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Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment Th!s World ( TV Size ) [Osu 4v401g

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mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月29日 at 13:39:34

Artist: Black Raison D'etre
Title: Van!shment Th!s World ( TV Size )
Source: 中二病でも恋がしたい！戀
Tags: rikka takanashi yuuta ShikiNoHollow
BPM: 167
Filesize: 8523kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 4Key (1.47 stars, 326 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (2.7 stars, 680 notes)
  3. NM - 4Key (2.06 stars, 492 notes)
  4. Shiki's MX - 4Key (3.86 stars, 911 notes)
: Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment Th!s World ( TV Size )
: Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment Th!s World ( TV Size ) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
This Song From Chuunibyou Demo Koi Ga Shitai Ren! ED
Need More Mods
Thanks To ShikiNoHollow for MX Diff
Enjoy :)
Last edited by mkilla , edited 25 times in total.
Gravey-
1,491 posts
ed July 2013
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

General:
BPM: 167.00
Offset: 366
Kiai:
Starting here 00:54:976 to 01:06:114
Starting here 01:06:473 to 01:17:791
Starting here 01:18:330 to 01:22:282
Source: 中二病でも恋がしたい！戀
Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Tags: Chuunibyo demo Koi Ga Shitai! rikka takanashi yuuta season 2 opening
Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Enable countdown & Letterbox during breaks
Check:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen
|1|2|3|4|

Pls re-map due to change of BPM and Offset. Better use "Beat Snap Divisor" 1/2 or 1/4 and here read this to get your map rank Osu!Mania Ranking Criteria ;)

Good luck!~ =w=)b
shionelove
1,522 posts
ed September 2010
hi~from m4m
column 1234

many unsnapped notes >< fix please
and unfortunately,this mapset need one more 4K diff>< because of TV size(around 2:00)
make 4K Easy or Insane or both please~

PM me when you fix timing thing~
Lirai
1,516 posts
ed December 2013
Offset : 368

Lalu di editor teken Ctrl+A lalu Ctrl+X dan paste di sini 00:00:238
Terus go to Timing > Resnap All Notes > Remap jdi gampang deh, cuman pindahin note yg salah tempatnya
Buat mapping Osu!Mania, jgn polyrhythm atau disebut juga buat 2 atau lebih irama di lagunya ( notenya gk ngikut instrument lagu )

Kalo udh kelar, PM me ;)


no kudos
Last edited by Sakura , edited 1 time in total.
Lirai
1,516 posts
ed December 2013
Nah kan udh ya, sebelum gw mod patternnya, coba lu teken F6, Delete semua kecuali yg paling atas
Terus Ctrl+C Code ini

54995,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
66313,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
66492,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
77989,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
78349,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
82121,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Nah kau Ctrl+V ke Timing tadi, jgn pake SV dulu buat NM sama HDnya

Terus Patternya tadi aku check sedikit, klitanya kurang pas sama lagunya, kamu coba pake Playback Rate 25% ( dipojok bawah kanan ) nah kau taruh note di setiap suara drum ataupun gitarnya

ok Good Luck ~

no kudos
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter
GraveChaos : Thanks For Mod :D
hutunohito : Ok i'll Try to be better, and i was add one Ease diff :D
DE-CADE Thanks ya udah bimbing ane sejauh ini :D
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

DE-CADE wrote: 1c3f5d

Nah kan udh ya, sebelum gw mod patternnya, coba lu teken F6, Delete semua kecuali yg paling atas
Terus Ctrl+C Code ini

54995,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
66313,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
66492,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
77989,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
78349,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
82121,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Nah kau Ctrl+V ke Timing tadi, jgn pake SV dulu buat NM sama HDnya

Terus Patternya tadi aku check sedikit, klitanya kurang pas sama lagunya, kamu coba pake Playback Rate 25% ( dipojok bawah kanan ) nah kau taruh note di setiap suara drum ataupun gitarnya

ok Good Luck ~

no kudos
Udah Beres gan :D Udah di Tambah kiainya sama udah di benerin pattern yang kurang pas nya :)
shionelove
1,522 posts
ed September 2010

...not completely fixed yet
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

hutunohito wrote: 25183z


...not completely fixed yet
oh okay :)
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

[GraveChaos] wrote: 2x5w3k

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

General:
BPM: 167.00
Offset: 366
Kiai:
Starting here 00:54:976 to 01:06:114
Starting here 01:06:473 to 01:17:791
Starting here 01:18:330 to 01:22:282
Source: 中二病でも恋がしたい！戀
Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Tags: Chuunibyo demo Koi Ga Shitai! rikka takanashi yuuta season 2 opening
Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Enable countdown & Letterbox during breaks
Check:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen
|1|2|3|4|

Pls re-map due to change of BPM and Offset. Better use "Beat Snap Divisor" 1/2 or 1/4 and here read this to get your map rank Osu!Mania Ranking Criteria ;)

Good luck!~ =w=)b
sorry for late

Ok
All Done Thanks :D
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
ed June 2013
Hi mkilla
mod ready

[EZ]
00:02:540 - add note to 4
00:05:414 - ^
00:06:133 - 01:27:151 - does not coincide with the rhythm, correct it

NM and HD need remap :|

Good luck ! ;)
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

[Shana Lesus] wrote: 631y3d

Hi mkilla
mod ready

[EZ]
Fixed00:02:540 - add note to 4
Fixed00:05:414 - ^
Fixed00:06:133 - 01:27:151 - does not coincide with the rhythm, correct it

NM and HD need remap :|

Good luck ! ;)
EZ finish :D
i'll try try to be better ;)
Thanks
Last edited by mkilla , edited 1 time in total.
Lirai
1,516 posts
ed December 2013
eh katanya udh di remap O.O

ap HD ak aj yg buat
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

DE-CADE wrote: 1c3f5d

eh katanya udh di remap O.O

ap HD ak aj yg buat
iya gan udah di remap 1x koq , jadi gimana? lebih baik remap lagi ato di benerin aja :)
Btw thanks a lot for star nya gan ;)

wah ide bagus gan, ane gak tahan buat HDnya :o
Kawawa
Kawawa
Hello :)
modding desu,

IT
Column 1/2/3/4

NM
00:08:828 - add at 3
00:09:007 - delete 3
00:19:786 - add at 1

HD
00:33:349 - move to 2
00:34:247 - move to 3,4
00:34:426 - move to 1
00:40:175 - move to 3
01:16:193 - move to 3
01:17:720 - move to 2

and, some note is not cync,
u should, some of the note move to 1/4beat snap red,white line :)
check it XD
good luck
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

KawaEE wrote: 6o323j

Hello :)
modding desu,

IT
Column 1/2/3/4

NM
Fixed! 00:08:828 - add at 3
Fixed! 00:09:007 - delete 3
Fixed! 00:19:786 - add at 1

HD
Fixed! 00:33:349 - move to 2
Fixed! 00:34:247 - move to 3,4
Fixed! 00:34:426 - move to 1
Fixed! 00:40:175 - move to 3
Fixed!01:16:193 - move to 3
Fixed!01:17:720 - move to 2

and, some note is not cync,
u should, some of the note move to 1/4beat snap red,white line :)
check it XD
good luck
Arigatou Gozaimasu KawaEE :)
Lirai
1,516 posts
ed December 2013
hhhh sorry, ak gk bsa mapping anime song x)
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

DE-CADE wrote: 1c3f5d

hhhh sorry, ak gk bsa mapping anime song x)
haha
ane hobby mainin map anime soalnya :) & gak terlalu banyak tau lagu2 BMS, SDVX II, xi dan sejenisnya :|
Harbyter
Beatmap Nominator
1,381 posts
ed October 2011
hi~ :) here my mod from the request

[MOD]

column -1-2-3-4-

HD
00:03:259 (3259|0) - i suggest to end this LN here 00:05:414 - and turn this note 00:05:414 (5414|1) - in a LN till here 00:06:133 -

00:07:480 (7480|1,7480|3) - move here 00:07:570 -
00:07:750 (7750|1,7750|2,7750|0) - move here 00:07:840 -
00:08:019 (8019|3,8019|0) - move here 00:08:109 -
00:08:199 (8199|1,8199|2) - move here 00:08:289 -
00:08:468 (8468|0) - move here 00:08:558 -
00:08:558 - add note 2
00:08:648 (8648|3) - delete
00:08:917 - add note 3
00:08:917 (8917|3) - start this LN here 00:09:007 - and end here 00:11:522 - , to delete this 00:11:343 (11343|3) -
00:10:085 - add note 3
00:10:085 (10085|3) - start this LN here 00:10:265 -
00:10:624 (10624|2) - ?? delete?
00:11:163 - add note 3
here you can't break the rhytm without notes,so i suggest to turn this note 00:12:420 (12420|3) - in a LN and end here 00:12:959 -
-----

00:19:786 (19786|1,19786|2,19876|3,19965|1,20055|1,20145|1,20325|1) - ???xd
if you want to change here the mod >

00:19:786 (19786|1) - move in col1
00:19:786 (19786|2) - move here 00:19:696 -
00:19:876 (19876|3) - start this LN here 00:19:786 -
00:19:965 (19965|1) - move in col 1
00:20:145 (20145|1) - move in col 3 and turn in a LN till here 00:20:504 -
00:20:325 (20325|1) - start this LN here 00:20:504 -
----

00:50:774 (50774|3,50774|1,50864|0,50953|1,51043|2,51313|3,51492|2,51582|1,51672|0,51852|2,51941|3) - ?????????

trying to fix this pattern >
00:50:504 (50504|2,50504|1) - delete those notes

00:50:594 - add note 2
00:50:684 - add note 3
00:50:774 (50774|3) - move this note here 00:50:684 -
00:50:953 (50953|1) - delete
00:51:223 - add note 3
00:51:402 - add note 1 3
00:51:492 (51492|2,51582|1) - CTRL+H
00:51:672 (51672|0) - delete
00:51:852 (51852|2) - move here 00:51:762 -

---

00:54:816 (54816|0) - delete
00:54:816 (54816|3) - this LN should start here 00:54:995 -
00:57:690 (57690|1) - this LN should start here 00:57:870 - and end here 00:59:307 - ,delete this 00:59:307 (59307|1) -
00:59:127 (59127|0) - put this note here 00:58:947 -
00:59:127 (59127|3) - move in col 3
00:59:307 - add note 1 4
01:00:205 (60205|2,60295|0) - CTRL+H
01:00:384 - add note 3
01:00:474 (60474|3) - delete
----

omg lol

01:00:564 (60564|1) - delete
01:00:744 - start in col 2 a LN till here 01:01:103 -
01:00:744 - add note1
01:00:923 (60923|3,60923|2) - move here 01:01:103 -
01:01:283 (61283|1) - move here 01:01:462 -
01:01:283 (61283|0) - this LN start here 01:01:462 - and ends here 01:01:822 -
01:01:552 (61552|1,61911|0) - delete
01:01:911 (61911|2,61911|3) - start here 01:01:822 -
01:02:271 (62271|2) - move here 01:02:181 -
01:02:540 (62540|3,62540|1) - move here 01:02:450 -
01:02:720 - add note 3
01:03:259 (63259|0) - delete
01:02:810 (62810|2) - start this LN here 01:02:899 - and move in col 1
01:03:618 (63618|3) - end this LN here 01:03:977 -
01:04:337 (64337|2) - move inc ol 4
01:03:887 (63887|2) - start here 01:03:977 - and ends here 01:04:337 -
01:04:157 (64157|1) - move here 01:03:977 -
01:04:516 (64516|1) - move in col 4
01:04:516 (64516|0) - delete
01:04:696 - add note 1 3
01:04:876 - add note 1 3
01:09:187 (69187|3) - end here 01:09:367 -
01:09:456 (69456|2) - start here 01:09:367 - and end here 01:09:546 -
01:09:456 (69456|1) - move here 01:09:367 -
01:09:546 - put a LN in col 2 till here 01:09:726 -
01:10:804 (70804|0) - move in col 4
01:10:983 (70983|3) - delete
01:11:163 (71163|0,71163|2,71163|3) - move here 01:11:073 -
01:11:343 - add note 3
01:17:181 (77181|2) - move here 01:17:091 -
01:17:361 (77361|0) - move here 01:17:271 -
01:17:540 (77540|2) - move here 01:17:450 -
01:17:630 - add note 1 3
01:17:899 (77899|2) - move here 01:17:810 -
01:18:169 (78169|3) - delete
01:24:097 (84097|3) - end here 01:24:816 -
01:24:367 (84367|2) - move here 01:24:456 -
01:24:456 - add note 2

ok,here my little mod lol ,hope my mod will be helpfull for you :)
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

Harbyter wrote: 3e6i6m

hi~ :) here my mod from the request

[MOD]

column -1-2-3-4-

HD
00:03:259 (3259|0) - i suggest to end this LN here 00:05:414 - and turn this note 00:05:414 (5414|1) - in a LN till here 00:06:133 -

00:07:480 (7480|1,7480|3) - move here 00:07:570 - Fixed!
00:07:750 (7750|1,7750|2,7750|0) - move here 00:07:840 -Fixed!
00:08:019 (8019|3,8019|0) - move here 00:08:109 - Fixed!
00:08:199 (8199|1,8199|2) - move here 00:08:289 - Fixed!
00:08:468 (8468|0) - move here 00:08:558 - Fixed!
00:08:558 - add note 2 Fixed!
00:08:648 (8648|3) - delete Fixed!
00:08:917 - add note 3 Fixed!
00:08:917 (8917|3) - start this LN here 00:09:007 - and end here 00:11:522 - , to delete this 00:11:343 (11343|3) - Fixed!
00:10:085 - add note 3 Fixed!
00:10:085 (10085|3) - start this LN here 00:10:265 - Fixed!
00:10:624 (10624|2) - ?? delete? Fixed!
00:11:163 - add note 3 Fixed!
here you can't break the rhytm without notes,so i suggest to turn this note 00:12:420 (12420|3) - in a LN and end here 00:12:959 - Fixed!
-----

00:19:786 (19786|1,19786|2,19876|3,19965|1,20055|1,20145|1,20325|1) - ???xd
if you want to change here the mod >

00:19:786 (19786|1) - move in col1 Changed!
00:19:786 (19786|2) - move here 00:19:696 - Changed!
00:19:876 (19876|3) - start this LN here 00:19:786 - Changed!
00:19:965 (19965|1) - move in col 1 Changed!
00:20:145 (20145|1) - move in col 3 and turn in a LN till here 00:20:504 - Changed!
00:20:325 (20325|1) - start this LN here 00:20:504 - Changed!
----

00:50:774 (50774|3,50774|1,50864|0,50953|1,51043|2,51313|3,51492|2,51582|1,51672|0,51852|2,51941|3) - ?????????

trying to fix this pattern >
00:50:504 (50504|2,50504|1) - delete those notes Fixed!

00:50:594 - add note 2 Fixed!
00:50:684 - add note 3
00:50:774 (50774|3) - move this note here 00:50:684 - Fixed!
00:50:953 (50953|1) - delete Fixed!
00:51:223 - add note 3 Fixed!
00:51:402 - add note 1 3
00:51:492 (51492|2,51582|1) - CTRL+H Fixed!
00:51:672 (51672|0) - delete Fixed!
00:51:852 (51852|2) - move here 00:51:762 - Fixed!

---

00:54:816 (54816|0) - delete Fixed!
00:54:816 (54816|3) - this LN should start here 00:54:995 - Fixed!
00:57:690 (57690|1) - this LN should start here 00:57:870 - and end here 00:59:307 - ,delete this 00:59:307 (59307|1) - Fixed!
00:59:127 (59127|0) - put this note here 00:58:947 - Fixed!
00:59:127 (59127|3) - move in col 3 Fixed!
00:59:307 - add note 1 4 Fixed!
01:00:205 (60205|2,60295|0) - CTRL+H Fixed!
01:00:384 - add note 3 Fixed!
01:00:474 (60474|3) - delete Fixed!
----

omg lol

01:00:564 (60564|1) - delete Fixed!
01:00:744 - start in col 2 a LN till here 01:01:103 - Fixed!
01:00:744 - add note1 Fixed!
01:00:923 (60923|3,60923|2) - move here 01:01:103 - Fixed!
01:01:283 (61283|1) - move here 01:01:462 - Fixed!
01:01:283 (61283|0) - this LN start here 01:01:462 - and ends here 01:01:822 - Fixed!
01:01:552 (61552|1,61911|0) - delete Fixed!
01:01:911 (61911|2,61911|3) - start here 01:01:822 - Fixed!
01:02:271 (62271|2) - move here 01:02:181 - Fixed!
01:02:540 (62540|3,62540|1) - move here 01:02:450 - Fixed!
01:02:720 - add note 3 Fixed!
01:03:259 (63259|0) - delete Fixed!
01:02:810 (62810|2) - start this LN here 01:02:899 - and move in col 1 Fixed!
01:03:618 (63618|3) - end this LN here 01:03:977 - Fixed!
01:04:337 (64337|2) - move inc ol 4 Fixed!
01:03:887 (63887|2) - start here 01:03:977 - and ends here 01:04:337 - Fixed!
01:04:157 (64157|1) - move here 01:03:977 - Fixed!
01:04:516 (64516|1) - move in col 4 Fixed!
01:04:516 (64516|0) - delete Fixed!
01:04:696 - add note 1 3 Fixed!
01:04:876 - add note 1 3 Fixed!
01:09:187 (69187|3) - end here 01:09:367 - Fixed!
01:09:456 (69456|2) - start here 01:09:367 - and end here 01:09:546 - Fixed!
01:09:456 (69456|1) - move here 01:09:367 - Fixed!
01:09:546 - put a LN in col 2 till here 01:09:726 - Fixed!
01:10:804 (70804|0) - move in col 4 Fixed!
01:10:983 (70983|3) - delete Fixed!
01:11:163 (71163|0,71163|2,71163|3) - move here 01:11:073 - Fixed!
01:11:343 - add note 3 Fixed!
01:17:181 (77181|2) - move here 01:17:091 - Fixed!
01:17:361 (77361|0) - move here 01:17:271 - Fixed!
01:17:540 (77540|2) - move here 01:17:450 - Fixed!
01:17:630 - add note 1 3 Fixed!
01:17:899 (77899|2) - move here 01:17:810 - Fixed!
01:18:169 (78169|3) - delete Fixed!
01:24:097 (84097|3) - end here 01:24:816 - Fixed!
01:24:367 (84367|2) - move here 01:24:456 - Fixed!
01:24:456 - add note 2
Fixed!

ok,here my little mod lol ,hope my mod will be helpfull for you :)
Thank you so much Harbyter your mod ao helpful :)
Lunatic Raccoon
546 posts
ed May 2013
Here's my mod
Sorry for the delay. I was pretty busy those couples of days so i leaf mod reqs for the other member in the queue, but he rejected yours ;w;
Anyhow, i'm back and ready to mod x3

Hmm, looks like you need to fix your offset first...

Change:
BPM to 167
Offset to 365
Ayaya
366 posts
ed August 2013
I was going to mod this but our mapping style is different i think or there is just so many mistakes it's hard to mod :(
good luck though :)
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

Lunatic Raccoon wrote: 671rp

Here's my mod
Sorry for the delay. I was pretty busy those couples of days so i leaf mod reqs for the other member in the queue, but he rejected yours ;w;
Anyhow, i'm back and ready to mod x3

Hmm, looks like you need to fix your offset first...

Change:
BPM to 167
Offset to 365
Hi Racoon
I've changed the offset of my map :)
can you start mod the pattern :D
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

Ayaya wrote: 3f4k4l

I was going to mod this but our mapping style is different i think or there is just so many mistakes it's hard to mod :(
good luck though :)
Hmmm okey i see :)
SReisen
919 posts
ed October 2011
please irc with me from FaL3C's osu!mania Team Modding

when i play HD , i can say , is really lacking note density ,

ill will be free on Saturday or Sunday
Lunatic Raccoon
546 posts
ed May 2013
Ok i'm ready as hell to mod

General
  1. Since you changed the offset, you should resnap all Kiais please~ (It's in AIMod)

EZ
  1. 00:06:832 to 00:12:041 - Remap all of this please. It looks so messed up, wrong timings everywhere orz
  2. 00:12:400 (12400|1) - Have it ends at 00:12:953
  3. Ehm... 00:14:736 to 00:34:856 - Please be more creative... Just a streak of normal notes... Some are also mistimed too
  4. ...

Seems like you need to remap all of this diff
I just can't mod it, sorry ;w;
You'd like to check on this thread, really useful for new mappers: [Tutorial] osu!mania mapping, Basics
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

ShikiNoHollow wrote: 4f4l18

please irc with me from FaL3C's osu!mania Team Modding

when i play HD , i can say , is really lacking note density ,

ill will be free on Saturday or Sunday
Allright :D
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

Lunatic Raccoon wrote: 671rp

Ok i'm ready as hell to mod

General
  1. Since you changed the offset, you should resnap all Kiais please~ (It's in AIMod)

EZ
  1. 00:06:832 to 00:12:041 - Remap all of this please. It looks so messed up, wrong timings everywhere orz
  2. 00:12:400 (12400|1) - Have it ends at 00:12:953
  3. Ehm... 00:14:736 to 00:34:856 - Please be more creative... Just a streak of normal notes... Some are also mistimed too
  4. ...

Seems like you need to remap all of this diff
I just can't mod it, sorry ;w;
You'd like to check on this thread, really useful for new mappers: [Tutorial] osu!mania mapping, Basics
Thanks
i know its hard to mod , because i just a new mapper :|
-nowsmart-
747 posts
ed September 2012
Hi :D

EZ
00:06:832 (6832|2) - move to 1
00:07:011 - add to 3
00:07:370 (7370|3,7550|0,7730|2,7999|1,8179|3,8359|0) - delete all. what sound?
try my pattern :D
00:07:550 - add to 4
00:07:820 - add to 1
00:08:089 - add to 4
00:08:269 - add to 2
00:08:538 - add to 3
00:08:808 - add to 1
00:08:987 - add to 2 and 3
00:08:718 (8718|3) - delete
00:08:718 - 00:13:927 - follow guitar sounds? i suggest to delete all LNs and follow the drum sounds
00:16:263 - 00:20:394 - move all up 1/4 beats ( why put them on blue line? )
00:23:269 (23269|3,23448|2) - this too
00:26:682 - 00:27:760 - ^
00:29:017 - 00:30:454 - ^
00:47:520 - 00:48:598 - ^
00:53:448 (53448|3,53628|0,53808|1,53987|0,53987|3) - ^
00:56:412 (56412|0,56432|0) - what is this :D

NM
00:06:023 (6023|3,6113|2,6293|0,6472|1,6562|3,6652|0) - delete all and try this http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2193285
why put many notes on blue line ( it's no sound ). move all of them to red line or white line follow the rhythm ( use 50% playback rate to focus the rhythm )

HD
nice :D

sorry about poor mod ... i hope it can helped you
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

nowsmart wrote: 5t4wm

Hi :D

EZ
00:06:832 (6832|2) - move to 1
00:07:011 - add to 3
00:07:370 (7370|3,7550|0,7730|2,7999|1,8179|3,8359|0) - delete all. what sound?
try my pattern :D
00:07:550 - add to 4
00:07:820 - add to 1
00:08:089 - add to 4
00:08:269 - add to 2
00:08:538 - add to 3
00:08:808 - add to 1
00:08:987 - add to 2 and 3
00:08:718 (8718|3) - delete
00:08:718 - 00:13:927 - follow guitar sounds? i suggest to delete all LNs and follow the drum sounds
00:16:263 - 00:20:394 - move all up 1/4 beats ( why put them on blue line? )
00:23:269 (23269|3,23448|2) - this too
00:26:682 - 00:27:760 - ^
00:29:017 - 00:30:454 - ^
00:47:520 - 00:48:598 - ^
00:53:448 (53448|3,53628|0,53808|1,53987|0,53987|3) - ^
00:56:412 (56412|0,56432|0) - what is this :D

NM
00:06:023 (6023|3,6113|2,6293|0,6472|1,6562|3,6652|0) - delete all and try this http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2193285
why put many notes on blue line ( it's no sound ). move all of them to red line or white line follow the rhythm ( use 50% playback rate to focus the rhythm )

HD
nice :D

sorry about poor mod ... i hope it can helped you
Im so glad Nowsmart :)
Thank you so much your mod exactly Helpful for me :D
SReisen
919 posts
ed October 2011
IRC
18:20 ShikiNoHollow: hey
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: you free now
18:21 mkilla: hi, im sory for IRC mod , i cant find you
18:21 mkilla: yup
18:21 mkilla: :)
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: i add you
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: thats why i can find you
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: want to add me back?
18:21 mkilla: ok i'll add you too
18:21 mkilla: yup :)
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: ok
18:22 ShikiNoHollow: start with HD
18:22 *ShikiNoHollow is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/b/514486 Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment This World [HD]]
18:22 ShikiNoHollow: open already?
18:23 mkilla: wait
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: urghh
18:23 mkilla: im ready :)
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: now 6:23
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: 7:30 need to go out
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: im going to make you remapped
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: within my suggestion
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: the starting
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:365 (365|1,3239|0,5394|3) - remove this
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: not really needed
18:24 mkilla: okay
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:365 - add note to 1
18:25 mkilla: done
18:25 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:724 (724|3,903|2) - ctrl+j
18:25 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:903 (903|0) - move to 2
18:26 mkilla: allright :)
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: 00:02:520 (2520|2) - move to - 00:02:700 -
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: 00:02:879 - add note to 2
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: hitsound okay
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: 00:03:239 - you removed the LN alright , add note to 1
18:26 mkilla: okay
18:27 ShikiNoHollow: 00:04:496 (4496|2) - move to 1
18:27 mkilla: done
18:27 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:035 (5035|1,5215|2) - ctrl + h
18:27 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:394 (5394|1) - move to 1
18:28 mkilla: done
18:28 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:574 - add note to 2
18:28 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:754 - add note to 3
18:28 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:394 - you remove LN?
18:28 mkilla: yup
18:29 ShikiNoHollow: do LN like before
18:29 ShikiNoHollow: coz got a woossiishhh sound
18:29 mkilla: how long?
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: 00:06:113 -
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: that part
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: got 3 note together
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200329
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: done ?
18:31 mkilla: wait
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: im sorry
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: im really in hurry
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: not yet eat or bath
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: just back from work
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: tired ><
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: just dont mind me
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: i really like this chuuni ed song
18:32 mkilla: im soryy to :(
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: i did make a harder diff
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: if you dont mind
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: i can give my diff to you
18:33 mkilla: finish
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: 00:07:550 (7550|3,7820|2) - ctrl + j
18:33 mkilla: same like me, im a chuuni addict :3
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: ><
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: 00:07:820 (7820|1) - remove
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: this will be same as - 00:08:089 (8089|3,8089|0,8269|2,8269|1) -
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: similer but reverse
18:34 mkilla: done
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: since the sound out and in , then in and out
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: if you dont understand its okay
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: just an explain
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: ><
18:35 mkilla: yeah i know :p
18:35 mkilla: done
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: is getting harder here
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: im going to change all
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:987 - start from here is a total bad mapping
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: but its okay
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: since you just experiance mapping
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: it actually came out good
18:36 mkilla: i hope :)
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:897 (8897|2) - remove
18:37 ShikiNoHollow: no that wont do it , ill give screenshot
18:37 mkilla: ok
18:39 mkilla: hey what about change beatmap name? it have some typo Van!shment this world and the real title is Van!sment Th!s world can i change it?
18:39 ShikiNoHollow: yes you should
18:39 ShikiNoHollow: the title must be corrected
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: urghh why cant
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: ohh already
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200359
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:808 -
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: urghh
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: this is hard
18:40 mkilla: but if i change the title , and my map not pending but not submited
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: no
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: change 2 diff name
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: then
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: after that
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: the last diff that not change , change it
18:41 mkilla: oh i see :)
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: is hard to mod like this
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: ill do the rest
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: later i give the diff
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: is it okay or not?
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: nvm
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: lets keep going
18:43 mkilla: you want to add new diff for this map?
18:43 ShikiNoHollow: no
18:43 ShikiNoHollow: nvm
18:43 ShikiNoHollow: lets continue
18:43 mkilla: allright
18:45 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:808 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200376 -
18:45 mkilla: finish
18:45 ShikiNoHollow: done?
18:45 ShikiNoHollow: 00:11:323 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200381
18:46 mkilla: wait
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: uhh
18:49 mkilla: done
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: all done?
18:49 mkilla: yes
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: 00:12:580 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200393
18:50 ShikiNoHollow: 00:13:838 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200396
18:51 mkilla: finish
18:51 ShikiNoHollow: all?
18:52 mkilla: yup :)
18:52 ShikiNoHollow: i assume ill finish untill here right - 00:14:376 -
18:52 mkilla: yes
18:53 ShikiNoHollow: form here - 00:14:736 - to all , what do you follow?
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: can you update this
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: continue tomorrow
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: i need to take bath
18:54 mkilla: i think the pattern is just repeat the pattern before
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: lol
18:54 mkilla: allright
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: is not about the patter
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: first
18:55 mkilla: i need your advice :)
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: listen what you heard
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: sure
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: anytime
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: ill post this you can gime kds
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: later on ill irc
18:55 mkilla: i'll update it , okay
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

ShikiNoHollow wrote: 4f4l18

IRC
18:20 ShikiNoHollow: hey
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: you free now
18:21 mkilla: hi, im sory for IRC mod , i cant find you
18:21 mkilla: yup
18:21 mkilla: :)
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: i add you
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: thats why i can find you
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: want to add me back?
18:21 mkilla: ok i'll add you too
18:21 mkilla: yup :)
18:21 ShikiNoHollow: ok
18:22 ShikiNoHollow: start with HD
18:22 *ShikiNoHollow is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/b/514486 Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment This World [HD]]
18:22 ShikiNoHollow: open already?
18:23 mkilla: wait
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: urghh
18:23 mkilla: im ready :)
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: now 6:23
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: 7:30 need to go out
18:23 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: im going to make you remapped
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: within my suggestion
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: the starting
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:365 (365|1,3239|0,5394|3) - remove this
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: not really needed
18:24 mkilla: okay
18:24 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:365 - add note to 1
18:25 mkilla: done
18:25 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:724 (724|3,903|2) - ctrl+j
18:25 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:903 (903|0) - move to 2
18:26 mkilla: allright :)
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: 00:02:520 (2520|2) - move to - 00:02:700 -
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: 00:02:879 - add note to 2
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: hitsound okay
18:26 ShikiNoHollow: 00:03:239 - you removed the LN alright , add note to 1
18:26 mkilla: okay
18:27 ShikiNoHollow: 00:04:496 (4496|2) - move to 1
18:27 mkilla: done
18:27 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:035 (5035|1,5215|2) - ctrl + h
18:27 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:394 (5394|1) - move to 1
18:28 mkilla: done
18:28 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:574 - add note to 2
18:28 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:754 - add note to 3
18:28 ShikiNoHollow: 00:05:394 - you remove LN?
18:28 mkilla: yup
18:29 ShikiNoHollow: do LN like before
18:29 ShikiNoHollow: coz got a woossiishhh sound
18:29 mkilla: how long?
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: 00:06:113 -
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: that part
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: got 3 note together
18:30 ShikiNoHollow: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200329
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: done ?
18:31 mkilla: wait
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: im sorry
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: im really in hurry
18:31 ShikiNoHollow: not yet eat or bath
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: just back from work
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: tired ><
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: just dont mind me
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: i really like this chuuni ed song
18:32 mkilla: im soryy to :(
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: i did make a harder diff
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: if you dont mind
18:32 ShikiNoHollow: i can give my diff to you
18:33 mkilla: finish
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: 00:07:550 (7550|3,7820|2) - ctrl + j
18:33 mkilla: same like me, im a chuuni addict :3
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: ><
18:33 ShikiNoHollow: 00:07:820 (7820|1) - remove
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: this will be same as - 00:08:089 (8089|3,8089|0,8269|2,8269|1) -
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: similer but reverse
18:34 mkilla: done
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: since the sound out and in , then in and out
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: if you dont understand its okay
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: just an explain
18:34 ShikiNoHollow: ><
18:35 mkilla: yeah i know :p
18:35 mkilla: done
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: is getting harder here
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: im going to change all
18:35 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:987 - start from here is a total bad mapping
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: but its okay
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: since you just experiance mapping
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: it actually came out good
18:36 mkilla: i hope :)
18:36 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:897 (8897|2) - remove
18:37 ShikiNoHollow: no that wont do it , ill give screenshot
18:37 mkilla: ok
18:39 mkilla: hey what about change beatmap name? it have some typo Van!shment this world and the real title is Van!sment Th!s world can i change it?
18:39 ShikiNoHollow: yes you should
18:39 ShikiNoHollow: the title must be corrected
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: urghh why cant
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: ohh already
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200359
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:808 -
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: urghh
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: this is hard
18:40 mkilla: but if i change the title , and my map not pending but not submited
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: no
18:40 ShikiNoHollow: change 2 diff name
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: then
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: after that
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: the last diff that not change , change it
18:41 mkilla: oh i see :)
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: is hard to mod like this
18:41 ShikiNoHollow: ill do the rest
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: later i give the diff
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: is it okay or not?
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: nvm
18:42 ShikiNoHollow: lets keep going
18:43 mkilla: you want to add new diff for this map?
18:43 ShikiNoHollow: no
18:43 ShikiNoHollow: nvm
18:43 ShikiNoHollow: lets continue
18:43 mkilla: allright
18:45 ShikiNoHollow: 00:08:808 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200376 -
18:45 mkilla: finish
18:45 ShikiNoHollow: done?
18:45 ShikiNoHollow: 00:11:323 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200381
18:46 mkilla: wait
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: uhh
18:49 mkilla: done
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: okay
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: all done?
18:49 mkilla: yes
18:49 ShikiNoHollow: 00:12:580 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200393
18:50 ShikiNoHollow: 00:13:838 - https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/2200396
18:51 mkilla: finish
18:51 ShikiNoHollow: all?
18:52 mkilla: yup :)
18:52 ShikiNoHollow: i assume ill finish untill here right - 00:14:376 -
18:52 mkilla: yes
18:53 ShikiNoHollow: form here - 00:14:736 - to all , what do you follow?
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: can you update this
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: continue tomorrow
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: i need to take bath
18:54 mkilla: i think the pattern is just repeat the pattern before
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: lol
18:54 mkilla: allright
18:54 ShikiNoHollow: is not about the patter
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: first
18:55 mkilla: i need your advice :)
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: listen what you heard
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: sure
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: anytime
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: ill post this you can gime kds
18:55 ShikiNoHollow: later on ill irc
18:55 mkilla: i'll update it , okay
Accepted And Updated :D
Frim4503
2,067 posts
ed July 2013
NM
SPOILER
00:05:035-00:05:394 make long note to 4
00:06:832 remove note 3
00:07:011 add note to 2,3
00:07:550 ^ 2
00:07:550-00:08:269 LN to 3
00:07:820 add note to 4
00:08:089 ^ to 4
00:08:269 ^ to 1
00:08:269-00:08:987 add LN to 2
00:08:538 add note to 1
00:08:808 ^ 4
00:08:987 ^ to 1
00:11:412-00:12:221 remove all note change with this
00:11:412 add note to 2
00:11:502-00:11:862 add LN to 3
00:11:862-00:12:221 ^ 4
00:12:041 add note to 1
00:12:221 ^ 3
01:27:131-01:28:388 add LN to 1
increase the OD to 8
change the dif name to HD

HD
SPOILER
change dif name to MX

EZ
SPOILER
change dif name to NM
increase the OD to 7 and HP to 7
also the title name is conflict with another dif

change title name for EZ dif
change from this
SPOILER
Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment This World

to this
SPOILER
Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment Th!s World


PM me for another mod
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

Frim4503 wrote: 2a5628

NM
SPOILER
00:05:035-00:05:394 make long note to 4
00:06:832 remove note 3
00:07:011 add note to 2,3
00:07:550 ^ 2
00:07:550-00:08:269 LN to 3
00:07:820 add note to 4
00:08:089 ^ to 4
00:08:269 ^ to 1
00:08:269-00:08:987 add LN to 2
00:08:538 add note to 1
00:08:808 ^ 4
00:08:987 ^ to 1
00:11:412-00:12:221 remove all note change with this
00:11:412 add note to 2
00:11:502-00:11:862 add LN to 3
00:11:862-00:12:221 ^ 4
00:12:041 add note to 1
00:12:221 ^ 3
01:27:131-01:28:388 add LN to 1
increase the OD to 8
change the dif name to HD

HD
SPOILER
change dif name to MX

EZ
SPOILER
change dif name to NM
increase the OD to 7 and HP to 7
also the title name is conflict with another dif

change title name for EZ dif
change from this
SPOILER
Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment This World

to this
SPOILER
Black Raison D'etre - Van!shment Th!s World


PM me for another mod
Im sorry , i just accept the song title cause someone will add MX diff
Thanks :D
SReisen
919 posts
ed October 2011
GD req
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

ShikiNoHollow wrote: 4f4l18

GD req
LoL i Wait for this :)
Thank you so much :D
SReisen
919 posts
ed October 2011

mkilla wrote: 4j1l2e

ShikiNoHollow wrote: 4f4l18

GD req
LoL i Wait for this :)
Thank you so much :D
ohh my , dont give KDS on GD's , ask BAT to deny that
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter
LoL i Don't know about that
Aii-
357 posts
ed May 2013
Hello ^^ Mod req via-Message

[EZ]

00:03:598 (3598|2) - move to col 1

00:04:496 (4496|2) - move to col 1

00:04:856 (4856|1) - move to col 4

00:05:035 (5035|0) - move to col 3

00:05:215 (5215|2) - move to col 2

00:05:394 (5394|1) - move to col 1

00:16:891 (16891|1,17071|1,17251|1) - change

00:33:957 (33957|3,34137|3,34317|3) - ^

00:34:317 - if u want to use hammer ... i sugesstion to start at this ,, and finish 00:34:856 -

00:36:023 (36023|3) - for what ?? no sound delete

00:36:203 (36203|1,36562|2,36832|3,37101|2,37370|0) - bad thing ;w;

00:37:730 - change this LN to normal note pls ;w; 00:44:736 - i don't why u add LN on this time ;w;

00:46:353 (46353|3,46712|1) - here too ;w; change

00:47:430 (47430|0,47610|2,47790|1,47969|2,48149|0,48329|3,48508|0) - and this time u use normal note :c

00:48:688 - add note

00:48:867 - ^

00:49:047 - ^

00:49:137 (49137|3,49496|2,49945|0,50305|1) - change normal note

00:50:844 (50844|3,51203|2,51562|1,51921|3) - ^

00:57:670 (57670|0,57939|1,58209|2) - ;w;

01:05:125 - why line blue ;w; ?

i think u must Fix all the notes ... too many wrong/ghost note on this diff EZ ;w;

[NM]

00:05:035 (5035|3) - LongNote ?? u use longnote at here but here 00:02:341 - normal note :v < it's same sound .. and u know it

00:04:137 (4137|2,4137|1) - here too ;w; u use 2 note at this line but before part only 1 not .. it's very not considency x_x

00:05:394 (5394|2) - < here sound good if u use long note and finish at 00:06:113 - <

00:06:832 (6832|2) - delete

00:07:460 (7460|1) - delete

00:07:550 - add note

00:09:526 (9526|0) - delete

00:10:245 - only need 1 note

00:11:412 (11412|0,11502|2,11682|1,11772|3,11862|2) - what the ... ?

00:12:041 (12041|0) - delete

00:13:119 (13119|0) - delete

00:16:532 - why this time u use 2 note ;w;

00:27:850 (27850|0) - start at white line

GL~ sorry HD i skip and Shiki diff i think it's good for me (y)

*kalo banyak waktunya map kamu di re-map saja .. soalnya bnyak yg salah penempatan juga masih bnyak juga note2 yg gak konsisten x_x
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

Aii- wrote: 6b5t2

Hello ^^ Mod req via-Message

[EZ]

00:03:598 (3598|2) - move to col 1

00:04:496 (4496|2) - move to col 1

00:04:856 (4856|1) - move to col 4

00:05:035 (5035|0) - move to col 3

00:05:215 (5215|2) - move to col 2

00:05:394 (5394|1) - move to col 1

00:16:891 (16891|1,17071|1,17251|1) - change

00:33:957 (33957|3,34137|3,34317|3) - ^

00:34:317 - if u want to use hammer ... i sugesstion to start at this ,, and finish 00:34:856 -

00:36:023 (36023|3) - for what ?? no sound delete

00:36:203 (36203|1,36562|2,36832|3,37101|2,37370|0) - bad thing ;w;

00:37:730 - change this LN to normal note pls ;w; 00:44:736 - i don't why u add LN on this time ;w;

00:46:353 (46353|3,46712|1) - here too ;w; change

00:47:430 (47430|0,47610|2,47790|1,47969|2,48149|0,48329|3,48508|0) - and this time u use normal note :c

00:48:688 - add note

00:48:867 - ^

00:49:047 - ^

00:49:137 (49137|3,49496|2,49945|0,50305|1) - change normal note

00:50:844 (50844|3,51203|2,51562|1,51921|3) - ^

00:57:670 (57670|0,57939|1,58209|2) - ;w;

01:05:125 - why line blue ;w; ?

i think u must Fix all the notes ... too many wrong/ghost note on this diff EZ ;w;

[NM]

00:05:035 (5035|3) - LongNote ?? u use longnote at here but here 00:02:341 - normal note :v < it's same sound .. and u know it

00:04:137 (4137|2,4137|1) - here too ;w; u use 2 note at this line but before part only 1 not .. it's very not considency x_x

00:05:394 (5394|2) - < here sound good if u use long note and finish at 00:06:113 - <

00:06:832 (6832|2) - delete

00:07:460 (7460|1) - delete

00:07:550 - add note

00:09:526 (9526|0) - delete

00:10:245 - only need 1 note

00:11:412 (11412|0,11502|2,11682|1,11772|3,11862|2) - what the ... ?

00:12:041 (12041|0) - delete

00:13:119 (13119|0) - delete

00:16:532 - why this time u use 2 note ;w;

00:27:850 (27850|0) - start at white line

GL~ sorry HD i skip and Shiki diff i think it's good for me (y)

*kalo banyak waktunya map kamu di re-map saja .. soalnya bnyak yg salah penempatan juga masih bnyak juga note2 yg gak konsisten x_x
Updated ,Thanks :)
Muu-chan
1,643 posts
ed August 2014
Hello! :)
Mod here from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ queue.

Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want. ;)

4K = |0|1|2|3|
LN means Long Note.

General
* The artist name should be Black Raison d'être(source).
* Put "shiki" in the tags of each difficult since he made a GD.
* Check the "Use special style(N+1 style) for mania" (song setup > advanced > check it)
EZ
* I think this is a bit hard to say as EZ diff. Try to oftenly use 1/2 Half beats and maybe sometimes 1/4 Quarter beats.
* I suggest OD and HP to 7.

1.) 00:06:832 (6832|0) - delete
2.) 00:09:347 (9347|2,9526|2,9885|0,10065|0,10963|2,11143|2,11502|3,11682|3) - those pattern ( line) are creative, but i think it's not recommended in Easy diff. Move one of them to other coloumn (up to you ^^)
3.) 00:14:017 (14017|3) - delete (no beat here)
4.) 00:16:173 (16173|3) - ^
5.) 00:17:790 (17790|0) - ^
6.) 00:24:796 (24796|3) - ^
7.) 00:27:670 (27670|2) - ^
8.) 00:29:826 (29826|3) - ^
9.) 00:30:005 (30005|1) - ^
10.) 00:31:981 (31981|0) - ^
11.) 00:33:598 (33598|2,33957|3,34137|1) - ^
12.) 00:37:011 (37011|0) - ^
13.) 00:37:550 (37550|0) - ^
14.) 00:38:269 (38269|0,38538|1,38897|3,39436|0,39885|2,40514|0,41143|2,41592|1,41951|0,42311|2,42670|1) - I don't get it why you put those LN^^ Delete them and maybe you can change into simple single note pattern like before.
15.) 00:43:478 (43478|3) - add note in 0.
16.) 00:43:658 (43658|1,43838|2) - delete.
17.) 00:44:376 (44376|0,44556|3) - ^
18.) 00:45:095 (45095|3,45454|2,45814|2,46173|2) - ^
19.) 00:46:622 (46622|1,46622|3) - move to 00:46:712
20.) 00:49:406 (49406|2,49766|3) - delete.
21.) 00:52:640 (52640|0) - ^
22.) 00:54:077 (54077|3) - change to LN until 00:54:975
23.) 00:54:975 (54975|3) - move to other coloumn.
24.) 01:00:185 (60185|0,60544|3) - delete.
25.) 01:02:700 (62700|1) - move this LN to 01:02:879 and cut it there too.
26.) 01:02:700 (62700|3) - add note
27.) 01:03:957 (63957|2) - this LN should stop at 01:04:317
28.) 01:04:406 (64406|0,64586|1,64766|2,64945|1) - move those note to 01:04:317
29.) 01:05:215 (65215|0,65574|1) - this kind of LN isn't recommended in Easy diff. Delete the short one, move the long one to 01:05:035 then stop at 01:06:113
30.) 01:06:472 (66472|3,66652|1,66832|2,67011|0,67191|2,67371|1,67550|3) - Move those note upside to 01:06:472
31.) 01:08:897 (68897|1) - delete.
32.) 01:10:784 (70784|1,71233|3,71592|2) - I suggest you this.
33.) 01:14:646 (74646|3,74826|1,74826|0) - move upside to 01:14:736
* There're still some up there. Try to follow your pattern okay :) i think it's too many already
NM
1.) 00:07:999 (7999|1,8179|3,8179|2) - move upside to 00:08:089
2.) 00:18:059 (18059|1) - I think this isn't necessary. Maybe you can delete it.
3.) 00:29:107 (29107|3) - Cut this LN to 00:30:185
4.) 00:30:095 (30095|0,30275|1,30454|0,30544|2,30724|1) - move upside to 00:30:185
5.) 00:35:125 (35125|1) - delete
6.) 00:34:856 (34856|0) - this LN should stop at 00:35:933
7.) 00:35:933 (35933|0) - delete or move to other coloumn.
8.) 00:36:293 (36293|1,36472|3,36652|2,36832|1,37011|2,37191|1,37371|0) - move to 00:36:293
9.) Your notes here are misplacing (not fit with the beat). Move down all note from 00:40:514 until 00:43:388 to 00:40:425 . So it would be like this and up until 00:43:299
10.) 00:47:520 (47520|2) - move up to 00:47:610 and add note in 00:47:790 (47790|0) coloumn 0.
11.) Another misplacing notes (not fit with the beat) start from 00:47:879 until 00:53:269 move all up 1 row.
12.) 00:54:077 - add LN until 00:54:975
13.) 00:54:885 (54885|0,54885|3) - delete.
14.) Another misplacing notes (note fit with the beat) start from 01:00:275 until 01:05:844 move all up 1 row.
15.) 01:04:945 (64945|0) - This LN should start at 01:05:035 end at 01:06:113
16.) Another misplacing notes from 01:06:382 until 01:17:879 Fix it okay.. i can't find the beat ;w;
17.) 01:22:281 (82281|2) - delete.
18.) 01:22:460 - add note.
18.) Misplacing notes from 01:22:550 until 01:23:808 move up 1 row.
19.) 01:24:077 (84077|3,84347|2) - both LN ends at 01:24:796
20.) 01:24:347 (84347|2) - this LN start at 01:24:436
* Note : Pay attention to the tempo :D

HD
* Almost 90% using claps hitsounds, i think it is noisy.. maybe you can change and variate it.
1.) 00:27:670 (27670|1) - this LN ends at 00:29:107
* Sounds good in this diff :)
* Note for this diff is just be more creative in your pattern ^^)/

If you want this map to be ranked, then you (as a mapper) should make your map's quality good and playable. Yeah i think that's all, thanks for visiting our queue. Just ask when you need something Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
mkilla
47 posts
ed April 2014
Topic Starter

[--BLANK--] wrote: hl5o

Hello! :)
Mod here from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ queue.

Note that these are only suggestions. You can decline them, if you want. ;)

4K = |0|1|2|3|
LN means Long Note.

General
* The artist name should be Black Raison d'être(source).
* Put "shiki" in the tags of each difficult since he made a GD.
* Check the "Use special style(N+1 style) for mania" (song setup > advanced > check it)
EZ
* I think this is a bit hard to say as EZ diff. Try to oftenly use 1/2 Half beats and maybe sometimes 1/4 Quarter beats.
* I suggest OD and HP to 7.

1.) 00:06:832 (6832|0) - delete
2.) 00:09:347 (9347|2,9526|2,9885|0,10065|0,10963|2,11143|2,11502|3,11682|3) - those pattern ( line) are creative, but i think it's not recommended in Easy diff. Move one of them to other coloumn (up to you ^^)
3.) 00:14:017 (14017|3) - delete (no beat here)
4.) 00:16:173 (16173|3) - ^
5.) 00:17:790 (17790|0) - ^
6.) 00:24:796 (24796|3) - ^
7.) 00:27:670 (27670|2) - ^
8.) 00:29:826 (29826|3) - ^
9.) 00:30:005 (30005|1) - ^
10.) 00:31:981 (31981|0) - ^
11.) 00:33:598 (33598|2,33957|3,34137|1) - ^
12.) 00:37:011 (37011|0) - ^
13.) 00:37:550 (37550|0) - ^
14.) 00:38:269 (38269|0,38538|1,38897|3,39436|0,39885|2,40514|0,41143|2,41592|1,41951|0,42311|2,42670|1) - I don't get it why you put those LN^^ Delete them and maybe you can change into simple single note pattern like before.
15.) 00:43:478 (43478|3) - add note in 0.
16.) 00:43:658 (43658|1,43838|2) - delete.
17.) 00:44:376 (44376|0,44556|3) - ^
18.) 00:45:095 (45095|3,45454|2,45814|2,46173|2) - ^
19.) 00:46:622 (46622|1,46622|3) - move to 00:46:712
20.) 00:49:406 (49406|2,49766|3) - delete.
21.) 00:52:640 (52640|0) - ^
22.) 00:54:077 (54077|3) - change to LN until 00:54:975
23.) 00:54:975 (54975|3) - move to other coloumn.
24.) 01:00:185 (60185|0,60544|3) - delete.
25.) 01:02:700 (62700|1) - move this LN to 01:02:879 and cut it there too.
26.) 01:02:700 (62700|3) - add note
27.) 01:03:957 (63957|2) - this LN should stop at 01:04:317
28.) 01:04:406 (64406|0,64586|1,64766|2,64945|1) - move those note to 01:04:317
29.) 01:05:215 (65215|0,65574|1) - this kind of LN isn't recommended in Easy diff. Delete the short one, move the long one to 01:05:035 then stop at 01:06:113
30.) 01:06:472 (66472|3,66652|1,66832|2,67011|0,67191|2,67371|1,67550|3) - Move those note upside to 01:06:472
31.) 01:08:897 (68897|1) - delete.
32.) 01:10:784 (70784|1,71233|3,71592|2) - I suggest you this.
33.) 01:14:646 (74646|3,74826|1,74826|0) - move upside to 01:14:736
* There're still some up there. Try to follow your pattern okay :) i think it's too many already
NM
1.) 00:07:999 (7999|1,8179|3,8179|2) - move upside to 00:08:089
2.) 00:18:059 (18059|1) - I think this isn't necessary. Maybe you can delete it.
3.) 00:29:107 (29107|3) - Cut this LN to 00:30:185
4.) 00:30:095 (30095|0,30275|1,30454|0,30544|2,30724|1) - move upside to 00:30:185
5.) 00:35:125 (35125|1) - delete
6.) 00:34:856 (34856|0) - this LN should stop at 00:35:933
7.) 00:35:933 (35933|0) - delete or move to other coloumn.
8.) 00:36:293 (36293|1,36472|3,36652|2,36832|1,37011|2,37191|1,37371|0) - move to 00:36:293
9.) Your notes here are misplacing (not fit with the beat). Move down all note from 00:40:514 until 00:43:388 to 00:40:425 . So it would be like this and up until 00:43:299
10.) 00:47:520 (47520|2) - move up to 00:47:610 and add note in 00:47:790 (47790|0) coloumn 0.
11.) Another misplacing notes (not fit with the beat) start from 00:47:879 until 00:53:269 move all up 1 row.
12.) 00:54:077 - add LN until 00:54:975
13.) 00:54:885 (54885|0,54885|3) - delete.
14.) Another misplacing notes (note fit with the beat) start from 01:00:275 until 01:05:844 move all up 1 row.
15.) 01:04:945 (64945|0) - This LN should start at 01:05:035 end at 01:06:113
16.) Another misplacing notes from 01:06:382 until 01:17:879 Fix it okay.. i can't find the beat ;w;
17.) 01:22:281 (82281|2) - delete.
18.) 01:22:460 - add note.
18.) Misplacing notes from 01:22:550 until 01:23:808 move up 1 row.
19.) 01:24:077 (84077|3,84347|2) - both LN ends at 01:24:796
20.) 01:24:347 (84347|2) - this LN start at 01:24:436
* Note : Pay attention to the tempo :D

HD
* Almost 90% using claps hitsounds, i think it is noisy.. maybe you can change and variate it.
1.) 00:27:670 (27670|1) - this LN ends at 00:29:107
* Sounds good in this diff :)
* Note for this diff is just be more creative in your pattern ^^)/

If you want this map to be ranked, then you (as a mapper) should make your map's quality good and playable. Yeah i think that's all, thanks for visiting our queue. Just ask when you need something Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
accepted i'll update soon :)
Thanks
Aphrodena
299 posts
ed January 2014
[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]

|0|1|2|3|


[General]
Big problems with consistency. For a specific section of a song, as a very general rule of thumb - more defined sounds get more notes - and you shouldn't really overmap to vocals for the extra note. Now this isn't a concrete rule per se, but it does help give your map a sense of, well, consistency.Also, you map to the vocals waaaaaaaay too often. For LN or empty areas it's alright, but when you're mapping to them for the entire map it becomes a bit wonky to play consistently.

Mod
[4K NM]
00:00:724 (724|2) - Move to |1| for PR
00:00:903 (903|0) - Move to |2| for PR
Read general notes.

[4K HD]
00:02:341 (2341|0) - Move to |3| for PR
00:02:520 (2520|3,2700|2,2879|1) - Move all notes left by 1 col
00:03:598 (3598|3) - Move to |1| for PR

First verse - Personal opinion that a lot of the three note chords aren't needed since the sound isn't strong... Your use of the three notes isn't really consistent with the stronger sounds of the song.

For example in this section here about consistency:
00:17:610 (17610|1) - Add note to |3| for cymbal since it is a stronger/different sound
00:17:969 (17969|0) - Snare has 1 note
00:18:149 (18149|2,18149|1,18149|3) - Has no strong sound but has 3 notes
00:18:688 (18688|0,18688|2,18688|1) - Snare all of a sudden has 3 notes
00:19:227 (19227|3,19227|0,19227|1) - No strong sound yet has more notes than the bass drum
00:20:844 (20844|0) - Snare only has 1 note again, but the sound is stronger than the ones with three notes
00:21:382 (21382|3,21382|0,21382|1) - Has 3 notes but there isn't a strong sound
00:21:562 (21562|2) - Snare has 1 note
00:24:436 (24436|1) - ^
00:25:694 (25694|1,25694|0) - Remove one
00:25:873 (25873|3,26053|1,26233|0) - Are all stronger sounds than ^ but have less notes
00:27:311 (27311|2,28388|3) - Don't need 2 notes


Moving on:
00:32:520 (32520|0) - Should be in |1| for PR
00:33:059 (33059|1) - Should be in |0| for PR (second note is lower pitch)
00:35:215 (35215|3) - Add note |3|
00:35:574 (35574|1) - Add note |1|
00:37:550 (37550|1,37730|0,37730|2) - This area should be triplets
00:38:448 (38448|3) - Remove one
00:39:167 (39167|3) - Add one
00:41:143 (41143|2) - ^
00:41:323 (41323|3,41323|1) - Remove one
00:41:502 (41502|0,41502|2) - ^
00:42:580 (42580|1) - Add
00:42:939 (42939|2,43299|1) - Add one note each
00:43:658 (43658|1,43658|0) - Remove one note
00:44:376 (44376|1) - Add one
00:44:915 (44915|0) - ^
00:45:454 (45454|2) - ^

This section here:
00:49:227 (49227|3,49406|2,49406|1,49586|0,49766|1,49766|2,49945|3,50125|1,50125|2,50305|3)
The first note defines the bass drum as getting one note.
Then at 00:49:766 (49766|1,49766|2) it suddenly gets two notes.
00:49:406 (49406|2,49406|1) - Should only have one note

Moving on:
00:56:053 (56053|1) - Add one
00:56:772 (56772|3) - ^
00:57:131 (57131|3,57131|2,57131|0,57850|2) - In BETWEEN these notes is an empty section that should be mapped
00:58:209 (58209|3) - Add one for snare and consistency

00:59:466 (59466|2,59466|3,59466|0,60005|3,60005|0,60005|2) - Remove 2 notes from each, they're not strong sounds
01:00:724 (60724|1) - Add one note to |2|
01:03:418 (63418|2) - Add one to |2|
01:06:652 (66652|1,66652|3,66652|0) - No reason to have 3 notes here
01:06:832 (66832|2) - Add one
01:07:191 (67191|1) - ^
01:07:550 (67550|2) - ^
01:07:730 (67730|1) - Remove one
01:07:909 (67909|3) - Add one
01:08:269 (68269|3) - ^
01:08:448 (68448|1,68448|2,68448|0) - No reason to have 3 notes here
01:08:808 (68808|0,68808|2,68808|3) - ^
01:08:987 (68987|1) - Add one
01:10:065 (70065|2) - Add one
01:11:502 (71502|3,71502|2,71502|0) - No reason to have 3 notes (shouldn't map to vocals so much)
01:12:760 (72760|1,72760|3) - Remove one note
01:13:119 (73119|0,73119|2) - ^
01:13:299 (73299|1) - Add note
01:14:017 (74017|1) - Add note
01:14:197 (74197|0,74197|3) - Remove one
01:14:736 (74736|1) - Add note
01:14:915 (74915|2,74915|3) - Remove one
01:15:005 (75005|1) - Add note
01:15:275 (75275|2) - Add note
01:16:173 (76173|2) - ^
01:16:353 (76353|3,76353|0,76353|1,76532|2,76532|0,76532|3) - Don't need 3 notes each
01:16:532 (76532|0,76532|3,76532|2,76712|1,76891|1,76891|0,76891|3) - Could map to match the drum sounds here
01:17:071 (77071|2) - Add one
01:17:520 (77520|3,77610|2,77610|0,77700|1,77790|2,77879|3,77879|0) - No reason to have 1/4 stream here
01:17:879 (77879|0) - Remove
01:19:317 (79317|1) - Add one
01:20:305 (80305|2,80305|3) - Remove one
01:22:999 (82999|3) - Remove one
01:25:155 (85155|3) - Add one
(Optional) could change last 4 notes to a LN for fadeoff

Good luck!
[AyanoTatemaya]
1,090 posts
ed June 2013
Hi. here's my mod as requested

side notes, except for the gd:
-inconsistent note densities
-awkward ln transitions
-focused mainly on the vocals
-lots of missed drumbeats
-hitsounding is kinda an issue
-patterns are also a big issue
-a remap is a must

experience more mania specific beatmaps.
also, minimize mapping the vocals and instead, focus on the instrumental beats.

Col: 1|2|3|4

[EZ]
00:02:520 (2520|1) - move to 1
00:04:856 (4856|0) - move to 3
00:05:035 (5035|2) - move to 1
00:05:215 (5215|1) - move to 4
00:05:394 (5394|2) - move to 2
00:06:113 (6113|3) - end at 00:07:011
00:08:987 (8987|2) - move to 4
00:10:245 (10245|1) - move to 00:10:424 at col 1
00:10:784 - add a note on 2
00:11:143 - note on 1
00:11:502 - note on 2
00:12:221 (12221|2) - move to 2, then remove 00:12:221 (12221|3)
00:12:939 (12939|3) - move to 2
00:14:376 (14376|2) - move to 4
00:20:305 (20305|0) - move to 00:20:484
00:24:616 (24616|2) - move to 4
00:29:107 (29107|3,29466|0) - ctrl+h
00:29:646 (29646|2) - move to 2
00:34:856 (34856|0) - end at 00:36:293
00:54:975 - anticlimatic part here, add a note or two, then remove 00:55:155 (55155|0)
00:56:053 (56053|2) - move to 2
00:56:412 (56412|0) - move to 3
00:56:772 (56772|3) - move to 2
00:58:927 (58927|0) - move to 3
01:02:520 (62520|1) - move to 1
01:03:957 (63957|2) - end at 01:04:317
01:04:496 (64496|2) - remove
01:05:035 (65035|0) - if you do not want to end this at 01:06:472 - add a note on 01:06:113 instead
01:07:191 (67191|2) - move to 2
01:11:053 (71053|1,71323|3) - ctrl+j
01:13:658 (73658|0) - move to 4
01:14:376 (74376|1) - move to 1
01:16:353 (76353|2) - end at 01:17:251
01:17:430 (77430|1) - remove
01:17:790 (77790|1) - remove
01:17:610 (77610|3) - ln, end at 01:18:329
01:18:508 (78508|3) - remove
01:24:796 - missing drumbeat here and 01:25:155 - here

apply first aphrodena's mod on NM and HD

[Shiki's MX]
00:07:819 (7819|1) - move to 3
00:09:885 (9885|2,9975|3,10065|3) - swap columns
00:19:946 (19946|1) - move to 3, then move 00:19:945 (19945|3) to 2
00:57:311 (57311|3,57400|2) - ctrl+j
01:00:993 (60993|2) - move to 1

Good luck.
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