Horie Yui 552v46 Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

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ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-07T22:50:59+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 16 ottobre 2012 at 12:59:57

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)
Source: Bakemonogatari
Tags: Melophobia kevincela -kevincela- Hanekawa tsubasa neko opening
BPM: 166
Filesize: 3616kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

Insane (5 stars, 282 notes)
-kevincela-'s Easy (2,71 stars, 97 notes)
Melo's Hard (4,96 stars, 208 notes)
Normal (4,34 stars, 144 notes)

: Horie Yui - Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Loved bakemonogatari, pl0x
Hanekawa's Nyan ~

Here is the mapset:

Easy: 100% (By -kevincela-)
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100% (By Melophobia)
Insane: 100%

Big thank to Kevin and Melophobia for their guest diffs :3

Last edited by Chewin 2012-10-16T11:00:15+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

ed August 2008

2012-10-07T23:20:24+00:00

Keep mapping like this, Chewin.

You're doing a good job :3

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-07T23:26:18+00:00

Andrea wrote: 1r6d5e
Keep mapping like this, Chewin.

You're doing a good job :3

Thank you andrè <3

suzutsukikanade

653 posts

ed July 2011

2012-10-08T00:48:09+00:00

*-----*
Awesome Chewin! Keep it up the good job

Ah...want to give a star but don't have kd enough...

Anyway

Good job and Good luck with ranking

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

ed January 2011

2012-10-08T16:46:04+00:00

>opening della serie di Hanekawa
>bg con Senjougahara
Biagio pls

Bella mappa come al solito, comunque :3

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-08T17:43:10+00:00

Leader wrote: 5hm5f
>opening della serie di Hanekawa
>bg con Senjougahara
Biagio pls

Bella mappa come al solito, comunque :3

Thank you, fixed.
RE THE MAP PL0X

Nemis

854 posts

ed May 2012

2012-10-08T19:37:47+00:00

~:D~

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-11T19:59:37+00:00

Updated kevin's easy :3 Thanks!
Waiting for melo's one

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-12T17:44:09+00:00

Updated the awesome melo's hard and moved to pending! :3
The mapset is ready for mod now, thank you! >.<

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

ed September 2011

2012-10-12T17:45:38+00:00

Let's get this speed-ranked then :3

Nemis

854 posts

ed May 2012

2012-10-12T18:25:15+00:00

ciau

[kevin's Easy]
00:02:222 (1) - Rimuoverei la new combo
00:30:776 (1) - Se lo rendessi più aderente con 00:31:679 (2) - come hai fatto a 00:32:041 (3) - sarebbe più bello
00:43:607 (3) - Spostalo di un quadrato in su nella griglia
01:06:198 (1) - Lo sposterei di due o tre quadretti in su nella griglia giusto per renderlo più aderente a 01:05:475 (3) -

[Normal]
Trovo i beat troppo piccoli per una normal, li ingranderei di una unità (3) e anche la spaziatura mi sembra un poco inappropriata...
Metterei un/dei pattern qui dopo 01:19:210 (2) -

[Melo's Hard]
00:19:752 (6,7,8) - You should put them perfectly! For example if you put 00:19:752 (1) - 1 square to right in the grid it looks better!
00:21:017 (3) - So you should to fix this too if you edit this^
00:25:354 (4) - Unstacked
01:19:210 (4,5,6) - I think this is insane for an hard diff

[Insane]
00:03:487 (1,2,3,1) - Sistemerei questo square
00:42:523 (2,3,1) - Sistemerei un po' questo rombo che mi sembra un tantino storto, ma non ne sono certo (ho uno schermo terribile :c)
00:53:728 (3,1,2,3) - Qui farei un quadrato come quelli di prima, ci starebbe bene!
00:57:523 (1) - Lo centrerei alla perfezione
00:58:969 (1,2,3) - Varierei lo spacing in questi 3 beat (sempre più alto)
01:02:764 (4,5,6,1) - Per rendere il pecorso delle note più bello visivamente ti consiglio di creare un pentagono eliminando il beat in basso a sinistra (quello che non c'entra per intenderci...) in questo modo otterrai un pentagono senza una punta e a mio parere si vedrebbe di gran lunga meglio
01:16:137 (1,2,3) - Varierei lo spacing in questi 3 beat anche qui (sempre più alto)
01:11:981 (1,2,3,4) - Farei un rombo/square pure quì
01:17:222 (1,2,3) - Centrerei questi beat alla perfezione
Mapperei anche la fine (ovvero dopo 01:23:547 (3) - )

Come sempre mi sono incentrato sull'estetica... buona fortuna >w<

Lally

3,176 posts

ed December 2011

2012-10-12T19:09:03+00:00

Ciau Chewingum :3 tellina per te (/ * w * )/

[General]

(i think you should fix it)
better to start at 00:01:137 like at Melo's diff
Starts:
Easy : 00:00:595
Normal : 00:00:595
Hard : 00:01:137
Insane : 00:00:595

[kevincela's easy]
00:06:920 (1) - meglio un finish qui
00:09:812 - finish abassando di poco il volume
00:34:752 (x) - add a circle
01:20:113 (4) - che ne dici di fare un piccolo slider con un clap alla fine del circle

[Normal]
dovresti fare i circle piu grandi nella normal sono un po troppo piccoli per una normal :V

01:11:619 - clap
01:20:113 (3) - piccolo slider con un clap alla fine suona meglio :V

[Melo's Hard]
00:15:595 - finish at begin of slider
00:21:378 (1) - finish
00:23:547 (9) - new combo
00:24:270 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:812 (2) - new combo
00:49:571 (7,8) - (i don't like it ;w;) i think you should reposition the 00:49:932 (8)
00:56:077 - finish
01:11:438 - finish at beginn sounds better i think

[Insane]
non sono molto brava a moddare le insane o forse è perfetta? o3o
00:04:029 (1,2,3,4) - suona malissimo :V perche non provi a lasciare solo i 2 slider

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-12T20:10:27+00:00

Fixed some stuff in the Normal, nothing in Insane sorry :c
Thank you for mod, and thank you for the star Lally >.<

RikiH_

1,149 posts

ed February 2011

2012-10-12T21:15:32+00:00

Provo a moddarla lowl

-kevincela-'s easy

Apri con il notepad e fixa lo SliderMultiplier
0.899999999999999 -> 0.9
00:12:342 A che serve questa section verde?
00:15:595 (1) - Fallo un pochettino più tondo per blankettarlo meglio con lo slider precedente
00:40:716 (3) - Non mi sembra perfettamente simmetrico (Sì, sono pignolo xD)
00:50:294 (1) - Farlo curvo e blankettare con il 3 precedente?
01:01:499 (2) - 1 grid right / 1 grid down (grid level 4)
01:20:655 Finish?

Normal

00:02:041 (1) - 1 grid up per non farlo toccare con quello successivo?
00:03:125 (3) - Anche questo, allontanalo leggermente dallo slider
00:09:812 Silenzierei questo spinner come nelle altre diff o.o
00:21:017 (5) - Stessa cosa, if you know what I mean
00:29:511 (3,4) - Non mi piace il modo in cui si toccano

00:38:366 (5) - Derp
01:10:896 (2)

Melo's Hard

00:24:993 (3,4) - I think these are not perfectly stacked
00:28:426 (1,3) - The same

Insane

00:24:270 (1) Qua hai aggiunto finish, perchè non anche in 00:27:161 (1) e 00:30:053 (1) ?
00:24:812 (2) Per rimanere coerente con i pattern successivi ti consiglio di aggiungere una NC qua e toglierla da 00:25:535 (1)
00:38:728 (1) Finish?
00:41:619 (1) Same
00:46:679 (1,2) Magari sostituisci con degli stream da 1/4 per rendere il tutto più insane lol
00:59:872 (1,2,3) Riesci a fare in modo che queste tre note siano simmetriche al centro?

Awesome map, gratz <3

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-12T21:55:58+00:00

RikiH_ wrote: 4c5r3l
Provo a moddarla lowl

Normal

00:02:041 (1) - 1 grid up per non farlo toccare con quello successivo?
00:03:125 (3) - Anche questo, allontanalo leggermente dallo slider
00:09:812 Silenzierei questo spinner come nelle altre diff o.o
00:21:017 (5) - Stessa cosa, if you know what I mean
00:29:511 (3,4) - Non mi piace il modo in cui si toccano
00:38:366 (5) - Derp
01:10:896 (2)

Fixed all except 00:09:812. Nelle altre diff gli spinner finiscono in un altro momento

Insane

00:24:270 (1) Qua hai aggiunto finish, perchè non anche in 00:27:161 (1) e 00:30:053 (1) ? No suonano male
00:24:812 (2) Per rimanere coerente con i pattern successivi ti consiglio di aggiungere una NC qua e toglierla da 00:25:535 (1) Done
00:38:728 (1) Finish? Nope
00:41:619 (1) Same Nope
00:46:679 (1,2) Magari sostituisci con degli stream da 1/4 per rendere il tutto più insane lol Nope
00:59:872 (1,2,3) Riesci a fare in modo che queste tre note siano simmetriche al centro? Nope, it's intentional

Awesome map, gratz <3

Thank you for mod and 3 stars riki <3

Darksonic

2,805 posts

ed November 2010

2012-10-12T23:53:12+00:00

Prowin, here is my mod :3

-kevincela-'s Easy:

00:26:258 (4): You should add a Finish or a Clap in the end of the slider, like the other diffs, feels empty without a hitsound.
00:29:149 (3): ^
00:37:824 (3): ^
00:40:716 (3): ^
00:42:342 (1,3): Make them like this ? (In the pic that pattern is not symmetric, just showing sliders xD)
00:45:776 (3,4): Why you used 1,0x Distance here instead 1,1x like the whole map?, spacing changes seems bad in Easy diff.
01:16:318 (2,3,4,5): I'm not sure about this part, probably this can be a little hard for beginners, so could you change these notes by 2 sliders instead?

Normal:

00:01:679 (3,1): Well this is not a good idea in a Normal diff, spacing here is a little big for newbies, so you should change this and make the same distance you used before.
00:06:017 (3,4,1): Bad spacing here.
00:11:981 (1): I don't like this note, feels a little random, try to extend the spinner until here and delete this note.
00:18:487 (1,2,3): What about this ? to fix spacing of the next notes if you do this.
00:28:788 (1): Delete NC, if you have 6 beats in the previous pattern, 7 doesn't make a big difference at all.
00:31:679 (1): ^
00:40:354 (1): ^
00:45:776 (1): ^
01:05:836 (2,1): Seems better like this.
01:20:113 (2,1): Bad spacing.

Melo's Hard:

00:29:511 (3): Move to x:205 y:207, just a minimal detail.
00:38:728 (1): The end of this slider is not well stacked with these (6,7,8), check it.
01:00:414 (1): This slider should be in x:256 y:112 so the pattern will be symmetric. (Use CTRL+J on (4) and you will see)

Insane:

00:04:481 (2): To be honest this note doesn't follow anything, so maybe it's better if you delete it and make the previous spinner ends here, sounds better.
00:15:234 (4): What about CTRL+G on this one?
00:42:884 (1): Is this Whistle intentional?
00:52:463 (1,2,3,4): Make two 1/2 sliders instead?, and try to use more spacing here.
01:11:981 (1): You forgot a Clap on the end of this slider.
01:18:848 (5,6,7,8,1): Why not using Normal hitsound for this stream instead Soft and Claps?, sounds better, and you used it on 01:11:438 (3,4,5,6,7,8)

And that's all, hope it helps, good luck :3

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,471 posts

ed July 2011

2012-10-12T23:59:19+00:00

/o/M4M!

[General]

Add "op5" "opening" "meg rock" to tags due to the song
Can you change BG to .jpg? less file size /o/

[kevin]

00:08:366 (3) - (reserve) maybe add whistle?
01:06:198 (1) - finish? The song has a finish sound :3
Great!!

[Normal]

00:02:041 (1,2) - (realllllllly naaaaaaaaazi)So you don't make a blanket here? 00:00:595 (1,2) - & 00:03:487 (1,2) - has so... make blanket feel better imo o.o
00:32:945 (1) - (begin & reserve) clap? sounds better imo
00:44:511 (1) - ^
01:00:776 (1) - It will be behind that spinner "押忍", so remove?
That's hard D;

[Melo]

01:00:053 (3) - I hear no finish here, so remove?
01:06:198 (1) - finish? sounds nice /o/
Melo why you are so awesome

[Insane]

00:04:390 (2) - Here's a sound in the song, so whistle i think?
00:08:908 (3) - (begin) ^
00:23:185 (5) - I don't here any finish here, are you serious?
00:35:835 (1) - Increase about 10% vol. here, too quiet imo D:
01:11:981 (1) - (end) forget clap ;P
Nice >w<!

Chewin why you are so pro D: sorry for my poor mod D:!

tutuhaha

3,053 posts

ed October 2010

2012-10-13T00:02:00+00:00

[Easy]
try to delete unuse greenline
00:42:342 (1,3) - I dont think those too pretty enough :O..
and I think this diff maybe need more loud finish

[Normal]
00:08:728 (2,3) - because i cant hear the clear rhythm so when I saw this I think this is a litter jump....
hope you can add a note on 00:09:089 - or make a litter far space between those slider
00:29:511 (3,4) - look too close
00:36:378 (1) - this rhythm I feel uncomfortable to play :O
maybe try this http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/459930
00:37:463 (4) - add NC
00:47:945 (2) - end at 00:48:306 ?
00:49:571 (5) - NC begin there？
00:56:619 (2,3) - space
01:04:571 (1,2,1) - too close and try to make 2-1 look more better
01:16:499 (2) - low finish？
this diff some rhythm use slider-note-slider play feeling uncomfortable...maybe try to use some slider-slider note？..

[Hard]
00:36:378 (3,4,5,6) - I cant read very well，when you test play you will know why I cant read it
00:43:788 (9) - delete
00:49:932 (8,1) - too far jump in this diff，try to make this jump like 2.00X
01:19:210 (4) - +NC

[Insane]
00:16:499 (4) - delete this note and make slider end on there
00:30:053 (1) - make a small jump, same as this one 00:27:161 (1) -
00:32:945 (1) - ^
00:38:728 (1) - ^
00:41:619 (1) - ^
try to ctrl+r^？
00:44:330 (X) - you need note on there I think
01:02:583 (X) - ^
01:11:981 (1) - add clap at the end
01:16:499 (2) - low finish

Aurele

Global

7,598 posts

ed January 2011

2012-10-13T00:08:33+00:00

Saw this map from your modding queue. So M4M?

[Easy]

00:12:342 - what is this timing used for? You could delete it if its useless.
•00:01:137 (2) - Unsymmetrical slider. Here's the code to make it more better:

I just have nothing to say here. This Easy is just great as it is.

[Normal]

Slider velocity to 1,40 when Easy is 0,90 and Hard is 1,40? Try to change it a bit.

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:679 - Like the other difficulties, add a whistle to these points:

00:01:679
00:03:125
00:04:571

•00:32:945 - After a quick recheck, a clap will be better here.
•01:15:957 - Add a clap here for the consistency.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
Seems to be pretty good.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:27:161 - For the music's change, a new combo may be prefered. Also, delete the new combo to the next object.
•00:30:053 - Same thing as above.
•00:45:776 (3) - i don't understand why a new combo should be added here. Delete it.
•00:57:523 (4) - That loner slider. Delete the new combo.

[Hard]

AR-1 Seems to be better for an Hard Difficulty.
Why starting at 00:01:137 when the other difficulty has started to 00:00:595? Add something here to make every difficulties consistent.

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
Hitsounds seems to be perfectly consistent. Nice job.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:37:101 (6,7,8) - I sincerely do not like this because we're clicking three time at the same place, if it was a stream I wouldn't be against it but since its by 1/2, it will be better to move them.
•00:42:884 (6,7,8) - Same here.
•00:58:607 (9) - This slider's end is almost overlapping the slider 6. By moving it to x:404 y:268, the blancket will be better and it won't overlap.
•01:02:945 (7,8) - The emplacement of these circles seems to be really weird and are also overlapping a slider. By moving them to x:44 y:188 and stacking the next slider with the end of this slider 01:01:860 (5) - will be perfect.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:23:547 - For the music change, I will suggest you to add a new combo here also, the combo seems to be too long.
•00:46:679 (8) - Same here.
•01:11:438 (7) - Same thing here.
•01:19:210 - For the vocal change, add a new combo here. Also with the pattern, it will fit better.

[Insane]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:08:908 - I think you should add a whistle here because you've added one to 00:04:571 also, it sounds pretty good and it felt empty without the whistle. As I just see on Hard, there's a whistle here. So why not adding one here to make it consistent with every difficulties?
•00:23:908 - A clap can be added here for the consistency
•00:32:945 (1) - For the consistenct with two of your previous sliders (00:27:161 (1) - and 00:30:053 (1) -) , add a clap tp both start and end.
•00:44:511 (1) - Same as above, add a clap to the beginning and to the reverse arrow.
•01:12:342 - Add a clap here for the consistency.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:09:451 (4) - This blancket with the previous slider can be better. Maybe moving it to x:388 y:60 will be better.
•01:22:824 (1,2,3) - Make these circles to have the same spacing. So the circle 2 can be moved to x:160 y:284; The circle 1 can be moved to x:360 y:284

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:42:884 (1) - I don't understand why you have added a new combo here.. Like the other combos, it will look very weird if you're adding a new combo right here.
•00:54:270 (4) - I don't think a new combo is necessary here. The vocal is mostly the same thing as the other combos. So delete this one.

Pretty well made, you've made a nice job here.

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

ed September 2011

2012-10-13T07:01:54+00:00

Fixed a little stuff, Thanks guys
http://puu.sh/1ejId

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,857 posts

ed February 2010

2012-10-13T09:49:07+00:00

Thanks guys,fixed some of your mods! (:

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 59872
Countdown: 0
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Title:Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:Horie Yui
Creator:Chewin
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Bakemonogatari
Tags:Melophobia kevincela -kevincela- Hanekawa tsubasa
BeatmapID:182406
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OverallDifficulty:2
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71077,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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78125,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
78306,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
83547,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,253,107
Combo2 : 28,28,255
Combo3 : 255,0,255
Combo4 : 229,229,229

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Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-13T13:28:05+00:00

Awww thank you guys! Fixed some stuff!
And also updated melo's and kevin's diff :3

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,857 posts

ed February 2010

2012-10-13T14:22:50+00:00

[Normal]

00:03:125 (3) - Non dovresti spaziarlo con DS 1.1x qui? Lo hai fatto su tutti i pattern iniziali tranne questo xD
00:08:728 (2,3) - Beh,questo patern 1/1 personalmente stona un po' qui. Ti direi invece di seguire le vocali,usando un pattern 1/2 come questo:

Al massimo potresti anche ridurre lo slider 3 di 1/2 per aggiungerci al suo posto una nota,fai te!
00:24:270 (2) - Ti sei scordato di usare i finish che hai usato anche dopo,aggiungili qui!
00:56:077 (1,2) - Visto che con 00:57:523 (1) - hai seguito le vocali,ti direi di farlo anche qui,accostando 2 sliders 1/1 e una nota,come in questo esempio:
01:16:860 (3) - Dovresti aggiungere un finish all'inizio di questo slider,ci sta piuttosto bene,e l'hai usato anche nell'Insane,quindi perchè no?

[Melo's Hard]

00:41:077 (7) - What about reverting this slider by using CTRL+G? It's just a personal opinion here,but I think that the dropoff with 00:40:716 (6) - will play perfect by doing so,and it will create too a nice little jump with 00:41:619 (1,2) - that plays really well :3
00:57:523 (6) - What about adding a New Combo here? It emphatizes really good the synth being played there!
01:15:414 (2) - Another subjective thing: what do you think about reverting its sliderbody curve? That's a really little thing,but it will create a nice arc-shaped pattern with 01:15:776 (3,4) - ,that plays really good!
Why is your mapping style so perfect D:

[Insane]

00:43:788 (4,5) - Hmm...Personalmente qui preferirei un flow un po' più discendente di quello attuale,come in questo pattern che ti ho fatto adesso:
SPOILER
[
```
144,276,43788,2,0,B|180:304|252:300,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,264,44149,1,0,0:0:0
```
01:11:077 (1,2) - Perchè non metti il new combo sulla seconda nota,al posto della prima? Ci sta molto meglio per iniziare la nuova sezione dei tamburi

Scusa della mod di emme,adesso ho un mal di testa che mi sta facendo innervosire >_<

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-13T16:25:10+00:00

Fixed some kevin, thank you :3

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2012-10-14T03:47:47+00:00

Hi ~ Chewin ~

I'm going here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 2o6n

Change AudioLeadIn 2000 to Easy,Normal,Insane diff,since first note start to 00:00:595.

[Insane] 1o141

01:11:981 (1,2,3,4) - You can try make diamond here?
01:19:571 (3,1) - Maybe change a slider more better.

[Melo's Hard] 226u6e

AR-1 much better with play and a hard diff setting.

[Normal] 606311

00:23:547 - Remove finish.
00:24:270 (2) - Remove claps.
00:29:511 (6,7) - Spacing looks weird.
00:33:487 - Add a circle,follow with lyrics.
00:45:053 - ^
01:00:776 (1) - Try move this slider,because of this.

[-kevincela-'s Easy] 6w3q5q

00:08:005 (2) - Change new combo to here.

That's all ~ Nice map anyway, good job ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2012-10-14T07:50:09+00:00

Hold on Rika !!!

Hi Chewin ~~ as I promised here

-kevincela-'s Easy
00:24:993 (6) - new combo here instead and remove the previous one
00:30:776 (1) - right 2 grid to balance it more

Normal
fine

Melo's Hard
00:46:679 (8) - prefer new combo here

Insane
00:51:559 (4) - rhythm like this to follow the vocal and correspond with 00:53:185 (1,2) -

SPOILER

00:59:149 (2) - make this as 1/4 triplet repeat slider

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-14T09:22:33+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631
Hi ~ Chewin ~ Hi Rika moe chan *-*

[General] 2o6n

Change AudioLeadIn 2000 to Easy,Normal,Insane diff,since first note start to 00:00:595. Agree, changed

[Insane] 1o141

01:11:981 (1,2,3,4) - You can try make diamond here? I like as it is now sorry D:

01:19:571 (3,1) - Maybe change a slider more better. It's an insane, it's ok ;3

[Normal] 606311

00:23:547 - Remove finish. okay

00:24:270 (2) - Remove claps. uh yes

00:29:511 (6,7) - Spacing looks weird. Fixed using distance snap

00:33:487 - Add a circle,follow with lyrics. I know but I want to keep it easier, it's already enough hard

00:45:053 - ^ Same

01:00:776 (1) - Try move this slider,because of this. Good catch, Rika. It should be fine now

[-kevincela-'s Easy] 6w3q5q

00:08:005 (2) - Change new combo to here. Okay

That's all ~ Nice map anyway, good job ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Thank you rika chan, helpful mod, and also changed the AR in melo's diff ;3 We decided it together via IRC

Frostmourne wrote: 292v3n
Hold on Rika !!!

Hi Chewin ~~ as I promised here

-kevincela-'s Easy
00:24:993 (6) - new combo here instead and remove the previous one Kevin prefers to keep it as it is now
00:30:776 (1) - right 2 grid to balance it more nice, done

Insane
00:51:559 (4) - rhythm like this to follow the vocal and correspond with 00:53:185 (1,2) - I used the slider on the long white tick so I think it's ok

SPOILER

00:59:149 (2) - make this as 1/4 triplet repeat slider Nice, used 2 circles instead of slider

Thank you frost! <3

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2012-10-14T13:30:07+00:00

OK ~ Rechecked in irc and good job ~

Here you go :3

Hyacine

6,376 posts

ed February 2011

2012-10-14T13:48:11+00:00

That fast o.o

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

ed October 2010

2012-10-14T16:31:59+00:00

omg, bubble? You are really fast!! And I couldn't mod it again

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-14T18:54:12+00:00

mancusojuanmattos wrote: 4a423w
omg, bubble? You are really fast!! And I couldn't mod it again

ahah I'm just lucky because of my M4M queue, rika posted there xD

Aurele

Global

7,598 posts

ed January 2011

2012-10-15T03:42:15+00:00

/facedesk

Flanster

5,938 posts

ed August 2010

2012-10-15T03:45:08+00:00

The heck, slow down lmao

cRyo[iceeicee]

1,885 posts

ed May 2011

2012-10-15T05:10:00+00:00

orz wait ==!!!
will post soon !

[-kevincela-'s Easy]

SPOILER

00:25:535 - add N 40% volume section
00:28:426 - N 50
00:31:318 - N 30
00:37:101 - N 40
00:39:993 - N 50
00:42:884 - N 30
00:57:523 (2) - whistle arrow

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:24:270 - 00:46:318 there a lot of things i wanted to write but decided to give u completed diff, i added some N section + some whistles, didnt touch anything (exept those 4 notes because i think it sounds much better without them ) i hope u will use it cause its not even suggestion, i simpy added somehing that exist in music http://puu.sh/1f48R
also i think this notes should be removed
00:26:800 (5) -
00:38:366 (5) -
00:41:258 (6) -
00:44:149 (5) -
00:06:920 (1,2) - change it to slider ? http://puu.sh/1f3pq
00:08:005 (1) - whistle tail also, fits with BG music !
00:23:547 (1) - clap or finish or both on head
00:57:523 (1) - whistle arrow
01:09:089 (1,2) - maybe change it like this ? http://puu.sh/1f3gP
00:58:969 (1) - this spinner little bit strange, i think better to map through it and make some changes in next pattern http://puu.sh/1f3iL
01:11:258 (3) - hmm maybe this ? http://puu.sh/1f3m6
01:01:860 (3) - whistle
01:03:306 (1) - w
01:13:246 (4) - w
01:14:872 (1) - w
01:16:860 (3) - maybe finish ?
01:20:113 (1) - remove this and add long slider ? http://puu.sh/1f3xi
also i wonder why 2.6☆ diff and 4.3☆ diff have same OD, +1 here i guess o:

~~Collabophobiaaaa~~[Melo's Hard]

SPOILER

audio lead in 2000, same with other diffs
00:08:005 (1) - stack it on the next slider o: ?
00:13:246 (3) - whistle head
00:13:969 (5) - whitle tail and 00:14:691 (7) - whistle head ?
00:15:595 (1) - w
00:16:137 (2) - w
00:16:860 (4) - w
00:17:583 (6) - w tail/head
00:19:029 (4) - w
00:19:752 (6,7,8,9) - sliders whistle head + whistle note
00:21:378 (1) - w
00:21:920 (4) - w
00:22:643 (6) - w
00:23:547 (9) - w
00:23:908 (10) - add N 40% volume section for this slider ?
00:37:101 (6) - NC for changing rhytm
00:42:884 (6) - NC for changing rhytm
00:49:932 (8) - place this note in front of slider ? http://puu.sh/1f3OT simply didnt want to move cursor back, cause this part is calm and i think easy spacing fits better then jump
00:51:920 (6) - can be w head and tail (fits with this BG music sound)
01:06:198 (1) - i think remove w from tail =="
01:09:089 (1) - finish instead of whistle ? (also maybe remove whistle from tail and add on next note o:)
01:19:390 (2,3) - umm i think ctrl+g is better =="
01:20:294 (1) - end last note in the middle ww http://puu.sh/1f3RH

[Insane]

SPOILER

same green lines as N diff, ur choise use it or not

00:13:246 (2) - w
00:13:969 (4) - w head and tail
00:14:691 (2) - w
00:15:595 (1) - w
00:16:137 (3) - w
00:16:860 (5) - w
00:17:945 (3) - w
00:19:029 (2) - w
00:19:210 (3) - w tail
00:19:752 (1) - w tail/head
00:20:475 (3) - w
00:20:836 (5) - w
00:21:378 (1) - w
00:21:920 (2) - w head/tail
00:22:643 (4) - w
00:23:547 (1) - w 60% volume as previous
00:58:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh nice you changed those 3 notes ww, but i suggesting this ! http://puu.sh/1f3Vy
01:11:077 (3) - i think NC should be here, cause changing rhytn =="
01:22:824 (1,2,3) - maybe little bit different triangle ww http://puu.sh/1f3Wq

Last edited by cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-10-15T08:19:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-10-15T08:10:16+00:00

[Easy]
Eew, why Circle size 2? So huuuuge and considering the general pace of the map, 3 would work better.
00:23:547 (4) - I'm not a fan of short repeat sliders like this in an Easy (especially when there's another object one beat away)

[Normal]
00:24:812 (1) - I find it interesting that this section, which is a lot less intense than the section after it (00:47:402 - ), is much much harder and more dense with hit objects. You might want to simplify this section and make the next section a little harder.
01:00:776 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. Try to give around 2 beats after for a Normal of this BPM.
This mostly seems fine, but I wonder why you change so much between the DS and the adjusting for less overlap on the 1/2 rhythms. Stick with one or the other. I prefer them to have no overlap q: A reduction in the use of 1/2s might be better overall as well.

[Hard]
01:12:884 (3,4) - This stack was kind of unexpected and killed your flow.

[Insane]
The intro is really new combo spammy.

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-15T12:22:05+00:00

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote: 1i33e
[Normal]

SPOILER

00:24:270 - 00:46:318 there a lot of things i wanted to write but decided to give u completed diff, i added some N section + some whistles, didnt touch anything (exept those 4 notes because i think it sounds much better without them ) i hope u will use it cause its not even suggestion, i simpy added somehing that exist in music http://puu.sh/1f48R I love you
also i think this notes should be removed

00:26:800 (5) -

00:38:366 (5) -

00:41:258 (6) -

00:44:149 (5) - Nope.

00:06:920 (1,2) - change it to slider ? http://puu.sh/1f3pq I think it's fine as it is now

00:08:005 (1) - whistle tail also, fits with BG music ! sounds good, added!

00:23:547 (1) - clap or finish or both on head both

00:57:523 (1) - whistle arrow arrow and end

01:09:089 (1,2) - maybe change it like this ? http://puu.sh/1f3gP I think mine is better and easier to play for a normal

00:58:969 (1) - this spinner little bit strange, i think better to map through it and make some changes in next pattern http://puu.sh/1f3iL it follows the music I want to keep it

01:11:258 (3) - hmm maybe this ? http://puu.sh/1f3m6 It's fine, or it would be too hard

01:01:860 (3) - whistle

01:03:306 (1) - w

01:13:246 (4) - w

01:14:872 (1) - w too loud imho :\

01:16:860 (3) - maybe finish ? yup already added by myself

01:20:113 (1) - remove this and add long slider ? http://puu.sh/1f3xi cond

also i wonder why 2.6☆ diff and 4.3☆ diff have same OD, +1 here i guess o: k

[Insane]

SPOILER

same green lines as N diff, ur choise use it or not I use

00:13:246 (2) - w

00:13:969 (4) - w head and tail

00:14:691 (2) - w

00:15:595 (1) - w

00:16:137 (3) - w

00:16:860 (5) - w

00:17:945 (3) - w

00:19:029 (2) - w

00:19:210 (3) - w tail

00:19:752 (1) - w tail/head

00:20:475 (3) - w

00:20:836 (5) - w

00:21:378 (1) - w

00:21:920 (2) - w head/tail

00:22:643 (4) - w

00:23:547 (1) - w 60% volume as previous I don't want to use these hitsounds sorry, too loud IMHO

00:58:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh nice you changed those 3 notes ww, but i suggesting this ! http://puu.sh/1f3Vy I like the triplet more

01:11:077 (3) - i think NC should be here, cause changing rhytn ==" it should be fine now

01:22:824 (1,2,3) - maybe little bit different triangle ww http://puu.sh/1f3Wq nu

Thank you cryo <3

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-15T12:42:49+00:00

Garven wrote: 2k1v16
[Normal]
00:24:812 (1) - I find it interesting that this section, which is a lot less intense than the section after it (00:47:402 - ), is much much harder and more dense with hit objects. You might want to simplify this section and make the next section a little harder. It's because here I just can follow the vocal sound, while from 00:47:402 I used a costant 1/1 rhythm. Btw, I made the first part easier and kept the second you mentioned as it was. It should be fine now
01:00:776 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. Try to give around 2 beats after for a Normal of this BPM. I want to keep it for 2 valid reason; 1) the map isn't the easiest of the mapset and 2) the spinner is long enough to have an 1/1 circle after it, considering again that there is an easy diff
This mostly seems fine, but I wonder why you change so much between the DS and the adjusting for less overlap on the 1/2 rhythms. Stick with one or the other. I prefer them to have no overlap q: A reduction in the use of 1/2s might be better overall as well. Following your first point I reduced this 1/2 rhythm, it should be ok now

[Insane]
The intro is really new combo spammy.Removed useless new combos

Thank you Garven, waiting for kevin and melo's replies

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,857 posts

ed February 2010

2012-10-15T12:57:43+00:00

Garven wrote: 2k1v16
[Easy]
Eew, why Circle size 2? So huuuuge and considering the general pace of the map, 3 would work better. You're right,I actually thought that too but in the end I haven't done it. Fixed
00:23:547 (4) - I'm not a fan of short repeat sliders like this in an Easy (especially when there's another object one beat away) Sorry,but I want to mantain it,it plays pretty good and follows the drums in a really good way.

@cryo: just fixed the whistle,imho the normal hitsounds there sound quite awfully.

Thanks for the mods guys!

SPOILER

osu file format v10

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59872
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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Title:Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Sugar Sweet Nightmare (TV Size)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:Horie Yui
Creator:Chewin
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Bakemonogatari
Tags:Melophobia kevincela -kevincela- Hanekawa tsubasa neko opening
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Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

ed September 2011

2012-10-15T14:49:03+00:00

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote: 1i33e
~~Collabophobiaaaa~~[Melo's Hard]

audio lead in 2000, same with other diffs my diff starts later than others so it's ok

00:08:005 (1) - stack it on the next slider o: ? ok and rearranged this part

00:13:246 (3) - whistle head

00:13:969 (5) - whitle tail and 00:14:691 (7) - whistle head ?

00:15:595 (1) - w

00:16:137 (2) - w

00:16:860 (4) - w

00:17:583 (6) - w tail/head

00:19:029 (4) - w

00:19:752 (6,7,8,9) - sliders whistle head + whistle note

00:21:378 (1) - w

00:21:920 (4) - w

00:22:643 (6) - w

00:23:547 (9) - w All whistles added, and Added some more myself

00:23:908 (10) - add N 40% volume section for this slider ? added it to where the previous slider is

00:37:101 (6) - NC for changing rhytm not that notable imo

00:42:884 (6) - NC for changing rhytm ^

00:49:932 (8) - place this note in front of slider ? http://puu.sh/1f3OT simply didnt want to move cursor back, cause this part is calm and i think easy spacing fits better then jump ok, removed the note and made the slider repeating

00:51:920 (6) - can be w head and tail (fits with this BG music sound) no whistles in this section

01:06:198 (1) - i think remove w from tail ==" yeah

01:09:089 (1) - finish instead of whistle ? (also maybe remove whistle from tail and add on next note o:) both fixed

01:19:390 (2,3) - umm i think ctrl+g is better ==" good flow makes the jump so bad

01:20:294 (1) - end last note in the middle ww http://puu.sh/1f3RH i thought i did.. fixed

Really helped a lot. seriously you should become MAT x_x thanks

Garven wrote: 2k1v16
[Hard]
01:12:884 (3,4) - This stack was kind of unexpected and killed your flow.

Fixed. Thanks very much :3

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ http://puu.sh/1f7Tx

gogo!

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-15T14:51:42+00:00

Fixed the spinner in the Normal diff.
Updated also kevin's and melo's diff

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-10-16T08:35:34+00:00

[Easy]
I mention the short sliders like that because it's hard to tell when they are going to end for Easy players. It's best to make everything completely clear and easy to read considering the difficulty level.

[Normal]
00:24:270 (2,1) - Spacing was surprisingly large here
00:31:679 (3) - Inconsistent spacing here
Plays a lot better now, g'jorb

[Insane]
00:11:981 - Why is the green line here? Feels premature.

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

ed December 2010

Topic Starter

2012-10-16T10:11:11+00:00

Garven wrote: 2k1v16
[Normal]
00:24:270 (2,1) - Spacing was surprisingly large here k
00:31:679 (3) - Inconsistent spacing here k
Plays a lot better now, g'jorb yup thanks

[Insane]
00:11:981 - Why is the green line here? Feels premature. It's because there was a circle here xD fixed

About the short slider in the kevin's diff I agree with him. It's just one and it's perfectly playable, I don't see any problem to use it :\