ts8zs' Easy]

I recommend adjust the volume to 50-55%
You could set a timing point on 00:26:195 - and start using soft hitsounds, finishing on 00:32:595 - and using normal hitsounds again
Same between 01:10:995 - and 01:17:395 -

[Flask's Normal]

Nice flow, I only point some spacing inconsistency, sorry if I look a bit nazi, follow if you want >_<

00:46:195 (2) - Move to x:332 y:300 or elsewhere it keeps ~1.0x spacing
Only if you do:
00:47:395 (3) - Move to x:48 y:336 or or elsewhere it keeps ~1.0x spacing

00:59:395 (2) - Move to x:348 y:204
01:08:995 (5) - Move to x:16 y:304
01:11:795 (2) - 0.8x spacing or 0.7x? If 0.8x move this to x:408 y:128, if not re-arrange 01:12:595 (3,4) -
01:17:395 (1) - Move to x:508 y:276

Good luck c:
x847606653
524 posts
ed January 2011
Hi._.
847's mod,just some suggestions
好久没mod了唉>_>

Collab
00:03:795 (3) - remove clap
00:04:795 (7) - ^
00:07:395 (3) - ^
00:08:195 (5) - ^
01:26:995 (1,3) - 是重合么

Hard
00:49:795 (6) - 改成slider到00:49:995 - ，这里空拍不舒服

Normal
fine

Easy
00:14:995 (2) - 放下来点
00:18:195 (4) - 建议换成slider+circle
00:34:195 (2) - ^
01:02:995 (4) - ^
01:18:995 (2) - ^

就这么多
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
Fix some

http://puu.sh/NZ5U
Regou
1,936 posts
ed July 2010
Request by raririn~

[Collab]
00:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種遮擋真是太#*%(*$%*(了改掉吧
00:19:895 (2) - Remove clap
00:37:495 (9,10,11) - 遮擋 D:///
00:37:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 看起來好像不是直線啊..
第二部份collab是誰弄的Clap部份不一致 建議Hitsound重做吧...
00:39:395 (6,7,8) - 遮擋!!#&*($&(%&#*($
00:42:195 (1) - NC
00:44:995 (10) - NC
00:48:595 (7) - NC
00:49:795 (4,5,1) -弄成直線
00:50:195 (1,2) - 這個跳不覺得有點突然嗎...
00:50:995 (1) - 最少弄soft sampleset吧 ;__;
00:59:795 (8) - NC?
01:02:995 (7) - NC
01:02:995 (7) - 這個把01:02:795 (6)blanket掉
01:07:595 (3) - 感覺怪怪的啊 = =
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - Overmap的pattern...

第二部分問題比較大,別的都挺好的...

懶了今天就先Mod這些吧
bx1989
10 posts
ed July 2010
bakarin。噗= =虽然我很想做不过最近不行，这是要找7爷MOD？
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

bx1989 wrote: 4kq3p

bakarin。噗= =虽然我很想做不过最近不行，这是要找7爷MOD？
bx大侠。噗= =没事 等你有空了这图还没好在做
7爷送了个星而已

Edit:AmamiyaYuko's irc mod
SPOILER
AmamiyaYuko 23:51:47
没问题就来了... 首先lead in明显太短
AmamiyaYuko 23:52:03
这怎么看都要3000
AmamiyaYuko 23:52:45
话说sco说2000你还没改啊/ \
AmamiyaYuko 23:52:51
2000太短不信开dt一试就知道
AmamiyaYuko 23:53:09
我试了下3000比较正常
AmamiyaYuko 23:53:13
2500也行
AmamiyaYuko 0:00:44
00:28:595 (5,6,7) - 差评
AmamiyaYuko 0:00:51
这2连怎么得出来的o.o
AmamiyaYuko 0:01:06
00:32:595 (2,3,4) - ^
AmamiyaYuko 0:01:06
00:32:595 (2,3,4) - ^
AmamiyaYuko 0:01:53
00:39:995 (7) - overlap
AmamiyaYuko 0:02:54
00:18:795 (4,6,7) - 这里叠失误了吧...
AmamiyaYuko 0:05:01
01:00:995 (10,11,12,13,1) - 其实这里把5连换成单点会不会好点0.0
Last edited by raririn , edited 1 time in total.
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
ed October 2010

Regou wrote: 6q19l

Request by raririn~

[Collab]
00:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種遮擋真是太#*%(*$%*(了改掉吧 这种遮挡怎末了嘛。。
00:19:895 (2) - Remove clap thanks for remind.其实本意是下clap在(1)上面.fixed
00:37:495 (9,10,11) - 遮擋 D:/// 不认为有问题。。
00:37:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 看起來好像不是直線啊.. k.fixed
thanks for mod~热狗酱
SPOILER 
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 38544
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38595,70995
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Angel
Artist:Hatsune Miku
Creator:raririn
Version:Collab
Source:Yasuo-P
Tags:vocaloid vocaloid2 ts8zs Flask Strawberry Fionana

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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220,128,65395,2,0,B|168:128|132:168,1,90,8|0
172,244,65795,6,0,B|108:320,2,90,0|0|8
252,160,66395,1,0
328,72,66595,2,0,B|364:36,2,45
344,188,66995,2,0,B|380:224,2,45,8|0|0
456,292,67395,5,0
456,292,67495,1,0
456,292,67595,2,0,B|396:356|248:344,1,180
268,260,68195,2,0,B|224:232|148:264,1,90
36,144,68595,2,0,B|84:144,1,45,8|0
112,112,68795,2,0,B|68:112,1,45
36,80,68995,2,0,B|80:80,1,45
112,48,69195,2,0,B|64:48,1,45
164,144,69395,2,0,B|256:144|336:80,2,180,8|0|8
116,84,70595,1,2
116,84,70695,1,0
116,84,70795,1,0
116,84,70895,1,0
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224,68,76195,2,0,B|256:76|280:112,1,67.4999979883433,0|0
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112,60,77195,1,0
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384,84,84395,1,0
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217,152,85995,1,0
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64,100,86795,1,0
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268,344,87595,1,0
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240,256,88795,1,0
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272,292,93595,1,0
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Cuvelia
282 posts
ed November 2011
may i make taiko diff ?
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Cuvelia wrote: 3k1x2g

may i make taiko diff ?
Sure :3 if you want
Cuvelia
282 posts
ed November 2011

raririn wrote: 18635

Cuvelia wrote: 3k1x2g

may i make taiko diff ?
Sure :3 if you want
thx raririn !! :3

http://puu.sh/PqS7
a32
630 posts
ed February 2010
From forum pm.



[General]



[Ts8zs' Easy]
没啥可吐槽的...



[Flask's Normal]
  1. 00:41:395(5) - 这个Slider好猎奇
  2. 00:44:995 - 这里节奏有些诡异 建议这么摆
  3. 01:16:195(4) - NC 否则后面combo太长


[Hard]
  1. 00:15:795(8) -建议换成一个1/1Slider
  2. 00:18:995(8,9) - 建议调换个位置...
  3. 00:38:195(4) - 把finish放在00:38:995?
  4. 01:17:395(1,2,3) - 弄成关于y轴对称?
  5. 01:29:795(4,5,6,7,8) - 这连打摆的略违和...
  6. 01:32:595(1) - 这里NC干什么...删了吧
  7. 01:33:995(3) - 这个clap应该在01:34:195


[ 神麻婆Collab]
  1. 00:19:795 - 建议这么下节奏
  2. 01:07:395 -
  3. 01:09:195(10,11) - 逆天的spacing


mod完毕...进步还是不小的,继续努力吧 stared~
pw384
Beatmap Nominator
2,300 posts
ed January 2012
渣mod 其实我就是骗kds来的
._.槽点略多（我：喂我也是新人）

[Hard]
00:32:595 (1)、 01:23:795 (1)、 01:30:195 (8) - finish 音效？
01:04:395 (7) - 和⑤stack怎么样._.
01:10:995 (1) - x=260,y=204,后面的跟着做微调

[Normal]
这normal不让新手活
OD=3（？）
00:41:395 (5) - 好的我会自重的._.

[Collab]
因为不会做insane难度所以这里不mod hitobj了
每个 神麻婆的部分最好用SB标注一下 ，这样可以让玩的人吐槽对人吧（雾）。

[Easy]
呃反正做得比我好就是了233

gl~
Leorda
4,416 posts
ed June 2009
Oh hi there

[Flask's Normal]
00:40:595 (4) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so beginners are able to click the next note easier?
01:13:795 (1) - Why new combo?


[Hard]
00:37:395 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying
00:48:995 (3,4) - Why jump? This jump seems suprising for me


[Collab]
* Please add the SB name for knowing who is make the part of this diff


That's all I got, good luck
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011

a3272509123 wrote: 4d4u5w

From forum pm.



[General]
[Flask's Normal]
  1. 00:41:395(5) - 这个Slider好猎奇 改了
  2. 00:44:995 - 这里节奏有些诡异 建议这么摆 行w
  3. 01:16:195(4) - NC 否则后面combo太长
我覺得還好o3o

Leorda wrote: 2f1c22

[Flask's Normal]
00:40:595 (4) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so beginners are able to click the next note easier? Okay :3
01:13:795 (1) - Why new combo? Ohhh I forget that orz

384059043 wrote: 1p5j6v

[Normal]
这normal不让新手活 哈
OD=3（？）我覺得4就夠了:\
00:41:395 (5) - 好的我会自重的._. 改了QAQ竟然被兩個人同時吐槽
Thanks~~~
http://puu.sh/Rc5W
HanzeR
921 posts
ed May 2012
Great map!! not much changes~

[General]
Your audio lead in is not consistent across difficulties, I dont know if this is intentional or not :o

[Collab]
00:19:795 - http://puu.sh/RRtc rhythm like this fits the music better imo
00:46:995 - x180 y172

[Hard]
00:15:795 (8) - x144 y192
00:43:795 - nc
01:20:595 (1) - x240 y 56

[Normal]
01:14:595 (1) - Remove nc

[Easy]
Looks good!

Good luck in rankings! well done!
sherrie__fay
437 posts
ed October 2010
req from QQ grouprandomly

[General]

  1. 删蓝线书签
[Easy]

  1. 00:19:795 (1) - 结尾clap
[Normal]

  1. 00:16:195 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:16:595 (2) - +NC
  3. 00:18:195 (1) - -NC
  4. 00:25:395 (5) - clap
  5. 00:30:995 (1) - -NC
  6. 00:33:395 (3) - 开头clap
  7. 00:34:195 (1) - -NC
  8. 00:34:995 (1) - -NC
  9. 00:35:795 (1) - clap
  10. 00:49:795 (1) - -NC
  11. 01:02:995 (1) - -NC
  12. 01:07:395 (1) - -NC
  13. 01:07:795 (3) - +NC
  14. 01:09:395 (1) - -NC
  15. 01:10:195 (3) - clap
  16. 01:14:595 (1) - ^
  17. 01:18:995 (1) - ^
  18. 01:32:995 (1) - ^
  19. 01:33:395 (7) - +NC
  20. 01:35:395 (6) - 去掉clap
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:195 (1) - 和(9)挨太近 改一下位置会好看
  2. 00:27:795 (1) - 去掉NC
  3. 00:32:595 (1) - ^
  4. 00:35:795 (1) - 三个音都whistle吧
  5. 00:36:595 (3) - 结尾whistle
  6. 00:37:395 (4) - 可以考虑0.5x+NC
  7. 00:38:595 - +note
  8. 00:43:795 (8) - +NC
  9. 01:10:795 (9,1) - 挨太近 改一下位置会好看
  10. 01:12:995 (4) - +clap
  11. 01:13:195 (5) - 结尾clap
  12. 01:13:795 (1) - -NC
  13. 01:14:195 (3) - +NC
  14. 01:20:595 (1) - 同把中间加whistle
  15. 01:21:395 (3) - 同把结尾加whistle
  16. 01:22:195 (4) - 开头whistle
  17. 01:22:195 (4) - 可以考虑0.5x+NC
  18. 01:25:395 (5) - +NC；和01:24:595 (3) - 挨太近 改位置
  19. 01:26:395 - +note
  20. 01:30:195 (8) - +NC
  21. 01:32:595 (1) - -NC
  22. 01:32:995 (1) - -NC
  23. 01:33:395 (2) - +NC
  24. 01:33:795 (3) - 改成normal-normal-clap这样
  25. 01:34:595 (3) - +NC
  26. 01:34:995 (1) - -NC
[Collab]

  1. 00:12:695 (2) - clap
  2. 00:16:395 (1) - 结尾clap
  3. 00:24:595 (6) - NC
  4. 00:38:195 (5) - clap
  5. 00:39:395 (6) - 整形 至少让它和(7)不挨着
  6. 00:50:995 (1) - clap or fin
  7. 01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 在这张图里显得有点略坑了 试着别摆那么遮
  8. 01:22:995 (11) - clap
  9. 01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 可以考虑再摆近一点或者做成大跳 这种spacing不怎么爽(被打
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
ed January 2011
早灣 >w<
Request from flask醬.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general] 5y706h

  1. DaXia's BG.jpg的規格怪怪的噢;w; 800x600 或 1024x768 ~
  2. osb.刪掉它吧!

[Ts8zs' Easy] 1f2t1r

  1. 嘛...因為後面的是copy加翻轉的 所以前面mod不出什麼後面也跟著mod不出什麼 ;w; ...個人不喜歡copy一大串的
  2. 對了~那個bookmark可以刪掉~(被打

[Flask's Normal] 5v5j3a

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:26:395 -

  2. 咱發現咱不吐槽那bookmark會很難過 ;w; (被打
  3. 00:23:795 (3) - 第2個點在x:232 y:152 ?~ 若有改00:24:595 (4) - 最後1個點移到x:196 y:304
  4. 00:30:995 (1) - 第2個點在x:40 y:224 最後1個點在x:68 y:284 然後把00:31:795 (2) - 移到x:152 y:324 ,第2個點移到x:184 y:280
  5. 00:44:995 (1) - 第2個點在x:448 y:188 紅點在x:400 y:236
  6. 00:47:395 (5) - 本身移到x:56 y:232 , 第2個點 x:24 y:276
  7. 01:06:195 (5) - 第2個點x:48 y:96

[Hard] 1u1958

  1. bookmark >w<!!!!
  2. 00:18:995 (8) - ctrl+R ? 有改的話 00:19:395 (9) - 也ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順暢?~
  3. 00:25:995 (9,1) - 嘛 雖說這邊開始緩速 但咱覺得這的間距可以用沒緩速前的 >w<
  4. 00:43:795 (8) - NC~ 因為00:46:995 (1) - 這NC了 ;w;
  5. 01:04:595 (1) - 拉好看一點吧?~;w;
  6. 01:10:795 (9,1) - 同00:25:995 (9,1) -
  7. 01:19:795 (8) - 突然的大跳 NC ?~
  8. 01:30:195 (8) - NC

[collab] 5l1p5h

  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:41:595 -

  2. 咱覺得可以加名字進SB來顯示哪部分是誰做的~

  3. 00:03:395 (1,3) - 交換NC
  4. 00:27:595 (4,1,2,3,4) - lol! 弄點彎曲或變化吧 ;w;
  5. 00:38:995 (5) - 咱kiai time的開始都習慣設置成NC
  6. 00:46:595 (5,1) - 讓(1)重疊在前面的(4)上吧?! 然後(5)移到x:80 y:124 ,咱感覺比較好看
  7. 01:02:995 (1) - x:424 y:156
  8. 01:22:995 (11,1) - 交換NC 然後01:23:795 (2) - NC
good song & good luck~
加油 >w<!
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011

l1106188 wrote: 50r2c

[Ts8zs' Easy] 1f2t1r

  1. 嘛...因為後面的是copy加翻轉的 所以前面mod不出什麼後面也跟著mod不出什麼 ;w; ...個人不喜歡copy一大串的
  2. 對了~那個bookmark可以刪掉~(被打
哼哼他对本来的不满意哼 叫我remap个1星的哼
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
raririn你快update啦
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
ed March 2008
[bx1989]
- tag bx1989 in all diffs
00:16:195 - according to the clap like sound in the music use k here?
00:22:595 - ^
00:34:995 - there're only 1/2 vocal notes so the transition in the 3rd/4th notes doesn't sound very well, try kkddd
00:36:595 - kkddk?
00:54:195 - ^
00:56:595 - the first triplet should go up and the second one goes down as indicated by the music, ddk kkd fits better
01:26:195 - the stream should stop here like the vocal
01:32:995 - you don't need to stream this too much
- Is it really necessary to put so many finishes in the middle?

[Lia's Taiko]
- tag Lia in all diffs
well made, good job
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
算了= = 就这样吧...把我名字去掉好么...去掉就送你颗kd= =
Last edited by ts8zs , edited 1 time in total.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
來囉~raririn我已經把bx1989上進Tags裡了 不用幫我調了>w<

Code
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38544
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 144,58195,96144
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Angel
Artist:Hatsune Miku
Creator:raririn
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:Yasuo-P
Tags:vocaloid vocaloid2 ts8zs Flask Strawberry Fionana Cuvelia bx1989

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"code1.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,51795,56995
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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13395,-100,4,1,0,39,0,0
26195,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
32595,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
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51395,-100,4,1,0,39,0,0
70995,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
77395,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
83795,-100,4,1,0,65,0,1
95795,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 0,128,124

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424,184,44995,6,0,B|472:184,2,50,8|0|0
356,260,45795,2,0,B|304:284,1,50,8|0
268,304,46195,1,0
192,368,46595,1,8
144,280,46995,1,0
56,232,47395,2,0,B|24:276|52:326,2,100,8|0|8
124,160,48595,6,0,B|184:120,1,50
212,112,48995,2,0,B|276:112,2,50,8|0|0
292,176,49795,6,0,B|336:228|336:228,1,50,8|0
356,252,50195,2,0,B|328:320|276:336,2,100,0|8|4
120,136,58195,6,0,B|160:132|196:76|196:76|232:136|276:140,1,200,4|0
348,204,59395,1,8
300,292,59795,2,0,B|280:352|224:368,1,100,0|8
140,344,60595,1,0
48,308,60995,6,0,B|0:268|0:192,1,100,8|0
92,176,61795,2,0,B|140:216|140:292,1,100,8|0
224,212,62595,2,0,B|268:172,1,50,8|0
308,160,62995,6,0,B|340:212|320:272,1,100,0|8
416,292,63795,2,0,B|396:236|416:180,1,100,0|8
452,104,64595,5,4
372,44,64995,1,8
280,84,65395,1,0
192,40,65795,2,0,B|140:68,1,50,8|0
100,52,66195,2,0,B|48:96|72:180,2,100,0|8|0
164,128,67395,5,8
192,168,67595,1,0
212,212,67795,2,0,B|204:280|164:324,1,100,0|8
88,348,68595,2,0,B|16:348,1,50
16,304,68995,1,8
72,220,69395,6,0,B|56:160,1,50
108,176,69795,2,0,B|116:124,1,50,8|0
160,148,70195,1,0
200,56,70595,2,0,B|256:16|320:16,1,100,8|0
424,168,71795,5,2
280,308,72595,1,2
160,148,73395,1,2
228,224,73795,6,0,B|140:280,1,100,0|2
84,196,74595,5,0
136,108,74995,1,2
220,52,75395,2,0,B|272:84|344:44,1,100,0|2
400,112,76195,1,0
400,112,76395,1,0
400,112,76595,1,2
480,180,76995,2,0,B|496:236,1,50
508,276,77395,6,0,B|444:272|368:240,1,100,4|8
316,224,78195,1,0
216,224,78595,1,8
148,148,78995,6,0,B|40:148,1,100,0|8
80,244,79795,1,0
4,312,80195,1,8
256,192,80595,12,8,82995
236,276,83795,6,0,B|196:328|136:332,1,100,4|8
116,296,84395,1,0
124,248,84595,2,0,B|60:232|8:272,1,100,0|8
44,160,85395,2,0,B|84:80,1,50
104,148,85795,2,0,B|148:104,1,50,8|0
184,136,86195,1,0
252,52,86595,6,0,B|320:72|344:136,1,100,8|0
244,160,87395,2,0,B|288:216|348:212,1,100,8|0
412,160,88195,1,8
484,228,88595,1,0
424,308,88995,1,8
348,244,89395,1,0
324,148,89795,6,0,B|252:136|212:172,1,100,8|4
220,260,90595,2,0,B|164:260,2,50,8|0|0
284,340,91395,2,0,B|348:360|392:336,1,100,8|0
448,264,92195,1,8
384,184,92595,1,0
336,96,92995,5,8
264,24,93395,1,0
164,20,93795,2,0,B|100:16|60:68,1,100,8|0
152,116,94595,2,0,B|184:144|176:180,1,50,8|0
196,204,94995,1,0
168,300,95395,1,8
264,280,95795,1,4
Phish_old
154 posts
ed January 2011
hey there :3 you Flask requested a mod in my modqueue

General:
> delete unused .osb
> DaXia's BG.jpg has a strange size which is not perfectly 4:3, and there are bars at the edges. on the right side is also a icon from some... picture edit program? this tiny little icon with the arrows in 4 directions.. :0

[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:19:795 (1) - add clap on the end of the slider?
00:46:995 (2) - 1 more reverse arrow? would fit to the music..

[Flask's Normal]
00:18:195 (1) - delete NC (a 2-combo is even for normal kinda short)
00:34:995 (1) - ^
00:47:395 (6) -
SPOILER
you did it like this:

but it would look better if you adjust it perfect to the circle :3
00:49:795 (3) - delete NC
01:13:795 (1) - ^
nice diff!

[Hard]
( finally a diff from the creator himself :) )
00:38:995 (1) - add clap?
00:40:995 (3) - ^
00:41:595 (1) - delete note?
00:49:795 (6) - clap?
00:50:995 (3) - hold shift and replace this circle till he is in a straight line under (2)
01:00:995 (9,10,1) - spacing is weird there..
01:05:995 (4) - 1 tiny grid down
01:10:995 (1) - add clap on the sliderstart?
01:11:795 (2) - ^
01:12:595 (3) - ^
01:13:195 (5) - add clap on the sliderend
01:31:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - please change this, if you play this one with the classic osu! skin you won't be able to not miss!
01:32:595 (1) - i know you set this NC for better reading, but if you change that part anyways remove NC!
01:33:795 (3) - remove clap from the reverse arrow
nice diff, really fun to play!

[Collab]
00:38:195 (5) - clap or finish?
00:48:995 (2,3) - you could mirror them perfect *nazi*
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - this slider (3) starts on a red tick and is a downbeat slider. It doesn't really fit to the music, i suggest to make a triple out of this and then add a slider (4) on the next white tick:
SPOILER
>needs a collab SB! :D




really nice mapset :3 take star ~*
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
ed October 2010
好我路过打酱油

SPOILER
[Collab]
00:20:895 (5) - x:360 y:320
00:20:995 (6) - x:344 y:344
00:22:795 (5) - x:32 y:336
00:24:795 (7) - x:98 :72
00:25:395 (10) - x:32 y:128
01:07:595 (3) - orz感觉这个节奏好怪
嘿嘿你让我mod我就只能搞出点这些哈哈哈- -

[Hard]
00:25:995 (9,1) - 这俩拉开点?
00:39:595 (2) - x:164 y:144
00:47:395 (3) - x:192 y:240
00:47:595 (4) - x:288 y:240
01:01:395 (1) - x:168 y:268
01:05:995 (4) - x:276 y:156 跟01:05:195 (2) - 重合一下如何
01:10:795 (9,1) - 还是拉开一点? 是不是DS的原因。。
01:19:595 (7) - x:212 y:148
哈哈你看我天天一直都这样挑刺- -

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后面的我就不管了我肯定挑不出什么orz
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
把我diff名字去掉好么...去掉就送你颗kd= =
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
ed March 2011
:?:
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
ed February 2010
..........2KD位。。。
坏蛋;_;.....orz
wantuole
528 posts
ed December 2010
一听就先想到了哲学。 我已经坏掉了
SPOILER
这是我的mod
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:20:595 - 好多clap，这里也加上把
00:58:195 (1,3) - 开头的copy最容易被人体验出来，1，3也竖起来把。会感觉不同 (我就经常那么干)
01:18:995 (2) - 完全在中间会更好，不只是一个slider的开头
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间？(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题，玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感，向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把，孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider
[hard]
00:18:995 (8,9) - ctrl+r
00:26:195 (1) - 前面6,7,8,9已经是一个不错5角星，奇怪的一个ds出现个1 浪费了不错的梗
00:46:795 (6) - 扔到00:47:795 (5)位子叠加?,移动路线太不顺手了 把5角星从2或3的位子开始转
00:48:995 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 依旧奇怪的移动路线，改变了三次鼠标方向，00:49:995 (7,1) - ctrl+r
01:10:995 (1,2) - :roll: 比之前的好点，但是还是好明显的copy痕迹 (旋转下就看不出了，我也经常那么干的)
[Collab]
;) good jb
01:34:195 (5) - 奇怪的回跳,去和2,3,4做个四边形啊，刚好6是升调 多个不错的跳(越到结尾越要用心,给人印象最深刻)
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

wantuole wrote: 5c3y64

一听就先想到了哲学。 我已经坏掉了
SPOILER
这是我的mod
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:20:595 - 好多clap，这里也加上把
00:58:195 (1,3) - 开头的copy最容易被人体验出来，1，3也竖起来把。会感觉不同 (我就经常那么干)
01:18:995 (2) - 完全在中间会更好，不只是一个slider的开头
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间？(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题，玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感，向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把，孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider
[hard]
00:18:995 (8,9) - ctrl+r
00:26:195 (1) - 前面6,7,8,9已经是一个不错5角星，奇怪的一个ds出现个1 浪费了不错的梗
00:46:795 (6) - 扔到00:47:795 (5)位子叠加?,移动路线太不顺手了 把5角星从2或3的位子开始转
00:48:995 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 依旧奇怪的移动路线，改变了三次鼠标方向，00:49:995 (7,1) - ctrl+r
01:10:995 (1,2) - :roll: 比之前的好点，但是还是好明显的copy痕迹 (旋转下就看不出了，我也经常那么干的)
[Collab]
;) good jb
01:34:195 (5) - 奇怪的回跳,去和2,3,4做个四边形啊，刚好6是升调 多个不错的跳(越到结尾越要用心,给人印象最深刻)
谢mod:3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
T_T
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Flask wrote: 5q4g3f

T_T
拉出来了 周末更新:3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
現在title是不是該改成Yasuo-P啊 / \
Rin Okumura x3
36 posts
ed May 2012
Excellent map, keep it up n 3 n ~
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Rin Okumura x3 wrote: 516b1y

Excellent map, keep it up n 3 n ~
thank you :3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011

wantuole wrote: 5c3y64

一听就先想到了哲学。 我已经坏掉了
SPOILER
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish 略吵 不適合
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间？(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题，玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感，向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3 不是刻意的 也沒太大問題 所以不修改
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把，孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider 沒有太大的必要就是
謝
Rotte
582 posts
ed October 2011
Normal

先留上，等回复www

歌曲总体声音大，音效40%的话有些小H&I

Hard
Hard
00:17:595 (4) - 滑条变成两个note然后和00:17:995 (6) - 弄个3小跳？
00:27:595 - 缺个note的感觉
00:29:995 (4) - http://puu.sh/1cEZ0 这样排列好些
00:39:795 (3) - spacing
00:41:395 (5,1) - 这两个note换成一个滑条试试
00:42:995 (6) - spacing
00:45:995 (4) - ^
01:00:995 (9) - nc
01:01:395 (1) - remove nc
01:01:395 (1) - spacing
01:10:995 - 到01:11:395 - 换成一个0.5减速的滑条试试？
01:12:395 - 缺个note的感觉
01:26:995 (2) - spacing


Insane

Insane
00:32:595 (2,3) - 不符合节奏啊
00:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里连打总感觉不适合的样子，怪怪的
00:38:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是
00:41:395 (3) - 喂喂，滑条的节点过分了啊
00:48:195 (3,4,5,6) - 这里也有些违和...
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 总感觉很坑...
01:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不适合连打吧...
01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 这个ds大一些吧...和上面太像了，会坑人..



真不知道为啥你们的跳安排的那么好，求解OTZ.....
R e d
226 posts
ed January 2011
From my mod queue!

[Geral]

Great map
I like yours Hitsounds sytle^^

i did my best to mod

[Collab]

01:09:195 (8) - A circle here instead of a slider make smore sense to me IMO
01:12:595 (1) - NC here because white tick, and song feels like a new melody, makes sense a NC to me
01:15:795 (1) - NC here for the same reasons
01:15:795 - Hitsound volume 60% here why? More feeling xD
01:16:595 - Back to 50% volume here
01:26:195 (9) - its fine! but maybe make the slider end 01:26:395? and add circle or slider in 01:26:595?
01:25:395 - Its fine! but if was me i change a little just to put a new combo new here
01:31:795 - NC here?
01:34:995 - hitsounds volume 70% for help player feel the spacing

[Hard]

00:14:995 (1) - New combo in my opinion. I think not wrong your combo colors (your style) but i gonna leave here my
suggestion about the New combos.
00:18:195 (1) - New combo
00:24:595 (1) - New combo
00:35:795 - add hitsounds volume to 60 - 65%?
00:37:395 - back to 55% volume
01:04:395 (7) - this circle dont get a BIG overlap because of 01:03:595 (5)?
Put 01:05:195 (2) in same placement of 01:05:995 (4)
01:09:395 (5) - New combo
01:18:995 (4) - New combo here? And remove new combo here 01:19:795 (1) ?
01:20:595 (1) - 00:35:795 - add hitsounds volume to 60 - 65%?
01:22:195 (4) - back to 55% volume
01:34:996 - hitsounds volume 65% for help player feel the spacing

[Flask's Normal]

00:28:595 (4,1) - Line them, same you did in 00:25:395 (5,1)
00:28:995 (1) - start the slider in center GRID line (vertical line)
00:29:795 (2) - in line with the end of the slider 00:28:995 (1). Why?? for space between 00:29:795 (2,1) be equal as 00:30:195 (3,1).
(ofc you need to fix the spacing in 00:30:195 (3) after that)
00:31:795 (2) - this slider seems weird comparative to 00:30:995 (1)
00:43:795 (1) - New combo Imo
01:10:595 (1) - IN my opinion a NC here, and remove new combo here 01:11:795 (2)
01:25:395 (1) - new combo

[Ts8zs's Easy]

00:46:995 (2,3) - this is how you have http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/455931. THis is how i think it should be http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/455933
01:30:195 (1) - this slider 1 grid up?
01:31:795 (2) - This sldier 1 grid up?
01:31:795 (2,3) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/455937 make like this again
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011

R e d wrote: p4l6m

[Flask's Normal]

00:28:595 (4,1) - Line them, same you did in 00:25:395 (5,1) Nope
00:28:995 (1) - start the slider in center GRID line (vertical line) ^
00:29:795 (2) - in line with the end of the slider 00:28:995 (1). Why?? for space between 00:29:795 (2,1) be equal as 00:30:195 (3,1).
(ofc you need to fix the spacing in 00:30:195 (3) after that) That's nothing with the spacing, and I think it's good now. Nope
00:31:795 (2) - this slider seems weird comparative to 00:30:995 (1) Nothing~~
00:43:795 (1) - New combo Imo no
01:10:595 (1) - IN my opinion a NC here, and remove new combo here 01:11:795 (2) k
01:25:395 (1) - new combono

@raririn: 01:10:595 (4,1) - 幫我switch nc 就不附code了
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter
changed some and ed~
too lazy to reply , orz
Star Stream
2,039 posts
ed June 2010
From my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:18:195 (4) - can you just stick to use 3-hit slider? sudden 4-hit slider would be confusing for noob players
  2. 00:34:195 (2) - ^
  3. 01:02:995 (4) - ^
  4. 01:12:595 (2) - 1grid right, move it to center
  5. 01:15:795 (4) - well 2 grid left ^
  6. 01:18:995 (2) - maybe you know what i'll mention with it
  7. 01:34:995 (4) - your copying style is too boring, remove the arrow and add a 2/1 slider for better mood instead


[Normal]
  1. 00:26:995 (2,3,4) - add finish instead, whistle is not that strong to empgasize the music imo
  2. 00:28:995 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ for same points, or at least finish at 00:29:395 - . because you added at 00:26:195 -
  3. 00:32:595 - use soft finish here or increase the volume
  4. 00:38:995 - ^
  5. 01:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:26:995 (2,3,4) - and 00:28:995 (1,2,3,1,2) -
  6. 01:17:395 (1) - you know what i'll mention with it
  7. 01:35:795 (7) - add a 2/1 slider from here or 1/1 with an arrow
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:795 (8) - 1grid left,up for perfect stack
  2. 00:18:995 (8) - it's a bit hard for a Hard diff, ctrl+g plz
  3. 00:19:395 (9) - ^, if you did
  4. 00:30:195 - no sound here? add at least clap but i recommend to add finish here
  5. 00:36:995 - whistle
  6. 00:38:195 - ^
  7. 01:10:795 (9) - move it to (360,244), keep ur distance till 01:10:995 (1) - . and overlapped note sucks
  8. 01:21:795 - whistle
  9. 01:22:195 (4) - whistle for head and body
  10. 01:33:795 (3) - remove clap from arrow, add at tail
[Collab]
  1. 00:38:195 (5) - whistle
  2. 01:22:995 (11) - ^
Good luck with rank
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
ed January 2010
?结尾为可考虑
*结尾为强烈建议

[General]
标出collab哪部分是谁做的(例如xx:xx:xxx-xx:xx:xxx by xxx)
虽然我知道哪部分是谁做的,但其他人第一眼看下来可能会搞混

[Ts8zs'Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - 来回4次打起来不是很舒服...
01:02:995 (4) - ^
01:18:995 (2) - ^

[Flask's Normal]
OD4→3
00:35:395 (4) - 放左下好点
00:35:795 (1) - whistle
00:48:995 (2,3) - 间距问题,3拉远点
01:01:795 (2) - 尾巴漏了clap
01:35:795 (7) - 用soft的finish

[Hard]
HP6→5
00:18:595 (7) - 尾巴漏clap
00:29:395 (3) - ^
00:37:395 (4) - 尾巴的finish换成whistle
01:10:995 (1) - 间距?
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

[Collab]
音效听起来好乱@ @
统一一下2/4clap吧

00:20:195 (3) - 蓝线停，白线加个note?
00:38:195 (5) - whistle
01:22:995 (11) - ^
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
ed October 2010
;)
mintong89
3,699 posts
ed July 2011
Mod Request from my queue~ <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[bx1989's Taiko]

00:02:995 - k
00:05:995 - k

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k

sorry i just can found this...
Foreverends
992 posts
ed July 2011
raririn大>.<
極短mod(?) go~~~
collab
這圖打起來很舒服,因為OD是6的緣故,所以1pc差点ss了...
http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/474578
00:10:595 (5) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/474580 試試這樣放?
00:20:195 (3) - 我總覺得這slider放得怪怪的...試試用1/2的代替 8-)
00:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放直一点 http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/474581
00:38:195 (5) - clap比whistle好一点...如果保留whistle,建議40%

給力好圖 :)
good luck :D
Cuvelia
282 posts
ed November 2011

mintong89 wrote: 1d3j14

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k - done
thx for modding ~

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8L

and new BG ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8U
Stefan
Global
10,425 posts
ed January 2011
Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs :)
Good Luck ^^
Cuvelia
282 posts
ed November 2011

Stefan wrote: 5nd6l

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
If volume control had not considered for ranked,I would remove green line
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume. - no change
00:00:595 (1) - D - no change
00:36:695 - Circle with k - done
00:36:795 (1) - k - done
00:50:595 (1) - k - done
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume. - no change
01:22:595 (3) - k - done
thx for modding ~ >.<

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kJip
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
ed March 2009
Here's my mod request~only suggest

Ts8zs'Easy
最开头不放一个spinner么？
01:35:795 (5) - finish

Flask's Normal
同easy，前面空太多了，最好有个spinner
00:27:795 (3) - clap
01:12:595 (3) - clap

Hard
最前面同上两个难度，我就不多说了
00:32:595 (1) - remove NC
00:34:195 (4) - 如果你按照上面做了，这里加NC
00:41:595 (1) - remove
01:32:595 (1) - remove NC

Collab
00:50:195 (1) - remove NC
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉改成4个NOTE的JUMP更好点


恩，基本上没啥大问题了，打起来还是挺顺手的，Good map。
Mystica
798 posts
ed January 2010
先占坑补星我错了（跪
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Mystica wrote: 4w58b

先占坑补星我错了（跪
跪了三个
其实不用星啊真的
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
ed February 2011
Hi~ Hi~
Let's mod!

[General]

why don't you add "bx1989" in tags?
why don't you add some Finish follow music ? like Easy mod

[Ts8zs' Easy]

00:34:195 (2) - add Clap at both of slider ?
00:38:995 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ? and adjust DS
01:02:995 (4) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:17:395 (1) - same as 00:38:995 (1) -
01:18:995 (2) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:23:795 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ?

[Flask's Normal]

unused inherited points
  1. 01:26:395 -
00:15:395 (4) - Ctrl + G and adjust next notes? just suggestion
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:29:795 (2) - move to (136,156)
01:00:595 (4) - move to (136,356)
01:16:995 (7) - keep DS
01:26:595 (1) - ^
01:30:595 (2) - 1 grid right

[Hard]

Unsnapped inherited point:
SPOILER
01:25:404 -
00:21:195 (4) - 2 grid down?
00:22:995 (2) - I think ctrl + G is better good. consider pattern
01:23:395 (5) - remove this note ? consistent
01:25:395 (1) - NC
01:29:895 (5) - move to (352,304)

[Collab]

AR +1 ? I think AR 9 is more fit with this diff's pattern
00:19:895 (2) - use 2 hit circle instead slider
01:08:595 (1) - NC ? cuz notice for heterogeneous pattern



P.S : Taiko diff's sound is lower than music. That's so unplayable. Souond volume up pls. for example, KIAI Time's volume 95%

:OO sorry for poor mod.
bx1989
10 posts
ed July 2010

wmfchris wrote: 1c4l29

[bx1989]
- tag bx1989 in all diffs
00:16:195 - according to the clap like sound in the music use k here?
00:22:595 - ^
00:34:995 - there're only 1/2 vocal notes so the transition in the 3rd/4th notes doesn't sound very well, try kkddd
00:36:595 - kkddk?
00:54:195 - ^
00:56:595 - the first triplet should go up and the second one goes down as indicated by the music, ddk kkd fits better
01:26:195 - the stream should stop here like the vocal
01:32:995 - you don't need to stream this too much
- Is it really necessary to put so many finishes in the middle?

[Lia's Taiko]
- tag Lia in all diffs
well made, good job
thx for modding~> <
bx1989
10 posts
ed July 2010

Stefan wrote: 5nd6l

Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs :)
Good Luck ^^
thanks very much~
Steph De Chine
93 posts
ed June 2012
[Ts8zs's Easy]
你这密度……你确定不要在白线上放多几个Circle之类的么？
00:18:195 (4) - 这个多加一个折返箭头？配合以相同频率发出来的“NaI”，并增加和下一个滑条的连接性
00:34:195 (2) - 这个为啥不做成和y轴平行的呢？或许让1和2的鼠标轨迹成一个椭圆？
以上建议同样适用于后半截……反正你的物件都是几乎一样的……好懒啊~

[Flask's Normal]
一看你这个星星数……无力吐槽……到底哪里出错了？
其实这个图还OK啦~只是或许注意下光标的轨迹会更好。
e.g. 00:23:795 (3) - 这个可以往右上方移动一下，让2在3头部的切线上，使光标轨迹成为一个完整的弧。
00:28:995 (1) - 这个也是，让4在它的切线上
etc.

[Hard]
00:41:595 (1) - 这个的话或许NC会好些？不然会习惯等下一句开始的时候才点的
01:02:595 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这个能不能像前面00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这样弄成4个短滑条？

[Collab]
这个真没啥问题……
-xNaCLx-
363 posts
ed April 2012
遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k
00:20:195 - k
01:34:995 - K

[bx1989's Taikoni]
無聊吐糟 : 那bx is so happy是什麼鬼;w;"
00:12:795 - remove...不然不要finish
00:25:995 - k
00:31:795 - k
00:42:395 - d
01:31:995 - k
...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭
Cuvelia
282 posts
ed November 2011

NewibornCLivee wrote: pi1j

遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k　done
00:20:195 - k　done
01:34:995 - K　sorry , no change ...

...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭
thx for modding !! :3

update ~ http://puu.sh/1x2uU
Autumn
501 posts
ed October 2011
MOD from PM

紧急
推荐
建议

[Easy]
全部用滑条略显单调，可以在空拍适当下几个Circle
01:02:995 (4) - 摆成水平吧

[Normal]
没问题

[Hard]
00:29:995 (4) - 往上摆一点：
SPOILER
00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这种直弯的滑条我觉得不太好看..至少弯折的角度不要太厉害吧 120°左右最好
00:24:395 (5) - 摆在上面漂亮一点：
SPOILER
01:10:195 (8,9,1) - 排列不是很美观..建议把01:10:795 (9) 放到前后两个滑条中间，或者直接做成这样的对称滑条 挺漂亮的：
SPOILER
01:31:595 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 有点迷惑性..01:31:595 (4,1,2)这三个就别折返了，直接和后面统一，顺时针绕一圈吧。



[collab]

前半段的Flow做的有点别扭 我也提出了一些自己的建议（当然并不一定更好）
从01:10:595开始的后半段做的貌似比前半段好...
另外我觉得cRyo和DarknessAngel的图Flow做得很棒 不如去参考一下

00:12:995 (5,1,2,3) - 这段有点overmapping了 为了契合人声的话我的建议是改成这样：
去掉00:12:995 (5)和00:13:595 (1,2,3)，直接在00:12:995加一个Circle，再拉个滑条加个单点：
SPOILER
00:19:795 (1) - 去掉，把后面的滑条00:19:895 (2)延长到这个音
00:28:595 (5) - 这样改 节奏会好一点（滑条在前，单点在后 另外把滑条弄弯好看一点）
SPOILER
00:32:595 (2) - 和上面差不多 不过这里改不改不算很重要
00:36:995 (8) - 缩短一点，再在后面加一个Circle，好让重音落在Circle上。另外后面的两串连打最好别错开。
SPOILER
00:49:795 (4,5,1,2) - 从这儿开始的一串Flow我觉得这样摆能流畅一点
SPOILER
01:04:195 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这两串连打安排成这样可以流畅一点：前三个遮挡 后四个移动
SPOILER
01:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - 略微鬼畜 安排成这样舒服一点（要是你采纳这条的话01:08:195 (4)和01:09:395 (1)也要转成竖直的使flow更流畅）
SPOILER
01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 如果感兴趣的话可以做成跳。
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter
这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
Autumn
501 posts
ed October 2011

raririn wrote: 18635

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的？ 我只要1 kd啊...
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Autumn wrote: l5h5i

raririn wrote: 18635

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的？ 我只要1 kd啊...
反正草莓给过10kd╮(╯▽╰)╭...
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012
General
建议把combo color 3和4的顺序互换 让两个相近的颜色分开

Easy 看不出什么了=。=

Normal also found nothin =。=

Hard
00:13:395 (1) - 或许把尾巴改成soft sampleset
00:41:595 (1) - 这种主要节拍以外的散点最好也改成soft hitsound音量不大的时候还好 像这样紧凑的打击声音让人觉得不太舒服
01:07:195 (9) - ^
01:32:795 (2) - ^
01:09:195 (4) - 或许和note2放在一起？
01:07:395 (10) - 把new combo加在这里 而不是它后面的滑条？
01:35:395 (2,3) - 最好给它们两个都加new combo 这样不容易误导玩家

[/color]
00:49:795 (4,5,1) - 这里感觉不太好看 或许把4和5的位置往左下调整一些让它们和滑条1的弧度保持一致？
01:13:395 (3) - 开头加whistle？尾巴上的whistle或者就去掉 或者就连01:13:995 (4) - 一起加whistle
01:25:595 (7) - 或许CTRL+G？ 这个随意吧

这么多mod了来找我……我个新人真是给你挑不出啥东西来诶
感觉也没什么unrankable的 估计可以找MAT了？
好运吧~
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
ed October 2010
SPOILER
[General]
Artist要换成Yasuo-P (咦压缩p), tag里加上hatsune miku, Source改成Vocaloid。。不得不说这rule真蠢

[Collab]
挑不出什么 nazi一下
00:12:995 (5) - 去掉两个折返 在00:13:395加一个note, NC
00:22:795 (5) - 往上移1 grid
00:39:995 (3) - 总觉得位置不太好,虽然没什么问题
00:46:595 (5) - 左移一点 00:46:995 (1) - 可以和前面的00:46:395 (4) - 重合一下
01:06:995 (4) - 移到x368, y184 可以和01:06:395 (2,3,4) - 成三角形
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - 打起来总觉得别扭 变成4连带一个1/2滑条?
01:25:595 (7) - Ctri+G一下?

[Hard]
00:25:395 (8) - 换成一个1/1滑条?
00:39:595 (2) - x168, y136
00:41:595 (1) - 好想让你把它删掉
01:10:795 (9,1) - 这个间距..
01:27:595 (3) - 没叠好

[Flask's Normal]
01:02:595 (3,1) - 会不会有点难.. 我完全不记得我玩normal时候是个什么情况了orz
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^
01:16:995 (7,1) - ^
总觉得前半部分和后半部分难度都不一样了orzzz

[Ts8zs's Easy]
..我看不出啥 同normal没啥印象了

就这吧 我就一渣渣orz
Leorda
4,416 posts
ed June 2009
Hi there

[General]
* Add "bx1989" to Lia's Taiko and bx1989's Taiko for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent AudioLeadIn, you might want to make it consistent through the each diff


[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - Having more than 1 repeating slider can confusing for beginners


[Flask's Normal]
00:15:395 (4) - For better flow, reverse this by Ctrl+G
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - This linear pattern can be boring for beginners. Try something interesting? Like curve slider, unique pattern, or such?


[Hard]
00:47:595 (4) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts. You should make this note visible
01:00:995 (1,2,3) - Fix this spacing, please
01:25:195 (4) - If this a jump for the next pattern, this should be new combo and remove new combo at next object
01:32:795 (2) - Same issue as 00:47:595 (4)


[Collab]
00:50:995 (1) - Add finish for emphasis
01:07:595 (3) - End at 01:07:795??


Good luck then~
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Irie Miyuki wrote: 5j4f28

SPOILER
[General]
Artist要换成Yasuo-P (咦压缩p), tag里加上hatsune miku, Source改成Vocaloid。。不得不说这rule真蠢

[Collab]
挑不出什么 nazi一下
00:12:995 (5) - 去掉两个折返 在00:13:395加一个note, NC
00:22:795 (5) - 往上移1 grid
00:39:995 (3) - 总觉得位置不太好,虽然没什么问题
00:46:595 (5) - 左移一点 00:46:995 (1) - 可以和前面的00:46:395 (4) - 重合一下
01:06:995 (4) - 移到x368, y184 可以和01:06:395 (2,3,4) - 成三角形
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - 打起来总觉得别扭 变成4连带一个1/2滑条?
01:25:595 (7) - Ctri+G一下?

[Hard]
00:25:395 (8) - 换成一个1/1滑条?
00:39:595 (2) - x168, y136
00:41:595 (1) - 好想让你把它删掉
01:10:795 (9,1) - 这个间距..
01:27:595 (3) - 没叠好

[Flask's Normal]
01:02:595 (3,1) - 会不会有点难.. 我完全不记得我玩normal时候是个什么情况了orz
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^
01:16:995 (7,1) - ^
总觉得前半部分和后半部分难度都不一样了orzzz

[Ts8zs's Easy]
..我看不出啥 同normal没啥印象了

就这吧 我就一渣渣orz
yeah~

Leorda wrote: 2f1c22

Hi there

[General]
* Add "bx1989" to Lia's Taiko and bx1989's Taiko for consistency on each diff done
* Inconsistent AudioLeadIn, you might want to make it consistent through the each diff done


[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - Having more than 1 repeating slider can confusing for beginners fixed~


[Flask's Normal]
00:15:395 (4) - For better flow, reverse this by Ctrl+G orz>_<
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - This linear pattern can be boring for beginners. Try something interesting? Like curve slider, unique pattern, or such?/_\


[Hard]
00:47:595 (4) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts. You should make this note visible :O
01:00:995 (1,2,3) - Fix this spacing, please k~
01:25:195 (4) - If this a jump for the next pattern, this should be new combo and remove new combo at next object done~
01:32:795 (2) - Same issue as 00:47:595 (4) ;_;


[Collab]
00:50:995 (1) - Add finish for emphasis done:
01:07:595 (3) - End at 01:07:795?? sry ;_;


Good luck then~
Stefan
Global
10,425 posts
ed January 2011
I would love to see this ranked. .-.
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Stefan wrote: 5nd6l

I would love to see this ranked. .-.
thanks >~<
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Offset:587


[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:13:395 (1) - Why clap here? / Consider removing that and add finish.
00:14:995 (2) - Also you should remove clap here.
00:16:595 (3) - ^ (at least remove clap，it sounds so bad..)
00:19:795 (1) - ^ , and consider moving this slider to left of 00:18:195 (4).
00:21:395 (2) - ^ (something likes this will not be mentioned after)
00:48:595 (3) - Consider moving this slider to left of 00:46:995 (2) not below that
01:20:595 (3) - Drag it upward a bit with Distance Snap on.
01:33:395 (3) - Consider moving this slider to left of 01:31:795 (2) not above that


[Flask's Normal]
00:14:195 (2,3) - If I were you, I maybe put 00:14:595 (3) before (2)
01:00:995 (1) - hmm? Consider using finish instead of clap?
01:10:995 - Obviously you should add finish here.
01:14:195 - ^
01:20:595 (1) - hmm?..Maybe I may choose to remove this clap.
01:32:595 (5,1) - You may use a slider instead of them.


[Hard]
00:17:195 (3,4) - Sounds not so good to me, what about this?

00:26:195 - Why not use finish instead of clap?
00:41:795 (2,3) - Transform them into a slider.
00:42:995 (6) - Such a big jump for a hard diff.. Try lower the spacing
01:07:195 (9) - Delete this and reset the place of (10), then newcombo it.
01:10:795 (9) - What about removing this?
01:29:795 (4,5,6,7,1) - Comparing with before, the spacing of this stream seems a bit large.
01:32:795 (2) - Remove this and un-newcombo to 01:32:595 (1)



[Collab]
00:19:787 (1,2) - Sounds strange. I would only choose this.

00:39:987 (3,4,5) - Little change.
00:50:187 (1) - Move it to x:132 y:124
01:07:787 - According to the vocal, something should be here.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Collab" diff is ok, but other diffs seem not so good imo.
Great mapset , Good Luck ;)
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 1 time in total.
Kokatsu
504 posts
ed August 2011
Random mod, because I'm bored. \:D/

General 6285k


Normal got a different source. I didn't find the post so fast, but if I right, vocaloid does not go into soruce, but tags.
The taiko-diff names are..stupid? Both are Oni's, so please name them "bx1989's Taiko Oni" and "Lia's Taiko Oni".
Please add the Collab-informations (mapper and times that they map) in the map's description.

Easy 4m5wp


The beat is a bit boring. :x Let's try to fix that.

00:18:195 (4) - you miss claps here. Add one on sldierstart and maybe one at sliderending.
00:18:195 (4,1) - (4) touches (1), which looks ugly. Please flip (1) to avoid that.
00:25:795 - add a note here.
00:28:995 - ^
00:34:195 (2) - add a clap on ending.
00:32:195 - add a note here.
00:40:595 (2) - delete and replace it with 3 single notes.
00:46:995 (2) - ^
00:51:795 - add a note here.
01:02:995 (4,1) - avoid overlap.
01:10:595 - add a note here.
01:16:995 - ^
01:28:595 (4) - delete and replace with 3 single notes.
01:35:395 - add a note here.

This will ensure an easy beatmap with a bit of variety to not be boring as hell.

Normal d293k


00:19:595 - I really miss a note here. :/
00:28:995 (1,3) - I would do it vice versa: (1) should be a 1/2 repeat slider and (3) a 1/1 slider.
00:38:995 (1) - add a curve to lead to the next note?
SPOILER
00:41:395 (5) - The shape doesn't fit to the other normal curved sliders, so just use a simple curved slider. If you really want to keep it, please adjust the 2cnd sliderpoint to be in the exact middle of the slider.
00:48:995 (2,3) - you get the intention that (2) leads to (3), but there is still a 1/1 break inbetween. To avoid that, point (2) in a different direction.
01:34:595 (4,5) - move (5) a bit lower to match the flow of (4).

Hard 204o1w


00:27:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - because of grindsnap, the spacing seems to be wrong. Turn off gridsnap and adjust all notes to have the same spacing.
00:29:395 (3) - clap on ending just sounds wrong.
00:36:595 (3) - remove the finish-sounds and add whistles on all 1/2 beats, sounds better and creats a better climax to the chorus.
00:38:595 - add a note?
00:38:795 - ^
00:38:995 (1) - add clap on start.
01:10:795 (9,1) - these notes are already snapped to the new distancesnap, but it should start after the (1), so please use the old snap here.
01:26:995 (2,3) - (3) is not stacked properly on (2)'s ending. turn off gridsnap and adjust the placement to be exact the same as the sliderending (it's easier to delete the note and place it new, so you can instantly stack it.)
01:32:195 (3) - remove clap
01:32:595 (1) - remove NC

Collab 3u3c4n


OD +2, you get no 100's at all.

00:17:595 (7) - add clap?
00:39:395 (2,3) - avoid that overlap.
00:49:795 (4,1) - add NC on (4), remove NC from (1).

Taikoni 195u2s


HP and OD +1
Use and overall vol. of 80%, you don't need vol.changes. 80% through the whole song is fine. Delete all timelines that were used to change vol. afterwards.

00:01:195 (1,2) - both don?
00:48:795 (1) - kat
01:04:195 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - i prefer the following pattern: kkkkd ddk
01:12:995 (1) - kat
01:23:795 (1) - big kat, since you started first chous with a big kat aswell.
01:24:595 (4,5,1) - kdd
01:25:395 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1) - ddkkddkkd fits better.
01:26:795 (2) - kat
01:27:595 (3) - kat
01:34:995 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3) - instead of these streams, I would prefer a calm ending with three bigs. If you want, you can remove these notes and add a big note on every white tick. I prefer K K D here.

Taiko 1g464y


This is an Oni aswell, so raise OD and HP by 1 each.
Same for vol. as mentioned in other Taikomod.

00:12:595 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - use kdddd d instead.
00:32:195 (1,2,1) - kdk maybe?
00:36:895 - add a kat here.
00:56:595 (1,1,1) - add finish on all three.
01:00:995 (3,1,2) - kdk?
01:16:995 (1,1,2) - kkd?
01:34:195 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - what about kkddk d k?

Good luck~
Cuvelia
282 posts
ed November 2011

Kokatsu wrote: 1y695u

Random mod, because I'm bored. \:D/

General 6285k


Normal got a different source. I didn't find the post so fast, but if I right, vocaloid does not go into soruce, but tags.
The taiko-diff names are..stupid? Both are Oni's, so please name them "bx1989's Taiko Oni" and "Lia's Taiko Oni".
Please add the Collab-informations (mapper and times that they map) in the map's description.
Lia's Taiko => Lia's Taiko Oni , change ._.

Taiko 1g464y

This is an Oni aswell, so raise OD and HP by 1 each.
sorry , no change
Same for vol. as mentioned in other Taikomod.
Yeah, you might well say so. But these lines use for adjusting a tune and a volume.
And I like adjusting a volume, so I have no intention of deleting lines. Sorry.

00:12:595 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - use kdddd d instead. no
00:32:195 (1,2,1) - kdk maybe? ok
00:36:895 - add a kat here. ok
00:56:595 (1,1,1) - add finish on all three. ok
01:00:995 (3,1,2) - kdk? ok
01:16:995 (1,1,2) - kkd? ok
01:34:195 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - what about kkddk d k? use kkdddkkkd d K

Good luck~
thx for modding .

update ~
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256,192,57895,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,59395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,59595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,59695,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,60395,5,0,0:0:0
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256,192,64295,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,64595,1,12,0:0:0
256,192,64995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,65195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,65395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,65795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,65995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,66195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,66395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,66595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,66795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,66995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,67095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,67195,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,67295,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,67395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,67595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,67795,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,68195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,68395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,68595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,68795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,68895,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,68995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,69195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,69395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,69595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,69795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,69995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,70195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,70295,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70395,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70495,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,70995,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,71395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,71795,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,72195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,72395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,72595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,72795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,72995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,73195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,73395,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,73495,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,73595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,73695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,73795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,73995,5,0,0:0:0
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256,192,74595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,74995,5,12,0:0:0
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256,192,75795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,75995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,76195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,76395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,76595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,76695,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,76795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,76995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,77095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,77195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,77395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,77595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,77795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,77995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,78195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,78395,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,78595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,78695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,78795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,78995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,79195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,79395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,79595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,79795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,79995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,80195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,80395,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,80795,1,8,0:0:0
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256,192,81095,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,82195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,82595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,82995,1,12,0:0:0
256,192,83395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,83595,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,85995,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,87195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,87395,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,87995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,88095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,88195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,88395,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,88995,5,8,0:0:0
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256,192,89395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,89495,1,8,0:0:0
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256,192,89695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,89795,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,91195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,91395,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,92195,5,0,0:0:0
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256,192,93195,5,0,0:0:0
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256,192,93795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,93995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,94195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,94295,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,94395,5,0,0:0:0
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256,192,94595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,94695,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,94795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,94895,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,94995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,95395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,95795,5,12,0:0:0

New Taiko BG , I'm so sorry for changing a taiko BG again and again. ;_;
SPOILER
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
ed December 2010
Hi ~ raririn ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 2o6n


  1. Inconsistency in Source,pls check and fix.
  2. Rename 'Collab' diff to 'Insane' and add 'collab' in tags.
  3. 00:50:995 - #1 kiai time should end to here.
  4. Rename 'bx1989's Taikoni' to 'bx1989's Taiko Oni' pls.

[Collab] 626c5f


  1. OD+1 is better.
  2. 00:19:795 (1,2) - Change a 1/2 slider is better to here.
  3. 00:38:995 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  4. 00:39:395 (2) - Make no touch stuff and blanket,here is code.

    204,168,39395,2,0,B|240:201|294:195,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  5. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - (1) stack on (4) start point and change spacing,like this,

    here is code.
    180,172,46395,1,0,0:0:0
    92,172,46595,2,0,B|92:116|148:88,1,90
    180,172,46995,6,0,B|184:228|124:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  6. 00:50:995 (1) - Remove short spinner and Add a circle on 00:50:995 is better.
  7. 01:07:595 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this,vocal start on 01:07:795.

[Hard] 1u1958


  1. 00:32:595 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  3. 00:48:195 (1) - Make blanket with 00:47:395 (3) pls.
  4. 01:10:195 (8,9,1) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Flask's Normal] 5v5j3a


  1. 01:20:595 (1) - Remove clap,sound better to me.

[Ts8zs's Easy] 651s5o


  1. 00:18:195 (4) - You are missing Add clap to here.
  2. 00:26:195 (1,3) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
  3. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:35:395 - Add a circle to here,follow with vocal.

OK ~ Not bad for your second map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
Skystar
1,628 posts
ed May 2011
蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011

Amamiya Yuko wrote: 5z4ig

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Amamiya Yuko wrote: 5z4ig

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑

Flask wrote: 5q4g3f

Amamiya Yuko wrote: 5z4ig

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
泥马
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
ed October 2010

Flask wrote: 5q4g3f

Amamiya Yuko wrote: 5z4ig

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631

Hi ~ raririn ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 2o6n


  1. Inconsistency in Source,pls check and fix.
  2. Rename 'Collab' diff to 'Insane' and add 'collab' in tags. sorry >_< i think it's fine now
  3. 00:50:995 - #1 kiai time should end to here.
  4. Rename 'bx1989's Taikoni' to 'bx1989's Taiko Oni' pls.
[

[Collab] 626c5f


  1. OD+1 is better.
  2. 00:19:795 (1,2) - Change a 1/2 slider is better to here. it fits the rythem here imo :?
  3. 00:38:995 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  4. 00:39:395 (2) - Make no touch stuff and blanket,here is code.

    204,168,39395,2,0,B|240:201|294:195,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  5. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - (1) stack on (4) start point and change spacing,like this,

    here is code.
    180,172,46395,1,0,0:0:0
    92,172,46595,2,0,B|92:116|148:88,1,90
    180,172,46995,6,0,B|184:228|124:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  6. 00:50:995 (1) - Remove short spinner and Add a circle on 00:50:995 is better.
  7. 01:07:595 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this,vocal start on 01:07:795.

[Hard] 1u1958


  1. 00:32:595 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  3. 00:48:195 (1) - Make blanket with 00:47:395 (3) pls.
  4. 01:10:195 (8,9,1) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Flask's Normal] 5v5j3a


  1. 01:20:595 (1) - Remove clap,sound better to me.

[Ts8zs's Easy] 651s5o


  1. 00:18:195 (4) - You are missing Add clap to here.
  2. 00:26:195 (1,3) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
  3. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:35:395 - Add a circle to here,follow with vocal.

OK ~ Not bad for your second map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
fixed the others ~ thanks ~
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
ed December 2010
Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Collab] 626c5f


  1. 00:39:395 (2) - Why you didn't use code?
  2. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - ^

[Hard] 1u1958


  1. 00:32:595 - Still no fixed.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - ^

[Easy] 1h4b6d


  1. 00:26:195 (1,1) - Still no fixed.
  2. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^

再不好好改，就不要怪我不看了 ~
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Collab] 626c5f


  1. 00:39:395 (2) - Why you didn't use code?
  2. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - ^

[Hard] 1u1958


  1. 00:32:595 - Still no fixed.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - ^

[Easy] 1h4b6d


  1. 00:26:195 (1,1) - Still no fixed.
  2. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^ 换了个不对称的滑条

再不好好改，就不要怪我不看了 ~
我记得肯定真的都改了啊不知道为啥Q.Q 传了几次怎么又改回来了 老板蠢比QAQ
重新查了一遍 All fixed
Axey
1,216 posts
ed October 2009
既然要泡了我就不看咯

拉日铃加油~ :D
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