This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 16 ottobre 2012 at 21:37:01

Artist: Ray
Title: Rakuen PROJECT (TV Size)
Source: To LOVE-Ru Darkness
Tags: osuplayer111 Sekai-nyan Vicho xxheroxx Opening Kentaro Yabuki Saki Hasemi ToLoveRu Trouble ToRabuRu
BPM: 135
Filesize: 15686kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,9 stars, 206 notes)
2. Sekai's Easy (2,1 stars, 100 notes)
3. Vicho's Hard (4,84 stars, 213 notes)
4. xxheroxx's Normal (2,86 stars, 110 notes)

: Ray - Rakuen PROJECT (TV Size)
: Ray - Rakuen PROJECT (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 163rd Beatmap.

I hope you will like and enjoy it (:

Special thanks to Vicho for the video, mp3 and BG <3

Mapset:

Hard - Done.
Vicho's Hard - Done.
xxheroxx's Normal - Done.
Sekai's Easy - Done.

1st :3 Moe map <3

TOOOOOOOOOO LOVE <3

Little IRC mod on Insane diff <3


Good luck on the way Andrea <3

\:D/

To-love-ru <3

BakaVicho o3o

Rayyyyyy <3

Moved to Pending, but probably there will be Vicho's difficulty soon :3

Mod it please~

Quick testplay which resulted in various things being changed, mostly because they played bad or they were just feeling meh.

Special thanks to lolcubes for the nice mod :3

Nya~ Andrea baka moe u.u

[General]

moe and looks fine ヽ(> ω <)ﾉ♪ ♪ ♪

[Sekai's Easy]

00:14:403 ~ i think it sounds better so :

01:04:181 ~ same here ^

01:13:069 (3) ~ sounds better if it's longer :V


[xxheroxx's Normal]

00:13:958 ~ add a circle (?)

[Hard]

00:26:181 (6) ~ nc
00:58:181 (8) ~ lo dovresti fare piu corto e lo spinner farlo partire da:
00:58:514 ~ 00:59:736 almeno è in coerenza con la musica :3

you should map it like a REALLY INSANE... just sayin' since lately you are mapping "Insane" and the next day you change to "Hard" orz

PS: Now I don't know if I should map a diff or not orz

last night I was making a beatmap out of this song, I forgot to check out if there was someone already working on it, btw, if you want some video with hardsubs I have one
I'm a subber and it's no sweat, I finished my version already, just tell me if you want the video with subs, I encoded it already for an osu!beatmap, since your doing it I might just give it you, file is 10.3MB for .avi 6.05MB for .mp4 although I just finished this morning the TL for the song

not really a snapshot, but here's V1

sorry lally no changes ></

:O, anyways, I'll just mod this map whenever I see something that needs to be changed

OMG This Song and this map are so awesome.

Konei wrote: 5x5237

OMG This Song and this map are so awesome.

Thanks a lot

Yes! You're awesome!
Star!~

Waiting for rank.

Nice mapset as always.

Also, I was thinking something about your map number 200 :3

Thank you guys for the really >_<

Love you all <3

I'm glad you like the map :3

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
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[General]

• • Aggiungi un "normal-sliderslide2" silenziato.
  • Aggiungi "Sekai" nelle tags.
  • Audio Lead-In: 1,5
  • Sposta il preview point a 00:59:736.

[Sekai's Easy]

• • 00:12:625 ~ 00:19:736 - Try to do something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  • 00:57:958 (2,3,4) - Hmm maybe it's better to add a spinner instead of all this stuff here; start it at 00:57:958 and end it 00:59:736.
  • 01:13:069 (3) - Remove the slider repetition and end this slider at 01:13:958 then start a new slider at 01:14:403 and end it at 01:15:292.
  • 01:16:625 (4,1,2,3) - Try to do something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  

[xxheroxx's Normal]



[Hard]

• • 00:05:514 (5) - Rimuovi la ripetizione e aggiungi due cerchi, uno a 00:05:958 e l'altro a 00:06:181.
  • 00:06:403 (6) - Stessa cosa.
  • 00:27:292 (9) - Qua la batteria è in 1/6 quindi anche lo slider dovrebbe esserlo, non credi? Fallo finire a 00:27:366 e aggiungi 2 ripetizioni.
  • 00:57:958 (6,7,8) - Elimina questi cerchi/slider e fai iniziare lo spinner a 00:58:069.

i think the diff is fine as it is D: so sorry no changes again orz

Fixed some stuff in my difficulty, thank you :3

[Sekai's Easy]

1. As I see there are various unsnapped inherited points, to snap them correctly!
2. 00:01:958 (3,4,5) - What about making a pattern with 00:01:958 (3,5) - 's sliderbodies overlapped? It's pretty good to see and flows better too!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   68,16,3292,1,8,0:0
   66,96,3736,2,0,B|130:160|218:144,1,160
   288,128,5069,5,8,0:0
   344,188,5514,1,0,0:0
   316,264,5958,1,8,0:0
   284,336,6403,2,0,B|216:336|172:284,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0

3. 00:14:403 (5) - Well,this slider could follow the vocals in a better way,imho. You could simply move this 1/1 backwards,deleting the existing note: here a 3/2 slider would fit pretty good instead.
4. 00:16:181 - If you did ^ and you feel this part quite empty,you could simply add a note here to follow the piano in the bg. Fits quite well imho ^^
5. 00:20:403 - Why aren't you following the synth here? It doesen't have any sense not following it here. You have various choices here: you can add a repeat to this slider,or you could replace this 1/2 slider with another one that finishes at 00:20:403 - or at 00:20:181 - with obviouly a note added 1/2 later. (yep,I know 1/2 notes aren't used that much on Easy diffs,but as the song itself is pretty much slow it's really not a problem)
6. 00:21:514 (2) - Consider splitting this into two slider like in this example:
   
   Honestly,it fits quite better here.
7. 00:26:847 (1) - What about moving this new combo at 00:25:958 (5) - to begin this new phrase correctly and adding another new combo at 00:28:181 (2) - to delineate the drum transition?
8. 00:39:292 (1) - Again,what do you think on removing the new combo here and adding one instead at 00:36:625 (4) -and 00:40:181 (2) - ? The actual pattern is kinda unconsistent.
9. 01:13:069 (3) - Here you can keep this rhythm,as the vocals here are prolonged.

[xxheroxx's Normal]

1. 00:03:958 - Inherited section inutile,avrebbe avuto senso solo se ci fosse stata una nota qui. Eliminala
2. 00:14:181 (2) - Uhm... preferirei qui sentire un ritmo che seguisse letteralmente i tamburi nel bg,potresti accorciarlo sino a 00:14:625 - ,aggiungendogli un repeat e inserirendo una nota su 00:15:292 -,come in questa immagine:
   
3. 00:21:514 - Ancora,inherited section inutile,dovresti eliminarla
4. 00:34:402 (2) - Per seguire il tamburo che ferma momentaneamente la progressione del sintetizzatore,dovresti aggiungere un clap alla fine di questo slider.
5. 01:20:181 - Ancora,inherited section inutilizzata

[Hard]

1. 00:07:292 (7,8,9) - Visto che qui i tamburi proseguono,potresti enfatizzarli facendo un piccolo jump,come questo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,128,7292,1,0,0:0
   408,144,7514,1,0,0:0
   296,44,7736,1,8,0:0

   Potrebbe sembrare un po' random,ma secondo me qui ci sta benissimo. Potresti pure arrangiarli in qualche altro modo se non ti piace ^^
2. 00:18:847 (5) - New Combo qui? Funziona benissimo per separare le vocali dal sintetizzatore,e delimita piuttosto bene il pattern creato
3. 00:51:958 (5,6,7) - Qui è più una cosa soggettiva,quindi fixa solo se vuoi: che ne diresti di trasformare il pattern così? Per me è migliore da giocare,ma come ho detto è una cosa soggettiva:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   228,40,51958,2,0,B|180:40|148:76,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0
   104,152,52403,1,0,0:0
   112,240,52625,2,0,B|96:296|96:296|60:312|20:292,2,135,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0

Thanks for the good mod fixed some stuff :3

http://puu.sh/1d1YL

Everything has been updated, thanks!

This song is just awesome~~


[General]

* -Sekai- to tags?
* Opening to tags?


[Sekai's Easy]

00:19:736 (4) - Short repeating Sliders are kinda confusing for beginners, also I think there are better ways to follow the music here. Like http://puu.sh/1d7e1
Ofc you would have to delete 1 then.
00:48:181 (1) - I think the shape could be a bit smoother for blanket http://puu.sh/1d7gP
00:52:625 (3,4,5) - Don't you think something like http://puu.sh/1d7iU would flow better?
00:57:958 (2) - I really think here should be a NC. The music is changing very noticeable.
01:09:514 (1) - How about removing on repeat and adding a circle? Sounds better to me
01:17:958 (1) - remove the repeat? Sounds too much to me. And beginners will appreciate a little break
01:25:958 (3) - Shortening this to the read tick sounds way better to me~


[xxheroxx's Normal]

00:17:736 - add a circle? For a Normal the rhythm is very much on the white ticks and this feels a bit empty to me :3~
00:26:847 - the Sliderslide at this part sounds noisy to me
00:29:514 (1,2) - Change like this? http://puu.sh/1d7tZ Current is pretty boring to play
00:33:069 (1,2) - ^
00:56:181 (1) - Ui~
01:01:514 (3,4) - This on timeline sounds way better to me~ http://puu.sh/1d7wY
01:08:625 (3,4) - How about removing 4 and extend 3 to place where 4 was? :3 Sounds really cool here and fit the vocals


[Hard]

00:28:625 (8,9) - reduce the spacing for this jump? Feels a bit uncomfortable to play
00:36:625 (5) - NC? Really fitting in music imo
00:40:181 (4) - ^
01:09:958 (1) - If I concentrate on listening to this I can hear sounds of the "I-" on 01:10:069 aswell >.< I was thinking about this for quite a while and didn't know about what to do here, but I think a repeating Slider on 01:09:958 that ends on 01:10:181 was sounding quite good. Hah, I guess it's better to leave it xD
01:12:181 (6,7) - I think this has a cooler flow~ http://puu.sh/1d80b

Eww, that's all I found ~
Perfect mapset like always and good luck Andrea~

http://puu.sh/1dcemhardsubbed video is compressed as .rar and ed as a torrent, don't worry I seed like forever, I have a slow internet so torrent is my only way of sharing/and facebook as well, I'll go time your vid for you

if you have any problems on the video just pm me and I'll change it,

timing is 680

EDIT: is the torrent even working? >.<

scratch that URL here, http://puu.sh/1ddd6 for NYAA s here

just add http://open.nyaatorrents.info:6544/announce in the trackers

Thanks Konei for modding but no changes made >< sorry

Updated, waiting for Vicho's difficulty.

1. Ci sono dei minuscoli artefatti nel wallpaper...who care
2. Aggiungi "ToLoveRu","Trouble", "ToRabuRu" e "Yami" nelle tag(nomi alternativi)
3. Aggiungi "Kentaro Yabuki" e "Saki Hasemi" nelle tag
4. Aggiungi "Saikou no yume wo" Non so se sono giuste come liriche
5. Se la Hard sarà più di 1,4mil, ti converrà aumentare il punteggio della Normal

[Sekai's Easy]

1. [Graphic]
   
   1. 00:03:736 (5,1,2,3,4) - I thought you'd complete that partial hexagon ( the straight line end it abruptly )
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:32:181 (4) - Should be a funnier shape u,u
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:43:736 (1,2) - to nazi those two (they do look bad)
      
      SPOILER

      172,300,43736,6,0,B|140:332|100:328,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
      36,276,44625,2,0,B|64:244|108:248,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   4. 00:48:181 (1) - Fix blanket with
      
      SPOILER

      436,272,48181,6,0,B|467:237|455:191|455:191|492:128,1,160

2. 
   
   1. 00:14:403 (5) - It can seem quite strange to hear this end in 00:15:736 because you can follow that gorgeous gorgheggio there ( anata~ ) that end in 00:16:181 (1). Make it 1/2 longer ? ( totally, it will be 1/1 longer )
   2. 00:18:403 (3,4) - Try this rhythm? Seems better
      
   3. 00:51:292 (x) - Why Stop here? There is the clap...
   4. 00:58:403 (3) - Delete
   5. 00:57:958 (2) - Make a slider that start in 00:58:069 (2) and end in 00:58:403 (add finish at the start) (As now, that note is off.)
   6. 01:13:069 (5) - It can seem quite strange to hear this end in 01:14:403 because you can follow that gorgeous gorgheggio there ( anata~ ) that end in 01:14:847. Make it 1/2 longer ? ( totally, it will be 1/1 longer )
   7. 01:17:958 (1,2,3) - Do this ( as now (3) start from mute and follow many sounds )
      

[xxHeroxx's Normal]

1. Se la Hard sarà più di 1,4mil, ti converrà aumentare il punteggio della Normal (motivi di spread)
2. 00:50:181 (x) - 00:50:625 (x) - Non è proprio un problema, ma delle note qui sarebbero comunque consistenti. Non so se qualcuno continuera a clicckare a vuoto sentendo la musica...
3. 00:50:847 (1,2,3,4) - Potrebbe intrattenere un pò meglio ed essere un pò più divertente
   

[Insane]

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:03:403 (3) - Puoi benissimo evitare l'overmap di mappare una nota che si senta davvero piano(in tutti i sensi) e cancellarla.
      Puoi sostituire lo stream con uno slider, o cancellarla e basta o usare i Soft hitsound su questa nota.
   2. 00:30:403 (x) - Puoi benissimo aggiungere una nota qui (e lasciare un salto x,(2)). cerca di fare il gruppo 00:29:514 (1,x) - simile a 00:30:625 (2,3) -
   3. 01:19:514 (6,1) - Dovrebbe stare meglio e aggiustare le combo
      
      
      SPOILER

      
2. [Combo]
   
   1. 00:10:847 (1) - Direi che sia meglio spostare il New Combo su 00:11:292 (2) ( e aggiungerne uno su 00:08:625 (4) - ? ). So delle ragioni collegate al pattern, ma la combo in quel modo sembrerà strana ò_ò
3. [Hitsound]
   
   1. Visto che non usi il Whistle, metti il Soft-HitWhistle come Normal-HitWhistle?
   2. 00:18:292 (4) - Siccome il suono del clap suona davvero su 00:18:403, clicckando sembra di aver sbagliato (quando poi hai fatto bene...) Potresti togliere il Clap?
   3. 00:48:514 (3) - ^
   4. Non sarà tanto obbligatorio, ma visto che usi lo slidertick a 2, dovresti avere dei tick negli slider simili ai punti sopra- (2 soli, se non sbaglio). Usa lo slidertick hitsound in tali casi?
   5. 00:57:625 (3) - Softie :3, è una nota di piano.
4. [Graphic]
   
   1. 00:33:069 (1) - Preferirei qualcosa del genere come forma
      
      SPOILER

      
5. 00:36:625 (3) - Fallo simile a 00:37:958 (5) - ( da quello che sento, la voce sembra distorta, o meglio disperata. Sta quindi meglio una shape simile a quella usata dopo)
6. 00:40:181 (1) - Fai un wiggle, stesso motivo del precedente
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:52:625 (3) - Mi sembra meglio che sia curvato come 00:50:847 (4) -
8. 01:21:736 (7) - Stona un pò.. blanket?
   [spoilerbox][/spoilerbox]

Non mi fa editare il messaggio ._.
comunque
Video Offset -850 funziona meglio ( all'inizio c'è un'altro beat blu) e così si sincronizzano più eventi )

Updated, thanks :3

Vicho must stop being lazy and move his ass ;_;

Fixed some stuff Thanks :3

http://puu.sh/1eqr2

Updated.

I'm going to kill Vicho.

Andrea wrote: 1r6d5e

I'm going to kill Vicho.

Finally moved to Pending (:

bla bla bla moe mod :3
[Vicho's Hard]

Moe Moe Andrea ~ ><

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions



That's all ~ 2 hard diff is awesome ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Modding Vicho's diff ~


[Vicho's Hard]

* Normal hitclap sounds weird to the song imo :< I would prefer Normal hitclap 2
00:28:403 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why no star here? :< http://puu.sh/1fvuc
00:35:292 (5) - Remove this note? Sounds too much for me
00:42:625 (4) - NC? Music is changing noticeable here
00:51:292 (2,3) - Try soft whistle for the piano?
01:01:514 (1) - Remove clap on end because you don't have it on 00:59:736 and 01:00:625 ?
01:04:625 (5) - Why no circles like on 01:01:069 (5,6) - ?
01:05:069 (1) - remove NC and add on 01:06:403 for following vocal?
01:07:069 (8) - remove this circle?
01:11:292 (2) - Soft finish on start as on 01:10:403
01:18:847 (3,4) - This stack plays oddly imo, spacing it normal has a better flow I think
01:23:292 (6) - NC for vocal? Could be too short, but it fits imo
01:26:181 (5) - Finish? Sounds fiting to me


That's all I got :3

Good luck Andrea again <3 ~

EDIT: Really bubble already? :3 Vichos Diff has just two mods yet, but I guess it's fine with this map quality ~

Updated.

Thank you both ^^

Andrea asked me to mod Vicho's diff only, so here I am

00:20:847 (1): Remove repeat? I don't hear any sound there, so I think that repeat is not necessary. (If you do this, fix the spacing on the next note)
00:29:514 (1): Make this finish at 00:29:847, and add a note in 00:29:958, sounds better.
00:33:069 (1): If you agree with this ^ you know what to do.
01:19:514 (1): Same as 00:20:847
01:24:069 (8): Remove Clap.
01:25:958 (4,5): Move them down a bit? like this

Nice diff ^^

Thanks for the help :3

OK ~ Looks better now ~

Here we go ~ :3

o.o/

The combo color in xxheroxx's Normal is quite strange (Shows in combo color page but don't affect the map...). make it consistent with other diffs plz.

no kud.

Edit: ranked.

It's because of the heart combo before the chorus, no change sorry :3

Thanks for modding anyways!

EDIT: Thank you <3

grats Andrea!!

gratz~~~

(o'д')ノ☆ﾟ*｡Congratu★lations｡*ﾟ☆ヽ('д'o)

Andrea <3

Nymph wrote: 1r5f6y

grats Andrea!!

congrats ~ Andrea

grats!

To love ru da !

gratz Andrea

i like Nana & Momo !!!!!
Grats!!!!!

Congratz~

Thanks everyone <3

Andrea nob ♥

gratz!!

Congrats x3

Congratz Andrea <3

Chewin wrote: 665v4m

Andrea nob ♥

This is a pretty melodic song ;L

awesome *^*

like this map
like the star