{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n yanlu<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 749 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n yanlu<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-17T05:40:06+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi~ for M4M mod~ [Dance]00:07:299 - dele the green line,i don't see you make change..(no note here so no need to change sound~00:13:392 - ^00:13:207 - ^00:15:423 - this dele and 5% 00:15:792 - here00:18:008 (6) - nc00:18:562 (1) - dele NC00:19:300 (6) - nc here00:20:039 (1) - dele nc00:21:146 (8) - nc00:22:439 (3) - ^00:21:700 (1) - dele nc00:23:177 (1) - ^*(..hmm plz NC in the long white line or you shonld change the offset ~;3 )00:27:608 (1) - dele nc*your note some all hide inside the silders,it will be some hard with open Hidden mod,you may put note on the next space :3like this..:00:24:470 (6) - 00:28:901 (2) - 00:30:378 (6) - 00:42:194 (4) - 00:42:932 (2) - 01:26:320 (6) - hide01:15:427 (7) - hide00:50:317 (3) - move to x:332 y:152 ?01:15:980 (2,3,4) - too jump ._.01:22:627 - add note here?01:38:043 - dele note03:01:956 (2) - move to x:112 y:296 ?03:04:079 - dele note[Normal]00:34:993 (1) - no nc00:40:901 (1) - ^01:37:028 (1) - ^01:42:936 (1) - ^01:48:844 (1) - ^02:49:402 (1) - ^02:55:310 (1) - ^02:59:741 (1) - this spin too long...you should be change some~hmm~good luck!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-17T18:05:53+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Update:<\/span><\/span><\/strong>-NEW BG-NEW DIFF NAMES-FIXES<\/span><\/strong>RikiH_ : sistemato tutto :3kevin : sistemato tutto e fixato gli hit sound e modificato certe patternHikisaku : fixato gli hit sound wantuole : fixed all , changed diff names , mapped the ''lazy part''UnderminE : fixed allRoxas : fatto tutto in irc :3yanlu : fixed all except the new combo because i'm following the vocalwaiting Revy's update<\/strong><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n HakuNoKaemi<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,828 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n HakuNoKaemi<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-18T14:24:15+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n UnderminE wrote:<\/h4>Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol<\/blockquote>I think she actually hasn't that many MAT-BAT friends ...She simply learned from mods u,u (good job, lally :3)<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-18T16:20:17+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n HakuNoKaemi wrote:<\/h4>UnderminE wrote:<\/h4>Looks like you have some MAT-BAT friends* hm. Since you improved instantly in weeks lol<\/blockquote>I think she actually hasn't that many MAT-BAT friends ...She simply learned from mods u,u (good job, lally :3)<\/blockquote>yap.. no bat or mat posted here <.< so u.u nya :foreveralone:ty haku <3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Nemis<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 854 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Nemis<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-18T18:28:27+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n [Normal]00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no00:23:177 (4) - Rendi pi\u00f9 aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) - 00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di pi\u00f9.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetrica01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma pi\u00f9 aderente con 01:07:857 (2) - 01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #201:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacing01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #301:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #402:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5[Revy's Hard]00:17:823 (4,1) - Jump eccessivo per una hard!00:19:485 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same ^ o-o00:23:916 (1) - Rendilo simmetrico00:25:023 (2) - ^00:25:947 (4,5,6,7) - Altro jump eccessivo per una hard...00:29:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^00:35:732 (3,4) - Rendili simmetrici00:40:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jump troppo troppo00:47:548 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici00:48:286 (3) - CentraloDa qui non tengo pi\u00f9 conto dei jumps, sono davvero troppo difficili per una hard \u00e7-\u00e7 Questa diff \u00e8 paragonabile alle insane di Andrea (insane, appunto!)01:15:611 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacka01:18:381 (1,2,3) - Troppo difficile per un'hard01:21:519 (1,2) - Centra questi sliders01:30:381 (3) - Rendilo simmetrico01:31:674 (4) - 1 square to left nella griglia01:37:766 (2,3) - Rendili simmetrici01:40:536 (7) - Stacka01:48:844 (4) - Simmetrizza01:50:321 (7) - Same02:18:754 (1,2) - Spostali di un quadrato verso destra nella griglia02:30:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Troppo difficile per un'hard02:38:509 (7,8,9) - Distanziali di pi\u00f9 da 02:37:585 (6) - , basterebbe anche un reflect horizontally02:42:755 (3) - Simmetrizza02:50:140 (2,1) - Simmetrizza02:52:171 (3,4) - ^02:57:895 (2,3,4,5,1) - Simmetrizza il tutto03:01:218 (3) - Simmetria03:02:695 (6) - ^03:04:172 (8) - ^Troppi jump troppo difficili per una hard diff... a questo punto ti consiglierei di rinominarla in Revy's Insane, ma hard proprio non mi sembra...Trovo comunque una pessima idea utilizzare una grid level 1 in una hard, soprattutto quando la mappa \u00e8 simmetrica[Insane]00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) - 00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) - 00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) - 00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka meglio00:24:470 (4) - stacka00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le forme00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzerei00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) - 00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) - 01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto meglio01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tutto01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perch\u00e8 io lo sposterei proprio da li01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) - 01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non \u00e8 simmetrico01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da li02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei pi\u00f9 aderenti gli sliders qui02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangoloSono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perch\u00e8 non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappaIl ritmo \u00e8 fantastico, \u00e8 davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa \u00e8 davvero divertente Mi piace, buona fortuna col rank<\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-18T20:23:42+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Nemis wrote:<\/h4>[Normal]00:20:223 (4) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no lo lascio mi piace :3<\/span>00:23:177 (4) - Rendi pi\u00f9 aderente la forma con 00:22:808 (3) - ok<\/span>00:32:039 (4) - Centrata renderebbe di pi\u00f9.. ma soprattutto cerca di renderla perfettamente simmetricaok<\/span>01:06:749 (1) - Renderei la forma pi\u00f9 aderente con 01:07:857 (2) - ok<\/span>01:09:703 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #2 lo lascio mi piace :3 #2<\/span>01:13:396 (3,4,5) - Migliora gli spacingok<\/span>01:24:473 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #3 lo lascio mi piace :3 #3<\/span>01:45:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Non sono un po' troppi beat consecutivi per una normal?messi slider<\/span>02:32:416 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #4 lo lascio mi piace :3 #4<\/span>02:34:631 (1,2,3,4) - Spacingok<\/span>02:36:847 (1) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o no #5 lo lascio mi piace :3 #5<\/span>[Insane] sperro di aver stalkato meglio le cose QWQ<\/span>00:17:638 (5) - Stacka la coda con 00:16:531 (1) -ok<\/span>00:18:746 (3) - Stacka con 00:19:300 (5) - ok<\/span>00:20:408 (4,5) - Rendili aderenti con 00:20:039 (1,2,3) - ok<\/span>00:21:700 (1,2,3) - Stacka megliook<\/span>00:24:470 (4) - stackaok<\/span>00:25:393 (3) - E' abbastanza old come pattern e personalmente non mi piace nemmeno un po', sta comunque a te decidere se lasciarlo o nolo lascio mi piace :3<\/span>00:26:500 (5,6) - Migliorerei le formeok<\/span>00:29:085 (3,4) - Li simmetrizzereiok<\/span>00:39:609 (1,2,3) - stack con coda 00:39:055 (7) - ok<\/span>00:41:640 (3) - stack con 00:41:271 (2) - ok<\/span>01:25:212 (2,3,4,5) - stacka tutto megliook<\/span>01:30:381 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Centrerei il tuttook<\/span>01:37:951 (3,4,5) - Non amo molto questo stream, non ti dico di stackare il primo beat con la coda di 01:37:028 (1) - perch\u00e8 io lo sposterei proprio da li a me piace molto invece :3 quindi non lo tolgo :V<\/span>01:43:674 (7) - Stacka con 01:43:305 (4,5,6) - ok<\/span>01:45:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Non \u00e8 simmetricook<\/span>01:47:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Centra il tutto02:02:506 (2) - Lo sposterei da liok<\/span>02:33:893 (1,2,3) - Renderei pi\u00f9 aderenti gli sliders quiok<\/span>02:45:709 (4,1,2,3,4) - Spacingok<\/span>02:56:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfeziona il rettangolook<\/span>Sono quasi tutti errori di stacking, alcuni vanno fixati perch\u00e8 non possono essere letti correttamente. altri giusto per migliorare l'estetica della mappaIl ritmo \u00e8 fantastico, \u00e8 davvero ottimo *-* e la mappa \u00e8 davvero divertente Mi piace, buona fortuna col rank<\/div><\/blockquote>grazie mille nemis per la mod *-* <3<\/strong>update<\/span><\/span><\/strong>waiting for Revy :V<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n p3n<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 947 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n p3n<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-18T20:43:24+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Sorpresa! Lo far\u00f2 pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano! [General]<\/strong>Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread [Normal]<\/strong>00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1\/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net\/ss\/465917<\/a>01:55:860 (1) - add a repeat? The 1\/2 slider alone feels awkward but the repeated slider should feel \"right\" for beginners02:22:077 (1,2) - (2) is 1\/2 late for a vocal follow and this seems to be the main concept of this map. To achieve a much better vocal follow you can replace (1,2) with a 1x repeat slider that turns on the vocals @02:22:631 - : http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net\/ss\/465906<\/a> (ignore the note placement - you'll have to adjust the spacing yourself)02:55:310 (1,2,3) - try to place thise while holding shift (with gridsnap) to get them in one line, or hold ctrl if you don't use grid snapping.Hitsounding:<\/em>A few places to add whistles:00:17:269 (3) - add a whistle on the beginning of the slider (only select the starting circle twice, until it appears red)00:18:746 (1) - whistle00:20:223 (4) - whistle on beginning00:21:700 (1) - whistle on beginning00:23:177 (4) - whistle on beginning00:24:654 (1) - whistle on beginningSee the pattern? For this part of the song and the later parts were this is simply repeated you can add those whistles on the middle white tick of every bar if you think it fits.00:28:347 (1) - add a finish to the beginning of the slider, remove it from the slider body.Personally I don't mind the finish spamming in the KIAI but it might get you in trouble later (most ppl don't like it). You could use soft finishes instead or look for a less impactful custom finish to use.01:42:936 (1) - add whistle to ending point01:46:628 (3) - add whistle01:54:383 (2) - and 02:00:291 (1) - don't use whistles on red ticks >< they will always appear off-beat except for very rare cases of 1\/2 repeated ones. You can use a whistle on the ending point (middle white tick in the bar)01:55:491 (4) - maybe remove this whistle...seems too spammy01:57:337 (3) - use whistle only on ending point and remove it from the body01:58:445 (5) - again maybe remove this whistle01:58:814 (1) - whistle on ending?[Revy's Hard]<\/strong>00:25:023 (2,3) - 2 notes at the same time...how can this go unnoticed? 02:13:215 (6,1,2) - spacing between those 3 notes makes no sense at all. If you go for a jump here at least keep it consistent for before and after 02:13:584 (1) - 02:57:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - take the whole combo and move it to the center, then fix the allignment of 02:58:448 (4), remove (5) and replace it with a copy of (3) which you ctrl+h and ctrl+g :http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net\/ss\/466003At first I thought \"what the hell is with this spacing???\" but after some time I got the concept. The spacing is not messed up if you take this map as a whole. It is a pretty unique approach to mapping. Much copy paste with minor changes but it still feels like a thought-out concept. It might not please everyone but whatever. I don't have to \"like\" this map but I DO like when mappers try something unique. And that you did. Overall not bad for a unique concept![Insane]<\/strong>AR-1, AR9 is so weird for this kind of mapping style Overall note placement can be improved. Many notes that seem like they should be in a straight line are a bit off. If you hold shift while moving them you can snap them in a perfect line. Just go through the whole map and look what you can fix (also keep in mind to NOT mess up the spacing)01:07:488 (5) - remove NC here01:39:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels unintuitive. Maybe go for something more flowing without stacking following notes, like this: 256,144,99797,5,0,0:0:0316,212,99982,1,0,0:0:0256,144,100167,1,0,0:0:0196,212,100351,1,0,0:0:0256,144,100536,1,0,0:0:0256,272,100720,1,2,0:0:0256,144,101090,1,4,0:0:0<\/pre>02:04:353 (1,1,1,1) - just pair them in (1,2) combos: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net\/ss\/465996<\/a>Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges (\"unique\" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~ <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lally<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-10-18T20:49:08+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n p3n wrote:<\/h4>Sorpresa! Lo far\u00f2 pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano! LOOOL X)<\/span>Wow. I'm impressed. Even with all the rough edges (\"unique\" hitsounding) and not-so-perfectly placed hitobjects this map is 100% playable (SS first try even with the unfitting AR9). It is fun to play, too!glad to hear it :3<\/span>This mapset is still a bit rough and especially note placements can be improved (if you aim for perfect appearance).OK, the [Insane] was impressive. If you keep polishing it you will get this ranked eventually! So have a cookie....and a star~ <\/blockquote>ty for your mod :3 i'll fix all later :3<\/span>edit:<\/span><\/strong><\/span>p3n mod<\/a>p3n wrote:<\/h4>Sorpresa! Lo far\u00f2 pugno Loctav...oh wait. Non parlo italiano! es wehre besser gewesen eine german mod zu haben hatte ich besser verstanden Q_Q<\/span>[General]<\/strong>Difficulty spread is too wide. N-I-I is not a very good choice. You could map an [Easy] with ~2 stars to please all the MATs that will complain about the spread *coff* *coff* stuf like this then? http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net\/s\/22201<\/a> i don't think i need a easy :S<\/span>[Normal]<\/strong>00:17:269 (3) - the beatplacement in the beginning feels weird. I missed 00:16:531 (1) - and 00:18:746 (1) - because I was expecting a notefollow. The notes after the spinner are OK because they fit the concept and later parts. I suggest you change 00:17:269 (3) into two 1\/2 sliders to match the vocals and not leave that weird gap: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.jeuxcrack.net\/ss\/465917<\/a> 6455