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Alan - My Life 5o5r5y

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Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, October 24, 2013 at 2:22:27 PM

Artist: Alan
Title: My Life
Source: God Eater
Tags: _AI sheela901
BPM: 65
Filesize: 5450kb
Play Time: 04:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. _AI's Hard (4.31 stars, 378 notes)
  2. Normal (2.57 stars, 296 notes)
  3. sheela901's Easy (0.3 stars, 147 notes)
: Alan - My Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Alan Dawa Dolma - My Life

[colo=green]Pending[/color]:
Easy - 100% by sheela901
Normal - 100%
_AI's Hard - 100% by _AI

Welcomed for mods
Thanks to the modders!
Special thanks to Megurine Luka for patience teaching!
感谢热心教导和支持！
Updated BG.
Last edited by Rakuen , edited 47 times in total.
Mithos
632 posts
ed February 2011
From the chatlog:

SPOILER
08:29 Mithost: You did a lot of the map without timing it first
08:29 Mithost: Timing is supposed to happen before you place your first notes
08:30 DEAncientNaga: ahha I timed
08:30 DEAncientNaga: but Im suck at timing
08:30 Mithost: The BPM is... somewhere
08:30 DEAncientNaga: yeah somewhere near
08:31 DEAncientNaga: brb taking dinner
08:31 DEAncientNaga: please do help me time if you can >w<
08:31 Mithost: I can do the BPM
08:32 Mithost: the offset and resnapping of notes is for you though
08:32 DEAncientNaga: resnap is not a pro :)
08:32 DEAncientNaga: not a prob*
08:32 DEAncientNaga: thanks
08:32 DEAncientNaga: brb dinner
08:42 Mithost: Your first timing point is at roughly 2206. The BPM of the song is officially 65 (you have it mapped at 130, double that number). A lot of people don't mind if you map songs at double time, but keep in mind that this song IS a slow song.
08:43 Mithost: Two thirds into the song, there is a slight pause followed by the climax, which you have marked as Kiai time.
08:44 Mithost: However, the pause ends on the second beat of the break instead of the fourth, so you need to make a new Uninhereted Timing Section with the offset of 210,821. Same BPM
08:45 Mithost: I suggest you set the BPM to 65 instead of 130, just because osu!'s lighting effects will really look good with the slow song if they are beating slowly as well.
08:46 Mithost: Plus a modder will probably call you out on it and demand the change anyways.
09:08 Mithost: It's a really beautiful song and a good choice for osu!, so you should capitalize on it being a beautiful song.
09:21 DEAncientNaga: oh
09:21 DEAncientNaga: back frm dinner
09:21 Mithost: wb
09:21 DEAncientNaga: hmm slight pause??
09:22 Mithost: It's a 2 beat pause
09:22 DEAncientNaga: where is it? mind point it out?
09:22 Mithost: 2:10 roughly
09:23 Mithost: I have the offset numbers above^^
09:23 DEAncientNaga: huh? :3
09:23 DEAncientNaga: oh the bpm
09:24 Mithost: I did a quick offset too because you need a second timing section
09:24 DEAncientNaga: post at forum for kudo
09:24 DEAncientNaga: or just post the log
09:25 DEAncientNaga: you help me a lot :)
09:25 Mithost: How do I view the log? haha
09:25 DEAncientNaga: /savelog
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

Mithost wrote: 346313

From the chatlog:

SPOILER
08:29 Mithost: You did a lot of the map without timing it first
08:29 Mithost: Timing is supposed to happen before you place your first notes
08:30 DEAncientNaga: ahha I timed
08:30 DEAncientNaga: but Im suck at timing
08:30 Mithost: The BPM is... somewhere
08:30 DEAncientNaga: yeah somewhere near
08:31 DEAncientNaga: brb taking dinner
08:31 DEAncientNaga: please do help me time if you can >w<
08:31 Mithost: I can do the BPM
08:32 Mithost: the offset and resnapping of notes is for you though
08:32 DEAncientNaga: resnap is not a pro :)
08:32 DEAncientNaga: not a prob*
08:32 DEAncientNaga: thanks
08:32 DEAncientNaga: brb dinner
08:42 Mithost: Your first timing point is at roughly 2206. The BPM of the song is officially 65 (you have it mapped at 130, double that number). A lot of people don't mind if you map songs at double time, but keep in mind that this song IS a slow song.
08:43 Mithost: Two thirds into the song, there is a slight pause followed by the climax, which you have marked as Kiai time.
08:44 Mithost: However, the pause ends on the second beat of the break instead of the fourth, so you need to make a new Uninhereted Timing Section with the offset of 210,821. Same BPM
08:45 Mithost: I suggest you set the BPM to 65 instead of 130, just because osu!'s lighting effects will really look good with the slow song if they are beating slowly as well.
08:46 Mithost: Plus a modder will probably call you out on it and demand the change anyways.
09:08 Mithost: It's a really beautiful song and a good choice for osu!, so you should capitalize on it being a beautiful song.
09:21 DEAncientNaga: oh
09:21 DEAncientNaga: back frm dinner
09:21 Mithost: wb
09:21 DEAncientNaga: hmm slight pause??
09:22 Mithost: It's a 2 beat pause
09:22 DEAncientNaga: where is it? mind point it out?
09:22 Mithost: 2:10 roughly
09:23 Mithost: I have the offset numbers above^^
09:23 DEAncientNaga: huh? :3
09:23 DEAncientNaga: oh the bpm
09:24 Mithost: I did a quick offset too because you need a second timing section
09:24 DEAncientNaga: post at forum for kudo
09:24 DEAncientNaga: or just post the log
09:25 DEAncientNaga: you help me a lot :)
09:25 Mithost: How do I view the log? haha
09:25 DEAncientNaga: /savelog
Thanks for the BPM and Offset >.o /

I'll remain 130 BPM first atm.
_AI
225 posts
ed February 2013
:33 juz some messy mod
its okay to ignore me
SPOILER
Normal

Offset - 2226
BPM - 130.006
01:08:149 (5) - NC
01:08:611 (1) - Delete NC
01:37:919 (3) - NC
01:38:149 (1) - Delete NC
01:45:303 (6) - NC
01:45:534 (1) - Delete NC
02:42:765 (5) - NC
02:43:226 (1) - Delete NC
03:03:072 (1,1) - Add break time between them
03:37:688 (7) - NC
03:36:148 (4) - Suggest to change the slider into single note
03:38:149 (1) - Delete NC
03:43:526 (4) - Suggest to change into slider until 03:44:103
03:43:759 (5) - Suggest to delete this slider
03:44:680 (5) - Suggest to add a note here
03:54:303 (3) - Suggest to add a note here
04:13:522 (5) - Suggest to split the slider into 3 note
04:14:150 (6) - Delete NC
GoodLuck~ :D
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

ShanaAI wrote: s6s2g

:33 juz some messy mod
its okay to ignore me
SPOILER
Normal

Offset - 2226
BPM - 130.006
01:08:149 (5) - NC I'll leave those NC mods alone first
01:08:611 (1) - Delete NC
01:37:919 (3) - NC
01:38:149 (1) - Delete NC
01:45:303 (6) - NC
01:45:534 (1) - Delete NC
02:42:765 (5) - NC
02:43:226 (1) - Delete NC
03:03:072 (1,1) - Add break time between them
03:37:688 (7) - NC
03:36:148 (4) - Suggest to change the slider into single note Fixed.
03:38:149 (1) - Delete NC
03:43:526 (4) - Suggest to change into slider until 03:44:103 No cuz there are many hits in the slider progress, duwan to hit that much in normal
03:43:759 (5) - Suggest to delete this slider Don't understand
03:44:680 (5) - Suggest to add a note here Don't understand, it has a note already if you didn't move anything
03:54:303 (3) - Suggest to add a note here Don't understand, it has a note already
04:13:522 (5) - Suggest to split the slider into 3 note Hmm, I prefer the player to play my map with more relaxing ^_^
04:14:150 (6) - Delete NC
GoodLuck~ :D
Spoiler box are not for covering mods lol, it's for spoil

Fixed some timing, please check it too :3
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
ed February 2010
modding upon request
God Eater wwwwww

Also although you asked me for a guest diff, I can't think of an Insane that will fit this song well, neither an Easy that wouldn't bore players due to song length. Since Normal/Hard is by all means rankable for this song, you should keep that as your final spread~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
I believe this is the ED for God Eater, so transfer "God Eater" from tags to source, and put the album name into tags instead
Please use stack leniency 4 or above, stack leniency 2 renders some stacks unreadable on hidden which is unrankable
Your first uninherited timing section (red) needs about +20ms (offset 2194) to properly match the music, and add a red line at 00:31:741 then delete the one at 00:28:511. Also i am suspecting the bpm to be 65 instead of 130, you can talk with me in game about that (read below)
Mod is based on your original timing

[Normal]
You need hitsounding in this diff. Since it will be too complicated to teach you how to hitsound in a post like this, message me in game when you see me available and i will teach you some hitsounding
00:10:481 (2) - reduce a repeat on this, these sliders are hard to play for newbie players since they need to guess the number of repeats on it. This applies to similar occurrences later, so please fix them as you see fit (so any slider with multiple repeats)
00:18:327 (5) - shorten to 00:18:789 since there is no sound at where you end the slider currently
00:41:895 (9,1) - stacks like this are quite confusing with AR4, consider removing the stack
01:06:587 (4) - make this a short slider that ends at 01:06:818 to cover for the down beat there
01:38:203 (1,2,3) - the slider overlaps here may be a bit difficult to read for newbies, get rid of them if you can
01:45:357 (6) - NC here instead of 01:45:587 (1) since you made a long pause already with the previous notes
02:00:357 (1) - silenced slider starts are unrankable, please use at least 20% volume here
02:11:434 (5) - NC to follow your NC patterns
02:18:818 (4) - ^
02:32:664 (1) - end this spinner at 02:36:818 so players have enough time to prepare for 02:37:741 (1)
03:10:972 (3,4) - plays better if you do the circle first and the slider later, since that way you fully capture the vocals
03:26:664 (5,6) - another difficult stack to read, how bout just remove the stack and form a star pattern with 03:26:664 (5,6,7,8,9)?
03:49:280 (1) - shorten to 03:51:126 for similar reasons as 02:32:664 (1)
04:40:511 (1) - try perfectly center this to get the ending effect out
The rhythm in this diff is quite nice, just some work on hitsounds and it should be good

[AI's Hard]
00:38:895 (1) - end this at 00:42:126 and add a note at 00:42:357 instead, this way the player can add a click to the actual heavy vocal start
00:59:203 (4) - move this a bit furthur right for a better flow with 00:58:280 (3)
01:12:357 - i was expecting a note here since you decided to start the spinner on the red tick after
01:45:126 (7) - move this to 01:45:357 and start the NC here plays better imo
02:03:587 (1) - silenced hitcircles are unrankable, need a green section here with 20% volume or more
02:13:741 (7) - try a curve on this so you can make a blanket for 02:14:203 (8)
02:30:587 (2) - the claps on this sounds very weird, i would just take them off
02:37:280 (9) - no more claps from this point until last kiai? you should add them since the gameplay sounds really dull without them
02:41:895 (2,3) - these two slider should have the same curve from what i suppose you are trying to do
02:59:434 (1,2,3) - did you intended these to be symmetrical? they are slightly off atm ><
03:38:203 (2,3) - improperly stacked, move 03:39:126 (3) 1 grid right and up
03:41:895 (2) - remove clap on end, sounds a bit out of place; it should be at 03:42:818 (4) i suppose
04:13:741 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow here is a bit forced, doesnt play really nice imo; try ctrl+g on 04:14:203 (6,7)
04:23:434 (3,4) - dont overlap these two looks alot better
04:26:434 (1) - ending should be at 04:31:741 since thats where the piano is
04:40:511 (1) - tone the volume down on this, the ticks sound really loud and kills the atmosphere (also not perfectly centered orz)
Rhythm is nicely done, though i would expect more hitsounding to be in this diff as well (whistles and finishes mostly). me if you have any questions

Well thats all, here is a star for , and Good luck on ranking~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25

modding upon request
God Eater wwwwww

Also although you asked me for a guest diff, I can't think of an Insane that will fit this song well, neither an Easy that wouldn't bore players due to song length. Since Normal/Hard is by all means rankable for this song, you should keep that as your final spread~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
I believe this is the ED for God Eater, so transfer "God Eater" from tags to source, and put the album name into tags instead - Will change ths source.

Please use stack leniency 4 or above, stack leniency 2 renders some stacks unreadable on hidden which is unrankable - Fixed.
Your first uninherited timing section (red) needs about +20ms (offset 2194) to properly match the music, and add a red line at 00:31:741 then delete the one at 00:28:511. Also i am suspecting the bpm to be 65 instead of 130, you can talk with me in game about that (read below) - Fixed.
Mod is based on your original timing

[Normal]
You need hitsounding in this diff. Since it will be too complicated to teach you how to hitsound in a post like this, message me in game when you see me available and i will teach you some hitsounding
00:10:481 (2) - reduce a repeat on this, these sliders are hard to play for newbie players since they need to guess the number of repeats on it. This applies to similar occurrences later, so please fix them as you see fit (so any slider with multiple repeats) - Fixed.
00:18:327 (5) - shorten to 00:18:789 since there is no sound at where you end the slider currently - Fixed.
00:41:895 (9,1) - stacks like this are quite confusing with AR4, consider removing the stack - Fixed.
01:06:587 (4) - make this a short slider that ends at 01:06:818 to cover for the down beat there - Fixed.
01:38:203 (1,2,3) - the slider overlaps here may be a bit difficult to read for newbies, get rid of them if you can - Fixed.
01:45:357 (6) - NC here instead of 01:45:587 (1) since you made a long pause already with the previous notes - Fixed.
02:00:357 (1) - silenced slider starts are unrankable, please use at least 20% volume here - Fixed.
02:11:434 (5) - NC to follow your NC patterns - Fixed.
02:18:818 (4) - ^ - Fixed.
02:32:664 (1) - end this spinner at 02:36:818 so players have enough time to prepare for 02:37:741 (1) - Fixed, but looks strange.
03:10:972 (3,4) - plays better if you do the circle first and the slider later, since that way you fully capture the vocals - Fixed.
03:26:664 (5,6) - another difficult stack to read, how bout just remove the stack and form a star pattern with 03:26:664 (5,6,7,8,9)? - Fixed.
03:49:280 (1) - shorten to 03:51:126 for similar reasons as 02:32:664 (1) - Fixed.
04:40:511 (1) - try perfectly center this to get the ending effect out - Fixed, if you're saying the head and tail of slider.
The rhythm in this diff is quite nice, just some work on hitsounds and it should be good

Well thats all, here is a star for , and Good luck on ranking~
Thanks for mod

[_AI]

_AI wrote: 2c5f4t

_AI's Hard
00:38:895 (1) - end this at 00:42:126 and add a note at 00:42:357 instead, this way the player can add a click to the actual heavy vocal start Fixed!
00:59:203 (4) - move this a bit furthur right for a better flow with 00:58:280 (3) Fixed!
01:12:357 - i was expecting a note here since you decided to start the spinner on the red tick after Fixed!
01:45:126 (7) - move this to 01:45:357 and start the NC here plays better imo Fixed!
02:03:587 (1) - silenced hitcircles are unrankable, need a green section here with 20% volume or more Fixed!
02:13:741 (7) - try a curve on this so you can make a blanket for 02:14:203 (8) Fixed!
02:30:587 (2) - the claps on this sounds very weird, i would just take them off Fixed!
02:37:280 (9) - no more claps from this point until last kiai? you should add them since the gameplay sounds really dull without them Fixed!
02:41:895 (2,3) - these two slider should have the same curve from what i suppose you are trying to do Fixed!
02:59:434 (1,2,3) - did you intended these to be symmetrical? they are slightly off atm >< Fixed!
03:38:203 (2,3) - improperly stacked, move 03:39:126 (3) 1 grid right and up Fixed!
03:41:895 (2) - remove clap on end, sounds a bit out of place; it should be at 03:42:818 (4) i suppose Fixed!
04:13:741 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow here is a bit forced, doesnt play really nice imo; try ctrl+g on 04:14:203 (6,7) Fixed!
04:23:434 (3,4) - dont overlap these two looks alot better Fixed!
04:26:434 (1) - ending should be at 04:31:741 since thats where the piano is Fixed!
04:40:511 (1) - tone the volume down on this, the ticks sound really loud and kills the atmosphere (also not perfectly centered orz) Fixed!
Thanks!
Last edited by Rakuen , edited 2 times in total.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
ed March 2009
I feel your timing is a bit off, try this

[Timing]

  1. BPM/Offset
    130/2185 (-9)
    130/31745 (+4)
song is nice, the sound volume of you hard diff. is too loud
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

Breeze wrote: 1y1w6u

I feel your timing is a bit off, try this

[Timing]

  1. BPM/Offset
    130/2185 (-9)
    130/31745 (+4)
song is nice, the sound volume of you hard diff. is too loud
Fixed! Thanks :)
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello! :D Random mod right here.

[Normal]
00:05:646 - 00:08:646 Try this rhythm:

00:09:338 - Remove slider and place hit circle here.
00:09:569 - Place the same slider at 00:10:492 here as well
00:12:800 and 00:14:646 try using this:

Has a good rhythm :P
00:16:723 - Should have the same flow as 00:01:954.
00:40:052 - NC
00:44:668 - ^
00:49:745 - Use hit circle here instead.
00:49:975 - Pull the next slider to here instead, then extend its tail to 00:50:668.
01:16:514 - Second slider should start here instead.
01:34:514 - This slider is really pretty, I just hate how the previous objects are overlapping it :(
Try re-arranging the objects at 01:32:437 - 01:34:052 please!
01:38:206 - Another bad overlap
02:12:591 - 02:13:975 should have the same objects as 02:10:975 - 02:12:360 (but at different angles of course).
02:21:591 - 02:22:052 Put a slider here instead (similar to the one at 02:17:898). Keeps a good pattern going in your rhythm.
02:44:668 - NC
02:50:437 - ^
03:27:129 - ^
03:33:129 - ^

Overall, I think you should work on creating a better rhythm, and pattern for your objects. :(

[Hard]
00:02:185 - 00:31:745 Lol almost assumed this diff was WIP. You're not going to map this part?
01:10:745 - Should have the same rhythm as 01:08:206 - 01:09:360. Keep the good pattern going >.<
02:43:975 - NC?
03:44:437 - NC should be here instead of 03:43:975
03:51:591 - Break time just doesn't sound right here :S Consider mappnig this part.
04:02:898 - NC

Well this mode definitely looks better than Normal, but could still use some improvement!

Hope this helps! :)
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
ed November 2010
O.O From my Queue ~

所以这个阿兰是个中国人？感觉有点厉害o.O

[General]
  1. Make preview time consistency
  2. Close the letterbox in breaks if you want

[N]
  1. 00:05:646 (1) - I think curved up would be better like:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:492 (6) - Try this shape:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:09:338 (1) - From here, try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:14:646 (4) - make it into a reversible slider
  5. 00:26:877 (5) - Try this:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:34:975 (2) - Try:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:45:591 (8) - same as bfe
  8. 01:10:745 (5) - end at 01:10:975, no need to strictly follow vocal here cuz it's off.
  9. 01:12:821 (2,3) - Use the same slider, you can use ctrl+c and ctrl+v
  10. 01:15:591 (1) - Try this:
    SPOILER
  11. 01:33:129 (5) - curved up would be better
  12. 01:43:283 (5) - prolong to 01:43:744

呜感觉你的map很多地方还不太成熟mod起来我也不太能够抓住重点0.0

因此目前为止我的建议是可以看看这两个帖子：

t/141227

应该会对现在的你有比较高的帮助0.0
尤其是第二帖~

呜其他的我感觉现在说可能也有些早~你有不懂的可以问我~之后你改过之后我再来看吧0.0
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

10crystalmask01 wrote: 3z5l4c

Ello! :D Random mod right here.

[Normal]
00:05:646 - 00:08:646 Try this rhythm:

00:09:338 - Remove slider and place hit circle here.
00:09:569 - Place the same slider at 00:10:492 here as well
00:12:800 and 00:14:646 try using this:

Has a good rhythm :P
00:16:723 - Should have the same flow as 00:01:954.
00:40:052 - NC
00:44:668 - ^
00:49:745 - Use hit circle here instead.
00:49:975 - Pull the next slider to here instead, then extend its tail to 00:50:668.
01:16:514 - Second slider should start here instead.
01:34:514 - This slider is really pretty, I just hate how the previous objects are overlapping it :(
Try re-arranging the objects at 01:32:437 - 01:34:052 please!
01:38:206 - Another bad overlap
02:12:591 - 02:13:975 should have the same objects as 02:10:975 - 02:12:360 (but at different angles of course).
02:21:591 - 02:22:052 Put a slider here instead (similar to the one at 02:17:898). Keeps a good pattern going in your rhythm.
02:44:668 - NC
02:50:437 - ^
03:27:129 - ^
03:33:129 - ^

Overall, I think you should work on creating a better rhythm, and pattern for your objects. :(

Hope this helps! :)
Fixed all.

Megurine Luka wrote: 3r33j

O.O From my Queue ~

所以这个阿兰是个中国人？感觉有点厉害o.O

[General]
  1. Make preview time consistency
  2. Close the letterbox in breaks if you want

[N]
  1. 00:05:646 (1) - I think curved up would be better like:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:492 (6) - Try this shape:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:09:338 (1) - From here, try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:14:646 (4) - make it into a reversible slider
  5. 00:26:877 (5) - Try this:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:34:975 (2) - Try:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:45:591 (8) - same as bfe
  8. 01:10:745 (5) - end at 01:10:975, no need to strictly follow vocal here cuz it's off.
  9. 01:12:821 (2,3) - Use the same slider, you can use ctrl+c and ctrl+v
  10. 01:15:591 (1) - Try this:
    SPOILER
  11. 01:33:129 (5) - curved up would be better
  12. 01:43:283 (5) - prolong to 01:43:744

呜感觉你的map很多地方还不太成熟mod起来我也不太能够抓住重点0.0

因此目前为止我的建议是可以看看这两个帖子：

https://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/forum/t/141227

应该会对现在的你有比较高的帮助0.0
尤其是第二帖~

呜其他的我感觉现在说可能也有些早~你有不懂的可以问我~之后你改过之后我再来看吧0.0
Fixed all.
Thanks very much for the mods!

感谢 Luka 。ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿猫飯拳!

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Last edited by Rakuen , edited 2 times in total.
sheela
2,651 posts
ed October 2011
[General]
Put in the artist アラン
In the tags, before AI, add "_" because it is the name.

[Normal]
00:10:031 (2) - Remove it?
00:24:108 (1) - End it at 00:24:338 ?
00:28:146 - Add a spinner and end it at 00:29:877
00:55:283 (5) - End it at 00:55:745
01:25:052 (4) - End it at 01:25:745 ?
01:44:668 (8) - Distance problem
02:37:745 (1) - Make something like that:
SPOILER
04:26:668 (1) - Start it at 04:26:321

[Hard]
There's a lot of spinner in it. Try to remove some.
01:16:975 (1) - End it at 01:20:668 and add a break after
03:44:668 (5,7,9) - NC?

Good Luck!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

sheela901 wrote: 3g2ic

[General]
Put in the artist アラン
In the tags, before AI, add "_" because it is the name.

[Normal]
00:10:031 (2) - Remove it?
00:24:108 (1) - End it at 00:24:338 ?
00:28:146 - Add a spinner and end it at 00:29:877
00:55:283 (5) - End it at 00:55:745
01:25:052 (4) - End it at 01:25:745 ?
01:44:668 (8) - Distance problem
02:37:745 (1) - Make something like that:
SPOILER
04:26:668 (1) - Start it at 04:26:321

Good Luck!
Fixed all.

Thanks for the mods.
Sleepy Tori
103 posts
ed May 2013
normal
00:26:877 (5) - NC
wow this is only thing i could find.

Ai's hard
i got nothing

wow this is so perfect. my mod feels so insignificant. don't even give me kudosu for this.
this map is so wonderful i think i might cry.
T^T
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

snlrocks wrote: 3lx1c

normal
00:26:877 (5) - NC
wow this is only thing i could find.

Ai's hard
i got nothing

wow this is so perfect. my mod feels so insignificant. don't even give me kudosu for this.
this map is so wonderful i think i might cry.
T^T
ahh thanks!

I'm still a newbie mapper >w< , and I'm sure it's not perfect yet :)

btw I'll leave the NC alone first

sorry can't give kudosu, but thanks for the help!
Alarido
1,744 posts
ed September 2012
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE

Legenda wrote: 4h4f1h

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Normal]
CS = 3 (since felt te notes so small for newbies hit, and considering there's NO easy diff)
00:42:591 (2) - Need a bit improvement. I did a try here >> http://puu.sh/3TYeO.jpg
01:34:514 (1) - Specially within a play with Hidden mod on, it's almost unpredictable where the sliderball will go (on?).
02:00:360 (1) - Improve this loop a lot >>>> http://puu.sh/3TYpF.jpg
03:29:898 (1,2,3,4) - It could be turned in a pair of 1/4 sliders, since notes are a bit harder than sliders.

[_AIs Hard]
* Feels need a lot work on placements.
01:16:975 (1) - End this spinner at 01:20:668, fits better to fading voice
01:27:821 (3,4,5) - Make them like this >>> http://puu.sh/3UEwj.jpg <<< feels better ^^
01:38:206 (1) - Turn it in a slider like this >> http://puu.sh/3UEDh.jpg (or something better)
02:22:745 (2,3,4) - Make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UELH.jpg << in order to undo the bad overlaps and make it more intuitive.
02:42:821 (3,4,5) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UER4.jpg << with 02:42:821 (3)'s head at same place of 02:41:898 (2)'s head like this >> http://puu.sh/3UETp.jpg
02:45:129 (7,8) - Make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UF2K.jpg
03:12:706 (6) - This note IS overmapped.
03:16:398 (5) - ^
03:36:129 (8) - Make this slider like >> http://puu.sh/3UFdT.jpg
03:36:821 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UFpP.jpg << Flows better without bad overlaps
03:37:168 (3) - This note IS overmapped.
03:43:052 (5,6) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UFxB.jpg <<

Pattern suggeston: to make a better pattern on 03:43:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - do the following steps:
03:43:975 (1,2,3) to x:248 y:128 and ....
03:44:437 (4,5) - Make Ctrl+G and ....
03:44:668 (5,6) - Make Ctrl+G and ....
03:45:129 (7) - Move to x:332 y:252 and ....
03:45:360 (8) - Move to x:248 y:128

That's it ^^

And about diff spread: Like jonathanlfj said...

jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25

Also although you asked me for a guest diff, I can't think of an Insane that will fit this song well
Yeah, I agree, it's true on Insane diff. But, on having an Easy diff, [Luanny] told me once upon a time....

[Luanny] wrote: 1a3g5e

1. This song is slow and IT IS suitable for easy. I's actually hard to find a song not suitable for easy and this song is not one of them. No need to make an easy here because the spread is nice, still it would be really welcome.
He said it at Coldplay - Viva la Vida and I feel this can be applied here too. AnreFM gave the final proof that Easy is possible in that map.

Well, this current spread is nice ^^ Feels nice ♥ You can make it better with an Easy diff, since [Normal] might feel a bit (and a little) hard for true newbies (something like Pereira006 told me when I tried make a GD for him several months ago)

Yeah, now that's all. Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

Alarido wrote: 3y713x

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE

Legenda wrote: 4h4f1h

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[notice]* No complaints on General Things

[Normal]
CS = 3 (since felt te notes so small for newbies hit, and considering there's NO easy diff) Keep at the moment, will find easy GD
00:42:591 (2) - Need a bit improvement. I did a try here >> http://puu.sh/3TYeO.jpg Fixed.
01:34:514 (1) - Specially within a play with Hidden mod on, it's almost unpredictable where the sliderball will go (on?). The first hit is at the front layer, and it's player's choice to play HD. Keep at the moment, will try to fix if necessary.
02:00:360 (1) - Improve this loop a lot >>>> http://puu.sh/3TYpF.jpg Fixed.
03:29:898 (1,2,3,4) - It could be turned in a pair of 1/4 sliders, since notes are a bit harder than sliders. Fixed.

And about diff spread: Like jonathanlfj said...

jonathanlfj wrote: 3z2x25

Also although you asked me for a guest diff, I can't think of an Insane that will fit this song well
Yeah, I agree, it's true on Insane diff. But, on having an Easy diff, [Luanny] told me once upon a time....

[Luanny] wrote: 1a3g5e

1. This song is slow and IT IS suitable for easy. I's actually hard to find a song not suitable for easy and this song is not one of them. No need to make an easy here because the spread is nice, still it would be really welcome.
He said it at Coldplay - Viva la Vida and I feel this can be applied here too. AnreFM gave the final proof that Easy is possible in that map.

Well, this current spread is nice ^^ Feels nice ♥ You can make it better with an Easy diff, since [Normal] might feel a bit (and a little) hard for true newbies (something like Pereira006 told me when I tried make a GD for him several months ago)

Yeah, now that's all. Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
Thanks for the mods :)
_AI
225 posts
ed February 2013
[_AIs Hard]
* Feels need a lot work on placements.
01:16:975 (1) - End this spinner at 01:20:668, fits better to fading voice
01:27:821 (3,4,5) - Make them like this >>> http://puu.sh/3UEwj.jpg <<< feels better ^^
01:38:206 (1) - Turn it in a slider like this >> http://puu.sh/3UEDh.jpg (or something better)
02:22:745 (2,3,4) - Make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UELH.jpg << in order to undo the bad overlaps and make it more intuitive.
02:42:821 (3,4,5) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UER4.jpg << with 02:42:821 (3)'s head at same place of 02:41:898 (2)'s head like this >> http://puu.sh/3UETp.jpg
02:45:129 (7,8) - Make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UF2K.jpg
03:12:706 (6) - This note IS overmapped.
03:16:398 (5) - ^
03:36:129 (8) - Make this slider like >> http://puu.sh/3UFdT.jpg
03:36:821 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UFpP.jpg << Flows better without bad overlaps
03:37:168 (3) - This note IS overmapped.
03:43:052 (5,6) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UFxB.jpg <<

Pattern suggeston: to make a better pattern on 03:43:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - do the following steps:
03:43:975 (1,2,3) to x:248 y:128 and ....
03:44:437 (4,5) - Make Ctrl+G and ....
03:44:668 (5,6) - Make Ctrl+G and ....
03:45:129 (7) - Move to x:332 y:252 and ....
03:45:360 (8) - Move to x:248 y:128[/notice]

All fix~ thanks :D
Ciyus Miapah
3,028 posts
ed June 2013
Can i make GD? or storyboard, or participate the collab map?

(This is Important Question so reply this)
Neiji Razuiya
235 posts
ed October 2012
can i make GD insane diff?

i mod your map and make GD..its ok right? o.o
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

Neiji Razuiya wrote: z1u2z

can i make GD insane diff?

i mod your map and make GD..its ok right? o.o
Accept for mods.

I'm not sure for any GDs, since I modded your map "Kappa Nitori" a while ago, and it's quite unrankable.

Make sure you can make it playable if you want to make a GD, or I won't the diff.

Hope my speech isn't offensive.
HeShu
194 posts
ed February 2013
Hello I'm from the m4m of your queue :3

[General]

Background image too big, you must respect the 1366x768 ratio :)
No source in the tags ? From where it is ?

[Normal]

00:13:954 Don't exist in the vocal. Instead extand the previous slider so it will make it until blue tick
01:08:206 New combo here instead of the slider to fit vocals
01:12:821 Inclinate the slider tail higher so it will be perfectly aligned with nex slider head
01:29:898 New combo here instead of later
02:10:975 ^
02:14:668 ^
02:28:975 ^
03:13:744 ^
04:22:052 ^
04:29:898 10 second break ? Quite long :/

In global awesome mapping, only trouble you have is with combo ^^

[Ai's Hard]

42 snapping occurence, beware :o
Also with long intro+breaks+end we're at 80% mapping limit. I hope it's ok !
19 spiner in total, is Incognito your spoonsor ? It's way too much and think about player having to spin like hell for 19 spinners long :o

00:31:745 to 00:49:745 only 4 spin and 4 circles, please map there. I'm afraid people will get bored here :s
00:53:898 Align it please with previous slider
01:16:745 Not aesthetic, put it somewhere else
01:24:129 Overlapping slider here
01:30:821 Make the curve smoother to be gracious with next slider
01:45:360 (1,2,3,4,5) It's totally in contradiction with your whole mapping experience !
02:03:591 Suprise circle between two spinner ! I don't like it :x
02:06:821 Not instinctif pattern at all. Many player will break combo here :/
02:14:206 Not centered at all
02:28:283 (1,2,3) Add clap on the triplet
02:31:293 Overlap !
02:31:975 same as 02:28:283
02:34:745 New combo here not on the circle before
02:55:052 Put it somewhere else to make it beautiful
03:12:585 No hitsound here ? It's too silencious !
03:21:129 I hate this circle :o
03:24:821 And it's bother too ;)
03:29:898 same as 02:06:821 but this one could make player ragequit if they fail >_<
For whole 03:30 to 04:00 Add clap on all triplet :)
04:02:208 Overlapping slider :)
04:40:391 Most vicious slider + spin I ever saw ever a big break X)

Lot's on work to do on second diff, but good luck !
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

HeShu wrote: 2v5y5x

Hello I'm from the m4m of your queue :3

[General]

Background image too big, you must respect the 1366x768 ratio :) Fixed.
No source in the tags ? From where it is ?

[Normal]

00:13:954 Don't exist in the vocal. Instead extand the previous slider so it will make it until blue tick Extended, but only until white tick.
01:08:206 New combo here instead of the slider to fit vocals Fixed.
01:12:821 Inclinate the slider tail higher so it will be perfectly aligned with nex slider head Fixed.
01:29:898 New combo here instead of later Fixed all your combos mod.
02:10:975 ^
02:14:668 ^
02:28:975 ^
03:13:744 ^
04:22:052 ^
04:29:898 10 second break ? Quite long :/ Keep, I feel it suits the music cuz music is soft.

In global awesome mapping, only trouble you have is with combo ^^
Thanks for your M4M!
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
ed September 2012
Hi, from m4m

GENERAL: Good patterns and hitsounds, but make sure that you use the hitsounds consistently, and keep the volumes at appropriate

NORMAL

01:00:360 (6) - Add a whistle

01:41:437 (4) - NC this, 8 combo is too long

01:46:975 (5) - ^

02:50:668 (4) - No need finish hitsound

02:51:591 (6) - Add finish on this note instead

03:10:052 (1) - In this section of the music, increase audio to 30%, 20% is too low, cant hear the beats

03:28:975 (5) - Add a note here with finish

SPOILER

03:59:668 (2,3,4) - Consider changing this to one long slider, 3 notes on blue ticks may be too hard for beginners

04:04:052 (5) - NC this

04:14:206 (1) - No need clap on the red tick

04:17:898 (4) - Add clap

HARD

01:39:821 (1) - Note plays too fast after the spinner, players cannot play the slider so fast after spinner

02:20:898 (3,4,5) - Dont make these triplets all have claps, too loud

02:29:898 (1) - Should have finish sound isntead of clap

02:30:591 (2) - ^

03:32:668 (3) - Add a clap

04:13:745 (4) - No need clap

Good luck, and I like the song
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

ritsu-tanaika wrote: 6y26o

Hi, from m4m

GENERAL: Good patterns and hitsounds, but make sure that you use the hitsounds consistently, and keep the volumes at appropriate

NORMAL

01:00:360 (6) - Add a whistle Fixed.

01:41:437 (4) - NC this, 8 combo is too long Fixed.

01:46:975 (5) - ^ Fixed.

02:50:668 (4) - No need finish hitsound Keep.

02:51:591 (6) - Add finish on this note instead Keep.

03:10:052 (1) - In this section of the music, increase audio to 30%, 20% is too low, cant hear the beats Fixed.

03:28:975 (5) - Add a note here with finish Fixed.

SPOILER

03:59:668 (2,3,4) - Consider changing this to one long slider, 3 notes on blue ticks may be too hard for beginners Fixed.

04:04:052 (5) - NC this Fixed.

04:14:206 (1) - No need clap on the red tick Fixed.

04:17:898 (4) - Add clap Fixed.

HARD

01:39:821 (1) - Note plays too fast after the spinner, players cannot play the slider so fast after spinner

02:20:898 (3,4,5) - Dont make these triplets all have claps, too loud

02:29:898 (1) - Should have finish sound isntead of clap

02:30:591 (2) - ^

03:32:668 (3) - Add a clap

04:13:745 (4) - No need clap

Good luck, and I like the song
Pizza Kun
455 posts
ed March 2011
M4M From your queue pls check my post ^^

[Hard]

00:46:514 - Add a note and move spinner in 00:46:629 (1)
00:46:629 (1) - End in 00:49:283
00:55:514 (5) - This shape: http://d.pr/i/fbd2
00:55:514 (5,1) - Too spaced
00:59:437 (1) - End in 01:00:360
01:00:821 - add note
01:26:898 (2) - Blanket with 3: http://d.pr/i/Vshh
01:38:206 (1) - Slider?
01:40:975 (2,1) - Fix stack
01:43:514 (5,6) - ^
01:56:437 (2,3) - Blanket
02:04:052 (1) - End in 02:06:360
02:37:283 (9) - Finish
02:51:821 (5) - ^ on end of slider
02:55:745 (6) - On start of slider finish
03:02:898 (6) - finish in end
03:04:975 (5) - Finish
03:41:898 (2) - Finish on start
03:41:898 (2,6) - Stack
-------------------------
add more finish es.
04:00:360 (1) - on start
04:01:283 (3) - ^
04:07:514 (5) - on finish
04:08:668 (9) - finish
...
-------------------------
04:32:091 - This break is bad :<

[Normal]

00:53:668 - Add note?
03:30:821 (1) - Make this blanket: http://d.pr/i/W72X
Rakuen
1,654 posts
ed March 2013
Topic Starter

Pizza Kun wrote: sp5e

M4M From your queue pls check my post ^^

[Normal]

00:53:668 - Add note? Keep cuz it's followed by the vocal already
03:30:821 (1) - Make this blanket: http://d.pr/i/W72X Fixed.
Thanks for your mod
Neiji Razuiya
235 posts
ed October 2012
hi :)
sorry for late mod

[Ai's Hard]

02:07:745 (5) - NC <--- i think this for suggest only
03:30:821 (5) - this to ^
04:07:283 (4) - ^

[Normal]

01:37:975 (2) - NC
01:45:591 (3) - ^

that only my mod ;)
giving star~
sheela
2,651 posts
ed October 2011
So, I finished my GD.
SPOILER 
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Alan - My Life.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 209783
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:My Life
TitleUnicode:My Life
Artist:Alan
ArtistUnicode:Alan
Creator:Rakuen
Version:sheela901's Easy
Source:
Tags:God Eater _AI
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:1
SliderMultiplier:2.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"kirito-sachi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,46714,48526
2,113175,118680
2,157483,170372
2,184252,185141
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 0,64,128
Combo4 : 255,206,255

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jogfi2002
189 posts
ed July 2009
[General]

The size of background image is not proper. According to the ranking criteria, the max size is 1366x768 pixels for 16:9.

[Normal]

00:13:031 - Consider adding one note here.
00:19:723 - ^
00:23:734 - ^
02:22:514 (1) - This slider is overlapping itself, normal players may not read the repeat icon correctly.

[_AI's Hard]

About the arrangement, in my opinion, it's a bit boring.
Player may feel that he is turning around on the screen when playing this map.
Try to make more fun in it.;)

00:42:360 (1,2,3,1) - Hmmm, this patern is a bit weird..
01:37:975 (1,1) - Try to replace the spinner with sliders and notes, such a short spinner here is not good.
02:45:129 (7) - New combo
02:59:437 (1,2) - make it more surrounding:


03:00:360 (2,3) - ^
03:10:052 (1) - The clap sound in this part is not fitting to the mood of the song, I think.

That's all, good song and good map!
sheela
2,651 posts
ed October 2011
Updated 
osu file format v12

[General]
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[Editor]
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Title:My Life
TitleUnicode:My Life
Artist:Alan
ArtistUnicode:Alan
Creator:Rakuen
Version:sheela901's Easy
Source:God Eater
Tags:_AI sheela901
BeatmapID:310651
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[Difficulty]
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Rakuen
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ed March 2013
Topic Starter

Neiji Razuiya wrote: z1u2z

hi :)
sorry for late mod

[Normal]

01:37:975 (2) - NC Fixed
01:45:591 (3) - ^ Keep atm.

that only my mod ;)
giving star~
Thanks for your mod and stars :)

jogfi2002 wrote: z35l

[General]

The size of background image is not proper. According to the ranking criteria, the max size is 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Fixed.

[Normal]

00:13:031 - Consider adding one note here. Fixed.
00:19:723 - ^ Fixed.
00:23:734 - ^ Fixed.
02:22:514 (1) - This slider is overlapping itself, normal players may not read the repeat icon correctly. Keep atm

That's all, good song and good map!
Thanks for your mod

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