{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,082 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-19T07:50:35+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Kei wrote:<\/h4>Hi. Mod request taken from #modreqs.[General]You added some timing sections with 5% volume. 5% volume is unrankable. You should raise it up at least to 15%.<\/del> You decreased it at the end of a spinner, and it makes sense so it's ok.<\/li>The bg is so bright that making an SB would be great idea, imo. Lazy to make one -w-<\/span> <\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:08:121 (2) - Here's missing a whistle. true, added<\/span><\/li>00:11:210 (1) - I don't think that making jumps in a Normal is a good idea. I'm against this because this is your easiest difficulty. If you had an easy, this would be a different history. fixed<\/span><\/li>00:31:945 (4) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li>00:36:357 (1,2,3) - You should move this notes in a way that they don't get covered by the spinner-osu so that beginners can read and see the pattern better: I reduced the spinner and added a circle on the long white tick so it's also symmetric with 00:37:680 (1,2,3,4). It should be ok now<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:39:445 (1) - Another jump. Removing jumps would mean remap so you should add a Easy diff instead to avoid this. I can map one for you if you want. Fixed \u00e7_\u00e7 I did these jumps 'cause it was my intention to make an easy diff too but so lazy.<\/span><\/li>00:58:085 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after 00:57:092 (1). You should consider moving it a bit away. Nah it's ok. It's just a spinner and I could keep it in this way<\/span><\/li>01:14:739 (1) - A finish here sounds very good to me. How about adding it? Good catch bt I prefer to keep clap here<\/span><\/li>01:18:269 (1) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li>01:20:033 (3) - Hm. This MIGHT be confusing for beginners if you're going to keep your mapset as it is. I suggest you to remove 1 repeat of this slider and add a note at 01:21:357. Beginners may think that this slider has 1 repeat like your previous ones. Right! Fixed<\/span><\/li>01:25:327 (1) - I personally dislike notes a so.. low volume. I suggest you to increase it a bit. I guess that you did this intentionally to keep following the calm voice, but I find it annoying and kinda monotonous when I click notes and they don't have any sound. For now I keep it, and I will see, thank you<\/span><\/li>01:33:378 (1) - Same thing about spinner starting way too early after clicking a note. Same I wrote above<\/span><\/li>01:36:798 (1) - A finish here would fit perfectly with the song in my opinion. Really nice, added ;3<\/span>Nice difficulty. I just don't agree about jumps and so many consecutive long spinners.<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>[Hinacle's Hard]00:21:577 (1) - I think that this nc is inconsistent with your previous ones. I suggest you to remove nc here and add then add it to 00:21:798 (3) instead for consistency. This also will avoid that high combo number (10).<\/li>00:30:621 (5) - Same thing about combos. You always add a nc when you use a clap hitsound so I suggest you to add a nc here, remove nc of 00:31:724 (1) and then add nc to 00:32:386 (6).<\/li>00:34:151 (1) - If I'm not wrong, here's a missing clap (with clap I mean this kind of clap -> 00:32:386 (1))<\/li>00:41:210 (1) - ^ I also suggest you to replace this note and (2) with a slider to follow better the voice.<\/li>00:57:092 (6) - A nc here fits nice with the music imo. I suggest you to add it.<\/li>01:39:445 (5) - The vocals end here, and here's a kinda loud sound, so a hitfinish would logical.Really good difficulty.<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>[Insane]00:09:445 (1) - Here's a missing clap. That's why this slider sounds so.. empty. yea ;;<\/span><\/li>00:20:916 (1) - I don't really get the purpose of this change of volume, but I personally dislike it because it is all off a sudden. Sounds weird in my opinion. it's good imho c.c I keep it<\/span><\/li>00:42:533 (8) - I suggest you to add a NC here. Fits with the music and avoids that high combo number (10). New combo is good here. Infact I tried to use new combo somewhere for the long combo. And here its very nice, thanks!<\/span><\/li>00:44:739 (1) - This slider looks awkward because your previous pattern was symmetric, so this weird slider makes it look like this. You should make it symmetrical too. I tried, but to overlap the tail with 00:42:974 (3) this means I can't overlap head too with 00:42:754 (2) :\\ Btw I tried again making it less curves and.. it should be ok now<\/span><\/li>00:49:151 (2) - Same thing about the change of volume. same thing I wrote above<\/span><\/li>01:14:739 (1) - A finish here sounds great with the music to me. Perhaps add it? uhuh k removed clap and added finish<\/span><\/li>01:18:269 (1) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li>01:36:908 (1) - ^ ^<\/span>Another great difficulty. I'm still wondering the reason of those volume changes but it's ok, I guess.<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>That's all. Overall, this mapset is very good. To make it more solid, you should add an Easy. Have a star from me, and good luck! :3<\/blockquote>Oh really. This is one of the best mod I received.Very useful and clear, very thanks *-* And thanks for the star too <3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Mirage<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 627 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Mirage<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-19T10:06:32+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hey.[Insane]<\/span>00:08:563 (3) - Il movimento \u00e8 contrario, io farei http:\/\/puu.sh\/C20C<\/a>00:19:371 (8) - In DT sarebbe molto divertente un reverse jump, http:\/\/puu.sh\/C217<\/a>01:05:916 (5) - Niente clap\/finish?01:07:680 (1) - ^01:12:313 (1,2,3) - Sarebbe meglio mettere un pattern a triangolo, per renderla piu' divertente.01:31:504 (6,7,1) - Siccome lo slider non avrebbe tanto senso mettere NC, dato che queste 3 note hanno lo stesso beat, metti NC sul (6) e togli dallo slider.Risistema il pattern.[Hinacle's Hard]<\/span>00:12:754 (4) - Make a circular movement http:\/\/puu.sh\/C24F<\/a>00:22:680 (5) - NC00:39:666 (2,3,4) - Red Beat sliders are not good, fix this please.00:43:636 (2) - ^00:44:739 (6) - NC00:50:916 (1) - It's ok that you changed the patter, but I suggest putting a slider here as usual.00:57:092 (6) - NC01:03:930 (1) - Delete NC01:04:151 (3) - NC01:05:916 (7) - NC01:06:798 (1) - Delete NC01:06:798 (1,2,3) - This overlapping is pretty big for an Hard. Consider it.Overall very nice layout.[Normal]<\/span>00:21:798 (1) - Slider orribili xDGL :3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,082 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-19T10:50:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Maddy wrote:<\/h4>Hey.[Insane]<\/span>00:08:563 (3) - Il movimento \u00e8 contrario, io farei http:\/\/puu.sh\/C20C<\/a> Non sono d'accordo, l'ho fatto cos\u00ec di proposito per far apparire la map pi\u00f9.. \"estesa\" ;p <\/span>00:19:371 (8) - In DT sarebbe molto divertente un reverse jump, http:\/\/puu.sh\/C217<\/a> Ho tolto l'overlap ma non ho fatto come mostra il tuo screen che non mi piace :3 Editato in un altro modo <\/span>01:05:916 (5) - Niente clap\/finish? True story, added<\/span>01:07:680 (1) - ^ ^<\/span>01:12:313 (1,2,3) - Sarebbe meglio mettere un pattern a triangolo, per renderla piu' divertente. Nu<\/span>01:31:504 (6,7,1) - Siccome lo slider non avrebbe tanto senso mettere NC, dato che queste 3 note hanno lo stesso beat, metti NC sul (6) e togli dallo slider.Risistema il pattern. Disapprovo siccome lo slider segue new combo insieme al nuovo vocal<\/span>[Normal]<\/span>00:21:798 (1) - Slider orribili xD NOOO COME OSI \u00e7_\u00e7 <3 Lascio.<\/span>GL :3<\/blockquote>Grazie mille maddy :3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lizellota<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 467 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Lizellota<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-19T19:01:52+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi~ from in-game PM xDSorry for my little mod >w<[Insane]00:01:504 - whistle00:01:945 - remove 00:02:386 (3,5) - whistle00:02:827 (4,6) - remove00:28:857 - remove clap and add finish? it sounds better >w<00:34:151 - clap (N:C)00:51:798 - ^01:09:445 - ^[Hinacle's Hard]01:21:577 - remove whistle[Normal]00:05:916 - clap00:31:945 (4) - remove clap01:07:239 (6) - ^01:09:445 - clap?01:21:378 - remove this note01:39:555 - too hard for beginners :cThat's all i have found, sorry :c i love Madoka, nice map <3 Good luck ~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,082 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-19T19:37:36+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n KersiTyan wrote:<\/h4>Hi~ from in-game PM xDSorry for my little mod >w<[Insane]00:01:504 - whistle oki<\/span>00:01:945 - remove nope D:<\/span>00:02:386 (3,5) - whistle nop<\/span>00:02:827 (4,6) - remove ^ sorry it follows my hitsound pattern \u00e7w\u00e7<\/span>00:28:857 - remove clap and add finish? it sounds better >w< ya k<\/span>00:34:151 - clap (N:C) added clap but not nc<\/span>00:51:798 - ^ added<\/span>01:09:445 - ^ ^<\/span>[Normal]00:05:916 - clap Maybe I removed it o.o added lol<\/span>00:31:945 (4) - remove clap yes<\/span>01:07:239 (6) - ^ ^<\/span>01:09:445 - clap? yup<\/span>01:21:378 - remove this note mh? o.o<\/span>01:39:555 - too hard for beginners :c You are not the first that say this D: Okay, I dediced to make an \"M\" slider (from the name of MAMI) and.. it should be k now ;3<\/span>That's all i have found, sorry :c i love Madoka, nice map <3 Good luck ~<\/blockquote>Thank you kersi chan *-* And thank you for the star!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Hinacle<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,311 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Hinacle<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-20T09:45:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n http:\/\/puu.sh\/Chag<\/a>Thank you mod~!!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,082 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-20T09:58:09+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Updated :3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Illumined<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n 4f465i