This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月3日 星期日 at 22:43:32

Artist: marble
Title: Suisai Candy
Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags: Nymph ending Netsukawa Naryuga collab karenying
BPM: 143
Filesize: 17519kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Collab (4.99 stars, 671 notes)
2. Easy (2.19 stars, 223 notes)
3. Hard (4.82 stars, 465 notes)
4. Normal (4.3 stars, 301 notes)
5. Taiko Collab (4.83 stars, 1168 notes)

: marble - Suisai Candy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7 「ましろ色シンフォニー - The color of lovers -」ED marble - 水彩キャンディー

Taiko Collab by Naryuga
Collab with hentai Nymph
SB with ying

Ahh is collab ><
Can't ask for one guest diff ><
But ganbatte! Will owe for this map.

Hi there~~mod for request XDD

General:

1. Timing: 建议offset -8ms
2. BG.png没有被作为背景使用，如果要是SB用的话尺寸超标了。
3. 我就是不吐槽audio lead-in变成了1004
4. Artist应该大写开头吧

Storyboard:

1. "bg ef.png"尺寸超标

2. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\artist.png",320,240
   _M,0,7820,8030,126,89,236,89
   _F,0,7820,8030,0,1
   _F,0,8030,19778,1
   _F,0,19778,20198,1,0
   _F,0,20198,,0

   最后一行冗余代码，删掉

3. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\title.png",320,240
   _S,0,11177,,0.816
   _M,0,11177,11386,554,161,470,161
   _F,0,11177,11386,0,1
   _F,0,11386,20198,1
   _F,0,20198,20617,1,0
   _F,0,20617,,0

   最后一行冗余代码，删
4. 208170 - 03:28:170 - 这里画面切换太突然了，考虑做个渐入效果?
5. 255163 - 4:15:163 - 同样，虽然是歌曲结尾但是觉得可以做个渐出的效果?
6. 最后给个小建议，下次再做的时候，blue/green/purple三个ring完全可以用一个white取代，然后每次调用的时候用C代码改颜色即可

Easy:

1. 00:01:317 - 干掉这个break，出bug的
   
2. 00:04:673 - 这里也是，这东西很容易被MAT找茬吧。当然如果你真要坚持打擦边球咱也没办法……
3. 02:08:869 (3) - 这里不来个NC么？
4. 03:58:799 - 加个note？

Easy没啥可以吐槽的……

Normal:

1. 00:56:701 (5) - 感觉从前面红线起听着舒服一点？
2. 01:02:575 - 考虑加个note？
3. 01:13:275 (3,4,5,6) - 这里听着节奏有点别扭，考虑调整下节奏？
   
4. 01:26:701 - 和上面类似的建议……
5. 01:36:771 (4) - 做成slider到下一个红线，或者下个红线那里加note？

Hard:

1. 00:29:638 (3,4,5,6) - 考虑排个anti-stream?
2. 00:41:491 (10) - 我觉得这里用这种过渡的话可以考虑把00:40:547 (7) - 改成note做个三连？
3. 00:43:065 (4,5) - 做成先slider后note听起来会更舒服一点
4. 00:46:421 (4,5,6) - 这里……感觉应该是00:47:051 - 00:47:470 是一个slider，前面用slider或者2个1/1的note都可以，后面留空拍或者补note这样
5. 01:09:498 (3,4) - 建议做成三连
6. 01:15:163 (1) - 这个应该从前面红线起吧，这空拍有些难受……
7. 01:21:876 (1) - 同上
8. 01:23:135 (3) - 这里也是，总觉得硬生生截断了一个连贯的长音好难受啊……
9. 02:02:365 (1) - 考虑拿去和(2)叠？
10. 02:17:261 (4,5) - 向前挪红线
11. 02:21:876 (7) - 考虑从前面红线开始？
12. 02:32:890 (2) - approach circle从HP bar下面出来的可能会导致一点读图困难？
13. 02:52:505 (1) - 从红线开始？
14. 02:58:589 (6) - 感觉后面那组NC从这里开始比较舒服？
15. 03:08:030 (6,7,8,1) - 做成anti stream一点一点拉下来？
16. 03:38:449 - 加note？

Collab:

1. 01:10:128 (1,2) - 我觉得这里把(1)做成折返，然后(2)改成note和后面的4个做成5连会更舒服一点
2. 01:23:554 (1) - ctrl+r?
3. 02:27:121 (6) - 改成向左弯会感觉更流畅一些？
4. 02:57:330 (4,1,2) - 这里的节奏。。。考虑稍微调整下？
   

恩差不多就这些了，给星闪人～～

Taiko Finished ~



: marble - Suisai Candy (No_Gu) [Taiko Collab].osu

Netsukawa wrote: 3u3t6u

Boy is Blue , Girl is Pink and What is the color of Love ?
mashiro

fixed some things on sco's mod and updated taiko diff.orz still working on SB

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

[General]

SB换背景的时候用渐变？ 闪一下眼花= =

[Hard]

01:02:365 (2) - 有点奇怪，加折返？
01:02:785 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有加强，第二个三角可以做大一点？
02:17:051 (4) - 感觉少了note
02:32:890 (2) - 这样？ http://puu.sh/l0Nn
02:38:659 (x) - (对于每个Kiai都适用)一种可能: http://puu.sh/l0O2 =03:42:226 (7,8)
02:44:114 (4,5,6,7) - nazi -正方形
02:51:876 (7,8) - 可以考虑用短折返
03:42:226 (7,8) - 3个Kiai的同样地方做成一致的？

[Collab]

01:08:449 (1,2,3,4) - nazi -正方形
01:23:974 (2,3,4,5,6) - nazi -不在一条线上
02:38:659 (7) - 保持每个Kiai开始地方的一致性？
02:58:589 (4,5,6,1) - nazi -正方形
03:35:303 (x) - 感觉顿了一下, 把03:35:093 (3)变成滑条拉到这里？
03:41:806 (2,3) - 都最后一个Kiai了不来点什么。。？ http://puu.sh/l0Tc

GL~

As your request

[General]

1. Audio Lead-in 1004!? 如果沒有特別原因...改成1000唄~
2. Taiko的Stack Leniency-->0.7 其他diff都是0.5... 建議還是調成一致好些@_@
3. 建議把Taiko的SB刪掉~

[Easy]

1. 00:49:568 (3) - 明顯不是正的._. 這很影響美觀度的=3=... 如果要做在中間 那..拉好些唄:3
2. 02:56:282 (2,3,4) - 不做對稱嘛??
3. 03:46:631 (2,3,4) - 額..有點不整齊o.o 這個(2)跟(4)一樣形狀的slider嘛!? 我怎麼看都覺得不像>_<
   形狀弄一樣吧:3 角度別亂轉.. 轉180度排排看~ 然後試著把(3)排在2個中間~ 好看不少呢:> (強烈建議~)
4. 03:58:379 - finish

[Normal]

1. 01:02:365 - 加個圈
2. 01:06:771 (3) - 這個要不要改成slider拉到01:07:610? 這樣突然空一塊..感覺有些怪._.
3. 02:36:561 (2) - 微彎一下?
4. 02:37:400 (3) - 同之前
5. 02:51:247 (4,5,6,7) - 都是circle有點難~ 把(4)(5)改成一個slider?
6. 03:42:855 (1) - finish
7. 03:52:086 - 加個圈
8. 03:58:379 (5) - finish

[Hard]

1. HP7 AR8 OD7!? 這太難了吧=A=... 三個都-1如何? (不然至少OD要-1..)
2. 00:28:799 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不要這樣疊>_<...做anti-jump或者就照間距排好多了@_@
3. 00:42:855 (3,4) - (3)移到[x:324 y:96] (4)移到[x:348 y:20] 這樣如何?? (做個3角形:3)
   因為你00:43:275 (5,6,7)做了個3角形~ 這樣有連慣性:>
4. 01:06:561 (4,5,6,7,8) - (8)的位置不太好 我試重排了下~ 你看看好不好:3 http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/266990
   

   128,68,66561,1,0
   200,108,66771,1,8
   312,108,66981,1,0
   200,108,67191,1,8
   384,148,67400,2,8,B|408:184,2,40

5. 01:27:750 (7) - 往右1格
6. 02:32:890 (2) - 這邊用3連聽起來好怪IMO.. 把藍線的音去掉?
7. 02:36:142 (2,3) - (2)下2格 或是 (3)上兩格都OK~ 如果你要(2)下一格 (3)上一格..額..都可以唄:3
8. 03:47:680 (4,5,6) - 這邊缺了一角阿~ 把(7)排成這樣吧!!~~ http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/266999
9. 03:58:379 - finish

[Collab]

1. 00:54:289 - 鼓聲挺明顯的~ 加個圈 做連打?
2. 00:54:498 - ^
3. 01:09:079 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這邊要不要讓連打的"斜率"一樣._.??
4. 01:26:701 (4,1,2,3,4) - 這星星打起來不順.. 排成這樣順些 看一下順序:3~~ http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/267009
5. 01:37:400 (2) - finish
6. 02:24:813 (2,3,4,5,6) - 間距不一喔~ 不是故意排的的話.. 改改唄:3
7. 02:39:813 (3) - clap
8. 02:53:240 (3) - ^
9. 02:54:918 (3) - ^
10. 02:55:128 (5) - ^
11. 02:58:589 (4,5,6,1) - 這正方形排好!! 這樣不是很好看阿...
12. 03:08:030 (2) - finish
13. 03:08:974 - 鼓聲這麼明顯 不加圈好怪>_< 強烈建議加個圈~~
14. 03:09:289 (7) - finish
15. 03:30:163 (6) - clap
16. 03:30:372 (8) - ^
17. 03:45:268 (3) - ^
18. 03:58:379 (2) - finish
19. 04:15:163 (3) - 不喜歡這個slider:<...改成一般點好些:3

Nice map~
祝....早日Ranked!!~~~ \(^O^)/

fixed some

Request from my modding queue.
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[general] 5y706h

1. 圖片sakuno,miu,angelina,airi 不是當背景的話,可以再把右邊空白地方切割掉以減少檔案大小.
2. 話說歌詞SB沒做完?! XD

[Easy] 1h4b6d

1. 01:01:736 (1) - 似乎沒對稱到
2. 02:22:715 (1) - 我覺得這spinner,對新手可能有些困難,看要不要改circle或slider之類的~
3. 03:02:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這星星似乎沒對稱
4. 03:09:289 (3,1) - 這spinner來的好快,對新手蠻困難的 同02:22:715
5. 03:30:687 (3) - 額...是我眼睛太利嗎 沒對稱的感覺?XD 還是本來就故意不對稱 ? OTZ
6. 03:59:219 (4,1) - 同03:09:289

[Normal] 606311

1. 00:01:317 (1,1) - 這兩個間的break其實可以拿掉
2. 00:04:673 (1,1) - ^
3. 01:38:659 (6,1) - 這對新手或許有些困難 ~
4. 03:09:289 (1,1) - ^
5. 03:59:638 (1,1) - ^

[Hard] 1u1958

1. Useless green line:
   01:38:659 - 我覺得這條改成S:C1後面那條S:C1就可以拿掉了(我看中間都是break time ?!)
   04:10:967 -
   
   
   
2. 00:30:897 (6,1) - (6)NC 然後 (1)RNC
3. 01:22:505 (2) - 第二個點往左,第三個點和第五個點往右,中間紅點往下一格好像比較對稱?
4. 01:56:701 (3) - 往右一格?
5. 03:59:638 (1,1) - ^

[Collab] 626c5f

1. Useless green line:
   04:09:708
   
   
2. 02:59:219 (1) - Finish 在開始?
3. 03:34:673 (2,3) - 節奏怪怪的.把slider拉到紅線?!
4. 04:08:030 (1) - NC
5. 04:14:743 (1) - ^

good song
Star ~

General
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Collab] : 1004
- [Easy] : 1004
- [Hard] : 1000
- [Normal] : 1004
- [Taiko Collab] : 1000

Easy
00:38:240 (1) - i think this finish is not so good... cuz back sound is not enough strong
01:06:771 (3) - add a finish to the end instead of whistle
02:02:995 - add a note here
02:38:240 (4) - add a finish here instead of whistle
02:08:869 (1) - same reason as 00:38:240 (1), remove finish here
03:41:177 - add a note here since you have added 01:20:198 -

Normal
01:07:610 - add note
01:38:659 (6) - add newcombo for your pattern
02:38:240 - add note

Hard
01:07:400 (8) - finish to the end
01:38:240 - too loud imo, try reduce the volume by 10~20%
02:37:820 (6) - finish to the end
03:08:869 (8,1) - change them to a kick slider like 01:38:240 (7)
03:59:219 (6) - add a finish to the end

Collab
01:07:610 (4) - finish
02:38:240 (6) - ^
03:08:974 - add note
03:09:289 (7) - finish

加油~

gogo

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

mod好久...這圖...

fixed some.thx for mod :3

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

1. 文件夹太大了 没vd有sb19M PNG图片全换成jpg 一张PNG1.xM弊大于利 转换后目测可以下降到10M
2. 在文件夹里你没用到的图片 sb\bg09c.png sb\bg11a.png sb\bg13a.png sb\bg18d.png
3. Missing SB Elements no_gu.png nymph.png sb\lyric\1.png sb\lyric\12315.png 在SB文件里没有对应图片
4. offest建议1310左右 我个人会用1307

Easy

00:01:317 (1,1,2,1) - 虽然有NC 但我相信肯定有人会来说新手看不懂重叠的节奏 我就提前说了 暗合SB 应该没问题
00:33:624 (4) - 这要做渐强音效果 但效果不好 slider体现不出渐强的感觉 开端40%音量就好了 现在太低
00:44:533 (4) - whistle和hitnormal自古互不待见 我猜是hitnormal高频部分和whistle重合了 所以造成互相听不清
01:06:771 (3) - 这结尾用一个delay延音效果会好 现在略显生硬

Normal

00:34:044 (5) - 同理 如果折返点不加whistle音量变化是听不出来的
00:48:939 (2) - 左右不对称 稍微
03:31:107 (4,5,6,1) - 456跟鼓 1突然跟vocal导致节奏问题 但也挺常见于ranked map所以基本成默许了
03:57:750 (4) - 这种偶尔穿插在kiai里的whistle，不如换成soft-hitclap2 延展性什么的都好

Hard

00:28:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - whistle加多了后..
01:10:757 (8) - clap加在开头 或者开头+第一折返

Collab

00:33:624 (2,3,4) - 还是这个道理 2有whistle所以比3的音量仍然显得大 渐变也就没了
02:11:177 (5,6,7,8) - 间距略小？
02:52:086 (5) - 为什么在这里

最后懒了 这么长

Hello

General
* The filesize should be max. 12MB if you using a SB. Please reduce the filesize because yours are 19MB
* For all diff except Collab, please map part at 03:11:167, because the breaks are way too long


Easy
02:26:072 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts, and it's hard to read for beginners
02:38:659 (x) - Add note here, the pauses can makes confusing for beginners, though
02:51:666 (4) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar


Normal
01:06:771 (3,4) - This long pauses are completely confusing for me. Add some notes between these two notes
02:20:827 (5) - What's the point having a finish hitsound on tail slider?


Hard
00:29:638 (3,4,5,6) - It's kinda boring to see those stacks in tail slider. Try making a interesting pattern
01:08:449 (1) - It doesn't make sense if there is a single combo in single notes
02:24:184 (5) - I'm was expecting that this should be snap at white tick, but it's not. Maybe try to add note at 02:23:974 to preventing of confusing?


Insane
01:07:296 (1) - Remove new combo please


Byeeeeee

Hi. Here a requested Taiko mod by Leorda.

[Taiko Collab]
Generel:
the volumen is set to ,,soft". Please change it to ,,Normal".

Hitcircles:
01:04:883 (208) - D?
02:39:079 - kiai time x1.10? Variating it with the next coming kiai as x1.20 would be nice.
02:25:442 (1,2,3) - make it to d D / d K ?
02:35:512 (46) - D?
03:29:428 - kiai time x1.20? I think it would make a nice change in the beatmap.
03:49:568 (2) - D?

That's all couldn't find so much. The map is really well maden and has a really nice diff spread for a collab.
Good work!

Good luck~

>3<
Easy
00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ........疊屁咧 不要疊
00:51:666 (1,2,3) - 這樣? http://puu.sh/mChX
00:58:379 (1) - 不要finish
01:55:442 (1) - ^ 要加就加whistle,後面也加些whistle
02:13:484 (3) - 頭應該沒clap
02:16:421 (2) - ^尾
02:20:198 (2) - ^
03:07:610 (1) - 這whistle不如不加
Normal
00:26:282 (3) - 還不如在白線開始
00:50:407 (4) - finish
00:52:296 (2) - o.o頭尾切clap? 3可刪
01:10:128 (1) - nc..?
01:25:233 (1) - 串里找個地方nc..?太長了combo
Hard
00:51:771 - 略多餘
00:52:925 (4) - 尾finish
01:08:869 (2) - 刪nc
01:10:128 (6) - nc
01:26:701 (1) - nc
01:38:240 (1) - 可nc o.o
Collab
00:24:813 (1,2) - ...JPY slider
01:07:296 (1) - why nc
01:21:247 (6) - head finish
01:23:974 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing不一樣
03:59:638 (1) - why nc o.o
04:14:743 (6) - 要nc的話加在4吧

1.谷子你加whistle可以加多些
2.字體字效太柔和,這曲應該活潑些

karenying wrote: 2o2d

>3< >A<
Easy
00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ........疊屁咧 不要疊嘛别的都这样我就觉得统一下
00:51:666 (1,2,3) - 這樣? http://puu.sh/mChX 呜 好
00:58:379 (1) - 不要finish改whistle了
01:55:442 (1) - ^ 要加就加whistle,後面也加些whistle^
02:13:484 (3) - 頭應該沒clap/.\故意的
02:16:421 (2) - ^尾^
02:20:198 (2) - ^^
03:07:610 (1) - 這whistle不如不加好
Normal
00:26:282 (3) - 還不如在白線開始呜这个跟vocal
00:50:407 (4) - finish好
00:52:296 (2) - o.o頭尾切clap? 3可刪我觉得这里没问题
01:10:128 (1) - nc..?都是按俩downbeat一个来的NC
01:25:233 (1) - 串里找個地方nc..?太長了combo这个本来就有NC的。。
Hard
00:51:771 - 略多餘应该没事
00:52:925 (4) - 尾finish好
01:08:869 (2) - 刪nc恩误操作了
01:10:128 (6) - nc
01:26:701 (1) - nc
01:38:240 (1) - 可nc o.o都按俩downbeat一个NC来的，hard里面稍微长点也没事
Collab
00:24:813 (1,2) - ...JPY slider22222
01:07:296 (1) - why ncmistake/.\
01:21:247 (6) - head finishOK
01:23:974 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing不一樣差不多好像
03:59:638 (1) - why nc o.oremoved
04:14:743 (6) - 要nc的話加在4吧呜 也行

1.谷子你加whistle可以加多些恩下次争取/.\
2.字體字效太柔和,這曲應該活潑些找不到什么好字体啊主要是

baka

Yeah !

: marble - Suisai Candy (No_Gu) [Taiko Collab].osu

谷子妹妹\o/

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. 你要的东西~ http://puu.sh/nTGF 要帮忙改什么的话随时找我/.\
2. 问了KPY等都说SB原件不一定要PNG, t/75882 这里也没有提到类似的规则.看看你要不要没有透明元素的图像换回JPG来节省大量的空间.尤其是BG那是肯定能换成JPG的.4张BG就要5.12MB嗷呜毫可趴/.\
3. 删掉SB文件夹和Lyric子文件夹里的Thumbs.db文件.

[Easy]

1. 翔都没有~(pia

[Normal]

1. 00:01:317 (0) - 唔，开头2个break快remove掉，note还没打完play-warningarrow.png就出来了感觉很奇葩很多余诶o_o
2. 00:31:526 (1) - 从红线开始和vocal更搭诶..(这歌听多了我在这里习惯性摁快lol") 而且这个难度1/2链接没少用为什么这里不用呢o o
3. 00:56:701 (5) - 同上~建议开始点前挪1/2 > <
4. 01:31:946 (1) - ^

[Hard]

1. HD-2 OD-2: 4.74 star rating 不降总分..
2. 00:01:317 (0) - 如果降了HD的话开头2个break移除掉..
3. 01:10:757 (9) - 只在第一个折返+clap?
4. 01:17:890 (7,8) - 这spacing有点突然.
5. 02:32:365 (1,2) - 太高了~而且我感觉2这个节奏有点牵强>_>

[Collab]

1. 连个屁股都没有~www (slap

唔,神图的结果就是渣mod...OAQ

JoJo wrote: 4i5e6a

谷子妹妹\o//o\啾啾哥哥

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. 你要的东西~ http://puu.sh/nTGF 要帮忙改什么的话随时找我/.\
2. 问了KPY等都说SB原件不一定要PNG, t/75882 这里也没有提到类似的规则.看看你要不要没有透明元素的图像换回JPG来节省大量的空间.尤其是BG那是肯定能换成JPG的.4张BG就要5.12MB嗷呜毫可趴/.\恩下次改东西再弄。。
3. 删掉SB文件夹和Lyric子文件夹里的Thumbs.db文件.这个我总是第一次进文件夹能见到然后闪了一下就没了

[Easy]

1. 翔都没有~(pia

[Normal]

1. 00:01:317 (0) - 唔，开头2个break快remove掉，note还没打完play-warningarrow.png就出来了感觉很奇葩很多余诶o_o好
2. 00:31:526 (1) - 从红线开始和vocal更搭诶..(这歌听多了我在这里习惯性摁快lol") 而且这个难度1/2链接没少用为什么这里不用呢o o 恩
3. 00:56:701 (5) - 同上~建议开始点前挪1/2 > <同
4. 01:31:946 (1) - ^^

[Hard]

1. HD-2 OD-2: 4.74 star rating 不降总分..保留
2. 00:01:317 (0) - 如果降了HD的话开头2个break移除掉..^
3. 01:10:757 (9) - 只在第一个折返+clap?好像也行
4. 01:17:890 (7,8) - 这spacing有点突然.我感觉节奏满跳的，先保留
5. 02:32:365 (1,2) - 太高了~而且我感觉2这个节奏有点牵强>_>应该没问题。跟vocal的..

[Collab]

1. 连个屁股都没有~www (slap/me slaps JoJo

唔,神图的结果就是渣mod...OAQ快自重

谢了owo/

why not. i might as well take a look at this. if you ignore any of my suggestions, please tell me a reason why you ignored them. i want to hear your opinion on them if you ignore any of them.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should take a look, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
I suggest using this code for the 3rd and 4th combo colors as it matches Airi and Miu's Hair. also raise the brightness a bit to match angie's hair because from what I see, the combo colors represents the colors of the girl's hair.

Combo3 : 49,207,253
Combo4 : 242,228,153

The blue combo color is fine as it matches Sakuno's Hair.
the SB looks nice but add the lyrics for the chorus. I find it odd that there are no lyrics at all at the chorus when there are lyrics at the verses.
When the BG of Pannya shows up , i don't like how it suddenly pops up, so how about adding that white SB to show the fade in and fade out of Pannya.

[Easy]
00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - i think this would be hard for beginners because the hitbursts are covering this note which makes it hard for beginners when to hit these notes, so to make it easier, i suggest spacing it out but use a DS of 0.8 or lower to make it easier, or use half of the default DS which is 0.5
00:01:317 (1) - maybe add a finish but try to decrease the volume to match the instrumental.
00:04:673 (1) - ^
00:08:030 - add a circle here because i see a pattern here, and also same suggestion about the finish.
00:34:883 (1,2,1,2) - i'd rather keep the claps and whistles consistent because the claps or "dings" sound bad IMO, and it gets in the way during gameplay. if you do this, remove the claps and whistles and add the claps and whistles at the 2nd and 4th downbeat. this sounds a lot better, and IMO it flows during gameplay.
01:12:226 (2) - ooh i don't like the look of this slider. I suggest making this slider symmetrical to a v-shaped slider. IMO it looks easier for beginners and straightforward/
01:58:799 (1) - maybe replace this for a finish? i think the whistle is too quiet for this part and i think it matches the instrumental.
02:05:512 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.
02:23:764 (1,1) - first off, beginners won't have enough time to recover after the spinner is complete, and the hit burst is covering this note which makes it hard for beginners to find. try to do something easier than this because this looks hard for beginners.
02:39:079 (1) - unstack this because beginners might hit this too early.
03:09:393 (1) - space out this spinner because this spinner might surprise beginners.
03:59:743 (1) - same as 03:09:393.
04:09:708 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.


[Normal]
00:01:317 (1) - same as easy.
00:01:631 - is this break necessary? remove it since you don't have it on the easy diff.
00:04:673 (1) - same as 00:01:317.
00:04:988 - ^
00:08:030 - same as easy.
00:29:638 (4,5) - try this as it follows vocals accurately.
00:34:883 (1,2,1,2) - same as easy.
00:57:121 (6,7) - remove these notes and try this to follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
01:04:463 (5) - make this a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause accurately.
01:07:191 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow the instrumental?
01:24:603 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to follow vocals accurately.
01:28:379 - same as above but add a circle.
01:33:205 (4) - replace this for a circle followed by a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately.
02:05:512 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.
02:37:820 - same as 01:07:191.
02:50:617 (3,4) - same as 01:33:205 but make the second note a 1/2 slider.
02:59:009 - add a circle to follow vocals. these 3 circles follow "Kokoro"
03:08:869 (6) - remove this and add a 1/1 slider starting at 03:08:449.
03:51:876 - add a circle to follow vocals?
04:09:708 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.

[Hard]
00:01:317 (1) - same as easy about the finish.
00:01:631 - same as normal
00:04:988 - ^
00:08:030 - same as 00:01:317.
00:34:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as easy about the claps and whistles.
01:04:044 (8,9) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this, then add 2 circles to make it a bit challenging for beginners. either way, both will work.
01:14:953 - add a circle to follow vocals?
02:05:512 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:34:883.
02:17:261 (4,5) - move this 2 ticks back to follow vocals accurately, and add a circle at 02:18:310 to follow the guitar.
02:27:960 (5,6,1,2,3) - this doesn't flow to the vocals accurately. instead do this as it follows vocals accurately.
03:18:729 (5) - make this a 1/4 repeat slider and add a circle at 03:19:149 to follow the guitar. if you ignore this, then keep the 1/1 slider and add a circle at 03:19:149.
03:22:086 (7) - ^
03:38:659 (6) - delete this and add a 1/2 slider starting at 03:38:449. to follow vocals accurately.

[Collab]
00:01:317 (1) - same as easy about the finish.
00:01:631 - same as normal.
00:04:673 (1) - same as 00:01:317.
00:08:030 - same as easy.
00:21:456 (1,2) - if you see during gameplay, these 2 sliders barely look like curved sliders, so i suggest curving it properly to make it clear for players that these are curved sliders.
00:34:883 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - same as easy.
00:51:456 (5) - how about aligning this to (3) so that this note looks like a triangle.
01:02:365 (3) - add another repeat to follow the drums.
01:31:317 (5) - how about Ctrl+R to challenge players on this slider jump?
02:05:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - wait what happened to the dings? add those back because they sound nice. the default claps doesn't fit with this song at all, and same as 00:34:883.
02:34:254 (1) - same as 00:21:456.
02:42:435 (1) - add a finish or a whistle to match that sound?
03:27:540 (4) - same as 00:21:456.
03:43:275 (2) - make this look like (1) for a nicer flow.

I guess that's it. GL

modding~

[General]
Fine!

[Collab]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC
01:58:589 (6) - NC
01:58:799 (1) - Remove NC
04:02:995 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC
01:14:953 (9) - Add circle

[Normal]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC

[Easy]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC

nice map
Good lucl

uoload..too lazy

哎我都不知道哪個是在.osu裏哪個是在.osb裏的了 干脆把全部弄去.osu如何?
哎這個我不想整理了你自己整理下
As you request: http://puu.sh/ums9
1.請先把原來的SB file刪了再丟進去
2.[Collab]你別直接用..用裏面的SB就好 map好像被我動過..恩 原Collab http://puu.sh/umxg
3.我忘了刪BG ef.jpg 沒用的了刪
3.沒紗凪我略不爽於是最後全改了之餘還丟了張紗凪
4.所謂的動畫SB
5.各種修改 能轉jpg的png都轉了 目測現在10mb
6.好困 記得整理.osu和.osb 亂死了..干脆就別用taiko sb嘛

EDIT
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http://puu.sh/urJ7
.osb裏面的東西直接搬進.osu
下面的是每個diff都不同的 請放在Foreground的最低

Hi ~ No_Gu ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions







That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and SB ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631

[General] 2o6n

[*]Taiko BG looks wrong cut,so you can try use this(edit by me).恩不过不太喜欢灰色感觉没活力，我还是加上名字卡好了
[/list]

[Collab] 626c5f

2. 03:02:575 - Add finish.这个听着不太好
   

别的都改了，辛苦了rika姐T.T

Gu , feel free to chage to that bg as Rika said :3

Netsukawa wrote: 3u3t6u

Gu , feel free to chage to that bg as Rika said :3

added name plate.So no need to change now >w<

After recheck in IRC fixed a NC ~

Everything looks fine for me ~

thanks rika www

Bubbled combo for 2 song in 1 hour Gu and Laurier w

.哼

karenying wrote: 2o2d

.哼

呜..

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Taiko BG is...
  
  SPOILER

  
  The white space is too wide so there is an extra space between the playing space and the title space. You have to edit it.

1. 00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Just putting all notes at the center is a bit boring. I want you to make a variation of placing notes here.

[Easy]

• 
  OD+1.

1. 02:23:764 (1) - Too short time after a spinner for newbie. It should be ended at 02:25:233.

[Normal]

• 
  OD+1 to make the diff spread be reasonable.
  Next time you make a normal diff, please avoid using 0.7xDS. Because the spacing is too narrow if comparing with the slider speed, so to read the timing of notes become a bit hard.

[Hard]

• 
  HP,AR,OD -1. These setting fit a hard diff more, and I don't think the gameplay will be worse even if you changed.

1. 02:25:442 (x) - A note is needed here to follow the music(vocal). If you won't fix this, you should avoid stacking (8,1) because the player must be confused due to the reason I wrote.
2. 03:08:869 (3) - You should add new combo to this note because of the spacing change after using anti-jump.

[Collab]

• 
  More whistles are needed at Nymph's part in 2nd&3rd KIAI ><

[Taiko]

1. 01:06:771 (213) - You cannot use finish on the slider(it's same as the stream in taiko mode).
2. 02:37:400 (51) - ^

Call me back after fix. I'll rank :3

Suzully wrote: 6z6m2x

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Taiko BG is...
  
  SPOILER

  
  The white space is too wide so there is an extra space between the playing space and the title space. You have to edit it.
  this is the satuation which I see... http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/332869

1. 00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Just putting all notes at the center is a bit boring. I want you to make a variation of placing notes here.want to put something around SB..not boring imo.

others are fixed.thanks.update

Cute SB is cute<3
Ranked!

thank you very much suzully!

Congratz~ ^^

搶人recheck好可惡!!!

Oops, I forgot to set the genre. Now it's set correctly.

屁股说好的节操呢~ =o=
ome! =A=/

Yay the full version's ranked . congratz

瞎了神mapper 各各都rank ~

恭喜。。。瞎了

恭喜 Gu

Congratz~>3<//

www thanks everyone

.

Congratz \:D/

YEAHHHH \:D/

Nice SB !

Congratz ＞＜

Oh yeah ! ><

thanks...go to bed now..too tired

我似乎慢了一步 loool
congrats ~

好歌好图！恭喜！

Congrats ~ >w<

Congrats ~ \:3/

congratz \o/

用樱乃做collabBG深得我心 液

congrats!

Great song, storyboard, and map. Hope to see lots more from you Congrats!

Awesome Storyboard!

NiceSB，congratz.

Congrats for achieving most played~ :3

感动得我眼泪哗哗的

yukinohara wrote: 6f162a

SPOILER

SB夹子里db文件忘记删除了:3
最后那几个animationload load好浪费...
用0.625缩放立绘效果会更好，现在的貌似有白边，不是提取gameCG的么0 0.character介绍人物立绘也缓慢移动感觉好点
好几处SBBG入场好违和，再缓一点就好了
“..orz”那一组图片没抠干净，最后SB淡出的时候看到图片矩形边框了:3

NiceSB，congratz.

！！！
謝謝神SBer！學到東西了！（。。。

刚复活就看到各种rank瞎眼

怒瞎