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perhaps OD7 considering this BPM?
00:50:589 (3) - a bit far from (2) IMO since this is a "slower" section of the song, comparing to
02:22:313 (3,4) which is a faster part of the song
01:34:841 (1) - you sure this slider ends on the right tick?
01:39:588 (5,6,7,1) - (1) is pretty much hidden under (5,6)'s combo burst, don't recommend so
01:44:844 (3,4) - intentional spacing?
01:57:899 (1) - the end seems to be unsnapped
02:16:888 (1,2) - what the?!
02:21:296 (8) - why not use clap? (if you're comparing with
00:57:202 (6) then i'd say that for this one there are more claps that come before it)

[Hard]

where kiai? yo had it on the previous diff?
00:12:103 (1) - whistle at start?
00:13:460 (3) ~ 00:22:276 (4) - for this part why not place a whistle on every big white tick like in [G.Hero]?
00:52:794 (1) - finish at start?
01:02:627 (4,6) - almost off-screen just to say
01:09:070 (4) - i'd use a different hitsound, say finish, for the start of this slider to differentiate from (1,2,3)'s
01:11:613 (13) - perhaps a clap?
01:14:495 (1) ~ 01:22:294 (6) - IMO hitsound is a bit lacking here; try what you did on harder difficulties, but this is what i'd do:

assume ALL hitsound is reset (click to toggle)

01:14:495 (1) - finish, clap
01:15:852 (5) - clap at end
01:16:530 (8,9) - ^
01:17:208 (1) - ^
01:18:056 (3) - ^
01:18:395 (4) - clap on repeat
01:18:734 (5) - clap
01:19:073 (7) - ^
01:19:412 (10) - clap at end
01:19:921 (1,2,3,4) - finish, clap
01:22:294 (6) - clap at start

02:16:888 (1) - finish at start?
02:21:466 (2,3,4) - i totally mistook these as a stream...
02:21:805 (4) - due to this being a slider, the clap pattern is broken here...
01:25:431 (1) - shouldn't this spinner end more quietly?
02:31:808 (6) - finish?
02:32:486 (1) ~ 02:46:558 (4) - again, perhaps add a bit more hitsound? i guess i won't list my suggestion then

[C.Hero]

kiai?

what the OD10??? if you reduce it to OD8 this diff will be ordered last in the mapset!
00:03:287 (4,1) - this one really confused me, suggest space it out
00:07:356 (5) - almost hidden under (2,3)
00:09:984 (6) - uhh..... why not just land on the next white tick? or actually how about just remove it altogether
00:12:103 (1) ~ 00:22:276 (2) - whistle on every big white tick?
01:11:444 (2) - clap at end? (eh i actually feel pompous keep mentioning this mod, so if you do decide to use it, you know what to do, i won't mention this again)
01:37:638 (6,7) - perhaps you forgot to switch back to SC1? it's a bit noisy
01:53:236 (3,4) - ^
01:55:610 (3,4) - ^
04:32:201 (4) - clap at end?

[Normal]

kiai?
00:12:103 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - whistle on every big white tick?
00:33:805 (1) - finish at start?
00:41:943 (1) - ^
00:46:690 (1) - a soft finish at end?
00:52:794 (1) - finish at start?
01:25:431 (1) - wasn't it your intention to make this spinner quiet in the end?
02:06:037 (1) - finish at start?
02:16:888 (3) - NC and finish at start?
02:32:486 (1) ~ 02:46:389 (5) - again, perhaps add a bit more claps?
02:52:153 (1) - clap on repeat and end?

[Easy]

kiai~~~???
00:12:109 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whistles?
00:33:805 (1) - finish?
00:47:368 (1) - soft finish?
00:52:794 (2) - NC?
01:24:668 (2) - finish at end?
01:56:543 (3) - ^
02:16:888 (2) - NC
02:33:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - uhm, what's going on? there should be hitsounds!

======================================================

i'd really really take the time to unify hitsounds intra-diff and inter-diff. it's quite inconsistent as of now
other than that, nice song and nice mapset

good luck!

Last edited by yongtw123 2012-08-13T09:44:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Garven

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5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-13T08:21:00+00:00

wow this is a really old one

[G.Hero]

perhaps OD7 considering this BPM? 8/8 is good. This is a light Insane diff anyway.
00:50:589 (3) - a bit far from (2) IMO since this is a "slower" section of the song, comparing to 02:22:313 (3,4) which is a faster part of the song Adjusted slightly. I still want a small jump there.
01:34:841 (1) - you sure this slider ends on the right tick? Unsnapped stuff taken care of. A timing change messed everything up, heeh.
01:39:588 (5,6,7,1) - (1) is pretty much hidden under (5,6)'s combo burst, don't recommend so Yeah, not really acceptable anymore, haha. So oooold.
01:44:844 (3,4) - intentional spacing? Yeah. It's breaking apart like the sudden whispered voice. Also why I used the sliderwhistle.
01:57:899 (1) - the end seems to be unsnapped
02:16:888 (1,2) - what the?!
02:21:296 (8) - why not use clap? (if you're comparing with 00:57:202 (6) then i'd say that for this one there are more claps that come before it) Haha, it's my older hitsound style. I wanted to feature the guitar part, so I left the clap out. I think I'll keep it in there. I'd have to change a lot of this otherwise, and I'd like to preserve how I mapped this previously.

Updated the timing to line up with C.Hero. Also changed the flow on some parts and nazied sliders all over the place.

http://puu.sh/UQTT

Damnit I'm an idiot and used Edit instead of Quote. Hopefully you've already taken care of the mods, Colin. That or yongtw can grab the post from cache and edit it back in >_>

yongtw123

1,028 posts

ed April 2009

2012-08-13T09:46:11+00:00

whew, thank goodness i didn't close my browser...

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-08-13T09:54:08+00:00

wow thanks a lot 司令

y u c a

844 posts

ed April 2009

2012-08-13T12:16:47+00:00

i hope i can help you guys

C.hero

00:41:943 (3) - add finish(srart of slider)
00:48:046 (2) ~ use soft hitsound is better
00:52:794 (1) - add finish(start of slider)
01:03:644 (1) - ^
02:06:037 (1) - ^
02:12:141 (2) ~ 前のところと一緒
02:16:888 (1) - add finish(start of slider)
02:19:601 (3) -

kore better for me
02:33:164 (1) - add finish (start of slider)
02:54:527 (1) - add finish (end of slider)
03:23:350 (7) -

04:02:701 (1) - remove clap and add finish
04:08:126 (1) - 前と一緒
04:12:619 (1) - finishhhh(end of slider)
04:21:181 (10) - try this?

04:24:402 (1) - add fnish

ｇ。へろ

did irc mod

SPOILER

20:25 y_u_c_a: : 今irc mod無理ね？(；´･ω･)
20:25 Garven: : いいよ
20:25 y_u_c_a: : あほんと？
20:25 Garven: : orz http://puu.sh/USC5
20:25 y_u_c_a: : ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
20:25 y_u_c_a: : moesugiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
20:26 Garven: : .___.
20:26 y_u_c_a: : 00:41:943 (1) - kore to 02:06:037 (1) - kore
20:26 y_u_c_a: : should same sound
20:27 Garven: : http://puu.sh/UQTT
20:27 Garven: : この作る？
20:27 Garven: : Colin Update まだと思う
20:27 y_u_c_a: : e
20:27 y_u_c_a: : maji?
20:27 Garven: : http://puu.sh/USDi
20:27 y_u_c_a: : Orz
20:28 Garven: : 00:33:805 (1) -
20:28 Garven: : この　slider unsnapped?
20:28 y_u_c_a: : uun~
20:28 y_u_c_a: : 00:34:483 (x) - try add note?
20:30 y_u_c_a: : 00:41:943 (1) - and 02:06:037 (1) - same hitsound onegaii Tv T
20:30 Garven: : うん　Changed
20:31 Garven: : soft finishのほうがいい？
20:31 y_u_c_a: : u-n
20:32 Garven: : ああ
20:32 y_u_c_a: : いろいろfinish音違うｗｗｗ
20:32 Garven: : Old mapping style
20:32 Garven: : 難しいww
20:32 y_u_c_a: : normal is better for me www
20:32 Garven: : mm
20:33 Garven: : でも00:47:199 (8,9) - Normalー＞Soft
20:33 Garven: : すきいいいww
20:33 y_u_c_a: : u-n
20:33 y_u_c_a: : wwww
20:33 y_u_c_a: : then use soft!
20:33 y_u_c_a: : up to you!
20:34 y_u_c_a: : just need same sound there~ hen different sound!
20:34 Garven: : はい～
20:34 Garven: : ああああhttp://puu.sh/USHJ
20:34 Garven: : Uglyyyyy
20:35 y_u_c_a: : 01:03:644 (1) - kore chotto hen www
20:35 y_u_c_a: : wwwww
20:35 Garven: : Unsnapped Slider?
20:36 Garven: : Unsnapped Slider 全部直した

20:36 y_u_c_a: : oooooooooooooo
20:36 y_u_c_a: : okke!
20:36 Garven: : 。。と思う
20:36 y_u_c_a: : wwww
20:36 y_u_c_a: : koraaaa!
20:36 y_u_c_a: : 直すよ！
20:36 *Garven runs
20:36 Garven: : puu.sh　を作るください！
20:37 y_u_c_a: : えええええどういう意味！
20:37 y_u_c_a: : puush?
20:37 Garven: : http://puu.sh/UQTT
20:37 Garven: : TimingとSliderもう直した
20:37 y_u_c_a: : a okke~
20:40 y_u_c_a: : 01:03:644 (1) - kore mo http://puu.sh/USLj kou?
20:42 Garven: : 02:27:739 (1) - kore mo ne
20:42 Garven: : 00:55:506 (1) -
20:42 y_u_c_a: : un!
20:42 Garven: : ;_;
20:43 y_u_c_a: : 02:51:814 (2) - koko soft finish?
20:43 y_u_c_a: : eeeeeeeee nande cry
20:43 y_u_c_a: : (´･ω･)ﾉ"(-ω-｡)
20:44 Garven: : start or end?
20:44 y_u_c_a: : start!
20:44 y_u_c_a: : is better for me
20:45 Garven: : mm need custom clap kedo
20:46 y_u_c_a: : add finish is better for me~
20:46 y_u_c_a: : demo just for me
20:47 Garven: : jitsuwa...
20:47 Garven: : kono clap ha hen w
20:47 y_u_c_a: : wwwwww
20:47 y_u_c_a: : ja finish shiyo www
20:48 Garven: : Hm
20:48 Garven: : chotto urusai kedo
20:48 Garven: : 2do ha 40% ok?
20:48 y_u_c_a: : okke~
20:48 y_u_c_a: : 02:06:037 (1) ~ cresc.?
20:48 y_u_c_a: : more kakkoii sound tabun
20:49 Garven: : Hm
20:49 Garven: : yarimasu
20:49 y_u_c_a: : un!
20:49 y_u_c_a: : owari~
20:49 Garven: : arigatou =3=
20:49 y_u_c_a: : arigato your time( * ・ ◡・ )ﾉ

Last edited by y u c a 2012-08-13T12:42:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Garven

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5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-13T12:20:29+00:00

I hit reply this time, right?

http://puu.sh/UT4J

Aldwych

2,831 posts

ed February 2012

2012-08-13T16:17:13+00:00

Hello Colin Hou!

[General]

00:33:805 I don't know why TS is red here, there's no change of BPM here. (normal)
That miss a kiaï time here, why note make here :

-00:52:794 / 01:07:714
-02:16:888 / 02:31:977
-04:13:535 / 04:28:683

[Easy]

01:45:692 : It's a the limit of an overmap, can you move it? It's a little ugly for an easy diff (imo)
02:48:792 ^

[Hard]

00:46:690 It touchs a little the HP bar

[C.Hero]

Even if it's for approval, CS is not too small?

00:03:626 Could it stack better?
01:06:696 ^

Nothing other to say. GOod luck and nice map!

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-08-14T04:10:28+00:00

fixed!

haha5957

1,433 posts

ed July 2010

2012-08-15T04:50:23+00:00

Hello >~< I am from #modreq and want to ask for M4M on http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/54016 if my mod deserves it~

[General]
Isn't Difficulty growth of 0.5 - 4.0 too harsh? just personal opinion 'o'/

[C.Hero]
for approval? >~<

00:26;769 (t) Using 0% sound is unrankable since it can't be done in editor.
00:27:956 (t) ^

SPOILER

Seems like this map had been done a long time before.. anyways, it is unrankable now >~<

01:42:470 (4) - about this kind of under-slider circles, maybe completely stack them (not using distance snap OR deleting and re-placing the circle will solve this. not important, but just pointing out here <.<
(this refers to all kind of these slider-endingpoint circle/sliders)
01:42:640 (1) - I think jump fits better on this part since the vocal goes kinda "high" here
01:53:491 (5) - (in case you did the ^ mod) make this jump too?
02:54:527 (1) - I'm not so sure but I think map that has this kind of slider (namely, Rin's Justice breaker) had been told unrankable.
Personally I don't think it is a problem but just putting here because there was a problem with this (kind of)slider..
03:35:557 (1,4) - I think their overlap can be done better, because It seems like they are overlapping eachother kinda randomly.. just my opinion
04:43:985 (4) - I think 1/4 forward and stack to (2,3) plays better butstill just a personal opinion.
Like the ending >~<

[G.Hero]
- I think you have to map this to end of the map.

SPOILER

It seems like different playtime for each difficulty is unrankable now..

01:07:995 (t) Same, 0% sound is unrankable now >~<

00:46:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think gradual increase of sound+spacing would be awesome on this part
01:40:944 (3) - not a big deal but I think this better not touch the HP-bar.
02:09:767 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:46:012, maybe gradual sound/spacing increase?
02:23:161 (5,6,7,8,9) - this star looks kinda "heavy"? I think moving 4/8/9 about 3 grids up looks better 'o'/

[Hard]
00:15:833 (4,1,2) - try somewhat like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/403196 this stacks (1,2) to previous) (1,2)
00:18:207 (2) - I think this overlap doesnt look good. maybe try http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/ss/403197 ?
00:20:920 (1,2,3) - overlap between (2,1) and (2,3) deosnt look very pretty for me but this isn't a big deal i guess.

[Normal]
01:11:783 (2,3) - I think they are kinda too hidden for normal difficulty, maybe because of the 01:10:765 (5) - 's hitburst, or just because they goes through where they came from.

[Easy]

Clear >~<

good luck with this revived-map >~<

Last edited by haha5957 2012-08-15T05:09:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Star Stream

2,039 posts

ed June 2010

2012-08-15T05:09:40+00:00

Maybe M4M from #modreqs?

[General]

Inconsistency in combo colours
Maybe you need 1 more Normal diff..

[Easy]

Unsnapped Things :

SPOILER
00:12:109 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:465 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:14:821 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:16:178 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:17:534 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:18:890 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:20:247 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:21:603 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:22:959 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:959 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:25:672 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:25:672 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:385 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:28:385 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:30:419 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:098 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:31:098 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:454 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:32:454 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:989 - feels really empty, add a note?
00:27:702 - ^
00:41:943 - finish
00:44:655 (3) - NC?
01:13:139 (1) - i think this NC is unnecessary
02:16:888 (2) - start combo from here

[Normal]

00:25:328 (5) - NC and remove NC from the next combo
02:10:106 (7) - this slider overlaps HP Bar TOO much.. i recommend stack it 5's end
02:19:262 (4,1) - almost off screen.. 1 grid up??

[Hard]

01:10:426 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - really hard to read, i recommend to NC at 01:10:426 (6,10) - or at least on 10

[G.Hero]

02:41:811 (2) - ctrl+r will be more playable imo

[C.Hero]

00:09:899 (5,6) - you may want to move it to 00:09:984 -
00:22:615 (1) - unnecessary NC imo.. i could read the SV change when i test it
00:50:929 (6,7) - 2 circles on this melody is a bit weird imo, maybe replace with a slider?
01:15:852 (6) - too long combo, NC?
01:18:734 (9) - ^
01:25:346 (11) - can't hear the finish sound.. volume up plz
03:13:940 (5) - weird.. delete?
04:32:710 - adding a circle here will be more readable

I think that's all..
If my modding is helpful, plz mod this map http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/52585
Good luck with rank~

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-18T16:53:19+00:00

haha5957 wrote: 6t1fq
[G.Hero]
- I think you have to map this to end of the map.

SPOILER

It seems like different playtime for each difficulty is unrankable now..

It's fine to have different lengths still.

01:07:995 (t) Same, 0% sound is unrankable now >~< oops, changed. So ooold

00:46:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think gradual increase of sound+spacing would be awesome on this part I'd rather not
01:40:944 (3) - not a big deal but I think this better not touch the HP-bar. Adjusted
02:09:767 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:46:012, maybe gradual sound/spacing increase? Nah
02:23:161 (5,6,7,8,9) - this star looks kinda "heavy"? I think moving 4/8/9 about 3 grids up looks better 'o'/ That messes up the spacing too much. I don't mind the current configuration

Thanks!

Star Stream wrote: 4ax6u
[G.Hero]

02:41:811 (2) - ctrl+r will be more playable imo

Did that and adjusted the rest of the map.

Nice.

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: supercell - Hero.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 12107
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Hero
Artist:supercell
Creator:Colin Hou
Version:G.Hero
Source:
Tags:nagi ryo Today Is A Beautiful Day Garven

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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SliderTickRate:2

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Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

ed August 2011

2012-08-19T15:44:18+00:00

Hi, Colin Hou

M4M from #modreqs

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General 6285k

Fine

Easy 4m5wp

00:47:368 (1) - Add finish here.
00:52:794 (2) - Add NC again here be better.
02:15:532 (3) - Add NC?

Normal d293k

00:46:690 (1) - Add finish in slider end.
01:07:714 (3) - Use finish instead of using clap, by observation from 02:31:808 (4) -
01:09:070 (2) - Remove finish in slider begin.
01:22:634 (1) - Using slider repeat may make to new player is surprise. I suggest use 2 sliders instead, or change rhythm is 1 slider.
02:11:463 (2) - Add finish here.
02:34:521 (1) - Why don't use slider curve? If make it's slider curve be beautiful.
02:46:728 (1) - Same as 01:22:634 (1) -

Hard 204o1w

00:30:753 (6,7) - I tried listen to the rhythm. It's quite strange. I suggest remove (7), then move slider end of (6) at (7) which was previously removed.
00:47:368 (1) - Add finish in slider begin.
01:59:933 (6,7,1) - Move (7,1) don't stack with (6), because the rhythm is different.
02:11:463 (1) - Same as 00:47:368 (1) -
02:31:808 (6) - Add finish here.

G.Hero 4w6a6j

01:02:797 (4) - Add NC?
01:03:305 (7) - ^
02:24:178 (8) - I heard a hitsound strange here. So, remove finish be better.
02:29:773 (7) - Remove finish here, too.

C.Hero 1g23i

I don't find the problem.

That's all that I can find them.
If my mod can help your map, please mod my map http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/53589

Thank you in advance for your mod, and good luck for rank~

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-08-20T06:11:28+00:00

thx a lot, your modding is so nice

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-20T07:10:39+00:00

No changes. Thanks though!

merchat7

1,676 posts

ed December 2010

2012-08-21T04:52:02+00:00

Saw on page accepting m4m, plus above 3 m4m request have been accepted and cleared.

[General]

No yanagi in tags? Seem odd that you have nagi in tags, but not this.

[Easy]

00:12:103 (1) - Whistle sound good with the hi hat here for me.
00:52:794 (1) - Consider finish at begin, miss this the first time I look through, but read 01:03:644 for reason and you did finish here for similar rhythm in next section.
01:02:288 (4) - The sound at begin here sound like the normal-whistle so consider whistle at begin here.
01:03:644 (1) - Would like finish at begin here, the part before became calmer and then it become intense again, I think the finish represent the increase in intensity here well.
01:14:495 (1) - Consider whistle at end instead of clap to distinguish this slider from the other sliders here? (cymbal at end compare to no cymbal on the other similar sliders)
01:18:564 (2) - For me, the sound in music that sound best with custom clap is the snare drum on the repeat of this slider.
*01:22:634 (1) - Following the vocal for me seem much better so extend it so that it ends at 01:23:990 instead. Feel like I follow the music more and much simpler rhythm (1/1 to next note).
01:24:668 (2) - Since I suggest before to use whistle to follow cymbal, whistle at end? If not, please do a finish. Nice to end this section with a strong hitsound I think.
01:56:543 (3) - Whistle at begin and repeat? Also put repeats at begin and end for this 00:32:449 (2) - if you do this. Don't hear the whistle much so adding at some place would be more interesting hitsound-wise. Also since finish here 00:33:805 (1) - Please add finish at end of this slider.
02:06:037 (1,2,3,4) - Clap at begin on all these sliders sound nice to me. Feel like the composer is emphasizing the stanza here to me so doing clap on your sliders begin here fit perfectly with this.Crescendo effect seem nice too since song is increasing in intensity here.
02:18:923 (2,4) - No clap here like previous section?
02:25:704 (4) - Clap?
02:26:382 (5) - Same as 01:02:288.
02:29:773 (2) - Clap?
*02:46:728 (1) - Same as 01:22:634

Notice some hitsound inconsistency between the two sections, consider double checking hitsound a bit. I mark some stuff with *, which mean, if you don't change, please tell me why so I can understand more about your mapping style.

[Normal]

- Not fond of 2hp > 5hp in Hard and it's the same hp drain as Easy, consider +1 hp drain to this diff

00:12:103 (1) - Whistle at begin, now that I check Hard and Insane, I don't get why whistle wasn't put in Easy & Normal.
00:22:615 (1) - Whistle?
00:25:328 (1,4,5,6) - Feel like you could add some whistle here, a suggestion is end of (1), begin of (4) and on (5,6). If whistle feel empty to you, add to begin of these two sliders 00:26:006 (2,3) and perhaps at end of (2) too.
00:32:449 (3,4,5) - To keep the whistle distribution a bit even throughout the map (if you follow above suggestion), consider whistle on (3,4), begin of (5).
00:39:230 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle every two ticks here starting from the begin of (1)? Seem good with how the vocal and drum is here to me so basically, whistle on the stanza and 3rd white tick.
00:41:943 (1) - Finish at begin
00:52:794 (1) - ^
01:15:004 (2) - Want to see a finish at begin here due to cymbal
01:18:056 (3,4) - Claps on the repeat seem better to me than at end.
*01:22:634 (1,2) - Feel weird to me due to no note on 01:23:312, I feel vocal is much more prominent then drum here so you should follow it instead. Basically, I prefer two repeating sliders with one repeat instead. http://puu.sh/XiEO I don't think you should make a rhythm like this when considering Easy.
01:38:910 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:25:328 about placing some whistle.
01:45:692 (3,4) - Whistle at begin
01:51:117 (2,3) - ^
01:56:543 (3,4) - ^
01:57:899 (1) - Finish at begin
02:02:985 (5,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:39:230
02:06:037 (1) - Finish at begin?
02:27:739 (1) - Finish at begin
*02:34:521 (1) - Don't understand why you change to a slider with a red point all the sudden
*02:46:728 (1,2) - Same as 01:22:634

Same comment about hitsound inconsistency as Easy. I think adding some more whistle would make hitsound more interesting. A bit too much 1/2 to my taste considering Easy, but I'm personally fine with difficulty spread. Be sure to reply to what I mark with * if you don't change those suggestions.

[Hard]

Begin - 00:22:530 - Not too fond of whistle every two stanza since I hear nothing in music to justify them, prefer if you only put when there is cymbal.
*00:31:092 (7) - This 1/4 feel weird to me, sure you don't want to keep it to 1/2 rhythm?
00:34:483 (2,3) - I prefer slider here, but just preference.
00:36:517 (2) - Same shape as (2) looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/XiRQ Adjust placement of (1) a bit of course.
00:52:794 (1) - Finish at begin
01:17:208 (1) - Finish seem better to me than clap
*01:57:729 (1) - I really prefer if you ctrl+r this, this jump feel similar to an Insane.
02:14:175 (2) - Want to see a whistle at begin to follow the guitar
02:32:486 (1,2) - Really prefer playing this pattern stacked than spaced out like before.
*02:45:541 (5) - Seem weird to me you did an anti jump (stack) here, really prefer for you to continue the jump pattern.

I didn't check hitsound really carefully this time and probably won't check it carefully for the next two diffs too, sorry. Hitsound is my least favorite mod to do even through most of my mods so far is based off hitsound. I didn't mention adding whistle since I already mention some ideas from Normal, so please consider them here too and for Insane. Some place I definitely want you to add whistle for example is 00:32:449 (4,5) - (begins) 01:51:117 (1,3) - (begins) Just some quick examples, there are more places. Basically, whenever the vocal is like this, to emphasize it with whistle. I think hitsound will sound really good for these parts if you do this.

[G.Hero]

00:12:442 (2,3,4) - I'm not too fond of playing a straight hit circle pattern, just something that feel unnatural to me, consider like this? http://puu.sh/Xj6r
00:12:782 (4,5) - Also prefer if you add whistle to the last hit circle before each pause, nicer for gameplay to me.
Now my opinion of this part [00:12:103 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5)], I'm not too fond of this rhythm since the vocal isn't singing perfectly on time here, look at 00:13:968 (5). I hope you consider the guitar instead if you want to do something like this or slider to compensate for the timing of vocal singing here.
00:16:851 (5) - Unsure of your whistle pattern here as there are several things you could follow here. I'll assume vocal for now so whistle at begin and end?
00:19:563 (2) - Whistle at begin
00:22:276 (2) - ^
00:44:655 (1,2,3,4) - Prefer 1/2 sliders jump pattern here. One main reason why I want you to do a slider is because of the drums on the red tick, I feel you are ignoring a sound which represent the increase in intensity of this part here. The only way you show the increase in intensity here is by spacing this bit larger and I think this is counter intuitive because it feel like thanks to spacing, this note are 3/2 apart or 2/1 apart, not 1/1. I hope you consider it.
00:46:690 (5,6,7) - Prefer different spacing (jump?) for vocal here. I'm not good with hit circle patterns, but here's an idea http://puu.sh/XjjV. Play it and it feel pretty nice thanks to the jump for these notes.
00:58:219 (3) - Where the slider ball slow down (due to red points) feel off to me, this shape feel more correct to me http://puu.sh/XjlQ
01:01:610 (3,4,5,6) - Would prefer if you keep following the vocal here and do a slider again like 01:00:932 (2). Help prepare for the hit circle jump pattern too.
01:08:392 (1) - If you space this out further from previous note, would be better for me, for example, try x:120 y:368. I hit this too early at first due to spacing.
01:11:104 (1,2,3) - And perhaps you can place this like how you place 01:08:392 (1,2,3) to tell the player it's the 1/4 rhythm again. I thought this was a 1/2 jump pattern.
01:36:706 (2,3,4) - Similar to 00:12:442. To add to this, listen to the vocal, she's not singing in the same pitch or tone, but different. This is why it feel weird to me personally because this pattern suggest she is singing in the same way. This also applies to instrument. Idea incase none http://puu.sh/Xjzs

Wow the second half feel completely different from the 1st half. I feel the second half was really well done, a few stuff I don't agree with, but they are minor. So my only advice is work on the 1st half more. Try just playing the diff once, I feel the 2nd half pre kiai was better than the 1st, but both play prety nicely. For both kiai, I don't like the feel of transiting from playing a long slider then lot of 1/2 hit circles in a row, but that's just my preference. I prefer your hit circle jump pattern in the second kiai through. Hard for me to mention everything I find weird because the more I play this beatmap, the more I get use to all the patterns so sorry that I don't have any suggestion for the second half.

[C.Hero]

- Prefer 1500 audio lead-in for this
- Ignoring hitsound here as I already mention everything I want to in Easy/Normal/Hard, please also apply hitsound suggestion from those diffs here.

00:03:626 (1) - Intentionally not perfectly stack? Pretty noticeable in gameplay and don't see a reason for this.
00:06:339 (1) - 2.3x spacing or lower spacing, too big jump for me compare to the other.
00:10:408 (2) - Prefer this space out like the other two patterns after this.
00:46:351 (2,3,4,5,6) - Prefer a bit higher distant snap (1.2-1.3x), first time I play this, I overshot the hit circles because of the 1.6x distant snap for these two notes 00:46:012 (1,2)
01:45:353 (6) - Idk, but this jump doesn't play as well as 01:40:266 (1) for me, consider reducing to 2.0x?
02:11:463 (1) - I think anti jump works better, something like this feel better to me http://puu.sh/Xk2w
03:48:459 (3,4) - I think you shouldn't do a jump with anti jump. Something like this instead? http://puu.sh/Xk6m
04:41:442 (3,5) - I think the jump should be on (5) or there should should be a jump on (5) so something like this I guess http://puu.sh/Xk8D I really prefer if there was no jump on (3) through.
04:54:840 (5,6) - Slider? Doesn't feel nice to hit a hit circle rhythm like this with timing change.

Quite tired now as quite a long song and 5 diffs so I may have miss some stuff I want to mention, sorry about that.

Don't really have an issue with the map except for the hitsound inconsistency. Pretty noticeable when you use a finish/clap for a part, then stop all the sudden. As usual I'll wait for replies before starring and I'll come back to double check the hitsound incase of any other major inconsistency.

Good luck! Sorry for getting lazy in my mod toward the end. This is the map I want you to mod for m4m http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/50112

Konei

2,959 posts

ed March 2012

2012-08-21T08:40:47+00:00

Heey~ :3

Want mod4mod like said

Easy

00:39:230 (1,2,3,4) I think it sounds pretty nice using soft default clap for those 4 notes~

00:52:794 (1) finish?

01:03:644 (1) finish for emphasizing the downbeat? I think it's really missing here

01:08:392 (1,2) I think this stack is unnecessary for an Easy diff, because you can make it look nice without it and the stack could confuse newbies

01:15:852 (2,1) Here would finishes at the beginnings sound pretty nice because I think they fit good with the first one~

Normal

HD + 1 beacause it's the same as in Easy?

00:52:794 (1) Finish at begin for emphasizing a strong new part? And according to the fact you set a finish on 01:03:644 I think it's pretty fitting~

01:25:346 (3) adding a quite finish could help emphasazing the end~

02:06:037 (1) I think adding a finish to the begin would fit

02:27:739 (1) - ^

Hard

00:52:794 (1) Finish at begin sounds nice~

I think this diff ends on a strange point - where vocals begin. It doesnt care but I wanted to say, I whondered when playing this sudden end

G.Hero

00:39:315 Not sure if it cares but this timing point uses SC 1 although there are no costumed hitsounds for Soft hitsound set used

01:01:610 (6,1,2,3,4) do them to a slider for following the vocal here?

02:29:095 (6,7) Maybe use regular shapes for these two sliders? Looks better in my opinion

C.Hero

00:51:310 I feel like here should be a note for following vocals during the anti jumps

01:09:070 (1) quite finish at beginning?

01:14:495 (1) finish sounds nice Imo

01:15:852 (6) ^

01:17:208 (1) ^

01:20:429 (1) finish at beginning for emphasizing the vocals?~

01:20:938 (1) ^

01:21:447 (2) ^

01:21:955 (1) ^

05:02:289 (6) NC here because of timing change?

Ok

That's all I found >.<~

Here would be my map: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/50572

Good luck~~

04:54:840 (5,6) I feel like a slider would be more fitting due to this strong slow down

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-24T18:40:36+00:00

merchat7 wrote: w1m1n
[G.Hero]

00:12:442 (2,3,4) - I'm not too fond of playing a straight hit circle pattern, just something that feel unnatural to me, consider like this? http://puu.sh/Xj6r　I am generally not either, but considering the patterns used and the shortness of it, It's good.　　
00:12:782 (4,5) - Also prefer if you add whistle to the last hit circle before each pause, nicer for gameplay to me. Um, it lines up with the hitsounding that I used later on in the song as well.
Now my opinion of this part [00:12:103 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5)], I'm not too fond of this rhythm since the vocal isn't singing perfectly on time here, look at 00:13:968 (5). I hope you consider the guitar instead if you want to do something like this or slider to compensate for the timing of vocal singing here. I'd rather keep the rhythm intact. Fitting the vocals exactly would play horribly since the player has to adjust to that stylized rhythm.
00:16:851 (5) - Unsure of your whistle pattern here as there are several things you could follow here. I'll assume vocal for now so whistle at begin and end? Every start of a measure. Most of the hitsounding is specifically done, so I'll most probably refuse most of your hitsound mods unless they're pointing at consistency issues.
00:19:563 (2) - Whistle at begin
00:22:276 (2) - ^
00:44:655 (1,2,3,4) - Prefer 1/2 sliders jump pattern here. One main reason why I want you to do a slider is because of the drums on the red tick, I feel you are ignoring a sound which represent the increase in intensity of this part here. The only way you show the increase in intensity here is by spacing this bit larger and I think this is counter intuitive because it feel like thanks to spacing, this note are 3/2 apart or 2/1 apart, not 1/1. I hope you consider it. The way I segue into each section feels much more vibrant than what you are suggesting. It kills the pacing that is set up and feels unbalanced when the song suddenly goes quiet again right afterward.
00:46:690 (5,6,7) - Prefer different spacing (jump?) for vocal here. I'm not good with hit circle patterns, but here's an idea http://puu.sh/XjjV. Play it and it feel pretty nice thanks to the jump for these notes. Not a good place for a jump - especially with the rhythms that are mapped. It's more focusing on the percussion, not the vocals.
00:58:219 (3) - Where the slider ball slow down (due to red points) feel off to me, this shape feel more correct to me http://puu.sh/XjlQ Hm, adjusted a little bit.
01:01:610 (3,4,5,6) - Would prefer if you keep following the vocal here and do a slider again like 01:00:932 (2). Help prepare for the hit circle jump pattern too. If I stuck with the vocal, I wouldn't use the jumps and it would lose the transitional rhythm.
01:08:392 (1) - If you space this out further from previous note, would be better for me, for example, try x:120 y:368. I hit this too early at first due to spacing. Hrm, alright.
01:11:104 (1,2,3) - And perhaps you can place this like how you place 01:08:392 (1,2,3) to tell the player it's the 1/4 rhythm again. I thought this was a 1/2 jump pattern. It's all 1x DS here. I don't see how you'd interpret a jump when there's nothing in the music and patterns that would suggest such a thing.
01:36:706 (2,3,4) - Similar to 00:12:442. To add to this, listen to the vocal, she's not singing in the same pitch or tone, but different. This is why it feel weird to me personally because this pattern suggest she is singing in the same way. This also applies to instrument. Idea incase none http://puu.sh/Xjzs

Wow the second half feel completely different from the 1st half. I feel the second half was really well done, a few stuff I don't agree with, but they are minor. So my only advice is work on the 1st half more. Try just playing the diff once, I feel the 2nd half pre kiai was better than the 1st, but both play prety nicely. For both kiai, I don't like the feel of transiting from playing a long slider then lot of 1/2 hit circles in a row, but that's just my preference. I prefer your hit circle jump pattern in the second kiai through. Hard for me to mention everything I find weird because the more I play this beatmap, the more I get use to all the patterns so sorry that I don't have any suggestion for the second half. Wel, I think you were missing a lot of the general construction of how the map was made, and a lot of the suggestions would pretty much make me remap the majority of it, which I'd rather not do when the map stands well on it's own. I appreciate the thoughts though. I definitely don't map in this style anymore, haha.

Konei wrote: 5x5237
G.Hero

00:39:315 Not sure if it cares but this timing point uses SC 1 although there are no costumed hitsounds for Soft hitsound set used Doesn't matter if it's left as-is then.

01:01:610 (6,1,2,3,4) do them to a slider for following the vocal here? Explained in previous mod

02:29:095 (6,7) Maybe use regular shapes for these two sliders? Looks better in my opinion I agree.

Thanks you two!

http://puu.sh/YqbR

Konei

2,959 posts

ed March 2012

2012-08-24T18:42:43+00:00

Sorry >.< Ignore this useless post please :3

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-08-24T18:45:49+00:00

updated. will mod asap

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,176 posts

ed September 2011

2012-08-24T20:01:26+00:00

Mod 4 Mod Request!

General
-> There is a huge difficulty gap between Easy and Normal difficulties. Consider making Easy harder or make Normal easier.

Easy
-> HP Drain -1?
-> Is this map finished? It stops at 02:54:866.
00:41:943 (1,2,3,4) - You could make this combo symmetrical. Thus is optional.
01:10:426 (3) - Remove combo here or add new combo at 01:10:426 (3).

Normal
-> Is this map finished? It stops at 02:54:866.
-> Why is the drain rate lower than easy difficulty? Make the drain higher than Easy.
-> This looks more like a "Normal+" difficulty imo. Looks a bit harder than most normal difficulties.
00:36:517 (4) - New combo?
02:45:032 (2,3) - Why not just make this 1 slider just like 02:44:015 (1)? It's much simpler.

Hard
-> Is this map finished? It stops at 02:54:866.
-> Overall Difficulty -1 or even -2? Looks a bit too high for Hard difficulty.
Approach Rate -1? Looks a bit too high for Hard difficulty.
-> This looks like an Insane to be honest XD (or even a "Hard +" difficulty).
01:11:104 (5) - Try adding a new combo here.
02:10:784 (5) - Remove clap at end of slider?

G. Hero
-> Is this map finished? It stops at 02:54:866.
00:15:494 (4,5) - Spacing?
01:02:797 (4) - New Combo?
01:03:305 (7) - ^
01:13:139 (6) - ^
01:13:987 (11,12) - Ctrl+R?
02:42:489 (3) - New Combo?

C. Hero
-> Personally, I prefer CS 4 otherwise, no suggestions here.

Overall, this map is very good. Sorry if my mod doesn't help at the slightest. Good Luck with your map in advance.

Here's My Map: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/52624.

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-25T15:01:23+00:00

BeatofIke wrote: 3q196d
G. Hero
-> Is this map finished? It stops at 02:54:866. Dingdingdingdingding. You found the trend! Congratulations!
00:15:494 (4,5) - Spacing? Uh, what?
01:02:797 (4) - New Combo? Too early for a new combo
01:03:305 (7) - ^ ^
01:13:139 (6) - ^ ^
01:13:987 (11,12) - Ctrl+R? Nah
02:42:489 (3) - New Combo? Nah

Thanks for looking! Maybe clarify what you meant with spacing at 0:15 though.

popner

osu! Alumni

2,407 posts

ed March 2011

2012-08-27T01:58:25+00:00

Hi ~ M4M from #modreq.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:48:724 (2,3) - add whistle?
00:51:437 (1,2) - same suggestion as [Hard]
02:15:532 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:615 (1) - remove NC?
00:25:328 (1,3,5) - add some green line to make them end on a S:C2? Just like what you did for 00:23:632 (3,4)
00:51:437 (1,2,3,4) - use clap instead of whistle?
01:15:682 (4,5) - exchange them like this? http://puu.sh/Zbti Like 01:18:395 (4)
02:22:822 (2,3) - exchange them like this to follow the vocal which start at 02:22:822 (2), and move 02:23:670 (1,2,3) to 02:23:500?

[G.Hero]
01:02:627 (3) - NC? The patter is complex
01:04:831 (5,6) - exchange them like this to follow the vocal better? http://puu.sh/ZbhI
02:26:891 (4,7) - NC?
02:28:926 (5,6) - same as 01:04:831 (5,6)

[C.Hero]
00:03:287 (4,1) - it is a similar stack as 00:02:270 (1,2), but they are different in rhythm. So extend (4) by 1/4 tick?
00:51:437 (1,2) - use clap instead of whistle?
04:04:735 (1) - move this NC to 04:04:057 (7)?

That's all I can find. GL~

If you consider this as a M4M, mod this plaese: http://osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net/s/55951

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-27T10:29:22+00:00

popner wrote: 2kn2a
[G.Hero]
01:02:627 (3) - NC? The patter is complex Nah, I'd rather not use new combos to denote jumps.
01:04:831 (5,6) - exchange them like this to follow the vocal better? http://puu.sh/ZbhI That really disrupts the general rhythmic flow imo.
02:26:891 (4,7) - NC?
02:28:926 (5,6) - same as 01:04:831 (5,6)

Thanks!

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-09-03T04:29:35+00:00

fixed some hitsounds pointed. thx for the checking through!

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2012-09-20T00:39:47+00:00

Hi ~ Colin Hou ~

Mod time for my luck Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[C.Hero] 3y6g2p

03:39:289 (11) - Add new combo,long combo imo.
03:53:206 (6) - Don't use 5% volume,at least 10%.
04:34:575 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:41:187 (2,3,4) - Too huge jump,so add nc to 04:41:442 (3).

[G.Hero] l5o1o

00:56:015 (2,3) - I guess change a slider more fit here.
00:59:406 - This finish sound weird to me.
02:29:095 (6,7) - Try make more symmetry slider.

[Hard] 1u1958

01:08:392 (1,2,3) - Stacked 3/4 really unreadble and looks confused.
02:21:635 (3,4) - Slider first sound much better.
02:23:500 - Maybe add a circle?

Hope this can help you,nice map.

Good luck with rank ~

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-09-20T01:21:53+00:00

all fixed, waiting dean's reply.

Verdisphena

4,240 posts

ed June 2010

2012-09-20T04:28:53+00:00

Good luck Colin, this map is beautiful

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-09-20T04:53:08+00:00

Dean x_x Ill check when I get back from work.

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631

[G.Hero] l5o1o

00:56:015 (2,3) - I guess change a slider more fit here. Adding a slider there gives a strange feeling in comparison to the rhythms used afterward. I would want to use more sliders to compensate, and it loses a lot of the circle -> slider flow imo.

00:59:406 - This finish sound weird to me. 02:23:500 (6) - It's the same as here. I'm emphasizing the peak of the vocal line here.

02:29:095 (6,7) - Try make more symmetry slider. mm, they weren't meant to be symmetrical. They were just a lot uglier at first, haha. Shaped them to convey this better.

SPOILER

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324,112,67544,2,0,B|324:132|324:132|320:156|296:156|296:156|216:156|216:156|192:156|184:176|184:176|184:204,1,192.000004577637,4|0
120,368,68392,5,0
216,296,68646,1,0
332,268,68900,1,0
412,268,69070,2,0,B|472:268|540:192|472:116|412:116,1,240,4|0
332,116,69748,1,0
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112,196,70765,1,0
108,36,71104,5,0
184,128,71359,1,0
260,36,71613,1,0
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396,136,72461,2,0,B|396:176|396:176|396:208|424:242|468:240|468:240|468:332,1,240
396,312,73139,1,0
328,356,73309,1,0
324,276,73478,1,2
256,320,73648,1,0
192,268,73817,1,0
148,200,73987,1,0
228,196,74156,1,4
184,128,74326,1,0
144,56,74495,6,0,B|84:32|24:64|20:128,1,160,0|8
96,260,75004,2,0,B|152:284|68:384|176:304|192:372,1,160,4|8
308,344,75513,1,0
380,248,75682,2,0,B|432:172|384:96,1,160,4|0
383,94,76106,1,8
380,90,76191,1,8
272,36,76360,2,0,B|188:36,2,80,0|8|0
344,320,77039,5,8
320,244,77208,2,0,B|296:200|256:196|216:200|192:244,1,160,4|8
168,320,77717,1,4
396,244,78056,1,0
184,72,78395,1,8
256,340,78734,1,8
336,72,79073,1,8
116,244,79412,1,8
304,232,79921,6,0,B|392:164|512:228|464:356,1,288.000006866455,4|4
208,152,80938,2,0,B|120:220|0:156|48:28,1,288.000006866455,4|4
376,72,81955,1,8
136,304,82294,1,4
376,296,82634,5,0
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352,264,83990,1,0
280,300,84159,5,8
232,236,84329,1,0
296,188,84499,1,0
220,160,84668,1,8
172,96,84838,1,0
216,28,85007,1,8
296,28,85177,1,8
344,92,85346,1,4
256,192,85516,12,0,86872
136,200,94841,6,0,B|160:320|256:344|352:320|376:200,1,359.999989271164,4|2
256,32,96197,6,0,B|220:84|304:128|256:184,1,160,4|0
200,240,96706,1,0
140,296,96875,1,0
80,348,97045,1,0
36,144,97384,5,0
84,80,97553,1,2
160,56,97723,1,0
236,80,97893,1,0
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360,72,98740,5,0
440,60,98910,1,2
492,120,99079,1,0
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384,212,99588,1,0
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436,272,100266,6,0,B|332:152,1,160,2|0
280,88,100775,1,0
228,28,100944,2,0,B|255:4|303:12,2,80
120,240,101623,5,2
176,300,101792,2,0,B|248:364|320:300,1,160
396,284,102301,2,0,B|432:264|476:288,1,80,0|0
344,232,102640,2,0,B|364:196|340:152,1,80,0|0
428,208,102979,6,0,B|444:120|368:68,1,160,2|0
268,192,103657,2,0,B|193:141|209:53,1,160
104,272,104335,5,2
160,328,104505,2,2,B|200:328|200:328|240:344,1,80,0|0
240,260,104844,2,2,B|280:260|280:260|320:244,1,80,0|0
356,344,105183,2,2,B|436:344,2,80,0|0|0
237,343,105692,6,2,B|148:348|104:272,1,160,2|0
240,184,106370,2,2,B|187:111|103:115,1,160,0|0
296,260,107048,5,0
352,320,107218,1,0
432,320,107387,1,0
484,260,107557,1,0
484,180,107726,2,0,B|484:124|448:80|388:68,1,160
200,152,108404,5,2
160,220,108574,1,0
120,152,108743,1,0
80,220,108913,1,0
44,292,109083,2,0,B|64:352|144:352|164:292,1,160
247,258,109591,5,0
324,284,109761,1,0
400,308,109930,1,0
384,228,110100,1,0
408,152,110269,1,0
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252,144,110608,1,0
312,88,110778,1,0
336,12,110948,1,0
256,28,111117,6,0,B|172:56|156:144,1,160,2|0
364,148,111795,2,0,B|348:234|264:262,1,160
40,348,112473,5,0
48,268,112643,1,0
64,188,112813,2,0,B|80:100|156:64,1,160,0|2
232,36,113321,1,0
308,24,113491,1,0
384,36,113660,1,0
448,84,113830,6,0,B|500:148|480:236,1,160
256,108,114508,2,0,B|236:194|288:258,1,160,2|0
468,360,115186,5,0
388,368,115356,1,0
308,372,115525,1,0
228,376,115695,1,0
164,328,115864,2,0,B|96:288,1,80,2|0
152,232,116203,2,0,B|84:192,1,80
144,136,116543,5,0
292,88,116797,1,0
292,88,116882,1,2
496,136,117221,1,0
292,184,117560,1,0
160,136,117729,1,8
154,138,117814,1,0
147,140,117899,6,0,B|79:172|51:244|79:316|147:348,1,263.999992132187,4|0
304,272,118747,1,0
392,268,118916,1,8
448,200,119086,1,0
448,112,119255,2,0,B|448:24,2,87.9999973773957,0|0|8
196,192,119933,5,0
128,236,120103,1,0
80,300,120273,2,0,B|148:364|252:340,1,175.999994754791,8|0
276,184,120951,2,0,B|371:161|439:225,1,175.999994754791,8|0
484,292,121459,1,0
452,364,121629,1,8
244,268,121968,5,0
172,236,122138,1,0
120,176,122307,1,8
92,100,122477,1,0
172,112,122646,2,0,B|197:22,1,87.9999973773957,8|0
236,188,122985,2,0,B|261:98,1,87.9999973773957,8|0
280,32,123324,5,8
352,16,123494,2,0,B|404:-4|460:20|468:92,1,160,4|0
480,168,124003,1,8
476,248,124172,1,0
412,292,124342,1,8
332,292,124511,1,0
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260,128,130615,1,0
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376,236,130954,1,8
432,296,131123,2,0,B|464:280|504:232|464:184|432:168,1,160,8|4
132,292,132141,5,0
376,88,132819,1,2
64,56,133836,6,0,B|132:60|104:164|176:168,1,160,0|2
344,276,134514,1,0
404,360,134684,1,0
180,276,135023,1,0
404,192,135362,1,0
464,276,135532,5,8
464,276,135701,1,2
48,108,136210,1,8
48,108,136379,1,2
388,64,136888,6,0,B|328:228|256:192|184:156|124:312,1,384.000009155274,4|0
172,384,137736,1,0
256,364,137905,1,8
340,384,138075,1,0
408,328,138244,2,0,B|452:240,1,96.0000022888184,4|0
496,136,138583,1,8
336,288,138923,2,0,B|292:200,1,96.0000022888184,4|0
248,96,139262,1,8
176,48,139431,1,0
104,92,139601,6,0,B|32:156|32:156|32:252,1,192.000004577637,4|8
84,320,140109,1,0
164,352,140279,1,0
244,324,140448,1,0
332,324,140618,1,8
412,288,140788,1,0
448,208,140957,2,0,B|472:116,1,96.0000022888184,2|0
388,136,141296,2,0,B|388:40,1,96.0000022888184,2|0
328,208,141635,2,0,B|304:116,1,96.0000022888184,2|2
256,44,141974,5,8
204,116,142144,1,0
184,200,142313,2,0,B|184:256|184:256|184:316|240:340|276:300,1,192.000004577637,4|0
392,216,142822,1,0
168,32,143161,1,8
256,308,143500,1,4
344,32,143839,1,0
120,216,144178,1,4
392,216,144517,1,8
256,8,144857,5,0
176,40,145026,2,0,B|68:80|68:216|176:256,1,288.000006866455
256,288,145704,1,0
340,272,145874,1,0
412,224,146043,1,8
460,152,146213,1,0
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372,24,146552,1,0
284,28,146722,1,0
196,152,146891,1,8
208,236,147061,1,0
264,304,147230,1,0
416,284,147400,1,8
472,220,147569,1,8
388,200,147739,6,0,B|296:104|232:80|192:88,1,191.999994140625,4|0
152,72,148247,1,0
48,296,148587,1,0
60,212,148756,1,8
124,156,148926,1,0
180,224,149095,2,0,B|224:280|296:280|360:256,1,191.999994140625,4|8
180,88,149773,2,0,B|224:32|296:32|360:56,1,191.999994140625,4|8
380,348,150452,6,0,B|309:285|309:285|288:298|238:303|214:269,1,191.999994140625,4|8
160,84,150960,2,0,B|230:147|230:147|257:133|300:132|325:165,1,191.999994140625,0|8
268,216,151469,1,0
352,240,151638,1,0
360,244,151723,1,8
367,247,151808,1,0
112,52,152486,5,0
68,164,152740,1,0
104,280,152995,1,0
172,324,153164,2,0,B|284:372|408:328,1,240,4|0
476,288,153842,1,0
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180,88,154521,1,2
244,136,154690,1,8
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68,300,155199,5,0
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284,300,155707,1,0
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100,136,157233,1,0
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324,60,159098,2,0,B|276:40|256:20|256:20|236:40|172:64,1,160,4|8
80,112,159607,1,8
36,224,159777,1,8
34,231,159861,1,0
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212,360,160455,1,4
304,336,160624,1,0
376,276,160794,2,0,B|440:208|396:128,1,160,8|8
393,122,161218,1,0
387,116,161302,6,0,B|320:56|232:96,1,160,4|8
127,225,161811,2,0,B|194:285|276:248,1,160,4|8
416,52,162489,1,8
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256,360,171136,1,0
256,360,171306,1,0
300,124,171475,6,0,B|356:68,1,80,4|4
212,124,171814,2,0,B|156:68,1,80,4|0
336,288,172153,5,12
336,288,172323,1,0
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256,192,173510,12,4,174866

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-09-20T16:23:24+00:00

@Verdisphena thanks, I think I need luck this year.

and updated

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2012-09-21T09:02:03+00:00

Nice job old map ~

Here you go :3

thelewa

3,537 posts

ed August 2010

2012-09-25T05:00:30+00:00

gogogogo

lolcubes

osu! Alumni

4,437 posts

ed November 2010

2012-09-30T17:06:56+00:00

There are certain issues with the timing and while that is sorted this should be popped.
Spoke to Colin about it and we should take care of this carefully and correctly I hope.

Verdisphena

4,240 posts

ed June 2010

2012-10-05T22:51:30+00:00

D:

wonders

610 posts

ed December 2011

2012-10-06T06:38:00+00:00

好可怜的感觉

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-10-06T09:09:35+00:00

不不这正合我意有的问题不解决不行而且能求助的人太少自己上门爽歪歪

wonders

610 posts

ed December 2011

2012-10-13T19:46:12+00:00

也许时机终于到了？

lolcubes

osu! Alumni

4,437 posts

ed November 2010

2012-10-20T02:14:31+00:00

Okay, I have come up with something. This should be good enough I think. I playtested this on a custom diff I made from your diff under OD10 and it was working alright. I just hope it's not bad because I had some errors when it came to timing and osu for a while (due to updates I guess), should be alright now I think.

Here are only red lines taken from my timing.osu, just try to fix the volume and sample sets, I was using lower volume for testing on the default sample set (I suggest that you create a new diff and put them there first, sorry for making more work for you this way but there is just too many of them to just write them down):

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
1266,338.696020321761,4,2,0,30,1,0
12110,339.366515837104,4,2,0,70,1,0
22983,338.983050847458,4,1,0,50,1,0
33805,339.145917531018,4,1,0,50,1,0
52795,338.983050847458,4,1,0,35,1,0
58210,339.366515837104,4,1,0,35,1,0
63649,339.222614840989,4,1,0,35,1,0
77210,338.983050847458,4,1,0,35,1,0
79920,339.174674957603,4,1,0,35,1,0
82638,339.462517680339,4,1,0,35,1,0
96212,338.753387533875,4,1,0,30,1,0
101632,338.858611244458,4,1,0,50,1,0
107050,338.696020321761,4,1,0,50,1,0
117903,339.07883582933,4,1,0,50,1,0
136891,338.983050847458,4,1,0,50,1,0
147738,339.654684404189,4,1,0,50,1,0
153170,339.030936572962,4,1,0,50,1,0
166728,338.743824982357,4,1,0,50,1,0
169435,338.028169014084,4,1,0,50,1,0
172146,339.174674957603,4,1,0,50,1,0
185725,339.174674957603,4,1,0,50,1,0
191151,338.504936530324,4,1,0,50,1,0
196568,339.07883582933,4,1,0,50,1,0
218267,340.909090909091,4,1,0,50,1,0
220985,333.333333333333,4,1,0,50,1,0
222985,363.636363636364,4,1,0,50,1,0
223712,339.07883582933,4,2,0,50,1,0
234562,338.983050847458,4,1,0,50,1,0
242692,338.600451467269,4,1,0,50,1,0
245400,338.218714768884,4,1,0,50,1,0
248121,339.366515837104,4,2,0,20,1,0
252193,338.791643139469,4,1,0,30,1,0
253538,338.983050847458,4,1,0,50,1,0
261673,339.366515837104,4,1,0,50,1,0
264390,338.983050847458,4,1,0,50,1,0
267100,339.750849377123,4,1,0,50,1,0
269824,339.174674957603,4,1,0,50,1,0
280682,339.174674957603,4,1,0,50,1,0
292886,697.674418604651,3,2,0,30,1,0
293513,697.674418604651,3,2,0,30,1,0
294211,419.58041958042,3,2,0,30,1,0
294840,437.956204379562,3,2,0,30,1,0
297365,472.44094488189,4,2,0,30,1,0
300208,769.230769230769,4,2,0,30,1,0
300977,821.917808219178,4,2,0,30,1,0
301798,983.606557377049,4,2,0,30,1,0
302946,560.747663551402,4,2,0,30,1,0

Or alternatively you can check it out yourself in the timing diff I made out from your diff (with some modifications): http://puu.sh/1gTOk
edit: I forgot a red line at 04:52:213 in this diff and up there ;_; Add a red line here with 68.5 bpm (why 68.5? Because the note at 04:55:715 (1) lands nicely on the downbeat which is sort of how it goes, except that it's just meh around here due to improvisations). Also don't forget to restart the downbeat at 04:55:715 and make these ending timing sections 4/4.

I apologize for providing it like this, but there is simply too many red lines. Now, let me give you some comments on certain timing points (luckily you had breaks where stuff was getting super weird).
04:46:108 - I would finish the song/map around here, because of the calm part that comes afterwards. That calm part is impossible to time correctly because there is no distinct (sudden) instrument/vocal playing, you have a lot of fade in, fade out and guitar chords playing fast so you can't really time this properly, so I didn't touch your timing here, since I doubt I could do much better, except that it should get it's downbeats tweaked properly (base bpm here is 68.5, or how you did it with 137). The only thing I am 100% sure here is that your final red line is not 120bpm, but 107, because that makes the spinner end correctly. Also, it's a rhythm game, and at this end there is no real rhythm at all, it's a watch-the-approach-circle game, which is kinda impossible on hidden (not a requirement, however a good thing to think of :p )

Also I would consider using OD7 here, just because timing is very funky, and if you prefer to keep the end, then definitely OD7, else it's too hard to get decent accuracy at the end due to somewhat dodgy timing.

As for the playtest let me suggest a few things in your highest diff (gonna use your timing here):

00:01:253 - 00:12:103 - In this part you use way too many doubles which makes the somewhat constant rhythm break. I am really not fond of using so many notes because I feel it doesn't fit and is just annoying. Also the new combo spacing changes are too drastic for comfortable play, I wouldn't use such sudden jumps at all. You don't have to think of something super clever either, it's the beginning of the song and starting it nice and easy is perfectly fine.

00:51:098 (7) - Sounds much better if you have it at 00:51:268. You have several spots in the map like this so it goes for that as well.

02:46:135 (8,9) - I just find that these two notes play awful and don't really enrich the song. I would remove both of them. Goes the same for 02:45:287 (4) as well actually. If you fear it sounds empty, instead of empty space consider using longer sliders, as the vocals hold.

03:15:381 - This unmapped spot is flow breaking and completely messes up the rhythm because the long stream starts on a blue tick. To be honest, if you want less notes, rather remove the previous and next note from this spot, and have a circle here, else just map the full drumline (which includes this spot as well).

04:12:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - This needs to change. The drumline is 1/3 here. Wrong ticks! :p

04:32:541 (5,6,7) - I hate the note 6 because it just interrupts the rhythm. Removing it and making a long slider between 5-7 would fit best in my opinion.

That's about it. I hope you don't mind me not rechecking this and having it rebubbled by someone else, because simply I just don't have time, I am already behind in everything I do. ;_;
Cool map otherwise.

In closing, I have updated my wishlist, which includes a metronome for the band supercell. They really need it.

wonders

610 posts

ed December 2011

2012-10-22T20:11:31+00:00

功夫不负有心人啊。

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-10-23T09:22:28+00:00

angelfix wrote: 4j7113
功夫不负有心人啊。

实际上是基本没戏了

kanpakyin

Global

4,236 posts

ed June 2010

2012-10-23T11:20:27+00:00

李白也搞不定麼?...

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-10-23T11:51:26+00:00

kanpakyin wrote: 5d1w6q
李白也搞不定麼?...

cube已经搞完了 \:D/ 只是没时间去抓人了

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

ed January 2011

2012-11-23T23:58:53+00:00

wow~ let's see what we got here. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:17:539 (1) - perhaps you can align this note to (2) diagonally like you did with (3,4) so that the transition from the next note looks smoother during gameplay since it makes a shape?
00:31:118 (1) - some people might mind about this overlap since it's being covered and the slight overlap make the diff look bad IMO. perhaps you can move this up where it can be fully visible for beginners?
00:37:874 (2) - do Ctrl+H for this because the transition is already smooth from the last 2 notes. since it's facing the other way, the flow and transition is broken since it's facing the other way.
01:00:924 (3) - same as above about the flow and transition.
01:09:076 (2) - i can hear a cymbal clash here, so add a finish to go along with it.
01:11:790 (4) - NC here. this is where the lyrics in the song change.
01:20:937 (3) - ^
01:38:922 (3) - i suggest that you use this code so that the slider looks symmetrical.

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01:47:050 (1) - why not align this note to (3) going down? i feel that if you do this, the flow will increase and it'll be more straightforward then leaving the slider up there IMO. if you ignore this, the perhaps you can flip the slider like this. same reason.
02:25:704 (4) - how about moving the note here? same reason as 00:31:118 about the overlap.
02:33:170 (1) - same as 01:09:076, but at the beginning.

[Normal]
00:13:467 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning. it'll be consistent with (1) since it shows emphasis in the vocals/instrumental.
00:14:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above but just add the whistles since they're only circles.
00:27:050 (4) - maybe flip it the other way so that it'd be easier to get to, and thus increasing the flow for this?
00:36:518 (4) - NC here. same reasons as easy about it. the lyrics change in this part of the song.
00:41:605 (4) - try a stack on (2) for a smoother transition in the diff?
00:48:727 (2,3) - same as 00:13:467.
02:08:753 (5) - same as 00:36:518.
02:12:822 (2,3) - same as 00:14:824.
02:33:170 (2) - finish here. you can hear the cymbals here in this part.

[Hard]
00:13:467 (3) - same as normal.
00:14:527 (5,1) - same as above, but move the whistle from the beginning of (5) to the beginning of (1).
00:16:182 (1) - same as 00:13:467.
00:18:897 (1) - ^
00:19:915 (1) - same as above, but move it to the end from the beginning.
00:21:612 (3) - same as 00:13:467.
if you notice, the whistles show emphasis in the guitar.
00:30:779 (6) - add a timing point at the end of this slider. the sampleset sounds too distracting and it might throw off players during gameplay IMO. i suggest something around 20%, if not, no less then 30-35%.
01:13:825 (8) - can you curve this slider, similar to (9)? if you see during gameplay, it looks like a straight slider and from what i see, it's supposed to curve, as if it's taking a slight turn.
01:38:244 - add a 1/2 slider but delete (5) while you do this. it'll flow to the vocals a lot smoother during gameplay. i heard a part in the vocals in which that i feel a slider should fit here since there's a hold in it.
02:10:787 (5) - i think that you should straighten this slider because i understand that they're all curved, but the flow in this plays awkwardly during gameplay IMO.
02:33:170 (4) - same as normal.

[Garven-sama~]
00:15:164 (3,4,5) - maybe you can move them like this. when i played this part, the flow here played awkwarly during gameplay for me.

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00:41:266 (5,6,7) - why not make a triangle out of this like you did with (2,3,4)? i feel that the flow here is broken in this triangle since it branches off to a different kind of triangle during gameplay IMO.
00:59:397 (6) - is there a reason why a finish is there? it sounds distracting and unfitting to this part of the song. i suggest replacing it for a whistle since it's quiet and matches the vocals. if you ignore this, then you should decrease the volume of the finish a bit more so that it doesn't sounds distracting during gameplay.
01:04:327 - perhaps a circle here? i feel that something is missing here to follow up in the vocals/instrumental from (1,2), and it feels as if the flow stopped for some odd reason.
01:07:550 (3) - is the end intentionally at 0%?
02:20:958 (7,8,9) - i like the way how you added the whistles here. from what i see, nice way of showing emphasis in the vocals.
02:28:417 - same as 01:04:327.

[C.Hero]
00:07:362 (5) - i'm thinking a stack on the beginning of the slider for a smoother transition to the song during gameplay. it plays awkwardly here during gameplay IMO.
00:13:467 (2) - same as hard.
00:14:824 (1) - ^, but at the beginning.
00:16:182 (4) - same as 00:13:467.
00:18:897 (6) - same as 00:14:824.
02:11:127 (6) - i suggest moving this note down because the spacing would look evened out in this diamond pattern. the DS should be between 1.50-1.60 and i think this would make the flow smoother during gameplay.
03:12:505 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps stacking the ends together might work on the previous combo? same as above, but this time, it's the transition that should increase during gameplay.
03:39:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - - i got an idea for the streams in this combo. you know how you increased the spacing in the last combo? do the same thing here, but for (1-5), use 0.6 and for (6-10), use 0.8 so that flows to the guitar. in other words for every riff, the spacing increases each stream, and i think that would make a nice challenge for players IMO.
04:25:406 (4) - can you do a perfect stack at the ends? personally everytime i see that slider end showing for a bit, i find it a bit distracting for me during gameplay.
04:35:081 (8) - move this to the left, aligning this note to (4,8), that way the flow is smoother during gameplay.

and i guess that's it. whenever you're done, catch me in-game for a re-check :3.

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-11-25T17:49:15+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote: 2q5k2r
[Garven-sama~]
00:15:164 (3,4,5) - maybe you can move them like this. when i played this part, the flow here played awkwarly during gameplay for me.

I find the current iteration better flow-wise - it's aiming straight for the next combo.

00:41:266 (5,6,7) - why not make a triangle out of this like you did with (2,3,4)? i feel that the flow here is broken in this triangle since it branches off to a different kind of triangle during gameplay IMO.

If you listen to the way the musical phrase lilts between essentially the same two notes until the end with "dakara" trailing into the next phrase, that's how I chose to represent it.

00:59:397 (6) - is there a reason why a finish is there? it sounds distracting and unfitting to this part of the song. i suggest replacing it for a whistle since it's quiet and matches the vocals. if you ignore this, then you should decrease the volume of the finish a bit more so that it doesn't sounds distracting during gameplay.

It's there to emphasize the vocals. I do it later in the next chorus as well. I like using the soft finish, and the volume feels good to me. I like a loud part to give a strong emphasis to the phrase.

01:04:327 - perhaps a circle here? i feel that something is missing here to follow up in the vocals/instrumental from (1,2), and it feels as if the flow stopped for some odd reason.

I don't want the 1/2 rhythms to endlessly drone on. It's boring.

01:07:550 (3) - is the end intentionally at 0%?

That helps date how old this map is, haha. Set to 5%.

02:20:958 (7,8,9) - i like the way how you added the whistles here. from what i see, nice way of showing emphasis in the vocals.

They were supposed to be soft whistles emphasizing the guitar, actually. >_>

02:28:417 - same as 01:04:327.

Thanks!

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48,296,148587,1,0,0:0:0
60,212,148756,1,8,0:0:0
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176,348,155458,1,0,0:0:0
284,300,155712,1,0,0:0:0
232,236,155882,2,0,B|331:166|331:166|396:181|422:139|437:116,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,84,156560,2,0,B|312:16|224:0|148:76,1,240
100,136,157238,1,0,0:0:0
60,204,157407,1,0,0:0:0
60,284,157577,1,2,0:0:0
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232,356,158255,1,4,0:0:0
300,316,158424,1,0,0:0:0
368,276,158594,6,0,B|440:236|456:148,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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80,112,159611,1,8,0:0:0
36,224,159781,1,8,0:0:0
34,231,159865,1,0,0:0:0
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212,360,160459,1,4,0:0:0
304,336,160628,1,0,0:0:0
376,276,160798,2,0,B|440:208|396:128,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
393,122,161221,1,0,0:0:0
387,116,161306,6,0,B|320:56|232:96,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
127,225,161815,2,0,B|194:285|276:248,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,52,162493,1,8,0:0:0
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lolcubes

osu! Alumni

4,437 posts

ed November 2010

2012-12-07T18:32:51+00:00

Hey, I just went over the timing a bit, just in case, and it looks fine now more or less.
Though, I know that I already made it for you, I had some small doubts about certain things, but because of consistency it would be good to change.

04:52:213 - change to 137 bpm
04:52:886 - 4/4
04:53:513 - 4/4
04:54:211 - 4/4
04:54:840 - 4/4
04:55:715 - 4/4

^ I guess the signature isn't that important since you already spam red lines, but whatever haha.

Also one more thing: 02:51:463 (2) - this ends on a wrong tick.

(no kd)

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-12-07T18:44:35+00:00

Thanks a lot! I'll fix them once get a pc.

This is from my cellphone :3 (the auto mail hehe

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-12-17T22:22:25+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote: 2q5k2r
wow~ let's see what we got here. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:17:539 (1) - perhaps you can align this note to (2) diagonally like you did with (3,4) so that the transition from the next note looks smoother during gameplay since it makes a shape? I don't tend to do that.
00:31:118 (1) - some people might mind about this overlap since it's being covered and the slight overlap make the diff look bad IMO. perhaps you can move this up where it can be fully visible for beginners? slidertrack is clear and the timing gap is really huge.
00:37:874 (2) - do Ctrl+H for this because the transition is already smooth from the last 2 notes. since it's facing the other way, the flow and transition is broken since it's facing the other way. If you mean this.
01:00:924 (3) - same as above about the flow and transition. ^
01:09:076 (2) - i can hear a cymbal clash here, so add a finish to go along with it. done. also in other diffs
01:11:790 (4) - NC here. this is where the lyrics in the song change. no, it's in the middle of lyrics
01:20:937 (3) - ^ ^ and it's still a short combo
01:38:922 (3) - i suggest that you use this code so that the slider looks symmetrical. I don't mean to do that.
SPOILER
424,232,98922,2,0,B|368:248|344:248|344:248|320:288|344:320|344:320|368:320|424:336,2,240
01:47:050 (1) - why not align this note to (3) going down? i feel that if you do this, the flow will increase and it'll be more straightforward then leaving the slider up there IMO. if you ignore this, the perhaps you can flip the slider like this. same reason. ok
02:25:704 (4) - how about moving the note here? same reason as 00:31:118 about the overlap. no
02:33:170 (1) - same as 01:09:076, but at the beginning. done, also in other diffs.

[Normal]
00:13:467 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning. it'll be consistent with (1) since it shows emphasis in the vocals/instrumental. no, and did some change about whistle consistent in Hard diff.
00:14:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above but just add the whistles since they're only circles. no
00:27:050 (4) - maybe flip it the other way so that it'd be easier to get to, and thus increasing the flow for this? it's not hard and flow good.
00:36:518 (4) - NC here. same reasons as easy about it. the lyrics change in this part of the song. that's for pattern as you see.
00:41:605 (4) - try a stack on (2) for a smoother transition in the diff? no. I seldom use stacks in this situation.

[Hard]
00:30:779 (6) - add a timing point at the end of this slider. the sampleset sounds too distracting and it might throw off players during gameplay IMO. i suggest something around 20%, if not, no less then 30-35%. that's intended.
01:13:825 (8) - can you curve this slider, similar to (9)? if you see during gameplay, it looks like a straight slider and from what i see, it's supposed to curve, as if it's taking a slight turn. no.
01:38:244 - add a 1/2 slider but delete (5) while you do this. it'll flow to the vocals a lot smoother during gameplay. i heard a part in the vocals in which that i feel a slider should fit here since there's a hold in it. in fact this note is to make things smoother. I dont feel like to leave a stop before 01:38:922 (1)
02:10:787 (5) - i think that you should straighten this slider because i understand that they're all curved, but the flow in this plays awkwardly during gameplay IMO. no.
02:33:170 (4) - same as normal.

[C.Hero]
00:07:362 (5) - i'm thinking a stack on the beginning of the slider for a smoother transition to the song during gameplay. it plays awkwardly here during gameplay IMO. no
02:11:127 (6) - i suggest moving this note down because the spacing would look evened out in this diamond pattern. the DS should be between 1.50-1.60 and i think this would make the flow smoother during gameplay. I don't tended to make that pattern.
03:12:505 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps stacking the ends together might work on the previous combo? same as above, but this time, it's the transition that should increase during gameplay. that would make the spacing afterwards too much.
03:39:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - - i got an idea for the streams in this combo. you know how you increased the spacing in the last combo? do the same thing here, but for (1-5), use 0.6 and for (6-10), use 0.8 so that flows to the guitar. in other words for every riff, the spacing increases each stream, and i think that would make a nice challenge for players IMO. it's not good in this circlesize and confusing.
04:25:406 (4) - can you do a perfect stack at the ends? personally everytime i see that slider end showing for a bit, i find it a bit distracting for me during gameplay. I was trying.
04:35:081 (8) - move this to the left, aligning this note to (4,8), that way the flow is smoother during gameplay. ok

and i guess that's it. whenever you're done, catch me in-game for a re-check :3.

the [i] things are really difficult to read x_x, hope your cold get better now.

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

ed January 2011

2012-12-17T22:27:15+00:00

ahh my cold? i feel a lot better, and in my future mods, i changed the text for the suggestions :3.

Pokie

osu! Alumni

2,630 posts

ed December 2009

2012-12-17T22:36:40+00:00

怒連著割れたリンゴ一起搞♂了!

Colin Hou

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4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-12-17T22:40:31+00:00

Pokie wrote: 113j1p
怒連著割れたリンゴ一起搞♂了!

再见已经被告知周末才能看了

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2012-12-24T15:56:34+00:00

waiting for how widescreen bg would go now. back to wip

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

ed January 2011

2012-12-24T23:24:28+00:00

aww i was gonna re-check this

.

oh well whenever you're ready...

Garven

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5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-12-25T01:15:51+00:00

Colin, King of WIP.

Pokie

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2,630 posts

ed December 2009

2012-12-25T20:19:20+00:00

Garven wrote: 2k1v16
Colin, King of WIP.

Raging Bull

2,809 posts

ed June 2010

2012-12-26T20:08:36+00:00

Especially with a 300 star map that has like 1 minute of it mapped out of 4 minutes.

Apparently I also starred it a crap ton of time :<

Heatherfield

927 posts

ed March 2010

2013-01-13T03:26:29+00:00

and?

mintong89

3,699 posts

ed July 2011

2013-01-13T03:44:54+00:00

Heatherfield wrote: 2t6i10
and?

y u c a

844 posts

ed April 2009

2013-01-13T17:22:08+00:00

　

凹○ﾞｺﾃｯ

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2013-03-06T17:15:42+00:00

できた！

SteRRuM

678 posts

ed October 2008

2013-03-06T17:25:07+00:00

gogo bubel and rank!!
veryvery like!!

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2013-03-06T20:30:50+00:00

Took you long enough. Bah, I can't stay mad. It's done! ヽ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ

Pokie

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2,630 posts

ed December 2009

2013-03-07T00:49:54+00:00

Quilt

1,476 posts

ed May 2010

2013-03-07T02:40:21+00:00

God map!ヽ(・∀・)ノ

wonders

610 posts

ed December 2011

2013-03-07T03:28:34+00:00

boom！

wonders

610 posts

ed December 2011

2013-03-07T04:41:34+00:00

终于快能玩了

thelewa

3,537 posts

ed August 2010

2013-03-15T15:47:34+00:00

get this map ranked already ;_;

YTYuyu

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4,149 posts

ed January 2011

2013-03-17T20:49:50+00:00

yo i'm here for the re-check

.

[Easy]
01:09:076 (2) - consider unstacking this because i feel that it'd be easier for beginners if it's unstacked. the notes would be fully visible for beginners during gameplay.
01:24:674 (2) - for this one, you should follow the DS so that it wouldn't throw off beginners in their sense of rhythm during gameplay.

[Normal]
01:18:057 (3,4) - remove the claps at the end because to me, it broke the flow in the hitsounding during gameplay. it sounds unfitting to follow as well IMO.
02:32:493 (1) - for this one, i suggest using the drum sampleset and adding a clap at the beginning/end and the repeat. it'll show emphasis in the drums in the BGM during gameplay.

[C.Hero]
02:54:520 (1) - after discussing with the staff on this slider and getting opinions, i think it'd be readable if you can avoid the overlap from the beginning and the end like this. the code is in the box if you can't do this.

SPOILER

256,192,174520,6,0,B|320:280|352:224|312:160,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

and that's all or now.

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

Topic Starter

2013-03-19T02:40:26+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote: 2q5k2r
yo i'm here for the re-check .

[Easy]
01:09:076 (2) - consider unstacking this because i feel that it'd be easier for beginners if it's unstacked. the notes would be fully visible for beginners during gameplay.
01:24:674 (2) - for this one, you should follow the DS so that it wouldn't throw off beginners in their sense of rhythm during gameplay.

done.

[Normal]
01:18:057 (3,4) - remove the claps at the end because to me, it broke the flow in the hitsounding during gameplay. it sounds unfitting to follow as well IMO. umm, I don't think removing them can be better. added a clap on the repeat on 3, home that could fix something.
02:32:493 (1) - for this one, i suggest using the drum sampleset and adding a clap at the beginning/end and the repeat. it'll show emphasis in the drums in the BGM during gameplay. normal-hitnormal is enough for that imo.

[C.Hero]
02:54:520 (1) - after discussing with the staff on this slider and getting opinions, i think it'd be readable if you can avoid the overlap from the beginning and the end like this. the code is in the box if you can't do this.
SPOILER
256,192,174520,6,0,B|320:280|352:224|312:160,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
changed the track a bit.

and that's all or now.

updated!