{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n DakeDekaane<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,500 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n DakeDekaane<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-04-17T05:18:56+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>merchat7<\/a>merchat7 wrote:<\/h4>M4M[Normal<\/span>]00:02:817 (4) - Prefer if you add a repeat, all the notes here follow the bass guitar so far, so it sounds like something is missing when you don't have something on 00:03:211. \/*Ok<\/span>00:11:698 (1,2) - I prefer if you move this a bit more up to be honest, feel too close to the previous note. \/*Not really, there's a long gap in time<\/span>00:20:382 (3,5) - To make the rhythm a bit more interesting, consider variating by doing 1\/2 repeating slider here. \/*Made something here.<\/span>00:21:172 (4) - Whistle on the stanza here sound nice, so I feel you should put whistle at begin \/*Ok<\/span>00:24:330 (2,3) - I prefer if lyric is followed here, e.g. this rhythm http:\/\/puu.sh\/2Bcyk<\/a>. \/*Used the suggeste (2) with a repeat.<\/span>00:35:382 (1) - Prefer finish at begin and prefer no whistle at end \/*It'd be too loud for the piano imo<\/span>00:38:442 (4) - There's no clear sound on the blue tick, but on the white tick, I can hear a bell sound, a drum sound, etc. so I prefer if you start this slider there instead. \/*There are the vocals, but put in the white tick.<\/span>00:39:330 (1) - Feel like finish should be here \/*Oops.<\/span>00:40:908 (4) - Whistle at begin \/*Ok<\/span>00:42:487 (1) - ^ \/*Ok<\/span>00:44:066 (4) - Whistle on repeat \/*Ok<\/span>00:59:856 (3) - Whistle at begin and remove from begin of 01:00:645 (4). The music here has a pretty clear focus on stanza (listen to vocal) \/*Ok<\/span>01:03:014 (4,5) - I prefer if finish was used rather than clap. \/*Used only in 1st and 3rd beat, the whole as finish would be too loud.<\/span>01:07:751 (4) - Whistle here \/*Ok<\/span>01:08:935 (6) - Whistle at end \/*Ok<\/span>01:13:277 (5) - You always put whistle only on the stanza so I don't see why you decide to put it on here. \/*Oops.<\/span>01:15:645 (2,3) - Extend slider by 1\/2 or hit circle, move 1\/2 back to be on red tick \/*Made something similar as in 00:24:330<\/span>01:16:632 (4,5,6) - And if you want to do something like this, the rhythm should be like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/2BcKB<\/a> \/*^<\/span>01:26:698 (1) - Consider finish at begin \/*Ok<\/span>Trying to keep whistle logic a bit more consistent here and mention the parts where I find the rhythm was weird. Placement seems good to me.Have a star, good luck!<\/blockquote><\/div><\/div><\/span>kajiyatta<\/a>kajiyatta wrote:<\/h4>Daakane's Normal<\/span><\/strong><\/span>orz<\/span>Placement<\/span>00:16:435(4) NC here to follow your pattern? \/*Ok<\/span>01:07:751(4)^ \/*Ok<\/span>01:16:435(3,4,) I just feel better if you follow the vocal more, but you'll think a bit overmapped on Nomral? \/*Not overmapped, it's only a 1\/2 pattern, but made something else to follow vocals here.<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div> Rhythm<\/span>00:04:593(2,3) try this, maybe it follows the song well \/*Not really, 00:05:185 (3) feels better being hit than being in a slider's end, as I did in 00:02:027 (3)<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>01:28:277(1) a bit short on Nomral diff imo \/*All diffs are finishing at the same time, I'll leave it for the sake of consistency<\/span>Hit Sonud<\/span>01:03:014(4.5) player will exect to hear finish at head since you added prvious notes with it. \/*Added some, I think people will suggest more finishes here, but I'll leave only in 1st and 3rd beat for now.<\/span>01:11:698(3) add whistle at head \/*I'm putting whistles in each downbeat, putting one in a 3rd beat sounds a bit odd.<\/span><\/blockquote><\/div><\/div>Thanks both for modding :3Update here: http:\/\/pastebin.com\/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,826 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-04-17T08:28:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n merchat7 wrote:<\/h4>[Hard<\/span>]00:33:606 (2) - Seems like you wanted to stack this with 00:31:632 (1) - Nope, I didn't want to.<\/span>00:35:382 (1) - Prefer if finish was add at begin Added.<\/span>00:35:777 (2,1) - Listening to music here, sounds like it should be clap at begin and end of these two sliders. ...I'm not sure about this, actually.<\/span>00:37:751 (1) - Music is 1\/6 so change beat snap to 1\/6 and shorten by a tick. I also recommend moving 00:38:540 (2) - 1\/8 back and adding another repeat although I find 1\/6 snap fits best with vocal here. ...Did my own things.<\/span>01:01:435 (1,2) - Consider finish instead at begin Done.<\/span>01:03:014 (1,2) - Finish instead of the whistle here if you do above.^<\/span>Now for flow:00:02:126 (5,1) - I prefer if the bass guitar is followed here. It follows vocal right now, but the vocal rhythm is not a very nice rhythm to follow, something like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/2Bdgc<\/a>. A simple slider on 00:02:422 (and be sure to stack this slider on 00:02:027 (4) - for a nice effect. ...I seriously don't see anything weird here... What.<\/span>00:05:481 (2) - Prefer if you add a note here (stack with previous note) and do a jump on this stack [00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Move further down] Added a note, but I decided to keep the current placement since I see no point to do that.<\/span>00:06:172 (4,5,6) - I like this more when it's a repeating slider. It's a feel thing, either you do all repeating slider, or you do all hit circle, but since you did repeating slider here 00:05:580 (3) - I think you should continue to do so and lot of hit circles in a row seems more fitting for Insane. It's better to use hitcircles here, and I don't think it's more fitting on an Insane diff. They're just the same.<\/span>00:07:948 (2) - I believe you did a jump on this for the clap sound here, but if you listen to this part in comparison to 00:08:146 (3) - There is no bass drum playing here, so I suggest no jump here and just do jump only on (3). Or a smaller jump (e.g. 1.5x) instead. Reduced, but only to 1.8x, since making it 1.5x will make the pattern broken.<\/span>00:07:948 (2,3) - I also recommend changing to default soft-sampleset to use the default soft-clap here. Done.<\/span>00:08:146 (3,1,2) - Not too fond of this, seems like you want to follow the bass guitar, but it isn't followed properly since the bass guitar sound is at the end of 00:08:146 (3) - So I recommend changing that to a hit circle and then do this rhythm http:\/\/puu.sh\/2BdBT<\/a> Nah, I still prefer my own rhythm. It just feels better that way...<\/span>00:20:382 (3,4) - No jump on (3) then a big jump on (4) gives a nicer effect e.g. like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/2BdIx<\/a> (adjust rotation to how you wish, I simply try rotating by 45 degrees here, but if you prefer a less rough curve, rotate by less degree and vice versa). Making them a series of jumps is still more preferable for me, so I'll stick to it... for now.<\/span>00:22:553 (4) - Try stacking on the repeat of 00:21:369 (2) - instead? ...Seriously? It's too far, you know...<\/span>00:44:264 (2) - Feel like there should be a jump over stack. I don't think so.<\/span>00:44:066 (1) - I like how it feel more when you stack it with begin of 00:43:277 (1) - ^<\/span>00:51:172 (1,2) - Really prefer this to be place further away from 00:50:974 (4) - Done.<\/span>00:53:343 (4) - I'm not fond of how the jump feel to this note and it's a pretty big jump, try something like this placement so jump's a bit smaller? http:\/\/puu.sh\/2Be2i<\/a> Did it my own way.<\/span>01:03:803 (2) - Prefer if this was stacked to begin of 01:04:001 (3) - Done.<\/span>01:05:777 (3,4) - Don't really see why there's a jump here, prefer if distant snap was kept from previous note, and to next note. ^<\/span>01:22:356 (2) - Reduced spacing intentional? (I prefer higher spacing here) Yes, and I want to keep it that way because that's the best way to put the notes there, IMO.<\/span>Where you choose to do the jumps and stacks doesn't always feel right to me. Maybe I'm a bit tired right now so I'm a bit more strict on how the flow is so take the suggestions how you will.Whistle is barely audible and clap is too loud so I highly recommend doing something about this. No real major problem for me and I try out Collab diff, it looks nice so far.Have a star, good luck!<\/blockquote>kajiyatta wrote:<\/h4>Hinsvar's Hard<\/span><\/strong><\/span>Placement<\/span>00:40:119(3) curved to follow the next slider? Done.<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>00:47:224(1) just suggestion, changed direction like this? maybe more playable ^<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>Rhythm<\/span>00:35:382 unsnapped green line Snapped.<\/span>00:44:658(3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe reverse better. Nope, I'm following how the music goes here.<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~<\/blockquote>Thanks for modding guys (:<\/span>Diff<\/a>osu file format v12[General]AudioFilename: Mousou Koukan Nikki.mp3AudioLeadIn: 1000PreviewTime: 64593Countdown: 0SampleSet: SoftStackLeniency: 0.7Mode: 0LetterboxInBreaks: 0[Editor]DistanceSpacing: 1BeatDivisor: 4GridSize: 4[Metadata]Title:Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)TitleUnicode:\u3082\u3046\u305d\u3046\u2605\u3053\u3046\u304b\u3093\u306b\u3063\u304d (TV Size)Artist:Otome ShintouArtistUnicode:\u4e59\u5973\u65b0\u515aCreator:NatsuVersion:Hinsvar's HardSource:GJ-BuTags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaaneBeatmapID:239957BeatmapSetID:83504[Difficulty]HPDrainRate:5CircleSize:4OverallDifficulty:6ApproachRate:7SliderMultiplier:1.6SliderTickRate:2[Events]\/\/Background and Video eventsVideo,0,\"Video.avi\"0,0,\"bg.jpg\",1,1\/\/Break Periods\/\/Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)\/\/Storyboard 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<\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n BounceBabe<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,626 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n BounceBabe<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-04-17T11:58:54+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi, M4M!Easy + Normal<\/strong>Nothing to say about rankability wise. Only its very bland mapped and not many curves.Hard<\/strong>Spacing is not really fitting with the jumps from one combo end to a new combo, consider to make normal spacing, but it's your choice.00:03:014 (1) - Remove NC00:06:172 (4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent00:17:224 (1) - Remove NC00:17:619 (2,1) - This spacing is too random to fit the song one bit, you shouldnt have a jump here00:35:382 (1,2) - Unrankable00:43:277 (1) - Remove NC00:50:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This circle pattern is a little weird, you should try improving it with a slider between them01:03:014 (1) - Remove NC01:28:277 (1) - ^Insane<\/strong>Too many spacing mistakes, thats just random and not normal jumps anymoreNeeds whole recomboing, its totally messed up. You first have it right but then you mixed itBeginning is too overmapped, because main thing you hear is them talking and not singing or much music.00:12:882 (1,2) - Reverse NC00:40:908 (5,1) - ^00:42:487 (5,1) - ^00:44:066 (6,1) - ^00:45:645 (5,1) - ^and so on00:38:540 (1) - Remove NC00:40:119 (1) - ^01:02:816 (1,2,3,1) - 3 to 1 is too big compaired to the other one01:26:698 - Try this, fits much better and isnt too overmapped(01:26:501 - Circle 01:26:599 - Circle 01:26:698 - 1\/1 Slider with reserve and 01:27:882 - Circle)<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Natsu<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,088 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Natsu<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-04-18T04:38:07+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n BounceBabe wrote:<\/h4>Hi, M4M!Insane[\/b]Too many spacing mistakes, thats just random and not normal jumps anymore is not random in mym point of view is like i feel this song also alot of test players enjoy it orz<\/span>Needs whole recomboing, its totally messed up. You first have it right but then you mixed it I know something happen when i add the second timing line<\/span>Beginning is too overmapped, because main thing you hear is them talking and not singing or much music. gonna be cool if you can point they<\/span>00:12:882 (1,2) - Reverse NC00:40:908 (5,1) - ^00:42:487 (5,1) - ^00:44:066 (6,1) - ^00:45:645 (5,1) - ^and so on00:38:540 (1) - Remove NC00:40:119 (1) - ^i remake all the combos orz<\/span>01:02:816 (1,2,3,1) - 3 to 1 is too big compaired to the other one the sound is stronger in 3\u00ba thats why i add more distance also look nice and is ok when you play it<\/span>01:26:698 - Try this, fits much better and isnt too overmapped(01:26:501 - Circle 01:26:599 - Circle 01:26:698 - 1\/1 Slider with reserve and 01:27:882 - Circle)<\/blockquote> mmm i try to keep the end of the song in my way f another modder say this i will do<\/span> thanks for mod i will mod your soon o3o<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,826 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-04-18T07:38:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n BounceBabe wrote:<\/h4>Hard<\/strong>Spacing is not really fitting with the jumps from one combo end to a new combo, consider to make normal spacing, but it's your choice.00:03:014 (1) - Remove NC The spacing changes on the combo.<\/span>00:06:172 (4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent Oops. Fixed.<\/span>00:17:224 (1) - Remove NC Done.<\/span>00:17:619 (2,1) - This spacing is too random to fit the song one bit, you shouldnt have a jump here ...It clearly fits, IMO.<\/span>00:35:382 (1,2) - Unrankable ...How did that happen? Fixed.<\/span>00:43:277 (1) - Remove NC The spacing changes on the combo, same as 00:03:014 (1).<\/span>00:50:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This circle pattern is a little weird, you should try improving it with a slider between them I don't think so. The pattern here fits the song, IMO.<\/span>01:03:014 (1) - Remove NC I'm following the stanza here.<\/span>01:28:277 (1) - ^ ^<\/span><\/blockquote>Thanks for modding 411w4o