1. Easy (1.49 stars, 193 notes)
2. Hard (4.87 stars, 596 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote: 3z5l4c

The background:

Thanks for the background!

Ello! ^^ First mod on the thread!

[General]

1. Easy > Normal ?> Hard Will consider to make a normal or ask for GD >.o /

[Easy]
00:26:461 (1) - Hmm adding a finish on the head would make an effective intro!
00:32:615 (1) - ^
00:51:846 (2) - Add whistle on the tail.
01:29:538 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:33:769 (6) - Remove clap on the head,doesn't fit here. Instead, try using a whistle on the tail
01:34:923 (7) - Remove clap on the tail.
01:35:692 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:49:923 (4) - Remove finish on the head.
01:54:538 (1) - Sounds better with a drum-finish imo. To do this, just simply select the spinner, add finish, and adjust to these settings on the left:

02:13:385 (3) - Add finish on the head.
02:16:846 (5) - NC
02:25:692 (2) - Add finish on the head.
02:31:077 (7) - Add finish on the tail.
02:38:000 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:42:231 (6) - Remove clap on the head,doesn't fit here. Instead, try using a whistle on the tail
02:43:385 (7) - Remove clap on the tail.
02:48:385 (6) - Remove clap on the head,doesn't fit here. Instead, try using a whistle on the tail
02:49:539 (7) - Remove clap on the tail.
02:54:539 (6) - Remove clap on the head,doesn't fit here. Instead, try using a whistle on the tail
02:58:385 (4) - Clap should be in the tail instead.
03:02:808 (1) - drum-finish.
03:31:846 (1) - Add whistle and/or finish.
03:38:385 (2) - Change clap to drum-clap, will match the drum hits in the music here
03:38:769 (3) - ^ On the head, and add the default finish on the tail.
03:47:231 (1) - Add finish on the head.
03:53:385 (1) - ^
03:58:769 (7) - Remove clap on the tail.
03:59:538 (1) - Add finish on the head.
04:05:692 (1) - ^
04:10:308 (6) - NC

Fixed all hitsounds and combos mods.

Wow, really nice flow and rhythm You definitely dominated the main aspects of a map. Thanks

[Hard]

1. I suggest Increasing the DS up a bit to 1.1 or 1.2, a little space between each object would be nice. Added to 1.1x spacing at the start.

00:26:461 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:32:615 (1) - ^
01:29:538 (1) - ^
01:48:000 (1) - ^ And the jumps too big Shortened the jumps.
01:54:154 (1) - Change the clap on the head to a finish.
01:57:231 (1) - ^
02:13:385 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:25:693 (1) - ^
02:31:847 (1) - ^
02:38:000 (1) - ^
02:44:154 (1) - ^
02:50:308 (1) - ^
03:39:538 (1) - ^
03:43:385 (2) - Change the clap to a finish.
03:47:231 (1) - Add finish on the head.
03:53:385 (1) - ^
03:59:538 (1) - ^
04:05:692 (1) - ^
04:11:846 (1) - ^
04:18:770 (3) - Change the clap on the head to a finish.
04:30:308 (1) - Add finish
04:33:385 (1) - ^

Fixed all hitsounds mods.

Just missing a few crucial finish hitsounds, that's pretty much it from my standards ^^

Really nice map!
Good luck on ranking,and hope this helps~!

Thanks for your mod!

_AI wrote: 2c5f4t

Yo >.o/ about the GD u asked me to map... ahhh :// my brain suddenly get suck by some sort of powerful physic power dunno coming from whr, can't tot of any idea lel...

Blue - Highly Recommended
Black - Suggestion

[Hard]

00:37:615 (6) - Change the pattern like PIC1, better flow + cleaner looking for 00:38:192 (7,8) Fixed.

PIC1

01:04:731 (8) - This sound like an extra note, remove Fixed.
01:04:154 (7) - Extend to 01:04:731 Keep.
01:12:615 (1,2,3) - It wound sound better if you change it like PIC2 and add some hitsound on it Will fix later.
02:21:077 (1,2,3) - ^

PIC2

01:28:769 (7) - This slider make the flow strange I follow the guitar
01:31:077 (5) - NC
01:40:692 (7,8) - Slider placement like this doesn't really suit the song, suggest to change Style, keep
02:49:154 (7,8) - ^
03:16:846 (7,8) - ^
01:48:769 (3,4) - ^
01:50:308 (3,4) - ^
03:58:385 (6,7) - ^
01:41:077 (1) - NC
01:42:808 (3) - The jump is kinda ridiculous Fixed.
01:46:269 (4,5) - The slider completely broke the flow Fixed.
03:29:154 (8) - what the hell is this ? so cute slider xia xD haha (Y) >_<''
04:07:231 (5) - Remove this if you are following the vocal to map the song Keep the flow so player won't think it's a jump.
04:10:308 (1,2,3,4) - Strange flow between the slider Fixed.

[Easy]
ahaha i dunno how2mod this...
Not bad >.o/

AnreFM wrote: 3255c

Hi Rakuen~
M4M here, hope this helps~
okay let's start

[Easy]
00:31:077 (5) - Change this to a 1/2 repeat. Fit well with the background music ouo Fixed.
01:28:769 (7) - Make this curvy, fir with the vocal Fixed.
01:32:615 (5) - well, the current one is a bit off, change this to a 1/1 repeat. Fit well with vocal and rhythm in my opinion Fixed.
01:47:231 (1) - Because you're following the vocals mostly in the chorus, this one feels a bit off. Try http://puu.sh/4BuF2.jpg Keep.
02:14:923 (4,1,2) - These three doesn't placed well and looked a bit cramped, try rearranging them a bit Fixed.
02:27:231 (3) - Move the tail a bit to right and up for better blanket Fixed.
02:31:077 (7) - Feels weird with all the connecting notes. Change this to a circle only to keep the rhythm consistent with the silences you used before this part Fixed.
02:37:231 (7) - Change this to a circle only, fit well with the music--that slider just doesn't fit Fixed.
02:42:231 (6) - Make it curvy? fit with the down vocal Fixed.
02:55:693 (1) - aand the rest of this part, same with 01:47:231 (1) - this part is even more fit Fixed.
03:48:385 (2) - Flow isn't good if exactly above 03:47:231 (1) - like that, try moving it to left Fixed.
well this diff doesn't have any serious problem, but what really is noticeable here is the pattern repetition, *sigh* It's just too much
the song itself is fairly repeating, but I think you can use another pattern than 1/1 slider than circle and repeat it like that

[Hard]
Yeah hard doesn't have any big problem either, just that repetition of pattern really need to be arranged more

Yeah i guess that's all, btw you NEED to add normal, the spread between easy and hard is too high ouo
hope that helps!
star and good luck~

wonders wrote: 3t4j1t

hi~
for M4M

i wanna know can I use Chinese XD

[Hard]
01:25:439 (4,5) feel uncomfortable here, 4 feel strange with a red point slider and 5 should start at 01:26:208
01:37:168 try this place (272,260)
01:51:204 NC
02:17:352 ctrl+h flow is better http://puu.sh/4JYLU.jpg
02:18:891 http://puu.sh/4JYRF.jpg?
02:33:888 ^
02:39:709 (3,5) http://puu.sh/4JZ1g.jpg try this?
02:40:217 flow is bad
03:00:037 NC

[Easy]
02:39:656 out screen
~

BounceBabe wrote: 535p36

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

Easy

- The combos are pretty long, that's not good for an Easy. You should make them shorter, so beginners don't get confused or stressed.
- You have so many stacks in this. It's not good for beginners, due to them not being able yet to fully read how long they have to wait until they click. You should unstack the elements. 00:51:215 (4,1,2) - For example

Nothing else, if you fix this, then it's a perfect difficultie

Hard

00:45:832 (1,2) - This slow down is not visible enough to realize when playing. You need to make it clear or remove the section. Same for the other slowdowns.
01:45:051 (1) - So far you had jumps from end of the combo to NC. Why is there a jump here then?
02:42:924 (6,7) - That little jump is really not needed, you should make normal spacing.
02:46:770 (7,8) - You already have a jump here, why is this tiny jump needed then 02:47:154 (8,1) - ?
02:52:923 (8,9,10) - Make the spacing between them jumps consistant. 02:51:384 (3,4,5) - here you did it as well.
03:25:801 (1) - I got told from jericho that these slowdown sliders are unrankable. So please find another slider and remove it.
03:30:415 (1,2,3) - Well this is really messed up, first for the reason of this 03:30:415 (1,2) - 1/4 break between them. Then, this is a 1/3 rythm, so make it 1/3. You used two different ones.
03:46:951 - Why dont you make the spinner until here
03:48:873 (6,7) - Compared to the other jumps, this is a little too big and exaggerated. Make it smaller.
04:21:175 (1,2) - Why this small spacing change? Its not a jump so why is the spacing different here. Make it normal.

Nothing else, good luck

popner wrote: 2kn2a

Title应该用拼音"Gou Ai"吧，翻译放在tag里。

音频载入错误是什么情况。