{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n H_Hitachiin<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 819 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n H_Hitachiin<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-14T00:44:36+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Miracle Lotus wrote:<\/h4><\/span><\/a><\/div><\/div>Meh....Still new to drawing.<\/blockquote>Looks like I've got to improve.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 486 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-14T04:01:15+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n OKAY shot of vodka has been drunk(called Finlandia coincidentally) I will commence assessing your worksSSShaymin wrote:<\/h4>Drew this some time ago. September, I think. Drawn with pencil, then scanned into my laptop, which explains the smudges of lead and sketching.<\/span>Wafu~<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/blockquote>You bean, this isn't bad. But your skills are far too rough, just like your lines! Minimalize the number of strokes it takes you to draw something; from simple shapes such as squares to complex ones such as facial features or clothes. If you have trouble getting the proper shape and have to make several strokes just to see what seems best, make sure you make them soft so you can erase them later and finish it off with a minimal amount of strokes.Take a look at, for example, fold on Kud's hat. I took you at least seven strokes to make that line or at least went over it several times, not to mention you did so quite roughly. You should be able to do it in two, or maybe even one if you can manage it. If it looks weird, instead of going over it repeatedly until it looks fine, erase it entirely and try again. Again, do so gently otherwise there'll be marks left. Also, scanners typically pick up smudges, even when you draw neatly. Why? Well, the part of your hand that rests on the paper as you draw (the hand holding the pencil) typically picks up graphite\/lead as it drags itself across the paper. As it rubs itself on the paper, it creates smudges. Well damn.On that note, I've seen Japanese artists prevent this (on YouTube) by placing a folded paper beneath their drawing hand, to reduce any possible smudging. Just a little tip out there :IStroke work aside you seem to be in a good path (though if you're anything like me you'll need to look at anatomy later on)Aeidxst wrote:<\/h4><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/blockquote>You nigger, you know how much that creeps me out. I mean, he looks like he came from a Lord of the Rings movie or something; stop messing around with Archer already!Anyway uh... uhm that's pretty surreal actually. Strange and familiar, as if it came from a dream. The dark, cold background contrasted by that white maiden catches the eye quite well, not to say anything about the orange moon.You're gayZ666ful wrote:<\/h4><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>finish the lineart~Orz i am suck drawing BG. QwQ must practice sorry for the long post LOL<\/blockquote>It's alright, I've seen\/created much longer\/am doing it right nowSeems fine, though I wouldn't worry much about the BG. I think her palm is ing the wrong part of the face with that pose. Her hand should be ing the cheek, in other words the palm must be at around mouth\/jaw level, not eye level. If that is the case, her palm should also be positioned horizontally, so as to properly counteract the vertical force of gravity acting on the head. The hand should be more like this: ---- and less like this \\ . Not entirely horizontal though! Just turned a bit counterclockwise. UNLESS she is just like brushing away her hair or something in which case ignore this '~'Static Noise Bird wrote:<\/h4><\/span>own photography x NASA<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/blockquote>They say that if we lived closer (like, real goddamn close) to the galactic center, the sky would look much like this, due to the massive amount of stars giving us light. We'd be in perpetual daylight.Anyway uh, I don't have much to say--looks real nice. I can still see some little white remains left from cropping your own picture though. K I'm done<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Bweh<\/a> 2013-03-14T04:27:49+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 196 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-14T16:26:59+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>W.i.P~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hanya bisa tersenyum<\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n CsavarNat16<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 340 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n CsavarNat16<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T15:19:31+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>meeeeeehhhh~<\/a>July 19, 2012 <\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 196 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T16:28:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>HAHAHAH FINISH!!!damn this is awesome. I FEEL GREAT. like just take a huge dump....___.DA : http:\/\/fav.me\/d5y3xbo<\/a>edited.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hanya bisa tersenyum<\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 451 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T17:46:20+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Everyone here is so good!Messy rough draft. Somebody tell me anything that's wrong with this picture (other than the lines looking messy :\/) I want to improve.<\/span>Azusa from Dracu-riot and Shizuru from Rewrite<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 486 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T18:43:25+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n The lines looks messy<\/del>Proportions, limbs (arms, legs) are composed of two main parts, ed by a knee or elbow. In any case these parts should be equal in length to each other. Typically half of an arm's length equals a head, though that only applies to grown men\/women. In teenagers and children it's somewhat shorter, and in lolis\/chibis it's dramatically shorter than that. Anyway in your pic Shizuru's (I think that's her, I haven't played either galge) forearm is too long. Since it's necessary that she keep her hand on that patch, just have her raised at a higher angle, while shortening the forearm.Azusa is fine, although the top of her head is too... High.Keep drawing pls<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 451 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T19:29:11+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Brian OA wrote:<\/h4>The lines looks messy<\/del>Proportions, limbs (arms, legs) are composed of two main parts, ed by a knee or elbow. In any case these parts should be equal in length to each other. Typically half of an arm's length equals a head, though that only applies to grown men\/women. In teenagers and children it's somewhat shorter, and in lolis\/chibis it's dramatically shorter than that. Anyway in your pic Shizuru's (I think that's her, I haven't played either galge) forearm is too long. Since it's necessary that she keep her hand on that patch, just have her raised at a higher angle, while shortening the forearm.Azusa is fine, although the top of her head is too... High.Keep drawing pls<\/blockquote>Thanks for the tips! I'll try to apply them for the line art.So the head is high again. I always have that problem..I think you got the character mixed up<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 486 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T22:50:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n I don't knowLeft's head's too tall, right's arm is too long<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n LightoHK<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n 6a335w