{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Reyalp51<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 971 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed April 2021<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Reyalp51<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-02T12:55:15+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n btw i forgot to say trigger happy havoc is the first one<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n spin<\/strong><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,335 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2020<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T09:09:55+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n --- rhythm doctor story mode ---game is good, but i'm skipping it for this thread, the story mode is just some charts back to back. As I say I only review stuff with narratives and stuff, so I really cant say anything about this one--- Mietz webcomic ---it's so short I decided to read it before I finish everything elseRegarding the art, the first 14 chapters, the ones you did before adding color and making the text with a computer are a mess to read through, the drawings are not the most defined, so it's hard to make out the image in your brain while reading it, the text is also pretty hard to read, but thankfully, you realized thaet and you changed itthe story on itself is pretty simple, it's mainly comedy, and some of the jokes are not bad even if it doesn't have anything crazy. The problem is the story, and that is, I really doubt you have planned any of the story in advance, as it's just very messy. You just want to make jokes, and the story is an excuse to make that happen, there is no real message or thought behind it. Yet it does seem you're actively trying to still make an adventure story which doesn't really quite work. The story goes from struggling to kill a slime to falling into hell and then god appears because fuck it. I don't think the webcomic on itself is bad but I think it would be better if you tried making something that was ENTIRELY comedy first instead of also trying to make a good adventure story on top of it.Also, what was the thought for making the demons talk german?, are they nazis?, because if they are that's very funny nglplaced in D tier in the tier list----next: mario rpg I guess? (I'm not sure if I should do this one as it was requested BEFORE the game came out, but the other games are just vns and I want to do that after I have finished reading all my stuff, so I may play it still idk)I'm finishing the third chapter of harmony (out of 4 total)<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a> <\/a> <\/a>Discord de CTB Espa\u00f1a<\/a><\/em> | OT!eras<\/a><\/em> | Patatitta's analysis corner<\/a><\/em><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Jangsoodlor<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 596 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2020<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Jangsoodlor<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T11:01:40+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n touch this<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Jangsoodlor<\/a> 2024-02-03T11:02:01+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n Big Onii-chan is watching you!\n .::!!!!!!!:.\n .!!!!!:. .:!!!!!!!!!!!!\n ~~~~!!!!!!. .:!!!!!!!!!UWWW$$$\n :$$NWX!!: .:!!!!!!XUWW$$$$$$$$$P\n $$$$$##WX!: .<!!!!UW$$$$\" $$$$$$$$#\n $$$$$ $$$UX :!!UW$$$$$$$$$ 4$$$$$*\n ^$$$B $$$$\\ $$$$$$$$$$$$ d$$R\"\n \"*$bd$$$$ '*$$$$$$$$$$$o+#\"\n \"\"\"\" \"\"\"\"\"\"\"<\/pre><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,335 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2020<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T11:03:31+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Jangsoodlor wrote:<\/h4>touch this<\/a><\/blockquote>I would rather kill myself than read anything that the creator of rent a girlfriend has ever done<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a> <\/a> <\/a>Discord de CTB Espa\u00f1a<\/a><\/em> | OT!eras<\/a><\/em> | Patatitta's analysis corner<\/a><\/em><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Jangsoodlor<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 596 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2020<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Jangsoodlor<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T11:09:56+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Patatitta wrote:<\/h4>Jangsoodlor wrote:<\/h4>touch this<\/a><\/blockquote>I would rather kill myself than read anything that the creator of rent a girlfriend has ever done<\/blockquote>lol. maybe touch Song of the long march (manhua)<\/a> instead? It's on hiatus for years now but I think the story is pretty good.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Jangsoodlor<\/a> 2024-02-03T11:10:28+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n Big Onii-chan is watching you!\n .::!!!!!!!:.\n .!!!!!:. .:!!!!!!!!!!!!\n ~~~~!!!!!!. .:!!!!!!!!!UWWW$$$\n :$$NWX!!: .:!!!!!!XUWW$$$$$$$$$P\n $$$$$##WX!: .<!!!!UW$$$$\" $$$$$$$$#\n $$$$$ $$$UX :!!UW$$$$$$$$$ 4$$$$$*\n ^$$$B $$$$\\ $$$$$$$$$$$$ d$$R\"\n \"*$bd$$$$ '*$$$$$$$$$$$o+#\"\n \"\"\"\" \"\"\"\"\"\"\"<\/pre><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,335 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2020<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T11:11:33+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Jangsoodlor wrote:<\/h4>Patatitta wrote:<\/h4>Jangsoodlor wrote:<\/h4>touch this<\/a><\/blockquote>I would rather kill myself than read anything that the creator of rent a girlfriend has ever done<\/blockquote>lol. maybe touch Song of the long march (manhua)<\/a> instead? It's on hiatus for years now but I think the story is pretty good.<\/blockquote>yeah sure I can give that a shot after all the vn's that I have to read and stuffedit: is your pfp the fucking UOHHHHHHHHH CUNNY thing put in a blue archive character? please dont get close to any public park or children<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Patatitta<\/a> 2024-02-03T11:15:28+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/a> <\/a> <\/a>Discord de CTB Espa\u00f1a<\/a><\/em> | OT!eras<\/a><\/em> | Patatitta's analysis corner<\/a><\/em><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n z0z<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 521 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2018<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n z0z<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T12:22:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Patatitta wrote:<\/h4>Jangsoodlor wrote:<\/h4>Patatitta wrote:<\/h4>Jangsoodlor wrote:<\/h4>touch this<\/a><\/blockquote>I would rather kill myself than read anything that the creator of rent a girlfriend has ever done<\/blockquote>lol. maybe touch Song of the long march (manhua)<\/a> instead? It's on hiatus for years now but I think the story is pretty good.<\/blockquote>yeah sure I can give that a shot after all the vn's that I have to read and stuffedit: is your pfp the fucking UOHHHHHHHHH CUNNY thing put in a blue archive character? please dont get close to any public park or children<\/blockquote>yeah that's jang alright<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sametdze<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 363 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2021<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n sametdze<\/a>\n\n \n 2024-02-03T12:49:27+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n watch heathers (preferablly the musical but if you can't find it the movie will do just fine)<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Pyatyy Kontinent!<\/strong><\/audio><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Patatitta<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n 364u24