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Horie Yui - perfect slumbers (TV Size) 6t1r5u

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alacat
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Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月10日 at 18:02:06

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: perfect slumbers (TV Size)
Source: Nekomonogatari(Kuro)
Tags: hanekawa tsubasa neko opening meg rock monaca
BPM: 80
Filesize: 14415kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4.29 stars, 148 notes)
  3. Normal (2.88 stars, 95 notes)
: Horie Yui - perfect slumbers (TV Size)
: Horie Yui - perfect slumbers (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#16

『猫物語 黒』

Official site : http://www.nekomonogatarikuro-anime.com/
Last edited by alacat , edited 19 times in total.
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,701 posts
ed June 2012
こんばんは(｡ÒωÓ。)~

Hard 204o1w

  • Suggestion i6gp

  1. 00:34:147 (1) - 私には1のスライダーの位置が余り好きじゃないので、2の方向へ向けて引くか、曲げたりしてもいいかもしれないです＞＜
    http://puu.sh/1I96n　http://puu.sh/1I9dG
  2. 00:37:897 (2) - 1grid上か・・な?
  3. 00:39:397 (6) - ちょっとだけ傾けてみては
  4. 00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - どういう形になってるかわかりませんが5角形作った方が綺麗に見えると思います・・・>< 00:58:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - 此方と同じように・・・？
  5. 01:07:522 (1,2,3) - こんな音取りのほうが好きかもしれないです><
  6. 01:15:397 (5) - この位置 01:16:147 (1) - と同じように曲げてみては・・・?

Normal d293k

  • Suggestion i6gp

  1. 00:12:397 (7) - 2ndポイントを1grid落としてみては nazi~

Easy 4m5wp

  • Suggestion i6gp

  1. 00:55:147 (1,2,3) - easyだとちょっと見づらさそう・・・　大した提案はないです><
  2. 01:07:147 - スピン中だけどこの緑線は必要・・・？(わからない)
alacat先生頑張ってくださいヾ(｡>﹏<｡)ﾉﾞ★
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
ed August 2011
hi ~

Easy
  1. 00:14:272 (2,3) - for an easy diff., i suggest you not stack notes
  2. 00:32:272 (2,3) - ^ (i won't mention anymore xD)
  3. 01:19:147 (1,2) - unstack
other than that, good diff. (:

Normal
  1. 00:16:147 (5) - NC
  2. 00:28:147 (5) - ^
  3. 01:04:147 (4) - ^
  4. 01:22:147 (1) - extend to next white tick?
Hard
  1. 00:46:147 (1,3,5) - make equally spaced from each other ^^
i like your hitsounds :)
sorry i can't find much right now, i was rushing a little Dx . maybe i will edit this post if i find something else..

ganbatte <3
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

Dagger-Gazel wrote: 344e4u

こんばんは(｡ÒωÓ。)~ こんばんは！ :)

Hard 204o1w

  • Suggestion i6gp

  1. 00:34:147 (1) - 私には1のスライダーの位置が余り好きじゃないので、2の方向へ向けて引くか、曲げたりしてもいいかもしれないです＞＜
    http://puu.sh/1I96n　http://puu.sh/1I9dG
    前の3連打と30°差をつけて置いてる感じです！
  2. 00:37:897 (2) - 1grid上か・・な?　　okey!
  3. 00:39:397 (6) - ちょっとだけ傾けてみては 曲げる→直線　のパターンでここのパートはおいています></
  4. 00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - どういう形になってるかわかりませんが5角形作った方が綺麗に見えると思います・・・>< 00:58:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - 此方と同じように・・・？
    た、たしかに・・・;w; 今のままが好きなので、指摘が多ければ変えようと思います！
  5. 01:07:522 (1,2,3) - こんな音取りのほうが好きかもしれないです><

    ちょっとむずかしめにしたいので、このままで！
  6. 01:15:397 (5) - この位置 01:16:147 (1) - と同じように曲げてみては・・・?　上と同じです！

Normal d293k

  • Suggestion i6gp

  1. 00:12:397 (7) - 2ndポイントを1grid落としてみては nazi~

Easy 4m5wp

  • Suggestion i6gp

  1. 00:55:147 (1,2,3) - easyだとちょっと見づらさそう・・・　大した提案はないです><
  2. 01:07:147 - スピン中だけどこの緑線は必要・・・？(わからない)
easy , Normalは全て修正しました～！

alacat先生頑張ってくださいヾ(｡>﹏<｡)ﾉﾞ★　　ありがとう>w<

　★もありがとうです :oops:

Thanks modding :)
alacat
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3,872 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

meiikyuu wrote: 1c6x6x

hi ~

Easy
  1. 00:14:272 (2,3) - for an easy diff., i suggest you not stack notes
  2. 00:32:272 (2,3) - ^ (i won't mention anymore xD)
  3. 01:19:147 (1,2) - unstack
other than that, good diff. (:

yes >.< maybe... XAT say must change ;w;

Normal
  1. 00:16:147 (5) - NC
  2. 00:28:147 (5) - ^
  3. 01:04:147 (4) - ^
  4. 01:22:147 (1) - extend to next white tick?
all fixed :3

Hard
  1. 00:46:147 (1,3,5) - make equally spaced from each other ^^
oh , looks good ><// okey~

i like your hitsounds :) Thank you meiikyu <3
sorry i can't find much right now, i was rushing a little Dx . maybe i will edit this post if i find something else..

ganbatte <3　<3

Thank you for modding :oops:
mochi
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ed June 2010
(「・ω・)「
alacat
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Topic Starter
(ﾉ*･ω･)ﾉmochi
h3k1ru
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cutecat
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ed November 2010
Woof~
From my Modding Queue.

General
Seems good to me.

Easy
00:10:147 (4) - Could have been placed better on the grid imo.
00:26:272 (2) - Fix spacing.
00:34:147 (1) - ^ When you fix this one, to also fix 00:34:897 (2) - of course.
00:58:897 (2,3,4) - Will also recommend to not stack here.


Normal
You are aware that you choosed several distances on the beginning of the diff, right?
00:40:147 (4) - NC? I found nice to add since you didn't placed a circle in 00:39:772 - and after a considerable time without a note, I'd recommend it, plus, it fits with the vocals imo.
00:34:147 (5) - ^ Same explanation as above.
00:52:147 (4) - ^ Yup, same as above.
00:58:147 (4) - ^ Yeah o3o
01:23:647 (1) - Would place aligned with 01:22:147 (1) - http://puu.sh/1IreW

Hard
Couldn't find much things here, although:
00:35:647 (3,4,5) - Could have made into a more "curved" way, something like this.

Well, that's it! Nice map and song afterall~
Good luck!
Pokie
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はやっ
alacat
osu! Alumni
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ed May 2011
Topic Starter
>h3k1ru hekicat :P

Wolf wrote: 3n437

Woof~
From my Modding Queue.

General
Seems good to me.

Easy
00:10:147 (4) - Could have been placed better on the grid imo. okey!
00:26:272 (2) - Fix spacing. ^
00:34:147 (1) - ^ When you fix this one, to also fix 00:34:897 (2) - of course. ^
00:58:897 (2,3,4) - Will also recommend to not stack here. No change here ~

Normal
You are aware that you choosed several distances on the beginning of the diff, right?
00:40:147 (4) - NC? I found nice to add since you didn't placed a circle in 00:39:772 - and after a considerable time without a note, I'd recommend it, plus, it fits with the vocals imo.
00:34:147 (5) - ^ Same explanation as above.
00:52:147 (4) - ^ Yup, same as above.
00:58:147 (4) - ^ Yeah o3o
01:23:647 (1) - Would place aligned with 01:22:147 (1) - http://puu.sh/1IreW

all fixed this diff ! nice modding ><//

Hard
Couldn't find much things here, although:
00:35:647 (3,4,5) - Could have made into a more "curved" way, something like this. okey !

Well, that's it! Nice map and song afterall~
Good luck!

Thank you for modding ;)
alacat
osu! Alumni
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ed May 2011
Topic Starter

Pokie wrote: 113j1p

はやっ
猫物語ですので(((╹д╹;)))
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
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ed March 2009
新年初Modイキマス

　

Hard 204o1w


　●　00:08:647 (4) - 1grid↑? (2)と(3)の間あたりに持ってくるようにです
　●　00:20:272 (2) - 流れに沿ってx:80 y:356くらいに移動した方が自分は好きです。
　●　00:24:397 (4) - (3)のスライダーと対になるように逆向きのスライダーを使用する方が見栄えが良いと思いました。後の流れ的にもこちらのほうがベターです。
SPOILER

　

Normal d293k


　●　AR-1?
　●　00:11:647 (6) - (4)の傾きに合わせて少し傾けてみるのはどうでしょう？
　●　00:23:647 (6) - 1grid右,1grid上に移動しましょう。そうすることで00:22:147 (4,5,6) - のスペーシングも一定になり見栄えよくなります。
SPOILER

　

Easy 4m5wp


　●　AR-1?
　●　00:56:647 (3) - もうちょい曲げるか、もしくは真っ直ぐにするのはどうでしょう?

以上です！短すぎワロタでごめんなさい
Good luck ;)
alacat
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ed May 2011
Topic Starter

Guy wrote: 416t1b

新年初Modイキマス　ありです>w<

　

Hard 204o1w


　●　00:08:647 (4) - 1grid↑? (2)と(3)の間あたりに持ってくるようにです
　●　00:20:272 (2) - 流れに沿ってx:80 y:356くらいに移動した方が自分は好きです。 ここはジャンプになってます！
　●　00:24:397 (4) - (3)のスライダーと対になるように逆向きのスライダーを使用する方が見栄えが良いと思いました。後の流れ的にもこちらのほうがベターです。
SPOILER

　

Normal d293k


　●　AR-1?
　●　00:11:647 (6) - (4)の傾きに合わせて少し傾けてみるのはどうでしょう？
　●　00:23:647 (6) - 1grid右,1grid上に移動しましょう。そうすることで00:22:147 (4,5,6) - のスペーシングも一定になり見栄えよくなります。
SPOILER

　

Easy 4m5wp


　●　AR-1?
　●　00:56:647 (3) - もうちょい曲げるか、もしくは真っ直ぐにするのはどうでしょう?

あとは全て修正しました！

以上です！短すぎワロタでごめんなさい　　いえいえ大変助かりました！
Good luck ;)

Thank you for modding :P
Beren
962 posts
ed September 2009
(ﾉ･ω･)ﾉﾞ


[Easy]
fine


[Normal]
00:22:147 (4) - add new combmo
00:23:647 (7) - remove note and 00:23:647 (6) -


[Hard]
00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - like
01:07:334 (5) - add note? i like 01:07:334 (5,1,2,3) -

good map
sorry for my poor mod lol
alacat
osu! Alumni
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ed May 2011
Topic Starter

Beren wrote: 3o1547

(ﾉ･ω･)ﾉﾞ ヽ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ


[Easy]
fine


[Normal]
00:22:147 (4) - add new combmo　okey!
00:23:647 (7) - remove note and 00:23:647 (6) - no >< follow vocal here :3



[Hard]
00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - like　 looks good ^^b

01:07:334 (5) - add note? i like 01:07:334 (5,1,2,3) - no ></

good map
sorry for my poor mod lol no no Thanks <3
Thank you for modding :oops:
C_Venn
C_Venn
Good Job
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
ed December 2010
[general]

●特になし

[Easy]

●00:11:647 (5) - ここだけカクカクしているスライダーは・・　うーんって感じです。　曲げてみてはどうですか？　
　参考画像⇒　http://puu.sh/1JOgy
●00:47:647 (3) - 左右対称なスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか？　そのほうが見た目的にも良くなりますし　
　次のサークルへの流れも良くなると思いました。
●00:52:147 (1) - ^
●01:04:147 (3) - 一貫性を保つために　New comboを追加。

[Normal]

●00:37:147 (1) - 別に気にしなくてもいいんですが　なんか右寄りな感じのスライダーに私には見えます。
　だから、少し終点を左に動かしたほうが　見た目の問題で　良くなるのではないかと思いました。
●00:46:147 (4) - 流れ的にここにnew comboを
●01:13:147 (4) - ^
●01:22:147 (1) - Normalでは白線で終了していますが、Easyは青線で終了しています。個人的には青線のほうが良いと思います。
　だから、Normalも青線で終了したほうがいいのでは・・ あと、白線終了は違和感を感じます

[Hard]

●fine


これくらいです。　音付けも配置もとくに問題ありませんでした。
すべて提案なんでご自由に・・
alacat
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ed May 2011
Topic Starter
すべて修正しましたヽ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ

Thank you for modding ;)
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
ed June 2011
Normal

01:03:397 (3) - http://puu.sh/1Kh8T

Good Map!!

Star~
alacat
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Topic Starter
Thanks ><!! fix Normal :)
Kawayi Rika
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3,635 posts
ed December 2010
For my Lucky Queue ~ God diff spread and perfect mapset >.<

Relax Song and Horie Yui <333333333333

alacat
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Topic Starter
Thanks !! Rika chan :oops:
Fumika
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ed November 2011
Ｐｉｋａ　４　ｄａｙｓ　ａｇｏ　ａｎｄ　ｗａｉｔｉｎｇ　ｆｏｒ　ｒａｎｋ　ｗｗｗｗ
BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
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ed September 2011
Bubbled so fast =_=! Here's a star to keep you company.
Go for rank!
mochi
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ed June 2010
（ ＾ω＾）
alacat
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter

BeatofIke wrote: 3q196d

Bubbled so fast =_=! Here's a star to keep you company.
Go for rank!
sry :( Thanks star :3 !

>mochi

_(:3 」∠)_
787B
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ed November 2010
Whoa, this was fast!
Congrats for bubble alacat!
kanpakyin
Global
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ed June 2010
Hi.

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:147 (1) - I would like to change the volume to 35% at the beginning of the slider if I were you because a bit louder can fit the music better.
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:647 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider so it can fit the drum sound since you have used the drum set of the hitsound.
  2. 00:12:397 (4) - Also, please add a clap on the reverse and the end of the slider, please change to drum set hitsound here: 00:12:584 -
  3. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
  4. 00:35:647 (3) - I can't get the meaning of using triplet here. The rhythm doesn't fit the music, I would recommend a simple 1/2 here instead.
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:022 (4,5,6,7) - Same as normal
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it.
  3. 00:36:397 (6,7,1) - The flow will be better if you can make the distance between the jump more consistent.
  4. 01:19:897 (3) - Add a clap here to fit the music?
Check this mod and I will rank.
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

kanpakyin wrote: 5d1w6q

Hi.　hi :oops:

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:147 (1) - I would like to change the volume to 35% at the beginning of the slider if I were you because a bit louder can fit the music better. fix.
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. ok , remove finish and add whistle.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:647 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider so it can fit the drum sound since you have used the drum set of the hitsound. added.
  2. 00:12:397 (4) - Also, please add a clap on the reverse and the end of the slider, please change to drum set hitsound here: 00:12:584 - added.
  3. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. fix same as easy.
  4. 00:35:647 (3) - I can't get the meaning of using triplet here. The rhythm doesn't fit the music, I would recommend a simple 1/2 here instead. fix.
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:022 (4,5,6,7) - Same as normal fix.
  2. 00:25:147 (1) - The finish hitsound doesn't fit the music here. I would rather change it. added same as easy.
  3. 00:36:397 (6,7,1) - The flow will be better if you can make the distance between the jump more consistent. fix. put spacing 1.79x
  4. 01:19:897 (3) - Add a clap here to fit the music? yes , also add clap same as other diff.
Check this mod and I will rank.
Thank you for modding :)
kanpakyin
Global
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Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Beren
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(ノ・ω・)ノ fast
Guy
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おめでとう ;)
h-728
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おめでとうございます
Colin Hou
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ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｉｎｇ！Σ(ﾟдﾟlll)/おめでとう
cRyo[iceeicee]
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(ノ・ω・)ノ grats!
Pokie
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Colin Hou wrote: 4bp28

ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｉｎｇ！Σ(ﾟдﾟlll)/おめでとう
おめでとうせんせい！流石に早すぎてびっくりしました
Gamu
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おめでと＝
Quilt
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はやすぎやろ　おめｗ
DarknessAngel
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(ノ・ω・)ノ baka yay !
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
ed October 2011
congrats~>д<
Lion8980
42 posts
ed June 2011
perfect slumbers! \o/
gratz for ranked map and thanks for make this *----*
h3k1ru
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gratz moecat :3/
alacat
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(ノ・ω・)ノ Thanks !!
sa me_old
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cute map >w<
Satellite
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congratz~~
Fionana
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おめでと～
Kanari
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Congrats alacat ~ >w<
alacat
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Thanks again ;)
terametis
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イエエエエエ :arrow: :arrow:
S o r d a
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ome~
merchat7
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congrats alacat!
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haee
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おめでとう、hayacat!
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