those wrote: 4o2b6g

You've got four minutes of a linear map. This isn't unrankable; it's just very uninteresting.

I'm a boring person and I know it \:D/ Also, I guess I need to make a more 'dynamic' thing, huh?

thanks
fixed some and full submit~

Hello, from my queue

Makar8000 wrote: d4x2r

Hello, from my queue

[General] 2o6n

1. Fine~

[Easy] 1h4b6d

1. 03:22:107 (1) - Finish at start?
2. 03:23:495 (3) - ^
3. Nice~ nothing to point out

[Normal] 606311

1. 01:16:558 (1,2) - Swap NC
2. I really like this~ nothing to point out

[Insane] 1o141

1. 00:20:287 (5) - Remove this note please. It doesn't fit the music imo
2. 00:39:449 (5) - CTRL+R this for better flow
3. 01:26:876 (4) - Remove this note for the same reason I mentioned before
4. 01:37:975 (5) - ^
5. 03:53:928 (4) - ^

fixed some,thx for modding

Makar8000 wrote: d4x2r

[Hinsvar's Hard]
Okay, so I counted the number of curves in this map. This includes curvy sliders, mouse movements, patterns, etc. This number came out to be 3 (your small curve sliders at the end). There are no patterns in this map that have good flow. Everything is straight, linear, and has unpredictable repeat sliders. It just gets boring. Im sorry but I suggest going back over this and make this map more fun by using flowy patterns and curve sliders to make this more interesting. There is a subforum that helps mappers out with this, and you can see it here. If you would like assistance, I can help if I have time. Just send me a PM in-game.

I knew that someone would come and go make an epic speech about how boring, plain, dull, linear... (insert any negative comments), and stupid my diff is \:D/

I'll remap this I suppose, but I can't really promise that I'll make it a lot more dynamic. Making things linear is like my style right now. I just can't get out of this.

Also, if you're already like that to my diff, you WILL outright force me to remap this \:D/

yo~

[General]
clear

[Insaane]
overall diff -2 (or -1)
00:22:454 (2,3) - just no
00:51:587 (4,3) - overlap
just avoid crossing sliders

[Easy]
00:25:229 (1) - spinner appears too fast
00:41:183 (2,1) -curve them in this way
00:47:772 (2,3) - overlap
01:15:171 (2) - end point 5-7 grids right to cover (4) (don't forget to chnge 01:17:252 (3) for avoiding overlap)
01:22:801 (1,1) - not ymmetrical
01:30:084 (3) - confusing for beginners
02:14:131 (3,2) - overlap
02:39:448 (3) - confusing for beginners
03:21:067 (2) - ^ or add reverse arrow ;_;
03:49:853 (1,2) - overlap? lol
03:58:870 (1) - appears too fast

[Normal]
00:24:535 (4) - make symmetrical! ;_;
00:54:362 - put something here
01:56:096 (1,2) - just add one reverse to (1)
02:24:535 (3,4) - try to cover less then 40% of start point :O
02:55:055 (1,3) - almost overlap. i don't like it
03:25:576 (3) - this for better looking
03:47:772 (2) - curve it a bit more
03:22:107 (1) - mhm
03:54:015 (5) - almost overlap ;_;

[Hard]
~~~~


~~~~~~~

gl~

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

[Hard]
~~~~

lol

Also, make sure to go back here the moment I finish remapping \:D/ *Still on the first chorus.

lol. call me when you finish remap if you want nazi-mod

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

lol. call me when you finish remap if you want nazi-mod

I will, so be prepared

Also, hang on; I'm almost there.

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

yo~

[General]
clear

[Insaane]
overall diff -2 (or -1)
00:22:454 (2,3) - just no
00:51:587 (4,3) - overlap
just avoid crossing sliders

[Easy]
00:25:229 (1) - spinner appears too fast
00:41:183 (2,1) -curve them in this way
00:47:772 (2,3) - overlap
01:15:171 (2) - end point 5-7 grids right to cover (4) (don't forget to chnge 01:17:252 (3) for avoiding overlap)
01:22:801 (1,1) - not ymmetrical
01:30:084 (3) - confusing for beginners
02:14:131 (3,2) - overlap
02:39:448 (3) - confusing for beginners
03:21:067 (2) - ^ or add reverse arrow ;_;
03:49:853 (1,2) - overlap? lol
03:58:870 (1) - appears too fast

[Normal]
00:24:535 (4) - make symmetrical! ;_;
00:54:362 - put something here
01:56:096 (1,2) - just add one reverse to (1)
02:24:535 (3,4) - try to cover less then 40% of start point :O
02:55:055 (1,3) - almost overlap. i don't like it
03:25:576 (3) - this for better looking
03:47:772 (2) - curve it a bit more
03:22:107 (1) - mhm

code for better slider

296,144,202107,6,0,B|312:72|244:36,2,110,6|8|0

03:54:015 (5) - almost overlap ;_;

gl~

fixed some and thx for modding

I'm almost there.

*This post is going to be updated to include my diff once it's completed. It should take no more than two hours after this post gets... posted.

EDIT: And... here you go! \:D/


Also, I'm not really sure if this is a Hard diff...

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

ed

mjw5150 wrote: 36704p

ed

Thanks for the patience. Also, sorry for the inconvenience.

Also, modders can go ahead and mod my diff now.

i'm back!


acually it's kinda re-check

well.. my mod wasn't that uch useful for you, lol

at least now i'll mod hard

go~

[Hard]
00:17:599 (6,2) - avoid overlap
00:18:986 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to foloow your pattern try this
00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/vxgC (note! i'm using lower approach rate at all screenshots. it's just to show you what i want! don't worry )
00:51:934 (1,2,3,4) - stack them?
00:58:871 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/vxho (kinda jumpy)
01:20:894 (3,7) - stack them?
01:42:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/vxi9
02:07:194 (1,1) - stack them?
02:21:761 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vxiF (don't forget to fix stacks)
02:55:055 (1) - a bit not symmetrical ~_~
03:55:055 (6) - 1/2 earlier?
04:00:951 (1,2,3,4) - stack?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

great job
good luck

-Bakari- wrote: 1x293l

[Hard]
00:17:599 (6,2) - avoid overlap This is intentional.
00:18:986 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to foloow your pattern try this Made something similar \:D/
00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/vxgC (note! i'm using lower approach rate at all screenshots. it's just to show you what i want! don't worry ) Okay, but with 1.2x DS (which is far wider). Also, I think that AR8 will be the best thing for this diff.
00:51:934 (1,2,3,4) - stack them? Intentionally placed like this.
00:58:871 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/vxho (kinda jumpy) I wanna keep the current one.
01:20:894 (3,7) - stack them? Looks slightly overlapped, yes, but I think it looks nice for now.
01:42:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/vxi9 Will do.
02:07:194 (1,1) - stack them? Oh, okay.
02:21:761 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vxiF (don't forget to fix stacks) Fine.
02:55:055 (1) - a bit not symmetrical ~_~ That one can't be helped. It's not really noticeable though, but I would like a code for a perfectly symmetrical slider \:D/
03:55:055 (6) - 1/2 earlier? Pretty good already.
04:00:951 (1,2,3,4) - stack? Nope, intentionally (yeah) placed like this.

Thanks for the mod \:D/

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

ed~
thx for remod and star :3

Ugh such a long map... Imma only mod 2 diffs.

Insane
01:04:940 (4) - add finish to end
01:08:408 (4,5,6,7,8) - whistle spam is never good. remove them.
01:14:131 (2,3,4) - arrange like this http://puu.sh/vCWc and add a finish on 4
02:12:397 (2,3,4,5,6) - move further to the right due to stacking
02:23:148 - I'd add a note here because... kinda confusing without because the downbeat wants to be clicked.
02:39:622 (6,7) - move a bit to the left to make it look better.
03:43:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - can't you do something more innovative?

Hard
AR is kinda high, but your mapping makes it hard to play WITHOUT AR8. At least lower OD by 1.
Please add more claps. They are an important tool to keep a rythm, and will greatly improve your map.

00:47:079 (5) - add new combo
00:48:119 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:183 (6,1,2,3) - this doesn't look good and it plays bad.
02:00:605 (1,2,3,4) - weird to have 4 stacked notes here when everywhere else you had 3 stacks.
02:30:778 - add a bunch of notes here in a jump pattern.
02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not a good idea, it's very hard to read. please change it something more readable.
03:44:651 (3) - add clap
03:46:039 (3) - ^

Tenshi-nyan wrote: q616r

Hard
AR is kinda high, but your mapping makes it hard to play WITHOUT AR8. At least lower OD by 1. OD -1'd.
Please add more claps. They are an important tool to keep a rythm, and will greatly improve your map. Later. My speaker (yeah, I use that) became weird and suddenly made an extremely annoying noise (I don't really think this is the correct term, though...), so I had to turn off my speaker. I will see where I can place the claps later.

00:47:079 (5) - add new combo Okay.
00:48:119 (1) - remove new combo ^
01:41:183 (6,1,2,3) - this doesn't look good and it plays bad. Changed the pattern for this and (4,5,6,7).
02:00:605 (1,2,3,4) - weird to have 4 stacked notes here when everywhere else you had 3 stacks. Yeah, weird, but I think it plays pretty fine.
02:30:778 - add a bunch of notes here in a jump pattern. I don't really think about changing the pattern (am I right?), but I'll consider it.
02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not a good idea, it's very hard to read. please change it something more readable. I... don't really think so. I the first time playing this spot and I got... all 300? I'm sure enough I didn't get any 50s or misses and got lots of 300s though, so I think it's fine. Still, I'll wait for the other modders to speak their opinion about this.
03:44:651 (3) - add clap Oh, okay.
03:46:039 (3) - ^ ^

Thanks for modding \:D/

*The .osu file for my diff will be given after I have placed lots, lots of claps

EDIT: In the end, I only applied claps for the final kiai time and the section before it (after the third kiai), since it doesn't really fit with the rest of the song, IMO. So, well...

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

.

most fixed and ed~
thx for modding :3

Hi! From my modding queue!

Such a cool song ; _ ; I wish there was an english patch somehwere....
Suggestion is Pink.

Anyways, my mod:

[Easy]

It's alright.

[Normal]

Some of the formations are quite difficult to read ( for a beginner who usually plays Normal ) Maybe change some of them into an easier arrangement? I think it's okay for the difficulty spread, but maybe ask a MAT/BAT about this.

This diff is also alright.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

01:41:165 (6,1,2,3,4,5,7) - This is playable but feels a little weird to play
02:12:459 (5,1) - Try this?

02:31:419 (7) - Add NC
02:32:209 (1) - Remove NC

[Insane]

Couldn't find anything wrong o u o

Star~ Good Luck with the map~

Shoily wrote: 3g1t6t

[Hinsvar's Hard]

01:41:165 (6,1,2,3,4,5,7) - This is playable but feels a little weird to play Changed the pattern (again).
02:12:459 (5,1) - Try this? Fine.
02:31:419 (7) - Add NC
02:32:209 (1) - Remove NC Not to this and above. Looks weird to have a new combo exactly before the kiai time, and it fits pretty well, IMO.

Thanks for the mod \:D/

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

ed lol
thx for modding and star

:3

first of all do you want this osb file? if not then delete and full submit~ :3

Easy:
AR+1? better to play~

1. 00:23:842 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals is still going ></
2. 00:35:634 (2) - remove finish from the start, it's just dont fit here~
3. 00:39:795 (1) - remove finish in the middle ~ same reason as i said above~
4. 00:43:957 (3) - add finish at the start, sounds better~
5. 00:47:772 (2) - one grip up will look better imo~
6. 00:48:119 (1,3) - how about curving those slider a bit like this? it's looks much better to me while playing ><
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:934 (5) - add note here feels off really ;_;
8. 01:00:605 (5) - curve this slider a bit like this o.o? it looks much better like that tho, but it's up to you~
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:04:073 (1) - spacing error plz fix it~
10. 01:21:067 (4) - add a finish at the end, sounds better~
11. 01:30:084 (3) - make this slider revives then add a note after it like this it's sounds better tho ~ o.o
    
12. 02:04:420 (1) - this slider touches the 02:03:032 (3) - slider ends and it's looks bad to maybe you should fix it~
13. 02:09:622 (4) - NC here is better since she started new vocal~
14. 02:41:876 (3) - curve this slider more plz like i said here 01:00:605 (5) -
15. 02:48:813 (1,2) - like this looks much better to me :c
    
    SPOILER

    

Normal:

1. 01:10:316 (3) - NC here and remove the NC from this 01:11:009 (1) -
2. 01:11:703 (4) - NC~
3. 03:29:044 (4) - ^

good Normal o.o/

Hinsvar's Hard
OD+1 is better~

1. 00:40:662 (7) - fixed this curve plz it's dont look good~
2. 01:00:258 (6) - two grip down so it's lined up with the 00:59:564 (5) - :3
3. 01:02:686 (7) - add a finish here sounds better~
4. 01:18:292 (5) - stuck this on 01:17:252 (2) -
5. 02:09:622 (4) - fixed this slider like this o.o then do the same thing here 02:10:316 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:12:223 (x) - how about adding a note here and let this weird space go away =3=/
7. 03:48:639 (x,x) - ^

Insane
Fine~

Nice map :3 good luck~

-Sekai- wrote: 233r3c

Hinsvar's Hard
OD+1 is better~ Nope, OD6 goes better, IMO.

1. 00:40:662 (7) - fixed this curve plz it's dont look good~ Eh... I guess I can make it a straight slider.
2. 01:00:258 (6) - two grip down so it's lined up with the 00:59:564 (5) - :3 I think it's already fine as is; I even copy-pasted (5) and Ctrl+H'd it, and it still looks fine.
3. 01:02:686 (7) - add a finish here sounds better~ It sounds a bit too... sudden, so no.
4. 01:18:292 (5) - stuck this on 01:17:252 (2) - I'm sure enough it was stacked... Anyway, fixed.
5. 02:09:622 (4) - fixed this slider like this o.o then do the same thing here 02:10:316 (5) - I'll stick with mine, I guess.
6. 02:12:223 (x) - how about adding a note here and let this weird space go away =3=/ Eh, okay.
7. 03:48:639 (x,x) - ^ Nope; I want to preserve my current pattern \:D/

k, thx \:D/

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

From my queue

[Easy]

1. 00:21:761 (1,1,2,3) - why its distance has changed? you should keep 0.54x, or you just need to arrange the 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:48:119 (1) - useless NC, to keep your combo thythm, remove this NC and add on 00:49:506 (3) -
3. 01:04:073 (1) - useless NC as well, remove it
4. 01:11:703 (1,2,3) - although you used sliders this rhythm is a bit hard for noob players, to make them to be played easier, maybe you can use this rhythm
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:22:108 - feels empty, you followed the mellody and stopping like this is weird, add a circle here
6. 01:35:980 (1,2,3) - how hard, i'd place them more soft with this sweet song, like this, also centering 01:38:755 (4) - from 01:36:674 (3) - plz
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:57:483 (1) - did you NC'd here to separate the long combo? if you did, remove this and add on 01:58:870 (3) -
8. 02:09:969 (5) - to separate the long combo, NC here
9. 02:31:472 - same as 01:22:108 -
10. 02:36:674 (3) - same as 01:35:980 (1,2,3) -
11. 02:41:876 (3) - move to (280,84) to avoid the annoying overlap
12. 02:44:651 (3) - 1 grid up to be symmetry with 02:43:264 (1) -
13. 03:26:963 (1) - same as 01:57:483 (1) - , NC on 03:28:003 (2) -
14. 03:32:859 (3) - same as 01:35:980 (1,2,3) -
15. 03:47:079 (1) - remove this useless NC
16. 03:52:281 (1,2) - switch NC due to down beat

[Normal]

1. 00:50:373 (2,3) - no, really looks not good at all, arrange them
2. 01:22:801 (3) - NC here due to starting kiai rhythm, like this 01:33:899 (1) -
3. 02:26:616 (2) - tbh, your NC rhythm is really random imo, if you want to follow the vocal, you'd better start the combo from here
4. 02:32:165 (3) - same as 01:22:801 (3) -
5. 03:02:685 (5) - NC?
6. 04:03:726 (4) - 1 grid right to be symmetry with 04:02:339 (2) -

[Hard]

1. 00:18:986 (3,4) - replace with a slider
2. 00:20:373 (6) - end point here 00:21:067 (7) -
3. 00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - not fit at all, don't use arrow
4. 00:57:657 (6,7) - too hard to read, don't stack them
5. 01:11:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you may thought the notes are looks clean, you should know that it's really hard to hit
6. 01:13:957 (1) - hard to read, don't overlap..
7. 01:32:686 (3,4,5,6) - too hard to read, don't stack them
8. 01:39:449 (1,2,3,4) - replace with 2 sliders
9. 02:15:518 - ~ 02:30:431 (4) - suddenly, too monotonous and boring, why, add some more notes
10. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - too hard to play
11. 02:55:055 (1) - hidden arrow, find other way
12. 02:57:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what, they can be hard to play even as Insane diff
13. 03:00:605 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    highly recommend to remap this diff

[Insane]

1. 00:24:535 (4) - NC due to changed melody?
2. try adding finish :
   01:39:449 -
   01:40:142 -
   01:40:836 -
   01:41:356 -
3. 02:12:570 (1,2,3) - this jump is not good to play, ctrl+h to make more soft movement
4. 02:48:813 - same as the finish sounds
5. 02:52:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not fit with song, don't stream here
6. 03:02:339 (5) - NC
7. 03:15:865 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard to read, arrange them plz
8. 03:36:674 (2) - Seven!

again, highly recommend to remap Hard diff
Good luck with rank~ :3

Ignore the previous version.

Star Stream wrote: 4ax6u

[Hard]

1. 00:18:986 (3,4) - replace with a slider Fine enough.
2. 00:20:373 (6) - end point here 00:21:067 (7) - Nope, I think this should be fine.
3. 00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - not fit at all, don't use arrow Remapped this spot.
4. 00:57:657 (6,7) - too hard to read, don't stack them Oh, okay.
5. 01:11:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you may thought the notes are looks clean, you should know that it's really hard to hit Remapped this part.
6. 01:13:957 (1) - hard to read, don't overlap.. ^
7. 01:32:686 (3,4,5,6) - too hard to read, don't stack them Eh, I wanted to make a back-and-forth pattern here, but I moved (4) anyway.
8. 01:39:449 (1,2,3,4) - replace with 2 sliders I think it's fine as is.
9. 02:15:518 - ~ 02:30:431 (4) - suddenly, too monotonous and boring, why, add some more notes Huh? I'm sure enough it's fine. I'll reconsider to remap this spot if needed, though.
10. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - too hard to play Not for me; in fact, I think this is fun to play. Maybe a bit hard, but I'm sure enough not too hard.
11. 02:55:055 (1) - hidden arrow, find other way The arrow is still visible when I played this spot, so no.
12. 02:57:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what, they can be hard to play even as Insane diff It's just a 1/2 stream of circles. Don't really think it's that hard. But I might consider changing this part, so wait for it.
13. 03:00:605 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
    highly recommend to remap this diff Already remapped a few spots; I WON'T fully remap this though, because this is actually a remapped version of my diff. It's going to be hard to make another one (I'll have an exam in one week, and even when in vacation, it'll still take 2-3 days to make a diff for me, so...), and from my experiences IRL, trying to fix something by retrying from scratch ends up making it WORSE anyways (this is an exception, miraculously), so I'll mod some spots, but not fully

I'm sure the quality of this diff has been increased by 10%, but I'm not really certain if this is actually perfectly rankable.

Thanks so much \:D/

EDIT: Had some short conversation with Star Stream via IRC in-game. I might remap my diff AGAIN, or I might not. I'm leaning to the former choice, though. I'll call those modders back again, so there shouldn't be any problem about the shortage of modding if I really remapped my diff.

For now, though, just this version. I still want to see other modders' opinion before making a choice.

EDIT2: Eh, I just realized that I made another problem because 02:12:223 (5)'s body is completely covered by hitbursts. Will remap this part later.

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

lol thx so much for modding and almost fixed
and ~

Relax song >3

General

- Cyan combo color it's similar, so I suggest you use other color. Maybe green like this ?


Easy

01:20:027 (3) - Add whistle to head of slider to follow lyrics.
01:21:067 (4) - Change Whistle to clap.
01:31:125 (1) - Add whistle at head of slider.
01:33:899 (1) - Add whistle at reverse arrow.
01:38:755 (4) - Whistle.
02:12:743 (1) - Remove clap ;w;

Normal

01:04:940 (4) - Tail of slider add finish.
02:14:131 (4) - ^
02:31:818 (2) - Whistle
03:48:986 (4) - Head of slider add finish.

Hinsvar's Hard

Fine for me xD

Insane

01:08:668 (7,8) - Swap whistle of these note.
01:15:171 (6) - Head of slider add whistle. (Follow lyrics)
01:16:558 (1) - ^
01:20:027 (3) - ^
01:23:668 (3) - ^
02:06:501 (3) - Add clap at reverse slider.
02:24:535 (1) - Whistle.
02:25:922 (1) - ^
02:29:391 (3) - Head of slider add whistle.

That's all I can find good luck

backstep wrote: 5t1i4v

Hinsvar's Hard

Fine for me xD

So even that slider I mentioned on my last post was fine? Funny.

Also, I think I can just the newly fixed version of my diff now.

: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko - HELLO!! (mjw5150) [Hinsvar's Hard].osu

backstep wrote: 5t1i4v

Relax song >3

General

- Cyan combo color it's similar, so I suggest you use other color. Maybe green like this ?

lol but i think they looks fine,no changed...

Easy

01:20:027 (3) - Add whistle to head of slider to follow lyrics. fixed
01:21:067 (4) - Change Whistle to clap. fixed
01:31:125 (1) - Add whistle at head of slider. fixed
01:33:899 (1) - Add whistle at reverse arrow. fixed
01:38:755 (4) - Whistle. no
02:12:743 (1) - Remove clap ;w; lol add finish instead

Normal

01:04:940 (4) - Tail of slider add finish. fixed
02:14:131 (4) - ^ fixed
02:31:818 (2) - Whistle fixed
03:48:986 (4) - Head of slider add finish. fixed

Hinsvar's Hard

Fine for me xD

Insane

01:08:668 (7,8) - Swap whistle of these note. i changed my mind to del the whistle in 7 so...
01:15:171 (6) - Head of slider add whistle. (Follow lyrics) fixed
01:16:558 (1) - ^ fixed
01:20:027 (3) - ^ fixed
01:23:668 (3) - ^ no
02:06:501 (3) - Add clap at reverse slider. no
02:24:535 (1) - Whistle. fixed
02:25:922 (1) - ^ no
02:29:391 (3) - Head of slider add whistle. fixed

That's all I can find good luck

thx

From the challenge queue~


[General]
Nothing found~


[Easy]

1. 00:23:842(1) - 这里为什么加NC呢？
2. 01:04:766(5) - 感觉这个Slider在01:05:287结束更好一些?
3. 01:07:541(3) - 同上，在01:08:061结束
4. 01:30:084(3) - 建议不要在Easy里放1/2...
5. 01:32:859(2) - ^
6. 01:39:449(1) - 换成finish?
7. 02:16:905(3) - end at 02:17:425?
8. 03:23:148(2) - clap
9. 03:48:466(4) - end at 03:48:986?

[Normal]

1. 00:46:732(3) - Spacing
2. 04:00:951(1) - 即使是Normal，这个slider和spinner靠的也太近了吧...

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 03:21:587(6) - Ctrl+R?

[Insane]

1. 01:25:576(2) - Ctrl+R?
2. 02:15:171(5) - 这跳略坑 送分图可不能这样
3. 02:26:443(6,7) - Spacing
4. 02:52:975(1) - whistle?

That's all!Really nice map~Good luck~

a3272509123 wrote: 4d4u5w

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 03:21:587(6) - Ctrl+R? Nope; I rearranged the pattern here, instead.

Eh, thanks I guess.

Also, I remapped 01:11:703 - 01:15:345. Might remap a few sections, but let's see the opinions for now. After some thoughts, though, I'll most likely won't remap this from scratch, but it can still change...

My diff's here: http://puu.sh/yi4H

Oh great; the attachment is no more with us.

Hi mjw5150

mod from Challenge Queue, so just suggestion ^^

• General
  ● Good

===========================

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use distance 1.2 (or 1.0) and change form to triangle
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So simple slider form...maybe change some slider form

===========================

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - some as Easy ^^
  ● 00:46:732 (3) - prev distance 1.0 maybe change to 0.8?
  ● 02:44:998 (4) - move to x:240 y:260 symmetry to 02:43:610 (2)
  ● 02:45:344 (1) - if you change ^ move to x:302 y:198 - distance 0.8 :3
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good

===========================

• Hinsvar's Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3
  ● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0?
  ● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it

===========================

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Interesting Insane looks good

Sorry for nazi mod, but I can't find more problems.
Starrrrr

IchiGUN wrote: 613n1u

>Settings

● Good

>Mapping

● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3 Oh, okay.
● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0? Fine.
● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g Eh, I suppose that it should be fine for now. No changes.

>Hitsounds

● Good
___________________
Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it lol thx

Ignore the previous version.

http://puu.sh/yie9

a3272509123 wrote: 4d4u5w

From the challenge queue~


[General]
Nothing found~


[Easy]

1. 00:23:842(1) - 这里为什么加NC呢？删掉了
2. 01:04:766(5) - 感觉这个Slider在01:05:287结束更好一些? 改了
3. 01:07:541(3) - 同上，在01:08:061结束 改了
4. 01:30:084(3) - 建议不要在Easy里放1/2... 唔 就先这样吧 暂时找不到更好的处理方式了lol
5. 01:32:859(2) - ^ 同上
6. 01:39:449(1) - 换成finish? 感觉finish音量大了 没改
7. 02:16:905(3) - end at 02:17:425? 改了
8. 03:23:148(2) - clap 改了
9. 03:48:466(4) - end at 03:48:986? 改了

[Normal]

1. 00:46:732(3) - Spacing 改了
2. 04:00:951(1) - 即使是Normal，这个slider和spinner靠的也太近了吧... 没改 感觉距离蛮合适

[Insane]

1. 01:25:576(2) - Ctrl+R? 改了 换了下排版
2. 02:15:171(5) - 这跳略坑 送分图可不能这样233
3. 02:26:443(6,7) - Spacing 改了
4. 02:52:975(1) - whistle? 没加 感觉有点whistle不合

That's all!Really nice map~Good luck~

IchiGUN wrote: 613n1u

Hi mjw5150

mod from Challenge Queue, so just suggestion ^^

• General
  ● Good

===========================

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use distance 1.2 (or 1.0) and change form to triangle
  i don't want to use 1.0x here since the spacing is too large lol
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So simple slider form...maybe change some slider form

===========================

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - some as Easy ^^ same as easy
  ● 00:46:732 (3) - prev distance 1.0 maybe change to 0.8? fixed
  ● 02:44:998 (4) - move to x:240 y:260 symmetry to 02:43:610 (2) fixed
  ● 02:45:344 (1) - if you change ^ move to x:302 y:198 - distance 0.8 :3 fixed
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good

===========================

• Hinsvar's Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3
  ● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0?
  ● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it

===========================

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Interesting Insane looks good

Sorry for nazi mod, but I can't find more problems.
Starrrrr

thx so much and ed

Oh hi there

[Easy]
00:51:587 (2) - Clap?
01:04:073 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?
02:41:876 (3) - End at previous red tick for following vocal
03:23:495 (3) - ^
04:01:645 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them


[Normal]
00:39:102 (3) - Add clap at tail slider
00:45:865 (2) - Add finish at head slider
01:31:125 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider
02:02:165 (2) - Extend this slider to next white tick for better rhythm?
03:22:107 (1) - Add finish at repeating slider and end slider


[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:51:414 (8) - Add 1 repeating slider?


[Insane]
01:31:125 (3) - Add clap at tail slider
02:05:807 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with head slider at gameplay


Good luck

Leorda wrote: 2f1c22

Oh hi there

[Easy]
00:51:587 (2) - Clap? fixed
01:04:073 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern? fixed
02:41:876 (3) - End at previous red tick for following vocal fixed
03:23:495 (3) - ^ fixed
04:01:645 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them sorry,but i think it is readable enough,no changed


[Normal]
00:39:102 (3) - Add clap at tail slider fixed
00:45:865 (2) - Add finish at head slider fixed
01:31:125 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider fixed
02:02:165 (2) - Extend this slider to next white tick for better rhythm? fixed
03:22:107 (1) - Add finish at repeating slider and end slider fixed


[Insane]
01:31:125 (3) - Add clap at tail slider fixed
02:05:807 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with head slider at gameplay fixed


Good luck

thx

Leorda wrote: 2f1c22

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:51:414 (8) - Add 1 repeating slider? Decided to remap that spot instead.

Also, I will remap 01:56:096 to 03:02:685. Expect things to be done in around two days

EDIT: Make it around four or five. I'm still finding some inspirations.

Double-posting just because I can.

k, remapped the second verse + chorus and the beginning of the bridge.

I only did it from 02:07:541 though, since I don't think I need to remap the slow part.

Also, WELCOME WHISTLE SPAM.

http://puu.sh/CiB8

Hello~
[Insane]

1. 01:13:264 (7) - add whistle at start?
2. 01:18:292 (6,7) - either fix this inconsistent spacing or add a note at 01:18:466
3. 01:38:061 (6) - forgot whistle at start?
4. 02:06:501 (3) - how about adding clap at start and reverse, sound better imo ^^
5. 03:13:784 (1) - whistle?
6. 03:16:558 (1) - ^
7. 03:16:558 (1) - ^

I enjoy the map very much ^^ (until u threw in bunches of streams ruthlessly lol)

[Hinsvar's Hard]
whistle spamming... lol
Why dont use more clap like Insane? It's really good o_o using clap only at the end of mapset like is such a waste =3=

1. 00:17:599 (5) - whistle at start
2. 00:24:188 (6) - move this to x:232 y:244?
3. 00:39:795 (3,6) - add finish? (like Insane)
4. 00:41:183 (1) - finish?
5. 00:45:345 (6) - ^
6. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm this pattern here's not a good idea imo, especially when u used this with jump. How about coming up with a new pattern?
7. 02:55:055 (1) - remove nc here
8. 04:05:113 (1) - whistle?
   Kiai parts will be more lively if you add more finish ^^ just look at Insane =P
   here are just some suggestions of mine, apply for all kiai parts if u change ^^
9. 01:25:576 (3) - finish?
10. 01:28:350 (3) - finish at start?
11. 01:32:165 (2) - finish at end?
12. 01:33:032 (5,1) - finish

[Normal]

1. 01:42:223 (5) - finish at end?
2. 04:04:420 (1) - add whistle here? :>

[Easy]

1. 01:21:067 (4) - remove finish at end
2. things seem fine to me o3o

Nice done mjw ^^ have a good luck star

kazumikos wrote: 5c271x

[Hinsvar's Hard]
whistle spamming... lol Yeah.
Why dont use more clap like Insane? It's really good o_o using clap only at the end of mapset like is such a waste =3= Well... I just can't see why should claps be used before them. It's just weird.

1. 00:17:599 (5) - whistle at start Oh great, I missed that one. Done.
2. 00:24:188 (6) - move this to x:232 y:244? Nope, I'm making a square here and I'm sure enough my calculations are correct.
3. 00:39:795 (3,6) - add finish? (like Insane) Only added one on (3).
4. 00:41:183 (1) - finish? k
5. 00:45:345 (6) - ^ Oh... okay, I guess.
6. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm this pattern here's not a good idea imo, especially when u used this with jump. How about coming up with a new pattern? You must be modding the old version. I've remapped that part. And it's a fun part, IMO \:D/
7. 02:55:055 (1) - remove nc here Remapped that part before.
8. 04:05:113 (1) - whistle? Used Finish instead.
   Kiai parts will be more lively if you add more finish ^^ just look at Insane =P
   here are just some suggestions of mine, apply for all kiai parts if u change ^^
9. 01:25:576 (3) - finish? k
10. 01:28:350 (3) - finish at start? Fine.
11. 01:32:165 (2) - finish at end? Done.
12. 01:33:032 (5,1) - finish Only at (1).

k, thanks for everything.

Also, I added lots of Finish and used the Normal sample set for the beginning of the bridge.

http://puu.sh/CZm3

\:D/

kazumikos wrote: 5c271x

Hello~
[Insane]

1. 01:13:264 (7) - add whistle at start? fixed
2. 01:18:292 (6,7) - either fix this inconsistent spacing or add a note at 01:18:466 fixed the spacing,make it 1.6x as others
3. 01:38:061 (6) - forgot whistle at start? fixed
4. 02:06:501 (3) - how about adding clap at start and reverse, sound better imo ^^ no,sorry
5. 03:13:784 (1) - whistle? fixed
6. 03:16:558 (1) - ^ fixed
7. 03:16:558 (1) - ^

I enjoy the map very much ^^ (until u threw in bunches of streams ruthlessly lol) thx XD

[Normal]

1. 01:42:223 (5) - finish at end? fixed
2. 04:04:420 (1) - add whistle here? :> no

[Easy]

1. 01:21:067 (4) - remove finish at end fixed
2. things seem fine to me o3o

Nice done mjw ^^ have a good luck star

thx for modding and star

Yo.

Modded my own diff by myself (sounds weird, I know), did stuff with Finishes, made a new green timing point, and other small things.

http://puu.sh/Fgd1

k

Hinsvar wrote: 5j1ku

Yo.

Modded my own diff by myself (sounds weird, I know), did stuff with Finishes, made a new green timing point, and other small things.

http://puu.sh/Fgd1

k

ok~ ed

Hi~
Request from Hinsvar.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy] 1h4b6d

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ?
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<?
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

[Normal] 606311

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

[Hinsvar's Hard] 433p6c

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ?
   
   
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them

[Insane] 1o141

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

就這些了~
good song & good luck~

l1106188 wrote: 50r2c

[Hinsvar's Hard] 433p6c

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ? Okay.
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56 It's still readable, so I decided to not change that.
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220 k, the blanket actually looks better...
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~ Okay...
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them This one's readable and playable for me, just like 00:38:235 (3,4). I'll think of that again later, though...

Thanks

Also changed a few stuff by myself

http://puu.sh/WlMY

l1106188 wrote: 50r2c

Hi~
Request from Hinsvar.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy] 1h4b6d

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ? 改了
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~ 改了
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC 没改
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~ 没改
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<? 稍微拉了下 不知道变好看没有lol
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

没改

[Normal] 606311

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^ 没改
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^ 没改
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

其他都改了

[Insane] 1o141

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

唔 还是觉得原来的好 没改~

就這些了~
good song & good luck~

thx for modding
and ed~

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions





That's all i can find ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 3r5631

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane] 1o141

1. 00:59:217 (3) - Try change angle,-5 is better.
2. 03:35:980 - Add finish.
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Hinsvar's Hard] 433p6c

1. AR-1 much better with play.
2. Reduce volume to 60% pls,since your use many finish hitsound.
3. 03:02:685 - Remove whistle.
4. 03:24:015 - Add finish and remove 03:24:188 (6).
5. 04:05:113 (1) - Remove finish,really no fit here.

[Normal] 606311

1. 02:03:032 (1) - Remove short new combo.
2. 03:44:998 (1) - ^
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Easy] 1h4b6d

1. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

That's all i can find ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

all fixed
thx so much

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~



EDIT : 09/20 update hard diff ~

...Why are you fixing my diff by yourself? ):

Whatever; it actually becomes better anyway, so I wouldn't complain

And anyway, I have noticed an inconsistency on the hitsounds' pattern, so I fixed it and added more finishes for the win \:D/

http://puu.sh/16yE9

*Yeah, the bubble will be popped, but you can always ask for a bubble repair, right?

k,ed
but fixed
03:24:015 - Add finish and remove 03:24:188 (6).
as rika said =w=

Rank rank go go

876PRO! owo

[Normal]

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others.
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try?

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music.
   
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music.
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them?
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it.
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid?
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note?
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1))
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7)

Suzully wrote: 6z6m2x

876PRO! owo

[Normal]

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others. fixed
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try? ok,add it here and 02:30:778

[Insane]

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid? fixed
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note? sorry,no changed here,i think it's fine
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1)) fixed
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^ fixed
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7) XD

thx a lot
and waiting for hinsvar's response

gogo RANK NOW QAQ

Sorry, have to map a song for someone's birthday. Will do stuff tomorrow.

*This post will be updated with my reply to Suzully's mod.

All done; hope that was worth it.

Suzully wrote: 6z6m2x

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music. Done.
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music. ^
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good. Uh... I personally think that they look and play good, though.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them? ^. Also, I'm sure enough the stack isn't broken.
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it. ^
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit. A 1/1 clap pattern fits at the end of the song, IMO, so nope.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^^

Uh... sorry for rejecting lots of things, but I have tested the parts I rejected and I can confidently say that the things that I have now are okay already (:

http://puu.sh/1fnvg

ed~

OMG Gratz QAQ

Omg another unpleasant shit... God, when we will have some great mappers? I still pray about it. :C

iM@S !!! <3

is it just me or I can't this map properly... osu says it doesn't know how to deal with this kind of file, doesn't even appear in .osz

makkura wrote: 1a1vv

is it just me or I can't this map properly... osu says it doesn't know how to deal with this kind of file, doesn't even appear in .osz

i same the same problem makkura

yey finally gratz!

I didn't see that xD
Congratulations!! :3

i can't open the osz file does anyone happen like this ??

If you click on the button, you can only the MP3 file >.<

Haya wrote: 701dx

If you click on the button, you can only the MP3 file >.<

so how i can get the full osz ?

i have the same problem, please fix this :S

Should work now.

Alduric wrote: 4o754

Omg another unpleasant shit... God, when we will have some great mappers? I still pray about it. :C

I would like to apologize for my rude words ;c

(peppy you bunny ban me!)