Otome Shintou m461d Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-17T03:45:12+00:00

kajiyatta wrote: 2k2934
M4M from your queue
General
almost suggetions
Insane
Placement
00:12:882(1,2) swap NC better to follow the music, and sliders at 00:12:882 and 00:14:461 is same direction, I don't feel it's nice. so put previous note away better. e.g.)

SPOILER

i no change this since the actual rhythm is the way i feel the music in that part thats why keep it
00:51:961(3,1) swap NC better yeah you right changed previous combo too
Rhythm
00:10:811 unnecessary green line removed
00:11:699 ^ ^
Hit Sonud
00:13:277(2) I'll expect a finish not whistle at head yeah why not fit better
01:04:593 (1) finish at head better since this part is a beginning of KIAI :o was a finish here anyways added
01:17:224(3) whistle→finish done

overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~

thanks for mod

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-04-17T05:18:56+00:00

merchat7

merchat7 wrote: w1m1n
M4M

[Normal]

00:02:817 (4) - Prefer if you add a repeat, all the notes here follow the bass guitar so far, so it sounds like something is missing when you don't have something on 00:03:211. /*Ok
00:11:698 (1,2) - I prefer if you move this a bit more up to be honest, feel too close to the previous note. /*Not really, there's a long gap in time
00:20:382 (3,5) - To make the rhythm a bit more interesting, consider variating by doing 1/2 repeating slider here. /*Made something here.
00:21:172 (4) - Whistle on the stanza here sound nice, so I feel you should put whistle at begin /*Ok
00:24:330 (2,3) - I prefer if lyric is followed here, e.g. this rhythm http://puu.sh/2Bcyk. /*Used the suggeste (2) with a repeat.
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer finish at begin and prefer no whistle at end /*It'd be too loud for the piano imo
00:38:442 (4) - There's no clear sound on the blue tick, but on the white tick, I can hear a bell sound, a drum sound, etc. so I prefer if you start this slider there instead. /*There are the vocals, but put in the white tick.
00:39:330 (1) - Feel like finish should be here /*Oops.
00:40:908 (4) - Whistle at begin /*Ok
00:42:487 (1) - ^ /*Ok
00:44:066 (4) - Whistle on repeat /*Ok
00:59:856 (3) - Whistle at begin and remove from begin of 01:00:645 (4). The music here has a pretty clear focus on stanza (listen to vocal) /*Ok
01:03:014 (4,5) - I prefer if finish was used rather than clap. /*Used only in 1st and 3rd beat, the whole as finish would be too loud.
01:07:751 (4) - Whistle here /*Ok
01:08:935 (6) - Whistle at end /*Ok
01:13:277 (5) - You always put whistle only on the stanza so I don't see why you decide to put it on here. /*Oops.
01:15:645 (2,3) - Extend slider by 1/2 or hit circle, move 1/2 back to be on red tick /*Made something similar as in 00:24:330
01:16:632 (4,5,6) - And if you want to do something like this, the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/2BcKB /*^
01:26:698 (1) - Consider finish at begin /*Ok

Trying to keep whistle logic a bit more consistent here and mention the parts where I find the rhythm was weird. Placement seems good to me.

Have a star, good luck!

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote: 2k2934
Daakane's Normal
orz
Placement
00:16:435(4) NC here to follow your pattern? /*Ok
01:07:751(4)^ /*Ok
01:16:435(3,4,) I just feel better if you follow the vocal more, but you'll think a bit overmapped on Nomral? /*Not overmapped, it's only a 1/2 pattern, but made something else to follow vocals here.

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:04:593(2,3) try this, maybe it follows the song well /*Not really, 00:05:185 (3) feels better being hit than being in a slider's end, as I did in 00:02:027 (3)

SPOILER

01:28:277(1) a bit short on Nomral diff imo /*All diffs are finishing at the same time, I'll leave it for the sake of consistency
Hit Sonud
01:03:014(4.5) player will exect to hear finish at head since you added prvious notes with it. /*Added some, I think people will suggest more finishes here, but I'll leave only in 1st and 3rd beat for now.
01:11:698(3) add whistle at head /*I'm putting whistles in each downbeat, putting one in a 3rd beat sounds a bit odd.

Thanks both for modding :3

Update here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-04-17T08:28:02+00:00

merchat7 wrote: w1m1n
[Hard]

00:33:606 (2) - Seems like you wanted to stack this with 00:31:632 (1) - Nope, I didn't want to.
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer if finish was add at begin Added.
00:35:777 (2,1) - Listening to music here, sounds like it should be clap at begin and end of these two sliders. ...I'm not sure about this, actually.
00:37:751 (1) - Music is 1/6 so change beat snap to 1/6 and shorten by a tick. I also recommend moving 00:38:540 (2) - 1/8 back and adding another repeat although I find 1/6 snap fits best with vocal here. ...Did my own things.
01:01:435 (1,2) - Consider finish instead at begin Done.
01:03:014 (1,2) - Finish instead of the whistle here if you do above.^
Now for flow:
00:02:126 (5,1) - I prefer if the bass guitar is followed here. It follows vocal right now, but the vocal rhythm is not a very nice rhythm to follow, something like this http://puu.sh/2Bdgc. A simple slider on 00:02:422 (and be sure to stack this slider on 00:02:027 (4) - for a nice effect. ...I seriously don't see anything weird here... What.
00:05:481 (2) - Prefer if you add a note here (stack with previous note) and do a jump on this stack [00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Move further down] Added a note, but I decided to keep the current placement since I see no point to do that.
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - I like this more when it's a repeating slider. It's a feel thing, either you do all repeating slider, or you do all hit circle, but since you did repeating slider here 00:05:580 (3) - I think you should continue to do so and lot of hit circles in a row seems more fitting for Insane. It's better to use hitcircles here, and I don't think it's more fitting on an Insane diff. They're just the same.
00:07:948 (2) - I believe you did a jump on this for the clap sound here, but if you listen to this part in comparison to 00:08:146 (3) - There is no bass drum playing here, so I suggest no jump here and just do jump only on (3). Or a smaller jump (e.g. 1.5x) instead. Reduced, but only to 1.8x, since making it 1.5x will make the pattern broken.
00:07:948 (2,3) - I also recommend changing to default soft-sampleset to use the default soft-clap here. Done.
00:08:146 (3,1,2) - Not too fond of this, seems like you want to follow the bass guitar, but it isn't followed properly since the bass guitar sound is at the end of 00:08:146 (3) - So I recommend changing that to a hit circle and then do this rhythm http://puu.sh/2BdBT Nah, I still prefer my own rhythm. It just feels better that way...
00:20:382 (3,4) - No jump on (3) then a big jump on (4) gives a nicer effect e.g. like this http://puu.sh/2BdIx (adjust rotation to how you wish, I simply try rotating by 45 degrees here, but if you prefer a less rough curve, rotate by less degree and vice versa). Making them a series of jumps is still more preferable for me, so I'll stick to it... for now.
00:22:553 (4) - Try stacking on the repeat of 00:21:369 (2) - instead? ...Seriously? It's too far, you know...
00:44:264 (2) - Feel like there should be a jump over stack. I don't think so.
00:44:066 (1) - I like how it feel more when you stack it with begin of 00:43:277 (1) - ^
00:51:172 (1,2) - Really prefer this to be place further away from 00:50:974 (4) - Done.
00:53:343 (4) - I'm not fond of how the jump feel to this note and it's a pretty big jump, try something like this placement so jump's a bit smaller? http://puu.sh/2Be2i Did it my own way.
01:03:803 (2) - Prefer if this was stacked to begin of 01:04:001 (3) - Done.
01:05:777 (3,4) - Don't really see why there's a jump here, prefer if distant snap was kept from previous note, and to next note. ^
01:22:356 (2) - Reduced spacing intentional? (I prefer higher spacing here) Yes, and I want to keep it that way because that's the best way to put the notes there, IMO.

Where you choose to do the jumps and stacks doesn't always feel right to me. Maybe I'm a bit tired right now so I'm a bit more strict on how the flow is so take the suggestions how you will.

Whistle is barely audible and clap is too loud so I highly recommend doing something about this. No real major problem for me and I try out Collab diff, it looks nice so far.

Have a star, good luck!

kajiyatta wrote: 2k2934
Hinsvar's Hard
Placement
00:40:119(3) curved to follow the next slider? Done.

SPOILER

00:47:224(1) just suggestion, changed direction like this? maybe more playable ^

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:35:382 unsnapped green line Snapped.
00:44:658(3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe reverse better. Nope, I'm following how the music goes here.

SPOILER

overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~

Thanks for modding guys (:

Diff

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BounceBabe

1,626 posts

ed October 2010

2013-04-17T11:58:54+00:00

Hi, M4M!

Easy + Normal

Nothing to say about rankability wise. Only its very bland mapped and not many curves.

Hard

Spacing is not really fitting with the jumps from one combo end to a new combo, consider to make normal spacing, but it's your choice.

00:03:014 (1) - Remove NC
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent
00:17:224 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:619 (2,1) - This spacing is too random to fit the song one bit, you shouldnt have a jump here
00:35:382 (1,2) - Unrankable
00:43:277 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This circle pattern is a little weird, you should try improving it with a slider between them
01:03:014 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:277 (1) - ^

Insane

Too many spacing mistakes, thats just random and not normal jumps anymore
Needs whole recomboing, its totally messed up. You first have it right but then you mixed it
Beginning is too overmapped, because main thing you hear is them talking and not singing or much music.

00:12:882 (1,2) - Reverse NC
00:40:908 (5,1) - ^
00:42:487 (5,1) - ^
00:44:066 (6,1) - ^
00:45:645 (5,1) - ^
and so on

00:38:540 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:119 (1) - ^
01:02:816 (1,2,3,1) - 3 to 1 is too big compaired to the other one
01:26:698 - Try this, fits much better and isnt too overmapped
(01:26:501 - Circle 01:26:599 - Circle 01:26:698 - 1/1 Slider with reserve and 01:27:882 - Circle)

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-18T04:38:07+00:00

BounceBabe wrote: 535p36
Hi, M4M!

Insane[/b]

Too many spacing mistakes, thats just random and not normal jumps anymore is not random in mym point of view is like i feel this song also alot of test players enjoy it orz
Needs whole recomboing, its totally messed up. You first have it right but then you mixed it I know something happen when i add the second timing line
Beginning is too overmapped, because main thing you hear is them talking and not singing or much music. gonna be cool if you can point they

00:12:882 (1,2) - Reverse NC
00:40:908 (5,1) - ^
00:42:487 (5,1) - ^
00:44:066 (6,1) - ^
00:45:645 (5,1) - ^
and so on

00:38:540 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:119 (1) - ^
i remake all the combos orz
01:02:816 (1,2,3,1) - 3 to 1 is too big compaired to the other one the sound is stronger in 3º thats why i add more distance also look nice and is ok when you play it
01:26:698 - Try this, fits much better and isnt too overmapped
(01:26:501 - Circle 01:26:599 - Circle 01:26:698 - 1/1 Slider with reserve and 01:27:882 - Circle)

mmm i try to keep the end of the song in my way f another modder say this i will do thanks for mod i will mod your soon o3o

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-04-18T07:38:23+00:00

BounceBabe wrote: 535p36
Hard

Spacing is not really fitting with the jumps from one combo end to a new combo, consider to make normal spacing, but it's your choice.

00:03:014 (1) - Remove NC The spacing changes on the combo.
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent Oops. Fixed.
00:17:224 (1) - Remove NC Done.
00:17:619 (2,1) - This spacing is too random to fit the song one bit, you shouldnt have a jump here ...It clearly fits, IMO.
00:35:382 (1,2) - Unrankable ...How did that happen? Fixed.
00:43:277 (1) - Remove NC The spacing changes on the combo, same as 00:03:014 (1).
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This circle pattern is a little weird, you should try improving it with a slider between them I don't think so. The pattern here fits the song, IMO.
01:03:014 (1) - Remove NC I'm following the stanza here.
01:28:277 (1) - ^ ^

Thanks for modding

wa

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348,360,35777,2,0,P|364:300|352:240,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,36369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,224,36567,2,0,P|168:188|160:140,1,80.0000030517579,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,36961,6,0,P|216:120|284:104,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,48,37553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,48,37652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,48,37751,6,0,L|456:44,2,80.0000030517579,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,38409,2,0,L|328:176,8,26.6666666666667
296,172,39330,6,0,P|232:208|148:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,132,39922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,40119,2,0,P|184:88|232:72,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,40711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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324,180,41501,2,0,P|260:224|172:232,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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172,352,42487,6,0,P|252:360|348:344,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,312,43079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,168,43277,6,0,P|456:208|452:248,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,100,43672,2,0,P|444:76|481:60,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,44066,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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32,128,46336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,276,47126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Mythiax

637 posts

ed August 2012

2013-04-18T12:19:49+00:00

Hi. oh ogd i hate my mods.

poor and horrible mod here, don't give me kudosu for this.

[General]
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms.

[Xinely's Easy]
01:15:645 (3) - Ctrl + J Improves flow.

[DekaDeakaane's Normal]
00:11:698 (1,2) - This notes looks too random imo. You could perfectly delete them and place a spinner that start at 00:11:106 - and finish at 00:12:882 -
^ If you do this, Ctrl + H to 00:13:277 (1) - so it won't start too far from the center.
01:15:645 (2) - slider touching the hp bar. fix it.

Nothing in Hard.

[Insane]
00:21:172 (1,2,3,4) - Weird pattern.
Try this maybe.

The code:

366,192,21172,6,0,P|415:169|416:108,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,21567,2,0,L|216:92,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,21961,2,0,P|166:241|228:242,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,22356,2,0,L|388:268,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Gonna drop a star ~~so i won't feel so bad for my horrible mod~~ to this mapset owo

gl natsu bye~

Kotone

2,402 posts

ed August 2008

2013-04-18T12:25:13+00:00

M4m from your queue
[General]

Zeroarg wrote: 324gy
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms.

I agree with this.

[Xinely's Easy]

00:23:145 (1) - A clap is missing at start point.I guess you just forgot to add it...?
01:04:198 (4) - little spacing.

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:18:211 - It's a bit strange to make a 2.5 beat(?) space here.And it may confuse new players:they don't know when should they hit the next note.Please put something in there or extend the slider.
01:09:527 (4) - Same as above.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

Consider the hitsound suggestion which i write in Insane
The difficult is pretty nice:clean note placing,good flow and easy to read.It's a good example of hard.
But be careful of new combo.Some of the combo are short(someof them have only 2 note) ,and it doesn't matter anything if you remove it.So try to reduce them yourself.

[Insane]

Hitsound suggestion
00:07:751 (5,6) - Could you hear the double clap here?
I just wonder why you dont add clap on them-.
There are some double clap after this too:00:09:527 (4,6) - ,00:15:843 (4,5) - 00:20:580 (6,7) - etc.
I find a clap to use on those place,use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2ClKY
I pefer to raise up hitsounds volume.That's a bit low now.
00:05:580 (2,4,6,8,10,12,13) - As the drum of music,add clap of them.
00:06:665 (13,1) - I can hear clearly that there is no sound on 00:06:764.To fit the music,you may change like this: http://puu.sh/2CkaK
00:10:514 - The steam should be start at here.Use the 50%playback rate,we can hear that the drum sound on there.
00:12:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:21:961 (3,4) - I find that change their place each other flow better
00:43:277 (4,5,1,2) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:50:579 (2) - To follow the music,add a clap here.
00:53:540 (1) - (end point)If you listen the music careful,you will find that there is no clap sound.
00:55:908 (3) - (end point)Same as above.
00:57:093 (2) - (start point)Same as above.
00:58:277 (1,2) - Since I hear there is a finish sound on (1),it's better to add a finish to instead clap on (1) and add a clap on(2) imo.
01:06:961 (3) - I cant find any reason to add a finish here orz.The finish is just noisy here.Remove it?
01:08:540 (1) - Same as above.And reove the Newcombo too.The combo is short and unmeaning.
01:23:540 (1,2) - Too close.It will confuse the players.Make the spacing longer please.
01:25:119 (1) - Remove the new combo?6 combo isnt so long.

good luck~

Alumetorz

408 posts

ed October 2011

2013-04-18T14:46:05+00:00

yo, from your M4M queue o/

[General]

Ok

[Xinely's Easy]

00:23:145 (1) - Clap
00:35:382 (1) - You could try replacing this slider with a spinner.
00:37:751 (2) - I'd 1/3 that.
01:21:172 (3,4) - How about replacing this with something like this: http://puu.sh/2Cm5i sounds better imo.

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:36:567 (2) - Whistle Slider?
00:38:540 (4) - This sounds off. I think it's on a 1/6 beat. Listen closely.
01:04:198 (6) - Remove Circle?

[Hinsvar's Hard]

OD -1?
00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Remove (1).
00:59:856 (1) - It's better if this is reversed a second time too imo.
~~01:17:224 (1) - This circle is right on her eye LOL.~~
01:18:606 (4,1) - I think the spacing is too big.

[Insane]

00:00:645 (1) to 00:05:185 (8) - Remove all claps (Better without imo, and other diffs aren't clapped there either)
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Try making this stream perfectly shaped. (Make a curvy slider and convert it to a stream)
00:10:810 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rotate this so the stream follows the previous slider's curve, if you know what I mean.
00:12:882 (1) - Either remove this NC or add 01:04:198 (4) NC there, since it's the same. I don't recommend latter.
00:36:435 (1) - I'd replace this with two circles, but it's good either way.
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5) - Shape this more like a curve.
01:23:540 (1,2) - Space properly. It's too close...

Well that's it...
I hope I was of any help.

Good Luck with your beatmap!

Last edited by Alumetorz 2013-04-18T21:22:20+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-04-18T18:39:17+00:00

Zeroarg

Zeroarg wrote: 324gy
[DekaDeakaane's Normal]
orz
00:11:698 (1,2) - This notes looks too random imo. You could perfectly delete them and place a spinner that start at 00:11:106 - and finish at 00:12:882 -
^ If you do this, Ctrl + H to 00:13:277 (1) - so it won't start too far from the center. /*That circles were for bass, changed in something else that follows the drums.
01:15:645 (2) - slider touching the hp bar. fix it. /*Fixed, I think.

Kotone

Kotone wrote: 4y6d1l
[Dekaane's Normal]

00:18:211 - It's a bit strange to make a 2.5 beat(?) space here.And it may confuse new players:they don't know when should they hit the next note.Please put something in there or extend the slider. /*I don't think so, I think 2.5 beats is enough to notice the approach circle and being able to react and know when to hit.
01:09:527 (4) - Same as above. /*^

Alumetor

Alumetor wrote: 1l4hv
[Dekaane's Normal]

00:36:567 (2) - Whistle Slider? /*Oops, retired the whistle from the body in the previous slider.
00:38:540 (4) - This sounds off. I think it's on a 1/6 beat. Listen closely. /*I had that before but well, going back to it, done.
01:04:198 (6) - Remove Circle? /*There's a noticeable beat in the music, removing it would sound weird imo.

Well that's it...
I hope I was of any help.

Good Luck with your beatmap!

Thanks for mod ;3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-18T20:59:41+00:00

Zeroarg

Zeroarg wrote: 324gy
Hi. oh ogd i hate my mods.

[General]
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms. gonna keep it for now gonna se what the other modders say about this

[Insane]
00:21:172 (1,2,3,4) - Weird pattern. i keep this in my way for now

Gonna drop a star ~~so i won't feel so bad for my horrible mod~~ to this mapset owo

gl natsu bye~

thanks for mod and start also i gift you kudos cuz dekanne change something in your mod

Kotone

Kotone wrote: 4y6d1l
M4m from your queue
[General]

Zeroarg wrote: 324gy
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms.

I agree with this.

okay

[Insane]

Hitsound suggestion]00:07:751 (5,6) - Could you hear the double clap here?
I just wonder why you dont add clap on them-.
There are some double clap after this too:00:09:527 (4,6) - ,00:15:843 (4,5) - 00:20:580 (6,7) - etc.
I find a clap to use on those place,use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2ClKY

I pefer to raise up hitsounds volume.That's a bit low now.
00:05:580 (2,4,6,8,10,12,13) - As the drum of music,add clap of them.
00:06:665 (13,1) - I can hear clearly that there is no sound on 00:06:764.To fit the music,you may change like this: http://puu.sh/2CkaK
00:10:514 - The steam should be start at here.Use the 50%playback rate,we can hear that the drum sound on there.
00:12:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:21:961 (3,4) - I find that change their place each other flow better
00:43:277 (4,5,1,2) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:50:579 (2) - To follow the music,add a clap here.
00:53:540 (1) - (end point)If you listen the music careful,you will find that there is no clap sound.
00:55:908 (3) - (end point)Same as above.
00:57:093 (2) - (start point)Same as above.
00:58:277 (1,2) - Since I hear there is a finish sound on (1),it's better to add a finish to instead clap on (1) and add a clap on(2) imo.
01:06:961 (3) - I cant find any reason to add a finish here orz.The finish is just noisy here.Remove it?
01:08:540 (1) - Same as above.And reove the Newcombo too.The combo is short and unmeaning.
01:23:540 (1,2) - Too close.It will confuse the players.Make the spacing longer please.
01:25:119 (1) - Remove the new combo?6 combo isnt so long.

good luck~

all the most fixed

Alumetor

Alumetor wrote: 1l4hv
yo, from your M4M queue o/

[General]

Ok

[Insane]

00:00:645 (1) to 00:05:185 (8) - Remove all claps (Better without imo, and other diffs aren't clapped there either) they fit for me
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Try making this stream perfectly shaped. (Make a curvy slider and convert it to a stream) done
00:10:810 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rotate this so the stream follows the previous slider's curve, if you know what I mean. keep in my way
00:12:882 (1) - Either remove this NC or add 01:04:198 (4) NC there, since it's the same. I don't recommend latter. okay
00:36:435 (1) - I'd replace this with two circles, but it's good either way. keep it slider have a break after stream
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5) - Shape this more like a curve. done
01:23:540 (1,2) - Space properly. It's too close...

done

Well that's it...
I hope I was of any help.

Good Luck with your beatmap!

Xinely

5,014 posts

ed April 2012

2013-04-18T22:48:06+00:00

fix all in kotone ~
and refuse all in other , sorry, i prefer mine >_<

nyan~

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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-04-19T07:34:01+00:00

Kotone wrote: 4y6d1l
[Hinsvar's Hard]

Consider the hitsound suggestion which i write in Insane Increased the volume on some parts.

The difficult is pretty nice:clean note placing,good flow and easy to read.It's a good example of hard. Good to hear that~

But be careful of new combo.Some of the combo are short(someof them have only 2 note) ,and it doesn't matter anything if you remove it.So try to reduce them yourself. They're mostly there to indicate spacing changes, but I'll look at them later.

Alumetor wrote: 1l4hv
[Hinsvar's Hard]

OD -1? OD5 is too easy, seriously.
00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Remove (1). Why should I---
00:59:856 (1) - It's better if this is reversed a second time too imo. I don't want to use that too much lol
~~01:17:224 (1) - This circle is right on her eye LOL.~~Oh you.
01:18:606 (4,1) - I think the spacing is too big. Uh idk. I'll keep this for now, I suppose.

Thanks for modding everyone

Stuff

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368,48,37652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Flower

1,728 posts

ed August 2011

2013-04-19T07:51:47+00:00

Hi~ m4m~

[General]
vocal from 00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - has a 1/2 off with drum so I don't think mapping rigidly on 2,4-downbeats is the best choice.
From 00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - I suggest using claps on white lines instead which is also a track in the song. Otherwise you can follow guitar (suggested by wcx) or vocal.

[Easy]
00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - Maybe you should follow vocal instead... not sure. Current rhythm is quite confusing to players. Suggest remap.
00:54:724 (1) - DS inconsistency

[Normal]
00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - same as Easy

[Hard]
00:11:698 (1,2,3) - what does this pattern mean...? I think it's overmapping. delete 2 and 3.
00:13:277 (1) - I suggest change to 1/2 sliders instead due to the 1/2 off beat vocal.

[Insane]
I suggest remapping this diff, at least the note placement from 00:33:803 - to 01:17:224 - , because the placement lacks flow, and looks like sliders are made into random shapes.
00:05:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - use normal sample instead. soft sample does not fit the strong drums.
00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream shapes awful. please rearrange the notes.
00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - reduce hitsound volume and place claps on red lines (non-downbeats) may sound better (current hitsound is like papapa)
00:38:540 (1) - should start at 00:38:409 - , same as Hard
00:38:540 (1,1) - by the way the sliders' shapes are ugly.
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure if intended but the stream shapes bad. using a fluent arc looks better.
00:57:487 (3) - what is this? please make a better shape.
01:12:290 (1) - does not blanket well with 01:12:093 (6) -
01:26:501 - add a note

Good luck~

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-19T08:14:21+00:00

Flower wrote: 4e3w57
Hi~ m4m~

[General]
vocal from 00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - has a 1/2 off with drum so I don't think mapping rigidly on 2,4-downbeats is the best choice. im following bg music here so that fit well imo...
From 00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - I suggest using claps on white lines instead which is also a track in the song. Otherwise you can follow guitar (suggested by wcx) or vocal. maybe i dont understand you but already are clap in 2 and 4 white line orz

[Insane]
I suggest remapping this diff, at least the note placement from 00:33:803 - to 01:17:224 - , because the placement lacks flow, and looks like sliders are made into random shapes. I did the placements and the slider shapes also the pattern how i feel the music orz this is not a valid reason for reamap a diff im good with it and alot of other test players love the map to and find it good so i gonna kee that part in my way
00:05:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - use normal sample instead. soft sample does not fit the strong drums. if you see im using soft hitsound custom 2 you can hear that clap fit alot with this part
00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream shapes awful. please rearrange the notes. is fine follow thww flow of before and after pattern
00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - reduce hitsound volume and place claps on red lines (non-downbeats) may sound better (current hitsound is like papapa) i gonna keep it for now
00:38:540 (1) - should start at 00:38:409 - , same as Hard i add a circle there but i dont move the slider
00:38:540 (1,1) - by the way the sliders' shapes are ugly. they are nice for me o3o
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure if intended but the stream shapes bad. using a fluent arc looks better. since i like hw i did it i gonna keep it too
00:57:487 (3) - what is this? please make a better shape. i try to make some original slider here also are fine for me and fit the song very well
01:12:290 (1) - does not blanket well with 01:12:093 (6) - fixed
01:26:501 - add a note ok

Good luck~

thanks for mod gonna do your soon

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-04-19T14:28:57+00:00

I find following just vocals for most of the song a bit boring, 3/2 sliders in that part you suggested are following vocals though, and I'm surprised because you didn't say that for the kiai.
Still made some changes, update pls: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

ed January 2011

2013-04-20T13:09:29+00:00

finally~ someone is mapping a GJ-bu song <3. mod requested on my queue

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Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i think that the preview time should be moved to 64001 because right now, "tomodachi" is cut off and it doesn't sound good for a preview IMO.
i feel that a 1000 lead-in feels too sudden for players, so i think a 1500 lead in is enough so that players can get ready in time IMO.
i think that you should go for combo colors that match the hair for the girls. use the code in the box to see. note that i tried to match Kirara's hair, but this is the best i can come up with ><.

SPOILER

Combo1 : 255,202,79
Combo2 : 255,170,94
Combo3 : 255,81,168
Combo4 : 190,125,255

[Xinely's Easy]
00:00:646 (1) - maybe you can flip this slider so that the transition is a lot smoother to follow during gameplay?
00:03:803 (1) - ^
00:06:567 - i think that you should add a circle with the clap because i feel that something is missing in this part of the song. it'll be smoother as it follows the clap in the BGM during gameplay IMO.
00:11:303 - same as above, but with no clap, and to follow the drums.
00:12:882 (4) - i highly suggest that you replace this pattern for 2 circles because the 2nd part(the end of the slider) is where the kiai starts and it's also where the pitch of the vocals change in this part.
00:19:198 (4) - it'll flow a lot smoother if you align this slider to (3), as well as make it look like (3) for that smooth transition in the pattern during gameplay.
00:23:145 (1) - to me, the flow in this part flows awkwardly during gameplay due to the transition of these 2 curved sliders. i suggest that you make this curved slider a straight slider so that the flow is steady in this part during gameplay.
00:32:224 (1) - replace this whistle for a finish because not only that it'll be consistent, but it'll show emphasis in the pitch of the vocals during gameplay.
00:33:803 (3) - i think aligning this to (1) would make the flow steady and somewhat smoother to follow during gameplay.
00:37:751 (2) - remove the clap at the repeat because right now it feels unfitting to follow with the vocals like this.
00:43:277 (3) - align this to (2). it'll be a lot smoother to follow from (3) during gameplay. personally, i find this transition uncomfortable to follow during gameplay IMO.
00:45:645 (2) - if you wanna make the flow a lot smoother to follow in this, you should make sure that the end of this slider is aligned to the beginning of (3), as well as adjusted properly. it should look something like this.
00:51:172 (1) - replace the whistle for a clap. yes it'll break consistency, but it'll follow the drums in the BGM and it's really fitting with this part of the song.
00:55:514 (2) - same as 00:43:277.
00:59:066 (2) - move this to the middle of 00:56:698 (4) - like this for neatness in this part during gameplay.
01:04:593 (1) - you're forgetting a clap at the end. add it for consistency in the clap pattern during gameplay.
01:06:172 (4) - move this note up by 1/2 because that's where the vocals end here. it'll be a nice challenge to beginners in their timing and reaction IMO.
01:27:487 (2) - you should stack this on 01:25:119 (3) - because i find it a lot neater and smoother to follow during gameplay. if you do this, then you have to move (1,3) as well if you want to do this.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:10:119 (5) - i think that you can do a s stack on (1) because although it disappears, i feel that it'll look a lot neater. just note that if you do this, then you have to move (4) around to do this, also make this a NC because it'll be consistent with 00:05:580 (1) - since it follows something in the BGM.
00:12:093 - consider adding 3 circles at the 1/1 ticks(including this one) because you can hear the "thump" in the drums, and i think that the circles would fit with this part IMO.
00:16:830 (2) - add a whistle at the end because it'll be consistent with (1), as well as that it'll go along with the clap in this part of the song. in other words a clap-whistle pattern during gameplay.
00:17:619 (3,4) - for this one, the whistle should be at (3), not at (4). adding it at (4) sounds really unfitting as it doesn't fit with this part of the vocals, or add the whistle at the end of (3) so that it'd be consistent with 01:08:935 (3) -
00:25:711 (3) - you should remove this circle because now it feels unnecessary as it doesn't fit with the BGM, and the vocals as well IMO.
00:38:474 (4) - the beginning of this slider is unsnapped. re-snap it back to the 1/1 tick so that it'll be rankable.
00:56:303 (4) - NC here. it'll be consistent with 00:52:553 (1) - since the lyrics change here as well as the one at 00:52:553 (1) - .
01:08:145 (2) - same as 00:16:830.
01:11:698 (3) - do the same thing here, this time at the beginning of this slider.
01:13:277 (5) - ^
01:17:027 (3) - same as 00:25:711.
01:21:172 (2) - same as 01:11:698.

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:17:619 (4) - perhaps you can do Ctrl+H while moving the end up so that the diff would be more fun to play IMO?
00:31:830 (2) - a linear pattern like this may not flow properly and it might catch players off guard in their transitioning. i think that you should move this note around so that it'd look like a triangular pattern as that would make the diff more fun and easier to follow for players IMO.
01:02:224 (2) - i think you can space this out just because of the change dna emphasis in the vocals in this part during gameplay IMO.

[Insane]
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - ik that this stream is for the sake of the diff, but the majority of the notes don't follow anything and it feels unnecessary, so for this one, do this as it makes a lot of sense by following the music during gampeplay.
00:12:882 (1) - remove the NC for this. yes it's connected to the vocals, but if you listen carefully, the "ni" is more emphasized than the other notes, indicating that there's a change in the vocals here.
00:38:540 (1) - i think for this one, you should follow the drums, so it should be a circle at the 1/6 tick, followed by a 1/4 repeat slider so that it'll follow the drums accurately during gameplay.
00:40:514 (4) - maybe Ctrl+G because i can see a possible jump pattern in this part, and i think it'll be more fun during gameplay IMO.
00:41:895 (4) - align this to the end of (2) because it'll be neater and it'll keep the flow steady here during gameplay.
00:51:961 - you should add a 0.75 slider multiplier here because this is where the vocals slow down and it feels more fitting to the mood of the song during gameplay.
00:55:119 (1,3) - make these wave sliders symmetrical because they flow awkwardly and they look ugly as well. it took a few mins but the sliders should look similar to this for a smoother transition in the diff during gameplay.

and that's all i got. i'll it this map is not bad o.o it just needs more polishing up and minor changes and it'll be good to go. here, take this star because i feel that it's almost ready and GL on the rank

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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-04-20T14:05:33+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote: 2q5k2r
[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:17:619 (4) - perhaps you can do Ctrl+H while moving the end up so that the diff would be more fun to play IMO? Sorry if this sounds a bit offensive, but I think you could just tell me to Ctrl+G it lol. Done though~
00:31:830 (2) - a linear pattern like this may not flow properly and it might catch players off guard in their transitioning. i think that you should move this note around so that it'd look like a triangular pattern as that would make the diff more fun and easier to follow for players IMO. I'm following how the music flows here, and a linear pattern definitely fits here. The flow feels a bit weird, yes, but the weird flow goes very, very well with the song itself, so I think it's acceptable.
01:02:224 (2) - i think you can space this out just because of the change dna emphasis in the vocals in this part during gameplay IMO. I'm actually thinking about that too, here. Done.

Thanks for the mod

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Xinely

5,014 posts

ed April 2012

2013-04-20T14:22:45+00:00

fix all expect 01:06:172 (4) -
Thanks byaku~ :3
Omg starred.. Natsu is pro.. Go Go!

fix

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 64593
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13271
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:237787
BeatmapSetID:83504

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
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creampuff

438 posts

ed August 2012

2013-04-20T15:51:38+00:00

Yo. Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Ok

[Xinely's Easy]
00:37:751 (2) Try this?

SPOILER

[Dekaane's Normal]
Good

[Hinsvar's Hard]
Good

[Insane]
Ok

Nice map. GL on rank.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-04-20T16:17:29+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote: 2q5k2r
finally~ someone is mapping a GJ-bu song <3. mod requested on my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:10:119 (5) - i think that you can do a s stack on (1) because although it disappears, i feel that it'll look a lot neater. just note that if you do this, then you have to move (4) around to do this, also make this a NC because it'll be consistent with 00:05:580 (1) - since it follows something in the BGM. /*Ok, done
00:12:093 - consider adding 3 circles at the 1/1 ticks(including this one) because you can hear the "thump" in the drums, and i think that the circles would fit with this part IMO. /*I decide to keep this part, I like how my tiny break fits with the increasing sound in the background
00:16:830 (2) - add a whistle at the end because it'll be consistent with (1), as well as that it'll go along with the clap in this part of the song. in other words a clap-whistle pattern during gameplay. /*Ok, done
00:17:619 (3,4) - for this one, the whistle should be at (3), not at (4). adding it at (4) sounds really unfitting as it doesn't fit with this part of the vocals, or add the whistle at the end of (3) so that it'd be consistent with 01:08:935 (3) - /*Ok, done
00:25:711 (3) - you should remove this circle because now it feels unnecessary as it doesn't fit with the BGM, and the vocals as well IMO. /*It matches for vocals but removed.
00:38:474 (4) - the beginning of this slider is unsnapped. re-snap it back to the 1/1 tick so that it'll be rankable. /*It's snapped in 1/6 due to vocals, I don't know why but it sounds off when I let it in the white tick ;_;
00:56:303 (4) - NC here. it'll be consistent with 00:52:553 (1) - since the lyrics change here as well as the one at 00:52:553 (1) - . /*It's the same phrase in vocals :I I'll keep
01:08:145 (2) - same as 00:16:830. /*Ok, done
01:11:698 (3) - do the same thing here, this time at the beginning of this slider. /*Ok, done
01:13:277 (5) - ^ /*Ok, done
01:17:027 (3) - same as 00:25:711. /*Ok, done
01:21:172 (2) - same as 01:11:698. /*Ok, done

and that's all i got. i'll it this map is not bad o.o it just needs more polishing up and minor changes and it'll be good to go. here, take this star because i feel that it's almost ready and GL on the rank .

Thanks for modding :3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-20T22:47:53+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote: 2q5k2r
finally~ someone is mapping a GJ-bu song <3. mod requested on my queue . I know i was surprised no one mapped this nice song orz

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i think that the preview time should be moved to 64001 because right now, "tomodachi" is cut off and it doesn't sound good for a preview IMO.
i feel that a 1000 lead-in feels too sudden for players, so i think a 1500 lead in is enough so that players can get ready in time IMO.
i think that you should go for combo colors that match the hair for the girls. use the code in the box to see. note that i tried to match Kirara's hair, but this is the best i can come up with ><.
SPOILER
Combo1 : 255,202,79
Combo2 : 255,170,94
Combo3 : 255,81,168
Combo4 : 190,125,255
all changed here also thanks alot for the combo colours fit alot with bg and video

[Insane]
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - ik that this stream is for the sake of the diff, but the majority of the notes don't follow anything and it feels unnecessary, so for this one, do this as it makes a lot of sense by following the music during gampeplay. Yup changed some symilar tou you suggest
00:12:882 (1) - remove the NC for this. yes it's connected to the vocals, but if you listen carefully, the "ni" is more emphasized than the other notes, indicating that there's a change in the vocals here. done
00:38:540 (1) - i think for this one, you should follow the drums, so it should be a circle at the 1/6 tick, followed by a 1/4 repeat slider so that it'll follow the drums accurately during gameplay. i was confuse with this i hope i fix it how you say o3o
00:40:514 (4) - maybe Ctrl+G because i can see a possible jump pattern in this part, and i think it'll be more fun during gameplay IMO. yeah the jump feel better when you play done
00:41:895 (4) - align this to the end of (2) because it'll be neater and it'll keep the flow steady here during gameplay. done
00:51:961 - you should add a 0.75 slider multiplier here because this is where the vocals slow down and it feels more fitting to the mood of the song during gameplay. i really dont like sv changes orz i want to keep this T-T
00:55:119 (1,3) - make these wave sliders symmetrical because they flow awkwardly and they look ugly as well. it took a few mins but the sliders should look similar to this for a smoother transition in the diff during gameplay. done

and that's all i got. i'll it this map is not bad o.o it just needs more polishing up and minor changes and it'll be good to go. here, take this star because i feel that it's almost ready and GL on the rank . thanks o3o for the start and mod o3o

okamiratsu

714 posts

ed August 2011

2013-04-22T19:08:15+00:00

[Xinely's Easy]
No video

that's about all I could find

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-22T20:23:01+00:00

okamiratsu wrote: o6o21
[Xinely's Easy]
No video

that's about all I could find

oh i see i will fix in the next updated mmm i will fix this then i think i should give you a kudo

scanter

2,390 posts

ed July 2012

2013-04-23T07:04:16+00:00

mannnnn my mod quality is poor. don't slap me. btw o3o/

General 6285k

Add video on easy diff.

Xinely's Easy 566q4d

00:11:303 (3) - Add clap

00:29:067 (1,2,3) - Not bad. but I recommend more blanket this shapes. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717857
This is code.

SPOILER

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380,92,29856,2,0,P|386:138|372:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,30646,2,0,P|292:228|200:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:37:751 (2) - NC? it's sound is changed.
01:03:014 (3) - Add finish on slider's first? it will become more rhythmical before kiai part
01:06:172 (4) - How about lengthen this to double? it is fit better in this vocal. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717867
01:14:856 (2) - Overlap looks a little bad. how about move to x:280, y:104?

Dekaane's Normal 4sp2g

00:10:119 (1) - Add clap on slider's end.
00:11:698 (2) - I think, spinner is better than this circle. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717893
00:18:211 (4) - Empty rhythm is so awkward from me. how about this? http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717879
00:37:751 (3) - NC. sound was suddenly changed.
01:09:527 (4) - Same reason. how about this? look at number 4 http://puu.sh/2FrMy.jpg

Hinsvar's Hard 26qv

00:35:382 - 00:38:935 - Sound is too low. +10~20% fits better in this part.
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4) - How about makes jump? it will become more funny. it has many drum sounds on. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717899
This is code.
SPOILER
```
364,48,50382,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,50580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,68,50777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,84,50974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```

Insane 1o711v

00:12:882 (5) - Clear finish at slider's first.
00:15:843 (4) - Change S:C1 sound.

00:34:396 (2,3,4) - How about this? flow is a little bad. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717910
This is code.

SPOILER

324,88,34396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,133,34593,2,0,P|206:168|253:176,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,102,34988,2,0,P|154:55|119:18,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:38:738 (5,6,7) - Using 1/8 beat slider? I can't hear any sound on 00:38:738 here. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717913
00:41:698 (3) - Why add finish? clearly fits better.
01:15:251 (5) - Move to x:181, y:235. not perfect stacked.
01:25:119 (1,2) - I think, 1/1 slider fits more well. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717916

yeah. nice mapset & moe song. GL on rank

Xinely

5,014 posts

ed April 2012

2013-04-23T10:08:13+00:00

Fix all, moe scanter thanks 4 mod nyan ~

fix

osu file format v12

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GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-04-23T10:10:10+00:00

scanter wrote: 505g2y

Hinsvar's Hard 26qv
00:35:382 - 00:38:935 - Sound is too low. +10~20% fits better in this part. Increased the volume.
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4) - How about makes jump? it will become more funny. it has many drum sounds on. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717899
This is code. I'd like to keep my pattern here. A linear formation of circles works and goes better with the song, IMO.
SPOILER
364,48,50382,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,50580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,68,50777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,84,50974,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Thanks for modding

lol

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Hinsvar's Hard
Source:GJ-Bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
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Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-23T23:13:44+00:00

scanter wrote: 505g2y
mannnnn my mod quality is poor. don't slap me. btw o3o/ /me slaps the slapter

General 6285k

Add video on easy diff.

fixed

Insane 1o711v
00:12:882 (5) - Clear finish at slider's first. done

00:15:843 (4) - Change S:C1 sound. yup
00:34:396 (2,3,4) - How about this? flow is a little bad. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717910
This is code. great i love it o3o
SPOILER
324,88,34396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,133,34593,2,0,P|206:168|253:176,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,102,34988,2,0,P|154:55|119:18,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:38:738 (5,6,7) - Using 1/8 beat slider? I can't hear any sound on 00:38:738 here. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717913 since byakugan suggest me he actual rhytm and i agree with him so i keep this

00:41:698 (3) - Why add finish? clearly fits better. done

01:15:251 (5) - Move to x:181, y:235. not perfect stacked. ok

01:25:119 (1,2) - I think, 1/1 slider fits more well. http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/717916 baka im starting sliders with the vocals in this part i think my current way fit better T-T
yeah. nice mapset & moe song. GL on rank thanks and thanks for mod baka hep me to improve alot

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-04-24T00:04:50+00:00

Added a spinner in a different place and put the suggested NC, the empty parts match with vocals imo, thanks o/
Update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2013-04-24T13:59:05+00:00

Hi guys My queue

General
- Offset (+5) sounds much and plays better
- hehhh... you said you used 848x480 in Colin's post but what I'm seeing is 640x360 , it's 16:9 indeed but the higher resolution would be nice

because it won't look odd , just mention in case you forgot

- eh Dekaane's Normal but I saw your previous diffs were that name too \o/ so ok , I will it xD

Xinely's Easy
Just in case if you didn't check his/her mod. Might it be useful o.o?ahere
00:06:961 (1) - increase volume from this note to 40-45% , the drum (clap) 's volume is really low and barely to hear

00:37:751 (1) - a.. this slider should be 1/3 orz.. , it will sound much better and fit the music. It isn't too hard I believe because it fits the music so it won't be anything vague to understand at all xD, Do not forget to adjust the spacing a bit, it won't be strange and unrankable if you don't :\

SPOILER

[img]osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/719953[/img]

01:03:014 (3) - ^, 1/3 plzz

01:08:540 (2) - left and up 1 grid, the head of slider won't overlap with the previous and look good !

Dekaane's Normal
good

but the last spinner is super fast D:

Hinsvar's Hard
ehh sounds good for most of parts in the map except for one triplet that I feel it's quite sudden+unfitting = =~
00:05:481 (2) - I feel this note out of place like the 00:05:580 (3) - should be 1/6 but ehh I will assume that you simplified it using 1/4
other than that is seemingly good

Insane
00:06:764 (1) - remove NC and NC at 00:07:356 (1) - instead. It looks really confused and odd to have NC there since it doesn't start a new phrase at all
you can hear 00:07:356 (1) - bass (not bass drum) on this that introduces new part more clearly so I think it's better since it fits with the spacing you used to (NC punishes confusion here imo)
00:35:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -

HOW could player notice this is 1/3 since the spacing like 00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is 1/4
I will start using 1/3 sliders starting on 00:35:382 and 00:35:909 so introduce first

so 00:36:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - will be what people can guess and expect xD

SPOILER

call me back for this

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-04-24T14:10:38+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
Hinsvar's Hard
ehh sounds good for most of parts in the map except for one triplet that I feel it's quite sudden+unfitting = =~ Hmm, can you show which triplet do you find weird?
00:05:481 (2) - I feel this note out of place like the 00:05:580 (3) - should be 1/6 but ehh I will assume that you simplified it using 1/4 ...Yeah, this is supposed to be 1/6. I think Hard players will find this sudden transition jarring though, so I decided to simplify it.
other than that is seemingly good \:D/

Well, thanks for taking a look~ (:

Xinely

5,014 posts

ed April 2012

2013-04-24T14:23:46+00:00

Fix all in frost's mod.
Aaaa Frost. i already checked that mod but i not accept that.. oh i forget to reply (:3)rz
hue u are so diligent 8)
@Natsu : if you fix the offset. Fix in my diff too >< thanks ~

fix

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
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DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-04-24T15:53:00+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
- eh Dekaane's Normal but I saw your previous diffs were that name too \o/ so ok , I will it xD

I don't know what did you mean by that D:
But extended the last spinner 1/2 beat.

My update :3 http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

scanter

2,390 posts

ed July 2012

2013-04-24T20:33:09+00:00

Go Go \o/

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-04-24T23:39:53+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
Hi guys My queue

General
- Offset (+5) sounds much and plays better done sound better
- hehhh... you said you used 848x480 in Colin's post but what I'm seeing is 640x360 , it's 16:9 indeed but the higher resolution would be nice because it won't look odd , just mention in case you forgot since i talk with vicho (he encode the video) and is ok also the video got a nice quality and is like when you see the anime o3oabout coulin when he told me that video was 4:3 so i ask vicho to do 16:9
- eh Dekaane's Normal but I saw your previous diffs were that name too \o/ so ok , I will it xD

Insane
00:06:764 (1) - remove NC and NC at 00:07:356 (1) - instead. It looks really confused and odd to have NC there since it doesn't start a new phrase at all
you can hear 00:07:356 (1) - bass (not bass drum) on this that introduces new part more clearly so I think it's better since it fits with the spacing you used to (NC punishes confusion here imo) done
00:35:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
HOW could player notice this is 1/3 since the spacing like 00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is 1/4
I will start using 1/3 sliders starting on 00:35:382 and 00:35:909 so introduce first so 00:36:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - will be what people can guess and expect xD done in my way hope you liked

SPOILER

call me back for this

ok i change the stream for some sliders o3o after see alot of players fail at that point xD

Frostmourne

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3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2013-04-30T18:19:16+00:00

sry for lateness

As you see the 1,1 after ""bg.jpg" , please change it to 0,0 for every diffs. I used to be a bug that woc already fixed it.
also the Source should be "GJ-bu" , I did investigate for the resources and they mostly have written as GJ-bu instead of GJ-Bu

I hope I can bubble this afterwards when BSS works properly, and I have time to check it regardless of my exam.

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-05-01T00:08:17+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
sry for lateness

As you see the 1,1 after ""bg.jpg" , please change it to 0,0 for every diffs. I used to be a bug that woc already fixed it.
also the Source should be "GJ-bu" , I did investigate for the resources and they mostly have written as GJ-bu instead of GJ-Bu

I hope I can bubble this afterwards when BSS works properly, and I have time to check it regardless of my exam.

all fixed als source o3o about BSS is working fine for me since i update and re all see fine thanks o3o

Frostmourne

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3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2013-05-01T06:09:46+00:00

there are some unsnapped green lines on 00:38:479 (2) - which actually sound fine (just about volume changes not SV changes)
so here you go , good luck

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-05-01T06:39:28+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
there are some unsnapped green lines on 00:38:479 (2) - which actually sound fine (just about volume changes not SV changes)
so here you go , good luck

thanks o3o

Fluabu

21 posts

ed December 2012

2013-05-01T21:01:08+00:00

Hi, I noticed a few minor errors as I was playing it

[Xinely's Easy]

00:27:197 (2) - I don't think this is timed or snapped properly
01:07:459 (5) - Same as above

That's all I have to say. It's a good map but those parts feel weird to me.

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-05-01T21:13:07+00:00

ok we talk it on chat lets xinely check it o3o if she want to change i will do when some BAT come

edir: she agree with you will fix when some else check this

Frostmourne

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3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2013-05-04T06:54:31+00:00

you can fix it , I will return a bubble afterwards :3

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-05-04T07:15:48+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
you can fix it , I will return a bubble afterwards :3

okay okay thanks already fixed

Frostmourne

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3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2013-05-04T09:00:17+00:00

:3

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-05-04T09:00:48+00:00

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
:3

\:D/

Kawayi Rika

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3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2013-05-08T21:19:35+00:00

Hi ~ Natsu ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 2o6n

Please remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitclap,normal-hitclap-2'

[Insane] 1o141

OD7 is much better,because of some 1/3 rhythm.

00:39:335 (1) - This slider made flow bad,try use this one.

374,345,39335,6,0,B|436:312|444:272|452:232|512:204,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:58:282 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.

[Hinsvar's Hard] 433p6c

00:09:039 (2) - Wrong snapped slider,should move to 00:08:940(don't forgot remove clap in end slider's end).
00:36:374 (3) - ^,should move to 00:36:440 - .
00:38:479 (2) - Try reduce 1 repeat,sound much better.

[Dekaane's Normal] 1w4131

00:59:170 (2) - Wrong snapped slider,should move to 00:59:071.
01:07:558 (4) - Remove this note,sound much better.
01:28:282 (1) - The spinner should end to 01:29:269 - .
00:58:282 (1) - Remove clap and Add whistle.
00:58:677 (2) - Remove whistle and Add clap.
01:01:440 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary.

[Xinely's Easy] 2g5y55

00:32:229 (1,2,3,4) - More better blanket,like this.

Screenshot and Code

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256,208,34993,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:28:282 (3) - Same as above,here is code.

80,300,88282,2,0,P|44:212|124:152,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:02:229 (2) - Change a 1/2 slider on 01:02:032 - ,follow with lyrics.

OK ~ That's all ~ not bad map ~

Call me back ~

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

Topic Starter

2013-05-08T21:35:09+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631
Hi ~ Natsu ~ Hi

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 2o6n

Please remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitclap,normal-hitclap-2'

done
[Insane] 1o141
OD7 is much better,because of some 1/3 rhythm.
00:39:335 (1) - This slider made flow bad,try use this one.
374,345,39335,6,0,B|436:312|444:272|452:232|512:204,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:58:282 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.

all fixed there
OK ~ That's all ~ not bad map ~ [color=#0000FF]thanks

Call me back ~[/color]

ok ok i just waiting to hinsvar and xinely your mod :3 then i will updated

Last edited by Natsu 2013-05-08T23:31:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-05-08T22:29:29+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631

[Dekaane's Normal] 1w4131

00:59:170 (2) - Wrong snapped slider,should move to 00:59:071. /*Oops, I really wonder what happened there.

01:07:558 (4) - Remove this note,sound much better. /*Ok

01:28:282 (1) - The spinner should end to 01:29:269 - . /*Frost said the spinner was quite short, but I think I'll make a slider here.

00:58:282 (1) - Remove clap and Add whistle. /*There's a finish here o3o

00:58:677 (2) - Remove whistle and Add clap. /*^There's already a clap o3o

01:01:440 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary. /*I find that combo necessary, if I do, the combo will be too long xc

Thank you Rika :3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Edited a few minutes after posting, forgot some tiny details, it's all ready now.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-05-09T02:38:25+00:00

Fixed everything; thanks for your mod, Rika!

lol

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64006
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Hinsvar's Hard
Source:GJ-bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:239957
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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Xinely fixed everything too and asked me to get her diff here (she's just lazy to post lol). She told me to say: "Thanks moe Rika

" \o\

Xinely's Easy

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448,224,21966,2,0,P|372:240|292:224,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,188,23150,6,0,L|140:156,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,24335,2,0,P|344:115|376:60,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,80,25914,6,0,P|144:60|64:124,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,27098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,240,27493,2,0,P|146:279|222:259,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,100,29072,6,0,P|268:120|336:116,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,29861,2,0,P|386:138|372:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,30650,2,0,P|292:228|200:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,348,32229,6,0,P|64:312|80:256,2,80,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,33414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,280,33808,2,0,P|259:290|299:279,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,34993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,128,35387,6,0,P|164:88|54:144,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,296,37756,2,0,L|300:288,3,53.3333333333333,2|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,38940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,144,39335,6,0,P|208:68|108:60,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,40913,2,0,P|200:284|269:302,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,42098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,268,42492,6,0,P|452:224|460:184,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,188,43282,2,0,P|349:140|313:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,44071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,36,44861,2,0,P|68:40|32:72,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,45650,6,0,P|125:195|201:232,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,292,47229,2,0,P|418:310|491:266,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,196,48413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,128,48808,6,0,P|374:110|301:154,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,292,51177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,260,51571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,208,51966,6,0,P|288:172|268:56,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,84,53545,2,0,P|79:180|35:216,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,54729,6,0,P|124:288|184:272,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,204,55519,2,0,P|189:181|221:127,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,56308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,152,56703,2,0,P|404:176|484:144,2,160,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,72,58677,5,8,0:0:0:0:
396,88,59071,2,0,L|396:256,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,304,60256,2,0,P|264:328|172:296,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,260,61440,5,6,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62032,2,0,L|198:154,1,40,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,63019,2,0,L|309:260,3,53.3333333333333,6|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,300,64203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,64598,6,0,P|104:312|72:296,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,220,65387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,140,65782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,104,66177,2,0,P|204:64|296:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,67361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,164,67756,6,0,P|380:209|362:250,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,280,68545,2,0,P|256:292|212:280,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,344,69334,2,0,P|142:305|140:260,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,116,70519,6,0,P|180:72|284:88,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,124,71703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,188,72098,2,0,P|220:232|116:216,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,160,74071,6,0,P|364:112|352:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,74861,2,0,P|251:64|212:41,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,76,75650,2,0,P|84:92|20:68,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,77229,6,0,P|184:203|213:240,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,208,78019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,140,78413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,96,78808,2,0,P|200:72|88:96,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,164,79992,6,0,L|76:256,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,288,80782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,324,81177,2,0,P|284:340|384:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,324,82361,2,0,P|456:284|448:240,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,124,83545,6,0,P|272:100|184:144,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,184,84729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,240,85124,2,0,P|276:264|364:220,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,168,86308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,156,86703,6,0,P|264:152|216:176,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,87492,2,0,P|156:244|108:220,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,300,88282,2,0,P|44:212|124:152,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T05:48:32+00:00

Updated :3

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2013-05-09T06:29:37+00:00

OK ~ Looks much better ~

GJ ~~~~~ BU ~ Here you go <3

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T06:31:02+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631
OK ~ Looks much better ~

GJ ~~~~~ BU ~ Here you go <3

thanks alot <3

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

ed December 2011

2013-05-09T06:33:30+00:00

So I have eight ranked guest diffs now...

...and still no ranked mapset.

ok

Thanks Rika, and congrats to everyone involved in this mapset \:D/

*Yep, Xinely wants to say that too, she's just too lazy to post lol

Mythiax

637 posts

ed August 2012

2013-05-09T08:19:07+00:00

Gratz for rank \:D/

Natsu pro

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T08:19:46+00:00

Zeroarg wrote: 324gy
Gratz for rank \:D/

Natsu pro

P A N

2,357 posts

ed December 2011

2013-05-09T08:26:54+00:00

gratz! ><

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T08:27:24+00:00

P A N wrote: 6l6w5i
gratz! ><

thanks :3

Oyatsu

1,908 posts

ed December 2012

2013-05-09T08:33:55+00:00

Congratz, Natsu-nee

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T08:35:04+00:00

Loki-san wrote: s291a
Congratz, Natsu-nee

thanks :3

Birdy

5,753 posts

ed April 2011

2013-05-09T09:04:32+00:00

Anime map with 6 dislikes? I've seen everything now.

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T09:09:44+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote: 604i6k
Anime map with 6 dislikes? I've seen everything now.

idk orz maybe i did somethink wrong orz

ReySHeL

612 posts

ed March 2012

2013-05-09T09:35:01+00:00

gratz Natsu ﾟ.+:｡(*´ｪ`*)ﾟ.+:｡

Natsu

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2013-05-09T09:35:47+00:00

ReySHeL wrote: 4g3xz
gratz Natsu ﾟ.+:｡(*´ｪ`*)ﾟ.+:｡

thanks :3

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,701 posts

ed June 2012

2013-05-09T13:20:23+00:00

gratz~!

Lolicakey

Lolicakey 2013-05-09T13:43:02+00:00

Congratz Natsu >w<
/late

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

ed February 2012

2013-05-09T15:10:06+00:00

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku
So I have eight ranked guest diffs now...

...and still no ranked mapset.

Never give up

Grats Natsu Xinely and Hinsvar and me, hue

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-09T16:50:41+00:00

Lolicakes wrote: 4t401b
Congratz Natsu >w<
/late

thanks :3

DakeDekaane wrote: l53k
Grats Natsu Xinely and Hinsvar and me, hue

Yes we need to dance now o3o

Satellite wrote: 1u6e6m
gratz~!

thanks

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Makyu

424 posts

ed April 2012

2013-05-09T17:35:34+00:00

it seems like you rank the song
/me slaps Natsu

Natsu

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2013-05-09T17:53:44+00:00

Makyu wrote: 106v6y
it seems like you rank the song
/me slaps Natsu

/me slap back x10000000000000

scanter

2,390 posts

ed July 2012

2013-05-09T23:48:25+00:00

baka ! gratz \o/

Natsu

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2013-05-09T23:54:08+00:00

scanter wrote: 505g2y
baka ! gratz \o/

thanks o3o /me slaps you

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2013-05-10T03:18:17+00:00

What's up with this mp3? The start has this blip. Quality seems low too...

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-10T03:22:27+00:00

Garven wrote: 2k1v16
What's up with this mp3? The start has this blip. Quality seems low too...

orz :l

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

ed August 2008

2013-05-10T03:30:09+00:00

I have to agree with Garven here, quality is really bad imo.

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-10T03:35:09+00:00

Andrea wrote: 1r6d5e
I have to agree with Garven here, quality is really bad imo.

orz what should i do? :c

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

ed October 2011

2013-05-10T06:02:10+00:00

Natsu congrats ¡!

Natsu

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2013-05-10T06:04:52+00:00

-Neipezi wrote: 435q34
Natsu congrats ¡!

thanks :3

Gero

4,456 posts

ed March 2012

2013-05-10T11:48:11+00:00

OMG OMG Gorda Gongrats - desu o3o /me slaps late natsu *Run*

Natsu

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2013-05-10T21:14:05+00:00

Gero wrote: 4lj37
OMG OMG Gorda Gongrats - desu o3o /me slaps late natsu *Run*

Thanks gorda malcriada

Saten

Global

3,870 posts

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2013-05-12T23:33:09+00:00

I checked the Blu-ray's version, but I can't say that the audio was any better there.

The full version have a much better audio quality ~~, but it's also 1 bpm slower~~

Nothing can really be done, just leave it as it is \:>/

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-13T01:10:48+00:00

Saten wrote: 5e2b6d
I checked the Blu-ray's version, but I can't say that the audio was any better there.

The full version have a much better audio quality ~~, but it's also 1 bpm slower~~

Nothing can really be done, just leave it as it is \:>/

Also ths mp3 sound like the one in the anime orz just the start sound is bad imo but if is necesary i can look for other xd

Xytox

osu! Alumni

367 posts

ed December 2012

2013-05-13T02:54:29+00:00

I heavily doubt there's any better versions of this TV Size out there. The anime opening sounds as horrible as this mp3. There's no way to get around it since the original raw file is the source of the problem. The full version sounds a lot better, but it's way too different to just cut out a small bit of it and call it "TV Size". And as Saten said, for some reason, the full version is one bpm slower, so it's literally impossible, huehue.

Also, grats on rank, I guess! \:>/

Natsu

8,088 posts

ed September 2012

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2013-05-13T03:31:13+00:00

Xytox wrote: 5p161k
I heavily doubt there's any better versions of this TV Size out there. The anime opening sounds as horrible as this mp3. There's no way to get around it since the original raw file is the source of the problem. The full version sounds a lot better, but it's way too different to just cut out a small bit of it and call it "TV Size". And as Saten said, for some reason, the full version is one bpm slower, so it's literally impossible, huehue.

Also, grats on rank, I guess! \:>/

ahhaah i feel bad since i did somethink wrong orz :l

Xytox

osu! Alumni

367 posts

ed December 2012

2013-05-13T04:41:36+00:00

Natsu wrote: 2m1k45
ahhaah i feel bad since i did somethink wrong orz :l

Nooo, this isn't your fault, it's the makers of the mp3's. Presumably, they recorded everything from scratch when making the TV Size or something like that, and that's why it ended up at a slightly higher bpm and worse quality. Although, the "worse quality" is mostly just a lowered bass, which I guess is something that might have been necessary to make the song fit the anime opening better without it sounding like an overkill or something.

This is just me guessing away though, and it doesn't really matter if it's true or not. What matters and seems to be accurate, is that the original TV Size mp3 of this song is of surprisingly bad quality and there's nothing to do about it. The mp3 that you're using now seems to be the best there is for this particular version of the song.

Natsu

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ed September 2012

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2013-05-13T05:18:35+00:00

Xytox wrote: 5p161k

Natsu wrote: 2m1k45
ahhaah i feel bad since i did somethink wrong orz :l
Nooo, this isn't your fault, it's the makers of the mp3's. Presumably, they recorded everything from scratch when making the TV Size or something like that, and that's why it ended up at a slightly higher bpm and worse quality. Although, the "worse quality" is mostly just a lowered bass, which I guess is something that might have been necessary to make the song fit the anime opening better without it sounding like an overkill or something.

This is just me guessing away though, and it doesn't really matter if it's true or not. What matters and seems to be accurate, is that the original TV Size mp3 of this song is of surprisingly bad quality and there's nothing to do about it. The mp3 that you're using now seems to be the best there is for this particular version of the song.

I know i gonna try to check the mp3 files in my futures maps im really sorry for this

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Sign In To Proceed 435v5c

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