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Nanahira - Shikinkyori * Lover [Osu|Taiko] 1c2v4d

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Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年3月19日 at 20:18:22

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Shikinkyori * Lover
Tags: ReySHeL cRyo[iceeicee]
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5264kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. cRyo's Hard (4.93 stars, 419 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 642 notes)
  3. Normal (3.15 stars, 197 notes)
  4. ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii (4.83 stars, 789 notes)
  5. ReySHeL's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1042 notes)
: Nanahira - Shikinkyori * Lover
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Snowy Dream's 21th beatmap.
Nanahira!
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[Normal] by Snowy Dream
[cRyo's Hard] by cRyo[iceeicee]
[Insane] by Snowy Dream
[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii] by ReySHeL
[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni] by ReySHeL
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 31 times in total.
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012
hi~
may i make a Taiko diff?
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
Sure :3
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012
i make from now :3
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012
finished~ :D
http://puu.sh/1SRj1
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
So fast !
Good Job <3
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012
General
雪梦酱大好人~
我都没发现有2kd~

Insane
打开图看到HDR8 愣了一下 不过看完全图之后感觉大概也还好
00:10:884 (4) - 建议CTRL+H再CTRL+J再CTRL+G再摆到(28,132)
00:14:718 (3) - 转5° 摆到(472,168) 和后面的衔接好看些？
很多类似00:17:051 (3,4,5) - 的原地二分拍排版是为了考验player能否分清它们和原地三连打么？ 感觉有点……乏味 或者怎样讲
00:31:551 (4) - 横坐标挪到282吧
00:52:322 (1,2) - 这种重拍倾向或者原地或者放跳 比如说把1放在现在的2的位置 然后把2放在后面的串子的起点叠着 （正好你后面的地方02:05:441 (5,6) - 用的是原地）
00:55:822 (4) - 不CTRL+G的话break flow的感觉？再提供一种方案 http://puu.sh/23Yc0 如果改成这样的话 滑条3从下往上还是从上往下我感觉还都可以
01:03:489 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉在AR8不太好读 或许把4和5CTRL+G 完全个人意见
01:21:822 (8) - CTRL+G 很有意思？
01:38:822 (1) - 不确定是否算出界 虽然锚点横坐标是0 还是往右下对于微调一下比较好 也不麻烦
01:49:833 (4,5,6) - 不太倾向于在这段大间距
02:31:108 (2) - 不CTRL+G ？当然也不是不可以 嘛 或者你把1 CTRL+G也可以
02:45:275 (4,5,6) - 可以设计成HD梗 （略微调整5的位置然后6顺着摆到4的尾巴的位置）不过好像不善良就不是雪梦酱了？
02:47:941 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个地方你没有4下一个finish 或许就不用NC了 像这串儿一样 02:25:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -

Normal
基础参数惨不忍睹 除了CS以外都减1吧 （CS都可以减1）
00:03:217 (4) - 降星所迫么？ 如果是的话还是建议改成这样吧 http://puu.sh/23YAx ，雪梦酱pro mapper 不会被这种东西卡死的 这种不算短又折返N次的出现在N 感觉不太好 我第一次打我都松手松早了
00:05:884 (4) - 唔 原来后面还有一个……啊……完了 后面还有一个 怎么好像我立场变得不坚定了 不行 还是都统一改一下吧 O^Q
00:25:717 (4) - NC吧 N diff不倾向于长combo
00:45:706 (1) - 感觉颇受争议
01:58:800 (1) - ^
03:10:483 (1) - ^
01:02:822 (1) - 尾巴上没有finish 故意没加的么
01:35:489 (2) - finish呢
01:40:155 (3) - 建议让纵坐标略微大一点点 避免碰血槽被吐槽
02:40:941 (3,1) - 目测没太包好 连它一起吧 02:42:608 (2) -

太鼓无能Q^Q

等cRyo酱的diff好了再来看~
Last edited by Zero__wind , edited 4 times in total.
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter

Zero__wind wrote: 5923d

only滚进来提醒雪梦酱你需要重新full submit
因为这里没有出现 cRyo's Hard

Oh 还有， 虽然我不太懂 不过群里问下吧
现在太鼓只有一个oni好像无法rank？
cRyo努力map中> <
太鼓的话首页看到一个I就rank的 感觉没压力
Kayano
1,289 posts
ed July 2011
M4M~

[General]
太鼓在现在的规则下应该至少要有一个Muzukashii以下难度才能ranked的吧...

[Normal]
00:03:217 (4) - 拆成两个带一次回转的滑条
00:05:884 (4) - ^
00:08:551 (4) - ^
00:40:237 (1) - delete NC
00:42:885 (1) - NC提前到00:42:356 (3) -
00:50:322 (4) - 这个地方虽然蛮和节奏的 但就是感觉不舒服T T 只是提一提因为我没有找到更好的放法...改成和02:03:441 (3) - 一样？
01:53:363 (1) - delete NC
02:47:941 (1) - NC提前到02:46:608 (3) -
02:59:108 (1) - delete NC

[Insane]
00:08:217 (6) - NC
00:15:051 (4) - ^
00:16:218 (4) - ^
00:50:156 - 加个note会比较好？如果加了00:50:822 (5) - NC
01:35:489 (4) - NC
01:36:072 (8,9) - 这两个note往上面弯一点 这样更美观而且能更好的打到下一个slider
SPOILER 
392,192,96072,1,0,2:0:0
392,152,96155,1,4,2:0:0
01:37:489 (1) - delete NC
01:38:822 (5) - NC
01:39:989 (1) - delete NC？
02:09:274 (6) - NC
02:21:108 (6) - 移到x:294 y:232 这样可以完美压在02:19:941 (3) - 滑条收尾
02:53:441 (4) - NC？

祝早日ranked o(∩_∩)o
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
ed July 2011
hi, for M4M :3


General

  1. bg太花 ;w;
Normal

  1. diff settings都太高
  2. 00:43:415 (2) - 第三个点往右两格ww
  3. 00:45:655 - 你做了什么0,0
  4. 00:49:822 (3) - 最好别, 容易read 1/1
  5. 00:52:322 (3) - can remove
  6. 02:05:441 (3) - ^
  7. 02:50:608 (2) - 往里弯点ww
  8. 03:10:441 - 这是啥0.0
  9. 开源哥说1/16是给mania用的, 普通的1/8就好了0.0
cRyo's Hard

Insane

  1. 00:36:001 (2) - 这个和前后放成120度三角吧:3
  2. 00:50:156 - 加个note 放在绿(1)上面
  3. 00:52:489 (2) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/616562
  4. 00:52:822 (1,2,3,4) - 选normal音效啊.. soft太不带感
  5. 02:05:941 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:21:322 (7) - 放歪了点, 往左偏下o.o
  7. 01:46:192 (2,3) - 怎么不nc 其他都有
  8. 02:08:608 (1) - 删掉空一拍o.o? 节奏打着要舒服点
  9. 02:59:275 (1) - move to 02:59:441 (haha
  10. 03:06:941 (4,5) - 用弯的多好
喵
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
Blackshane
M4M~

[General]
太鼓在现在的规则下应该至少要有一个Muzukashii以下难度才能ranked的吧... 看首页发现有单独I rank的..

[Normal]
00:03:217 (4) - 拆成两个带一次回转的滑条 感觉没什么必要 就这样连着吧
00:05:884 (4) - ^ ^
00:08:551 (4) - ^ ^
00:40:237 (1) - delete NC k
00:42:885 (1) - NC提前到00:42:356 (3) - k
00:50:322 (4) - 这个地方虽然蛮和节奏的 但就是感觉不舒服T T 只是提一提因为我没有找到更好的放法...改成和02:03:441 (3) - 一样？ k
01:53:363 (1) - delete NC k
02:47:941 (1) - NC提前到02:46:608 (3) - k
02:59:108 (1) - delete NC k

[Insane]
00:08:217 (6) - NC k
00:15:051 (4) - ^ k
00:16:218 (4) - ^ k
00:50:156 - 加个note会比较好？如果加了00:50:822 (5) - NC 这地方放note感觉不适合 背景音乐太空
01:35:489 (4) - NC k
01:36:072 (8,9) - 这两个note往上面弯一点 这样更美观而且能更好的打到下一个slider 感觉没围着slider不美观.-. 我这样flow感觉更流畅
SPOILER 
392,192,96072,1,0,2:0:0
392,152,96155,1,4,2:0:0
01:37:489 (1) - delete NC k
01:38:822 (5) - NC k
01:39:989 (1) - delete NC？ k
02:09:274 (6) - NC k
02:21:108 (6) - 移到x:294 y:232 这样可以完美压在02:19:941 (3) - 滑条收尾 k
02:53:441 (4) - NC？ k

Ar3
hi, for M4M :3


General

  1. bg太花 ;w;
.-.

Normal

  1. diff settings都太高 感觉还好吧.-.
  2. 00:43:415 (2) - 第三个点往右两格ww k
  3. 00:45:655 - 你做了什么0,0 k
  4. 00:49:822 (3) - 最好别, 容易read 1/1 k
  5. 00:52:322 (3) - can remove nope
  6. 02:05:441 (3) - ^ ^
  7. 02:50:608 (2) - 往里弯点ww k
  8. 03:10:441 - 这是啥0.0 k
  9. 开源哥说1/16是给mania用的, 普通的1/8就好了0.0
cRyo's Hard

Insane

  1. 00:36:001 (2) - 这个和前后放成120度三角吧:3 120°三角是没问题 不过感觉flow变得不流畅了
  2. 00:50:156 - 加个note 放在绿(1)上面 nope
  3. 00:52:489 (2) - http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/616562 k
  4. 00:52:822 (1,2,3,4) - 选normal音效啊.. soft太不带感 柑橘略吵
  5. 02:05:941 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  6. 01:21:322 (7) - 放歪了点, 往左偏下o.o k
  7. 01:46:192 (2,3) - 怎么不nc 其他都有 k
  8. 02:08:608 (1) - 删掉空一拍o.o? 节奏打着要舒服点 空了感觉不舒服...
  9. 02:59:275 (1) - move to 02:59:441 (haha 哦泥酱~
  10. 03:06:941 (4,5) - 用弯的多好 弯的梗前面用过了
Sonnyc
7,774 posts
ed June 2008
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:217 (4) - Adding a clap at the first reverse will be nice.
  2. 00:05:884 (4) - ^
  3. 00:08:551 (4) - ^
  4. 00:21:551 (4) - Why no clap at the end?
  5. 00:22:717 (2) - ^
  6. 00:23:051 (3) - Stack isn't a good idea imo.
  7. 01:25:489 (1) - Make this a Soft Finish?
  8. 01:51:245 (1,2,3,4) - Make the hit sound consistent with 00:38:119 (1,2,3,4)
  9. 01:58:800 (1) - Start at 01:58:825
  10. 02:06:608 (2) - Add Soft Finish at the start
  11. 02:17:274 (1) - ^
  12. 02:08:941 (4) - 1 Grid up
  13. 02:49:274 (1) - Finish at the start, Add clap at the end
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:217 (2) - 1 Grid up
  2. 00:09:051 (3) - Make this a reverse slider like 00:03:717 (3), 00:06:384 (3)?
  3. 00:32:712 (1,1,1) - Imo, it will be too hard to click BPM changes.. Altering to a slider will be better
  4. 00:37:943 (1,2) - Jumping at (2) will be better. So place (1) at (364,220)?
  5. 01:21:822 (8) - Ctrl+G will be a better flow.
  6. 01:23:989 (6) - Add Finish at the start
  7. 01:27:989 (2) - Make this a consistent distance?
  8. 01:29:489 (5) - ? Finish sounds loud.
  9. 02:05:441 (5) - NC as 00:52:322 (1)
  10. 02:06:608 (1) - Add Finish at the start
  11. 02:08:441 (6,1) - Jump doesn't look nice in this spot..
  12. 02:16:941 (5) - NC as 02:48:941 (1)
  13. 02:19:775 (2) - 1 Grid down
  14. 02:59:274 (1) - NC at a stack doesn't look nice.
  15. 03:10:275 (8) - Delete this note please. I don't think there is a beat in the song. Also, this can emphasize (7) more.
  16. 03:11:775 (8) - Making the hit sound the same with 03:11:608 (7) will be the best.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Perfect!!
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote: 56555

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:217 (4) - Adding a clap at the first reverse will be nice. I guess mine is better :3
  2. 00:05:884 (4) - ^ ^
  3. 00:08:551 (4) - ^ ^
  4. 00:21:551 (4) - Why no clap at the end?k
  5. 00:22:717 (2) - ^ nope
  6. 00:23:051 (3) - Stack isn't a good idea imo. It does not do difficult to beginners in my view.
  7. 01:25:489 (1) - Make this a Soft Finish? k
  8. 01:51:245 (1,2,3,4) - Make the hit sound consistent with 00:38:119 ( 1,2,3,4) k
  9. 01:58:800 (1) - Start at 01:58:825 k
  10. 02:06:608 (2) - Add Soft Finish at the start k
  11. 02:17:274 (1) - ^ k
  12. 02:08:941 (4) - 1 Grid up k
  13. 02:49:274 (1) - Finish at the start, Add clap at the end
    [Insane]
    1. 00:07:217 (2) - 1 Grid up k
    2. 00:09:051 (3) - Make this a reverse slider like 00:03:717 (3), 00:06:384 (3)? nope
    3. 00:32:712 (1,1,1) - Imo, it will be too hard to click BPM changes.. Altering to a slider will be better Insane diff > <
    4. 00:37:943 (1,2) - Jumping at (2) will be better. So place (1) at (364,220)? nope
    5. 01:21:822 (8) - Ctrl+G will be a better flow. k
    6. 01:23:989 (6) - Add Finish at the start k
    7. 01:27:989 (2) - Make this a consistent distance? k
    8. 01:29:489 (5) - ? Finish sounds loud. It's no problem :<
    9. 02:05:441 (5) - NC as 00:52:322 (1) k
    10. 02:06:608 (1) - Add Finish at the start k
    11. 02:08:441 (6,1) - Jump doesn't look nice in this spot.. k
    12. 02:16:941 (5) - NC as 02:48:941 (1) k
    13. 02:19:775 (2) - 1 Grid down k
    14. 02:59:274 (1) - NC at a stack doesn't look nice. k
    15. 03:10:275 (8) - Delete this note please. I don't think there is a beat in the song. Also, this can emphasize (7) more. But it really sounds good to me :<
    16. 03:11:775 (8) - Making the hit sound the same with 03:11:608 (7) will be the best. k

Zero__wind

Zero__wind wrote: 5923d

General
雪梦酱大好人~
我都没发现有2kd~

Insane
打开图看到HDR8 愣了一下 不过看完全图之后感觉大概也还好
00:10:884 (4) - 建议CTRL+H再CTRL+J再CTRL+G再摆到(28,132) 感觉没必要...这样就行了
00:14:718 (3) - 转5° 摆到(472,168) 和后面的衔接好看些？ k
很多类似00:17:051 (3,4,5) - 的原地二分拍排版是为了考验player能否分清它们和原地三连打么？ 感觉有点……乏味 或者怎样讲 嗯？.. 感觉想副歌稍微减点难度吧..至少这里
00:31:551 (4) - 横坐标挪到282吧 换了个摆法
00:52:322 (1,2) - 这种重拍倾向或者原地或者放跳 比如说把1放在现在的2的位置 然后把2放在后面的串子的起点叠着 （正好你后面的地方02:05:441 (5,6) - 用的是原地） k
00:55:822 (4) - 不CTRL+G的话break flow的感觉？再提供一种方案 http://puu.sh/23Yc0 如果改成这样的话 滑条3从下往上还是从上往下我感觉还都可以 换了种摆法...
01:03:489 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉在AR8不太好读 或许把4和5CTRL+G 完全个人意见 完全换了种..
01:21:822 (8) - CTRL+G 很有意思？ k
01:38:822 (1) - 不确定是否算出界 虽然锚点横坐标是0 还是往右下对于微调一下比较好 也不麻烦 嘛..出界肯定不算..微调的话不用了感觉 正好1.00x的spacing
01:49:833 (4,5,6) - 不太倾向于在这段大间距 k
02:31:108 (2) - 不CTRL+G ？当然也不是不可以 嘛 或者你把1 CTRL+G也可以 k
02:45:275 (4,5,6) - 可以设计成HD梗 （略微调整5的位置然后6顺着摆到4的尾巴的位置）不过好像不善良就不是雪梦酱了？ 不打算调了..
02:47:941 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个地方你没有4下一个finish 或许就不用NC了 像这串儿一样 02:25:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 忘加finish..

Normal
基础参数惨不忍睹 除了CS以外都减1吧 （CS都可以减1） k
00:03:217 (4) - 降星所迫么？ 如果是的话还是建议改成这样吧 http://puu.sh/23YAx ，雪梦酱pro mapper 不会被这种东西卡死的 这种不算短又折返N次的出现在N 感觉不太好 我第一次打我都松手松早了 TAT 不想改
00:05:884 (4) - 唔 原来后面还有一个……啊……完了 后面还有一个 怎么好像我立场变得不坚定了 不行 还是都统一改一下吧 O^Q
00:25:717 (4) - NC吧 N diff不倾向于长combo k
00:45:706 (1) - 感觉颇受争议 k
01:58:800 (1) - ^ k
03:10:483 (1) - ^ k
01:02:822 (1) - 尾巴上没有finish 故意没加的么 k
01:35:489 (2) - finish呢 感觉这里不需要啊...
01:40:155 (3) - 建议让纵坐标略微大一点点 避免碰血槽被吐槽 k
02:40:941 (3,1) - 目测没太包好 连它一起吧 02:42:608 (2) - 不懂Q.Q

Thanks guys > <!
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
ed May 2011
http://puu.sh/25uIL
ww
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote: 1i33e

http://puu.sh/25uIL
ww
Finnaly come
继续mod
00:21:384 (5,1) - 这里的节奏没跟对vocal的感觉 改成这样 ？
00:40:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 散点间距感觉有点大 1.35x如何
00:45:859 (1) - 我倾向于换soft finish， 不过你后面用了一系列的normal whistle 可能不想改？
01:58:978 (1) - ^
01:02:489 (3) - 或许可以稍微弯一点点来配合01:01:489 (1) -
01:10:489 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/25v8y
01:34:489 - 这里的节奏 和21秒那个同样的建议 http://puu.sh/25vg3
01:44:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉在整个难度中有点难 个人建议间距保持1.2
02:09:774 (3,4) - (3)的形状或许可以换一下 让它后半部分做成和(4)一样的弧度？
02:55:941 (4,1) - 包好？

哦了 cRyo酱的图还是一如既往很喜欢呐 owo

Snowy Dream wrote: k6k41

02:40:941 (3,1) - 目测没太包好 连它一起吧 02:42:608 (2) - 不懂Q.Q
我的意思是 02:40:941 (3,1) - 这个blacnket或许可以再包好一点…… 如果移动了(3)的话 也记得一起移一下(2)

No kd for this post plz
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
Thanks > <!! cRyo酱
谢谢零风来跟踪mod啦w
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
ed May 2011
Zero__wind

Zero__wind wrote: 5923d

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote: 1i33e

http://puu.sh/25uIL
ww

Finnaly come
继续mod
00:21:384 (5,1) - 这里的节奏没跟对vocal的感觉 改成这样 ？ i dont want to ignore downbeat because bgm is too loud here ._.
00:40:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 散点间距感觉有点大 1.35x如何 i used 1.4 and 1.7, i think 1.4 and 1.7 fits better
00:45:859 (1) - 我倾向于换soft finish， 不过你后面用了一系列的normal whistle 可能不想改？whistle better for me w
01:58:978 (1) - ^
01:02:489 (3) - 或许可以稍微弯一点点来配合01:01:489 (1) - i think straight is better
01:10:489 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/25v8y changed a bit
01:34:489 - 这里的节奏 和21秒那个同样的建议 http://puu.sh/25vg3 same as before
01:44:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉在整个难度中有点难 个人建议间距保持1.2 but they already have 1.2 ds o:
02:09:774 (3,4) - (3)的形状或许可以换一下 让它后半部分做成和(4)一样的弧度？ i think current shape is fine
02:55:941 (4,1) - 包好？moved a bit

哦了 cRyo酱的图还是一如既往很喜欢呐 owo 谢谢 owo
Thx!
http://puu.sh/2645K
[ La Fatalite ]
3 posts
ed January 2012
Normal
感觉好简单的normal

00:13:051 (1) - 这里提前半拍感觉比较符合节奏 后面空出的一拍可以加个note。
00:45:706 (1) - 转盘往前移动到前一个白线上。
00:48:156 (1) - ^如果改了上面一步 后面可以加一个短的折返加一个note。这样感觉正好和节奏对应起来 感觉没有原来那么空
01:02:822 (1) - 改成四个note怎样 点击感觉更符合finish的音效 很爽XDD
01:58:825 (1) - ^同00:45:706 (1)
02:01:275 (1) - ^同00:48:156 (1) 这里节奏这么明显感觉用滑条一带而过有点微妙。。
02:10:608 (2) - 这个之后不考虑加note 或者silder吗

cRyo's Hard
音效很棒! :)

00:21:384 (5) - 这里滑条改成note，感觉怎么打怎么别扭Orz
00:53:156 (1) - 加速很莫名
01:34:489 (4) - 同00:21:384 (5)
02:06:275 (1) - 同00:53:156 (1)
02:47:941 (1,2,3,4) - 可以拉开点距离，silder跳没那么容易断 不会增加难度。




Insane

00:01:718 (1,2,3) - 这里有点简单 嗯……不如跳一跳更健康XDD
00:11:884 (9) - 这里好不善良
02:18:608 (1) - 这silder略长，改成折返？也好看一些。
02:35:608 (6) - 改成三连
02:37:441 (2) - 这里跟上面不要叠在一起
02:53:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里的排列好坑
02:59:108 (1,2) - 这里还以为跟上面一样的节奏 被坑了。

整体音效好弱，感觉hard音效很棒，打起来很带感。连打部分音效更弱。有些梗好不善良orz，
No_Gu
2,954 posts
ed January 2011
From my queue
说好的再来一发hhh:http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/64779

[General/All diffs]
我觉得这歌完全可以找个custom clap啊。。

[Normal]
一般的话最低难度我好像没见过这么小圈的啊。。
00:03:217 (4) - 中间应该还能加个clap。另外你确定这个能过?..
01:30:655 (1,2,3) - 这段开始怎么多这么多长slider。。前面我看好像才一个
02:21:941 (3) - spacing?.

[cRyo]
00:11:551 (5,6) - I think a jump here is better than stack
00:21:384 (5) - 3/4 here is a little strange imo..
01:02:822 (1,2,3,4) - add soft-finish to 2.if you follow the bell sound..I think this pattern is better http://puu.sh/27taK and if you think it's too easy,at least this pattern? http://puu.sh/27tc6 ,,at least I don't think yours sounds good
01:05:156 (3,4) - use scale 2x for a better shape?
nice cRyooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

[Insane]
00:02:884 (1) - 我觉得这里没必要stack上。。跳出去反而跟前面照应还合曲。
00:05:551 (1) - ^
00:22:384 (1,2,3,4) - 加几个whistle
00:22:717 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个note换成normal
00:28:217 (2) - spacing
00:32:712 (1,1,1,1) - 这边。。真心我觉得应该弄出来点差距，毕竟时值是不一样的你这么放...
00:33:883 - 这段开始好歹加点whistle吧。。太空了
00:38:825 (3,4) - 感觉不太自然。。
00:39:708 (6) - 删掉对我来说好点。。
00:50:822 (5,6,7,8) - slider的尾巴都换成soft听起来更好
01:14:322 (2,3,4) - 这张图本来跳就挺大的你这边还放这么近。。
01:35:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 音效建议和前面一样。。然后这形状。。
02:18:608 (1) - 我觉得I里面真没必要放这么长的吧。。
02:22:275 (5) - ctrl+g?
02:43:941 (5) - 用前面的1对称过来
02:47:941 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉相当不规整。。
03:11:608 (7,8) - 这边放个大跳合曲。。虽然最后可能有点坑爹。。
Lundlerol
651 posts
ed May 2011
Hi snowy~!!!!!!
your mod req~!

LUNDLE's MOD
[Caution]
The unrankable element is contained in this map.

I am sorry.
A rule may be ambiguous, therefore whichever may be sufficient as this.
However, please be a little audible.

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
00:12:717 (1) - 　~　00:32:217 (1) -
01:36:489 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -
これらと1番と3番のサビのノーツの量を比較しても前者の方がほぼ同じに思えます。
特に１番です。
なので前者の方のノーツを減らし、サビのノーツを増やす、5連等を追加してサビの盛り上がりを重点的に考えるmodにしていきます。
2番には5連などがあり前半のパートより差を感じたので2番のノーツの量はスルーの方針で。(但し音は見ます。)

それでは始めましょう。
Let's mod~
00:12:384 (3) - ここにfinishが必要なのは明らかです。
問題はここからですね。
00:13:467 - delete
00:13:551 - ^
00:14:301 - ^
00:14:884 - ^
00:16:301 - ^
00:20:301 - ^
00:20:384 - ^
00:20:551 (2) - add d
00:21:551 (1,2) - delete
00:21:717 (1) - F
00:24:217 (2,3) - delete
00:27:217 - ^
00:28:551 - ^
00:28:884 - ^
00:31:217 - ^

00:33:883 (1) -
00:44:481 (1) -
00:44:860 -
00:45:245 -
01:47:009 (1) -
01:57:600 -
01:57:979 -
01:58:364 -
これらのSoft sample setはtaiko rule guideline上のルールに反してる(unrankable)のでNormal Samlpe set を使いましょう。
Custom Hitsound Volume
Keep volume at a constant level (e.g. 80%) with the beat still somewhat audible.
Use the "Normal" audio sample set.音量は聞こえる範囲で一定をキープしてください。
Normalのサンプルセットを使ってください。
申し訳ない。
これ、ルールが曖昧故にどっちでも良いそうです。
ですが「聞こえる範囲で使うこと」だそうです。
なのでこの部分かなり聞こえにくいのでNormal Sample Setを使用して音量調整してみては？


00:53:989 (1,2,1,2,1) - ddkkdとでも置いてみませんか？
00:55:322 - 音が無いのでdelete
00:55:489 (1) - 　k
00:55:572 - 　delete ここの３連を消す理由としては区切りを強調させたいと思ったので削除で。
00:58:655 - 　delete 音が無いですね。
00:58:822 (1) - 　ここはFinish以外ないですね。
00:59:072 - 　delete
00:59:322 (1) - ここを始点にddkkdはどうです？
01:00:655 - 　音がないのでdelete
01:00:905 - 区切りを強調したいのでdelete
01:01:156 (1) - 　ここを始点にkkkkdの方が合ってる気がします。
01:01:989 (1,2,3) - kkdはどうです？
01:02:989 - 　音がないのでdelete
01:03:989 - ^
01:04:656 (1) - 　ここを始点に以前と同じ音取りをし、統一を設けるためにまたddkkdで
01:05:989 - 　音がないのでdelete
01:06:156 (2) - 　k
01:06:239 (3) - 　delete
01:06:489 (1,2,1) - kkd
01:06:989 - 　add d
01:12:655 (1) - ^
01:25:489 (3) - finish

01:29:489 (2) - 申し訳ない。ここはキツく言わせてほしいです。　謎。　remove finish
01:30:822 (1) - ^
01:32:072 - add k
01:32:155 (1) - remove finish
01:40:905 - delete
02:41:775 (1) - 　ここを始点にddkkd
02:50:691 - 　add d
02:58:608 (1) - finish

以上です。
01:36:489 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -
ここら辺のmodはやっている内にだれて来たので前半の方を参考にノーツを削っていってください。
手抜きでホント申し訳ない。
全体的に「音」のない部分にノーツを置いている気がしました。
これを機会に全体的に改めて見てみるのも良いと思います。
では。
See you~
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012

Lundlerol wrote: 6b442m

Hi snowy~!!!!!!
your mod req~!

LUNDLE's MOD
[Caution]
The unrankable element is contained in this map.

I am sorry.
A rule may be ambiguous, therefore whichever may be sufficient as this.
However, please be a little audible.

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
00:12:717 (1) - 　~　00:32:217 (1) -
01:36:489 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -
これらと1番と3番のサビのノーツの量を比較しても前者の方がほぼ同じに思えます。
特に１番です。
なので前者の方のノーツを減らし、サビのノーツを増やす、5連等を追加してサビの盛り上がりを重点的に考えるmodにしていきます。
2番には5連などがあり前半のパートより差を感じたので2番のノーツの量はスルーの方針で。(但し音は見ます。)

それでは始めましょう。
Let's mod~
00:12:384 (3) - ここにfinishが必要なのは明らかです。
問題はここからですね。
00:13:467 - delete
00:13:551 - ^
00:14:301 - ^
00:14:884 - ^
00:16:301 - ^
00:20:301 - ^
00:20:384 - ^
00:20:551 (2) - add d
00:21:551 (1,2) - delete
00:21:717 (1) - F
00:24:217 (2,3) - delete
00:27:217 - ^
00:28:551 - ^
00:28:884 - ^
00:31:217 - ^

00:33:883 (1) -
00:44:481 (1) -
00:44:860 -
00:45:245 -
01:47:009 (1) -
01:57:600 -
01:57:979 -
01:58:364 -
これらのSoft sample setはtaiko rule guideline上のルールに反してる(unrankable)のでNormal Samlpe set を使いましょう。
Custom Hitsound Volume
Keep volume at a constant level (e.g. 80%) with the beat still somewhat audible.
Use the "Normal" audio sample set.音量は聞こえる範囲で一定をキープしてください。
Normalのサンプルセットを使ってください。
申し訳ない。
これ、ルールが曖昧故にどっちでも良いそうです。
ですが「聞こえる範囲で使うこと」だそうです。
なのでこの部分かなり聞こえにくいのでNormal Sample Setを使用して音量調整してみては？


00:53:989 (1,2,1,2,1) - ddkkdとでも置いてみませんか？
00:55:322 - 音が無いのでdelete
00:55:489 (1) - 　k
00:55:572 - 　delete ここの３連を消す理由としては区切りを強調させたいと思ったので削除で。
00:58:655 - 　delete 音が無いですね。
00:58:822 (1) - 　ここはFinish以外ないですね。
00:59:072 - 　delete
00:59:322 (1) - ここを始点にddkkdはどうです？
01:00:655 - 　音がないのでdelete
01:00:905 - 区切りを強調したいのでdelete
01:01:156 (1) - 　ここを始点にkkkkdの方が合ってる気がします。
01:01:989 (1,2,3) - kkdはどうです？
01:02:989 - 　音がないのでdelete
01:03:989 - ^
01:04:656 (1) - 　ここを始点に以前と同じ音取りをし、統一を設けるためにまたddkkdで
01:05:989 - 　音がないのでdelete
01:06:156 (2) - 　k
01:06:239 (3) - 　delete
01:06:489 (1,2,1) - kkd
01:06:989 - 　add d
01:12:655 (1) - ^
01:25:489 (3) - finish

01:29:489 (2) - 申し訳ない。ここはキツく言わせてほしいです。　謎。　remove finish
01:30:822 (1) - ^
01:32:072 - add k
01:32:155 (1) - remove finish
01:40:905 - delete
02:41:775 (1) - 　ここを始点にddkkd
02:50:691 - 　add d
02:58:608 (1) - finish

以上です。
01:36:489 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -
ここら辺のmodはやっている内にだれて来たので前半の方を参考にノーツを削っていってください。
手抜きでホント申し訳ない。
全体的に「音」のない部分にノーツを置いている気がしました。
これを機会に全体的に改めて見てみるのも良いと思います。
では。
See you~
almost fixed
it was very useful~
thanks for mod :)

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2c0tO
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2c0u0
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
ed May 2011
http://puu.sh/2e3HS
I lost my reply w (will add later)
I asked Garven about that unsnapped slider in red section, he said i can use it if it make sense, and i think it does :3
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote: 1i33e

http://puu.sh/2e3HS
I lost my reply w (will add later)
I asked Garven about that unsnapped slider in red section, he said i can use it if it make sense, and i think it does :3
w! Nice Garven, and thanks for your reply cRyowwww
yuuki0310_old
31 posts
ed April 2011
Suddenly sorry Taiko Mod~
Following　Japanese~
(英語間違ってるかもです･･･翻訳サイトを使った継ぎ接ぎなもので・・・)


[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
SPOILER
00:33:883 - ~ 00:46:876 - 音が少々聞こえない気がします･･･個人差なのかもですが･･･

01:47:009 - ~ 01:59:995 - 同じく｡


00:21:384 (1) - Delete

00:21:551 - add k

00:27:217 - addk

00:28:551 - addd

00:28:884 - addk

00:29:051 (1) - Delete

00:33:458 (1,2,3) - 個人的に何で3つおいてあるかがちょこっとわからないですね･･･
00:33:564 (2,3) - を削除でいいと思います｡
01:46:584 (1,2,3) - これも同様｡
後々聞き直したら音があるというのはわかりましたが個人的にはちょっとやりづらい感じかありますかね・・・

以上ですかね｡
後個人的に思ったことといえば全体的にビックノーツが多いこと､とボーカルにあまりノーツを置いてないところ､でしょうか｡
私としては少々やりづらかった感はありますが､これはこれでありかな､と思いました｡

後Moｄ数少ないとか言わない!www

これでModを終わりにしますｰ､勝手なことばっかり言って申し訳ございませんでした｡これからも応援しています､それでは｡
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,735 posts
ed November 2009
hi

General
about the timing in slow part , it's a bit strange to me , however, I will ask some timing expert to check if it's fine or not
you better remove Normal-Slidertick.wav in your folder
some kind of part like
01:30:655 (1,2,3) -
the tick follows the guitar sound really nice here and there are others I didn't mention so consider it
your normal diff star rating is over 3.0 with large gap (3.4) , you must reduce this to around 2.9-3.1 , that will be better

Normal
02:46:608 (1) - better start this slider with normal sample set
03:10:483 (1) - this spinner ends weird imo , I would remove it and start a slider at 03:11:608 (1) - ending at 03:11:774

cRyo's Hard
00:07:717 (1) - this NC is unnecessary because you didn't add at 00:02:384 (2) - , 00:05:051 (2) - which are quite similar
00:44:481 (1) - ..unsnapped slider?
01:05:489 (4) - this curve of the slider can be improved. It's not bad at all but better be the similarity with 01:05:156 (3) - and it might look better whether a bit or much
example 01:26:489 (4,5) -
SPOILER

Insane
00:52:322 (1,2) - why soft hitsounds here ? , the like at 02:05:441 (1,2) - sounds really better with normal sample because soft hitsound doesn't impact strongly for this part
01:51:157 (7,1) - this is hard to read , if (1) was stacked by (7) , it will be much more readable , the distance of 7 and 1 is some kind of hard to read even technically,the spacing is quite correct , but it isn't in the play mode imo
02:13:441 (4,5,6,7) - move these 4 notes down 2 grids and right 2 grids , what you see in the play mode is (4) is overlapped with 02:12:941 (3) - and it doesn't look good much , to fix by this suggestion, it doesn't ruin your spacing and how it plays

EDIT : you should find more mods for Taiko too
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
ed November 2010
Was called to check timing. Your offset is early and some BPMs are wrong.
Use this timing:

1. Offset: 1.730ms BPM: 180,00
2. Offset: 33.063ms BPM: 150,00
3. Offset: 33.463ms BPM: 136,00
4. Offset: 33.904ms BPM: 170,00 3/4
5. Offset: 44.492ms BPM: 158,00
6. Offset: 44.871ms BPM: 152,00
7. Offset: 45.266ms BPM: 140,00
8. Offset: 45.694ms BPM: 145,00
9. Offset: 48.165ms BPM: 180,00
10. Offset: 106.164ms BPM: 150,00
11. Offset: 106.564ms BPM: 136,00
12. Offset: 107.005ms BPM: 170,00 3/4
13. Offset: 117.593ms BPM: 158,00
14. Offset: 117.972ms BPM: 152,00
15. Offset: 118.366ms BPM: 140,00
16. Offset: 118.794ms BPM: 145,00
17. Offset: 121.282ms BPM: 180,00

Slowdowns and speeds are hard to time properly because the drum and vocals are not synced. For the slowdown I used drum as a base and for the speedup I used the vocals as a base. Just saying.

Also try using OD8 in the Insane diff, it's much more fun.
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012

yuuki0310 wrote: 201o65

Suddenly sorry Taiko Mod~
Following　Japanese~
(英語間違ってるかもです･･･翻訳サイトを使った継ぎ接ぎなもので・・・)


[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
SPOILER
00:33:883 - ~ 00:46:876 - 音が少々聞こえない気がします･･･個人差なのかもですが･･･

01:47:009 - ~ 01:59:995 - 同じく｡


00:21:384 (1) - Delete

00:21:551 - add k

00:27:217 - addk

00:28:551 - addd

00:28:884 - addk

00:29:051 (1) - Delete

00:33:458 (1,2,3) - 個人的に何で3つおいてあるかがちょこっとわからないですね･･･
00:33:564 (2,3) - を削除でいいと思います｡
01:46:584 (1,2,3) - これも同様｡
後々聞き直したら音があるというのはわかりましたが個人的にはちょっとやりづらい感じかありますかね・・・

以上ですかね｡
後個人的に思ったことといえば全体的にビックノーツが多いこと､とボーカルにあまりノーツを置いてないところ､でしょうか｡
私としては少々やりづらかった感はありますが､これはこれでありかな､と思いました｡

後Moｄ数少ないとか言わない!www

これでModを終わりにしますｰ､勝手なことばっかり言って申し訳ございませんでした｡これからも応援しています､それでは｡

addのところはLundleさんのmodでノーツなくしたので、もう一度検討し直してみます。
modありがとうございました :)
0gre_old
367 posts
ed January 2013
[MOD REQUEST (Taiko)]
SIGNs
● = don
● = katsu
◎ = big done
◎ = big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
MOD information
[*]
  1. 00:12:384 - ◎ ?
  2. 00:13:717 - ● ?
  3. 00:15:384 - ● ?
  4. 00:15:551 - ● ?
  5. 00:15:884 - ● ?
  6. 00:16:217 - ● ?
  7. 00:19:217 - ● ?
  8. 00:19:384 - ● ?
  9. 00:30:551 (1,1) - ● ● ?
  10. 00:31:384 - ● ?
  11. 01:00:739 (2,3) - remove ?
  12. 01:01:989 - ３連打では？
  13. 01:04:905 (3) これを 01:04:739 ?
  14. 01:47:538 - ● ?
  15. 02:16:607 (2,1,2,3) - ● ●●●
  16. 02:19:274 (1) これを 02:19:108
  17. 02:22:941 (3,1) - ● ●
  18. 02:24:941 - ● ?
  19. 02:24:608 (1) ⇒ 02:24:441 ?
  20. 02:56:608 (1) ⇒ 02:56:441 ?

以上になります
ReySHeL's Taiko Oni は機会があればまた見たいと思います
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
Frost

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n

hi

General
about the timing in slow part , it's a bit strange to me , however, I will ask some timing expert to check if it's fine or not
you better remove Normal-Slidertick.wav in your folder
some kind of part like
01:30:655 (1,2,3) -
the tick follows the guitar sound really nice here and there are others I didn't mention so consider it
your normal diff star rating is over 3.0 with large gap (3.4) , you must reduce this to around 2.9-3.1 , that will be better

Normal
02:46:608 (1) - better start this slider with normal sample set
03:10:483 (1) - this spinner ends weird imo , I would remove it and start a slider at 03:11:608 (1) - ending at 03:11:774


Insane
00:52:322 (1,2) - why soft hitsounds here ? , the like at 02:05:441 (1,2) - sounds really better with normal sample because soft hitsound doesn't impact strongly for this part
01:51:157 (7,1) - this is hard to read , if (1) was stacked by (7) , it will be much more readable , the distance of 7 and 1 is some kind of hard to read even technically,the spacing is quite correct , but it isn't in the play mode imo
02:13:441 (4,5,6,7) - move these 4 notes down 2 grids and right 2 grids , what you see in the play mode is (4) is overlapped with 02:12:941 (3) - and it doesn't look good much , to fix by this suggestion, it doesn't ruin your spacing and how it plays

EDIT : you should find more mods for Taiko too

Thanks Frost ww and lolicube's timing check . All fixed!
About the star rating of normal diff, I try my best to lower it around 3.15 stars. I dont know how to do more orz. Will this will be allowed?
Waiting for cRyo's reply and taiko.
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012

Snowy Dream wrote: k6k41

About the star rating of normal diff, I try my best to lower it around 3.15 stars. I dont know how to do more orz. Will this will be allowed?
3.14 is definitely OK~ owo
even 3.25 is fine =.=

So efficiently!
Go go go!
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012

0gre wrote: 704r4e

[MOD REQUEST (Taiko)]
SIGNs
● = don
● = katsu
◎ = big done
◎ = big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
MOD information
[*]
  1. 00:12:384 - ◎ ?
  2. 00:13:717 - ● ?
  3. 00:15:384 - ● ?
  4. 00:15:551 - ● ?
  5. 00:15:884 - ● ?
  6. 00:16:217 - ● ?
  7. 00:19:217 - ● ?
  8. 00:19:384 - ● ?
  9. 00:30:551 (1,1) - ● ● ?
  10. 00:31:384 - ● ?
  11. 01:00:739 (2,3) - remove ?
  12. 01:01:989 - ３連打では？
  13. 01:04:905 (3) これを 01:04:739 ?
  14. 01:47:538 - ● ?
  15. 02:16:607 (2,1,2,3) - ● ●●●
  16. 02:19:274 (1) これを 02:19:108
  17. 02:22:941 (3,1) - ● ●
  18. 02:24:941 - ● ?
  19. 02:24:608 (1) ⇒ 02:24:441 ?
  20. 02:56:608 (1) ⇒ 02:56:441 ?

以上になります
ReySHeL's Taiko Oni は機会があればまた見たいと思います
thanks for mod :)
Muzu
http://puu.sh/2foG5
Oni
http://puu.sh/2foGl (IRC mod thank you >w</)
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
ed May 2011
Zero__wind

Zero__wind wrote: 5923d

Finnaly come
继续mod
00:21:384 (5,1) - 这里的节奏没跟对vocal的感觉 改成这样 ？ changed in other way
00:40:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 散点间距感觉有点大 1.35x如何 i think 1.4x & 1.7x fits better then 1.35 for all notes o:
00:45:859 (1) - 我倾向于换soft finish， 不过你后面用了一系列的normal whistle 可能不想改？i like normal whistle more oo!
01:58:978 (1) - ^
01:02:489 (3) - 或许可以稍微弯一点点来配合01:01:489 (1) - i like straight o.o
01:10:489 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/25v8y changed!
01:34:489 - 这里的节奏 和21秒那个同样的建议 http://puu.sh/25vg3 changed in other way
01:44:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉在整个难度中有点难 个人建议间距保持1.2 but its already 1.2 o:
02:09:774 (3,4) - (3)的形状或许可以换一下 让它后半部分做成和(4)一样的弧度？i think current shape is fine :>
02:55:941 (4,1) - 包好？ ok!

哦了 cRyo酱的图还是一如既往很喜欢呐 owo thanks :>!
La Fatalite

[ La Fatalite ] wrote: 6a5v2c

cRyo's Hard
音效很棒! :)

00:21:384 (5) - 这里滑条改成note，感觉怎么打怎么别扭Orz changed in other way oo!
00:53:156 (1) - 加速很莫名 i think it fits with music w
01:34:489 (4) - 同00:21:384 (5)
02:06:275 (1) - 同00:53:156 (1) changed this two o.o!
02:47:941 (1,2,3,4) - 可以拉开点距离，silder跳没那么容易断 不会增加难度。want to keep easy spacing :>
No_Gu

No_Gu wrote: 646as

[cRyo]
00:11:551 (5,6) - I think a jump here is better than stack maybe, but stack plays better for me :P
00:21:384 (5) - 3/4 here is a little strange imo.. changed
01:02:822 (1,2,3,4) - add soft-finish to 2.if you follow the bell sound..I think this pattern is better http://puu.sh/27taK and if you think it's too easy,at least this pattern? http://puu.sh/27tc6 ,,at least I don't think yours sounds good added triplet to follow drums but didnt add finish o:
01:05:156 (3,4) - use scale 2x for a better shape? ok
nice cRyooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo thx Guuuuuuuuuuuuu o(>< )o
Frostmourne

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n

cRyo's Hard
00:07:717 (1) - this NC is unnecessary because you didn't add at 00:02:384 (2) - , 00:05:051 (2) - which are quite similar those are sliders, and this one are notes xD, 1,2,3/1,2,3 fits better for me then 1,2,3,4,5,6
00:44:481 (1) - ..unsnapped slider? i asked Garven and he said i can use this unsnapped slider o.o
01:05:489 (4) - this curve of the slider can be improved. It's not bad at all but better be the similarity with 01:05:156 (3) - and it might look better whether a bit or much used scale 2.0x, should better now
Thanks!
http://puu.sh/2fQjW
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
okay ed!w
Thanks everyone wwww
0gre_old
367 posts
ed January 2013
Japanese IRC desuyo ~

SPOILER 
01:54 ReySHeL: かな
01:54 0gre: うん
01:54 ReySHeL: 追加した
01:54 0gre: 00:29:063 - 
01:54 0gre: これまだ残ってる？
01:54 ReySHeL: ノートある
01:54 ReySHeL: kd dkの形にする？
01:55 0gre: 多分　ちょっと区切りを入れたほうがいいかも
01:55 ReySHeL: おお
01:55 ReySHeL: あり
01:55 ReySHeL: 00:28:563 - 
01:55 ReySHeL: ならここdじゃない？
01:56 0gre: あ　そこ k なの？w
01:56 ReySHeL: なんにもノートないw
01:56 0gre: ディーディーw
01:56 0gre: いれようw
01:56 ReySHeL: うんwwwww
01:56 ReySHeL: おーw
01:56 ReySHeL: いい感じw
01:56 0gre: 00:31:229 - 
01:56 0gre: ここ d ?
01:57 ReySHeL: うんw
01:57 ReySHeL: てか原型に戻ってきてるw
01:57 ReySHeL: 追加！
01:57 0gre: wwww
01:57 ReySHeL: 遅いとこは変わってない
01:57 ReySHeL: 00:33:904 - 
01:57 ReySHeL: こっからだね
01:57 0gre: 00:50:831 - 
01:57 0gre: あれ
01:58 ReySHeL: ん？
01:58 ReySHeL: 00:46:521 (1,2,3) - これ何故か青線にのってたww
01:58 0gre: 00:43:433 (1) - 
01:58 ReySHeL: なおしたww
01:58 0gre: おkww
01:59 ReySHeL: おおなんにもないかw
01:59 ReySHeL: よかったw
01:59 ReySHeL: BPM激しく変わるとこ
01:59 ReySHeL: ノート控えめにしたw
01:59 ReySHeL: ノーツノーツw
02:00 0gre: なるほどねw
02:00 ReySHeL: うんw
02:00 0gre: 00:53:498 - 
02:00 0gre: ここからかな
02:02 0gre: ここ難しいなー
02:02 ReySHeL: うん
02:02 0gre: 00:54:248 - 
02:03 0gre: delete ?
02:03 0gre: 00:54:581 - 
02:03 0gre: add k ?
02:03 ReySHeL: ここddd　d　kだった
02:03 0gre: a
02:04 0gre: 00:53:831 - 
02:04 0gre: ここから
02:04 0gre: k ddd d k ?
02:04 ReySHeL: そそ
02:04 ReySHeL: k ddd d k kkd d k dって
02:04 ReySHeL: 繋がってた
02:04 0gre: そうだねー
02:04 ReySHeL: そっちのが
02:04 ReySHeL: よくない？
02:05 ReySHeL: なんか違和感あるあそこにddkkd
02:05 0gre: うん
02:05 0gre: 確かに
02:05 0gre: その流れでいくなら
02:05 0gre: 00:58:831 - 
02:05 0gre: ここまで特になし
02:05 ReySHeL: おk
02:06 0gre: え
02:06 0gre: 00:59:498 - 
02:06 0gre: これ
02:06 0gre: この辺も ddd d k kkd d k な流れじゃない？
02:06 ReySHeL: ここもddd d k
02:06 ReySHeL: だった
02:06 ReySHeL: この曲に5連俺入れてないもん
02:07 ReySHeL: 01:01:164 - 
02:07 0gre: うん
02:07 ReySHeL: ここも変わった
02:07 ReySHeL: だいぶなw
02:07 ReySHeL: 01:02:831 - 
02:07 ReySHeL: ここまで
02:07 ReySHeL: ね
02:08 0gre: ちょっと気がかりなのが
02:08 0gre: 00:54:498 (1,2,3,1) - 
02:09 0gre: この辺
02:09 ReySHeL: fm
02:09 0gre: なんかここ迫力なさそうな気がする
02:09 ReySHeL: ほうほう
02:09 0gre: 00:59:831 (1,2,3,1) - 
02:09 0gre: ここと比べるとね？
02:09 ReySHeL: うん
02:10 ReySHeL: 00:55:081 - 
02:10 ReySHeL: ここd 追加は？
02:11 0gre: 逆に
02:11 0gre: 00:54:664 - 
02:11 0gre: ここから
02:11 0gre: ddk は？
02:12 ReySHeL: 今回ここの音取りドラムだから音外せない
02:12 0gre: なるほど
02:12 0gre: 00:54:581 - 
02:12 0gre: ここに k は？
02:13 0gre: 00:54:748 - 
02:13 0gre: ここを消してみたりとか
02:13 0gre: 色々
02:13 ReySHeL: あー
02:13 ReySHeL: 00:56:664 - 
02:13 ReySHeL: ここで使ってるからな
02:13 0gre: あ
02:14 0gre: ほんとだ
02:14 ReySHeL: うん
02:14 0gre: kkkkd　は？
02:14 ReySHeL: kkkkd
02:14 ReySHeL: にする
02:14 0gre: おk！
02:15 0gre: 01:04:164 - 
02:15 0gre: このへんまで大丈夫なんじゃない？
02:15 ReySHeL: 01:00:831 - 
02:15 ReySHeL: ここどう？
02:16 ReySHeL: 01:02:831 - 
02:16 ReySHeL: ここまで。
02:16 0gre: ドラムだよね？
02:16 0gre: 沿ってるの
02:17 0gre: 01:00:831 - 
02:17 0gre: ここ k ?
02:17 ReySHeL: ここの配置俺じゃない
02:17 ReySHeL: 俺が今配置し直した　ちょっと待ってね
02:17 0gre: ok
02:17 ReySHeL: 01:00:831 - 
02:17 ReySHeL: こっから
02:17 ReySHeL: d d k kkd d k ddd d k d D
02:17 ReySHeL: こういう風に置いた
02:18 0gre: 01:00:831 - 
02:18 0gre: ここから？
02:18 ReySHeL: うん
02:18 0gre: あー
02:19 0gre: おk
02:19 0gre: 01:02:665 (1) - 
02:19 0gre: ここ d ?
02:20 ReySHeL: d
02:20 0gre: では
02:20 0gre: 01:04:498 - 
02:20 0gre: ここからかな
02:20 ReySHeL: うん
02:20 ReySHeL: まずddd d kだね
02:20 ReySHeL: 01:04:664 - 
02:21 0gre: うん
02:21 ReySHeL: 01:05:665 (2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 
02:21 ReySHeL: ここおかしい
02:23 ReySHeL: 01:05:664 - 
02:23 ReySHeL: d k d d ddk d d ddk d d d kkk D
02:23 ReySHeL: どうかな
02:24 0gre: 　01:06:664 (1) - 
02:25 0gre: k ?
02:25 ReySHeL: d
02:25 0gre: 01:06:664 (1,2) - 
02:25 0gre: kono
02:25 0gre: この二つのどっちか変えたほうがいいんじゃない？
02:25 ReySHeL: kかな
02:25 ReySHeL: 01:06:664 - 
02:25 ReySHeL: これ
02:26 0gre: 変えたくない？
02:26 0gre: あるいは
02:26 0gre: 01:06:914 - 
02:26 ReySHeL: そうだなー
02:26 0gre: ここに d
02:26 0gre: ってのもありかもw
02:26 ReySHeL: 正直色は
02:26 ReySHeL: 変えたくないな
02:26 0gre: おk
02:27 ReySHeL: お
02:27 ReySHeL: ddddk
02:27 ReySHeL: いいね
02:28 ReySHeL: 声に合ってるww
02:28 0gre: ドラムに合って声に合ってるならと思ったw
02:29 ReySHeL: いいねww
02:29 ReySHeL: わかってるねやっぱwww
02:29 ReySHeL: さすがww
02:29 0gre: wwwwwww
02:29 ReySHeL: 01:09:998 - 
02:29 ReySHeL: addじゃない？w
02:29 0gre: 01:09:664 - 
02:29 0gre: ここにも d は？
02:29 ReySHeL: おk
02:30 ReySHeL: 俺が言ったとこもd
02:30 ReySHeL: ？
02:30 0gre: うん
02:30 ReySHeL: ですよね０www
02:30 0gre: ヤバw
02:31 ReySHeL: ん？ww
02:31 0gre: サビのあとなんか悲惨w
02:31 ReySHeL: wwwwww
02:31 0gre: 01:25:498 - 
02:31 0gre: この辺ねw
02:31 ReySHeL: wwwwwwwwww
02:31 ReySHeL: ここまじ最悪ww
02:31 ReySHeL: 原型に戻そうww
02:31 0gre: うんww
02:31 ReySHeL: これは萎えるw
02:32 0gre: 前の部分ちょっと切り取ってからいじったほうが
02:32 0gre: 早いようなきがするw
02:32 ReySHeL: 確かにww
02:32 ReySHeL: じゃあどうするw
02:32 ReySHeL: まずw
02:32 0gre: 01:25:498 - 
02:32 ReySHeL: とりま
02:32 0gre: とりあえず今ここだから
02:32 0gre: そうだねー
02:32 0gre: 00:12:396 - 
02:33 0gre: 00:23:063 - 
02:33 0gre: この部分を
02:33 0gre: 01:25:498 - 
02:33 0gre: 01:36:164 - 
02:33 0gre: ここまで塗り替えるのは？
02:33 0gre: そこからいじってくみたいな
02:33 ReySHeL: とりまそのまま持っていくね
02:34 0gre: おk
02:34 ReySHeL: これは悲惨すぎる
02:35 ReySHeL: 少しノーツ増やすか？
02:35 ReySHeL: 2番
02:35 0gre: うん
02:35 ReySHeL: 01:28:081 - 
02:35 ReySHeL: ここk
02:36 0gre: おk
02:36 ReySHeL: 01:29:664 - 
02:36 ReySHeL: ddk
02:36 ReySHeL: どうかな
02:36 0gre: おk
02:36 ReySHeL: ddk d ddd kかなー
02:37 ReySHeL: これでもいいけど
02:37 0gre: うーん
02:37 ReySHeL: これでいっか？
02:37 0gre: だね
02:37 ReySHeL: うん
02:38 0gre: 結構いじったほうがいいかもね
02:38 0gre: 2番
02:38 0gre: コピペ使っちゃったからw
02:38 ReySHeL: wwww
02:39 0gre: 01:33:414 - 
02:39 0gre: ３連？
02:40 ReySHeL: うーむ
02:41 ReySHeL: 01:25:831 - 
02:41 ReySHeL: ここを変えた
02:42 0gre: どんなふうに？
02:42 ReySHeL: k k d ddk d ddd k d
02:42 0gre: いいねー
02:42 ReySHeL: ou
02:43 ReySHeL: 01:30:998 - 
02:43 ReySHeL: この辺どうしようか
02:44 ReySHeL: 変える必要あるかな？
02:44 0gre: 01:31:414 - 
02:44 0gre: ここ d とか？
02:44 0gre: あ
02:44 0gre: なんか違うかも
02:44 ReySHeL: そこdddだおy
02:44 0gre: え？
02:44 0gre: あれw
02:44 ReySHeL: え
02:45 ReySHeL: 01:30:998 - 
02:45 ReySHeL: こっから
02:45 0gre: なんでないんだ？w
02:45 ReySHeL: d k ddd d k d  d k d d ddk d  d k ddd d k d
02:45 ReySHeL: だよ
02:46 0gre: おk
02:46 ReySHeL: 01:36:164 - 
02:46 ReySHeL: こっから
02:46 ReySHeL: 悲惨
02:47 0gre: まー
02:47 0gre: 01:37:664 - 
02:47 0gre: これ d とか
02:47 0gre: 結構同じ感じじゃない？
02:47 ReySHeL: うん
02:47 ReySHeL: 01:37:664 - 
02:47 ReySHeL: ここノートいる
02:48 ReySHeL: 01:40:331 - 
02:48 ReySHeL: ここも
02:48 ReySHeL: 01:40:748 - 
02:48 ReySHeL: ここも
02:48 0gre: ↑それは
02:48 0gre: いると思った
02:48 ReySHeL: うん
02:48 0gre: けど最初のやつどうだろ
02:48 ReySHeL: え
02:49 ReySHeL: 1番は入ってるよ
02:49 0gre: 01:37:664 - 
02:49 0gre: これ？
02:49 ReySHeL: うん
02:49 ReySHeL: d
02:49 0gre: あー
02:49 0gre: 入れたんだ
02:49 0gre: ちょっとまって
02:49 0gre: この辺
02:49 0gre: 全部コピペ？
02:49 ReySHeL: 違う
02:49 0gre: あぁ
02:49 ReySHeL: コピペじゃないよ
02:50 ReySHeL: 似てるけど
02:50 ReySHeL: 違うで
02:50 0gre: 01:36:498 - 
02:50 0gre: k d d d k kkd ?
02:50 ReySHeL: うん
02:50 0gre: 01:37:664 - 
02:50 0gre: ここ d 入れると
02:50 0gre: 全部繋がるような気がするw
02:50 ReySHeL: え？
02:51 0gre: 01:38:998 - 
02:51 0gre: 01:40:331 - 
02:51 0gre: これら
02:51 ReySHeL: 01:38:998 - 
02:51 ReySHeL: ここは隙間入ってるな
02:52 0gre: じゃー
02:52 0gre: 01:40:331 - 
02:52 0gre: ここ d か
02:52 ReySHeL: うん
02:53 0gre: うん
02:53 0gre: この辺
02:53 0gre: あんまり変える必要ないと思う
02:53 ReySHeL: おk
02:53 ReySHeL: 01:47:005 - 
02:53 ReySHeL: ここまでおkかな
02:54 ReySHeL: まぁこっから
02:54 ReySHeL: 02:01:282 - 
02:54 ReySHeL: ここまでもおkと思う
02:54 0gre: 02:06:615 - 
02:54 0gre: うん
02:54 ReySHeL: ここのサビからやな
02:54 0gre: 02:08:448 (1,2,1,2,1) - 
02:54 0gre: こういう連打
02:55 0gre: 全部 mod だねw
02:55 ReySHeL: そうだよwwwww
02:55 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
02:55 ReySHeL: 入れた覚えないっすww
02:57 0gre: この辺原型戻した？
02:57 ReySHeL: うん
02:58 ReySHeL: 戻した
02:59 0gre: もう形がどんなのかもわかんないよw
02:59 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
02:59 0gre: とりあえずこの辺戻してこうw
02:59 0gre: 今どの辺？
03:00 ReySHeL: 02:12:282 - 
03:00 ReySHeL: ここ
03:00 0gre: なるほど
03:01 0gre: とりあえず
03:01 0gre: 02:13:781 (1,2,1,2,1) - 
03:01 0gre: こういうのは省いてこーぜw
03:02 ReySHeL: 省いたw
03:02 ReySHeL: なめすぎw
03:02 ReySHeL: うんwww
03:02 ReySHeL: わかるかw
03:02 ReySHeL: wwwww
03:03 ReySHeL: 5連邪魔なんだよww
03:03 ReySHeL: だいぶ戻ってきたw
03:04 0gre: うんww
03:04 ReySHeL: この曲
03:04 ReySHeL: 大音符多いけど
03:04 ReySHeL: 仕方ないよね？
03:04 ReySHeL: 曲が曲だしw
03:04 0gre: だね
03:04 ReySHeL: うんw
03:06 ReySHeL: 02:24:281 - 
03:06 ReySHeL: k kkd d k d dのが
03:06 ReySHeL: よくない？
03:06 0gre: 　　うん
03:06 ReySHeL: ここ俺の音取り外してるもんddkとか
03:07 0gre: 02:25:281 - 
03:07 0gre: これ d なの？
03:07 ReySHeL: d
03:07 ReySHeL: D
03:07 0gre: おk
03:07 ReySHeL: 02:27:948 - 
03:07 ReySHeL: この辺は
03:07 ReySHeL: 俺
03:08 ReySHeL: 02:33:282 (1) - ふぃにsっゆ
03:08 ReySHeL: いらなくね
03:08 0gre: wwwwwwwwwww
03:08 0gre: かわいいwwww
03:08 ReySHeL: んwwwwwww
03:08 0gre: ふぃにsっゆwww
03:08 ReySHeL: wwwwww
03:08 ReySHeL: あ
03:08 ReySHeL: いるか
03:09 ReySHeL: よく聞いたら
03:09 ReySHeL: w
03:09 0gre: いる
03:09 ReySHeL: うんw
03:09 0gre: うんww
03:09 ReySHeL: いるww
03:09 ReySHeL: 02:41:281 - 
03:09 0gre: 02:41:281 - 
03:09 ReySHeL: こっからの気合入る感じ
03:09 0gre: はーww
03:09 ReySHeL: 好きすぎるw
03:09 ReySHeL: wwwwwwwww
03:09 ReySHeL: 同時わろたwwww
03:10 ReySHeL: 02:42:615 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 
03:10 0gre: 02:41:781 - 
03:10 0gre: こっからでしょw
03:10 ReySHeL: うんwwwwww
03:10 ReySHeL: 作り直しますww
03:10 0gre: ごっちゃごちゃ
03:10 0gre: wwww
03:10 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
03:11 ReySHeL: 原型忘れちゃったじゃんw
03:11 ReySHeL: 02:42:615 - 
03:12 ReySHeL: D ddk d D ddk d D
03:12 ReySHeL: どうかな
03:12 0gre: えっとねー
03:12 ReySHeL: うん
03:13 0gre: 02:42:281 - 
03:14 0gre: kkk D    kkd D d k kkd じゃない？
03:14 0gre: 原型がね？
03:15 ReySHeL: あぁ
03:17 ReySHeL: あり
03:17 0gre: 戻ってる？
03:17 ReySHeL: 02:41:781 - 
03:17 ReySHeL: ddd d kkk D d kkd D d kkd D
03:17 ReySHeL: になった
03:18 0gre: おー
03:19 ReySHeL: ちょいちょい
03:19 ReySHeL: ふぃにsっゆ
03:19 ReySHeL: wwwwwwww
03:20 ReySHeL: フィニッシュ
03:20 ReySHeL: ミスってた
03:20 ReySHeL: 同じ噛み方吹いた
03:20 0gre: なんでwwwww
03:20 ReySHeL: wwwwww
03:20 ReySHeL: 知るかwwwwwww
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっす
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっしゅ
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっゆ
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっしゅ
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっしゅ
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっす
03:21 ReySHeL: wwwwwwwwwwww
03:21 0gre: ふぃにsっ
03:22 ReySHeL: 俺もしらんww
03:22 0gre: ふぃにsっ
03:22 0gre: あれ
03:22 0gre: 今どうやった俺ww
03:22 0gre: ふぃにsssっゆ
03:22 ReySHeL: wwwwwwww
03:22 0gre: ふぃにっゆ
03:22 0gre: ふぃにsっゆ
03:22 0gre: あ
03:22 0gre: わかったw
03:23 0gre: ふぃにsっゆw
03:23 0gre: s じゃなくて
03:23 0gre: y　を二回押してたんだw
03:23 0gre: とりあえず解明しといたw
03:24 ReySHeL: ああwwwww
03:24 ReySHeL: ふぃにsっゆ
03:24 ReySHeL: すげwww
03:24 ReySHeL: なんでわかったw
03:24 0gre: wwwwwwwww
03:24 ReySHeL: 解明やばwwwwwwwwwwwww
03:24 0gre: これIRCに入れてなww
03:24 0gre: wwwwwwwwww
03:24 ReySHeL: wwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
03:26 ReySHeL: 原型より
03:26 ReySHeL: 良くなったかもw
03:26 0gre: えww
03:26 ReySHeL: いま最終チェックしてる
03:26 0gre: まーたまにあるよなw
03:26 0gre: おk
03:26 0gre: 全部終わったの？
03:26 ReySHeL: ぶっちゃけ
03:26 ReySHeL: これ作ったの
03:26 ReySHeL: 結構前だしw
03:26 0gre: あー
03:26 ReySHeL: 今の俺の方が多分成長してるはず
03:27 ReySHeL: modさんきゅーなwww
03:27 ReySHeL: マジで助かったわ　このままでいくとこだったわ
03:27 ReySHeL: あぶねええええええええええええええええ
03:27 ReySHeL: 黒歴史載せるとこだった
03:28 0gre: ふーw
03:28 0gre: おkww
qoot8123
1,500 posts
ed March 2011
Request via PM~

[General]
  1. shift the BG to better place.code~
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,60
[Muzu]
  1. change HP and OD to 4
  2. 00:32:729 (3,1,1) - add finish. means to change next paragrath.And it can increase the song's accent.
  3. 00:44:492 (2,3,1) - ^
  4. 01:45:831 (3,1,1) - ^
  5. 01:46:164 (3,1,1) - ^
  6. 01:57:593 (1,2,1) - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:33:904 - add finish.the reason is same as muzu.
  2. 01:47:005 - ^
  3. 02:01:615 - ,02:02:115 - and 02:03:282 - add k.this is another paragrath,and the lyrics is different from forward part.So i think you sould put another rhythm on this part.
  4. 02:22:615 - is D and the interval is on 02:22:448 - .But the forward part 02:11:782 - has one more interval than next one.So i suggest to add kkd on 02:11:782 - or change d to D on 02:11:948 - .
  5. 02:41:115 - add k . this is the exciting part ,and means this song will put over.
  6. 02:49:115 - ^
nice song , nice mapset>w<~
Good Luck~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
ed March 2008
[Oni]
00:43:433 (1) - in the section you placed finishes every 2 bars and this is the exception. This one does not sound as heavy as other finishes so please remove finish.
00:50:665 - feel like missed something here as indicated by the vocal.
01:14:498 - k k here. Again it sounds like there should be something bridging over the two phrases.
02:03:448 - same problem with 0:50
03:10:781 - sounds excessive. Just keep the ddk K at the end would be enough.

[Muzu]
No complaints.

- The BPM shifts has caused a bit trouble but as long as they are not affecting players to read the map properly it's not a big problem.
- Nice usage of the finishes.
- Some odd bridging between phrases in oni but it is fine in overall.
hs714
257 posts
ed March 2011
Hello, Snowy Dream and ReySHeL! <33
Taiko Mod from PM ;)
Sorry for late.. and Sorry for writing in Japanese m(_ _)m

d=don　k=kat　D=Big Don　K=Big Kat


　◆Taiko Muzukashii
1/4の3連打からのbig notes、1/2の単発に混じったbig notesなどが多すぎるような気がします。

Taiko MuzukashiiはOniより簡単に、1/4連打や連続したBig notesなどを多様しないようにするのがベストだと思います。

全体的にもう一度見直してみて下さい。Taiko Muzukashiiにしてはハードすぎる+少しやり辛いです。
ですが私のmodはあくまでも提案なので、ReySHeLさんがこれで良いと思うのならこのままでも大丈夫です。
もし全体的に見直して、どこかしら手直ししたのなら声をかけて下さい。Muzukashiiだけもう一度見に来ます :3

|；ω；｀) <音に合わせたい気持ちもすっごくよく分かるけど、もう少しだけ簡単に..！

　◆Taiko Oni
00:01:729 - Audio Volume 80% or 90%? ボーカルが無いのでその分叩く音を大きくしてみるのはどうでしょう？
( 00:12:396 - ここからまた70%に戻せば良い感じになるんじゃないかなーと思います :roll: )

00:16:563 - add notes?
00:26:979 (3) - d? kddのほうが合っているような?
00:30:979 (3) - delete?
00:44:871 - add notes?
00:46:521 (1,2,3) - ここと　01:59:621 (1,2,3) - ここに少し違和感があります。1/3のkkkkはどうでしょう?
SPOILER
　→　
画像が荒くてごめんなさい..orz
02:43:448 (3) - and 02:43:698 (2) - delete? この部分に音はないと思います
03:11:532 (2) - delete?

that's all~! nice map and good song :oops:
GoodLuck(*´▽｀)ﾉ♥
ReySHeL
612 posts
ed March 2012

qoot8123 wrote: j533u

Request via PM~

[General]
  1. shift the BG to better place.code~
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,60
[Muzu]
  1. change HP and OD to 4
  2. 00:32:729 (3,1,1) - add finish. means to change next paragrath.And it can increase the song's accent.
  3. 00:44:492 (2,3,1) - ^
  4. 01:45:831 (3,1,1) - ^
  5. 01:46:164 (3,1,1) - ^
  6. 01:57:593 (1,2,1) - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:33:904 - add finish.the reason is same as muzu.
  2. 01:47:005 - ^
  3. 02:01:615 - ,02:02:115 - and 02:03:282 - add k.this is another paragrath,and the lyrics is different from forward part.So i think you sould put another rhythm on this part.
  4. 02:22:615 - is D and the interval is on 02:22:448 - .But the forward part 02:11:782 - has one more interval than next one.So i suggest to add kkd on 02:11:782 - or change d to D on 02:11:948 - .
  5. 02:41:115 - add k . this is the exciting part ,and means this song will put over.
  6. 02:49:115 - ^
nice song , nice mapset>w<~
Good Luck~
i do not want to increase this song has so many big notes >w<
thanks for mod :)


wmfchris wrote: 1c4l29

[Oni]
00:43:433 (1) - in the section you placed finishes every 2 bars and this is the exception. This one does not sound as heavy as other finishes so please remove finish. ok
00:50:665 - feel like missed something here as indicated by the vocal. ^
01:14:498 - k k here. Again it sounds like there should be something bridging over the two phrases. use the same pattern - 02:27:615 and 02:59:615 -
02:03:448 - same problem with 0:50 ok
03:10:781 - sounds excessive. Just keep the ddk K at the end would be enough. ^

[Muzu]
No complaints.

- The BPM shifts has caused a bit trouble but as long as they are not affecting players to read the map properly it's not a big problem.
- Nice usage of the finishes.
- Some odd bridging between phrases in oni but it is fine in overall. thank you ((๑￫ܫ￩๑))
thanks for mod :)


hs714 wrote: 5y4w3t

Hello, Snowy Dream and ReySHeL! <33
Taiko Mod from PM ;)
Sorry for late.. and Sorry for writing in Japanese m(_ _)m

d=don　k=kat　D=Big Don　K=Big Kat


　◆Taiko Muzukashii
1/4の3連打からのbig notes、1/2の単発に混じったbig notesなどが多すぎるような気がします。

Taiko MuzukashiiはOniより簡単に、1/4連打や連続したBig notesなどを多様しないようにするのがベストだと思います。

全体的にもう一度見直してみて下さい。Taiko Muzukashiiにしてはハードすぎる+少しやり辛いです。
ですが私のmodはあくまでも提案なので、ReySHeLさんがこれで良いと思うのならこのままでも大丈夫です。
もし全体的に見直して、どこかしら手直ししたのなら声をかけて下さい。Muzukashiiだけもう一度見に来ます :3

|；ω；｀) <音に合わせたい気持ちもすっごくよく分かるけど、もう少しだけ簡単に..！

　◆Taiko Oni
00:01:729 - Audio Volume 80% or 90%? ボーカルが無いのでその分叩く音を大きくしてみるのはどうでしょう？
( 00:12:396 - ここからまた70%に戻せば良い感じになるんじゃないかなーと思います :roll: ) ok

00:16:563 - add notes? ここは区切りをつけたいです
00:26:979 (3) - d? kddのほうが合っているような? ここだけこのパターンになってしまうので ;w;
00:30:979 (3) - delete? 考慮します
00:44:871 - add notes? ここはBPMの変動により変速が激しいのでなるべくNotes減らしました
00:46:521 (1,2,3) - ここと　01:59:621 (1,2,3) - ここに少し違和感があります。1/3のkkkkはどうでしょう? バックの kkk の音に合わせました
SPOILER
　→　
画像が荒くてごめんなさい..orz
02:43:448 (3) - and 02:43:698 (2) - delete? この部分に音はないと思います考慮します
03:11:532 (2) - delete? ドラムの d の音があるのでここは外せないです

that's all~! nice map and good song :oops:
GoodLuck(*´▽｀)ﾉ♥
この曲どうしてもbig notesが多くなってしまうんですよね...
なるべく避けたいのですが >w<
Muzukashiiについては全体的に見直しますね！
modありがとうございます :)

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2jsUR
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2jsVa
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
Thanksssss all guys > <
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,735 posts
ed November 2009
Recheck

Normal
00:07:729 (2,3) - can you adjust spacing a bit here? , since main spacing is 1.3 but this stands out quite badly
00:52:498 (4,1) - spacing, maybe move 00:52:331 (3,4) - to x:340 y:276
02:51:282 (3,1,2) - spacing(not a big problem for this) but major problem is it looks complicated and maybe too hard for the beginner
so consider to change it here

Insane
00:51:498 (7) - the tail with sample normal? , that sounds better than this because this is now quite empty and the sound will correspond with 00:50:831 (5,6) - as well
01:29:498 (5) - remove finish on the head? , this feels a bit unexpected and it comes without enough strong volume on this point
02:04:615 (3) - slider tail here with sample normal if you chose to fix above I mentioned
02:04:948 (4) - finish tail sounds fit with the music and impacts very well and you also added at 00:51:831 (8) - , so this should be added for the sake of consistency
02:27:948 (1) - finish the first point? since it starts the new part and it fits with itself
02:32:282 (4) - this looks confusing from the slider here 02:31:615 (3) - , spacing might be too short
to clarify this better , I suggest you add new combo at 02:32:282 (4) - so it will be distinguished more clearly
02:40:782 (1,2,3) - why these are soft hitsound? They lost all feeling they should give to the player because it's peaking really high for this spot of the music
02:41:282 (1) - this slider should start with normal hitsound too to correspond with ^ if you changed it

no kudo
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,735 posts
ed November 2009
to BAT : Normal diff has star rating 3.15 but it is actually easy enough ,and unsnapped slider in cRyo's Hard (00:44:492 (1) - )
is acceptable (as cRyo asked Garven, and it's fine)

Bubbled , Good Luck!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
ed August 2012
Go go go~1
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
ed December 2010
Pretty nice map and moe song ~

Oniichan <333333333

Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
oops i'm late
congrats ~~
Quilt
1,476 posts
ed May 2010
gratz
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
ed May 2011
Yey !! :)
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
Topic Starter
w! 小芊最棒啦
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
ed July 2011
0,0
raririn
1,002 posts
ed October 2011
wa
Kuria
1,390 posts
ed May 2011
it's been a while since i can play high bpm map with AR lower than 9 lol

grats snowy!
Mythol
1,420 posts
ed March 2011
so cute !!
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
ed October 2010
来迟了 lol

恭喜！
Lundlerol
651 posts
ed May 2011
hey there cutie :D/
gratz
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