{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Stefan<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 10,425 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Stefan<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-30T17:42:36+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Holy crap.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n SilverDragon<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n SilverDragon<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-01T01:28:38+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Analyzing your map I found that the timing is a bit wrongIt should be:BPM: 125,75Offset: 1185Hope you like it <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n TheVileOne<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,434 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed March 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n TheVileOne<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-20T19:28:38+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n General<\/strong>Make audio-leadin exactly 1000 in all difficulties.CTB difficulty has an extra tag.<\/span>Easy<\/strong>It's well made. It is definitely rankable as is.00:35:538 (1) - You should make this slider look like the other sliders in this pattern. Also maybe the pattern in general could be cleaned up a bit by using more consistent angles. Here's a potential start to this pattern. http:\/\/puu.sh\/XacN<\/a>Normal<\/strong>00:21:224 (3,4) - I feel this should be a mirror of 00:19:793 (2,1) - if you can make it work. (Fix spacing afterwards)00:27:904 (1) - Start this combo exactly where 00:25:996 (3) - started.00:39:355 (1) - Such a weird slider. I'm not good at making sliders so i can't make suggestions on this. I just think this needs to be a different shape before it's ranked. I just don't know what it should be instead.CTB<\/strong>I'm not sure what easier CTB difficulties are supposed to be, but the pacing just seemed to get slow towards the end which did not fit the rest of the parts. The sliders were fine, just the part before it as I mentioned in the mod.00:03:093 (1) - Grid up just for aesthetics in the editor.00:03:570 (2) - Place exactly where 00:01:185 (1) - is00:04:047 (3,4) - Place where 1,2 is? Adjust for spacing difference afterwards.00:05:956 (3) - This sliders looks weird in CTB. 00:07:864 (3) - Is this slider shape done for a particular purpose, because it just creates a weird waviness in the drops.00:20:270 (1,2,3) - 1.5 snap would be cleaner here. I'm not sure if 1.6 was for any purpose. So only do it if it doesn't ruin what you were going for.00:31:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Kind of random IMO. Add more variation and symmetry. 00:32:676 (3) - this isn't a very interesting slider pattern in CTB. also feels quite slow compared to other parts of the song.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n bomber34<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,529 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n bomber34<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-20T20:23:14+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n TheVileOne wrote:<\/h4>General<\/strong>Make audio-leadin exactly 1000 in all difficulties. fix'd<\/span>CTB difficulty has an extra tag. fix'd<\/span>Easy<\/strong>It's well made. It is definitely rankable as is.00:35:538 (1) - You should make this slider look like the other sliders in this pattern. Also maybe the pattern in general could be cleaned up a bit by using more consistent angles. Here's a potential start to this pattern. http:\/\/puu.sh\/XacN<\/a> okay tried my best<\/span>Normal<\/strong>00:21:224 (3,4) - I feel this should be a mirror of 00:19:793 (2,1) - if you can make it work. (Fix spacing afterwards) I guess it works pretty good.<\/span>00:27:904 (1) - Start this combo exactly where 00:25:996 (3) - started. Wow that you noticed that ^^<\/span>00:39:355 (1) - Such a weird slider. I'm not good at making sliders so i can't make suggestions on this. I just think this needs to be a different shape before it's ranked. I just don't know what it should be instead. I see no real problems with this slider. It actually has the shape of a pokemon RBY ghost ^^. I guess i wait here for more suggestions<\/span>CTB<\/strong>I'm not sure what easier CTB difficulties are supposed to be, but the pacing just seemed to get slow towards the end which did not fit the rest of the parts. The sliders were fine, just the part before it as I mentioned in the mod.00:03:093 (1) - Grid up just for aesthetics in the editor. uhhh okay<\/span>00:03:570 (2) - Place exactly where 00:01:185 (1) - is done<\/span>00:04:047 (3,4) - Place where 1,2 is? Adjust for spacing difference afterwards. ok<\/span>00:05:956 (3) - This sliders looks weird in CTB. I see no real weirdness <\/span>00:07:864 (3) - Is this slider shape done for a particular purpose, because it just creates a weird waviness in the drops. I could use a green inherit time line so the slider gets to the same endspot but it does not really change that much. I also like the waviness ... it does not affect gameplay imo.<\/span>00:20:270 (1,2,3) - 1.5 snap would be cleaner here. I'm not sure if 1.6 was for any purpose. So only do it if it doesn't ruin what you were going for. well hard to explain. I could answer this ealier ^^ I forget the reason i did this ... i guess 1.6 was the border for a non dashing jump. My easy ctb aims for the goal of being SSable without dashing. But i check this out later again :3 I changed to 1.5 for now<\/span>00:31:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Kind of random IMO. Add more variation and symmetry. 00:32:676 (3) - this isn't a very interesting slider pattern in CTB. also feels quite slow compared to other parts of the song. changed<\/span><\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Soaprman<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,392 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2008<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Soaprman<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-21T02:26:32+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n sup[General]I will never understand why anyone uses grid 4 for anything more than the very occasional minor tweak.Use the red ghost bg for all difficulties. It looks great. If you prefer the other one, though, use that on all diffs (except maybe CtB). Consistency is good.The combo colors are a little iffy on this background... I'm going to suggest something darker. Try these:[Colours]Combo1 : 102,49,49Combo2 : 66,41,69<\/pre>Maybe use a quieter or silent sliderslide.wav. It's kind of loud. (especially in the beginning of TVO's diff)The mp3 fade is a little weak... I'm not a fan of mp3 fades in general though. One thing that might sound neat is an abrupt end... try this mp3 and cut out the very last note in each difficulty. http:\/\/puu.sh\/Xiba<\/a>[Easy]00:01:185 (1,2) - Straighten these out a bit to get rid of that tiny overlap of 1's end and 2's start.00:12:636 (1) - Use whistles instead of finishes on the first two points in this. leave the finish on the end.00:20:270 (1,3) - Replace finishes with whistles.00:27:904 (1) - Begin with a whistle instead of a finish.00:33:630 (2) - Whistles instead of finishes.Mainly, these are all to punctuate the lower parts and play along better with the... droning quality of the music.00:39:355 (1) - This long spinner in this short song is kind of lazy; I'd recommend mapping this part somehow.[Normal]Make the circles a notch smaller to help bridge Easy and Hard.Follow the same hitsounding suggestions as in Easy where applicable. PM me if you want details here.00:05:479 (2), 00:07:388 (2) - Some minor misalignments like this here and there. Fix them if you want... the intention appears to be to use the center line and you're a bit off from that. Not really noticeable during gameplay. Totally your call.[TVO's Hard]yesss small circles :thubsup:00:13:113 (2) - Begin with a whistle.00:14:067 (4) - Replace the beginning finish with a whistle.00:17:407 (2) - Remove finish, and use whistles on both points.00:19:316 (4) - Same here.00:20:747 (2) - Remove finish.00:21:701 (4) - Same here.Maybe some other similar changes are in order. I'm not going to go through the entire thing unless you ask me to. 00:45:558 (2) - Some minor misalignments like this here and there. Fix them if you want... the intention appears to be to use the center line and you're a bit off from that. Not really noticeable during gameplay. Totally your call.[CtB Cup]I don't know what difficulty \"cup\" is even supposed to be. I don't play CtB. Why am I looking at this?Same hitsounding advice applies if you want it to.Good stuff here. Not much to pick at because there's not much to the song.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n bomber34<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,529 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n bomber34<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-21T10:56:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Gonna do that over the daySoaprman wrote:<\/h4>sup[General]I will never understand why anyone uses grid 4 for anything more than the very occasional minor tweak. I am just to lazy to put that on 3 ... I also would work without grid at all but that is a bit chaotic so I don't <\/span>Use the red ghost bg for all difficulties. It looks great. If you prefer the other one, though, use that on all diffs (except maybe CtB). Consistency is good. I test the BG you send me<\/span>The combo colors are a little iffy on this background... I'm going to suggest something darker. Try these:[Colours]Combo1 : 102,49,49Combo2 : 66,41,69<\/pre>They are nice on the red bg<\/span>Maybe use a quieter or silent sliderslide.wav. It's kind of loud. (especially in the beginning of TVO's diff) no idea where the original sliderslide is to make it quieter but i use silent for now<\/span>The mp3 fade is a little weak... I'm not a fan of mp3 fades in general though. One thing that might sound neat is an abrupt end... try this mp3 and cut out the very last note in each difficulty. http:\/\/puu.sh\/Xiba<\/a> Not a fan of this sudden cut. I may use a bit longer version so the fade out will sound stronger or it ends later .-.<\/span>[Easy]00:01:185 (1,2) - Straighten these out a bit to get rid of that tiny overlap of 1's end and 2's start. fine<\/span>00:12:636 (1) - Use whistles instead of finishes on the first two points in this. leave the finish on the end. ok<\/span>00:20:270 (1,3) - Replace finishes with whistles. ^<\/span>00:27:904 (1) - Begin with a whistle instead of a finish. ^<\/span>00:33:630 (2) - Whistles instead of finishes. ok<\/span>Mainly, these are all to punctuate the lower parts and play along better with the... droning quality of the music.00:39:355 (1) - This long spinner in this short song is kind of lazy; I'd recommend mapping this part somehow. we will see <\/span>[Normal]Make the circles a notch smaller to help bridge Easy and Hard. I take it for now<\/span>Follow the same hitsounding suggestions as in Easy where applicable. PM me if you want details here. I did<\/span>00:05:479 (2), 00:07:388 (2) - Some minor misalignments like this here and there. Fix them if you want... the intention appears to be to use the center line and you're a bit off from that. Not really noticeable during gameplay. Totally your call. I fix'd it<\/span>00:45:558 (2) - Some minor misalignments like this here and there. Fix them if you want... the intention appears to be to use the center line and you're a bit off from that. Not really noticeable during gameplay. Totally your call.[CtB Cup]I don't know what difficulty \"cup\" is even supposed to be. I don't play CtB. Why am I looking at this?Same hitsounding advice applies if you want it to. yeah i did<\/span>Good stuff here. Not much to pick at because there's not much to the song.<\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n TheVileOne<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,434 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed March 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n TheVileOne<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-21T19:39:07+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Soaprman wrote:<\/h4>Thanks soaprman.[TVO's Hard]I want to keep my background.yesss small circles :thubsup: I'm going old school with this difficulty.<\/span>00:13:113 (2) - Begin with a whistle.Yes<\/span>00:14:067 (4) - Replace the beginning finish with a whistle. I guess.<\/span>00:17:407 (2) - Remove finish, and use whistles on both points. I'd rather not.<\/span>00:19:316 (4) - Same here. No.<\/span>00:20:747 (2) - Remove finish. Replaced with whistle<\/span>00:21:701 (4) - Same here. ^^^<\/span>Maybe some other similar changes are in order. I'm not going to go through the entire thing unless you ask me to. Eh I'm in no mood to look further into it right now. I'll give a more indepth look tomorrow.<\/span>00:45:558 (2) - Some minor misalignments like this here and there. Fix them if you want... the intention appears to be to use the center line and you're a bit off from that. Not really noticeable during gameplay. Totally your call. Fixed<\/span><\/blockquote>Map<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Stefan<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 10,425 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Stefan<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-29T18:47:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n 706x19