{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Kobold84<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,446 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kobold84<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T12:41:36+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Behrauder wrote:<\/h4><\/span>Draft (JUST SEE IF YOU'VE READ CHAPTER 2)<\/a><\/span>HEY, I SAID TO JUST SEE IF YOU'VE READ CHAPTER 2!<\/del><\/a><\/div><\/div><\/div><\/div><\/blockquote>It's art.Behrauder wrote:<\/h4>I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your on what is better.<\/blockquote>I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all. time:The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more \"right\". This way conversations flow more naturally.<\/span>Here is a general idea of how to improve one page.<\/a><\/div><\/div>Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Behrauder<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 95 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2021<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Behrauder<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T12:50:16+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Kobold84 wrote:<\/h4>Behrauder wrote:<\/h4><\/span>Draft (JUST SEE IF YOU'VE READ CHAPTER 2)<\/a><\/span>HEY, I SAID TO JUST SEE IF YOU'VE READ CHAPTER 2!<\/del><\/a><\/div><\/div><\/div><\/div><\/blockquote>It's art.Behrauder wrote:<\/h4>I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your on what is better.<\/blockquote>I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all. time:The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more \"right\". This way conversations flow more naturally.<\/span>Here is a general idea of how to improve one page.<\/a><\/div><\/div>Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.<\/blockquote>Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of \u200b\u200bhow to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.I will try to implement this.Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n OT! Manga Adaptation<\/strong><\/u><\/span><\/a> has 3 chapters so far.<\/span><\/span>In a few months, something called<\/span> Pok\u00e9mon OT!Red<\/span> will actually be a thing, and it\u2019s going to be awesome!<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Kobold84<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,446 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kobold84<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T12:55:38+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Behrauder wrote:<\/h4>Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of \u200b\u200bhow to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.I will try to implement this.<\/blockquote>Hire me as an editor to find out more tips and tricks.Behrauder wrote:<\/h4>Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?<\/blockquote>Yep.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Kobold84<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,446 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kobold84<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T12:57:58+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Also while I was doing the example page I noticed she has her eyes open slightly.Remids me of this lol<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Ymir<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,855 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2020<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Ymir<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T14:57:18+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n I had a feeling it was 3D from the get go, but that's an interesting style and process. Gives it some good character.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n This way to the GULAG<\/a> <\/strong><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Aireunaeus<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,105 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2021<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Aireunaeus<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T15:23:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Idk why but abraker reminds me of osaka<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a> |<\/span> <\/a> |<\/span> <\/a><\/center><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Behrauder<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 95 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2021<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Behrauder<\/a>\n\n \n 2025-01-16T15:24:54+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Aireunaeus wrote:<\/h4>Idk why but abraker reminds me of osaka<\/blockquote>I also don't know why, but I agree.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n p6p5c